邀请信 作文评讲

邀请信
一、写作问题
1）格式不完整2）内容过少3）没分段
4）语态没用对5）there be句型没用对
二、写作步骤
1. 审题（审人称：第人称；审时态：时；审语
态：）
2. 列提纲（写信目的-----比赛基本内容----重申诚恳态度及希望）
第一段：写信目的-----邀请做评委
第二段：比赛基本内容----时间、地点、选手
第三段：重申诚恳态度及希望
3. 写初稿
4. 修改
5. 誊写到答题卡并检查基本错误
三、相关词汇巩固：
1.学生会：
2.主席：
3. 英语演讲比赛：
4.邀请：
5. 评委：
6. 主题：
7. 人与自然：8. 6月15：
9.下午2:00—5；00：10. 501教室：
11.选手：12. 联系：
13. 电话号码：14.真诚：
四、句型特讲
1.我是李华，育才中学的学生会主席。

（同位语）
2.我们学校将会举办一个英语演讲比赛，主题是人与自然。

（定语从句/介词短语）1）
2）
3.有10个参赛选手参加。

（there be 句型+非谓语形式）
4.只有在你的指导之下，我们才可以取得更大的成功。

（倒装句）
5.如果你有兴趣，请告诉我并打电话给我44876655.（非谓语形式）
五、语篇改错
Dear Ms. Smith,
I am Li Hua, the chairman of the Students’ Union from Yucai Middle School. I
am writing to invite you to join a English Speech Contest to be held in our school
this weekend. Because you are rich in knowledge and experience in English, so our school decide to invite you. I hope you will be interest in it.
The contest will start at from 2:00 p.m. to 5:00 p.m., which there are ten students attend it. Besides, at the topic of “Man and Natural”, it will be held in the Room 501 on the afternoon of June 15th. Not only can you enjoy a colorful English contest but you can share your opinions about how to learning English well with us.
Therefore, ring me and tell me whether you will come or not at 44876655. In a words, we will be very happy if you could come. I’m looking forward to you reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
六、范文赏析
Dear Ms. Smith,
I am Li Hua, the leader of the Students Union of Yucai Middle School. I sincerely hope can set aside some time for our English Speech Contest and be a judge.
The contest, the theme of which is “Man and Nature”, will be held in the Room 501 from 2:00-5:00 on the afternoon of June 15th. What’s more, there will be ten students taking part in it. I am sure that It will be a great success if you can give us some precious remarks.
I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation. My telephone number is 44876655. I am looking forward to your reply.
With best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
七、作业布置
1.请修改自己的文章（同桌间可以相互评改）。

2.请把修改好的文章重新抄写一遍。

3.请把范文熟读十遍。