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高考英语二轮专题总复习书面表达精选范文（背诵版）(1)请根据下面提示,写一篇短文.词数不少于 50.In an English speech competition, you are asked to describe the following picture and explain to the judges how you understand it.One possible version:In the picture, we can see a circle of bricks standing next to each other. The first brick on the right is falling down, causing the falling of the next one. In the end, the whole circle will be ruined.The picture conveys a message that the success of a project depends on each individual step. When each individual step is given full attention, it is quite likely that the whole project will be a success. In the same way, a mistake in one step may lead to a complete failure of the whole project, as is shown in the picture. So each individual step can make the difference between success and failure. We should try our best every step of the way.( 2 )根据下面提示,写一篇短文.词数不少于 50.In your English class, you are asked to describe the following picture and explain to your classmates how you understand it.参考词汇:秤:scale;秤砣:weight第二小题开放作文One possible version:As we can see in the picture, a man is hung on a scale, which is balanced by the weight. The man is carrying something while his eyes are staring at the weight, which stands for value.I think this picture tries to tell us that the man is eager to get more in return for what he has done for the society. Without pay he would probably do nothing. Asour country is still developing, we need more people who can make contributions. Only when everyone does his best can our society become better in the shortest possible time.( 3 )请根据下面提示,写一篇短文.词数不少于 50.In your English class, you are asked to describe the following picture and explain to your classmates how you understand it.One possible version:As is shown in the picture, lines of cars are stuck on the roads, waiting for the traffic lights to turn green. With the help of two big birds, a man, holding a briefcase in his hand, is flying over the cars.The picture vividly shows the seriousness of the traffic problem, which is a headache nowadays all over the world. Traveling during rush hours is by no means easy. However, the man in the picture thinks out an idea. He gets help from two big birds, which hold a tree branch to carry him to work. This is really a good idea. Though the idea he thinks of doesn't really work in our real life, we can benefit from his creative imaginations. Man has a great power of creativity, with which he has made inventions from wheels to planes.It's high time we thought of effective ways to solve the problem of traffic and I'm sure it will be solved in the near future.( 4 )请根据下面提示,写一篇短文.词数不少于 50.In your English class, the teacher shows the picture below and asks the class to discuss it.Your classmates may have different understandings.Look at the picture carefully and tell the class how YOU understand it.One possible versionIn the picture, two goats are tied to each other with a rope. They both see some grass in opposite directions, and try to pull to get their own food. They are unsuccessful,because the rope is too short to allow them to eat the food at the same time. The picture is trying to tell us that cooperation is better than conflict. Both of the goats want their food at the same time, which has formed a conflict between them. However, if they decide to cooperate and eat the grass on the left first, and then the grass on the right, they will both be able to get their food. Thus things will turn into a "win-win" situation.Therefore, remember that sometimes our goal is not that we get something and the other gets nothing, but that all people get what they want. Cooperation will benefit everyone.( 5 )请根据下面提示,写一篇短文.词数不少于 50.In an English speech competition, you are asked to describe the following picture and explain to the judge how you understand it.One possible version:As is shown in the picture, a person/man/woman is walking on the Chinese character "I" with confidence. Although there is a long winding road to go, he/she still persists in his/her own way.In my opinion, the picture tries to tell us that life is like a journey, during which we may meet with difficulties and challenges. Whatever difficulties we may face, we should hold on to our own dreams. It is we ourselves who influence our success, happiness and future. We are supposed to be self-determined and self-confident. Thus we can achieve our goals.( 6 )请根据下面提示,写一篇短文.词数不少于 50.In your English class, you are asked to describe the following picture and explain to your classmates how you understand it.第二节开放作文One possible version:In the picture, a man and a woman are looking at the same thing — a coin. But they have different ideas of the coin. What the man knows is the front side of the coinand the woman knows is the back side of the coin.From this picture we can know the reason why people have different ideas about the same thing. They are looking at it from different directions. So next time when your friends' ideas are different from yours, don't get angry. Try to think about the things from their standpoints. Maybe you can see another picture.( 7 )请根据下面提示,写一篇短文.词数不少于 50.At the Opening Ceremony of 2008 Beijing Olympic Games, all the audience were amazed to see the picture below, which is a Chinese character "he". Please tell how you understand it.One possible version:I think"和"is a very good word to choose at the Opening Ceremony of this great gathering, which means "Harmony" in English. First, we need "Harmony" among our Chinese people. We have the same ancestor and belong to one big family. It is our wish to work together to make our country a strong one in the world. Second, we need "Harmony" among world people. If we can have a tolerant heart and show respect for different cultures, beliefs and religions, there will be no wars in the world. Besides, we need "Harmony" among all the living beings. Humans and animals share the same earth, so we need a harmonious environment to live together. I think the word really represents our good feelings in this beautiful summer and it is remarkable to use this word to show our great Chinese culture.( 8 )请根据下面提示,写一篇短文.词数不少于 50.Your English teacher shows the picture below and asks the class to discuss it. Your classmates have different understandings. Look at the picture carefully and tell the class how YOU understand it.One possible version：As we can see in the picture, two men are staring at a potted flower with different expressions on their faces. One person is thinking about the sad ending of the flower, while the other is imagining the flower blooming.In my opinion, the picture is trying to tell us that different people may have different attitudes towards life. Faced with the same situation in our daily life, pessimistic people may feel helpless and complain about it all day long. Optimistic people, however, may look at it positively and take it as a chance to show his abilities and talents. Therefore, it is our attitude that matters in our life.( 9 )根据下面的提示,写一篇短文.词数不少于 50.In your English class, you are asked to describe the following picture and explain to your classmates how you understand it.提示词:坚韧toughness 节制 control 手推车 cartOne possible version:In the picture, a man is pushing a cart to the top of a hill. Inside the cart was some sand with a flag , reading "toughness" planted on it. Judging from his expression, he was working very hard and spared no effort to make it. On the other side, a man is carrying another cart from the top of the hill. Compared with the first cart, they were almost the same except the words on the flag and action. This time, it reads "control" on the flag.The whole picture was telling us that only if we be toughness can we get to the top, but after getting to the top, we should learn to control. Applied in daily life, that'sthe way how people succeed and what to do after success. In a word, the way to success is full of difficulties around. No matter how hard it is, we should stick to the end. After this, we should not be too proud, instead, we need to be more modest and keep our mind clear .( 10 )请根据下面提示,写一篇短文.词数不少于 50.In an English lesson, your teacher shows the picture to you and asks you to think and then write something about how you understand it. Now pick up your pen and begin, will you? 生词提示:剪子 a pair of scissorsOne possible version:A gardener is cutting the bushes with a pair of big scissors. The bushes under his scissors look neat, tidy and in good order but they can never grow up into their full shape with wide green leaves.I think these trees can be compared to us young children. Trees will grow up in the future, some tall and some short. Tall trees can provide people with cool shade and short ones can help beautify our environment. Similarly, we can be brought up to play different roles in the society. The world needs variety. Variety is beauty. I hope teenagers can be given more freedom in school. We can do and learn what we really need and are interested in. Only difference can make our world colorful and enjoyable. ( 11)请根据下面提示,写一篇短文.词数不少于 50.In your English class, you are asked to describe the following picture and explain to your classmates how you understand it.One possible version:As we can see in the picture, two men are standing side by side, smiling. They share one characteristic, strong in one arm, while weak in the other. I guess they smile because they find someone who can help them accomplish a task that cannot be completed by either of them alone.Like the two men in the picture, we all have strengths and weaknesses, and what wecan do is limited. However, weaknesses don't necessarily mean failure, but may indicate the possibility of cooperation. By working with others, and making the best use of each other's talents, we can always achieve a better result.( 12 )In an English speech competition, you are asked to describe the following picture and explain to the judges how you understand it.One possible version:As can be seen in the picture, a tree is broken by the strong wind, while the grass still stays as it is. Weak and small as the grass is, it can stand the strong wind. It is the same with human beings. Some people look very strong, but they are easily defeated by difficulties. Weak as some people may seem, they are actually strong in mind, just like the grass in the picture. This kind of people can adapt easily to changing situations and achieve more. They are ready to face challenges and never give up in time of difficulty. So a person's inner strength is much more powerful than physical strength.( 13 )One possible version:In the picture, we can see a man with many books inside. While he is proud of the piles of books he has already read, he doesn't realize that his mind is being trappedin a "birdcage".I think the man in the picture represents those who have acquired much knowledge from books but don't really know how to apply it in practice. Their way of thinking is so inflexible that they can't think creatively. For them, knowledge is just something to show off instead of a means of improving themselves.I think we should not only read many books but also make full use of the ideas in books in daily life. Only in this way can we give wings to knowledge and liberate our mind.( 14 )One possible version:As we can see from the picture, two people, father and son, are talking to each other. The boy, standing on the ground, is looking up at his father, slightly scared, while his father, seated high on a big Chinese character "fu", meaning "father", is shouting to his son.Such a situation seems fairly common in our society. When talking to each other, father and son are not in equal positions. Fathers simply tell their sons what to do rather than listen patiently. Therefore, sons will have few chances to share their own ideas or open up to their fathers. They often look up to their fathers with respect, fearing that they might not live up to fathers' expectations.I hope our parents will listen to us more instead of just giving us orders.(15 )One possible version1:In the picture, I can see a big spider net, in the center of which there is a boysitting at the table and playing the computer. The picture makes me lost in thought. With the development of science and technology, computers and internet have been widely used in homes. Therefore, more and more teenagers become addicted to the internet, which traps them tightly like a net. They no longer care about studies. Instead, they devote all their spare time to the internet. Influenced by the violence on it, some even commit crimes. The internet addition has become a serious social problem, worrying parents and school. So I think it's time to educate teenagers about the harms of the internet addition and teenager themselves should learn to control their own behavior.One possible version2:In the picture, I can see a big spider net, in the center of which is a boy sitting at 14 the table and playing the computer. I think the picture just wants to show us the advantages of computers development. Just sitting in front of the computer, you can get information from all over the world, you can learn whatever you want, you can connect with whoever you'd like to. It's very convenient. Although there are some disadvantages, I believe computers can help people a lot if we use it in a proper way.(16)One possible version:We can see in the picture a man with a stain on his face is wiping a mirror. The man might have noticed the stain but his reaction is to clean the mirror. However, by cleaning the mirror, he will never wipe the stain off.Just like this man in the picture, in our life, when problems occur, some of us often blame the environment first, which surely prevents us from finding a solution. So next time, when we find a "stain" in life, look to ourselves first. We are the ones that need to change.(17)One possible version:From the picture I can see two images. On the first image a boy is sitting on the chair and thinking longingly of something happy. There is light full of his surroundings. But on the other image this boy is sitting on the same chair and thinking something sad. There is darkness around him.I think the picture wants to show us that there are all kinds troubles in our life , if we can face up to them in a optimistic way, things will be better and easier and we'll be more hopeful. However, if we always see the bad side of them, we may lose ourselves in the hopeless and even be destroyed by them.So in my opinion, looking on the bright side of everything can make our life more active and enjoyable. (136 words)(18)One possible version:In the picture we can see a family in a car. The mother and the father are trying to drive it in opposite directions with their child sitting between them, looking rather confused.It reminds me of a common phenomenon in some families. When there are some decisions for the family to make, the parents hold different opinions and turn a deaf ear to each other, not to mention the child's ideas. For example, when it comes to what their child should major in at university, they will have a heated argument regardless of the child's intention.I think parents should try to improve their communication and take their children'sopinions into consideration so as to reach an agreement.(19)From the picture, we can see that the young tree is supported by a stick while growing. However, once there is no support, the young tree is broken off.As the picture suggests, we teenagers grow up almost in the same way. We children need not only the necessary support and care from our parents and teachers but also the challenge of difficulty, the experience of hardships and the joy of success. As parents and teachers, they don't have to do everything for us, and too much care is not helpful. Just offer us the opportunity to develop our ability and we are sure to grow up well.(20)In the picture, we can see a man trying to get to the final destination directly by a ladder instead of following the long way to it. In our society, many people have got used to their common practices of settling problems, some of which are a waste of time and effort. They are unaware that there are better solutions. They should learn to think out of the box just as the man in the picture. So in my opinion, whatever we do, we should be creative and find out a most effective way.(21)In the picture we can see two kids looking at the sun shining far away behind the mountains, to which a winding path leads. Obviously they are expecting a promising future, but there is a long way to go and they will meet with some difficulties and challenges on their way to their dreams. The key to success is great determination and a strong will. Like the two kids, we are faced with difficulties and challenges every day. It is only when we make up our minds and work heart and soul that we will live our lives to the fullest and reach our goals at last.(22)As we can see in the picture, a student, Xiao Ming stands at a table staring at a birdcage with a cat in it. He looks puzzled. How can the cat be kept in the birdcage when it should feel free to play inside or outside the house? It is certainly feeling uneasy, unhappy and uncomfortable. Its owner should have thought about its nature --- it loves freedom.The picture attempts to convey a message that whether children or small animals, they should have their own place suited to their nature. Unnecessary limitation should be removed. Only in this way can they have healthy development both physically and mentally. 20。
高考英语二轮复习 书面表达借鉴集高三全册英语试题
手惰市安逸阳光实验学校广东2016高考英语二轮书面表达借鉴集（1）书面表达。
【高端点拨】每年高考后，我们一直在思索：英语高考中书面表达考什么、怎么考、如何写等系列高难表述问题。
但是，通过与考生交流，我们发现他们的书面表达的思维能力并非不活跃，只是在他们的记忆库中存储的相应表达方式不足，或记忆有误，或根本是空白。
拿到作文题目后，不愁没内容可写，只愁没词可用，或是写了不知是否正确，因此在表达过程中，要么被迫放弃，要么按照汉语的结构硬译，以致造成短文词不达意，错误地传递信息，分数也受到影响。
针对考生在书面表达方面出现的问题，下面将谈谈高考书面表达的复习建议和答题技巧。
一、复习建议（一）明确写作能力的培养和提高是一个日积月累的过程。
高考英语书面表达题是一项综合性的测试。
要写好一篇短文，考生不仅要具备熟练的谴词、造句和谋篇能力，而且需要熟知不同的写作策略。
如果从高三年级开始准备，则必须保证有科学、全面的训练计划和足量的写作实践，在这方面，笔者要求学生从认识句子成分，到谴词成句，到练习基本句式，再到语段语篇的这样一个过程。
当然有些学生在这过程中也坚持写日记，然后笔者给他们都进行了详细批改。
这样学生既听从了老师的安排和指导，也没有忽视自己的实践与总结。
（二）注重平时的练笔。
近几年考题的话题包括外国交换学生在华学习生活安排、少年健康问题、中学生业余生活、人们的生活变化、环境保护、中学生庆祝奥运会申办、举办成功等。
对于这些话题，每个考生都不会感到无话可说，只要平时认真进行一些写作实践，就不难具备应付这类话题所必要的写作能力。
（三）明确写作方向。
从近几年的情况来看，试题并没有特定的语篇或文体要求。
虽然短文会用到记叙、说明或议论等表达方式，但这毕竟只是一个区区几十字的文段，远不足被称为记叙文、议论文、说明文或某种特定文体的文章。
例如：书面表达材料要求根据一首诗的内容，描述其中的一位老师，这是单纯的记叙文;或者根据提示，写毕业赠言，其中首先要求表述好友在你心中的印象，并用一两个事例加以描述，然后表达祝愿，这其实也是记叙文;或者依据要求，让学生描述一位伟人，并说明自己喜欢他或她的原因，这还是记叙文。
【K12教育学习资料】高考英语二轮复习 书面表达浏览(2)
山东泰安市2016高考英语二轮书面表达浏览（2）基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）你接受了一项写作任务，写一篇关于中英诗人的英语介绍。
*珀西·比希·雪莱(Percy Bysshe Shelley)【写作要求】1．只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。
【参考范文】基础写作 (One possible version)Li Bai, a romantic poet living in the prosperous period of China’s Tang Dynasty, is regarded as the “God of poetry” in China. All his life, though he went through a lot of setbacks, he showed his deep love for nature and eager wish for freedom and wrote about one thousand poems, of which more than thirty have been widely read and recited from generation to generation till today. Compared with Li Bai, Percy Bysshe Shelley, a romantic democratic poet lived during the period of Great Britain’s Industrial Revolution. He was born over 1,000 years later than Li Bai and unfortunately died at an early age, but he also wrote many famous poems showing his dissatisfaction with the social inequality. And Shelley, considered as the “poet of poets”, became the first poet who sang for the working class in Europe.【深圳市2014高考英语综合能力测试题（3）】读写任务（共l小题，满分25分）阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
2022高考英语二轮练习：书面表达(2)附参考范文
2022高考英语二轮练习：书面表达（2）附参考范文书面表达训练假定你是李华，明天下午3点，你校将邀请消防员在学校大厅进行平安学问讲座。
请依据以下所给信息，写一则书面通知。
1. 播放火灾事故视频；2. 讲解预防火灾的方法;(更换旧的煤气管, 使用平安的电源插座；安装报警器)3. 提问互动环节。
留意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
安装：installNotice____________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】In order to arouse our safety awareness, a lecture will be held at the lecture hall at 3 pm tomorrow. The lecture on fire safety will be given by a fireman invited by our school.First of all, some videos about fire accidents will be shown to tell the necessity and importance of fire prevention. Then, the fireman will tell us how to prevent a fire. Changing the gas pipe, installing the fire alarm and using safe power sockets are all on the list. Finally, time permitting, a Q&A session will be arranged to answer the related questions and help get a better understanding of fire safety.Everyone is welcome to attend it. Please be on time!书面表达训练假定你是李华，来自新华高中(Xinhua High School)，请代表全校师生写一封英文欢迎词，欢迎来自英国伊顿公学( Eton College)的交换生(exchange students)主要内容包括：1．代表全校师生向他们表示真诚的欢迎：2．介绍学校赐予他们的细心支配；3 嘱咐他们一些特殊要留意的事情。
2024年有关高考英语第二轮复习的方法总结范本(二篇)
2024年有关高考英语第二轮复习的方法总结范本2024年高考英语复习方法总结随着高考的临近，对于考生来说，如何有效地复习英语成为了一个非常重要的问题。
下面是我总结的一些复习方法，希望能够对2024年参加高考的考生有所帮助。
一、做好基础知识的复习1. 复习语法知识：复习英语语法是高考英语复习的基础，可以通过翻阅英语语法书籍或者找相关的复习资料进行系统的学习和归纳总结，同时，做一些语法题巩固记忆。
2. 复习词汇：复习英语词汇是提高英语查阅和阅读能力的重要途径，可以通过做一些词汇题进行巩固记忆，同时也要注重积累词组和惯用表达方式。
3. 复习听力：高考英语听力有一定的难度，可以通过多听一些英语原版影视、广播、录音等，增强听力能力，提高对听力材料的理解能力。
二、准备阅读理解的复习1. 阅读理解的题型主要有细节理解、推理判断、主旨大意、态度观点等，可以通过做一些阅读理解的模拟题来提高解题速度和准确率。
2. 阅读理解的复习过程中，要注重积累一些常见的词汇、短语和固定搭配，同时也要注意提高阅读速度和理解能力。
三、提高写作能力写作是英语考试的重点，提高写作能力对于获得高分非常重要。
1. 复习作文的基本结构和常用表达方式，关注各种类型的作文要求，比如记叙文、议论文、应用文等。
2. 多做一些写作题材相关的练习，如故事写作、观点表达等，通过不断的练习，提高写作的流畅性和连贯性。
3. 多阅读一些优秀的英语作文，学习他们的写作技巧和表达方式，同时也要注重积累一些高级词汇和短语，提高作文的语言水平和表达能力。
四、应对完型填空和改错题1. 复习完型填空题型的解题技巧，可以通过做一些模拟题，熟悉题干的设置和选项的筛选方法。
2. 复习常见的词汇和短语，了解一些经典易错题的解题思路，提高完型填空的解题能力。
3. 做改错题时，要注意检查句子的语法错误和拼写错误，注意平时积累一些易错的语法点和常见的拼写错误，加强错误类型的巩固。
五、系统复习模拟试题1. 制定复习计划，根据高考的时间节点，合理安排各个知识点的复习时间和重点。
高考英语二轮复习书面表达高分作文例举
2020届二轮复习书面表达高分作文例举大多数同学在进行英语写作时用的一般都是左边的词，如果能尝试用右边的高级词汇，你的英语写作必会增色不少。
小天建议大家试试哦！1. want(想) →intend to2. famous(著名的)→well-known；outstanding3. important(重要的) →crucial；significant；essential4. remember(记得)→bear in mind that5. cause(导致)→contribute to；give rise to；lead to；result in6. helpful(有用的)→beneficial; rewarding7. many(许多)→numerous；a number of; quite a few8. beautiful(美丽的) →attractive；eye-catching；appealing；charming9. improve(提高)→enhance；promote；strengthen10. finish (完成) →complete；fulfill；accomplish；achieve11. serious(严重的)→severe12. develop (发展，培养)→cultivate；nurture13. keep (保持)→preserve；maintain；hold14. solve (解决)→resolve；settle；cope with；deal with15. cheap(便宜的)→economical；inexpensive16. difficult(困难的)→challenging17. job(工作)→career；profession18. because(因为)→due to；in that；for the reason that；now that19. very(非常)→extremely；highly；profoundly20. happy(高兴的)→delighted；pleased21. clever(聪明的)→brilliant；intelligent22. bad(不好的)→awful; terrible23. only(仅仅)→merely; barely24. so (因此)→therefore；consequently；as a result25. and(和)→as well as；along with；in addition26. clear(明显的)→obvious；apparent；evident27. meeting(会议)→conference28. problem(问题)→issue；dilemma29. happen(发生)→occur；take place；come about30. show(显示)→indicate; reveal31.get(得到)→acquire；attain；obtain；gain32. think of sth.(想到) →sth. occur to sb.33. in fact(事实上)→as a matter of fact34. usually(通常地)→more often than not35. join(参加)→take part in; participate in36. thank(感谢)→appreciate37. consider(考虑)→take account of38. ignore(忽视)→neglect; pay no attention to39. like(喜欢)→be fond of; be keen on; be attached to。
高考英语二轮复习专题之书面表达 2【精美版】
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上一流大学的梦想很吸引我们，我们已下定决心来实现它。
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第三板块 提高写作能力 专题六 书面表达
第二节 六类话题集训
话题一 学校生活
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高考书面表达(2)求职信学案-高三英语二轮复习
高考书面表达（2）求职信学案-高三英语二轮复习注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。
但不计入总数。
学写句子：1）作为一名英语爱好者，我非常喜欢英语，尤其是英语戏剧。
____________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________2)我看过莎士比亚（Shakepare）的著名剧本诸如（HamletandtheMerchantofVeniece）,这些给我留下了深刻的印象。
____________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________3)除此以外，我还擅长英语口语，我希望我能有更多地机会使用练习运用。
____________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ _________________________4)如果我能加入这个俱乐部，我可以学会怎样在舞台上表演和与成员一起练习讲英语。
____________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ _________________________5）我相信我能从这个活动中学习更多关于英国的文化。
高三英语二轮复习必备素材书面表达第2期
写作任务:根据下面表格提供的数据,写一篇题目为Changes in People’s Diets的短文(词数:120左右),要求:1. State the changes in people’s diets in the past five years.2. Give possible reasons for the changes.分析:本写作任务由提纲和图表构成。
提纲部分提供给我们的是文章的叙述要点,事实上就是文章结构,由此我们可以将作文分为三部分。
第一部分,叙述过去五年中人们饮食的变化。
这一情况从何处得知呢？通过分析图表的纵栏和横栏可知,不同食品种类随着时间变化在人们日常饮食中所占比例的变化。
对这一变化的简单概述即是第一部分的内容。
分析表格数据,我们发现从1986年到1990年这5年里人们的饮食结构发生了很大的变化,如牛奶、肉类这些高营养食品的消费逐年增加,而粮食的消费则减少了。
第二部分,分析人们饮食结构发生变化的原因。
人们饮食结构发生变化主要有两大原因。
第一,随着经济的发展,人们富裕了,能消费得起高营养的食物了；第二,人们开始追求更加科学更加健康的食物搭配。
第三部分,按提纲的要求,这一段是写结论。
分析该食物搭配,希望人们将来的饮食结构更科学,更合理。
初稿:In the past five years there have been a few changes in people’s diets. People eat fewer grains, drink more milk, eat fewer fruits and vegetables and eat more meat.I think it’s because people have more money to buy meat and milk. Meat and milk are more expensive than grains. Milk and meat are important to one’s health, but if people eat too much rich food, some problems will occur.In conclusion, people should keep a balance in their diets. They should eat enough grains, fruits and vegetables too.教师点评:这篇习作初稿大体上遵循了提纲的要求,条理清楚,要点叙述基本到位,从文中也能看出作者的独立思考能力,但是文章仍然存在一些缺点。
高考英语二轮专题复习 书面表达精选文章
手惰市安逸阳光实验学校高考英语二轮专题复习书面表达精选文章1. 关于爱心Love is a lamp[1.现象/现状说明段] Love is of utmost importance to us humans. Everybody not only needs love, but also should give others love. As can be seen from the picture, "love is a lamp which is brighter in darker places. " This is indeed true. People in darker places need more light than other people. Maybe even a dim light can give them much hope for a better life. Maybe just a thread of light will call forth their strength and courage to help them step out of their difficulties.[7.举例段] I can think of no better illustration of this idea than the following example(s).For instance when someone is starving to death, just a little food and water from you may save his(her) life. Again, when a little girl in a poor rural area drops out of school because of poverty, just a small sum of money from you may support her to finish school and change her life. In these case/circumstances you have given love which is like a lamp in a dark place where light is most needed.[8.归纳结论段] To sum up, we should offer our help to all the needed. We expect to get love from others and we also give love to others. So when you see someone in difficulty or in distress and in need of help, don't hesitate to give your love to him (her). I believe that the relationship between people will be harmonious and that our society will be a better place for us to live in.2. 空气污染(隐形)[2.图画/图表描述段] Pollution is becoming more and more serious all over the world. As is shown in the cartoon, two cars are giving off waste gas and three people are trying to avoid breathing in the poisonous gas by masking their face with their hands. The poisonous gas sent off by factories, domestic appliances and automobiles has made the air unhealthy for people to breathe.[5.意义阐述段] There is no denying that automobiles are indications of civilization, progress and development; nevertheless , automobiles cause the serious problem of air pollution. Scientists have warned that unless effective measures are taken, the problem of pollution will eventually get out of hand. Actually, people are showing a real concern over the problem. For example, there is an increasingly loud voice from the public for firm action against pollution from automobiles.[10建议措施段]Indeed, the earth is our home and we have the duty to take care of it for ourselves and for our descendants. In my opinion, we should work out concrete solutions to the problem of pollution from poisonous gas given off by automobiles. For example, the automobiles should be equipped with a device which can dispose of waste gas so as to prevent it from polluting air. Only in this way can we really solvethe problem of air pollution caused by automobiles.3. 沙漠化[2.图画/图表描述段]As is shown in the picture, we can see clearly the relation ship between people and desert. In the left hand picture, people are fleeing from greedy sand hills because they cut down all the trees. The caption reads, ”As the sand advances, we retreat.” In the right hand picture, the people have returned carrying tools, water, and young trees to plant the land again. The caption reads: “As we advance, the sand retreats. ”[5.意义阐述段]It seems to me that the cartoonist is sending a message about the importance of trees in water and soil conservation and the need for everyone to fight against the danger of the desertification. In fact, what he is saying is that the sand hills will drive away from the land if we do fight against the sand. If we let this situation continue as it is , our environment will suffer a great destruction.[10.建议措施段]The best way to fight back against the greedy desert in made clear in the second picture. There the local people are actively setting about the task of planting trees to reclaim the land and make it fertile. The fact that there are three people in the picture, each with a different job suggests that working together is the key to success in the battle against soil erosion.4. 商业捕鱼A Brief History of World Commercial Fishing[2.图表描述段] As is shown in the pictures ,with the increase of commercial fishing ,the number of fishes dramatically(sharply) decreased .In one pictures ,there were various kinds of fish and only one fishing-boat in 1900 .On the contrary ,in1995 there was only one fish ,with many fishing-boats.[5.意义阐述段] The purpose of this picture is to show us that due (great enough) attention has to be paid to the decrease (decline) of ocean resources .Owing to over-fishing the number of fishes has obviously dropped .If we let this situation go (continue) as it is ,we do not know where fish will be in the future .By that time ,our environment will suffer a great destruction .[10.建议措施段] Therefore ,it is imperative for us to take drastic (effective) measures .For one thing ,we should appeal to our authorities to make strict laws to control commercial fishing .For another ,we should enhance(imperative arouse) the awareness of people that the ocean resources are very vital to us .Only in this way can we protect our ocean resources .Also I believe that we humans can overcome thisdifficulty ,and we will have a brighter future .5. 人口增长对野生动物的影响[2.图画/图表描述段] From these graphs, we can draw a conclusion that, with the growth of human population, the number of species has decreasedrapidly in America, and some species have even vanished from our planet.[6.原因列段]Why does this phenomenon appear? There are several possible reasons for this. Above all, as the human population grows rapidly, a growing number of people came to live where some wild species have been living. Then these species have to move to other places. Some of them probably can not adapt to the new environment and die. In addition, although many people look on the wildlife as their friends, some people may not think so. They catch a lot of wild animals and sell them in order to get more money. Even worse(坏)/More importantly(好), as the result （中性） /consequence（贬义）of the industry, the natural balance and the ecologic environment are destroyed. The clear cutting has become increasingly serious. So some of the wildlife become homeless and extinct.[10.建议措施段]In order to protect the wildlife, I have some suggestions. First, the governments should make laws to prevent them from being caught and killed. Second, the governments should educate people to love nature and protect it. Third, as for ourselves, we should take practical actions to protect our living environment.6 烟草生产和消费[1.现象/现状说明段]The majority of people would agree that cigarette smoking has caused serious problems. But the tobacco companies insist that they contribute greatly to the world economy by paying taxes to the government and employing hundreds of workers.[4.利弊说明段]Personally, I believe that cigarette production and consumption threatens to do more harm than good. Firstly, smoking is responsible for many fatal diseases such as lung cancer, heart diseases and so on. According to the survey, tobacco consumers account for about 20% of the world population, and among them, three million people die from smoking-related diseases every year. The fact that the output of tobacco production is reduced from 143.64 billion pounds in 1994 to 142 billion pounds in 1995 also suggests that people have come to realize the negative effects of smoking. Secondly, tobacco consumption is extremely wasteful of money. As is indicated in the pictures, 200 billion US dollars is lost due to smoking each year. Obviously, the total loss of money around the globe substantially exceeds the gain in the industry.[8.归纳结论段]In conclusion, as the economic development aims at making our life better, we cannot sacrifice our health for short-term financial benefits. If we have to spend more and more money providing medical services for those who suffer from smoking-related illnesses, the notion of promoting economy via tobacco production is not justifiable. It is high time that we fought for the total tobacco ban.7. 日用花销统计Statistics in People's Daily Expenses in Xi'anYearItem 1995 1996 1997 1998 1999Food 66% 61% 48% 41% 36%Clothing 9% 10% 12% 15% 18%Recreation 4% 5% 8% 9% 11%[2.图画/图表描述段]What is shown in the table above indicates that dramatic changes have taken place in the daily expenses in Xi' an from 1995 to 1999. The expenses on food have declined by 30% while those on clothing and recreation have increased respectively by 9% and 7%. The statistics of rise and fall seem to exist in isolation but closely related to one another.[6.原因列段]There are two factors accounting for these changes. Development in economy is an essential one in the five years. The increased income resulting from economic growth plays an important part in the less expense on food. Hence, a small percentage of total income is enough to cover food expense. Another one is the changes in life style. When food presents no worry to the average, people begin to focus more of interest on handsome appearance and happy leisure time. As a result of such a shift, spending on clothing and recreation increased year after year.[9.趋势预测段]From the analyses made above, we may come to the conclusion that people's living standards in Xi' an have been constantly improved between 1995 and 1999. With the further growth in economy and more changes in life style, the tendency indicated in the table will continue in the table will continue in the better direction.8.咨询信A letter of InquiryYou wish to study at a certain foreign university. Write a letter inquiring about the situation there as regards accommodation, fees and qualifications.Dear SirI am a Chinese citizen who wishes to study at your university. My plan is to start my course next term, and I would be grateful if you would be kind enough to provide me with certain essential information. First, what qualifications do I need to follow a course of study at your university? I already have a master’s degree from a u niversity here in China, but I wonder if there are any further academic requirements. Second, how much are the tuition fees? Although I intend to be self –supporting, I would be interested to hear if there are any scholarships available for international students. Third, what is the situation as regards accommodation? I would prefer a single room, which is more conducive to studying, but if single rooms are expensive, I would be willing to share.I look forward to your reply, and to attending your esteemed institution. Yours sincerely,Li Ming9. 请求信 A Letter of RequestYou find that your study load is too heavy. Write a letter to your college teacher explaining why you need to withdraw from two courses. Ask if it is possible to obtain a refund.Dear Prof. James,I am writing to formally request to withdraw from two courses: Introduction to Elementary Education (EDU 602) and Teaching Methods (EDU 619).The main reason for reducing my course load is that I am finding it extremely difficult to manage six courses. In the beginning of the term, I was perhaps overly optimistic about juggling both my full – time studies and my part – time job (20 hours/week). Because I really must work part time, I have no other choice but to decrease my course load.I am planning on taking the two courses during the summer semester, if they are available, so that I will be able to complete all the courses for the degree program by the following year.I would also like to request a tuition refund, and hope I am not too late to receive the full reimbursement. I am sorry for any inconveniences I have caused by this change in plans. This decision was not taken lightly, and I do appreciate the king consideration you have shown to me. Thank you for your attention to these requests. If you have any questions, please feel free to contact me at 277-9144. I look forward to hearing from you soon.Sincerely yours,Jane Carter10．建议信 A Letter of Advice/SuggestionYou have a friend who is about to enter university, and he wants you to advise him on which subject to specialize in – history, in which he is very interested, or computer science, which offers better job prospects. Dear John,You have asked me for my advice concerning whether you should study history or computer science at university, and I will try to make some useful suggestions.You must keep in mind that, above all, your university training is a preparation for your future career. Therefore, your first consideration should be to study a subject which will best equip you to earn a living. There is no doubt that the field of computers offers far job opportunities than history.Besides, we are now in the age of the high - technology revolution. For the foreseeable future, not only will it be necessary for everyone to be computer - literate, it will also be necessary for them to be equipped with computer skills merely to earn a living! History, I'm afraid, however fascinating it may be, offers few career prospects.Of course, you don't have to devote all your time at university tostudying computers and nothing else. On the contrary, I would recommend that you keep up your reading of history in your spare time. That way, you will find that your leisure hours are enriched while you prepare yourself for a worthwhile career in computers.Yours sincerely,James。
高考英语二轮复习 书面表达借鉴集高三全册英语试题2
手惰市安逸阳光实验学校广东2016高考英语二轮书面表达借鉴集（2）某大学登出广告，拟招聘一名志愿者为学生会网站做定期维护（do the website maintenance ）, 请以Li Hua为名写一封求职信，内容必须包括：1. 表示对志愿者工作的兴趣；2. 你的基本情况和自我介绍；3. 表示自己能胜任的信心, 期待答复。
Dear Sir /Madam,【参考范文】Dear Sir /Madam,I am writing to inquire about the opportunity to do the website maintenance for the Students’ Union. Your advertisement in yesterday’s newspaper is very attractive and I believe it is fit for me. I am a student from No. 1 Middle School, who is warm-hearted and patient and willing to serve others in my spare time.I believe my strong ability of communication and my teamwork spirit can qualify me for the job. What’s more, I have the experience of making and maintaining websites. I trust that I am capable of doing the work well and I’m looking forward to hearing from you in the near future.Yours sincerely,Li Hua书面表达训练最近，由于很多不遵纪守礼的行为，而导致了一些恶劣事故，如：成都女司机由于不文明驾驶而遭致暴力殴打。
高考英语二轮复习 书面表达选编高三全册英语试题2 (2)
手惰市安逸阳光实验学校2016山东高考英语二轮书面表达选编（2）书面表达训练假定你校将举行一个成人仪式，你将作为代表在仪式上发言。
请你按以下内容要点准备一篇英文发言稿。
1.过去对成年的向往；2.现在的感受和认识；3.将来的目标及措施。
参考词汇：责任 responsibility注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；3.发言稿的开头与结束语已为你写好（不计入总词数）Good morning，everyone！The topic of my speech today is “thoughts on becoming agrown-up”._________________________________________________________ _ ——————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————Thank you for listening.【参考范文1】Good morning, everyone !The topic of my speech today is “Thoughts on becoming a grown-up.”As a child, I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could have whatever I wanted and do whatever I liked. Now I’m a grown-up, but I find things do not go as I expected. Although I can enjoy more freedom, at the same time I realize that being a grown-up not only means this, but also more responsibilities. I hope to do more for my parents and society in the future to make my life more meaningful. To reach the goal, I must first try my best to pass the college entrance examination and enter a good university.Thank you for your listening.书面表达训练假设你是新华中学高三学生李华，你校计划开设烹饪课。
高考英语二轮复习 书面表达精选高三全册英语试题_2
手惰市安逸阳光实验学校书面表达精选（2）书面表达训练假如你是李华，今年暑假你将参加“英国名校两周游”夏令营，计划7月份在London逗留三天（7月16-18日），住在Wellington Hotel。
你想与去年你家接待过的来自英国Birmingham的学生Charlie见面，请你给他写一封Email。
主要内容包括：1. 问候；2. 简单介绍在伦敦的行程；3. 希望见面并商量见面的时间和地点。
注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头已给出，但不计入总词数。
Dear Charlie,How time flies! It has been almost a year since your last visit. ______________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Charlie,How time flies! It has been almost a year since your last visit. How’s everything going with you and your family? My parents and I miss you very much.This summer vocation, I will join in a two-week camp to visit some of the famous universities in the UK. It’s scheduled that we will stay in London from July 16th to 18th. We’re planning to have a tour of London on the first two days, when we’ll visit some popular tourist attractions such as the Tower of London, Westminster Abby and Buckingham Palace, etc.I want to see you very much. I am wondering if we could make it on the afternoon of July 18th at Wellington Hotel, where we’ll be staying. We won’t have any planned activities then. Please let me know if it is convenient for you.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua书面表达（满分30分）假设你是李越。
高考英语二轮复习 书面表达精选高三全册英语试题 (2)
手惰市安逸阳光实验学校2016湖北高考英语二轮书面表达精选（1）书面表达训练假如你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，你参加高校招生英语面试，请根据以下提示用英语做自我介绍。
1. 性格特点；2.兴趣爱好；3. 擅长科目；4. 未来专业意向。
注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Good morning! I’m Li Hua from Hongxing Middle School.____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ __________That’s all! Thank you!【参考范文】Good morning! I’m Li Hua from Hongxing Middle School. I’d like to give a brief introduction about myself. I’m easy going and have various hobbies. I love sports, especially playing basketball with my friends. I’m also keen on listening to music to relax myself in my spare time. Among all the subjects, English is my favorite and I’m g ood at it. When it comes to my ideal major, I’m quite interested in international business because I like meeting people from different cultures and communicating with them in English. I sincerely hope that you can give me a chance to improve myself in your university.That’s all. Thank you.书面表达训练请阅读下面短文，并按要求以Our Life Rests on Our Choice为题，用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
高考英语二轮复习 书面表达精选高三全册英语试题_02
手惰市安逸阳光实验学校2016湖北高考英语二轮书面表达精选（2）书面表达训练每年都有许多人出国旅游，一些人的不文明行为引起了社会的广泛关注。
某英语报社正在举行以“文明出国旅游”为主题的讨论。
假定你是李华，请你给报社专栏编辑写一封信，呼吁大家做文明游客。
要点如下：1. 尊重习俗；2. 不高声喧哗；3. 其它。
注意 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头语已为你写好。
Dear Editor,I’ve read your discussion on how to behave properly when traveling abroad.【参考范文】Dear Editor,I’ve read your discussion on how to behave properly when traveling abroad.Every year, a great many holidaymakers go abroad for sightseeing and relaxation. While they are enjoying themselves, some of them behave rudely, which causes a big problem. How to be a civilized tourist has become a heated topic.In my opinion, it is necessary to watch our manners. First, we must respect and follow local customs. Beside s, we’d better not talk loudly in public places to avoid disturbance to others. Also, be aware that queue jumping is unacceptable in many countries. More importantly, we should bear in mind that we are representing our country while abroad, so we need to be cautious about how we act.Only in this way can we enjoy our trip abroad and have beautiful memories as well.书面表达训练目前，雾霾现象在中国一些城市经常出现，并对人们的身体、工作、生活产生很大影响。
高考英语二轮复习 书面表达编高三全册英语试题2
手惰市安逸阳光实验学校四川省南江县高考英语书面表达（二轮）赏析新编（5）2016书面表达训练假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Johnson 即将到你所在学校学习，想通过你了解学校食堂(canteen)的情况。
请你根据提示给他写封电子邮件，向他介绍相关情况。
内容包括：1. 就餐时间；2. 菜品种类；3. 就餐费用。
注意：1. 100词左右，开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Johnson,I am glad to hear that you will come to study in our school. Looking forward to your coming.Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Johnson,I am glad to hear that you will come to study in our school. Here I will introduce you our canteen so that you can get prepared. The canteen usually runs early in the morning from 6:30 to 7:00. They offer noodles, dumplings and eggs and so on for breakfast. Lunch starts at 12:00 and lasts about 40 minutes with various dishes including fresh vegetables and delicious meat like pork and beef. Dinner begins at 5:00 p.m. and there are a few dishes provided. The average expense of each meal is about 8 yuan. Of course, it will cost you more if you order special dishes. I believe you can get used to the food here soon. Looking forward to your coming.Yours, Li Hua 【高三考前冲刺卷】读写任务(共1小题，满分25分)阅读下面短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
高中英语二轮复习 书面表达(2)
2020届高中英语二轮复习书面表达（2）1、近期，某校组织高三学生进行了一场讨论。
主题是：高三年级要不要集中进行晚自习。
根据下图提供的信息，写一篇英语短文，客观地介绍一下讨论的情况，注意要涵盖所有要点。
注意：1. 词数不少于100（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
晚自习evening self-studyRecently there was a heated discussion among Senior 3 students in our school._____________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________2、请阅读下面有关中国在线外卖现状调查的柱状图及相关文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
The fast food delivery service, which depends on the already－existing restaurants, can cover a larger place with more customers without taking the seats of restaurants. Under the current economic and market condition, the fast food delivery service has been the new battlefield of the fast food giants in China. Even MacDonald's and KFC, the two international fast food giants are fighting against each other for more market share in China's fast food delivery industry.However, Jing Linbo, Deputy Director of the Institute of Finance and Trade Economics, the Chinese Academy of Social Science, thought that the fast food delivery is the new growth point of fast food enterprises. But the fast food enterprises should have certain comprehensive strengths to do this service, which is thought to be different from the traditional food industry in some aspects.Besides, with the development of the new industry, there also emerge problems. And some observers have given their warnings. They warn that if the fast food enterprises take no notice of the hidden problems, they will lose the customers in the competitive market gradually.【写作内容】1. 用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；2. 结合上述信息，简要分析外卖盛行的主要原因；3. 请从消费者角度谈谈你对外卖的看法及建议，用2—3个理由支撑你的观点。
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广东肇庆市2016高考英语二轮书面表达借鉴集（2）某大学登出广告，拟招聘一名志愿者为学生会网站做定期维护（do the website maintenance ）,请以Li Hua为名写一封求职信，内容必须包括：1. 表示对志愿者工作的兴趣；2. 你的基本情况和自我介绍；3. 表示自己能胜任的信心, 期待答复。
Dear Sir /Madam,【参考范文】Dear Sir /Madam,I am writing to inquire about the opportunity to do the website maintenance forthe Students’ Union. Your advertisement in yesterday’s newspaper is very attractiveand I believe it is fit for me. I am a student from No. 1 Middle School, who iswarm-hearted and patient and willing to serve others in my spare time.I believe my strong ability of communication and my teamwork spirit can qualifyme for the job. What’s more, I have the experience of making and maintaining websites.I trust that I am capable of doing the work well and I’m looking forward to hearingfrom you in the near future.Yourssincerely,Li Hua书面表达训练最近，由于很多不遵纪守礼的行为，而导致了一些恶劣事故，如：成都女司机由于不文明驾驶而遭致暴力殴打。
假设你是李华，请以“遵纪守礼”为主题，写一篇英语短文，向你校校报投稿。
内容包括：（1）中国自古以来就是文明礼仪之邦。
（2）人人都该重礼仪、遵纪守礼。
（3）谈谈你认为中学生应该如何做到遵纪守礼。
注意：（1）词数：100左右。
（2）为使行文连贯，可适当增加细节。
（3）开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：discipline (U) 纪律 civilized文明的Recently, there has been a heated discussion online about a female driver in Chengdu,who was violently beaten because of her rude driving. 【参考范文】Recently, there has been a heated discussion online about a female driver in Chengdu,who was violently beaten because of her rude driving. In my opinion, both beatingothers and impolite driving are quite bad behaviors.China is a civilized country with a long history. Our ancestors attached greatimportance to “Li”---civilized behavior. Every Chinese should obey discipline andbehave well.As middle school students, we should be strict with ourselves in manners. Firstly,we ought to respect the old and care the young. Besides, we should behave ourselves,such as civilizedly dinning, waiting in line on many occasions and so on. Last butnot least, we must obey school and society discipline, not cheating in exams.As far as I am concerned, only when we all behave well, can our society be harmonious.书面表达（A）（20分钟）在我们的生活和学习中，与人合作是非常重要的。
请你根据下表中所提供的信息，写一篇题为“Cooperate with others”的英文演讲稿。
请写在答题纸相应横线上。
注意：1．对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。
2．词数150左右。
参考词汇：合作者 partner 高效地efficientlyGood afternoon, everyone!The topic of my speech today is “Cooperate with others”._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________Thank you for your listening!【参考范文】One possible version：Good afternoon, everyone!The topic of my speech today is “Cooperate with others”.In our daily life and study, if we want to accomplish our work efficiently, we must all learn to cooperate with others. Cooperation can save us a lot of time and energy. Additionally, we can learn much from our partners by cooperating with them.When we cooperate with someone we like, we will feel very happy. We can share our pleasure（joys）and sadness（sorrows）with him. But it challenges us to get along with others to cooperate with someone we dislike（hate）. Besides/Moreover/What’s more, we should focus on our work, instead of（rather than）our partners. Perhaps in working together with him for a long time, we’ll learn（find out）that he is a man to get along well with.How can we become a good partner? In my opinion, we should try to listen to others. If they make mistakes, we also try to point them out. Thirdly, we mustn’t embarrass others to make them in unfavorable position.Thank you for your listening!要点供9个，每缺一个要点扣2分。
9个要点如下：可以高效地完成任务；可以节省时间和精力；可以从合作者身上学到很多；心情愉快，一起分享工作中的快乐和痛苦；能挑战自己与他人相处的能力；关注工作比关注合作者本人更重要；日久，也许会发现他是一个很好相处的人；自我观点2个2016书面表达训练你校将举办主题为“未来工作畅想”的征文活动。
请根据下面所给的要点写一篇英语短文（1）你所梦想的工作；（2）你的兴趣或特长；（3）该工作的重要性；注意：（1）词数100左右；（2）可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯（3）开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。