新教材高中英语 Unit 4 Section Ⅳ Writing课件pptx新人教版选择性必修第一册

The men talked for hours on end.They spoke of their wives and families,their homes,their jobs,their involvement in the military service.Every afternoon when the man in the bed by the window could sit up,he would pass the time by describing to his roommate all the things he could see outside the window.The man in the other bed began to live for those onehour periods where his world would be broadened by all the activity and colour of the world outside.
One warm afternoon the man by the window described a parade passing by.Although the other man couldn’t hear the band—he could see it.In his mind’s eye as the
续写第二段首句是:他挣扎着看向床边的窗户外,令他吃惊 的是,窗外只是一堵空墙。由此可知,这让他意识到,病友所描 述的一切都来自想象。因此,本段应当主要写病友为他编织 了一幅美丽的画面,鼓励他,让他能够更积极地面对病情,以及 得知真相后他复杂的心理感受。
高分范文 Late one night as he lay staring at the ceiling,the man by the window began to cough.He watched in the room as the struggling man by the window searched blindly for the button to call for help.However,listening from across the room,he never moved.The following morning the nurse found the lifeless body of the man by the window.The other man asked if he could be moved next to the window.The nurse was happy to make the switch.
The window overlooked a park with a lovely lake.Ducks played on the water while children sailed their model boats.Young lovers walked arm in arm among flowers of every colour and a fine view of the city skyline could be seen in the distance.As the man by the window described all this in detail,the man on the other side of the room would close his eyes and imagine the beautiful scene.
Section Ⅳ Writing
读后续写 典题示例
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使 之构成一篇完整的短文。续写词数应为150左右。
Two men,both seriously ill,occupied the same hospital room.One man was allowed to sit up in his bed for an hour each afternoon to help empty the liquid from his lungs.His bed was next to the room’s only window.The other man had to spend all his time on his back.
gentleman by the window described it excitedly.
Unexpectedly,a strange thought entered his head:Why should he have all the pleasure of seeing everything while I never get to see anything?It didn’t seem fair.As the thought appeared the man felt ashamed at first.But as the days passed and he missed seeing more sights,his envy turned him sour and he found himself unable to sleep.He should be by that window—that thought now controlled his life.
Late one night as he lay staring at the ceiling,the man by the window began to cough.
He struggled to look out of the window beside the bed.Much to his surprise,it faced a blank wall.
2.分析关键词和所给段落首句,展开想象合理续写 续写第一段首句是:一天深夜,当他躺在床上盯着天花板的 时候,靠窗户的那个人开始咳嗽起来。根据本句及前文所述, 可预测本段应该写靠窗户病人的病情十分危急,这位心生嫉 妒的病人的做法以及由此产生的后果。由于续写第二段开头 提及他看到了窗外的真实景象,因此,本段最后要提到病友去 世,他要求移到窗边病床上。
写作指导
通读短文可知,故事发生在一所医院的病房里,主要人物是 两位病人。
1.理解全文,把握主线 通读短文可知,本文大意是:在一家医院的病房里住着两位 病人。其中一位病人经允许可以在每天下午起身坐上一个小 时。这位病人的病床靠近窗户,而另一位病人则不得不日夜 躺在床上。躺在窗边的病人每天向另一位病人描述他看到的 窗外的风景和故事。可是有一天听故事的病人开始产生嫉妒 心理,希望自己能够有机会看看窗外。