大家网名师钱坤强教授原创2011年6月四级(CET4)作文精彩范文

2011年6月18日大学英语四级考试(CET4)作文范文
【作文题目】
1．现在网上购物已成为一种时尚
2．网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题
3．我的建议
【精彩范文】
Online Shopping (Essay 1, 折中篇)
作者：钱坤强教授
With the Internet becoming increasingly powerful, online shopping has emerged as a new way of shopping posing strong challenges to the conventional way of shopping. With all the conveniences created by this new pattern of shopping, an increasing number of netizens across all age groups resort to online shopping, which has quickly grown into a vogue. is just one of such leading online-shopping websites in China intensifying this fashion.
The greatest convenience of online shopping is that it saves time. We can complete a transaction without having to visit any actual shops or stores. Second, online shops offer a rich variety of commodities for potential buyers to choose from. However, like a doubled-edged sword, online shopping also creates problems. Although buyers can see the pictures of the commodities they intend to purchase, in quite many cases, the pictures or the verbal descriptions of those goods do not match their actual qualities, thus customers’ interests cannot be guaranteed. In addition, without a well-developed logistics network, it would sometimes take many days for purchased goods to arrive, thus causing great delay and rendering so-called conveniences into troubles. Finally, even though many sellers claim their commodities to be genuine brands, clients tend to lack professional knowledge and skills to discriminate the genuine from the fake ones, and they will ultimately incur considerable financial losses.
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In view of many inherent disadvantages of online shopping, customers should duly exercise their precaution when making their purchase decisions. When they have doubts about any aspects of a commodity, they should consult the shop owners fully before making a decision. Finally, they should also make extensive comparisons of the same category of commodities offered by different online shops. In this way, customers can really turn online shopping into something that can positively enrich their modern life.
Online Shopping (Essay 2, 批判篇)
作者：钱坤强教授
Online shopping is definitely a prevailing vogue of our times, especially among the fashion-conscious young people, among whom many are college students. It is often the case that students expect the arrival of their packages during the breaks of their classes, whose contents vary from books, fashion dresses and cosmetics. Much of their daily conversation at dormitories focuses on online shopping and their daily life has become inextricably connected with this vogue.
Admittedly, online shopping offers a wide range of conveniences, as compared with conventional shopping—cheaper prices, greater efficiency, and richer varieties, etc. However, its conveniences can become its traps. For innocent students, the sheer convenience of online shopping can allure them into what is called “impulse buy”—buying things which are not geared to one’s genuine needs. This will lead to huge wastes of money for students in their already limited budgets. Moreover, academic studies should be s tudents’ top priority and, if students allow their online shopping grown into a habit, their time and energy would be significantly diverted, and their failure to concentrate on their studies would produce serious consequences. Finally, when online shopping becomes a vogue among college students, it is easy to generate conspicuous consumption, creating gaps among students who come from different social and economic backgrounds. To a large extent, those gaps would highlight the social inequalities in the real world and it is not healthy for college students, who are supposed to contribute to social equalities, to live in a world of inequalities.
Online shopping inevitably carries with it commercialism, consumerism, and materialism. College students should resort to online shopping only when their purchase needs are appropriate. In no way should they allow online shopping to dominate their college life. Otherwise, it would not only affect their studies but also deform their character.
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