2015届初三上英语单元考试优秀作文选四

2015届初三上英语单元考试优秀作文选四
Unit 2
请你结合学习生活中家人、同学和自己对环境、节能做得不好的方面，以“How to be a greener person?”为题，重点谈谈如何成为一名环保卫士，并分析这么做的意义。

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初三2班吴心怡
How to be a greener person?
Attention, please! We are facing a serious environmental problem now! I find that people around me often waste water, throw litter around and do something bad to destroy the environment.
It’s a terrible situation. But how can we change it? I think the best answer is to be a greener person. So what should we do? First, in my opinion, we ought to walk or ride bikes instead of taking buses or taxis. Second, we should also reduce the waste we produce, plant more trees and reuse plastic bags. Last, it’s necessary for us to do everything we can to protect the environment.
With less pollution, our planet will be more beautiful and our lives will be better. Let’s be greener persons!
教师点评：主次分明，结构合理，内容紧扣主题，语言简洁明了。

初三3班林滟雯
How to be a greener person?
The earth is in danger because we humans have done something bad to pollute it. Some people around me often waste water, walk on grass and even spit in public. Maybe we can end the terrible situation by being greener persons. So what can we do?
First, we should avoid using plastic bags for shopping. Besides that, we should save and treasure every drop of water. Second, we ought to plant more trees, because trees are guards of nature. Last but not least, we must shut off the electricity right after we don’t need to use it.
If everyone does a few things to protect the environment, our earth may get back to its best time.
教师点评：本文语言连贯，过渡自然，连接紧密。

能紧扣题目要求，表达准确。

首尾前后呼应，增强了文章的整体感。

初三5班李汶霖
How to be a greener person?
Everyone knows the environment is important for us, but not everyone protects it well. For example, many students throw litter around. Some p eople don’t recycle the waster, including me. And I used to use plastic bags for shopping. All these are bad for the environment.
So we should start to be greener persons and do something good for the environment. I think the 3Rs-reduce, reuse and recycle are important. We should reduce the waster we produce and recycle some waste like paper cups and soft drink cans. On the other hand, use both sides of paper and reuse cloth bags instead of using new plastic ones when we go shopping. The 3Rs can protect the environment as well as save energy.
If everyone sticks to doing these, there will be a more beautiful city for us to live in. Let’s be greener people right now!
教师点评：整篇文章从破坏环境的不良现象到做环保使者的建议，不仅扣题，而且紧紧围绕减少垃圾，回收利用以及重复使用来写，中心明确，条理清楚。

而且文中对于一些短语运用自如（划线部分）。

初三7班何为
How To Be A Greener Person?
As we know, the environment is important for us, while some of us are doing something harmful to it.
At school, I often see my classmates throw litter around. They forget to shut off the lights when they leave the classroom. At home, I as well as my parents always waste water and paper. All we have done above are harmful to environmental protection.
But how can we be a greener person? Here are some suggestions. First, we should reuse water and paper instead of wasting it. Second, we should collect and sort soft drink cans and waste paper so that they can be recycled. Third, we should spread the message about protecting the environment and encourage more people to protect our earth.
If everyone becomes a greener person, there will be less pollution and the environment will become better. Easier said than done, let’s try to be greener people from now on!
教师点评：1、本文条理清晰，内容紧扣主题，结构合理。

2、正确地使用了一些已学词组（划线部分），做到学以致用。

初三9班许舒桓
How to be a Greener Person?
It is clear that there is lots of bad behavior that does harm to the environment. In our daily life, we often throw the rubbish here and there and make a mess of our classroom. We also forget to turn off the taps when we brush teeth. These Things we have done are harmful to the environment. We should take action to be a greener person.
First, we should learn to recycle the waste. For example, soft drink cans shouldn′t be simply thrown away as rubbish. They can be recycled. Recycling can protect the environment as well as save money. Second, we ought to ride bikes instead of driving cars when we travel a short distance. It′s a way of exercising at the same time. On the other hand, we can plant more trees in order to make the air cleaner.
In short, it′s easy to be a greener person if you set your mind on it.We all know that the environment problems are becoming worse and worse. After all, we only have one earth!
教师点评：1. 行文流畅，遣词恰当。

2.划线部分可借鉴。

3. 举措方面有自己的见解，不流于形式。

初三11班林航达
How to be greener person?
As we know, the environmental problems are becoming more and more serious. We should do something to be greener people.
In the past, we didn’t understand the importance of environmental protection. We walked on grass. Some factories poured waste water into the river. We used many plastic bags when we went shopping. The behavior above is bad for our environment.
Then what should we do? First, the three R’s——reduce, reuse, recycle are very important. Second, we should use cloth bags instead of plastic bags when we go shopping. Third, we ought to care for wild animals.
Easier said than done. Let’s try our best to be greener person s. I believe that if we do more to protect the environment, our lives will become more and more wonderful.
教师点评：1.文章结构合理，条理清晰，紧扣主题。

2.能恰当运用所学词组或句型，做到学以致用。