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2023年美国留学申请(通用15篇)

2023年美国留学申请(通用15篇)

2023年美国留学申请(通用15篇)美国留学申请1申请美国名校应该具备哪些条件呢?哈佛、耶鲁这些美国名校是很多学生向往的地方,这些世界顶级名校更喜欢什么样的学生? 成绩:来自哈佛大学的班哲民表示,学生高中时的学习成绩、排名和标准化考试(SAT/ACT)成绩是最重要的两个标准。

但国外名校录取时,好分数是必要前提,但并非唯一条件。

面试:耶鲁大学负责面试工作的刘菲说,一般面试的时候,能让学校记住的学生,会得到较高的印象分。

我们喜欢回答有创造力、有个性的学生,个性是不能复制的。

比如申请人有哪些优势和特长,还有‘能给学校带来什么’。

除了标准化考试成绩外,高中成绩,课外活动成果,如歌剧、社区服务等都是学校评价学生的依据。

在面试的时候,美国名校更倾向于能让人出乎意料的学生,喜欢那些非常有趣、充满活力的学生。

申请材料:一般中国的学生申请的时候除了会申请很多学校之外,还喜欢将自己的资料写得很详细,尤其做一些额外的资料,比如做一些漂亮的册子,将自己的照片放进去,这样反而有点做作。

推荐信:美国名校会根据学生的成绩和选择专业的情况,确定申请人是否适合在该校就读。

还会对学生进行综合判断,所以推荐信要找了解、熟悉学生本人的人来写。

美国的学校都会考虑学生是否适合这所学校,也就是学生想学的东西学校能否提供给他。

在推荐信上,推荐人也可以强调一下学生的特长。

诚信:诚信也非常重要,写推荐信的时候要真实,不能弄虚作假。

作假行为可以从学生的申请__和推荐信中看出。

一些学生希望申请某学校,但从材料中显示他对这个学校并不了解;有的学生在__中表示自己有某种爱好,但从__中却看不出支持这个爱好的出发点和行动,虚假的信息会对学生最终申请的结果产生不良后果。

总之,申请美国名校需要有较高的成绩,这是前提,但不是最重要的,美国名校喜欢综合素质全面发展的学生。

美国留学申请2首先美国大学对留学生都有较高的语言要求,不单指语言应试技巧,还包括真正熟练使用语言进行听、说、读、写的能力。

美国大学理工专业申请文书怎么写[合集五篇]

美国大学理工专业申请文书怎么写[合集五篇]

美国大学理工专业申请文书怎么写[合集五篇]第一篇:美国大学理工专业申请文书怎么写美国大学理工专业申请文书怎么写?对于选择美国理工科专业的同学来说,准备申请美国大学文书的时候要注意ps部分的写作。

但是很多申请者对美国大学文书ps不是很了解。

下面托普仕留学专家就针对美国留学文书写作ps写作部分做全面介绍。

美国大学理工专业申请文书怎么写:申请人的简单背景这部分一般字符不需要太多,越简短越好,因为作为研究生申请,理工类的学生需要重点突出的是自己的研究方面或学术方面的能力。

这样的背景介绍,最好是用简短的话把自己的背景表现出来,例如:“My four years of studies in xxxx University havecultivated within me a systematic mind full of software engineering knowledgeand skills,and my abilities have been shown through a consistentlyoutstanding academic record.” 就这么几句话就把自己的背景包括什么学校,什么专业等都揽括进去,并让读者在读后就明白你在这四年里的成绩。

并没有干瘪瘪的汇报自己在什么学校啊,什么专业,自己的GPA 又是如何。

美国大学理工专业申请文书:申请人的本科专业背景、学术兴趣包括申请人感兴趣的研究方向以及自己本科期间参与的研究经历。

在跟很多学生沟通其本科研究经历的时候,很多学生都会说其实自己没有什么研究经历,即便有也只是跟着老师,在老师的研究室里,做那些博士生的助手,就是打杂。

其实不然,即便只做了这些看起很普通的事情,这些也可以有深度的挖掘。

实际上,很多美国本土的学生,在本科期间也不见得做了很多超过本科水平的事情,他们其实的很普通,所以关键也还看怎么去挖掘,怎么把自己的研究经历和申请的方向联系起来。

美国大学文书题目整理及写作指导申请季巨献Word版

美国大学文书题目整理及写作指导申请季巨献Word版

Why Essay在大学申请文书中一个常见的supplement就是所谓的why essay,大致上问学生“你为什么想来我们这所学校?”“我们这里哪里吸引你?”等等。

在这种问题面前就很容易区分学生是否真的对这所学校有passion 或fit。

要回答好这类问题申请者必须表现出对学校的了解,学校文化/氛围的认可,和对自己未来展望的认知。

你要让学校觉得,冥冥之中居然遇到了你,真是缘分呐 !第一步:了解学校通过各种渠道去了解这个学校的特色,找出这个学校吸引你目光的地方,不论大小。

1) 大学官网2) US News3) Princeton review4) 校友5) 学校的巡展活动6) Collegeconfidential第二步: 了解自己一般情况下当申请者写到whyessay 的时候应该已经到了申请中期,也就是说已经通过头脑风暴或自我反思已经在一定程度上了解了自己。

如果没有的话,花几分钟时间过一下自己的过往活动,起码得知自己性格和学术上的长处和短处在哪里。

第三步: 将学校吸引眼球的点缩减成特质并联系自己当申请者挖掘出那么一,两个吸引点后,要学会透过表面看事情本质。

因为学校的特色和申请者不可能有直接关系,但是这个特色代表的意义可能和申请者自己的追求不谋而合,就会形成一个fit。

e.g.威斯康辛麦迪逊分校(University of Wisconsin–Madison)的工程学院标出他们已经连续6年每年都出产超过100个专利。

申请者当然不能说这100个专利和自己有什么关系,大部分的申请者不可能有自己的专利,而且就算有也和威斯康辛的100个专利无关。

但是透过威斯康辛骄傲地标出自己100个专利出产可以总结出什么这个学校特别专注实验和实践。

相信那实验和实践这两个特色是很容易和学生自己产生共鸣的吧。

同时,当申请者已经把本质挖掘到这个地步,一般情况下写出来的答案也不会特别空泛。

所以,在很久前就知道自己的兴趣所在,有目的地开展课外活动,写Essay的时候就倍感轻松呢 !第四步;融合和证明证明不能只靠说的。

留学申请DIY攻略:文书通关指南——关于 CV RL 和PS

留学申请DIY攻略:文书通关指南——关于 CV RL 和PS

留学申请DIY攻略:文书通关指南——关于 CV RL 和PS大家都知道,申请留学有一个复杂的申请流程,需要提交各种各样的申请材料。

那么文书在其中扮演着怎样的角色呢? 申请一些TOP的项目,有人会觉得GPA比较重要;有的学生会觉得本科学校比较重要;有的学生会觉得科研经历、工作经历或者企业活动经历等等这些会比较重要。

但是,对于这些top的项目来说,竞争是非常非常激烈的,有些项目录取几率不到10%,那么申请这种类型的项目的申请者往往都有一个漂亮的GPA,本科学校都还不错,科研经历、实习经历各个方面大家都差不多。

这个时候怎么样去跟别人竞争,怎么样在竞争中脱颖而出呢?文书在这时就会扮演一个比较重要的角色。

这也是今天我们开这堂课的原因,我们今天主要讲的内容可以分为四个部分:文书入门,CV,RL,PS的分别介绍。

一、文书入门知识先来看一下文书入门这部分。

在正式讲之前,我从一个问题来引入,这个问题就是如何去看待留学申请。

大家可能会有这样一个认知,如果从申请者的视角:我需要完成整个的申请流程,提供各种各样的申请材料,这是大家比较常规的认知。

但是,你可以换另外一个角度,可能会有不同的观点,试着站在学校的视角看一下这个问题,你会发现,整个申请流程、申请材料,其实是美国大学设计的一套严密的逻辑体系,这个严密的筛选体系最终的目的是为了帮助美国大学和美国教授筛选出他们认为未来能够成功的人才。

所以希望大家在准备申请、开始申请、文书写作等整个阶段,多站在这个角度上去思考一下问题,答案就自然而然的出来了。

(一)文书的作用首先,文书作为申请材料之一,它是为美国学校筛选人才而服务的。

其次,文书整体的作用是为了塑造一个鲜活的人物形象。

涉及到两个问题怎么塑造(文书写作的问题),要塑造一个怎么样的人物形象?第二个问题可能是所有申请者、所有写文书的人都需要时时刻刻去思考的问题,就是你自己是一个什么样的人,你想要告诉对方你是一个什么样的人。

这个人物形象对于你的文书写作相当于一个中心思想。

美国大学申请个人简历

美国大学申请个人简历

美国大学申请个人简历美国大学申请个人简历1一、留学个人简历内容个人简历的开头是标题上面注明学生的姓名,地址,电话和邮箱地址,需要注意的是,个人介绍不是求职简历,不需要放自己的照片,否则会让招生官感觉很怪。

接下来要介绍一下教育经历最近的教育经历要放在最开始,每段教育经历都要包含时间,学校名称,成绩和班级排名等信息。

接下来介绍课外活动情况这个部分是招生官最关注的地方,你可以列举多项课外活动,每个活动简单介绍这个活动项目是做什么的,起止时间,你在活动中担任什么位置,以及在活动中取得的成绩和感悟。

然后工作经验,兼职或者实习、工作经验均可。

每一项工作都要写清楚时间,地点,职位,工作职责等。

第四部分是奖项介绍将所获得的荣誉和奖项做一一介绍,简单介绍奖项内容,注明获奖时间和颁奖单位。

最后一部分介绍论文发表和研究成果,论文的题目,期刊名称、期号、发表时间等信息都要介绍清楚。

如果学生还有其他项目需要说明,可以在个人简历最后进行说明。

这样,一份信息齐全的个人简历就完成了。

个人简历写作的关键点在于“简”,不需要长篇大论,每个招生官浏览学生简历的时间不超过一分钟,太长了招生官反而找不到重点,个人简历把信息说明清楚即可,长度最好控制在一页纸之内,字体适中,简历要看起来简单大方,简洁明了,不需要太多装饰的东西。

二、留学需要准备的1、填写申请表格申请表格要填写清楚,信息要正确无误。

如果没有特殊要求,用打字机或WORD填写申请表。

填写的信息要保持一致,所有文件中名字的拼写相同,方便学校审核材料。

对于社会保障号码,按照说明可以不填或者填“none”。

对于申请者学校、雇主、考试和奖励的名字和地址要填写完整,不能用缩写。

关于教育或工作经历应按照顺序(按时间顺序或者倒序)填写。

2、交纳申请费许多大学都会要求申请者交纳一定申请费用。

必须用美元交费,可以用国际信用卡根据网上的提示付款或者到银行办理汇票邮寄至学校提供的相关地址。

3、学历证明每所大学都会指定申请所需提供的教育经历的相关文件和证明。

美国留学博士申请文书怎么写之范文分享

美国留学博士申请文书怎么写之范文分享

美国留学博士申请文书怎么写之范文分享I am planning to pursue graduate studies towards a Ph.D. degree at your school of engineering starting from the fall of 2008.My interest in the building structure can be traced back to my success in high school years, when I excelled my fellow classmates in physics and geometry. This not only fired off my interest in structural design but also helped to lay solid groundwork for my undergraduate studies in civil engineering, which heavily involved mechanics in physics and solid geometry.With excellent scores in the compulsory national university entrance examination, I won acceptance in 1991 into the Beijing Polytech University, one of China’s top 10 engineering schools, particularly well-known for its structural engineering. For five years at this university, I received strict and thorough training in areas such as building structures, building materials. Soil mechanics and foundation, concrete and masonry structures, construction, steel structure and earthquake resistant structure. I also took every opportunity to participate in co-po work and projects commissioned by construction and design companies.Opportunities abound for civil engineers and civil engineering students in China, which now houses the world’s fastest growing major economy. At every year’s job fair held on the campus of the Polytech University, more than 200 positions compete for 60-odd graduating students. Under such circumstances, undergraduate students in their fifth year are also in high demand for internship at various construction companies and design institutes. Virtually every student gets a full workload immediately upon starting the internship and assumes considerable responsibilities soon afterwards.I became the luckiest among the lucky by winning a rare opportunity for any civil engineer: to participate in the design of the Beijing Western Railway Station, the largest urban structure in China up to date. This happened while I interned, along with five other schoolmates, at the Beijing Architectural Institute. This institute has designed virtually all the modern landmark buildings in China, including the famous Great Hall of the People and the Museum of Revolutionary History on the Tiananmen Square, the Beijing Railway Station and the Asian Games Village. It was on the strength of my academic merits that I got to enjoy these opportunities.The Western station project in Beijing consisted of the mail hall (70,000 square meters), south wing building group (40,000 square meters) and north wing building group (35,000 square meters). My task was to assist in the design of a shopping centre in the south wing which had 16,000 square meters. I independently accomplished a quarter of the design for the whole building, mainly responsible for the foundation design, calculation and drawing of steel distribution of beam, floor, columns and concrete piles. I cherished this opportunity to apply the knowledge I had learned in the classroom to the real world problems and I worked with my utmost dedication.I, however, soon found out that, even in this monumental project, design techniques applied in many cases left much to be desired. When treating the wind load, the earthquake force and the effect of frozen soil, historical data and intelligent estimates were used in place of accurate measuring. This phenomenon made me determined to improve my knowledge and skills in a graduate program that can teach sophisticated know-how, such as yours.It regrettably turned out that the design of the mail hall was seriously flawed, which drew intense media attention nationwide. The structure sank two meters aftercompletion. As experts continue to help the court determine who is responsible, I myself have been awed by this drama and kept researching it ever since it became known.My tentative explanation, submitted to take into account the underground water’s power of buoyancy, even though the structure base was put below the waterbed. The structure floated until enough load was mounted. The proper construction method therefore should have involved artificial precipitation until the completion of structure.Upon graduation in 1996, I joined the Beijing Biggest Co., one of the four largest construction companies in China, and immediately took on management duties as an assistant manger at the construction site. I have supervised steel engineering, concrete engineering and platform engineering for there twenty-three story buildings in the Beijing DD residential area, a total of 60,000 square meters in apartments. In this capacity, I was compelled to learn management skills which had never been taught in the classroom. Although construction management is not what I foresee to be a lifetime pursuit, I executed my duty meticulously and creatively. I became the first construction site manager in the company to conduct experiments comparing box-weir maintenance and the traditional manual watering method. By using box-weir method, weak concrete and cracks in the concrete were eliminated. Through these important, albeit small, steps of improvement, I have derived immense satisfaction.My vigorous academic training and exposure to intricate design problems and complex construction management issues has stood me in good stead professionally compared to my peers. My plan to further my career through advanced studies stems from self-confidence in my academic calibre and also a strong desire to solve design and construction problems encountered at work. I have researched your program basedon the materials I have available to me and decided that advanced studies under your seasoned guidance will be a shortcut for me to reach my goal. I request that you give my application for admission and financial support favourable consideration.。

美国本科留学申请文书范文

美国本科留学申请文书范文

美国本科留学申请文书范文2017美国本科留学申请文书怎么写?美国本科留学申请文书范文。

留学文书主要以个人陈述、推荐信、个人简历及Essay短文材料构成。

留学文书书写的好坏对学生是否被录取有很大的影响,下面来为大家展示一篇美国本科留学申请文书范文示例,一起来看看吧。

I still remember when the monitor first lit up and the grey box roared to my life. She had me at hello, or in this case, with the first welcome screen, circa 1999. Initially no one knew how to operate her. Out of curiosity, I worked days in front of her foreign face, eventually coming closer to her intricate soul. Trying out new DOS commands and seeing results became my greatest happiness. The complex visual calculations and efficiency on the computer brought me immediate satisfaction. While some kids defined the high points of their adolescent lives as learning to ride a bike or hitting a home run, my moment of change was switching from Windows 98 to XP. It was during this childhood that I established a passion for Computer Science.Unfortunately, at the age of 13, I indulged in the online game, the Mysterious Land. The game played perfectly into my teenage whims: when I sought a sense of accomplishment, it rewarded me. Where I sought friends, it gave me an entire network of people relying on me. With just a little bit of focus, I reached the highest level, the peak of gaming perfection! In the first two years of middle school, I burnt the midnight oil and slept less than three hours in the weekend for the first time; with great guilt, I played truant for the first time; I even starved in order to use my lunch money to buy rechargeable cards. It sounds crazy now, but that addiction scratched my soul and demanded more. Undoubtedly, my grades fell so much that I went from the top tobottom.After my astonishment when I first met with the crazily low scores, I be came apathetic. After a ‘lovely’ summer vacation fulfilled with dazzling equipments and illusory friendships in Mysterious Land, I got in Grade Eight. I still played the whole night, sleeping in one class after another. Deeply addicted, I sometimes couldn’t find the differences between the real and the virtual world. So many times I acted like a bossy team leader while doing sports at school, thus many people had an unfavorable impression of me. However, the obstacles I met in real life only furthered my addiction: the less love and friends I got, the more I became convinced that I should devote myself to the game.Nevertheless, the nightmares all came to an end when my class adviser looked deeply in my eye on getting my final results in the 8th grade. When I got home, I yelled out in the game but people deemed me insane instead of consoling me. A somber sadness embraced me, restricting my breath. I was caught and could not escape. That reality brought me back to life. Feeling fresh air around me instead of the vacuum of virtual happiness, I was freed.Since then I began my struggle to abstain from Mysterious Land. I limited my game time from six hours to one hour step by step; I regulated my schedule and slept from 10p.m to 6a.m every day; I asked my parents to keep my pocket money, and I cleared all my debts in the game. When I finally felt myself far enough away from Mysterious Land, I believed everything was set. I opened the Program Files, clicked on the familiar folder, and pressed the delete button. At last, I clicked on YES with my shaking hand. “Goodbye.” I said in my heart, deeply lost inmind. On finishing this, I sat on my bed and watched screen-saver changing irregularly all night long. As soon as the sun rose at 5:50a.m and shone me with its first beam, I saw a new world opening its door to me.Soon I rediscovered another aspect of my computer –programming. As I rode the tides of addiction, I also gained knowledge from the swelling sea of the internet, through which I met new programmer friends, exchanged ideas or even worked together for the common goal of understanding the cultural impact of technology. Devoting most my spare time to this aspect set off my passion, which burnt more fiercely than that of the game! Sharing my simple-functioned programs with friends, satisfaction enveloped me tighter than the Mysterious Land ever did. I kept learning the BASIC and other programming languages improving my logical thought process for academics and acting as a catalyst for the study of Mathematics and Science. With a new sense of determination, I managed to rediscover my past hobbies in engineering and rekindle my passion for art. With this acceleration, I returned to be one of the top students in my class.I shall never forget the power I got when I pressed the YES button on the uninstall menu. The strength I got that time, I believe, has never gone away.。

美国留学:MBA申请文书范文解析

美国留学:MBA申请文书范文解析

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芝加哥商学院是商学院中的“理论”派,在MBA申请中,essay 的写作具有很重要的作用,所以我们今天就来为大家分析一下芝加哥商学院的essay题目。

芝加哥大学布斯商学院今年的MBA申请短文总体格式与过去几年类似,要求申请人回答3篇短文,其中一篇则是一个4页的PPT,这已经成为该校5年来的传统。

当然,今年也有一些显著变化,比如Adcom放弃了第2篇短文的topic,即不再要求申请人论述其曾经勇敢面对的风险以及所学到的经验教训,取而代之以对个人领导力风格来源的思考。

Essay 1: What are your short- and long-term goals, and how will a Chicago Booth MBA help you reach them? (600 words)Essay 1 a) Re-applicants only: Upon reflection, how has your thinking regarding your future, Chicago Booth, and/or getting an MBA changed since the time of your last application? (300 words)布斯商学院本申请季再次调整了其开篇短文,要求MBA申请人在600字内描述其MBA毕业后的职业目标以及对布斯商学院MBA课程感兴趣的原因。

这是一篇比较标准的职业目标类短文,要求申请人论述他们从商学院毕业后的短期及长期计划,并阐述为何在布斯商学院的两年学习可以帮助他们实现这些目标。

600字的字数限制应当可以确保申请人详细的论述自己的计划,我们建议申请人需要把握用以论述职业目标的篇幅以及用于论述选择MBA课程原因的篇幅之间的平衡。

必备留学入学申请文书范文

必备留学入学申请文书范文

必备留学入学申请文书范文发达国家在教育方式、理念、教学设施上比较先进,为了接受优质教育,大家可以去国外留学。

留学申请文书如何写好呢?下面就是小编给大家带来的必备留学入学申请文书范文模板,希望能帮助到大家!必备留学入学申请文书范文模板Dear _,Putting on my first pair of black ballet shoes at the tender age of 6 brings a smile to my face. Little did I realise at that time the joy, passion and sheer delight it has given me.My interest in dance started at the age of 6 years old in my local ballet class. It fascinates me in the way we can move without speaking with just the emotion on ones face and the movement created to show such feeling. My passion lies in dance, as this is what I have always wanted to do. I have chosen to study dance at university as I would like to take this path to find my future career.Ballet is my most prominent form of dance as I feel that this is my strongest dance style. It is so expressive, graceful and leaves so much inspiration. I take two one hour classes outside of school to develop my skills as a ballerina; one of which is a private lesson. In these lessons I am working towards achieving my intermediate exam on the RAD examination board, which I will be taking in summer 2009. This shows the commitment I have to attend these classes. These lessons have improved my pointe work and posture tremendously. The classes give me so much fulfilment and at the end of each class feel as though I have achieved something, improving after every class.I also attend “______ _______Stage School”; this gives me the opportunity to broaden my ability to dance in other styles ofdance. Every week I take classes in Gymnastics, Ballet, Modern, Tap and Drama. Each class helps me to improve and challenges my ability. Modern helps me to improve my stamina, endurance and technical ability, while tap is helping me to improve my co-ordination. Whilst attending “______ ______” I have achieved my bronze medal in gymnastic dance and Grade 6 ballet. In January 2009 I am looking to accomplish my Intermediate ballet examination on the IDTA exam board. I am also working at Grade 5 standard in both Modern and tap classes. With “______ ______ Stage School” I have performed at my local theatre “The ______ Swan” in June 2007. This gave me the opportunity to perform in front of an audience in new styles of dance including line dancing and a Caribbean style. I will also be dancing here in June 2009.At school I voluntarily help in a GCSE dance class to help my teacher. Last year my teacher was pregnant, so I taught 20 students their set solo for their dance GCSE exam. This gave me great experience and confidence as I was able to work with the students to help them with a subject I have such a passion for. This year I am going to be organising a dance class for the new year Seven’s, and then choreograph a routine fo r them to perform in our gym and dance show at school.Recently at school I have become elected as Head of Year 10. In this capacity I will be constantly liaising with the form groups of Year 10 and discussing what changes they would like within the school community. Also as part of this important role I must organise events for their year group: with their help and support.I was chosen from many applicants who applied for this position due to me being a good role model, influential, organised and enthusia stic. In July this year I ran a workshop for Year 2’s indance. I spent the day teaching over 100 children the art of Maypole dancing. I also received a very prestigious ‘Head Teachers Commendation’ certificate. This is given to only one student each year in each subject. I received this for my contribution to dance. The school I attend at present specialises in Performing Arts and Technology. I have also volunteered to assist in a Year 6 Technology Day, Year 6 Induction Evenings and Year 10 Team Building Day.My A level choices were chosen around the subject of dance.I am studying Performing Arts, Dance and Philosophy and Ethics.I chose Performing Arts as this included dance, drama and music.I particularly enjoyed creating a performance in the style of Lloyd Newson. The way he used taboo subjects, risks and humour, allowed me to develop my understanding of dance, to create an original piece of contemporary dance. The reason I chose Philosophy and Ethics is not only because I find it interesting but also to improve my essay writing skills.Outside of school I work part time at _______ Pharmacy, where I have been for a year now. My duties include customer care, being able to work within a team, cash handling and giving medical advice to customers.Every week I also attend a church youth group for 11 to 18 year olds. Here I am able to get involved with the local community with projects such as ‘Lighthouse’. This is a Christian summer school for children aged 4 to 11. Here I work as a volunteer during the first week of the schools summer holidays. As this will be my last year here I will also be helping to raise money for a group of friends to go out to Kenya. To do this we will need to organise fundraising events to support their journey.University life, I believe, will be challenging, engaging and will give me opportunities to pursue my love of dance.Yours sincerely,/shenqing/申请美国留学需准备的签证材料一、上交材料顾名思义,上交材料是指在美国留学签证申请当天需要上交的材料。

美国留学申请文书模板范例

美国留学申请文书模板范例

美国留学申请文书模板范例美国留学申请文书模板In the capacity of the former chairman of the Department of Finance and the associate dean of Business School in YYY University (P. R. China), I am writing with pleasure to recommend Ms. Sophie XXX to your esteemed graduate school.Ms. XXX is a distinguished student in the department. I know her well through different occasions, besides teaching her a Financial Engineering course last year. I got to know her personally 2 years ago, when she was a candidate for exchange-student program of YYY University. Concerning her unspectacular academic results and her outstanding performance, she was awarded our universitys scholarship and a chance to study abroad in ZZZ University, which only one student from our department can receive every year. Her semester-long experience there turned out to be an impressive success. Ms. XXX showed great aptitude on all the courses she took and her GPA of that semester was 3.80. If you take the difficulty of the courses and strict grading into account, you will understand why her scores are among the top five. Undoubtedly, she got excellent scores on other core courses and ranked among the top 5% of her class when she got her bachelors degree.Having been Ms. XXXs director while she was completing her undergraduate thesis defense in 2008, I was greatly impressed with herskillful diagrams, and with the unified and coherent manner in which she articulated her thesis. She chose a daring topic – stock index futures arbitrage. In China, this is a very hot event. Although there are several models around the world, not one yet has been found suitable for China. She proposed a very feasible one in her thesis paper. Moreover, she also demonstrated a high level of proficiency in using statistic software in her research. Not only was the committee struck by the display of creativity at her thesis defense conference, her lucid presentation expressed clear and logic thought. Her expansive and open-minded academic perspectives really struck a chord, so it gives me a great deal of pleasure to give you my recommendation to this outstanding young lady of immense promise.After she graduated from YYY University, she still keeps in touch with me. I feel very delighted when she told me she would like to pursue her advanced studies in your honored program. I trust her academic excellence, spirit of devotion and pleasant personality warrant your serious consideration of her application. Should there be any way in which I can be of further assistance in your deliberations, please do not hesitate to contact me directly.美国留学申请文书指南一:个人陈述 (Personal Statement,以下简称"PS")PS是申请美国本科/研究生需要提交的一份关于自我的*。

美国留学文书(15篇)

美国留学文书(15篇)

美国留学文书(15篇)美国留学文书1在本科新生高端申请中,很多申请者会选择Common Application中Indicate a person who has had a significant influence on you, and describe that influence 这个Essay 来回答。

而最常见的对自己影响深刻的人就是父母。

比如写父母是如何的伟大,白手起家才挣得今天的家业,或者父母曾经带自己去哪些国家旅行,或者父母为了培养自己的某项特长做了很大牺牲等等。

不得不承认,在培养孩子方面,几乎每对父母都是花了很多的心思。

他们在介绍自己孩子成长往事时自豪的神情,曾经无数次打动过我。

而孩子们的回答也多次加强了我对父母无私辛苦付出的敬佩。

但是从留学专家的角度来看,这样的故事几乎会出现在每一个申请者的回答中,让人不免觉得乏味和雷同。

想来美国名校的AO们也一定会有同感吧?而且更不理想的是,这样的选材其实没有正确的回答问题,更没有给AO们想要了解的信息。

所以,在动笔之前,请再仔细看一下这个题目:Indicate a person who has had a significant influence on you, and describe that influence不难看出,题目其实是分两部分的,一是讲一下谁是对你影响最大的人,二是讲讲有什么影响。

如果你只是一直写这个对你影响的人都做了什么,那末这个回答是不完整的而且也不符合AO们想了解的内容。

因为申请美国学校的人是你,希望被录取的人是你,AO们想要了解的也是你。

所以任何关于这个题目的回答都应当突出这个人改变了你什么,之后你又做了什么。

W同学的素材相对新颖一些:讲的是长笛老师如何鼓励他克服重重困难坚持练好长笛,最终他成为了乐队首席长笛并获得了很多奖项的故事。

不难看出,W给自己设计的形象是传统的战胜自我,超越自我的路线。

这个故事貌似是很符合题目的要求,有写到影响我的人--老师,也有写到我后来的表现与成绩。

Letter参考范文 美国留学申请Cover

Letter参考范文 美国留学申请Cover

Letter参考范文美国留学申请CoverLetter参考范文美国留学申请Cover最后提醒学生注意的是,申请本科的文书和申请研究生的文书的要求和偏重是不一样的。

申请大学本科时的文书,需要你的文章中有更多的情感,以情感人;申请研究生的文书需要多体现你的研究成果和你的专业能力。

FU-PING WANG1-A,XXX-XXX Street,Taipei,100,TAIWAN(886)-2-XXXXXX Email:Dec.26,1998 Graduate Admission OfficeUniversity of New State1-A,University Ave.,Scholar HallNew City,NS 00000,U.S.A.Dear Sir:I am very glad to have the opportunity to introduce a marvelous young man full of potentiality --myself to your famous graduate program of Computer Science.I am well-prepared to receive further training in advanced theories and practices for professionals and scholars.I would like to apply for admission and assistantship to your graduate school.Enclosed please find the records of Fu-Ping Wang:1.Statement of Purpose.2.Vita and Resume.3.Recommendation Letters from 2 professors and 1 supervisor.4.Application Forms and Fee (A check of US$60).5.Official Transcript from National Formosa University.6.Copies of Official Transcript (76.54),TOEFL (580),and GRE (1760)scores.7.Copies of Certificates ofDiploma,Scholarship,and Extracurricular Activities.There are other items to be followed:1.Recommendation Letter from my guidance teacher.2.Writing Sample of a Paper.精心安排PS和其它文件的关系。

申请美国大学入学文书范本

申请美国大学入学文书范本

申请美国大学入学文书范本美国作为经济强国,是很多出国留学生的首选,可是想去申请到美国的学校不是一件简单的事情,那么如果您也有意向申请美国店铺。

下面是小编为大家整理的关于申请美国大学入学文书范本,如果喜欢可以分享给身边的朋友喔!申请美国大学入学文书范本I guess it was inevitable that I’d be on hockey skates at some point in my life, but I did not expect that I’d become one of a rare group of female ice hockey officials before I even reached high school. Being born into a family of hockey players and figure skaters, it seemed that my destiny had already been decided.Right from the beginning, my two older brothers and my father strapped me up and threw me onto the ice. I loved it and, in my mind, I was on my way to becoming a female Gretzky! But my mom had to think of something fast to drag her little girl away from this sport of ruffians. Enter my first hot pink figure skating dress! That was all it took to launch fifteen years of competitive figure skating. Even though figure skating soon became my passion, I always had an unsatisfied yearning for ice hockey. It took a great deal of convincing from my parents that competitive figure skating and ice hockey didn’t mix. My compromise became refereeing ice hockey; little did I know that I was beginning an activity that would influence my character and who I am today. When I began, I would only work with my dad and brothers. Everyone was friendly and accepting because I had just started. I soon realized though that to get better I needed to start refereeing with people I wasn’t related to, and that’s when my experience drastically changed. An apologetic smileand an “I’m sorry” wasn’t going toget me through games now. As I began officiating higher-level games and dealing with more arrogant coaches, I suddenly entered a new male-dominated world, a world I had never experienced before. My confidence was shot, and all I wanted to do was get through each game and be able to leave. Sometimes I was even too scared to skate along the teams’ benches because I would get upset by what the coaches would yell to me. “Do you have a hot date tonight, ref?” was a ty///picment that coaches would spit at me during the course of a game. In their eyes, I did not belong on that ice, and they were going to do whatever they could do to make sure no women wanted to officiate their games. I was determined not to let them chase me off the ice.I made the decision to stand up for myself. I never responded rudely to the coaches, but I did not let them walk all over me and destroy my confidence anymore. I started to act and feel more like the 4-year certified Atlantic District Official that I am. There were still a few situations that scared me. One time I called a penalty in a championship game during the third overtime and the team I penalized ended up losing because they got scored on. I knew I had made the right call, even though I was unnerved when I saw the losing teams’ parents waiting for me at my locker room; for the moment I wished I hadn’t called that penalty. Although it was scary at the time, I stood my ground and overcame my fears. That was an importantstepping-stone in my officiating career and in my life.After four years of refereeing, I still can’t say it’s easy. Every game hands me something new and I never know what to expect. Now I have the confidence and preparation to deal withthe unexpected, on and off the ice. I now also know to take everything with a grain of salt and not let it get to me. I have learned that life is just like being out on the ice; if I am prepared and act with confidence, I will be perceived as confident. These are the little lessons that I’m grateful to have learned as a woman referee.Things to Notice About This Essay1. The author tells an interesting story about her experiences as a referee.2. A sense of her personality—determination, flexibility, good humor—comes through in the narration.3. Details like “Do you have a hot date tonight, ref?” make the narration memorable (we’d love to hear more of these kinds of details).4. The essay needs a faster start. The first paragraph (three sentences) says the same thing in both the first and third sentences—and gives away the essay’s surprise in the second!A good revision would all of paragraph one and start at paragraph two.5. There’s too much frame here and not enough picture. The essay needs further development, especially about the difficulties ofbecoming and being a ref, to keep it vivid.6. The author should “dwell” in the meaning of the experience a little more at the end—“I wonder about…I also think…Sometimes I believe….” Significant experiences like t his one, woven through many years of the author’s life, don’t mean just one thing—there are more insights and lessons to explore here.yours Sincerely/shenqing/文书会踩到的坑误区1.用很多深奥的句式词汇出色的ps从未偏离过“我是谁?”和“我能提供些什么?”从这两个主题介绍自身,描述你作为有竞争力候选者的潜能。

美国研究生留学申请书

美国研究生留学申请书

美国研究生留学申请书美国研究生留学申请书11.词不达意每位招生专员都看重文书内容的简单明了,忌讳所谓的文不对题,词不达意,或内容太长,形容词修饰得太多,招生员都不吃那一套。

2.内容校对不需要过度去雕刻你的文书,尽量突出简练真实的感觉即可,之前最好多做做草稿,检查整个__大意以及词句的用法,结构与细节相当重要,不得马虎。

往往一丁点小错误就会给招生官留下深刻的坏印象,因为他会觉得你平时易犯一些低级错误。

3.故意拍马屁完全没有该必要,你只要诚信想去该校学习深造,只需要真实的表达出情感即可,不要让招生官觉得你是刻意而为之,为了贪图一些其他好处或虚荣才有就读欲望。

4.误写成简历这其实也属于低级错误的一种,很多粗心的学子写着写着就跑偏了,他们多想让自己的文书具更多的吸引力,而完全忽视了文书写作的主要目的。

除非让你写成“简历”是院校的特定要求,否则可别这么做。

5.主题不匹配林子大了什么样的学生也都有,一部分自命不凡的学子想让自己更显个性,结果直接在申请中贬低自身的能力,最终可想而知,并没什么人喜欢这样的。

假如说你的高中成绩本就不理想,还想将其灌输于幽默的话题还博得同情心,但这些更多只是体现出你对自己的不负责任。

6.急切想被人记住还是那句话,一切不宜太刻意,你不要故意去招引对方的注意,而把自己的人生经历描绘得各种天方夜谭。

也许你会觉得自己思想丰富,但事实上招生官只会感觉你过于虚伪和浮夸。

只需要写出真实知道的事情便可,直接利用自身经历来阐述。

7.没有与申请相融合实际申请材料与文书内容相整合是最需要注意的点。

招生官很容易看出来你在文书中所表达的内容观念有没有与申请材料的表现相一致。

要是材料与文书的表达内容并不能相呼应,对方就会产生抄袭的'怀疑。

8.各种华丽的辞藻那样很容易使自己陷入一个尴尬的境地。

一般要是使用不是那么多见的单词在内容中,数量过多就给招生官留下你使用了辞海的印象。

9.内容涉及抄袭这是最忌讳的一点,千万不要存在任何侥幸心理去进行__的抄袭,除了招生官可以直接看出来以外,抄袭的内容一般都会错误百出。

美高家长申请文书范文欣赏(实用12篇)

美高家长申请文书范文欣赏(实用12篇)

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美国留学生签证表格填写流程

美国留学生签证表格填写流程

美国留学生签证表格填写流程美国留学签证表格填写流程1.打开表格后如有“Security Alert”窗口弹出,请点击“Yes”按钮继续填表过程。

2.在表格相应的位置填入所需信息。

请回答所有问题。

您必须用英文做答,且只能填写英文字母及阿拉伯数字。

此系统不接受任何符号,如,/ # $ * 等等。

例如:当您填写地址时,3/F应填3F。

3.仔细检查核对您填写的信息。

(请注意:该表格无法在线保存。

如果您需要修改表格上填入的信息,您将必须重新填写一份表格。

)4.点击表格最下端的“Continue”按钮。

如果您没有成功按下“Continue”按钮,生成的表格规格将不正确。

(请注意:由于电脑上网速度的快慢不同,网络在生成填妥表格时您可能需要等待几分钟。

请耐心等候。

)5.当该表格在Adobe Acrobat文件格式内生成后,请将该表格打印出来。

印在最后一页的条形码内已包含您输入的信息,这将帮助我们更迅速地处理您的签证申请。

请递交打印出来的申请表原件,包括带条形码的最后一页,其复印件或传真件均不可接受。

6.表格打印出来后,中国申请人还必须在表格的下列几项手填相应的中文信息:第6项(姓氏)、第7项(名字)、第8项(其它曾用姓氏)、第9项(其它曾用名字)、第15项(家庭住址)、第18项(配偶全名)和第20项(当前工作单位或就读学校的名称)。

7.表格打印出来后,中国申请人还必须在表格的第6、7项手填其姓氏和名字的标准中文电码。

该电码可在大多数中国电信局及邮局免费查到。

另外,该电码在朝阳区政府开办的签证信息服务中心也可以查到,但需交费。

8.填写表格第15及16项时,中国申请人(包括续签的F, H 和L签证申请人)应填写其在中国的住址及在中国的联系方式,而非美国的住址和联系方式。

9.请将一张5X5厘米正方形近期彩照用胶水或胶棒粘贴在打印出来的表格上。

请勿使用订书钉。

10.表格打印出来后,请您将签证申请费收据用透明胶带粘贴于表格的最后一页。

Enlight Writing文书修改实例1:CS专业美国master申请personal statement

Enlight Writing文书修改实例1:CS专业美国master申请personal statement

Enlight初级电话咨询实例:本文作者是一位计算机(CS)专业本科大四学生,准备申请美国大学的硕士项目。

以下是这位同学的Personal Statement在没有接触过Enlight咨询之前形成的初稿。

The first time I contacted a computer is when I was 10 years old, I was amazed by the games on it. The idea came into my mind that I make software and games by myself when I was in high school. So I chose CS as my major after the National Matriculation Examination directly. After four years’ study in my university I found I liked programming. Once I was in the middle of finishing a MFC program it was time to have lunch, when I couldn’t bear the hunger any more, I bought the meal back to my dormitory, then I continued do it while I was eating. I like to hear the sound of the keyboard ticking; I like to find out where on earth I did wrong when I debugging; I like to enjoy the feeling of operating a software done by myself. Programming brings me so much fun that I would love to continue studying on this field out of my interest. Computer technology in China is not very advancing, so I want to go abroad to learn the technology ate the cutting of the software.I always want to be perfect and I am always trying to discovery my shortcomings and eliminate them. One day I suddenly realized that I often got angry with others, then I was aware of I had been too harsh to others, from then on I began to control my temper and I became more welcome; I was not so perseverant enough that I always quitted doing a thing three days later after I began to do it. In order to change this, now I push myself to go to gym every morning at 9:00 a.m. It has been months, and I think I can hold it. I am sensitive and I can figure out how my words have influenced the people to whom I am talking by their facial expression, if I can realize I have said something wrong and why I will fix it up right away or I will think it twice at the end of the day and fix it later. So I believe with my traits I can study very well in your program, and I can be a good teammate. If I find I don’t have some qualities that are necessary, then I will just go and get them.My dream job is to design video games. I believe video game is a type of arts, a game contains its imagination. It is a combination of imagination, beautiful paintings and new technology. I want to offer people an ideal world for them to explore, have a rest and forget their trouble for a while. I have played many video games, I can tell a game of which part is attractive and of which part is crap.I know how to seize people’s interests. I want to make a perfect one which can really attra ct me.From your program I wish to learn how to cooperate with others efficiently, the technology at the cutting edge of software and to enrich my creativity by cooperating with brilliant brains from all over the world.本文的优点是总体结构清楚,第一段开篇说明自己对CS专业的兴趣是如何养成的,第二段讲述自己的性格,第三段和第四段描述自己对专业的见解和对未来的事业规划。

如何写好美国签证的学习计划?附英文版学习计划书

如何写好美国签证的学习计划?附英文版学习计划书

如何写好美国签证的学习计划?附英文版学习计划书第一篇:如何写好美国签证的学习计划?附英文版学习计划书如何写好美国签证的学习计划?附英文版学习计划书如何写好签证用的“学习计划书”?在申请留学及签证的过程中,经常会被要求写学习计划书(study plan),许多留学的朋友往往搞不清楚学习计划书和个人陈述(personal statement)区别和写法,下面点课台就给各位介绍一下学习计划书的写作。

一般来说学习计划书可以按照提交目的分成两类,既给大使馆申请签证用的,或是给学校申请录取用的。

用来申请学校的学习计划从本质上讲和个人陈述是同一类型的文书,关于学校申请类的学习计划书可以参考个人陈述方面的文章,本文主要介绍提交大使馆签证用的学习计划书。

欧美国家,特别是移民国家,如澳大利亚、新西兰、加拿大等国针对留学生签证的时候往往要求提供学习计划书,通过学习计划书使签证官了解您的背景,选择留学专业的动机条件,选择该国留学的理由,和清晰的未来留学时间安排,职业目标和回国理由,配合审核您的其它材料决定是否给您发放留学签证,因此学习计划书是一份很关键的文件。

总的来说,美国签证学习计划书需要包括以下几方面内容:1.简单说明自己的学习经历,专业背景及工作经历2.说明自己进一步求学的动机及为什么选择该国,该大学与该专业3.详细的留学时间安排4.介绍留学所需资金及来源5.对未来职业目标的阐述,留学后回国的理由学习计划书的行文风格和文章结构与个人陈述有很大不同,不需要太多个性化和感性的描述,而应该是结构清晰简单,逻辑严密,阐述的事实明确,相关论据有力可信,学成回国的理由要非常充分,并且绝对不能和申请人的其他材料发生矛盾。

由于使馆的工作人员每天要处理大量的文件,因此学习计划书切不可写的太长,一般不应超过800字,并且说明一个问题最好只用一个段落,段落前加上标题,如My Choice of University of T oronto in Canada ,My career objective 等,以便使馆的工作人员对您一段内容的中心思想一目了然。

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