【英语备考】译林版中考英语书面表达应对技巧及训练(含答案)

一、中考英语书面表达汇编
1．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达
学校英语社团正在举办英语征文比赛，请你根据下表所列的内容要点，用英语以“Learn to Smile”为题写一篇短文，参加比赛。

注意：
1．短文须包括所有内容要点，不要逐句翻译；
2．表格中省略部分须用2至3句话作适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；
3．词数90左右。

短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
4．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

Learn to Smile
Smile is an attitude （态度） to life．
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Learn to Smile
Smile is an attitude to life．In our life, there may be something unpleasant．For example, we may fail in an exam or we may be laughed at for some reason．These unpleasant things may make us feel bad．Why not learn to smile? Smiling to ourselves can cheer us up and bring back our confidence．It can also make us forget our worries．We should also learn to smile to others．It will help us to get closer to each other and bring us friendship．So, smile is a language that everyone can easily understand．
【解析】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

文中使用了大量短语，例如in our life，may be，something unpleasant，for example，fail in，laugh at，why not，cheer up，help sb. to do，get closer to，each other等。

同时Why not learn to smile? / Smiling to ourselves can cheer us up and bring back our confidence./ It will help us to get closer to each other and bring us friendship.等多种特殊句式和非谓语动词结构的运用，使本文内容丰富，条理清晰，表达流畅，是短文的亮点。

点睛：这是一篇材料作文，根据提示内容可知用一般现在时，可把提示内容结合实际展开合理的想象，把它们翻译拓展成一个个英文句子。

还要注意在行文中使用一些常见的短语，会给习作增色。

2．（·江苏中考模拟）写作
81. 春天，许多人都喜欢参加各种户外活动。

为了倡导中学生接近大自然，某中学生英文报举办了一次征文活动，请你根据以下问题，用英语写一篇短文参加征文。

提示：1）What’s the benefit （好处） of outdoor activities? （1-2 opinions）
2）Which is your favourite outdoor activity? How and why? （1-2 examples）
3）What do we need to pay attention to when we do outdoor activities? （At least 1 suggestion）
要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；
3）词数：100词左右，开头已给出，不计入词数；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。

It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s great to get close to nature.
【答案】It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s a good way to get close to nature.
When we are outdoors and in the natural world, we can not only breathe fresh air and enjoy the beautiful scene, but also relax ourselves for the coming study or work.
There are many different ways we can get out into the natural world, such as hiking, cycling, camping and climbing. Cycling is my favourite. I join a cycling club, and often go out with other members. While cycling, we can forget our worries and have fun together. Also, we can learn to be a part of a team and help each other.
Whatever you do, remember to stay safe. When you’re outside, it’s better to b e with your parents or friends.
【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达以“outdoor activities”为话题，结合所给的写作材料，写一篇报刊征文稿。

根据内容提示可知本文会使用到一般现在时态，注意一些常见句式的应用。

写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后最好要表达出人物的感想和看法。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练、要点齐全。

文中in the natural world, not only…but also, get out, such as, also等词（组）的恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；本文还采用了丰
富的句型，比如：It is +形容词+（for sb.） to do sth.；There be句型；时间状语从句等复合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，这是一篇不错的范文。

3．（·天津中考模拟）书面表达
假设你叫李明，曾荣幸成为天津国际马拉松赛的一名志愿者。

请根据以下要点，用英文写一篇演讲稿，谈谈这一段美好的经历。

（1）年4月国际马拉松赛在天津举行；
（2）作为志愿者，赛前接受了培训；
（3）在闲暇时间里，和运动员用英语交谈，为他们提供帮助；
（4）和许多运动员成为了朋友，也了解了许多不同的文化；
（5）你认为……
参考词汇：志愿者 volunteer
要求：
（1）词数：80～100个。

（2）演讲稿的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

Ladies and gentlemen,
My name is Li Ming. I’m very glad to talk about my wonderful experience. Tianjin Interna tional Marathon________________________________________________________
【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,
My name is Li Ming. I’m very glad to talk about my wonderful experience. Tianjin International Marathon was held on April 4,.Before the game, volunteers were given a training. In our spare time, we talked to the athletes in English to help them.And we are friends with many athletes.At the same time,we also learn about many different cultures.
I think the experience is good for me.
【解析】
亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

文中使用了非常好的短语，例如be glad to do，talk about，Tianjin International Marathon，hold on，in spare time，talk to，in English，at the same time，learn about，different cultures，be good for等。

而Tianjin International Marathon was held on April 4,./Before the game, volunteers were given a training.等被动语态和I think the experience is good for me.宾语从句的运用，使本文内容丰富，语态多样，表达流畅，是本文的最大亮点。

点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

4．（·云南中考模拟）书面表达
I’d Like to Say “ ” to My
提示：即将毕业了，在你三年的初中学习和生活中，你有什么想要对家长、老师或者朋友说？有歉意、有感谢，有怀念还是其它？请以I’d Like to Say “ ” to My 为题，任选一位倾诉对象，用英语写一篇文章，谈一谈你的想法。

要求：1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
2.文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
3. 请将短文写在答题卡上。

写在本试题卷上无效。

【答案】I’d Like to Say “Sorry” to My Teacher
How time flies! I will graduate in a few months. I always feel sorry for one thing in my heart. I’d like to say sorry to my English teacher, Mrs. Chen.
When I began to learn English, I hated remembering new words. So I wasn’t g ood at English. Once I copied my deskmate’s paper during an English exam and handed it in. I got an “A”. Mrs. Chen didn’t know the truth and praised me in class. Now I still remember her words clearly, “ It’s a good beginning. I believe you will be better and better.” When I heard these words, I really felt regretful in my heart. I decided to tell Mrs. Chen the truth and say “sorry” to her after class. But I didn’t.
Since then, I have tried my best to learn English well. And my English is becoming better and better. But I’d like to say sincerely. “ Sorry, Mrs. Chen.”
【解析】这是一篇要求介绍你三年的初中学习和生活。

动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。

根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一人称，一般过去时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。

注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

5．（·天津中考模拟）根据联合国教科文组织的统计显示，北欧国家国民每年读书24本左右,美国人年均阅读7 本书，.韩国人11本书，日本、法国国民每年读书数量为8.4本左右，而中国国民人均读书数量低于5本。

你的阅读量是多少？作为一名中学生，你应该怎么做？请根据下列表格中所给要点，写一篇英语短文。

要求:1.文中必须包含表格中的所有要点,可适当发挥；
2.条理淸晰,字迹工整，词数不少于80；
3.文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息：
4.开头和结尾部已给出,不计入总词数。

参考词汇:身心健康：mental and physical health
Nowadays,reading is becoming more and more popular among us._____________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ __
Let’s be active readers and enjoy reading.
【答案】Nowadays，reading is becoming more and more popular among us．People often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the world．But I don't think so．In my opinion，to read books is more valuable than anything else．The old saying"To open a book is always helpful"clearly tells us how good it is to read a book．Books are our friends．They introduce us different kinds of knowledge．They lead us down the road to success．Books are our teachers．They teach us troth，science，literature，and philosophy of life．Besides，they increase our knowledge，enlarge our experience，strengthen our character and do many other things which we can not do without them．Books tell us what is good and what is evil．And only books can tell the good from the bad．Therefore to read more books is the best policy for our young students．
As a middle school student．I think we should read more books．Reading is good for our physical and mental health．
Let's be active readers and enjoy reading．
【解析】这是一篇材料作文，行文之前，把表格里的要点内容通读一遍，做出框架，开始写作时，把表格里所列内容全部表述到文章中，并且自己适当增加内容，注意人称、时态、单复数，词形的变化。

适当增加衔接词，使文章更出彩。

如对长句不好把握，就尽量使用短句。

6．（·重庆中考模拟）书面表达
我们在生活中总是面对着各种各样的压力，这会严重妨碍我们的学习和生活。

某中学生英文报正开辟专栏讨论中学生如何减压。

假设你叫李华，请从以下几个方面，用英语写出你的具体做法，向该栏目投稿。

1.与他人交流；
2.参加体育运动；
3.参加娱乐活动；
4.其它减压方式。

参考词汇：stressed adj.有压力的
注意：
1.词数80-120左右；
2.文中不得出现真实人名及学校名；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear editor,
There are many ways for us high school students to relax ourselves.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear editor,
There are many ways for us high school students to relax ourselves.As for me.when I feel stressed,I usually communicate with my friends,parents or teachers.Sometimes I will do sports with my classmates,such as riding bikes,going swimming and so on.I go to the movies or listen to light music in my spare time,too.What's more, going on a trip in holiday is another way to make me relaxed. I believe the more relaxed we are, the happier we live.We will be healthy and learn better .
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇要求介绍自己面对着各种各样的压力是如何做的。

动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。

根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一人称，一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。

注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

7．（·黑龙江中考模拟）Writing
现在视力不好的人越来越多，有的孩子很小的时候就戴上了眼镜。

从小保护好眼睛很重要。

六月六日是“全国爱眼日”。

请你结合实际生活写一篇题目为“It’s important to protect our eyes”的英文稿。

内容：（1）眼睛的重要性；
（2）保护眼睛的措施：①不要长时间读书看报；
②不要在太强或太弱的光线下看书；
③坚持做眼保健操。

要求：（1）词数在80〜100词之间。

2）要求字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。

It’s important to protect our eyes
_______________________________________________________________________________ _____________
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【答案】It’s important to protect our eyes
The eyes are the window of our mind. We use our eyes to see everything around us. Without eyes, nothing is left beside you but darkness.
How to protect our eyes? It’s not right to keep your eyes working for a long time. You’d better not read in strong or poor light. Don’t read in bed or on a moving bus. Remember to keep your books away from your eyes for about a foot and do eye exercises every day. What’s more, a balanced diet is necessary.
Follow my advice and form a good habit. It’s time to say goodbye to thick glasses.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇材料作文。

【详解】
根据题目要求可知，本文说的时态是一般现在时。

人称是第一和第二人称
英语作文一般是三段式
第一段：开篇点题，交代写作目的——保护眼睛的重要性，以及提建议
第二段：文章主体部分——保护眼睛的措施：
①不要长时间读书看报；
②不要在太强或太弱的光线下看书；
③坚持做眼保健操。

第三部分：再次点题，并提出号召——现在开始养成保护眼睛的好习惯。

8．（·安徽中考模拟）近来，美国总统特朗普的外孙女由于说一口流利的中文而成为“网红”。

你的美国朋友Sam 看过相关报道之后也很想学好中文,但是不知道该怎样做。

假如你是大明，请你根据以下提示写一封邮件给他,提一些关于如何学好汉语的建议。

要点提示 :
1.课堂上认真听讲,做好笔记;
2.不要害怕犯错误,与同学们用中文交流;
3.课下经常阅读中文杂志、报纸等,在网上看一些中文语言类节目;
4.经常用中文给外国笔友写电子邮件等。

注意 :
1.词数80-100;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息;
4.开头和结尾已给出,不计人总词数。

Dear Sam ,
I'm happy to hear from you. I know you want to learn Chinese well. Here are some suggestions. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________
In a word,if you have good ways of learning Chinese ,you will learn it well.
Yours
Daming 【答案】Dear Sam,
I'm happy to hear from you.I know you want to learn Chinese well.Here are some suggestions. First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class. Second, it's a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese. And don't be afraid of making mistakes. Third, you'd better read Chinese magazines or newspapers after class. You can also watch Chinese programmes on the Internet. I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation. Lastly, you can write emails to me or other Chinese friends in Chinese.
In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it well.
Yours,
Daming 【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以大明的身份给Sam写一封信，告诉他如何学好汉语，题目中从四个方面提出了建议。

通过审题可知，这是要求写一封建议信，内容应包括以下几个方面：首先应和Sam先做一个交流，然后引出写信的目的；接下来给出具体的建议，依据题目中给出的这四条，用正确的英语表达出来，还应注意补充一些内容，使文章更加充实；最后写一个适当的结尾，如希望建议对你有帮助等。

文章应使用一般现在时，根据表达需要使用恰当的人称。

写作时应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能按照汉语的思维逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。

应从句子的整体结构考虑，写完整的句子。

如可以较常见的主谓宾结构或主系表结构为主，简单句的句型可以使文章叙述清楚、简洁。

为提升文章档次，可以穿插使用并列句或复合句以及其他一些复杂句式。

语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文章意思连贯，表达流畅。

【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求给Sam写了一封信，对他的汉语学习提出了一些好的建议。

首先短文内容完整，包括了题目中要求的所有信息。

文章主要分成三个部分：第一段是与Sam之间的问候以及引出Sam学习汉语这一话题，并介绍写信的目的；第二段中是提出的具体的建议，这是这篇文章的主体，所在篇幅最大。

这一段中使用了First，Second，Third，lastly等词，叙述条理、有层次；最后一段用一句话对整篇文章做了总结。

其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称，句式结构符合英语的表达习惯。

语法规范、准确，用词得体。

文章中的语句以简单句结构为主，也使用了并列句和复合句，调整了文章
的结构。

文章中使用了较为丰富的短语和句型，如First, you should listen to the teacher and take notes carefully in class.、Second, it's a good idea to talk with your classmates in Chinese、I think it can help you to improve your pronunciation、In a word, if you have good ways of learning Chinese, you will learn it well.等等。

9．（·山东中考模拟）每一次变化都伴随着我们的成长，作为初中生的你，你感觉自已比起小时候有了哪些变化?请写一篇文章描述一下你认为最明显的变化。

要点包括: 1. 变化是什么?
2. 变化是如何发生的?
3. 变化后有什么感受?
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【答案】The biggest personal change I’ve ever made is falling in love with rendi ng.
When I was a child, I didn’t enjoy reading books at all. Later, my mother always read stories for me and bought me a lot of books. Gradually I began to love reading. While reading, I feel like I am talking with a wise man. Reading is also a fantastic way to pass my free time.
Books are my friends. They will continue to benefit me even more.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我比起小时候有了哪些变化。

【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：When I was……，my mother always read……，Gradually I began to……，Books are……等句式的应用。

写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。

写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

【点睛】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。

开头介绍了我最大的个人变化是喜欢上读书，接下来介绍我小时候不喜欢读书，最后指出现在书籍是我的朋友。

此处fall in love in, at all, buy sb sth, begin to do sth, love doing sth, feel like, talk with, continue to do sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

10．（·浙江中考模拟）书面表达
A small thing
提示：请根据所给题目“A small thing”写一篇英语短文，记叙一件你经历过的小事。

要求：1.语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁，词数100左右；
2. 文中不得使用你的真实姓名，校名，否则以零分计。

【答案】A small thing
It was a sunny and warm day. My father told me he would teach me how to ride a bike. I was so happy at first. However, I fell down on the ground. I cried loudly and wanted to gives up. My father smiled and said we should be a person who never give up. He encouraged me to stand up and continue. After one hour, I could ride the bike without the help of my father.
This is one small thing that I will never forget. It tells me that although we will have all kinds of difficulties in our life, we should never give up.
【解析】
【详解】
本文要记述自己经历过的一件小事, 在时态上用一般过去时。

本篇文章,首先开篇点题,指出事情发生的时间及所经历的事件。

It was a sunny and warm day. My father told me he would teach me how to ride a bike.中间部分叙述了时间发生的经过，词语at first，However,…. After one hour,的使用使整篇文章浑然一体。

最后一段是从这件小事中得出的感悟，It tells me that although we will have all kinds of difficulties in our life, we should never give up. 对这件小事进行了总结，更使文章在思想上得到了升华。

文章时态使用正确，表达准确，事件本身思路清晰，是一篇不错的文章。

【点睛】
认真审题，看清题目要求，在描述事件时，要注意清晰表达事情发生的开端，内容及结尾。

必要时要适当使用连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅，文章最后注意对整个故事进行总结，最好能够从故事中得出自己的感悟，在叙述故事的同时使文章具有思想性。

写完文章后注意检查有误单词拼写错误，语法使用错误，字数是否达到要求。

11．（·浙江中考模拟）今年我国首次将高考作弊列入刑事处罚，称为史上最严高考．此事引起社会广泛关注．作为一名中学生，请你根据以下提示，就"学生考试作弊"这一话题，谈谈自己的看法．
要求：
1．词数80-100；开头已给出，但不计入总词数．
2．文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其它相关信息，否则不予评分．
3．参考词汇：exam-room 考室exam-cheating 考试作弊 electronic products 电子产品 micro-earphones 微型耳机 competing environment竞争环境
It's very common for students to cheat in the exams．This year,our country has passed a law that fights against this kind of law-broken behavior．It is reported that …_______
【答案】It's very common for students to cheat in the exams．This year，our country has passed a law that fights against this kind of law-broken behavior．It's reported that some students carry some important information or notes into the exam-room．Some students copy others' answers．What's more，others use electronic products，such as mobile phones，micro-earphones to pass on the answers．
There are many reasons for students to cheat in the exam．Some students are too lazy to work hard．They want to get good grades in order to enter a good high school or a good university．Some students have too much pressure from their parents and teachers．They only want to make them happy．
In my opinion，it's dishonest of the students to cheat in the exams，and it's unfair for other students．In order to create a fair competing environment，we should say NO to the exam-cheating．
【解析】
【详解】
高分句型一：Some students are too lazy to work hard．一些学生太懒了而不努力学习．
句中使用了"too…to…太…而不能…"结构。

高分句型二：In order to create a fair competing environment，we should say NO to the exam-cheating．为了营造公平的竞争环境，我们应该对考试作弊说不．
高分句型三：it's dishonest of the students to cheat in the exams．学生考试作弊是不诚实的
句中使用短语有：“in order to do sth 为了做某事”，“say No to…拒绝…”，“copy others' answers抄袭他人的答案”，“get good grades取得好成绩”。

12．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达
南京阳光中学每年要接特来自世界各地的交流学生。

为了让他们更好地在南京学习生活，校学生会面向全体学生招募“阳光志愿者”。

假如你是李明，请根据下面招募广告，用英文写一封自荐信。

Volunteers Wanted
Required Qualifications
Good English and Chinese
Helpful, patient, outgoing
Good knowledge of Chinese culture
Duties
Teach Chinese＆introduce Chinese culture
Show exchange students around Nanjing
Working hours
4:00 p.m.-5:00 p.m. Wednesday, 8:00 a.m.-12:00 am. Sunday
Contact Info.
Ms. Yang Email: iindayang@
Join us!
注意：
1. 对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥。

2. 词数80左右，自荐信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数．
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等．
Dear Ms. Yang
I would to be a sunshine volunteer. ______________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ I will be very happy if I am chosen .to be a volunteer.. I'm really looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely
Li Ming
【答案】Dear Ms. Yang,
I would like to be sunshine volunteer.First I am good at both English and Chinese.And I am sure I can teach exchange students Chinese well.I am also helpful and I am always ready to help those in need.Besides,I am patient enough everything in detail.i have such a good knowledge of the Chinese culture that can help them know the beauty of it.I can make good plans for their trips because I know Nanjing well.I am outgoing and I think it’s easy for me to make friends with them,I am free from 4:00p.m. to 5:00p.m. on Wednesday.I can teach them Chinese during this time.I can also spend the whole Sunday morning showing them around Nanjing.
I will be very happy if I am chosen to be a volunteer.Iam really looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
【解析】
【分析】
这篇书面表达是写一封作学校“阳光志愿者”的自荐信。

【详解】
这是篇材料作文。

招募广告即写作的主要内容，考生可从自己是否满足招募要求入手。

在写作时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，这样才可以更好的驾驭。

同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。

13．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达
我的英语学习
初中即将毕业，你在英语学习方面积累了较多的经验与方法，请你向你的表弟介绍你的做法，根据下面表格中的内容，按要求用英语写一篇短文，
要求：1．语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
2．必须包含表格中所有内容，并作适当发挥
3．行文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；
4．词数80－100。

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________
【答案】My English Study
How time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.
First, listen more. Listening to the radio is a good way to learn English. We can relax ourselves by listening to English songs. Second, say more. Use spoken English when communicating with classmates. Speaking English can enhance the ability and confidence to learn English well. Third, read more English books. Reading can broaden our horizon and help us understand English culture. In addition, learn some grammar rules to better understand and use English. Finally, we can write about our daily life.
In a word, only when we develop interest in studying English can we learn it well.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如look back，listen to the radio，a good way to learn English，relax ourselves，communicate with，help sb. do，do more reading，in addition，in a word等。

而感叹句How time flies!，倒装句only when we develop interest in studying English can we learn it well.和复杂从句结构Use spoken English when communicating with classmates.的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。

在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得
到较高的分数。

14．（·天津中考模拟）请你根据以下内容提示，以“The Story of Lingling”为题，为社区宣传专栏写一篇短文，介绍在玲玲身上发生的一件事。

（1）上周晚饭后玲玲和妈妈一起出去散步，在社区的门口看见一个钱包；
（2）玲玲把钱包捡起，发现钱包里有身份证和一些钱；
（3）玲玲和妈妈把钱包交给保安，保安把这个消息发到小区的微信群中；
（4）失主看到消息后，过来取回钱包并对玲玲和妈妈表示感谢；
（5）你觉得……
参考词汇：社区 community 身份证 ID card 保安 guard 微信群 Wechat group 失主owner
要求：
（1）词数：80～100个。

（2）短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。

（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

The Story of Lingling
Last
week___________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________
【答案】The Story of Lingling
Last Friday, Lingling went out for a walk with her mother after supper. She saw a wallet at the door of the community. Lingling picked up her wallet and found that there were ID cards and some money in it. Lingling and her mother handed the wallet to the security guard, who sent the news to the microphone group in the community. When the owner saw the news, he came to fetch her wallet and thanked Lingling and her mother. .I think Li Hua did a good deed.We should learn from her.
【解析】
【详解】
本文是一篇给材料作文。

根据以下内容提示，以“The Story of Lingling”为题，为社区宣传专栏写一篇短文，介绍在玲玲身上发生的一件事。

文章时态用一般过去时，人称主要为第三人称。

本文所给材料比较详细，考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。

动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。

在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。

同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造。