高中英语 Module 4 Music Section Ⅳ Writing—写一

Module 4 Music Section ⅣWriting——写一封关于音乐的电子邮件
电子邮件的写法和普通信件的写作方式一样。

基本要素有称谓、正文、结束语以及署名。

内容要简明扼要，紧扣邮件中心，要按照事情的重要性安排叙述的先后顺序。

一、基本内容
写e­mail 和写英文信件相差不多，主要由称呼、正文和落款三部分构成。

1．邮件内容从问候语开始。

要根据与收件人的关系密切程度来选择适当的称呼语。

2．表明写作意图。

在邮件开头就要澄清写作意图，这样才能更好地引出邮件的主要内容。

3．语言应简洁明晰。

电子邮件篇幅一般不太长，因此简洁明晰的语言在表辞达意中非常重要。

二、增分佳句
(一)邮件开头常用句式：
1．I am glad to receive your letter.
2．How happy I am when I know...
3．Thanks for your letter, it's my pleasure to do...
(二)表达看法常用句式：
1．As far as I am concerned...
2．In my opinion...
3．As for me...
4．Personally, I prefer...
5．My own point of view is that...
(三)邮件结尾常用句式：
1．I look forward to hearing from you.
2．I would also like to know if you can/could...
3．I would be grateful if you could/would...
4．I will appreciate it if you can...
现在有许多选秀活动，因此有些学生不顾学业去参加这些活动。

假定你是李华，你的
网友 Mike 发e­mail 给你，说他想休学一段时间去参加一个选秀节目。

请回复 Mike，表明你的看法。

注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：休学 quit school 偶像 idol
Dear Mike，
I've heard that you want to quit school to attend the show Searching for Music Talent，
Best regards!
Yours，
Li Hua 分析
(1)excuse 借口
(2)reasonable 合理的
(3)disagree with 不同意
(4)be ambitious of/have the ambition of 渴望……
(5)be designed for 为……设计
(6)in short 总之，简言之
2．造句
(1)我听说你想休学去参加音乐选秀节目《寻找音乐天才》，我完全不同意你。

I've heard that you want to quit school to attend the show Searching for Music Talent, I disagree with you totally.
(2)我认为这不是一个很好的你放弃学习的借口。

(It is＋n.＋for sb. to do sth.;
give up)
It is not a good excuse for you to give up your study, I think.
(3)我知道现在越来越多的青少年有成为超级明星的志向。

(that 宾语从句；more and more)
I know that nowadays more and more teenagers have the ambition of being superstars.
(4)许多电视选秀节目是为能参加音乐比赛的青少年设计的。

(take part in; and 并列句)
A lot of TV shows are designed for teenagers and they can take part in lots of music contests.
(5)作为学生，我们应该做的最重要的事情是学习。

(定语从句)
As students, the most important thing we should be doing is studying.
(6)发展我们的业余爱好也很重要，但我们应该以一个合理的方式发展。

(动名词短语作主语；but 并列句)
Developing our hobbies is also important, but we should develop them in a reasonable way.
(7)简而言之，我们学习能懂得更多，这是很重要的。

(it is＋adj.＋that...)
In short，itisimportantthat we study to know more.
(8)这就是为什么我们应该关注学习。

(that's why; pay attention to)
Thatiswhy we shouldpayourattentionto our studies.
(9)把句(2)改为否定转移句
I don't think it is a good excuse for you to give up your study.
(10)把句(4)改为who引导的定语从句
A lot of TV shows are designed for teenagers who can take part in lots of music contests.
3．成篇
Dear Mike，
I've heard that you want to quit school to attend the show Searching for Music Talent，I disagree with you totally. I don't think it is a good excuse for you to give up your study.
I know that nowadays more and more teenagers have the ambition of being
superstars. A lot of TV shows are designed for teenagers who can take part in lots of music contests. As students, the most important thing we should be doing is studying. Developing our hobbies is also important, but we should develop them in a reasonable way.
In short, it is important that we study to know more. That is why we should pay our attention to our studies.
Best regards!
Yours，
Li Hua。