牛津译林版8B英语Unit 2 Travelling Task课件

Writing
Grading system
英语作文分四档。 第一档：（15-13分） 完全符合题目要求，观点正确, 要点齐全。句式多样，词汇 丰富。语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，具有逻辑性。 第二档：（12-9分） 基本符合题目要求，观点正确, 要点齐全。语法结构和词汇 基本满足文章需要。语言基本通顺，语意基本连贯，表达基本清 楚。虽然有少量语言错误，但不影响整体理解。 第三档：（8-5分） 部分内容符合题目要求，要点不齐全。语法结构和词汇错误 较多，语言不通顺，表达不够清楚，影响整体理解。 第四档：（4-0分） 与题目有关内容不多，只是简单拼凑词语，所写内容难以理 解。
want_s_h_o_p__p_i_n_g_. My mother enjoyed that day most. She
bought a lot of presents for our relatives and her friends.
Kitty’s trip to Hong Kong
We want to a seafood restaurant on the fifth day and had a (7)_d_e_l_ic_i_o_u_s_meal. The food in Hong Kong was really nice.
Unit2 Travelling Task
Get to know the structure of the article.
Be able to write an article about a trip or a holiday.
Kitty’s trip to Hong Kong Who attended the trip? Kitty and her parents. When did they go for the trip? During the winter holiday Where did they go? They went to Hong Kong.
Kitty’s trip to Hong Kong
The day finally arrived. My parents and I left for the airport in the early morning. It took us about three and a half hours to fly to Hong Kong.
what did they do? visit places of interest, go shopping ... How did they feel about the trip? They had a fantastic time.
Kitty’s trip to Hong Kong
When did they go for the trip? Where did they go? Who attended the trip? What did they do during the trip? How did they feel about the trip?
want_s_h_o_p__p_i_n_g_. My mother enjoyed that day most. She
bought a lot of presents for our relatives and her friends.
On the third day, we visited another famous theme park in Hong Kong—⑷_O_c_e_a_n__P_a_r_k_. We watched the (5)_d_o_l_p_h_in__s_h_o_w__and the bird show there. They were great fun.
On the fourth day, we visited some museums, and then we want(6)_s_h_o_p_p__in_g__. My mother enjoyed that day most. She bought a lot of presents for our relatives and her friends.
When Where Who What How
Structure of the passage
Main points
Details
Kitty’s trip to Hong Kong
When Where who what How
On the third day, we visited another famous theme park in
How
Other activities
Museums / Shopping
Eating
Delicious seafood
Kitty’s trip to Hong Kong
We enjoyed this trip very much, and I hope I can visit it again soma day.
When Where Who
What
Structure of the passage
Main points
Details
The winter holiday
Hong Kong
My parents and I
How
Kitty’s trip to Hong Kong
The next day, we went to the most famous theme park
1. Finish your writing 2. Recite the report
What did they do ?
Visiting places of interest
Disneyland Ocean Park
Other activities Eating
Visited museum Went shopping Delicious seafood
Structure of the passage
Main points When The winter holiday Where Hong Kong Who My parents and I
Details
What How
Visiting places of interest Disneyland/ Ocean park
Hong Kong—_O_c__e_a_n_P__a_r_k.We watched the d__o_lp_h_i_n__sh_o_w
and the birdshow there. They were great fun.
On the fourth day, we visited some museums, and then we
Hong Kong—_O_c__e_a_n_P__a_r_k.We watched the d__o_lp_h_i_n__sh_o_w
and the birdshow there. They were great fun.
On the fourth day, we visited some museums, and then we
Structure of the passage
Main points When The winter holiday Where Hong Kong Who My parents and I
Details
What Visiting places of interest Disneyland/ Ocean park
Main body What Ending
Other activities Eating feelings
Writing:
My best holiday
Main points When Where Who What
How
Details
Grading system
参考评分标准（满分15分）
信息清晰，包含五要点
Other activities
Museums / Shopping
Eating
Delicious seafood
How Enjoyed the trip
want to visit it again
The structure of passage
Beginning
When , where , who Visiting places of interest
_D_i_s_n_e_y_l_a_n_d. I loved watching the interesting_p_a__r_a_d_eof
Disney characters, andthe Space Mountain ride was
very_e_x_c_i_ti_n_g__.
On the third day, we visited another famous theme park in
Love our country, our hometown,our culture,our nature, our life. Protect them and enjoy them.
Structure of the passage
Main points
Details
Where Who What
4分
有细节描述
2分
单词拼写和词汇运用正确字迹工整、清晰
1分
Tips for travelling
1. Don’t throw the rubbish 2. Don’t pick the flowers 3. Protect the environment 4. Be careful with the safety 5. Pay attention to the weather 6. Call the police when having some danger …