2015高考每周专训：短文改错+书面表达2
2015高考全国II短文改错汇编
2015高考短文改错汇编1.【2015·新课标全国II】One day , little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him drying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said,“How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried. ” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.【答案】71. parent改为parents72. on改为in73. very去掉74. looks改为looking75. where改为that 或者去掉where76. begun改为began77. telling改为told78. a改为the79. saw后加his80. terrible改为terribly【考点定位】语法填空。
【名师点睛】通过短短的100多个词，使考生能正确运用各类词和固定搭配，如动词、名词、副词、代词和连词，辨别并改正错误。
总的说来，本题都是学生平时书面表达中常见的错误。
最新2015英语高考每周专训：短文改错+书面表达3
2015高考每周专训：短文改错+书面表达3第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）下面短文中有10处语言错误。
请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面加上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Senior three student will face a problem after they pass by the college entrance examination. Should I choose a good major and a good university? Some students preferred to consider majors first so that they can learn what they are interested. It will also make it possibly for them to take their favorite jobs in the future. However, those who think differently believes that the environment is important to one’s development. They think that students graduate from key universities are often more likely to find a good job. In my opinion, the best choice is to choose a good major at a good university. But if we can obtain both, the first thing to consider is a good major, because no matter where we study, we can still achieve a lot in the certain field if we try our best.2Last weekend we went mountain-climbing. Even the heavy rain can not stop us. We set off early and went along an extreme narrow road, all in high spirit. On either side of theroad was green fields. We could hear the sound of the rain mixing with our laughter. At noon we reached to the top of the mountain, there we were amazed by. The beauty of the scenes. After short rest, we started going down It rained more harder. We were wet all over, and we still felt happy.第二节：书面表达（满分30分）假设你们学校最近就你们所在的城市是否应该发展旅游业(tourism)作为研究性课程的内容进行课题讨论，请你根据下面所给出的要点提示，写一个在讨论会上的英语发言稿。
2015高考英语精选短文改错练习题(二)
2015高考英语精选短文改错练习题（二）2015高考英语精选短文改错练习题（二）完形填空(共20小题;每小题1.5分，满分30分)阅读下面短文，从短文后各题所给的A,B,C,D四个选项中选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。
It was a warm March evening，and I’d just taken a seat on the bus that would take me home.It was nearly 6：00 PM，but the bus was not yet full and the driver gave no 26 that he intended to start the bus.A middle-aged woman took a seat opposite me . She was crying.Not speaking to anyone in particular，she 27 told her story.She had come to the city to visit her daughter.On the way to the terminal(终点站)，a thief had _28_ one of her bags.It had contained half of the money she’d brought with her.The other half was hidden under her blouse, so she _29_ still had some money left.The bus conductor，driver，and other passengerslistened to her tale.At this time, an old man _30_got on the bus.He sat in the seat directly in front of the woman.After a few minutes, all seats were __31__.The driver started the engine.The bus conductor collected tickets and began asking us where we were _32__.When he came to the old man’s seat，he became __33__ and asked the old man whether he had any money.The old man _34__ that he did not.He explained that he _35_ all his money this morning when he’d accidentally got on the wrong bus and now he was trying to go home.Upon hearing this，the bus conductor _36_ the old man to get off the bus.The old man was almost in tears as he begged the bus conductor to let him take that bus _37_ he could get home before dark.The bus driver approached the old man，and repeated the c onductor’s _38__ to get off the bus.By the time the bus pulled out of the terminal，she had given the old man some bread and a dollar.She rode the rest of the way home _43__ a Mona Lisa smile of peace and grace，and the money she’d lost _44_was forgotten.On the road of life，the politeness and smiles of _45__ can lighten our loads and lift our spirits.How much sweeter the journey when we make it a little smoother and richer for others !26.A.answer B.agreement C.sign D. meaning27.A.tearfully B.excitedly C.helplessly D.proudly28.A.got B.stole C.pulled D.caught29.A.surprisingly B.peacefully C.naturallyD.fortunately30.A.in rags B.shyly C.happily D.in disorder31.A.had B.crowded C.full D.taken32.A.getting on B.getting down C.getting offD.getting in33.A.conscious B.suspicious C.curious D.anxious34.A.realized B.pretended C.admittedD.remembered35.A.spends B.has spent C.had spent D.was spent36.A.asked B.ordered C.led D.begged37.A.so B.until C.if D.when38.A.arrangement mand C.adviceD.decision39.A.good B.sense C.reason D.doubt40.A.picked B.removed C.touched D.reached41.A.left B.saving C.borrowed D.remaining42.A.in B.to C.down D.on43.A.owning B.wearing C.hating D.losing44.A.earlier B.sooner ter D.former45.A.customers B.friends C.strangersD.conductors。
2015高考英语：短文改错练习(2)及答案
2015高考英语：短文改错练习（2）及答案解析短文改错议论文【英语卷（解析）·2015届河北省邯郸市馆陶县一中高三7月调研考试（201407）】第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
【答案】71.had改为have 解析：考查动词的时态。
句意：许多年轻人都有抽烟的习惯，尽管他们还是中学生。
整个文章用一般现在时来叙述客观事实，故用一般现在时。
72. student 改为students。
解析：考查名词的单复数。
句意：虽然他们还是中学生，根据they 来判断用复数形式。
73.do 改为does 解析：考查动词的时态。
Do harm to 对。
有害。
整篇文章用一般现在时来叙述。
74. realized 后的that去掉解析：考查宾语从句。
句意：越来越多的人意识到这个问题的严重性。
Relize后面引导宾语从句由how来引导，故把that去掉。
75.boring 改为bored 解析：考查形容词辨析。
Be bored with 厌烦。
76. other 改为others 解析：考查代词。
与上文提到some people 相呼应。
77.himself 改为themselves 解析：考查反身代词。
句意：其它人认为抽烟能清醒自己。
与others相呼应。
78. causing 改为caused 解析：考查动词的。
句意：事实上，抽烟导致了许多疾病。
这是个叙述过去发生的事，故用一般过去时。
79. the waste of money 中the 改为a 解析：考查冠词。
A waste of sth浪费某物。
2015高考短文改错及适当形式填空示例
1. 先通览全文，掌握其大意。了解 文章体裁，动词时态等，找出明显 错误。 2. 第二遍开始改错。先着眼于句子 意义 ，再着眼于单词、短语，尤其 着重文章的动词（时态、语态、非 谓语）形式的表达。 3. 改完以后，进行第三遍阅读，对 全文进行检查核对，看看是否还有 遗漏的地方。
Nearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果) in our back garden. Since thenfor all these year-we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!
71．第一句中的before → ago 72．第一句中的by → of 73．第二句中的year → years 74．第二句中的had → have 75．第三句中的As后加a 76．第三句中的somewhere → everywhere 77．第四句中的taste → tasty 78．第五句中的much → many 79．第六句中的but去掉或改为yet 80．第七句中的wonderfully → wonderful
2015英语大专题之短文改错与书面表达(修改)
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【2012陕西卷】 It is such a great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing. 【2012浙江卷】mine I knew they would be worried about myself because me I was so far away. 【2013新课标1卷】 He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town him
短文改错典型错词类型分析归纳
非谓语，细辨别
主要错误为三种：非谓语的混淆；不定式to的遗 漏或多用；非谓语与谓语动词的混淆。
【2014辽宁卷】
We are hoping to settle something that bothers to us. 【2014浙江卷】 Don’t panic or get out of line, and trying to try remain quite and calm.
改错方式比例： 通常一个多词，两个缺词，七个错词
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动词形，名词数 还要注意形和副 非谓语，细辨别 介词短语要牢记
代词格，细领悟 句子成分多分析 冠词连词常光顾 逻辑错误须关注
短文改错典型错词类型分析归纳
动词形
错误主要集中在动词的时态、语态，主谓一致等方面。 【2014辽宁卷】 This morning she starts barking even before 5 o’ started clock. 【2014 浙江卷】 Before long, a train inspector comes to check out came tickets.
2015高考英语专题六 短文改错
短文改错专项训练（一）：近年浙江省高考真题实战1.(2015浙江) My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class, I could easy see the football field .In the morning, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On right side of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.2.（2014浙江）I was taking a train to London’s Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.Before long, a train inspector comes to check out tickets. A passenger realized he couldn’t find his ticket but became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket, which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet, they had so quickly offered the strangers their help. If we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to live in.3.（2013年浙江）Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move last week? Dad lost his job, and as Mom explained, “He was lucky to find other one.” His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate, my school or just everything else I love in the world. To make matters bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister, Maggie. Tomorrow is first day of school. I am awfully tiring, but I know I will never fall sleep. Good night and remember, you, dear diary, is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.4.（2012年浙江）Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and 1 rented for a car. Unfortunate, 1 had an accident andhit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents, so 1 did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how 1 was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.5.（2011年浙江）I was playing at my cousin house. Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys than I did. There was one on particular I'd always wanted. I put into my pocket when he wasn't looking. I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my cousin again; I would always know, I'd done something wrong. Late on, my aunt drove me home. When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back. She knows what had happened, but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.6.（2010年浙江）After shopping, Mother and I went to a restaurant for lunch. I notice Mother looking at a nearby table occupy by an elderly woman and young couple. They ate silently, and it was clearly that things were not going well. As we left, Mother stopped on their table. "Excuse me," she said, put her arm around the unhappy old woman. "You remind me so many of my mother. May I hug (拥抱) you?" The woman smiled happily as she accepted to it. After we left, I said, "That was very nice of you, Mother. So I didn't think she looked like Grandma." "Neither did me," said Mother cheerfully.7.（2009年浙江）One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend, a trunk came to a stop besides us. The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella because he found we were wet through. I stood there and couldn’t believe in that a complete stranger is so thoughtful. The man insisted, so I grateful accepted the offer, thanked him and watched the truck disappear down the road. This man might need the umbrella himself, and he preferred to give it to everyone else. It was a lesson to us that it was possible give without expect anything in return.短文改错专项训练（二）：2015各省高考真题练手（2015陕西卷）My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, “I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!（2015四川卷）Hi, Janice,It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing. As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch and after school. We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time—wasting activity! In fact ,I don’t like to go anymore, so I’m afraid I’ll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me ,would you talk to him? Please help with me and give me some advice.Grave （2015新课标卷1）When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Muchrare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, we‟ll live to regret it.（2015新课标卷2）One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop win dow. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying a nd telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later. Tony saw parents. Mom said,“How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.改错口诀：代词格，连词悟，还要注意形和副，名词爱考数与格，冠词在前错多少，动词时态和语态，非谓搭配细辨别，介词多半考搭配，多用漏用想周到，句法涉及到一致，从句多考关系词，语法句法均未错，逻辑推理想清楚。
2015年高考英语短文改错真题
高考真题之改错题【2015·全国统一卷】One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later. Tony saw parents. Mom said,” How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worrie d.” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.【2015·四川】Hi, Janice,It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch and after school. We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time—wasting activity! In fact ,I don’t like to go anymore, so I’m afraid I’ll lose their friendship. How d o you think I should do? If you are me, would you talk to him?Please help with me and give me some advice.【2015·陕西】My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, “I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!【2015·新课标全国I】When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protec t your environment. If we fail to do so, we’ll live to regret it.【2016·新课标全国I、II卷】The summer holiday is coming. My Classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot. 【2016·新课标全国III卷】The teenage year from 13to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worse years in my life. At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I ever felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.2016年全国高考真题之英语作文范文(2016全国I卷假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职,已写好申请书和个人简历(resume。
山西省平遥县2015高考英语短文改错(2)及参考答案
山西省平遥县2015高考英语短文改错（2）及参考答案短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I went to the Summer Palace last week．At the gate I happened to meet some American tourists．I greeted to them in English and then we began to chat．I got know that they were college students traveling in China．Most of them were fond with Chinese medicine．They are busy taking pictures and were much impressed with the changes that had been taken place in the past few years．After that, we went boating on a lake and having a good time ．We exchanged our email address so that we could write to each other in future．They thanked us again and again．I was very glad to have chance to practicing my oral English．【参考答案】 42.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
2015高考英语押题改错+语法填空+书面表达
Chinese culture is quite different from it in western countries, when you meet friend in the street, for instance, it is common to say something like “where are you going”and“where have you been?” in the Chinese culture. In western countries, by contrast, even though both are closely friends, it is good manners to avoid so greetings. The same is true of when a person sneeze. On that occasion, what is taken for granted that some Chinese nearby say” Someone misses you.”However in western countries, people usually say” God bless you.” A guest in a Chinese house, if offering something to drink, usually leaves a little to show that he has had enough, but in western countries a guest always finishes up the drink to show that they enjoyed it.第一处：把from后面的it改成that，句子的主语是Chinese culture，在进行对比的时候，用that，it作为代词的时候就是指上文的可数单数名词。
高考英语一轮总复习 周周测五 短文改错2高三全册英语试题
手惰市安逸阳光实验学校短文改错2proofreading 1With winter vacation approaching, I feel very exciting. It is the best parts of the school year for me. The place I want to visit to most is Lijiang in Yunnan Province during the winter vacation. The reason for which I want to go there is why it is a very beautiful place with many old buildings. Have a history of more than 800 years, the Old Town of Lijiang is once a centre for trade along the Ancient Tea Horse Road. The Old Town of Lijiang is also famous for their orderly system of waterways or bridges. I plan to stay there for a week and visit all the uniquely tourist attractions.proofreading 2(2017·普通高中毕业班高考适应性考试)Last week I got the first prize in the English Speech Contest held in our school. Which made me very excited. I used to be too shy to speak English in the public. It was Susan who asked me practice several times in her office and correct my pronunciation and intonation. Beside, she encouraged me to be confident and brave whether I wanted to show my talent before others. I followed her advices. That was why I won the first prize. I am deep moved by what he has done for me. I owe her a thousand thanks with her kindness.proofreading 3(2017·福建厦门高中毕业班第一次质量检查)One day, some children were playing hideandseek while the y heard a boy names Tate shouting. “Help! The golden lion is coming after me！” They go running to help Tate, only find him laughing on the ground. One child said, “You shouldn't do that. If you are real in trouble, nobody will come to help you.”In a rainy day, Tate shouted again, “The river is flooding and I can't swim. Help！” The children didn't believe her this time. But a girl saw everything and called the others to save him. Tate was not sorry for playing tricks on his friend. So from that day on, Tate never did that again.proofreading 4(2017·银川检测)I prefer my English classes to be taught in English only. What we all know, a good learning environment is of greatly importance if we want to study English well. Classes teaching in English provide students for a better environment. When English is an only language in class, students will have more opportunity to practise listening and speaking. However,there were problems with this method. Sometimes we may find difficult to follow the teacher and some slow learners may even give up learn English. In spite of these difficulties, but I believe practice makes perfect. With enough practice, we can overcome the difficulties and benefit from English classes in the long run.proofreading 5(2017·山东实验中学一模)Dear Nancy，I'm so glad to receive your letter invite me to your lecture in the city library. I'd very much like to learn something about American custom and cultures, and a friend of mine is coming to pay me a visit, and since this is for the first time that he has come here, I would have to meet them at the railway station at 7：00 pm next Saturday. It is really pity that I can't make it to communicate with you face to face, for that I'm terribly sorry.Anyway, I'm great grateful to you for your kind invitation. If there is other chance in future, I will try every possible means to learn from you.Yours，Li Huaproofreading 6(2017·河北衡水中学一模)I believe anyone can make themselves something good to eat. Cooking is a lot of easier for us than most of us think. Last Sunday my parent were away on business. I left alone, with no one to cook for me. As I had a good chance to cook myself a wonderful meal. Early in the morning I went to the market, buying some beefsteak and tomatoes and then came back. Before cooking, I put a few oil, salt and sugar on the steak and mixed it together. When the pot was hotter enough I began to fry the steak. Then I cooked some tomato soup with the egg in it. The food tasted deliciously!proofreading 7(2017·潍坊模拟)Life is an mystery and we will never know that what is waiting for us. But one thing is for sure: problems are unavoidable. For us, it's the process of solving problems that help us grow.Make a speech used to be a big problem for me. With a strong accent and terribly pronunciation, I failed in speech competition many times, but I didn't hold back. In the contrary, I considered it a good chance for me to improve myself. I recorded my speech, listening to it and corrected my pronunciation. Now I'm confident enough to give my bestspeech to you all.My dear friends, don't afraid of problems, but take advantage of it to be the best of ourselves!proofreading 8(2017·济南模拟)Dear Steven，I'm glad that you are coming to Beijing this summer vacation. You asked many question in your letter, and now let me answer them.To start with, Beijing, the capital of China, is very attractive city with a long history. You can found all kinds of delicious food in Beijing, of that the most famous is the roast Beijing duck. I hope we will enjoy it. Besides, there is a great number of tourist attractions worth visiting, such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace or the Forbidden City. These scenic spots have attracted millions of tourists in this year. I promise you will have a wonderfully time here in Beijing.I'm looking forward to hear from you as soon as possible.Yours，Liu Chaoproofreading 1答案With∧thewinter vacation approaching, I feel very excitingexcited. It is thebest partspartof the school year for me. The place I want to visit to most is Lijiang in Yunnan Province during the winter vacation. The reason forwhich I want to go there is whythatit is a very beautiful place with manyold buildings. HaveHavinga history of more than 800 years, the Old Town ofLijiang iswasonce a centre for trade along the Ancient Tea Horse Road. TheOld Town of Lijiang is also famous for theiritsorderly system of waterwaysorandbridges. I plan to stay there for a week and visit all the uniquelyunique tourist attractions.proofreading 2答案Last week I got the first prize in the English Speech Contest held in our school. WhichIt/Thatmade me very excited. I used to be too shy to speakEnglish in the public. It was Susan who asked me ∧topractice severaltimes in her office and correctcorrectedmy pronunciation and intonation.Beside Besides， she encouraged me to be confident and brave whether ifI wanted to show my talent before others. I followed her advices advice. That was why I won the first prize. I am deep deeplymoved by what he shehas done for me. I oweher a thousand thanks with forher kindness.proofreading 3 答案One day, some children were playing hideandseek while whenthey hearda boy names namedTate shouting. “Help! The Agolden lion is coming after me ！”They go wentrunning to help Tate, only ∧tofind him laughing on the ground.One child said, “You shouldn't do tha t. If you are real reallyin trouble,nobody will come to help you.”In Ona rainy day, Tate shouted again, “The river is flooding and I can't swim. Help ！” The children didn't believe her himthis time. But a girl saw everything and called the others to save him. Tate was not sorry forplaying tricks on his friend friends. So from that day on, Tate never did thatagain.proofreading 4 答案I prefer my English classes to be taught in English only. What Asweall know, a good learning environment is of greatly greatimportance if we wantto study English well. Classes teaching taughtin English provide students for witha better environment. When English is an theonly language in class,students will have more opportunity opportunitiesto practise listening and speaking.However, there were areproblems with this method. Sometimes we may find∧itdifficult to follow the teacher and some slow learners may even giveup learn learningEnglish. In spite of these difficulties, but I believepractice makes perfect. With enough practice, we can overcome thedifficulties and benefit from English classes in the long run.proofreading 5答案Dear Nancy ，I'm so glad to receive your letter invite invitingme to your lecture in thecity library. I'd very much like to learn something about American custom customsand cultures, and buta friend of mine is coming to pay me a visit, and since this is for the first time that he has come here, I would willhave to meet them himat the railway station at 7：00 pm next Saturday. It is really ∧apity that I can't make it to communicate with you face to face, for that whichI'm terribly sorry.Anyway, I'm great greatlygrateful to you for your kind invitation. Ifthere is other anotherchance in future, I will try every possible means to learnfrom you.Yours ， Li Huaproofreading 6 答案I believe anyone can make themselves something good to eat. Cooking is a lot of easier for us than most of us think. Last Sunday my parent parentswere away on business. I ∧wasleft alone, with no one to cook for me. As SoI had a good chance to cook myself a wonderful meal. Early in the morningI went to the market, buying boughtsome beefsteak and tomatoes and then cameback. Before cooking, I put a few littleoil, salt and sugar on the steak andmixed it themtogether. When the pot was hotter hotenough I began to fry thesteak. Then I cooked some tomato soup with the anegg in it. The food tasteddeliciously delicious！proofreading 7 答案Life is an amystery and we will never know that what is waiting forus. But one thing is for sure: problems are unavoidable. For us, it's the process of solving problems that help helpsus grow.Make Makinga speech used to be a big problem for me. With a strong accentand terribly terriblepronunciation, I failed in speech competition competitionsmany times, but I didn't hold back. In Onthe contrary, I considered it a good chance for me to improve myself. I recorded my speech, listening listenedto it andcorrected my pronunciation. Now I'm confident enough to give my best speech to you all.My dear friends, don't ∧beafraid of problems, but takeadvantage of it themto be the best of ourselves!proofreading 8 答案Dear Steven ，I'm glad that you are coming to Beijing this summer vacation. You asked many question questionsin your letter, and now let me answer them.To start with, Beijing, the capital of China, is ∧avery attractivecity with a long history. You can found findall kinds of delicious food inBeijing, of that whichthe most famous is the roast Beijing duck. I hope we youwill enjoy it. Besides, there is area great number of tourist attractionsworth visiting, such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace or andtheForbidden City. These scenic spots have attracted millions of touristsin this year. I promise you will have a wonderfully wonderfultime here inBeijing.I'm looking forward to hear hearingfrom you as soon as possible.Yours ， Liu Chao。
2015届高考英语二轮复习 优化训练短文改错1(含解析)
2015届高考英语二轮复习优化训练：短文改错A(2014·汉中模拟)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
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My parents and I went to the park on last Sunday. There were lots of visitors ∧who或stood in front of the ticket window. We waited a long time and buy threestanding boughttickets. In the Tiger Mountain of the park, I was too eager to see the fiercesofrightened animals that I quickened my steps through the crowd. Unfortunate, frightening UnfortunatelyI got separated from my parents. I had∧hard time looking for him, but I had noa themluck. Wandering in the park, I felt alone without any companions. Worse still, I had lonelyno money, so I had to walk home, covered as much as 5 kilometers.coveringB短文改错(2014·遵义模拟)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
2015高考真题-短文改错
1.2015·陕西My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, “I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!2.2015·四川Hi, Janice,It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch and after school. We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time—wasting activity! In fact ,I don’t like to go anymore, so I’m afraid I’ll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me ,would you talk to him?Please help with me and give me some advice.Grace3.2015·新课标全国IIOne day , little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said, “How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried. ” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.4.2015·新课标全国IWhen I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out . We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so ,we’ll live to regret it .5.2015·浙江My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class, I could easy see the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.1.2015·陕西短文改错【答案】76.去掉in 77.anything 改为something 78.better改成best 79.decide改成decided 80.step 改为steps 81.well改成good 82.after改成when/while 83.a改为the84.just后加to 85.enjoy改为enjoying【考点定位】考查短文改错【名师点睛】这篇短文改错是记叙文，短文的内容和学生的日常生活有关。
2015年高考短文改错练习题
2015年高考英语短文改错专练Nowadays more and more people, specially schoolboys and schoolgirls, are giving to video1.especially2.givengames. Many of them spend all their spare time ∧the games, and some even stay at the game3.on/playingmachines all days long. The reason is why they can enrich their lives as well as knowledge4.day5. thatby playing video games. But it’s a good way of relaxing after a day’s work and study, as6. Andvideo games can bring a fun to people’s life. However, on the other hand, play video games7. 删除a 8. playingtoo much can waste time and money, and has a bad effect on people’s eyesigh t and healthy.9. healthSo, video games, like coins, have two sides. The key point is that we should makeproperly use of the games.10. proper【参考答案】3.plaining→complaining about2. serious→seriously3. people→people’s4.is→are5.are→be6.By →In7.effect →affect8.makes→make9. under the control → under control10. special routes cannot be→special routes that/which cannot be【参考答案】4.The → a fully → full had → have删除 to effective → effectively opinion → opinionswhich → that are →is ∧beinterested→ interesteing【参考答案】5.1.gladly--glad2.had--have3.under--with4.progresses--progress5.we后加are6.hard--harder7.good--well8.see--seeing9.去掉the 10.your--yours【参考答案】6.As is know to us all, paper burns easy. Yesterday, Mike, a six-year-old boy, made a paper Known easilybox and then filled it for water. He then lit a candle and tries to burn the paper box. Much towith triedhis surprises, the paper box didn’t catch fire. Such curious was the child about the experiment surprise Sothat he asked his father endless questions about it. His father, which is a teacher in a primary whoschool, didn’t know how to ask these questions, but he didn’t pretend to understand. He did answereverything he could∧help his son solve the problem. This experience made Mike interesting to interestedin the study of modern science.【参考答案】7.Good morning!Today, my topic is the valuable of time. Time, like the proverb says, is money. This means thatValue asif our time is good spent, it will turn out a lot of useful and important piece of work when thewell piecesproper opportunity come. Although all time is precious, but the time of our youth is more precious comesthan any∧period of our existence because this is the period which we can acquire knowledge and the whendev elop our abilities. If we allow these morning hours to slip away, we shall never∧able to makebeup the loss.Let those who think nothing of waste time remember this. Thank you for your listening!wa sting【参考答案】8As a student of yo ur age, I understand your situation. The problem you are facing was commonisbetween the teenagers. However, it should be wise not to do something that may hurt your among anythingmom’s feelings. Here are some suggestions. First,it’s advisable to talk less with her.moreHeart-to-heart talks help you understand each other better. Besides, why not find more chancechancesto let her know your ideas and attitudes toward many things. In these way, she may realize youthishad grown up. Second, you should learn to do your own things well, proved to your momhave provingthat you are already∧“Grown-up”. It’s even better if you could share more of the housework..aI believe why your mom will eventually understand you and you can get along well with her.【参考答案】9Dear Tom，How are you getting along? I don't think this is a good idea to travel a lot and visit itas many place as possible．Last July Bell paid a visit on Europe．Europe was very places to isbeautiful, but his holiday wasn't very nicely．He visited several countries, and was in each niceof the countries for only three days．He visited a good many places of interest, andwas always in∧hurry．Though he returned from Europe, he was very tired．So I suggest that a When/Asyou spent your holiday in a different way．We had better travel with a friend to spend Youone country and to visit only one city at a time．You'll be able to have a good time.John【参考答案】10This morning on my way∧school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank. An old man 加to deeplywas counting his money in the front of the bank while suddenly a young man came running去掉 whenand knocked her down. To make things worse, his money was lying in all direction. In nohim all改every或 directionstime the people around rush to pick the money up while the old man stood here, not knowrushed there knowingwhat to do. Surprisingly, everyone gave back the money they had just picked up. The oldman counted the money again and found that not a single bill was missed. To my great joy,missingthere are now a lot of nice people in our life. It’s true that honesty is more important than money!【参考答案】11College students have a little ways to pay their college fees. Many students have their fewparents to pay the fees. Some students may apply to a bank loan and others will try to find forpart-time jobs in and out of the campus. Apart from this, many good student can win astudentsscholarship. By this way they can pay at least part of the fees. As to me, I will let my parents payInhalf of their fees because they are ∧ rich enough. Beside my study, I will take up a part-time my not Besidesjob by teach some high school students math, physics, chemistry and English, as I’m very good teachingat these important subjects. Of course I will also work very hard at my lessons in order to I canthateasily win a scholarship.【参考答案】12Exams have both advantages and disadvantages .As for students , they can find outshortcomings in their study and became aware of their present level in a whole class .become theThe results of tests also help student work hard for better grades in the College EntrancestudentsExams .And too frequent exams may result in problems . Students may have severeButcompetition over scores and no longer be as friend as before . As for teachers ,whilefriendlythey can see clearly how their students master the knowledge .They suffer a lot either .tooIt is∧easy work to design a good test paper ,to grade and to analyzing the students’ answers .no analyzeTests are exams for teachers and students .Only by g iving and taking them properly canit be good for students .they【参考答案】13We'll never forget the day which my classmates and I paid a visit to the factory last week.when aIt was a larger with nearly 2,000 workers. It looked ∧a garden and we could see colorfullarge likeflowers, grass and trees anywhere. We also visited some workshops and saw worker workingeverywhere workersvery hard. We talked with them and learned a lot of. We understood them further. On theway home we felt tiring. We all thought that we had a very good day. We real hoped thattired reallywe could get more chances of leave the school and learn social experience.leaving【参考答案】14I used to going (go) to the countryside to draw animals and plants. One day I was walking across a field looking (for) rabbits to draw. Lost in thought, I didn’t notice the (a) bull running towards me. About 100 meters ahead was a tree under that (which) I would sit and draw. Sudden,(Suddenly) I heard a loud noise coming from behind me. I turned around and saw a bull. Knowing a bull could run much mo\re (去掉) faster than a man, I quickly reached the tree and climb（climbed）up. From there I saw the bull kicking me (my) food bag with its feet. It kept do (doing) this for 15 minute (minutes) and then moved away. But I was quite nervous in the tree. 【参考答案】151.considered-→consider2. 去掉an 3 experiences→ experience4. what→ how5.they→ we6. Therefore→ However7. passed→ passing 8. have→ has 9. for→ to10.worth前加 are【参考答案】16Are you looking for something interested? Would you like to give a hand to otherinterestingpeople in your spare time? Then joining us and be a volunteer! We have job forjoin jobspeople of all ages. Anyone from students to old people can become ours members.ourYou can help people in many ways. Some schools need volunteers to help take the去掉thecare of chi ldren. Volunteers are needed in hospitals help∧the patients. Animal loverstocan help save dogs and cats without homes. There is nothing for everyone. “I oftensomethingplayed computer games when I was freely before. Now I help old people learn to usefreecomputers,” said a volunteer aged 18. Unless everyone helps out a bit, we’ll all have∧ If abetter and warmer world to live in.【参考答案】17.1 luckily --- lucky2 country ---- countries3 ma ny of ----- many4 or ---- and5 where ----- which6 much ----- many7 pity ---- a pity 8 they ---- we 9 excited ----- exciting10 make ----made【参考答案】18第一行 surprising—surprised; have∧pla nned第二行 Therefore---However; came---coming第三行made ∧ up; that—it第四行 in—up; to –with第五行are ∧ fond第六行 hear--hearing【参考答案】19Dear Helen,Thank you so much for your party at Christmas Eve. All of them enjoyed it very much. We likedon usthe dishes you had cooked but we were happy to learn the English songs you taught us. We hope andyou’ll teach us a lot many songs in the future. We’re leaving from our hometowns to spend themore forwinter v acations. It seems that much of us are homesick after being away from home for such avacation manylongtime. What are your plans? Will you join in the tourist group organized by our school? Weare busy prepare for our trips. Please excuse us for not∧able to say goodbye to you. We hope preparing beingyou’ll have a good time.Yours, Xiao Hua 【参考答案】20I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. She holds a view that With theevery minute should be made fully use of ∧work hard at our lessons. It seems to me that once full to herI am allowed to do that, I’ll ∧unable to control myself and forget all about my study. She alsobethinks it is bad for my eyes. But I really can’t accept her ideas. In my opinion, watch TV can set mywatchingmind at rest after a day’s hard work.However, it is important for us to know what had happened Besides hasat home and at abroad．Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.【参考答案】21Ask your friend that he can use a glass of water as a musical instrument．Of course, he if / whethercan’t．Then you take a glass of water．You put your finger in∧water and then move it slow roundthe slowlythe rim of the glass, as shown in the picture．Your finger must not be much we t, but it must notvery / toobe dry．So you must try many time．At last you will hear clear music which comes from thetimesglass．When your finger moves round the rim, it makes the glass t o vibrate and the glass makes amusical voice．The same principle makes the violin or its strings give m usic．sound andThe America scientist Benjamin Franklin made a musical instrument out of glass bowls．He Americanused the different principle．same【参考答案】22I’m very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks before. I have been thinking agoabout the question you ask me. In my opinion, you should come back after finished yourasked finishingstudies abroad. For one reason, that you are studying is badly needed nowadays in ourwhatcountry. It will be quite easily for you to find a good job. In fact, I know a few big company ineasy companiesour city hope to hire people like you. For other reason I think it will be too more convenient anotherfor you to look after your parents as they are getting old. And this is only my point of view. It isButup to you to make∧ right choice.a【参考答案】23●friend=>friend’s●in=>to●listen=>listened●Li Meng’s parents invited I to spend=> Li Meng’s parents invited me to sp end ●week=>weeks●beautifully=>beautiful●but=>and●Li Meng came see me=>Li Meng came to see me●her father has changed=> her father changed●we haven’t see each other much=> we haven’t seen each other much【参考答案】24【参考答案】251.disappointing—disappointed 2． find—found3.However—Besides或Also 4． for—of5.hardly—hard 6． teachers 前加my或the7.student—students 8． what—which9.去掉but后的that 10． determine—determines。
2015届高考英语二轮复习 优化训练短文改错2(含解析)
2015届高考英语二轮复习优化训练：短文改错A短文改错(2014·荣成模拟)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I traveled on the 8:00 a. m. train from Glasgow to London King’s Gross on last Thursday. I was quite angry with the service of your company. The train didn’t come on time. It was forty minute late when it left Glasgow. A man at the stationminutesapologized to us, but he didn’t give us some reasons for the delay. We then had anyfurther delays on the way. As∧result, I missed my plane, which made meadisappointing. The service on the train was very poor. The trip spent more than disappointed tookfive hours or only soft drinks were sold. Besides, something is wrong with the air but wasconditioner and it became extreme hot. Because of your good service, I feelextremely poor/badyou should make up for my loss.B短文改错(2014·沈阳模拟)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
2015贵阳市高考英语语法填空、短文改错、阅读类训练(2)及答案
2015贵阳市高考英语语法填空、短文改错、阅读类训练（2）及答案短文填词阅读下面材料，在空白处填入适当的内容（不多于3个单词）或括号内单词的正确形式。
David and Jack are talking about cyber-relationships in their dorm.David: Jack, you spend a lot of time on the Internet everyday. What do you most frequently use it for?Jack: I usually surf 61 net, read news and anything I am interested in, check emails or chat with other people. Sometimes I order online too. Maybe I can find a girlfriend online like a fairy tale.David: Well, I see. That’s 62 you are so stuck to it.Jack: I know dozens of websites provide dating service. Curiosity and the need for companionship make them a sure-fire business. I recommend that you 63 (try) .David: To be 64 , I really can’t understand how 65 people depend on that way to make friends. It’s kind of risky.Jack: Yes, but i t’s also one of the easiest and fastest ways to meet new people.David: Sounds good. But it is full of traps on the Internet, and some people have really 66 (please) experience about online dating.Jack: It’s true, but some people did find their better-half through online dating.David: 67 , I won’t try that way to make my girlfriend.Jack: Don’t b e so sure. If you 68 (happen) meet a girl online who is intelligent, kind, honest, and you geta good feeling of her, won’t you have the desire to get to know her 69 person?David: I wo n’t ha ve such a chance in the first place, for I never enter the chatroom.Jack: Maybe 70 man’s meat is another’s poison.David: That’s right.【参考答案】61. the 62. why 63. (should) try 64. frank/ honest 65. come66. unpleasant 67. Anyway 68. happen to 69. in 70. one【2013界广东省深圳市高三上期末考试】完形填空（共15小题，每小题2分，满分30分）阅读下面短文，掌握其大意，然后从1—15各题所给出的A、B、C和D项中，选出最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。
2015高考短文改错试题及答案解析
2015普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语短文改错试题及答案解析When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I amthoughtliving in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains arethe andgreen. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted.withLots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriouslyserious problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We air Manymust found some ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, we ’ll live to regret it.find our1.think 该文thought，过去认为居住城市好，现在不这么认为了2.in the countryside在乡下3.or 改为and，在那里空气清新并且（不是或者）群山翠绿4.on改为with, with the development of……随着…的发展（固定搭配）5.been去掉,大量研究已经显示了（并非被显示）6.seriously改为serious，形容词修饰名词problem严重的问题7.airs改为air，空气是不可数名词8.Much改为Many，Many修饰可数名词animal9.found 改为find,must情态动词后边跟动词原形find找到10.your改为our,代词与前边的人称We保持一致。
2015年高考英语全国卷1短文改错说题稿(上传版)
2015年高考英语全国卷I短文改错说题稿一、选题说明1.出处：说题的对象是2015年高考英语全国卷I短文改错。
这篇短文改错需要重点关注的内容是I think I would, in countryside, clean or, on the development, have been shown, a very seriously problem, The air we breathe in, much rare animals, we must found, protect your environment。
2.背景：环保是长期以来社会各方面关注的问题，这点也从国家政策层面可以得到证明，比如2015年1月1日起正式实施的，号称“史上最严”的新修订《环境保护法》。
同时，重金属造成的土壤污染、鞍山环境污染等事件在2015年上半年引发了关注。
应该说，2015年全国卷I的短文改错应时而动，体现了高考命题的时代性和时事性。
二、命题立意1.考查目标动词的用法，题目中有三处，暨think,been及find；形容词和副词的用法，题目中有两处，暨seriously及Much；名词的用法，题目中有一处，暨airs；介词的用法，题目中有一处，暨on；连词的用法，题目中有一处，暨or；代词的用法，题目中有一处，暨your；冠词的用法，题目中有一处，暨in countryside。
2.命题手法此篇短文改错旨在考查考生发现、判断、纠正语篇错误的能力，强调考生要有语篇意识，充分检测考生对语篇的观察能力，评价能力及应用能力。
错误的设置是针对考生平时书面表达常见错误设计，因此短文改错的难度符合考生水平。
3.教学导向引导学生关注实事；根据考查的目标可得出，作为高三英语教师在教学中要注重动词、形容词等相关知识点的讲解。
4.解题思路三个步骤：通读全文，把握大意；细读全文，仔细斟酌；再读全文，复核审查。
三、答题分析1.答案推理第2句根据I would be 中would，结合时态，把think改为thought；第3句根据“我想念的是乡村的老家”这个特指，在countryside前加the；第4句根据前后意思，特别是逻辑关系，把or改为and；第5句根据“随着....的发展”这一固定的表达，on the development中的on改为with；第6句根据名词短语“lots of studies”与动词shown的关系，把been删除；第6句根据problem的名词词性，结合原则上形容词修饰名词，把seriously改为serious；第7句根据airs意思为气氛，而air表空气，结合语意，把airs改为air；第8句根据animals为可数名词，结合many修饰可数名词的复数，把much改为many；第9句根据情态动词+动词原形整个作为谓语，把found改为find；第9句根据语意，尤其主语是we的提示，把your改为our。
2015届高考英语二轮专题精品复习资料系列专题五 短文改错
专题五短文改错高考英语短文改错涉及词汇、语法、句型结构等方面的知识和逻辑推断和综合辨析，是一种在较高层次上考查考生对英语知识的掌握和语言综合运用能力的测试题型。
短文改错以记叙文为主，题材和语言符合中学生实际；句子结构由以简单句为主逐渐过渡到以复合句和并列句为主。
学生在平时写作中常出现的错误是短文改错考查的重点。
五年高考课标卷短文改错考点分布统计表一、短文改错解题步骤1．从语篇入手，理解文章大意短文改错不是单句改错，每一句的语意表达、结构选择是受上下文制约的。
如谓语动词时态的选择，代词的指代功能等都要依照上下文的线索进行判断。
因此，考生应立足于上下文，正确理解作者意图，把握短文的题材，从整体上把握全文。
2．在理解大意的基础上，审查句子结构通读全文，了解文章大意、写作方式之后，应把主要注意力放在句子层次上，判断句子的表达是否符合行文逻辑，是否符合语法规范。
从历年高考题来看，短文改错绝大多数题目还是句子层次的问题，侧重语言的准确性，所以，对句子结构正确与否的审查是关键的一步。
3．从语法结构入手，进行语法改错在正误判断的基础上，根据语法规则改正句子中的错误之处。
改错时应注意改错设计规律，如：有一项正确，九项错误；每一行只有一个错误；改动之处只能有一个词，或删掉或增词，或修改。
4．通读全文错误改完之后要通读全文，以检查改错过程中是否有因上下文制约疏忽导致的误改。
二、短文改错解题技巧1．正确理解做题要求，搞清楚改什么(改动一个单词，不是两个，也不是改标点符号)，怎么改(删除、补漏、纠错)。
答卷一定要规范，各种符号不能缺少，形式和位置要正确。
2．短文改错以句为单位设置错误。
3．并非每句都有错，但若做题结果为多句无错，则说明可能有未被发现的错误，需进一步查找。
4．拼写错误考点已被取消，不要把注意力用在寻找拼错的单词上，但应注意名词的单复数形式是否有问题。
5．短文改错有别于单句改错，要重视文章的整体内容和前后照应。
山西省平遥县2015高考英语短文改错(2)及参考答案
山西省平遥县2015高考英语短文改错（2）及参考答案短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I went to the Summer Palace last week．At the gate I happened to meet some American tourists．I greeted to them in English and then we began to chat．I got know that they were college students traveling in China．Most of them were fond with Chinese medicine．They are busy taking pictures and were much impressed with the changes that had been taken place in the past few years．After that, we went boating on a lake and having a good time ．We exchanged our email address so that we could write to each other in future．They thanked us again and again．I was very glad to have chance to practicing my oral English．【参考答案】42.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
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2015高考每周专训：短文改错+书面表达2
下面短文中有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加，删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（╲）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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One day a boy went to a garden followed his parents. They planted flowers and watered them as soon as possibly. A few days after, they came there again. To their joy, the flowers they planted were growing so good. The father picked a flower and gave it to his wife to show her love, which was saw by his son. The following day the boy picked all the flowers to send it to his parents. Only at this moment the father realize what a bad effect he had on his son. So I think parents can be bad and good examples for their children, and they should set up good examples.
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A visitor visits an island where two tribes live. One tribe always tells the truth and an other always lies. The truth tellers live on the western side of the island, and those which lie live on the eastern side. The visitor wants determine whether the native beside he is a truth teller or not by ask only one question. He asks the native, “Go or ask the native in the distance which side of the island he lives to.” When the messenger return ed, he says, "He said he lives on the western side of the island."
Is the messenger a truth teller or not one? How can the visitor be surely?
第二节书面表达（满分30分）
民工子女的教育问题现在受到全社会的关注。
最近你与你的同学共同对你所在城市的民工学校进行了一次调查。
请你用英语给北京伯乐马教育研究所写信，反映这次调查的情况并呼吁全社会关注民工学校，帮助民工子弟。
信的主要内容包括如下要点：
1. 民工学校的现状：设施简陋，师资匮乏，但民工子弟热爱学习
2. 调查引发的感受
3. 改善民工学校现状的建议（至少两点）
注意：词数：120词左右；信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：民工学校－migrant school
Dear editor,
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Yours Sincerely,
Li hua
短文改错
1. followed→following
2. possibly→possible 3 . after→later 4. good→well 5. her→his 6. saw→seen 7. it→them 8. moment后加did 9. and→or 10. set
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书面表达范文
One possible version:
Dear editor,
We have done some research about migrant schools in our city lately and we are surprised to see the environment of the schools is so poor. The schools have no modern equipment, no playground, no library, and even don’t have enough teachers. All those problems are due to one key point---the lack of money.
And yet, the good thing we saw is that migrant kids are eager to learn. Can
we do something to help them? Yes. Our government can invest more money in migrant schools. Our community resources can be made use of and city students can help collect
money or donate books to them. There are a lot more things we can do.
I do hope that the whole society can care more about the migrant kids. If everybody contributes a bit, migrant kids can surely enjoy equal education opportunities.
Yours Sincerely,
Li hua。