2021届高考英语写作满分技巧之句式升级

2021高考英语写作满分技巧之句式升级一：高考满分作文句式赏析
1．倒装句式能增分
倒装句是一种简单易行的使句子呈现亮点的方法。

开头用否定词、地点状语、only＋状语，so＋形容词/副词＋that，形容词＋as＋主语……
(2017·全国卷Ⅰ满分作文)So diligent are you that I'm more than delighted to teach you.
你这么勤奋我很乐意教你。

2．强调省略很精彩
强调句可以突出强调某一部分内容，吸引读者的注意，而省略句可以使句子更简洁、明快。

(福建卷满分作文)It is the spirit that the story conveys that really matters.
这个故事所传递的精神最为重要。

(2017·全国卷Ⅱ满分作文)As scheduled，an art exhibition will be held next Sunday in the local museum.
按照计划，下周日将在当地博物馆举行艺术展。

3．被动更能引人爱
被动语态符合英语表达习惯，如在文章中利用两个被动语态的句子，会使整篇文章句式丰富。

(全国卷Ⅰ满分作文)Your timely help will be very much appreciated by me.
我会非常感激你及时的帮助。

4．分词结构不可少
(2017·天津卷满分作文)To get admitted，I have made good preparations，trying to know as much as I could about my city.
为了被录取，我做了充分准备，努力深入了解天津。

4．虚拟语气表达妙
虚拟语气在写作中的使用可以使表达更委婉，更吸引阅卷老师的注意力。

Without your kindness and generosity，I would not have enjoyed myself so much when visiting England.
没有你的善良和慷慨，在英国旅行时我就不会玩得这么开心。

6．各类从句添亮点
(陕西卷满分作文)You mentioned you'd like to teach English in return，which is exactly what I'm dying for.(定语从句和名词性从句)
你提到作为回报你可以教英语，这是我一直期望的。

(2017·全国卷Ⅱ满分作文)My advice is that you should take this opportunity to participate in our school team.(名词性从句)
我建议你利用这次机会加入我们校队。

二：优秀篇章指导写作
假定你是李华。

你的笔友Tom给你写信咨询“如何在班级创设浓厚的汉语学习氛围”。

请你根据提示给他写一封英文回信。

内容包括：
1．宣传标语用英汉双语；
2．开设汉语角；
3．邀请汉语外教来学校上课。

注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

考生作文
Dear Tom，
How are you doing? I'm very glad to hear from you.From your letter, I know that your class will develop the students' interest in Chinese learning. I want to share some advice with you.
Firstly, all the signs and slogans in your class should be written both in Chinese and English, which can create an atmosphere to learn Chinese.Secondly, you should set up a Chinese Corner in your class, where you can practice your spoken Chinese.Finally，your class should invite some Chinese teachers to come to school to communicate with students.
I really hope my suggestions can be helpful for you.Looking forward to getting your good news soon.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
我来提升
1．利用高级词汇升级文中加黑体词汇
(1)very glad→_more_than_delighted__
(2)want to→_would_like_to__
(3)should→_are_supposed_to__
(4)be helpful for→_be_beneficial_to/be_of_great_benefit_to__
2．利用高级过渡词汇升级文中斜体的过渡词
(1)Firstly→_To_begin_with__
(2)Secondly→_In_addition/Additionally/Besides/What's_more__
(3)Finally→_Last_but_not_least__
三：课后练习
（A）
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。

你的美国朋友Jim得知你对探月感兴趣，发来邮件和你讨论该话题。

请你给他回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 月亮在中国文化中的寓意；
2. 你对人类探月活动的看法。

注意：1.词数不少于50；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

提示词：探月moon exploration
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua Dear Jim,
I am glad to share with you more details about my passion for moon exploration.
It started with what I had been told about the moon as a kid and grew stronger with time. As you can guess, there is rich cultural meaning behind the faithful companion of the earth. In Chinese culture, as opposed to the masculinity of the sun, the moon is often compared to a quiet and elegant lady. Also, it reminds people of their family and friends far away. People feel reassured knowing that they are watching the same moon as if the moon could serve as their messenger.
Human beings have never stopped exploring our closest neighbor. I believe it is of great significance. The development of relevant technology facilitates the progress of science in general, which benefits our everyday life. What’s more, I think moon exploration shows an important human trait, that is, curiosity about the unknown, which is the driving force that has brought our species this far.
I hope you find what I‘ve mentioned above interesting and reasonable. By the way, what do you think of when you gaze at the moon? Write back and tell me about it!
Yours,
Li Hua
（B）
假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Tim是中国功夫（kung fu）的爱好者。

你得知今年八月你所在的城市将举办一次国际功夫比赛。

请你用英语给他写封邮件，询问他是否有兴趣参加。

要点包括：
1.比赛的时间和地点；
2.比赛的目的；
3.参加比赛的益处。

注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。

Dear Tim,
How is everything going?
I will accompany you during the competition. I am looking forward to hearing from you;
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Tim,
How is every thing going? I’m writing to tell you that the 15th International Kung Fu Competition will be held in Nanjing from August 20th to 24th at Olympic Gymnasium.
As we know, kung fu is an important part of Chinese culture and has become increasingly popular at home and abroad. This event aims to further expand the influence of kung fu worldwide. The organizers hope people will feel the charm of kung fu in this competition.
I know you are a kung fu amateur. Are you interested in taking part in the event? You will be able to appreciate high-level kung fu performances and communicate with people sharing the same interest from all over the world. You can also improve your techniques.
I will accompany you during the competition. I’m looking forward to hearing from you
Yours,
Li Hua。