(英语)九年级下册英语书面表达的技巧及练习题及练习题(含答案)含解析

一、中考英语书面表达汇编
1．（·湖南长郡中学中考模拟）书面表达
76,近年来，科技的进步正在逐步影响着人们的日常生活。

年5月，来'自一带一路”沿线的20国青年评选出了中国的“新四大发明”:高铁、支付宝、共享单车和网购。

假如你是李
华，你的朋友Lisa是英国的一名初中生，她对我们的“新四大发明”很感兴趣。

请你给她写一封电子邮件，具体内容如下：1.介绍共享单车和网购的基本情况并谈谈你的看法和评价 2.邀请她下个月参加你校科技节，将展出学生制作的各类材质的小模型。

注意:1.词数80词左右，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数 2.可适当增加细节，使行文流畅。

参考词汇:共享单车:shared bikes
Dear Lisa,
I’m glad to hear that you’re so interested in our “Four
New”Inventions”______________________
Yours
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Lisa,
I’m glad to hear that you’re so interested in our “Four New Inventions” Let me tell you about them.They are high-speed railways,electronic payments,shared bicycles and online shopping.We travel by high-speed railways.They are very quick.We use electronic payments when we use online shopping,When we want to go somewhere by bike,we use shared bicycles.We use our mobile phone to unlock the shared bicycle.It is convenient and cheap.There is no pollution and oil cost.We can also keep healthy when we ride it.There will be the Science Festival in our school.It will show all kinds of models that students make.I hope you will come to visit them.
Yours
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们根据提示来介绍中国的新四大发明，题目中给出了具体的写作的内容，我们应将这些内容用正确的英语表达出来。

首先应注意在短文中要包括题目中给出的所有信息，不能遗漏要点，并注意表达的层次和条理。

其次要注意使用正确的时态和人称，通过分析可知，这篇短文应使用一般现在时态，谓语动词用原形，特别要注意谓语动词形式要变化，这是一个写作的难点。

最后要注意英语的表达习惯，英语句式与汉语在语序和词性上的使用是不同的，要注意不能逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。

应从句子整体考虑，使用恰当的词汇和句型来表达，语法规范。

还应使用一些较好的句型或者短语，增强文章的表现力。

2．（·海南中考模拟）“美丽的琼海我的家，人人都要保护她”。

自双创以来，我们的生活
环境得到了很大的改观，人人积极参与双创活动，让人点赞的文明行为随处可见。

作为一
名中学生，请你写一篇短文号召大家加入到双创活动中来。

要求：
1.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
2.必须包含所给提示，并做适当的拓展；
3. 行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；
4. 词数80左右，（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
Since the government created the civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.
As junior high students,
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________
Let’s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.
【答案】Since the government created civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. Everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seen everywhere.
As junior high students, on the one hand, there are a lot of things we can do. We should be polite to others and try to behave well. It’s kind of you to help people in need. Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier. Also, we can plant more trees and keep off grass. On the other hand, there are many things we shouldn’t do. We shouldn’t make a lot of noise loudly in the public. We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn’t break traffic rules.
Let’s take action now. Our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.
【解析】
【详解】
琼海正在进行“双创”活动，即创建文明城市、创建健康城市，城市的生活环境有了很大的改变。

这篇作文要求我们用英语写一篇短文，号召中学生们都参加到“双创”活动中来。

题
目中并没有规定具体的写作内容，而是用图表的形式，列出了写作的提纲。

通过审题可知，这篇短文我们应从两个方面来叙述：即应该做什么；不应该做什么。

根据这个内容，写作时，把短文分成两个层次，这样可以使文章结构清晰、条理。

整篇短文应使用一般现在时态，第一人称we来叙述。

写作时应注意：首先英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语，而应从句子的整体结构考虑，使用恰当的词汇、短语和句型，以常见的主谓宾或者主系表构成的简单句为主，穿插使用并列句或者复合句，改变文章节奏，提升文章档次。

语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯、流畅。

【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，向中学生们发出号召，共同参与到城市“双创”活动中来。

首先短文的内容完整，文章根据题目中列出的图表，补充了具体的写作内容，从应该做的和不应该做的两个方面，对中学生的日常行为提出了要求。

文章条理清晰，有层次。

其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，语言准确，语句通顺，符合英语的表达习惯。

短文中句子结构以简单句为主，也使用了并列句和复合句以及一些较复杂的高级句式，语句之间也使用了较好的连接成分，如We should be polite to others and try to behave well. 、It’s kind of you to help people in need. 、Meanwhile, We can help clean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier.、We can’t spit anywhere and we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. At the same time, we shouldn’t break traffic rules.等等。

3．（·四川中考模拟）书面表达
时间对每个人来说都是宝贵的，那么怎样才能更好地利用时间呢?请用英语写一篇题目为“How to save time”的作文。

内容包括：1. 时间的意义和重要性；
2.人们浪费时间的现象（至少3种）；
3. 节省时间的方法（至少3个）；
4. 号召大家节约时间。

作文要求：1. 语句连贯，条理清楚，不得抄袭原文，书写工整；2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；3. 词数80左右。

How to save time
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ __________________
【答案】How to save time
We have ever heard of “Time is money. Time is life”.
Time is very important to everyone. But we can see people waste their time everywhere. They
spend much time playing computer games, drinking, sleeping late in the morning and so on. It’s necessary for us to save our valuable time. We have to listen to our teachers carefully in class so that we can save more time to learn others after class. We should make a plan to study at home so that we can learn more with less time. We should spend more time reading instead of playing games.
If we can make good use of time we are sure to get more. To save time is to save life. Let’s save time from now on.
【解析】本文内容应包含题目中所提供的所有信息。

灵活运用各种句式，采用不同的表达方式将各个要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。

语言力求准确，简洁。

最后必须认真查验是否有漏写，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

点睛：这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如It’s necessary for us to save our valuable time.。

spend doing sth； make a plan;；from now on;；make good use of time.等。

But；so that ；If,等的运用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理；同时语言流畅，内容完整，是一篇不错的范文。

4．（·山东中考模拟）书面表达
有没有那么一件事是你一直想做的，但又因为种种原因迟迟未付诸行动？也许是被搁置的新年愿望，或许是对父母的一句“我爱你”，抑或是一直没有动身前往的地方？请将“It’s never too late to ...”补充完整，并以此为题写一篇英语作文。

词数：不少于100词。

要点：1. 写一件让你心心念念的事；2. 谈谈你一直想做这件事，但没能实现的原因；
3. 谈谈你下一步的计划。

注意: 1.所写内容应包括所提供的信息，可适当发挥；2.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

【答案】It’s never too late to fulfill my promise
Molly and I used to go to the beach and watch the sunrise together. She said that she wanted to go to Hainan with me and see the beautiful scenery when we grow up. I happily agreed.
Ten years had passed since I made that promise. However, I didn’t do anything about the promise because I was busy with my study. My mother also disagreed with me. “You should know study is the top priority （首要任务） for a student. You are just a teenage girl, there’s no way you can go there without an adult’s help.” I always felt upset when my mother said something like this.
I talked to Molly about it. “My mother won’t allow me.” I sighed （叹息）. “It’s a really long way. W hat should we do?” said Molly. “I don’t know.” I replied, “But we can make a plan by choosing a perfect time first.”
“I’d like to set off when the summer holiday begins,” she said. “We can go there with both our parents. I want us to go there together. Jus t the way I have promised you.” I said.
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，将“It’s never too late to ...”补充完整，并以此为题写一篇英语作文。

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般过去时，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Molly and I used to……，She said that……，I didn’t do……，I talked to……等句式的应用。

写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。

写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。

开头介绍了我想长大了去海南看美丽的风景，接下来介绍我一直想做这件事，但没能实现的原因，最后介绍我下一步的计划。

此处used to do sth, want to do sth, grow up, be busy with, by doing sth, set off等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

5．（·重庆中考模拟）书面表达（原创）
今年春节，很多人加入了抢红包的游戏，但也有人表示担忧。

学校英语校刊《英语天地》对此进行调查，假如你是一名校刊小记者，请你就此次调查的结果进行总结，并谈谈你自己的观点。

Grabbing red
packets on line
Agreement
（75%）
1.a popular form of entertainment, bring more fun
2.bring people closer, make more friends
Disagreement
（25%）
spend too much time.
not have enough communication with family members, feel
lonely
Your opinion
1.
2.
提示词：We chat 微信Grabbing red packets on line抢红包注意：（1）词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）文章应包括题中所提的所有要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
（3）文中请勿提及你的真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息;
As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the Spring Festival in . From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” among students.
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________
【答案】As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the
Spring Festival in . From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” among students.
About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun. It can bring people closer , they can make more friends .Grabbing red packets has been part of people’s lives. About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets. They don’t have enough communication with their family members .They may feel a little lonely
Personally, there's no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form. Also, it's obvious that it is more convenient. However, as a saying goes, each coin has two sides. It is not an exception, it also has some bad effects. If people can't grab the red packets, people may feel sad or ill-tempered ,even break their cell phones. What's worse, it may lead to the crime.
【解析】这篇作文要求我们对学校进行的关于春节抢红包这件事的调查结果进行总结，并谈谈自己对这件事情的看法。

题目中给出了一个表格，里面包括了支持抢红包这个游戏的人们的观点以及反对这个游戏的人们的观点和理由，只给了一些短语，我们需要组织语言，将这些要点用正确的英语表达出来，并使文章内容更加丰富、完整。

最后还要加上自己的看法。

因此文章的内容应主要包括三部分：支持的人们的理由；反对者们的理由；自己的看法，可以分成两段或者三段来叙述，这样可以使文章结构清楚，有层次。

写作时，应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不要逐词翻译，应从句子整体结构出发，以简单句为主，穿插并列句和复合句。

为提升文章档次，还应注意使用高级句型和较复杂的句式。

语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文章整体意思连贯、表达流畅。

点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。

首先短文内容完整、结构清晰。

文章分为三段，第一段是题目中已经给出的，因此了文章的话题。

第二段中作者表述了支持和反对玩这个游戏的人们各自的理由；第三段中作者发表了自己的看法。

其次短文中语言得体，句式准确，符合英语的表达习惯。

文章以一般现在时态为主，特别注意了谓语动词的正确形式，语法规范、准确。

短文中使用了较丰富的句型，如About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun.、Grabbing red packets has been part of people’s lives、About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets、Personally, there's no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people
in a special form.、If people can't grab the red packets, people may feel sad or ill-tempered ,even break their cell phones.等等。

文章中也出现了一些语法上的小错误，总的来说，不影响整篇文章的质量。

6．（·海南中考模拟）书面表达
年1月以来，琼海市开始推广使用共享单车，你对这一举措有什么看法？请根据下面的表格提示内容写一篇短文，谈谈共享单车的利弊及使用共享单车的建议，以便在英语课上与同学们交流。

要求：1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
2. 必须包含所给提示，但不要逐字翻译，并做适当发挥；
3. 行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；
4. 词数80左右。

（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
Recently shared bikes can be seen everywhere on the street in Qionghai. Many people use them for work, for sport or just for fun. I think …
What’s your opinion about shared bikes? Will you choose one as your everyday vehicle?
【答案】Recently shared bikes can be seen everywhere on the street in Qionghai. Many people use them for work, for sport or just for fun. I think it’s a good idea. As we know cycling can help us save energy and it can greatly reduce air pollution. What’s more, it costs little to use them. However, some people park bikes in wrong places after they use them. Sometimes it’s hard to find a bike on the street. And bicycle accidents do happen once in a while, so we must be careful when riding. Never ride too fast and always follow the traffic rules. At the same time, everyone is supposed to care for the bikes. Don’t bring it home or keep it your own. What’s your opinion about shared bikes? Will you choose one as your everyday vehicle?
【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

文中使用了非常好的短语，例如on the street，a good idea，as we know，help sb. do sth.，save energy，what’s more，park bikes，in wrong places，once in a while，be careful，at the same time等。

而As we know cycling can help us save energ y and it can greatly reduce air pollution./ What’s more, it costs little to use them. / At the same time, everyone is supposed to care for the bikes.等多种插入语句式的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。

点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

7．（·天津中考模拟）根据联合国教科文组织的统计显示，北欧国家国民每年读书24本左右,美国人年均阅读7 本书，.韩国人11本书，日本、法国国民每年读书数量为8.4本左右，而中国国民人均读书数量低于5本。

你的阅读量是多少？作为一名中学生，你应该怎
么做？请根据下列表格中所给要点，写一篇英语短文。

要求:1.文中必须包含表格中的所有要点,可适当发挥；
2.条理淸晰,字迹工整，词数不少于80；
3.文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息：
4.开头和结尾部已给出,不计入总词数。

参考词汇:身心健康：mental and physical health
Nowadays,reading is becoming more and more popular among us._____________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ __
Let’s be active readers and enjoy reading.
【答案】Nowadays，reading is becoming more and more popular among us．People often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the world．But I don't think so．In my opinion，to read books is more valuable than anything else．The old saying"To open a book is always helpful"clearly tells us how good it is to read a book．Books are our friends．They introduce us different kinds of knowledge．They lead us down the road to success．Books are our teachers．They teach us troth，science，literature，and philosophy of life．Besides，they increase our knowledge，enlarge our experience，strengthen our character and do many other things which we can not do without them．Books tell us what is good and what is evil．And only books can tell the good from the bad．Therefore to read more books is the best policy for our young students．
As a middle school student．I think we should read more books．Reading is good for our physical and mental health．
Let's be active readers and enjoy reading．
【解析】这是一篇材料作文，行文之前，把表格里的要点内容通读一遍，做出框架，开始写作时，把表格里所列内容全部表述到文章中，并且自己适当增加内容，注意人称、时态、单复数，词形的变化。

适当增加衔接词，使文章更出彩。

如对长句不好把握，就尽量使用短句。

8．（·北京中考模拟）我区正在全力创建全国文明城区。

假如你是李华，你打算邀请你们班交换生Peter参加下周日学校组织的志愿活动。

请用英语写一封邀请函，告诉他活动的时间和地点，活动内容以及需要做什么准备。

提示词语： Muhu Park, pick up, water, put up posters, gloves, shoes
提示问题：When and where will you go?
What will you do in this activity?
What do you advise Peter to prepare for this activity?
Dear Peter,
How is it going?
I’m writing to invite you to take part in the volunteer activity.
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Li Hua
Dear Peter,
How is it going?
I’m writing to invite you to take part in the volunteer activity.
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter
How is it going?
I’m writing to invite you to take part in the school’s activity to volunteer for a better environment. We’ll go to the park near our school at 9 o’clock on Sunday morning.
We’ll pick up rubbish and put up posters about protecting the environment. If you decide to join us you can make a poster and take it with you. And you’d better take gloves and a plastic bag with you.
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，属于应用文写作。

本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；提示的
问题就是写作的基本方向，写作要点为：1. 志愿者活动的时间和地点。

2. 活动中做些什么。

3. 建议彼得为这次活动做哪些准备。

然后围绕要点适当发挥。

结合材料内容，可知时态以一般将来时态为主。

语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。

适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

9．（·靖江市靖城中学中考模拟）九年寒窗苦，六月备考忙。

对于即将到来的中考，同学们既有期盼也有压力。

为了让同学们学得开心，学有信心，我校英文报刊将开展“How to Face Senior High School Entrance Examination”的征文比赛，请你根据提示内容，用英语简要描述并适当表达自己的观点。

内容要点如下表：
注意事项：1. 征文须包含表格中所有要点。

要求语句通顺，意思连贯；
2. 词数100左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

How to Face Senior High School Entrance Examination
The Senior High School Entrance Examination is coming. Are you ready for it? Although we have dreams, we may feel worried from time to
time.___________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________
【答案】How to Face Senior High School Entrance Examination
The Senior High School Entrance Examination is coming. Are you ready for it? Although we have dreams, we may feel worried from time to time.
Recently, because of the heavy schoolwork, many students are stressed. Moreover, more attention is paid to students’ language ability, so it is difficult for students to get high marks. As a result, some students are likely to lose heart.
As to the problems, my classmates offer the following suggestions. First, we should not only work hard but also improve our learning methods. Second, we should plan our time carefully so that
we can achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies.
In my opinion, we should develop a healthy body by eating healthily and exercising more. Furthermore, we’d better share the worries with our teachers and friends.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文，以“How to Face Senior High School Entrance Examination”为题，用英语简要描述如何面对中考，并适当表达自己的观点。

【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：many students are…...，so it is difficult for stud ents to……，we should……，we’d better……等句式的应用。

写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。

写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

【点睛】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。

开头介绍了我们面对中考会感到担心，接下来介绍学生的现状以及同学们给出的建议，最后表达我的观点。

此处from time to time, pay attention to, lose heart, so that, in one’s opinion, share..with…等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

10．（·黑龙江中考模拟）书面表达
假如你是Jack，中学英文报 WARM HEART专栏的编辑，近期你收到一封署名为 Asking的求助信，该同学在信中诉说了自己当前焦虑的情绪，请根据以下信息，给他写一封回信。

写作要点：
1. 表达你对他的理解并给予安慰。

2. 求助人焦虑情绪产生的原因。

（1）下周将要进行期末考试。

（2）尽管准备了很长时间，对成绩仍没有把握。

3. 为他如何消除考前焦虑提出具体建议并说明理由。

写作要求：
1. 不得使用真实姓名、地名和学校名。

2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。

3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。

4. 至少80词。

Hi, Asking,
I’m the editor of WARM HEART.
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Editor,
Jack
【答案】I’m th e editor of WARM HEART.I hear from you that you are worried about the exam
that will be held next week. You said that though you have prepared for a long time, you are still not sure you can get good grades. I can understand your situation. As far as I am concerned, the more you prepared, the better grades you will get. You’ll get rid of worries as long as you do as follows.
First of all, have a good rest. Get enough sleep and don’t stay up late. If you have enough sleep, you’ll be more energetic to prepare for the test.
What’s more, don’t forget to do exercise. Doing exercise, such as playing basketball and playing soccer, can make you relax.
Only by doing these simple things can you relax yourself.
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于话题作文，针对某位同学考前焦虑进行安慰，分析原因并给出消除焦虑的建议。

根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如hear from sb, get good grades, as far as I’m concerned, the+比较级，the+比较级，as long as, first of all, what’s more, make sb do以及only+状语放句首，用半倒装。

增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。

审好题是写好书面表达的关键。

审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。

有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。

通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。

一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。

使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。

同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。

修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。

这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

11．（·山东中考模拟）书面表达
今天早上你目睹了一起事件（下图），你想以"Mother Stops Him"为题写一篇短文，向你校英语报社投稿。

短文内容如下：
1. 描述亊件。

2. 发表你的想法。

要求：
1.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

2.不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。

3. 100个词汇左右。

参考词汇：lift…up扶起，knock…down撞倒，trust信任
Mother Stops Him
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【答案】This morning, my mother took me to school. On the way, I saw a car knock an old man down and the car ran away. The old woman fell to the ground and could not move. I saw this situation and immediately went over to help the old man lift up, but my mother stopped me saying, "Don't lift him up, or he 'll say you hit him." But I think helping others is what we should do. That old woman will certainly appreciate me, so I trust that as long as everyone gives a little love, the world will become a better place.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇看图作文，所给材料较为详细，逻辑清楚，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。

根据要点内容可知短语主要应用一般过去时态，主要是第一人称，句型以简单句为主。

写作时要灵活运用，注意主谓一致，单词拼写正确。

【点睛】
本文在写作中使用了很多固定句式，如：The old woman fell to the ground and could not move. I saw this situation and immediately went over to help the old man lift up。

所以在学习中，我们应注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.
12．（·江苏中考模拟）为提升南京城市形象，我市已启动老小区出新改造工程。

假设你是 Tim，请根据下面表格内容的提示，用英文向你的外国笔友 Jack 做简单的介绍。

Purpose improve the environment
Changes to people‟s life beautiful buildings, …。