上海高考英语书面表达分类训练：申请信

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申请信
1．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假如你是明启中学高三学生李明，你校正在为即将于高一高二年级举办的英语辩论赛（English Debate Contest）和英语电影配音赛（English Film Dubbing Contest）在高三学生中招聘学生评委（judge），你对此很有兴趣。

请写一封电子邮件给相关负责老师，申请担任其中一项比赛的评委。

邮件内容需包括：
1. 你希望担任该比赛评委的意愿；
2. 简单的相关自我介绍；
3. 你适合担任该比赛评委的理由。

你有意报名，写一封申请信给图书馆，内容须包括：
1)你的意愿；
2)你认为自己适合这一志愿者工作的理由。

现有两个活动方案：一是暑期自费去当地一所学校开展教学工作；二是在暑期开展募捐，购买几台电脑和一些书籍寄往该学校。

你有意向参加志愿者活动。

请你写一封信给学生会，信中包括：1、简要介绍你自己；
2、你报名参加哪一个项目；
3、简要说明你选择这个项目的理由。

4．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假如你是明启中学高三学生李华，最近你校“解忧”社团（Anxiety Relieving Club）正在招新，旨在帮助同学们排忧减压。

你很想成为其中一员，请给社长写封申请信，内容须包括：
1. 你想加入该社团的理由；
2. 你对如何开展解忧活动的建议。

你很想成为其中一员，请给社长写封申请信，内容须包括：
1. 你想加入该社团的理由；
2. 你对解忧活动的建议与举措。

6．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是李敏，今天刚从你喜欢的某大学参观回来。

在该大学校园里的所见所闻，使你萌发了报考这所大学的想法。

于是，你打算给该大学的校长写一封自荐信。

你的信应该包括：1. 说明你的优势、特长以及报考该大学的动力；
2. 描述在该校园所见所闻对你选报该大学的影响。

请结合自己的情况，给筹备组负责人王先生写一封申请信。

你的申请信需要包括以下内容：
1. 你想申请的一处志愿服务点；
2. 你选择此处提供志愿服务的理由。

8．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是市西高中的王丽。

过完今年的暑假你将迎来大学生活。

你校拟选拔一些优秀学生，利用暑假到当地实验小学为学生辅导英语。

你希望参加此活动。

请根据提示写给校评选组一封申请信：1.对此活动的认识（如对本人，学生和社会的益处）；2.个人优势（如性格，独立生活能力，语言能力等）；3.你的计划（如怎样做等）。

9．Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，最近你校即将接待来自英国的一批高中生，需要在校内招募寄宿家庭，在接待这些学生的同时，向他们介绍中国文化。

你对此很感兴趣，写一封邮件给学校外事接待处，表达你的意愿，内容需包括：
1）在和父母协商后，你愿意作为寄宿家庭；
2）你对哪一方面的中国文化特别感兴趣，计划通过何种方式向寄宿在你家的外国学生介绍。

为此，你向校长写一封申请信，内容包括：
➢ 社团活动的主题、目的、时间、地点等；
➢ 需要学校给予的支持。

注：文中不得提及你的真实姓名或学校。

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________
参考答案
It is said that there will be an English Debate Contest in Grade One, and student judges will be recruited among Grade Three students. I am very interested in this contest, so I am writing to apply for the position.
My name is Li Ming, studying in Class 15, Grade 3. I am very interested in English and I get good grades. I am fluent in oral English and can express myself clearly in English. I am outgoing and quick in thinking.
When I was in grade one, I took part in the English debate contest and won the first prize, so I know the rules of the English debate contest. I have a deep knowledge of the debate requirements, which enables me to evaluate the performance of the contestants well. So I think I am suitable to be a judge of this competition.
I would really appreciate it if you could give me the opportunity to be a judge.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Ming
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生学校相关负责老师写封电子邮件，申请担任高一高二年级举办的英语辩论赛和英语电影配音赛的其中一项比赛的评委。

【详解】1.词汇积累
比赛：contest→competition
表达：express→convey
要求：requirement→demand
参加：take part in→participate in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：My name is Li Ming, studying in Class 15, Grade 3.
拓展句：My name is Li Ming, who studies in Class 15, Grade 3.
【点睛】[高分句型1] It is said that there will be an English Debate Contest in Grade One, and student judges will be recruited among Grade Three students. (运用了that引导的主语从句) [高分句型2] I have a deep knowledge of the debate requirements, which enables me to evaluate the performance of the contestants well. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
I would like to volunteer as a community librarian during the summer vacation.
The main reason why I choose this volunteer activity is that I like reading very much and this job can expose me to all kinds of books. Besides, I like to deal with people who love reading, and I am willing to communicate with them and serve them. I have been a team leader of a reading party for two years. Moreover, I can make full use of this chance to charge myself as I can read some books that I am interested in during non-business hours.
Finally, I am confident that I can do this volunteer job well. I would appreciate it if my application could be taken into consideration.
Yours,
Li Ming 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。

假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，最近你所在社区的图书馆正在招募志愿者，暑期来图书馆服务，负责接待来馆借阅的外籍人士。

你有意报名，写一封申请信给图书馆。

【详解】1.词汇积累
想要：would like to→want to
机会：chance→opportunity
各种各样的：all kinds of→various
此外：besides/moreover→in addition
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Besides, I like to deal with people who love reading, and I am willing to communicate with them and serve them.
拓展句：Besides, not only do I like to deal with people who love reading, but also I am willing to communicate with them and serve them.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Finally, I am confident that I can do this volunteer job well. (运用了that 引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] The main reason why I choose this volunteer activity is that I like reading very much and this job can expose me to all kinds of books. (运用了why引导定语从句)
3．Dear Students Union,
I’m Li Hua, a 16-year-old student in N.6 High School. Hearing that our school will organize some students to hold volunteer activities aiming to support a school in the remote area, I’m writing to apply to be a voluntary teacher and teach at the local school in this summer vacation. And the reasons why I choose it are as follows.
I love teaching and I’ve been dreaming to be an English teacher since I was young. So I will put great enthusiasm into teaching at this local school. Additionally, I have proficiency in both written and spoken English which you can tell from my academic performance, and thus I’m qualified to offer professional guidance to students there.
I do hope that you can consider my application so that I can make some contribution to the voluntary cause of our school and this remote school.
Best wishes!
Li Hua 【导语】本篇是一篇应用文，学生会正在招募志愿者，开展支援边远地区学校的志愿者活动，写一封申请信，表明自己申报志愿者的具体内容和原因。

【详解】1. 词汇积累
举办：hold→carry out
支援：support→assist
投入：put into→ devote to
考虑：consider→take……into consideration
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m writing to apply to be a voluntary teacher and teach at the local school in this summer vacation.
拓展句：I’m writing to apply to be a voluntary teacher, who can teach at the local school in this summer vacation.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Hearing that our school will organize some students to hold volunteer activities aiming to support a school in the remote area, I’m writing to apply to be a voluntary teacher and teach at the local school in this summer vacation. (运用了非谓语现在分词结构) [高分句型2] Additionally, I have proficiency in both written and spoken English which you can tell from my academic performance, and thus I’m qualified to offer professional guidance to
students there.(运用了定语从句)
4．Dear Sir/Madam,
I am very glad to hear that our school is going to set up Anxiety Relieving Club to help students relieve stress. As a warm-hearted and outgoing boy, I am eager to become a member of it.
At the beginning of high school, I was under great pressure. Thanks to the help of teachers and classmates, I came out of the haze, so I have the experience of helping other students reduce pressure. I have found that many students under great pressure are shy and don’t like to communicate with others, so I think helping them become active is the key. It’s a good choice to let them join study groups and sports activities.
I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。

要求考生写一封申请信，申请成为学校“解忧”社团的一员，信中介绍你想加入该社团的理由和你对如何开展解忧活动的建议。

【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→happy
创立：set up→establish
害羞的：shy→self-conscious
建议：suggestion→advice
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：At the beginning of high school, I was under great pressure.
拓展句：At the beginning of high school, I was under great pressure, which made me sad.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am very glad to hear that our school is going to set up Anxiety Relieving Club to help students relieve stress.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】I have found that many students under great pressure are shy and don’t like to communicate with others, so I think helping them become active is the key.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
5．Dear sir/madam,
I am very glad to hear that our school is going to set up Anxiety Relieving Club to help students relieve stress. As a warm-hearted and outgoing boy, I am eager to become a member of it.
At the beginning of high school, I once suffered great pressure. Thanks to the help of teachers and classmates, I came out of the haze, so I have the experience of helping other students reduce pressure. I have found that many students under great pressure are shy and don’t like to communicate with others, so I think helping them become active is the key, and it’s a good choice to let them join study groups and sports activities.
I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Lihua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给旨在帮助同学们排忧减压的“解忧”社团社长写一封申请信。

【详解】词汇积累
压力：stress→pressure
创立：set up→establish
参加：join→participate in
腼腆的：shy→ in one’s shell
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am very glad to hear that our school is going to set up Anxiety Relieving Club to help students relieve stress.
拓展句：I am very glad to hear that our school is preparing to set up Anxiety Relieving Club which aims to help students relieve stress.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I am very glad to hear that our school is going to set up Anxiety Relieving Club to help students relieve stress. (运用了that引导的宾语从句以及不定式作目的状语)
[高分句型2] have found that many students under great pressure are shy and don’t like to communicate with others, so I think helping them become active is the key, and it’s a good choice to let them join study groups and sports activities. (运用了that引导的宾语从句、动名词作主语以及it作形式主语)
6．Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m writing to apply to study in your university. Today I had an opportunity to visit this
well-known university campus.I’m really interested in it.
I’m an outgoing girl and I can get on well with all my classmates. I do well in most of my subjects, especially in English. I like reading English poems and enjoy English movies.What’s more, I once won the first prize in an English speech contest held in our city and was honored the Best Speaker for my excellent performances. In the future, I intend to major in English. I want to have a job related to languages and I believe I can help promote cultural communication between China and the world.
When I stepped into the campus today, I was amazed to find there are many English corners, which are made up of foreign students and Chinese students.They practice spoken English by talking about everything they are interested in. I'd really like to join in these English corners. I think English corner is helpful to my study and future career. I will appreciate it if I am admitted into your university.
Yours,
Li Min 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给某大学的校长写一封英文自荐信，想报考这所大学。

【详解】1.词汇积累
著名的：well-known→famous
比赛：competition→contest
打算：intend to do→mean to do
与……有关：be related to→be correlated with
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I’m an outgoing girl and I can get on well with all my classmates.
拓展句：I’m an outgoing girl who can get on well with all my classmates.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
When I stepped into the campus today, I was amazed to find there are many English corners, which are made up of foreign students and Chinese students.（运用了连接副词when引导的时间状语从句和关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】
I will appreciate it if I am admitted into your university.（运用了if引导条件状语从句）7．Dear Mr. Wang,
I’m Li Hua, a senior three student from China. I’m writing to apply for your recently advertised position for a volunteer of 2022 Beijing Winter Olympic Games.
Among the three options, serving in tourist information center suits me best. Growing up in Beijing, I am pretty familiar with this city, including most of its places of interest, which makes me able to introduce them to foreign tourists. Besides, I have a good command of English, especially my oral English, which will come in handy when I communicate with people from all over the world. It will be a perfect opportunity for me to temper myself and participate Beijing Winter Olympic Games.
Please take my application into consideration. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给北京冬奥会筹备组负责人写一封申请信，申请成为志愿者。

【详解】1.词汇积累
选项/选择：option→alternative
熟悉：be familiar with→know well
机会：opportunity→chance
参加：participate=take part in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：It will be a perfect opportunity for me to temper myself and participate Beijing Winter Olympic Games.
拓展句：I always try to temper myself and participate Beijing Winter Olympic Games, so it will be a perfect opportunity for me.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Growing up in Beijing, I am pretty familiar with this city, including most of its places of interest, which makes me able to introduce them to foreign tourists. （运用了非谓语动词作状语和which引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2] Besides, I have a good command of English, especially my oral English,which will come in handy when I communicate with people from all over the world.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
8．Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Wangli from class one, senior three. I am writing to apply for the opportunity to help the students in Shiyan School with their English. Thus they can improve their English during the summer vacation. Meanwhile, I can learn how to get along well with the students and benefit the whole school. I long for participating this activity because after class activities are an integral part of school life. By going in for such activities, I can learn what I cannot learn from books, which will be beneficial to me in the future.
I’m upbeat, easy-going and always ready to help others. I wash clothes and make beds by myself to develop independence. English is my favorite subject and I have won several prizes in English contests. So I think that I am qualified for the position.
I plan to communicate with students first to know what they need. Besides, I’ll try to get them more interested in English by telling stories, singing songs, playing games and so on. Except teaching those students words or grammar literally, I will start share English news with them and read Hamlet to interest them about the charisma of language rather than improve their English scores merely.
I’d appreciate it if you could give me the opportunity.
Yours Sincerely,
Wang Li 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给校评选组一封申请信，申请到当地实验小学
为学生辅导英语。

【详解】1.词汇积累
机会：chance→opportunity
提高：promote→improve
渴望：yearn for→long for
计划做某事：intend to do sth→plan to do sth
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：English is my favorite subject and I have won several prizes in English contests. So I think that I am qualified for the position.
拓展句：I think that I am qualified for the position because English is my favorite subject and I have won several prizes in English contests.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I long for participating this activity because after class activities are an integral part of school life. (运用了because引导原因状语从句)
[高分句型2] By going in for such activities, I can learn what I cannot learn from books, which will be beneficial to me in the future. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
9．Dear Sir or Madam,
Hearing that our school will welcome some English students to stay with us, and that you are recruiting host families, I am writing to show my interest after a negotiation with my parents.
First, my parents and I can speak fluent English, which will enable us to communicate with the foreign students. Secondly, our house is big enough for him or her to stay. Furthermore, I live near the Huangpu River. It has a good view of Shanghai. Last but not least, in my home, he or she will experience much Chinese culture. My grandpa and grandma have a good command of handwriting which is also my hobby. My grandparents can teach the student handwriting and then he or she can learn more about Chinese culture. I think our hospitality will bring him or her an interesting and cozy experience in China.
Thank you for your reading during your busy work. I hope that you will consider my application.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给学校外事接待处写封申请信，申请充当外国留学生的寄宿家庭。

【详解】词汇积累
听说：learn→hear
体验：enjoy→experience
擅长：be good at→have a good command of
舒适的：comfortable→cozy
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：Furthermore, I live near the Huangpu River. It has a good view of Shanghai.
拓展句：Furthermore, I live near the Huangpu River, which has a good view of Shanghai.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Hearing that our school will welcome some English students to stay with us, and that you are recruiting host families, I am writing to show my interest after a negotiation with my parents. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] I hope that you will consider my application. (运用了that引导的宾语从句) 10．One possible version
Dear Mr. Lee,
I am Wangmin ,the president of the Environment Protection Association. In order to raise the awareness of protecting the environment among the teachers and students in our school, our association has decided to hold a “Less Plastics” activity during the sports meeting, so I am writing to apply for the permission and support for it.
As we know, using plastics has made great damages to our environment, which contributes to the urgency of improving the awareness of cutting down the usage of plastics. The “Less Plastics” activity will be help during our sports meeting days along the school path on the left side of the school playground from 10a.m. to 12a.m. For the success of this activity, we need some supports from school. First, we want to have some posters written the information about this activity on the school walls in these days. Besides, we still need 200yuan funds because we plan to make an environment protection protester and prepare some markers. I am hoping that you could consider my request for holding the activity and offer us the needy support.
Best wishes. I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
LiHua.【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。

假设你是中华中学的环保社团团长王敏，为了提升学校师生的环保意识，你打算在学校运动会期间，开展一次“减塑”社团活动，倡导全校师生减少塑料污染。

要求考生根据要求，向校长写一封开展本次活动的申请信。

【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：
➢ 社团活动的主题、目的、时间、地点等；
➢ 需要学校给予的支持。

第二步:列提纲（重点词组）
president; the Environment Protection Association; in order to; raise the awareness of; ; decide; apply for ; permission ; support; As we know; plastics; damage; contribute to; urgency; cut down ; success; First; posters; Besides; funds; protester; prepare; consider; request ; offer.
第三步：连词成句
1.I am Wangmin ,the president of the Environment Protection Association.
2.In order to raise the awareness of protecting the environment among the teachers and students in our school, our association has decided to hold a “Less Plastics” activity during the sports meeting, so I am writing to apply for the permission and support for it.
3.As we know, using plastics has made great damages to our environment, which contributes to the urgency of improving the awareness of cutting down the usage of plastics.
4.The “Less Plastics” activity will be help during our sports meeting days along the school path on the left side of the school playground from 10a.m. to 12a.m.
5.For the success of this activity, we need some support from school.
6.First, we want to have some posters written the information about this activity on the school walls in these days.
7.Besides, we still need 200yuan funds because we plan to make an environment protection
protester and prepare some markers.
8.I am hoping that you could consider my request for holding the activity and offer us the needy support.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表举例说明关系：First, Besides.
2.表并列补充关系：Additionally, moreover. (供参考)
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but. (供参考)
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result(供参考)
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。

【点睛】[高分句型1] In order to raise the awareness of protecting the environment among the teachers and students in our school, our association has decided to hold a “Less Plastics” activity during the sports meeting, so I am writing to apply for the permission and support for it. (使用so 引导结果状语从句。

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[高分句型2] As we know, using plastics has made great damages to our environment, which contributes to the urgency of improving the awareness of cutting down the usage of plastics.. (使用which引导定语从句。

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[高分句型3] Besides, we still need 200yuan funds because we plan to make an environment protection protester and prepare some markers. (使用because引导原因状语从句。

)。