雅思范文及赏析-剑4Test03-大作文

雅思范⽂及赏析-剑4Test03-⼤作⽂
剑4Test3⼤作⽂
Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas(in words,pictures,music or film)in whichever way they wish.There should be no government restrictions on what they do.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
话题和题型分类
政府类，同意不同意型
题⽬分析
创作艺术家⾃由表达观点是否应该受到政府控制
思路提⽰
同意
有些艺术观点危害⼤众利益，需要受到限制
部分不当观点具有煽动性，不利于社会稳定
有的艺术创作内容不适宜特定⼈群欣赏，应该予以指导
不同意
百花齐放、百家争鸣代表了思想的⾃由和繁荣
⾃由表达艺术观点可以推动新概念的诞⽣
欣赏者可以从更⼤的范围中选择⾃⼰可以从中受启发的艺术观点
Sample Answer
In a real democracy,people should enjoy the freedom of speech.Everyone should be able to freely convey his or her ideas and views.This kind of freedom must be retained when it comes to artistic creations.
内容详细条⽬
段落此段结构表达观点
此段功能⾸段开篇摆明观点:艺术创作应该享有充分的⾔论⾃由。

Freedom of speech is a basic right for all citizens,more so for artists. The ideas of an artist are often expressed not in their speeches but through their artistic work.Denying freedom is a kind of oppression.Only a government without the mandate over its people would fear free speech. Dictators,for example,never allow the people to criticize the government.
内容详细条⽬
段落此段结构1正⾯论证⼀：⾔论⾃由是所有公民的基本权利。

2反⾯论证⼀：从反⾯论述政府不应限制⾔论⾃由。

此段功能本段是⽂章第⼆段，从正反两⾯进⾏论述，使得论述更加客观辩证。

Art is all but impossible without the freedom of expression.Artists reproduce the world as they see it,making art a reflection of the real world.An artist may choose any part of the world as his or her subject and approach from his or her unique angle.No two artists perceive the world in quite the same way.If restrictions are imposed on certain areas and subjects,if artists can only approach an issue in ways approved by the authority,and if they are in fear of punishment for truly expressing their
ideas,art ceases to be art.
内容详细条⽬
段落此段结构1正⾯论证⼆：艺术家以其独特的⾓度反映真实的世界。

2反⾯论证⼆：⾔论⾃由受限制会影响艺术家的创作。

此段功能本段是⽂章第三段，进⼀步从正反两⾯进⾏论述。

Of course,artists should abide by the law while enjoying the freedom of expression.Therefore,their artwork cannot be,for instance, pornographic.They must not slander other people or spread vicious lies. Freedom does not mean doing whatever one likes but doing whatever one likes so long as one does not infringe on others’freedom or rights.
内容详细条⽬
段落此段结构提出⾃由是在法律范围内的⾃由，为⾃由设定了⼀个前提。

此段功能本段是⽂章第四段，清晰表明了⾃由的定义。

Therefore,governments should not impose censorship or restrictions on artists’creation unless the work is harmful to others in some way. Artists should have their freedom of expression as long as this freedom is not as an excuse for illegal activities.
内容详细条⽬
段落此段结构全⽂总结
此段功能再次重申观点
满分要素剖析：
语⾔表达
本⽂的语⾔简洁明了，没有刻意⽤长难句，旨在客观清晰的表达作者的观点。

同时本⽂分别
从正反两⾯论述观点，从论证⼿法上来说，就⾮常客观和辩证。

If restrictions are imposed on certain areas and subjects,if artists can only approach an issue in ways approved by the authority,and if they are in fear of punishment for truly expressing their ideas,art ceases to be
art.
句型If…,if…,if…通过排⽐，可增强语⽓，强调观点。

Freedom does not mean doing whatever one likes but doing whatever one likes so long as one does not infringe on others’freedom or rights.
句型…does not mean…but…，通过正反两⾯观点的对⽐，突出作者的观点。

Therefore,governments should not impose censorship or restrictions on artists’creation unless the work is harmful to others in some way.
句型Therefore,…should/should not…是很好的议论⽂总结句型，能够重申观点。

逻辑结构
本⽂是典型的总分总结构的议论⽂。

开篇先陈述事实并表达观点，第⼆、第三段各从正反两
⾯对观点进⾏论述，使得论证更加客观严谨。

第四段则提出定义，为结尾的总结做了铺垫。

最后⼀段对全⽂进⾏总结，并重申⾃⼰的观点。