山东省长岛县高考英语一轮复习 暑假轮短文改错选练(四)

山东长岛县2017高考英语暑假（一轮）短文改错选练（四）短文改错----记叙文2015届浙江省温州市十校联合体（温州中学等）高三上学期期初联考短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分1 0分）下面短文中共有10处语言错误，请在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不给分。

It can be seen, more and more people own mobile phones in China now. At the end of 2002, there were 20 millions mobile phone users. By 2005 a number reached up to 30 million. People have found mobile phones convenience. They can get in touch to each other whenever and wherever they like. There’re different functions to meeting different needs, such as surf the Internet. However, it may bring us some trouble. For an example, the radiation from the phone may do harm our health. In spite of this, the number of people having mobile phones are increasing steadily.【答案】【知识点】短文改错记叙文【思路点拨】注意固定句型的应用，名词的单数形式，固定搭配及主谓一致。

【答案解析】1. It→As 正如我们看见的，现在中国越来越多的人拥有手机。

这里是非限制性定语从句，用As引导。

2. millions→million 到2002年底，有2千万的手机用户。

数词后面加million3.a→the到2005年，这个数字到了3千万。

这里是特指“手机用户的数量”，a→the4.convenience→conve nient人们发现手机很方便，使用find +宾语+形容词：convenience→convenient5. to ---with get in touch with sb ,与某人取得联系。

6. meeting→meet有不同的功能满足不同的需求。

这里是不定式做目的状语7. surf→surfing such as后面接动名词：surf→surfing8.去掉an For e xample“例如”：去掉an9.our前加to手机的辐射会对我们的健康造成伤害。

Do harm to“对…造成伤害”，our前加to10.are→is拥有手机的人的数量还在稳定上升。

主语是the number of…，谓语是单数：are→is【由河北省唐山市2014高考英语一模试题改编】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两赴，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

When I was a child, I spent more than ten years learn the violin．Therefore, I couldn't understand "real music"．After I graduated at high school, a friend of mine suggested that we started to learn the guitar because we all thought it was cool．l will never forget the day on that we went to buy guitars in the guitar store． There I saw a guitar player playing the guitar, which I really enjoyed．He became my the first guitar teacher．It took me such a long time choose a guitar among several wonderful model．Now the guitar is the most importantly part of my life and I practice it every day.【参考答案】短文改错When I was a child, I spent more than ten years learn the violin. Therefore, I couldn’ tlearning Howeverundersta nd “real music”. After I graduated at high school, a friend of mine suggested that we fromstarted to learn the guitar because we all thought it was cool. I will never forget the day start bothon that we went to buy guitars in the guitar store. There I saw a guitar player playing the whichguitar, which I really enjoyed. He became my the first guitar teacher. It took me sucha long time∧choose a guitar among several wonderful model. Now the guitar is theto modelsmost importantly part of my life and I practice it every day.Important2012模拟短文改错LMo ther’s Day was around the corner. My good friend 1. _____Alice, Jenny and I get together, discussing what we should do to 2. ______our respect for. Alice was planning to buy some flowers with 3. ______his pocket money in honor of her mother. Jenny was going to buy 4. ______vegetables to cook delicious dinner for her family on that day, because 5. _____she wanted to experience how many her mother does for her family 6. ______every day. As for me, I’d like to make a greeting card, said 7. ______“Happy Mother’s Day”, in which I would also tell my mother 8. ______to pay attention to health or promise her to study harder. 9. ______We are looking forward to Mother’s Day.10. ______【参考答案及解析】1．friend --- friends 考查名词的单复数。

根据后为可知应是两人，故用复数形式。

2．get --- got 考查动词时态。

根据上文可知事情发生在过去，故用一般过去时。

3．去掉for 考查介词的用法。

此处what作do的宾语，for是多余的。

4．his --- her 考查代词指代一致。

根据文意Alice是女名，故用her。

5 cook 后加 a 考查冠词的用法。

此处dinner是可数名词，其前应加a。

6．many --- much 考查词义的区别。

此处do much for为。

做得多。

7．said --- saying 考查现在分词作定语。

此处相当于定语从句which says “Happy Mother’s Day”8．in --- on考查介词的用法。

此处on which相当于on the card。

9．or --- and 考查句意理解。

此处and表并列。

10．V经分析本句正确。

短文改错There is a teacher who I can never forget her in my life. That 76.________ was in my old days whenever I was in the middle school and I 77.________ once had lots of teachers who were very strict to us except 78.________one female who was young, pretty as well kind-hearted. 79.________It is very hard of me to describe what she was like, but she had 80.________her own personality that quickly conquered us all. She asked 81.________us to elect our monitor. She let us to decide where to go for 82.________an outing. Sh e didn’t get angry even if any of them was late for 83.________ school. It was not long until most of us behaved very well 84.________because we did find her an elderly sister who we can rely on. 85.________【参考答案】76. 去掉her 77. whenever → when78. to → with 79. well ∧ as80. of → for 81. √ 82. 去掉第二个to 83. them → us84. until → before 85. can → could短文改错第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）I am worker at the tap water company. I find that 76.____________people were becoming more and more careful about 77._____________health .If the tap water appear a little bit unclear 78.____________and muddy ,the telephone will ring again and again. 79.____________Fortunately, people do not pay equal attention to the 80.____________protection of water resources .For the sake of our 81.____________health ,we should take good care our water resources 82.____________and environment .There is a saying “whether we do 83.____________not careful protect our environment the last drops 84.____________of water we wil l see them will be our own tears.” 85.____________【参考答案】I am ∧worker at the tap water company. I find that 76.______a ______people were becoming more and more careful about 77.______are____health .If the tap water appear a little bit unclear 78.____appears_ and muddy ,the telephone will ring again and again. 79._____or_____Fortunately, people do not pay equal attention to the 80.__Unfortunately_ protection of water resources .For the sake of our 81.___ √_____health ,we should take good care∧ our water resources 82.______of___and environment .There is a saying “whether we do 83.____if_____not careful protect our environment the last drops 84.___careful___ of water we will see them w ill be our own tears.” 85. them【短文改错】Dear Anish,Here are the information about Manchester University 1.______It is about 200 miles far away from London and it 2______has a very big schoolyard.You can live in the school 3____or near the school.They have all sorts of course. 4___ ___I`m sure you will find one you like it.I know you 5___are particular interested in human rights.So I will 6____see that there is anything on their website 7____I will send my friend Charlie meet you at the airport 8____when you arrived.You met him a few years ago, but he 9___has changed a lot since then.Both your aunt or I look 10___forward to seeing you again.【参考答案】Dear Anish,Here are the information about Manchester University.___is___It is about 200 miles far away from London and it ___far___has a very big schoolyard.You can live in the school__right__or near the school.They have all sorts of course.___courses___I`m sure you will find one you like it.I know you __it__are particular interested in human rights.So I will ___particularly__see that there is anything on their website ___if/whether__I will send my friend Charlie meet you at the airport _to___when you arrived.You met him a few years ago, but he __arrive_has changed a lot since then.Both your aunt or I look __and_forward to seeing you again.【2015高考复习】阅读理解“One City One Bo ok” is a generic name (通称) for a community reading program that attempts to get everyone in a city to read and discuss the same book.Popular book picks have been Harper Lee’s To Kill a Mockingbird，Ernest Gaines’s A Lesson Before Dying，and Ray Bradbury’s Fahrenheit 451.“One City One Book” pr ograms take the idea of a localized book discussion club and expand it to cover a whole city.The first such program was “If All of Seattle Read the Same Book” in 1998，started by Nancy Pearl at Seattle Public Library’s Washington Center for the Book.The book chosen for the program was The Sweet Hereafter by Russell Banks，written in 1991.Other cities copied the idea，and the Library of Congress listed 404 programs occurring in 2007.Each city’s pr ogram has its own goals；these typically include building a sense of community and promoting literacy.Nancy Pearl warns against expecting too much from a program：“Keep in mind that this is a library program，it’s not an exercise in civics，and that it’s not intended to have literature cure the racial divide.This is about a work of literature.”Programs typically involve more than having everyone read the same book.Some other activities that have been included are：book discussion sessions，scholarly lectures on the book or related topics，a visit by the author，exhibits，related arts programming (especially showing a movieof the book if there is one)，and integration into school curricula.In Boston the “One City One Story” program used shorter stories and distributed tens of thousands of free copies of the story over the course of a month.American Library Association puts out a detail ed step­by­step guide on how to organize a local program，including the critical step of picking the one book.The Center for the Book at the Library of Congress tracks all known programs and the books they have used.【语篇解读】本文是说明文，介绍了美国开展的“一个城市，一本书”的读书活动。