Composition (CET 4)

Sample
3.我的看法 我的看法 From my point of view, while it is true that the income may stimulate the social development to观点＋原因＋causes trouble some extent, it 观点＋原因＋建议 as well. An income gap that is too wide for most people to bear can neither contribute to the stability of a country nor promote its economic development. Therefore , while we are advocating the rapid development of our country , we should tolerate the narrow income gap and narrow the wide one.

Sample
1.收入差距悬殊是当前社会的一种现象 收入差距悬殊是当前社会的一种现象
Now the income gap is getting wider and wider. In some privately owned firms, joint-ventures, or foreign-funded companies , an executive’s yearly income is ten times or even a hundred times as much as an ordinary worker’s.

2. 人们对之褒贬不一 Faced with this situation, people will undoubtedly have different opinions. Some 观点＋ 观点＋原因 believe that it benefits the social and economic development since driving force is often derived from the gap. In other words , the gap inspires people and gives a push to advancement. Others speak of its side effect: income gap is often the root of social unrest and also contrary to our country’s principle.

批驳观点式
Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition entitled Can Money Buy Happiness? You should write at least 120 words according to the following guidelines: 1. 有些人认为金钱是万能的，金钱是幸福之 有些人认为金钱是万能的， 本。 2. 我不同意这样的说法 我不同意这样的说法。
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Composition (CET 4)

评分标准
2分 5分 8分 调理不清，思想混乱，语言支离破碎或大 部分句子有错误 基本切题，表达思想不够清楚，连贯性 差，有较多语言错误。 基本切题，表达思想比较清楚，文字尚连 贯；但语言错误较多，其中有少量的严重 错误。 切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少 量语言错误。 切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性 较好，基本无语言错误。

命题形式: 情景式
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write an eye-witness account of a traffic accident. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese: 假设你在某日某时某地目击一起车祸，就此 写一份见证书。见证书须包括以下几点： 1、车祸发生的时间及地点 2、你所见到的车祸情况 3、你对车祸原因的分析

From my point of view, while it is true that allowing college students to get married benefits them to some extent, I believed that it is better to forbid college students to get married…………….. ……………………………………………………….. ………………………………………………………..

写作步骤
文体 1）议论文 ）
1. 审题 2）应用文 ） 2. 草拟提纲 草拟提纲 3）说明文 ） 3. 正文写作 ** 1） 每段按一定句数创作 保持整体 ） 每段按一定句数创作, 结 构平衡 主要： 次要： 主要：4－5句 次要：2－3句 2） 段落：总－分（－总） （－总 ） 段落：

Sample
Homework 1
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition entitled Should College Students Be Allowed to Get Married? You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese. 1、大学生是否可以结婚已经被讨论过很多 年； 2、对此社会上也有不同的看法，有人赞成， 有人反对； 3、你的看法

出现的问题
结构问题： 结构问题：主次不分 次－主－主 语法问题 语言表达 重复率高

Should College Students Be Allowed to Get Married? We cannot deny the fact that it is a heatedly debated topic whether college students should be allowed to marry……. Different People have different opinions. Some stick to the positive side …………………............... ……………………………………………………….. However, others hold the opposite idea…………… ……………………………………………………….. ……………………………………………………….

出现的问题
时态 连词的使用 because of + 句子 even it + 名词 动词作为主语 e.g. Own a private car is good for people. 正确: 正确 Owning a private car is… To own a private car is… 词汇的误用 question vs. problem

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命题形式
提纲式 outline given 图表式 chart given 情景式 scene given

命题形式: 提纲式
Direction: For thiБайду номын сангаас part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition entitled My View on the Income Gap. You should write at least 120 words according to the following guidelines: 1.收入差距悬殊是当前社会的一种现象 2.人们对之褒贬不一 3.我的看法

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Basic Requirements
no less than 120 words Minus: 110-119 100-109 90-99 …… to complete within 30 minutes clear and clean format : Intended Style or Block Style

批驳观点式
Many people argue that money is everything. By 个句子） （4－5个句子） － 个句子 saying that, they mean the more money they have, 1. 中心思想（扣题） 中心思想（ will obtain. With money, the more happiness they 扣题） one can 2. 具体例子、原因作为支撑观点 one buy whatever he enjoys. With money, 具体例子、 can do whatever he likes. So, in their minds, money 3. 小结 can bring comfort, security, and so on. According to a survey performed by social psychologists, each year, almost 5% of the government officials have been sentenced due to corruption and bribery. Money, as they think, is the source of happiness.

命题形式 ：图表式
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic: Student Use of Computers. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the chart and the outline given below: 1.上图所示为1990年、1995年、2000年某大学生使用 计算机的情况，请描述其变化 描述其变化； 描述其变化 2.请说明发生这些变化的原因 变化的原因(可从计算机的用途、价 变化的原因 格或社会发展等方面加以说明)； 3.你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有什么困难或问 困难或问 题。

Homework 2
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition entitled Is It Good or Bad to Own Private Cars? You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese. 1、拥有私家车的人越来越多； 2、有些人支持，有些人反对； 3、你的看法

Argumentation 议论文

对立观点式 One
Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition entitled My View on the Income Gap. You should write at least 120 words according to the following guidelines: 1.收入差距悬殊是当前社会的一种现象 2.人们对之褒贬不一 3.我的看法