2014届高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选：短文改错【63】及答案
2014届高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选：短文改错【61】及答案
2014届高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选：短文改错1.下面短文中有10处语法错误。
请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
A lot of people thought that teachers need to love our students and that they need to have an expert knowledge of their subjects. These ideas are, of course, true to a certain degree and they are perhaps a little of too simple. It is impossible for anyone love everyone they know, and teachers deal with the large number of students over the years. On the other hand, teachers could certainly be able to make their students feel that they are concerning. A good knowledge of the subject is extremely important, but equal important is the ability to pass that knowledge on to the students effectively—a teacher need to be trained in the skills of teaching.2.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
2014届高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选：短文改错【54】及答案
2014届高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选：短文改错1.短文改错One day a child was playing with a vase in great value. He careless put his hand into it. Hard as he tried, he could not pull it out. His father tried his best, too, but their efforts were in a vain. They were thinking of b reaking the vase whenever the father said,“now , my son, why have one more try? open your hand or hold your fingers straight as you saw I doing, and then pull.”to his surprise, the child says, “I can’t hold my fingers straight like that, because I don’t wa nt to drop my penny.” Thousand of us sometimes are so busy hold on to the world’s worthless penny that we cannot achieve liberation.2.文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。
错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
John's goal in life was become a successfully doctor. He knew he had to finish high school at first，so he put his heart into his studies——in particular，biology，chemistry，and maths . Because he worked hardly at these subjects，John became good at it. However，John forgot that he needed to master some other subjects beside those he had been chosen. As a result，John fails both English and Latin in the end of the second school year. But he had to review these subjects and he was almost able to graduate like planned. John learned a good lesson.3.下面短文中共有10处错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
2014届高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选：短文改错【18】及答案
2014届高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选：短文改错1.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）下面文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
例如：afraid he might get lost because he knew no words of English．So before he left his hotel, he stopped in the first corner and carefully copied in his notebook the names of the street that he was staying．Then he walked on．At last, he got being lost．After several hours he found a policeman．The Frenchman tried his best to explain the policeman that he didn’t know the name of his hotel, and he knew the name of the street．He then showed the policeman that he copied in his notebook．It was read: “One-way street”．2.短文改错（共10分,每小题1分,满分10分）During the last summer vacation, I think I should do something meaningful instead touring. So I got a job at a fast food restaurant and worked there for a cleaner.I worked 7 hours a day for three week. The job was bored and seemed endless, which made me so tired that I nearly stopped it half way. After all, I stuck to them with determination. Every day I started off for work early in the morning and got to home late in the evening. Finally, I finished a job before the new school term. Now , I understand that labor means. I think it is really a successful experience, which was worth remembering forever.3.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
2014届高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选：短文改错【37】及答案
2014届高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选：短文改错1.此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。
对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上划一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
My swimming experience is extreme interesting. There was 76.a time that I swam like a rock. This went on until one day 77.when I was fishing with a friend at pond, 78.I fall into it. If my friend had not come to my rescue, 79.I would have died. Ever since then, I have come 80.to know the important of learning to swim. I haven’t 81.attended in any training class but learned it on my own. 82.Now I have no difficulty swim at all. Though my 83.self-invented styles looks awkward(笨拙的), at least they 84.can keep us floating. Thinking of this, I am very satisfied. 85.2.此题要求改正所给句子中的错误，对每一行做出判断，如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√ ）；如有错误（每句只有一处错误），请按下列情况改正：此句多一个词,把多余的词用斜线( ＼)划掉; 然后在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉;此句缺一个词, 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧ ), 然后在句子后面的横线上写出该加的词;此句错一个词, 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该行句子后面的横线上写出改正后的词.Dalian, a city by sea, is quite beautiful and the air 76._____there is so good to breathe. It is easy to go here by 77. _____train. Beside, you can take a bus or plane as well. 78. _____Together with my parents, I went to Dalian for a trip in 79. _____last month. We visited many interesting place, having 80. _____lots of fun. Dalian is such wonderful a city that even many 81. _____foreigners go and work there. I met some foreigners 82. _____there and talk with them. Most of them said they 83. _____enjoyed our stay in Dalian. After staying there for ten days 84. _____we returned home, tired and happy. 85. _____3.下面短文中有10处语言错误。
2014届高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选：短文改错【19】及答案
2014届高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选：短文改错1.短文改错（共10小题，每小题1.5分，满分15分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换个性作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。
错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除、或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号，并在其下面写出该加的单词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误以及修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者从（第11处起）不计分。
I had a interesting dream last night. I dreamed that I took part in a race. At first, I couldnot to run very fast and fell behind. So I didn`t lose heart and kept running.All the students on the playground cheer me on, “Come on!” I was so encouragedthat I ran faster and fast till I caught up all the other runners. I felt as if I were flying like a superman. At the end, I got to the finishing line first. I won the race. I felt very proudly of myself. Many of my classmate threw me up into the air. Just at that time.I woke up and found me still in bed!2.短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。
2014届高考英语二轮专题复习：短文改错(Word有详解)
短文改错题型1 高考体验题组(一)(2013·全国Ⅰ)I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.答案：I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding holdme on her knees and sing old songs. Iwas only four when she passes passedaway. She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much well/clearly . He was tall, with broad shoulder shouldersand a beardthat turned from black toward to/into gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself himapart from others in our small town, ∧andhe was strong and powerful. In a ＼ fact, he evenscared my classmates away during whenthey came over to play or do homework with me. However,he was the gentlest man I have never everknown.(二)(2013·全国Ⅱ)The book I'm reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have started in the early 1800's. Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 o'clock at night. This custom soon becomes another meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain(瓷器) industry. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles. When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits. This made for the grow in the porcelain industry. 答案：The book I'm reading of ＼ talks about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have started in the early 1800's. Have Havingtea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner,that which might not be served until 8 o'clock at night. This custom soon becomes becameanother meal of ∧the day. Interesting Interestingly ， it had a connection by withthe British porcelain(瓷器) industry. Tea in China was traditionally drank drunkfrom cups without handles. When tea got popular in Britain, therewas a crying need for good cupcups with handles to suit British habits. This made for the growgrowthinthe porcelain industry.(三)(2013·浙江)Dear Diary，Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move last week? Dad lost his job, and as Mom explained，“He was lucky to find other one.” His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate, my school or just everything else I love in the world. To make matters bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister, Maggie. Tomorrow is first day of school. I am awfully tiring, but I know I'll never fall sleep.Good night and remember you, dear diary, is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.Yours，Rosemary答案：Dear Diary，Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far＼away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we movemovedlast week? Dad lost his job, and as Mom explained，“He was lucky to findother another one.” His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmateclassmates，my school orandjusteverything else I love in the world. To make matters badworse，now I have to share a room withmy younger sister, Maggie. Tomorrow is ∧the/my first day of school. I am awfully tiringtired，but Iknow I'll never fall sleepasleep.Good night and remember you, dear diary, isaremy only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.Yours，Rosemary(四)(2013·辽宁)Mr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spends too much time with his work. With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. “He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him.” That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon, I paid visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down. Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.答案：Mr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spends too much time with onhis work. Withlittle sleep and hardly any break, so ＼he works from morning till night. Hard work have hasmade himvery ill. “He has ruined his healthy health . We are worried about him.” That is which whatother teachers say.Yesterday afternoon, I paid ∧a visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside her hisroom I stopped. I had to calm myself down. Quietly I step steppedinto the room. I saw him lying inbed, looking at some of the picture pictureswe had taken together. I understood that he missed us justas many muchas we missed him.(五)(2013·陕西)My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught. Within the next few minute, my grandfather also caught a fish.Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.答案：My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.One Sunday morning we go went fishing at a lake. We took ours ourfishing poles and headed for thelake. As soon as we arrived, so ＼ we dropped the lines into the water. Before Afterwaiting for abouthalf an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently impatient . I wanted to give up, and butmy grandfather toldme to wait a little longer. Finally, there were was a sudden pull at the pole and ∧afish was caught.Within the next few minute minutes， my grandfather also caught a fish.Felt Feelinghungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.(六)(2013·四川)Today we had a chemistry test. I found the test difficulty, but I tried hardly to do it. Suddenly Mary, my best friend, asking me to let her to copy my answers. After think for some time, I let her copy my answers. But after the test, all of us were called to the teacher's office. The teacher was angry because we had same answers in the tests. We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents. I was very upset. I didn't cheat. I was just helping a friend. Why does shepunish me?答案：Today we had a chemistry test. I found the test difficulty difficult ， but I tried hardly hardto do it. SuddenlyMary, my best friend, asking asked me to let her to ＼ copy my answers. After think thinkingfor some time,I let her copy my answers. But after the test, all bothof us were called to the teacher's office. Theteacher was angry because we had ∧the same answers in the tests test. We were warned not tocheat again so orshe would need to see our parents. I was very upset. I didn't cheat. I was justhelping a friend. Why does didshe punish me ？题型2 高考模拟题组(七)(2013·宁波市二模)Uncle Marion was one of my mother's younger brother. He has been died for a year. When I was a teenager, he taught us how to hunt in the New Jersey woods used the hours before dawn. We usually left home at three o'clock in the morning, stayed in local restaurant for breakfast, and then travel on to one of his hunting destinations. Just after dawn, he would find the right spot in the woods. He would show me how not to make a sound and a movement. Though I never hunted an animal successfully, but I learned to be brave and patiently through the experience. 答案：Uncle Marion was one of my mother's younger brother brothers . He has been died deadfor a year. When Iwas a teenager, he taught us me how to hunt in the New Jersey woods used usingthe hours beforedawn. We usually left home at three o'clock in the morning, stayed in ∧alocal restaurant forbreakfast, and then travel travelled on to one of his hunting destinations. Just after beforedawn, he wouldfind the right spot in the woods. He would show me how not to make a sound and ora movement.Though I never hunted an animal successfully, but ＼ I learned to be brave and patiently patientthroughthe experience.(八)(2013·许昌平顶山新乡三市三调)My dream is to become a school teacher in the future. In fact, I had the dream of becoming a teacher since my childhood. In my opinion, without teachers, no society could make progresses. There is no doubt whether teachers play an important role in children growth. Not only do teachers pass on knowledge for children, but they also teach children how to behave themselves. Comparing with other jobs, teaching is hard and the pay is lower. And to me, what great fun it isto be with children! They make me to feel young forever. Because I'll study harder and try my best to realize my dream.答案：My dream is to become a school teacher in the future. In fact, I ∧havehad the dream ofbecoming a teacher since my childhood. In my opinion, without teachers, no society could make progresses progress . There is no doubt whether that teachers play an important role in children children'sgrowth. Not only do teachers pass on knowledge for tochildren, but they also teach children how tobehave themselves. Comparing Compared with other jobs, teaching is hard harder and the pay is lower. And Butto me, what great fun it is to be with children! They make me to ＼ feel young forever. Because SoI'll study harder and try my best to realize my dream.(九)(2013·昭通市统检)I'm sorry to tell you that I won't be able to visit Beijing with you in next weekend, just because my elder sister would come to visit us while my parents are very busy. They take it for granted what I should pick him up . You see, we haven't seen each other for ages. And she is eager to seeing what has great changed in our city.I want to express my apologize again for making you waiting for me. What is more, I hope that I can get another chances to go to Beijing with you when it is convenient to you. Are you free two weeks late? If you are available that time, please inform me.Thank a lot!答案：I'm sorry to tell you that I won't be able to visit Beijing with you in ＼ next weekend, just because my elder sister would willcome to visit us while my parents are very busy. They take it for grantedwhat that I should pick him herup . You see, we haven't seen each other for ages. And she is eager to seeing see what has great greatlychanged in our city.I want to express my apologize apologyagain for making you waiting for me. What is more, I hope that Ican get another chances chanceto go to Beijing with you when it is convenient to you. Are you free twoweeks late later？ If you are available that time, please inform me.Thank Thanksa lot!(十)(2013·绍兴市二模)I'm glad to tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since I became the seniorhigh school student.When I started senior English, I found much more difficult than that we learned in junior school and I almost lost my heart. Later, I realized the important of English, so I got up early every morning, recite English word, listened to English tapes and did a lot of exercise. I also asked my teachers and classmates for better ways to learning English.Now, I'm improving my English greatly. But I'm getting more and more interested with learning it. Thank you so much for your great help in your class.答案：I'm glad to tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since I became the asenior high school student.When I started senior English, I found ∧it much more difficult than that whatwe learned in juniorschool and I almost lost my ＼ heart. Later, I realized the important importanceof English, so I got up earlyevery morning, recite recited English word, listened to English tapes and did a lot of exercise exercises. I alsoasked my teachers and classmates for better ways to oflearning English.Now, I'm improving my English greatly. But And I'm getting more and more interested with inlearningit.Thank you so much for your great help in your class.(十一)(2013·东北三省三校第二次联考)Yesterday, Li Mei goes to a store to return a shirt without carrying the receipt(收据)．When she got there ，she refused. The salesman said that he wouldn't take it back if she showed him the receipt. Thinking it was no way out ，Li Mei put the shirt back in her bag and left. Suddenly two shop guard stopped her and began to search for her. They found the shirt in the bag and looked at it careful. Many eyes were staring at her, what made Li Mei very embarrassing. Luckily, a salesman came up in time and she was allowed to go.答案：Yesterday, Li Mei goes wentto a store to return a shirt without carrying the receipt(收据)．When shegot there ，she ∧was refused. The salesman said that he wouldn't take it back if unlessshe showedhim the receipt. Thinking it therewas no way out ，Li Mei put the shirt back in her bag and left.Suddenly two shop guard guardsstopped her and began to search for ＼ her. They found the shirt in thebag and looked at it careful carefully . Many eyes were staring at her, what whichmade Li Mei veryembarrassing embarrassed . Luckily, a thesalesman came up in time and she was allowed to go.(十二)(2013·甘肃省部分学校第二次联考)I'm a senior student from China, aging seventeen. While surfing the Internet, I have found that your organization will hold a summer camp in Singapore. With greatly interest, I'd like to apply for them. I'm an outgoing girl who like communicating with others. I could speak English well. My written English is excellent, either. I wish to join in the activities. For one thing, I'm willing to introduce China to other students from all over world; for another, I expect to learn from more about other countries. In addition, I'd like to make friend. The chance is so precious as I'm really looking forward to your approval.答案：I'm a senior student from China, aging agedseventeen. While surfing the Internet, I have found thatyour organization will hold a summer camp in Singapore. With greatly greatinterest, I'd like to applyfor them it . I'm an outgoing girl who like likes communicating with others. I could canspeak English well.My written English is excellent, either too. I wish to join in the activities. For one thing, I'm willing tointroduce China to other students from all over ∧theworld; for another, I expect to learn from ＼more about other countries. In addition, I'd like to make friend friends . The chance is so precious as thatI'm really looking forward to your approval.(十三)(2013·琼海市质监)When I first learned to write in English, I run into many difficulties. The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English. My teacher advised me to keep my diary. I followed her advice so put down 100 words or so each day. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. She liked it very much and reading it to the class. All said the story was a good one. Their word were a great encouragement to me.答案：When I first learned to write in English, I run raninto many difficulties. The main problem was in ＼that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything everythinginto English. My teacheradvised me to keep my a diary. I followed her advice so andput down 100 words or so each day.Soon I began to enjoy talk talking to myself on paper as I was learning to express me myselfin simpleEnglish. One day I wrote a little story and showed ∧itto my teacher. She liked it very much andreading read it to the class. All said the story was a good one. Their word wordswere a greatencouragement to me.(十四)(2013·石家庄市二模)Li Yue and Zhang Hua went to nursing home and did some voluntary work on May Day. At their arrival, they were warm welcomed. They presented the elderly people with flowers and fruits. Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and swept the floor. Everything done, they sit in the yard chatting with the elderly. When it was time for the volunteer to leave, the elderly thanked them for their kindness. Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy because of what they did bring joy to others. It also enriched our own experience. They made a promise which they would come again to see the elderly whenever they were free.答案：Li Yue and Zhang Hua went to ∧a nursing home and did some voluntary work on May Day. AtOntheir arrival, they were warmwarmlywelcomed. They presented the elderly people with flowers andfruits. Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweptsweepingthe floor.Everything done, they sitsatin the yard chatting with the elderly. When it was time for thevolunteervolunteersto leave, the elderly thanked them for their kindness. Li Yue and Zhang Hua were veryhappy because of＼what they did bringbrought joy to others. It also enriched ourtheirown experience.They made a promise whichthatthey would come again to see the elderly whenever they were free. (十五)(2013·河南省六市第二次联考)It's reported that many people died of traffic accidents each year. Road safety has aroused the widely attention of the public. Many rules have made to reduce the traffic crashes, especially for the ones involved in the pedestrians. In my opinion, we should make road safety seriously in our daily life. While used the road, we must walk on the pavement and learn to protect us. Besides, car drivers should obey the traffic rules, that is both good for themselves and others.In the word, obeying the traffic rules are what all of us should pay attention to particularly. After all, life is not a small matter.答案：It's reported that many people dieddieof traffic accidents each year. Road safety has aroused thewidely wide attention of the public. Many rules have ∧beenmade to reduce the traffic crashes,especially for＼the ones involved in the pedestrians. In my opinion, we should maketakeroad safetyseriously in our daily life. While usedusingthe road, we must walk on the pavement and learn toprotect us ourselves . Besides, car drivers should obey the traffic rules, that whichis both good forthemselves and others.In the a word, obeying the traffic rules are iswhat all of us should pay attention to particularly. After all, life is not a small matter.(十六)(2013·齐齐哈尔市二模)Dear David ，I have recently felt guilty, stay sleepless at night. You may wonder how. To tell you the truth, it is just because of the fact that I seldom cheat in exams and I just can't stop me. In many exams, I used cellphones to surf the net for answer. Besides, I sometimes referred them to my notebooks so copied something. As you know, cheating do much harm to our learning and self-confidence. It's time that I take action to stop it. I would appreciate it you could offer me some advice. Looking forward to your reply!答案：Dear David ，I have recently felt guilty, stay staying sleepless at night. You may wonder how why. To tell you the truth,it is just because of the fact that I seldom often cheat in exams and I just can't stop me myself. In manyexams, I used cellphones to surf the net for answer answers. Besides, I sometimes referred them ＼ to mynotebooks so and copied something. As you know, cheating do doesmuch harm to our learning andself-confidence. It's time that I take took action to stop it. I would appreciate it ∧ifyou could offerme some advice.Looking forward to your reply!(十七)(2013·宝鸡市三模)Jack has regarded as a young hero in his town for his heroic deed.The other day, Jack was going home by bike as usual while he heard a woman screaming for help.Then he was riding quickly towards the direction of the voice.At the corner, he saw a woman stopping by a man with a knife in her hand.Without hesitation, Jack made a immediate dive for the robber and controlled him by held him down against the ground.A few minutes later, three policeman came and took the robber away.Slight wounded as he was in the left hand, but since then he has become well known as a young hero all over the town.答案：Jack has ∧beenregarded as a young hero in his town for his heroic deed.The other day, Jack wasgoing home by bike as usual while whenhe heard a woman screaming for help.Then he was ridingquickly towards in the direction of the voice.At the corner, he saw a woman stopping stoppedby a manwith a knife in her his hand.Without hesitation, Jack made a animmediate dive for the robber andcontrolled him by held holding him down against the ground.A few minutes later, three policeman policemencame and took the robber away.Slight Slightlywounded as he was in the left hand, but ＼ since then hehas become well known as a young hero all over the town.(十八)(2013·长春市第四次调测)I still remember my middle school life in Changchun. I was then in school for student from Wenchuan. As we were all left home of an early age, we met lots of problems in our daily life. We had to do the washing, cleaning and shopping by us. However, we seldom felt lonely or helplessly. We enjoyed our happy life. At weekends, we will play basketball on the playground, swimming in the pool or go for a picnic in the park. We were living in a big family. We treat each other as brothers and sisters. It has been five years when we graduated, but those memories are as sweet as ever before.答案：I still remember my middle school life in Changchun. I was then in ∧a school for student studentsfrom Wenchuan. As we were ＼ all left home of atan early age, we met lots of problems in our dailylife. We had to do the washing, cleaning and shopping by us ourselves. However, we seldom feltlonely or helplessly helpless . We enjoyed our happy life. At weekends, we will wouldplay basketball on theplayground, swimming swimin the pool or go for a picnic in the park. We were living in a big family.We treat treated each other as brothers and sisters. It has been five years when sincewe graduated, but those memories are as sweet as ever before.(十九)(2013·甘肃省二诊)Many teachers worried about the effects of television on young people. According to studies, any children spend more time watching television than they spend in school. Because so much viewing, children may not be develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries much about the radio program young people listen to, although radios can be very noise.Teachers also wonder about the effects of television commercials. On one year the average child will see 25,000 television commercials, all planned and written by grown-ups to make children to want things that they don't real need.答案：Many teachers ∧areworried about the effects of television on young people. According to studies,any many children spend more time watching television than they spend in school. Because ∧ofsomuch viewing, children may not be＼develop the habit of readreadingand the ability to enjoythemselves. No one worries much about the radio programprogramsyoung people listen to, althoughradios can be very noisenoisy .Teachers also wonder about the effects of television commercials. OnInone year the average child will see 25,000 television commercials, all planned and written by grown-ups to make children to＼want things that they don't realreallyneed.(二十)(2013·乌鲁木齐三诊)Rock climbing is increasingly becoming a more popular sport for people of all ages. In my mind，it is real positive in our life. On one hand，it is great exercise. It not only build up our strength and endurance and it also helps increase our balance and determination. On the other hands, it allows us to get outside enjoy nature. For those of them who spend our days outside working or studying, getting out and seeing plants and animals in nature can be quite refreshed. For conclusion, it is a good to go climbing at least once a month. Working up a good sweat, having fun with friends, and finishing the route, we will get a sense of satisfaction.答案：Rock climbing is increasingly becoming a more popular sport for people of all ages. In my mind，itis realreally positive in our life. On one hand，it is great exercise. It not only buildbuildsup our strengthand endurance andbut it also helps increase our balance and determination. On the other handshand，it allows us to get outside ∧to enjoy nature. For those of themuswho spend our days outsideinsideworking or studying, getting out and seeing plants and animals in nature can be quite refreshedrefreshing.ForInconclusion, it is a＼good to go climbing at least once a month. Working up a good sweat, having fun with friends, and finishing the route, we will get a sense of satisfaction.(二十一)(2013·昆明市适应性检测)We had a discussion on “overnightfame” last week. Nowadays, many people were crazy about instant fame and wealthy. To be honest, it is not bad be famous or have a lot of money, but I don't agree to the view that people rise to fame overnight. We all know “easy come, easy go”. Let's take Li An as the example. Only after his hard works did he become successful. Or we can list more similar cases if need. What I do believe is that the process in which you try our best. It is what we have experienced along the way to success that we treasure and enjoy mostly.答案：We had a discussio n on “overnightfame” last week. Nowadays, many people werearecrazy aboutinstant fame and wealthy wealth . To be honest, it is not bad ∧tobe famous or have a lot of money, but Idon't agree to the v iew that people rise to fame overnight. We all know “easy come, easy go”. Let's take Li An as the an example. Only after his hard works work did he become successful. Or Andwecan list more similar cases if need needed . What I do believe is that ＼ the process in which you wetry ourbest. It is what we have experienced along the way to success that we treasure and enjoy mostly most.(二十二)(2013·浙江省五校联考)A young man called Low-Carbon Brother become a hit on the Internet in 2011. He suggests living a low-carbon life, which means using less energy in our daily life so that we can help reducing carbon dioxide in the air. For example, she always picks up some waste paper on the street or uses the blank side to write something. While he is watching TV, he always turns up the screen brightness to the minimum and turns off the light. Therefore, he goes to work by bike instead of driving. Some people think what he is doing is just a show. No one can live such a simply life with so many modern invention around us. As far as I am concerned, I am strongly in support his idea and his behavior. Although what he is doing has no huge effect on global warming, but he at least can enjoy a healthy life.答案：A young man called Low-Carbon Brother become becamea hit on the Internet in 2011. He suggestsliving a low-carbon life, which means using less energy in our daily life so that we can help reducing reduce carbon dioxide in the air. For example, she healways picks up some waste paper on the street or anduses the blank side to write something. While he is watching TV, he always turnsup down the screen brightness to the minimum and turns off the light. Therefore Besides， he goes to work by bike instead of driving. Some people think what he is doing is just a show. No one can live such a simply simple life with so many modern invention inventionsaround us. As far as I am concerned, I am strongly in support ∧ofhis idea and his behavior. Although what he is doing has no huge effecton global warming, but ＼ he at least can enjoy a healthy life.。
2014年-2019年全国Ⅱ卷短文改错(含答案,精排版)
2014年—2019年高考英语全国Ⅱ卷真题短文改错专项【2019年全国Ⅱ卷】第四部分写作第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Since I was a kid, I've considered different job I would like to do. First, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coolly. Then, when I was in the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much. When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered my goal or decided to be a doctor. They were two reasons for the decision. One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor. And the other is that I wanted to help people in need.【2018年全国Ⅱ卷】When I was little, Friday's night was our family game night. Aftersupper, we would play card games of all sort in the sitting room. As the kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked to watching them, my parents would not to let me. They would say to us that playing card games would help my brain. Still I unwilling to play the games for them sometimes. I didn't realize how right my parents are until I entered high school. The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life.【2017年全国Ⅱ卷】Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the Internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables!【2016年全国Ⅱ卷】The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden you view and gain knowledgeswe cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.【2015年全国Ⅱ卷】One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said,“How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.【2014年全国Ⅱ卷】My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn't need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and hopefully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.参考答案【2019年全国Ⅱ卷】Since I was a kid, I've considered different job I would like to do.jobsFirst, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coolly. Then,coolwhen I was in the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked myfifthEnglish teacher too much. When I studied chemistry ∧high school, I very/so in/at reconsidered my goal or decided to be a doctor. They were two reasonsand Therefor the decision. One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick personamazedcould feel much more better after seeing a doctor. 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They often get up earlier and which early water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the Internet.Besides informationWhen summer came, they will invite their students ∧pick the fresh comes to vegetables!【2016年全国Ⅱ卷】The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at what choosehome and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no taking andneed to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about ∧world.theIf we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden you view and gain knowledgesour knowledge we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places或改为shouldof interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many,thinkmuchyet we can still learn a lot.One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It wasparentsvery crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so veryinmuch that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy forlookingsome time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing.that 或者删除whereTony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying and tellingbegan told him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw ∧parents. Momthe hissaid,“How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.” Tonyterriblypromised her that this would never happen again.【2014年全国Ⅱ卷】My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They areThere three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn't need todon’tdo so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with after-school much for activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour andhours play sport for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of thelooksflowers and trees around the classroom buildings. 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2014届高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选：短文改错【9】及答案
2014届高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选：短文改错1.短文改错:（满分10分）文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。
错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加上一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Yesterday, I saw the old lady fall down when I was hurrying to school. I was about tohelp her up while suddenly a passer-by stop me, saying that I might be accused of knockingher down. Heard his words, I began to hesitate and slow down my steps. At the same time,another student, that saw everything, went up to help. The old lady said nothing but lotsof thank to the good boy. I felt ashamed.As is known to all, help others is forever a good virtue. Even though some old people arebecoming immorally, we can’t let it to disappear. I have made my mind that I will reach outmy hand without hesitation next time.2.Last Saturday, mom and I went to buy a down jacket for my grandpa. When we got to a big store, we saw down jackets of vary colours and styles. There were so many of them that it spent us quite a while to decide which one to buy. Finally, under the help of the shop assistant, he selected a black thick jacket for grandpa. Immediately, we returned back home to show it to my grandpa. Seeing it, he was very happy and couldn’t wait to put on. But we were annoying to find something was wrong with the zipper. Hurriedly, I took it back to the store and explained the shop assistant the problem To my satisfaction, she is very kind and helped me choose another one patiently. Stand in front of the mirror, my grandpa looked at himself in the new coat, smiling contently. How delighted I was!3.Li Ming and Wang Ying are two students of Senior Three. They all work hard but they have different learning method. Li Ming often sleeps in class instead of listen to the teacher. As a result, he miss lots of points that the teacher makes and it usually takes him much time to finish his homework. But he has to stay up late and doesn’t get enough sleep. However, Wang Ying has quite the different way of learning. She listens attentive and tries to catch everything that the teacher said in class. Because this, she spends less time doing her homework, which makes it is possible for her to go to bed early.4.短文改错 (共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选：短文改错21
2014届高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选：短文改错1.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）下面文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Recently I have read an article in a magazine．It was of a mother who was worried about her sonjust because of he always kept his hair long．The mother thought that was not right，but the son feltthere was nothing unusually about it．Different generations have different opinion on the samething．That is what is meaning by“the generation gap”．We can see them in our daily lives．Mostof our parents like listening to old songs when young people prefer pop songs．Every time my father finds me listen to rock music，he always shouted, “Shut it off. It’s awful!” How can we deal the generation gap?2.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
2014年全国高考英语试题分类汇编：改错题 Word版含解析
2014全国高考汇编改错一（2014大纲卷）第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分l0分)此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。
对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误.在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√):如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正:此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个肠字符号(A)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意:原行没有错的不要改。
All of us need friendship. The understanding 76.______________between two friends mean both of them have similar 77.______________ideas and trusting each other. Otherwise, it is 78.______________impossible for him to help each other and to make 79.______________their friendship to last long. As an old saying goes, 80.______________“A friend in need is a friend indeed.” So really friendship 81.______________should able to stand all sorts of tests. And it is 82.______________wise to have as many good friends that we can. 83.______________The more friends we have, the more we can learn for 84.______________one another, but the more pleasure we can share together. 85.______________76. √77. 【答案】means【试题解析】本句的主语是the understanding…，这是单个的动名词定语，做主语的时候，谓语动词要使用单数形式。
高中英语真题-2014届高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选：短文改错_9
高中英语真题:2014届高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选：短文改错1.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）下面文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
例如：It was very nice to get your invitation to spend /\ weekend with y ou．Luckily I wasthe amcompletely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”．I’ll arrive in at around 8 pm in Fridayonevening．A Frenchman was once visiting London．He wished to take a w alk to see a city．But he was afraid he might get lost because h e knew no words of English．So before he left his hotel, he sto pped in the first corner and carefully copied in his notebook the names of the street that he was staying．Then he walked on．At last, he got being lost．After several hours he found a police man．The Frenchman tried his best to explain the policeman th at he didn’t know the name of his hotel, and he knew the name of the street．He then showed the policeman that he copied in his notebook．It was read: “One-way street”．2.短文改错（共10分,每小题1分,满分10分）During the last summer vacation, I think I should do something meaningful instead touring. So I got a job at a fast food restaura nt and worked there for a cleaner. I worked 7 hours a day for thr ee week. The job was bored and seemed endless, which made me so tired that I nearly stopped it half way. After all, I stuck to t hem with determination. Every day I startedoff for work early in the morning and got to home late in the eve ning. Finally, I finished a job before the new school term. Now , I understand that labor means. I think it is really a successful experience, which was worth remembering forever.3.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
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2014届高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选：短文改错1.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。
错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When l was in high school, I had an awful experience．At that time l was so brave andoutgoing as the others．Because of that, a boy name Big Tom would do all kinds of bad things tome．I was scaring to see him．So yesterday, a friend told me that Big Tom wanted to see me and invited me to dine out．Iagreed．We met in a bar and I was so happy that nothing went well．By the end of that night,Big Tom apologized for what he has done to me．Now we have become close friends．In our life, everyone may make mistakes．What counts most are that we have the courage tocorrect them．2.假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\)，在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The other day I happen to read an eighty-word passage about details. I found it prettily good. One who wants to achieve great success should pay attentions to details. Sometimes it is thedetails in that determin e our success, for it has a great impact on what we’re doing. We shouldform the habit of being careful, so a careful person rarely overlooks details. What’s more, weshould learn to keep balance of quantity and quality. When facing with lots of work, the fasterwe do them, the more mistakes we usually make. In that case we are possible to neglect thedetails. So we should remember that quality comes first, without that quantity is of noimportance.3.短文改错This morning my parents took my sister and me to the zoo. At the noon we had a picnic on the grass. I eat too much, so I couldn’t finish my sandwich. As I didn’t know what to do with it, I asked my sister for advices. She pointed at the notice, that said, “ No litter.” And she asked me throw the sandwich into the litter-basket. Just then I saw an elephant coming slow towards us. Suddenly an idea came into her mind. I could feed the elephant by my sandwich and I did so in the end. Seen this, my sister smiled and said, “What clever you are!”4.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Once, when I was a teenager, my father and I were standing in line to buy tickets for the circus. Finally, there was only one family among us and the ticket counter.This family made deep impression on me. There were eight children, both probably under the age of twelve. You could tell they didn’t have a lot of money. Their clothes was not expensive, and they were clean. The children were well-behaved, all of us standing in line, two-by-two behind their parents, held hands. They were excitedly talking about the clowns, elephants and another performances where that they would see that night. Everyone could sense they have never been to the circus before.5.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处。
错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加: 在此处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出修改的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
We all have a strong desire to succeed. For some the desire is great than that of the average people. In fact, everyone wants to be successful so very few are willing to pay the price of hard working. Success is an attitude and has no really secrets. It all start with your belief system. Your belief system starts with what you feel about yourself. You must at first believe in yourself. Onyour journey to succeed, you will find that there are no shortcuts. You will never be able to completely master every detail of your life. Attempt to do so will only lead to disappointment. Besides, it's necessary of you to have clear goals. You'd better put your goals on paper where they are visible so that they can help to monitor your progress.6.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。
错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）。
并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
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