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上海英语历年一二模考试作文样例分析连载3

上海英语历年一二模考试作文样例分析连载3说明：为了更好地展示不同档次的作文，我们并没有对学生作文中的错误进行修改。

所有作文中的涂改痕迹均来自于学生原作。

学生习作左侧附有行号，方便教师讲评。

样例3 2011年上海英语二模四区联考（静安、杨浦、青浦、宝山）试题：请简要描述图片，并结合图片内容谈谈自己的想法。

Composition AAccording to the picture, we can the young people carry a heavy bag, he and his parents was very worried, and they, try to let him go this way. There are two roads in the picture, one is personal interest and another is the pression of work. So it is hard for the people to try choose one.It is universal acknowledged to us that the world is face the financial crisis. So it is much 5harder to find a good job. Many parents are worried about their children’s future. But as far as I am concerned, compared with the pression of work, the personal interest is more important.For many college students, they also want to find a good job, and improve their living standards. But if the job is not satisfied with them, they will live a much harder work. They would will consider how to keep the job, and do a lot of things they don’t like. It is not only affect their health, But but also they will feel very pain for it.10However, when we choose the section course we like. We will devote ourself to it. We can feel happier when we listen attend the course. Though it may be that the course is not very hot, but if we learn it attentively, we can also learn it well. And I believe that all works of life must need excellent people. It is not necessary for a student to take the course that he has no interest in it.15We can see It is much better that the course you choose is very hot, and also you have interest in it. But if not, you should choose course according to your personal interest so you will not regret. After all, no one knows what happened in the future.(304 words)Composition BIn line with the picture given, we may figure out that they boy is standing on the crossroads between ‘job pressure’ and ‘personal interest’. His parents are urgently persuading him to take a better job and they takes no notice of the heavy burden on his back.Feeling sad about the boy, I reckon that a good personal interest is way more important than a 5decent job.Though I have to admit that once we get a well-paid job, our life quality will be improved, riches and fame are no equal to success. They will bring no mental benefit to us and will only make us more greedy.Persuing a personal interest, however, is the true genius of life. Every man is an individual 10who has no similarities with others — we are to ‘live’ rather than ‘survive’. We are to live out the values of life! Life isn’t about money, but happiness. If we all do what we want to do, we will live happier and more meaningful.Going forward, those who can really make their mark on the world are not those who have a good job, but those who are willing to live with their interests guiding them. Bill Gates, for 15instance, he dropped out halfway at Harvard and started to make the business he liked —computing. He is the model of all mankind!The time has come for every person to cultivate a personal interest, It is served as the compass through the darkest of storms. It helps us cut through the complexity of life to find a solution. It is the personal interest that enables us to live on our own out loud!(277 words) Composition CAccording to the picture, the little boy is struggling between two different choices of life —whether to follow his own interest or to meet the pressure of job. On the side of the road stand his own parents, shouting and waving flags in order to persuade him to meet the needs of the society.The boy, with all other burdens on the back, was quite dizzy as to taking which direction.5As far as I’m concerned, parents should let the children do the job themselves. Children may depend on parents when they are alive. But they will never grow up and try to live on their own two feet. In the long run, kids have to make the choice themselves. What’s more, with the input of their parents, kids may choose the way that actually they don’t prefer. Even if the road leads to success, they will never live a happy life. What a pity! Let them fly, and they will give you surprise!(164 words) Composition DHave you ever meet the situation like this? If you are a senior 3 student and your parents hope you can do more well in future, so you have a heavy bandon in your way, one is the pressure of working and the other is your interesting. How will you handle the situation?Maybe this is the general situation in senior 3 students’ life. Then the most important thing is 5what is the way for us to choose? I think your interesting is the most important things. If you can choose your favorite way you will feel happy and then you will never give up. Eventually you’ll reach the success.As is a senior 3 student, I hope every one can choose their interesting and reach their goal.(128 words )Composition ENow a lot of students can ’t choice the job what they like. why? Frist, it ’s difficult to find a job in nowadays. More and more peope lost their job. In addition, students ’ parents must hope their child find a good job and make a lots money, but they never care for the child ’s hobble.In my opinion, I agree with student find the job due to their hobble. they must work hard because they are interested in this job. All in all, it ’s very important that students should find the5 job by theirselves.(93 words )Composition FOnce upon a time, I was having dinner with people from all walks of life. During the dinner, someone raised the question what do you want to be when you grow up . You-name-it-we-have-it answers were given by the kids present — doctor, lawyer, president, with the exception of a little girl, who, to my surprise, answered: “I just want to be an ordinary mother.”Mesmerized! I ’m totally mesmerized! Nowadays, many people, the boy in the picture as a5 typical example, are in a dilemma whether to follow their own interest or to follow the mainstream. Many people choose to follow the mainstream, sacrificing their own dream. Stupid, stupid indeed! Money can give up so-called pleasure only in a short time. In the long run, people enjoy life by taking satisfaction in their own field.Wake up, human, and follow your own heart! 10(141 words )Teaching steps©P.F. Productions 版权所有保留一切合法权利™本内容附教师版，有需要者请通过上述e-mail 索取。

(完整word)2018年上海高三英语二模文章分析(12)

高考文章分析（12）Vocabulary Learning:1.underway在进行中2.on the set of the NBC comedy Superstore在NBC喜剧《超级商店》的片场NBC: 美国广播公司（National Broadcasting Company)3.craft精心制作4.post上传5.ahead of the comedy’s second-season return在喜剧第二季的回归之前6.struggle to reach young audiences努力迎合年轻观众7.turn to求助于8.Internet followings网络追随者9.as a means of generating awareness作为一种产生关注的方式10.seize on the strategy 利用这个策略[siːz]mercial-skipping跳过商业广告12.ad-blockers广告屏蔽13.recommendation推荐[,rekəmen'deɪʃ(ə)n]14.higher ratings更高的收视率15.executive执行官[ɪgˈzekjʊtɪv]16.build brand awareness and reputation建立品牌意识和声誉[repjʊ'teɪʃ(ə)n]17.online content platform网络平台18.count拥有19.tune in收听，收看20.review video games评论电竞游戏21.perform magic tricks表演魔术22.pursuit追求，爱好[pə'sjuːt]23.in the employ of受......雇佣24.marketing push市场推广25.decline to do拒绝去做某事26.range from......to从......到27.gift baskets礼盒28.entertainment company娱乐公司29.cast influencers 投资网络红人30.a bit of a gamble有点像赌博['gæmb(ə)l]31.business model商业模式32.show’s rating s节目收视率 ratings电视收视率34.box-office returns票房收入35.acting skill演技36.take on jobs担任工作37.both parties双方38.the credibility of a campaign活动的可信度[kredɪ'bɪlɪtɪ]39.definitely aware一定意识到['defɪnɪtlɪ]40.be tempted with 受.......诱惑41.fit with the image of the creator符合创造者的形象42.put on上演长难句分析：①And when Superstore gave its first public show, it did so to higher ratings than the last show of Season 1.它确实做到了，达到了更高的收视率比起第一季②Yet as social media stars consider whether to take on jobs promoting movies and TV shows, there’s an important consideration for both parties: the credibility of a campaign.但是，当网络红人考虑是否担任宣传电影或电视节目的工作时，有一个重要的考虑就是活动的可信度。

上海英语历年一二模考试作文样例分析连载5 - 2013上海高三浦东一模

上海英语历年一二模考试作文样例分析连载5样例5 2013届上海英语一模浦东新区Composition AAfter watching the picture myself, I can ’t help but look down upon the cat who says that “such time we live in! Why would you catch mice when we are given fish?”It reminds me of China ’s current situation. Nowadays, China ’s rising in a speed that has never been before. But that doesn ’t mean that we could sit and enjoy the fruits of China ’s rise. Under no circumstances could we indulge ourselves into the present life which seems to be5 wonderful without thinking that there may be potential danger hidden somewhere around us. If we didn ’t realize it, we will gradually leave the basic skills we already have behind. In this way, when someday there does come emergency, we will lose the power to face and defeat it.In conclusion, we need to be prepared whether it is good or bad.(141 words )Composition BThe picture generally describes a family of cats, who are enjoying their dinner which is fish. When one of the cats is trying to catch a mouse when given fish, another cat flattered him by saying that “why catching mice when given fish?”In my opinion, the cat is wrong, definitely! In our study, for example, we always get help from our classmates, sometimes in exams. We take it for granted that whenever we are stuck in5 trouble, there’s gonna be someone ready to help, we are wrong, like the cat. There is not someone like Lei Feng who is always ready to help others in this century. If we rely too much on others ’ help, one day when we don ’t get it and we do not have the skill to do it ourselves, we are dead! Why would you catch micewhen we are given fish?I want to say to the cat: you may laugh at the cat who chases the mice, but one day you’ll be10laughed at when you lose the skill to catch mice yourselves. Always remember: He who laughs last laughs best.(178 words) Composition CThe comic strip show a funny story happened between several cats. While one of the cats is catching mice when fed with fish, another cat asked why he did so when given fish.It catches my eye that it never occurred to the cat that one day they had to leave home and fed themselves. In other words, parents will pass away one day and at that time those cats will have no 5choice but to live on their own two feet. But if they don’t learn the skills that are required for survival, they will fail to be independent.It is an alarm for all the teenagers about my age, some of which are living in paradise with their mom handling housework and father chores. They refuse to do anything as long as they’re done by someone else. They fail to understand the importance of “practical skills”. When they 10cannot find anyone to look to, they will regret what they’ve done now.(163 words) Composition DWe can see from the picture that a cat doubts another cat’s behavior of catching mice when given fish. As far as I’m concerned, his behavior is quite understandable. Our learning experience can account for this.Some of the students are not satisfied with the school life for it teaches a student with nothing 5but knowledge. Thus, they focus on finding part-time jobs and skip classes from time to time, just like the cat who catches mice in the picture. As far as I’m concerned, it’s no need. As long as we are given knowledge (“the fish”), we should focus on it as long as it will contribute to our future life. If we are distracted from it and pay too much attention to practical experience, we forget that certificate does count in most cases.10In this sense, we need to first finish our main job first before we decide to do other things.(154 words) Composition EIt can be seen from the picture that the third cat from the left is questioning whether it is a must to chase a mouse or not when we are given fish. In my opinion, there is definitely a need to do so.It echoes with what military training is trying to teach students to do. During high school and 5college time, it is required in the curriculum that each individual should take part in the military training in order to graduate from the school and most students feel it disgusting to bear. But actually, we need not only knowledge but also real-life experience & technique which can be learned from social activity like military training and volunteer works. We may fail to feel that these things are of great importance until we are faced with enormous difficulties or challenges 10one day.Just like the cats who are given fish, we may fail to understand the brilliance of the cat who chases mice. But only when we have to catch fish ourselves will we understand the importance of it.(179 words)Composition FThe cat in the picture is questioning another cat the reason why the cat is chasing the mice at dinner. Likewise, many modern people are questioning whether it is needed to teach citizens the escape skills when we’re lived in a safe place.Or are we?5I think we still remember the big fire occurred in 2010 at Jiaozhou Rd, which took awaynearly 100 people’s life. Only afterwards do we begin to realize the importance of escape skills. It alarms us that there is a strong possibility that we may be stuck in such a condition one day. And if we don’t pick up these skills beforehand, we may fail to survive. And I’m serious.From this, we may conclude that it’s better that we figure out the importance of certain skills 10before certain disasters happened to us later on. If we take the cat who laughs at another one as an example, we may have a sad ending just like him!(163 words)Teaching steps™©P.F. Productions 版权所有保留一切合法权利本内容附教师版，有需要者请通过zhucanqi@163.。

上海英语历年一二模考试作文样例分析连载7 - 2014上海高三普陀一模 (学生版)

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Composition A During high school life, one must have already experienced one school activity or another. While some are good, others are not. all, high school activities, generally speaking, extend our horizons and expose ourselves to the environment that we haven’t been before. My
样例 7 试题：
有的校园活动让你兴奋不已，有的校园活动让你感到枯燥乏味。请描述你参与过的一次校园活动，并简单谈谈你对该活动的看法。 • • 请具体描述一次你参与过的校园活动；并谈谈你对此次校园活动的看法或它对你的影响。
The following are compositions written by the examinees of the test, each with its own pros and cons. Try to improve the compositions by finding out their pros and cons.

上海英语历年一二模考试作文样例分析连载6 - 2013上海高三嘉定一模

上海英语历年一二模考试作文样例分析连载6✧考试技巧指导一、上海英语高考作文是否需要写标题？许多学生会有这样的疑问：上海英语高考作文需要写标题吗？毋庸置疑，如果作文有一个较好的标题，能使阅卷老师一开始就了解写作的内容。

但由于英语的标题，有其固定的表达方式，也有其固定的大小写习惯。

许多的学生并没有在高中时期学过如何根据提示写一个标题，因此对于这些学生来说，加一个作文标题也无疑是画蛇添足之举。

何况上海高考英语作文的评分标准中也没有将“标题”列入，所以对于不懂得如何写标题的学生，不建议冒险写标题。

当然，试卷已给出了标题的情况另当别论。

✧考试样例分析样例6 2013届上海英语一模嘉定区试题：Composition AI do agree the behavior that some provinces in China are taking of recycling textbooks.First of all, China is a country with a large population. Printing out textbooks for each individual will cost a lot. Thus, using textbooks is a good way to cut down costs, for both students and country. Second, textbooks from others are usually full of useful note, which is quite 5beneficial to us. Thus, using textbooks saves us the time and energy used to take notes. Last, by using what has already been used, students can know the importance of being frugal. It is a good lesson students can draw from recycling textbooks.(108 words)Composition BIt is said that nowadays more and more provinces in China are deciding to recycling textbooks. On hearing the news, I can’t see eye to eye with it.There is no denying that recycling the textbooks can cut down costs, but there is still another side of the story. As we all know, textbooks used by others must be full of words written by others.As a result, those notes will make the used textbooks look a mass, which will cut down the 5readability of the book.In addition, the notes taken on the books can always be troublesome. Students tend to think it unnecessary to be attentive at class as far as there is note on the textbooks. Thus, another problem arisen from recycling textbooks is the reduction in students’ attentiveness in class.10Last but not the least, not all textbooks can be recycled. Books used as exercise books should never be recycled.In one word, there are more cons than pros when it comes to recycling books. We need to balance the pros and cons when it comes to recycling books.(183 words) Composition CRecently, whether recycling books should be promoted in China has raised much debate among teachers and students. As far as I’m concerned, I do agree that it should be promoted. My reasons are listed as follow.First of all, in my opinion, trees, one of the main components of books, are precious elements 5given by Nature. Thus, reducing the production of books is equal to reducing the usage of trees, which protects the environment. It is assumed that it takes more than 80,000 trees to simply provide students in Shanghai for one year’s textbooks. If these textbooks are recycled, we literally saved 80,000 trees.In addition, using recycled textbooks doesn’t cost as much as using new textbooks. Children 10can use the saved money to buy candies and toys they like rather than wasting money on something that is expensive.Although those books are used, but we should treat it carefully so that more children can reuse the book.(158 words) Composition DBooks are humans’ friends. It is reported that many provinces in China have called on people to reuse what have been used instead of buying brand-new textbooks every time, which I can’t agree more.First of all, trees play an important role in producing books. The less the books are produced, 5the more trees are saved. Therefore, using textbooks that have already been used is helping to protect the environment actually. What’s more, books, though important in study, turn out to be a big burden for parents as it usually cost a large sum of money, especially to those who live in remote or underdeveloped area. Thus, using second-hand books, which cost less, helps to alleviate the burden of money. From all the above advantages, we can see that recycled textbooks are quite 10useful.And while we are reading those used books, we cannot be too careful to protect these books so that more students can be used. It is actually telling us to be both economical and considerate for others.(171 words) Composition EHave you ever count how many books you have used and then dropped throughout the yearsat school? Countless, right? But you are not alone. Everyone did so. Then the amount total will be an astronomical figure. If those books are recycled and reused, that will definitely be a good thing.Thus, many areas in China have adopted the plan of recycling textbooks. Students are nolonger forced to buy textbooks. They can use the recycled textbooks. More areas are thinking of5 doing this.As for me, there are at least two good points. One, it can reduce the usage of trees and protectthe environment. Two, it can lessen the cost of the textbooks. In this sense, not only the parents but also the environment benefits through recycled books.In my opinion, if the plan is carried out smoothly, even other kinds of books, like magazines,10 should also be recycled.(151 words )Teaching steps©P.F. Productions 版权所有保留一切合法权利上海英语历年一二模考试作文样例分析制作单位：P.F. Productions版权所有制作人：fyw, Mr. Jellyfish™本内容附教师版，有需要者请通过zhucanqi @ 索取。

2019届上海高三英语二模汇编--概要写作(解析版)

2019届高三英语二模汇编——概要写作1、2019黄浦二模Directions:Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.DesertificationDesertification is one of the world’s most alarming processes of environmental degradation（退化）. The issue is often unclear, however, by a common misperception: that it’s a “natural” problem of advancing deserts in faraway developing countries. In fact, desertification is about land degradation: the loss of the land’s biological productivity, caused by man-made factors and climate change.Each year, desertification and drought cause an estimated $42 billion in lost agricultural production. The risks of desertification are sufficient and clear. It contributes to food insecurity, hunger and poverty, and can give rise to social, economic and political tensions that can cause conflicts, further poverty and land degradation. The great urgency of this challenge led the United Nations General Assembly to state 2006 to be the International Year of Deserts and Desertification (IYDD). It is a strong reminder of the urgent need to address the far-reaching implications of this problem. United Nations General Secretary recently summarizes in this way: “I look forward to working with Governments, civil society, the private section, international organizations and others to focus attention on this crucial issue, and to reverse the trend of desertification and set the world on a safer, more sustainable path of development.”The IYDD also presents a golden opportunity to get the message across strongly and effectively that desertification is a global problem which we ignore at our risk. It is important to recognize that dry-lands are home to some of the most magnificent ecosystems of this world. These unique natural habitats have been home to some of the world’s oldest civilizations. They stand like open-air museums, bearing witness to bygone eras. The Year will therefore also celebrate the delicate beauty and unique inheritance of the world’s deserts.参考答案：Desertification means land degradation due to man-made causes and climate change. It may cause problems like conflicts, poverty and land degradation. So 2006 was stated to be IYDD as a reminder of the serious problem and call for joint efforts to develop the world sustainably. The IYDD also reminds us of the risk, the beauty and civilization/inheritance of the deserts.难度：偏难解析：首先细读原文。

2018年上海高三英语二模文章分析(12)

2024年上海中考英语二模各区英语作文

2024年上海中考英语二模各区英语作文全文共3篇示例，供读者参考篇1Title: English Composition on the 2024 Shanghai Junior High School Second Mock ExamIntroduction:The 2024 Shanghai Junior High School Second Mock Exam has recently taken place, with students across different districts participating in the English section. This important test serves as a pivotal moment for students as they demonstrate their English proficiency and skills in reading, writing, listening, and speaking. In this essay, we will explore the performance of students in various districts and analyze the trends and patterns observed in the English compositions.District Analysis:1. Huangpu District: In the Huangpu District, students demonstrated a strong command of the English language in their compositions. The essays were well-structured, with organized paragraphs and coherent arguments. The use ofvocabulary and grammar was commendable, reflecting the students' dedication to language learning.2. Xuhui District: Students in Xuhui District showcased creativity and originality in their English compositions. The narratives were engaging and imaginative, capturing the reader's attention from start to finish. The students' efforts to incorporate idiomatic expressions and literary devices were evident, adding depth and richness to their writing.3. Jing'an District: Jing'an District students impressed examiners with their analytical skills and critical thinking in their English compositions. The essays were thought-provoking and insightful, reflecting the students' capacity to engage with complex ideas and concepts. The use of evidence and examples to support arguments was particularly noteworthy, showcasing a high level of intellectual maturity.4. Yangpu District: Students in Yangpu District exhibited a strong grasp of English language fundamentals in their compositions. The essays were clear and concise, with a focus on accuracy and precision in communication. The students' attention to detail in grammar and syntax demonstrated their commitment to excellence in writing.Conclusion:Overall, the performance of students in the 2024 Shanghai Junior High School Second Mock Exam English section was commendable. The dedication and hard work of students across different districts were evident in their compositions, reflecting their commitment to academic excellence. As students continue to hone their English language skills, they will undoubtedly achieve success in the future.Through the analysis of English compositions from various districts, we have gained valuable insights into the strengths and areas for improvement in students' writing abilities. With continued practice and support, students will undoubtedly excel in the English language and achieve their academic goals.篇2The 2024 Shanghai Middle School English Second Model Examination was held across various districts in the city. Students from different schools participated in the exam, showcasing their English language proficiency and skills. The exam comprised of various sections including reading comprehension, grammar, vocabulary, writing, and listening.In the reading comprehension section, students were required to read a series of passages and answer questionsbased on the information provided. The passages covered a wide range of topics including technology, environment, culture, and society. Students had to demonstrate their ability to understand and interpret written English texts.The grammar section tested students' knowledge of English grammar rules and usage. They were required to identify errors in sentences, choose the correct tense or form of a verb, and complete sentences with the appropriate words or phrases. This section assessed students' understanding of sentence structure, verb conjugation, articles, prepositions, and more.The vocabulary section focused on testing students' knowledge of English words and phrases. Students were required to match words with their definitions, fill in the blanks with the correct words, and choose synonyms or antonyms for given words. This section assessed students' ability to understand and use a wide range of vocabulary in different contexts.The writing section challenged students to express their thoughts and ideas in written form. They were given prompts or topics to write essays, letters, or reports. Students had to demonstrate their ability to organize their ideas, use appropriate language and grammar, and communicate effectively in English.The listening section tested students' ability to comprehend spoken English. They listened to recordings of conversations, interviews, lectures, or other audio materials and answered questions based on the information presented. This section assessed students' listening skills, including their ability to understand accents, tones, and nuances in spoken English.Overall, the 2024 Shanghai Middle School English Second Model Examination provided students with a comprehensive assessment of their English language skills. It challenged students to showcase their proficiency in reading, writing, grammar, vocabulary, and listening. The exam aimed to evaluate students' ability to communicate effectively in English and prepare them for future academic and professional endeavors.篇32024 Shanghai Junior High School English Second Model Exam Essays in Various DistrictsIntroduction:The 2024 Shanghai Junior High School English Second Model Exam has been held in various districts, testing the students' English language skills. In this article, we will reviewsome of the essay topics and the performance of students in different districts.District 1:In District 1, one of the essay topics was about the importance of protecting the environment. Students were required to discuss the causes of environmental pollution and suggest ways to protect the environment. Most students in District 1 performed well in this essay, showing a good understanding of the topic and providing relevant examples to support their arguments.District 2:In District 2, students were asked to write an essay about the benefits of reading books. They were required to explain why reading is important and how it can benefit individuals in various aspects of their lives. Students in District 2 demonstrated a strong grasp of the topic and showcased their writing skills by presenting well-structured and coherent arguments in their essays.District 3:In District 3, the essay topic focused on the impact of technology on young people. Students were asked to discuss thepositive and negative effects of technology on teenagers and provide recommendations on how to use technology wisely. While some students struggled with organizing their ideas, overall, students in District 3 showed a good understanding of the topic and offered insightful perspectives on the issue.District 4:In District 4, students were required to write an essay about the importance of education in today's society. They were asked to discuss the role of education in shaping individuals' lives and the benefits of receiving a quality education. Students in District 4 excelled in this essay, demonstrating a strong command of the English language and presenting compelling arguments to support their views.Conclusion:Overall, students across different districts performed well in the 2024 Shanghai Junior High School English Second Model Exam essays. They displayed a good understanding of the topics and showcased their writing skills by presenting well-structured and coherent arguments. The essays reflected the students' ability to think critically and express their ideas effectively in English, highlighting their proficiency in the language.。

上海英语历年一二模考试作文样例分析连载2

上海英语历年一二模考试作文样例分析连载2说明：为了更好的展示不同档次的作文，我们并没有对学生作文中的错误进行修改。

所有作文中的涂改痕迹均来自于学生原作。

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样例2 2010届上海英语一模杨浦区试题：常言道：“种瓜得瓜，种豆得豆”（As a man sows, so shall he reap），请根据你的亲身经历或身边的事例谈谈这句话带给你的启示。

Composition AAs the old saying goes, as a man sows, so shall he reap. People are usually rewarded or punished for what they have done. Life is not made up of a series of coincidents, but of a chain of consequences.How close we are to our destinations of our dreams depends on how deligent we are. How 5well we do in the exams depends on how hard we work during the term. How well we get along with others depends on how sincere and warm-hearted we are in the daily life. Our manners towards something and the way we choose to do it have influences upon our whole life.Let’s take Nathan and Spencer for instance. Nathan loves to read about everything in books as much as he can, while Spencer only pretends to be knowledgeable and talkative. When they 10both took part in the contests, Nathan got the second prize and Spencer got the score that was way behind average. As the example shows, people will get what he deserves for his behaviors.Fortune may bring the opportunity to be successful, but only hard work can help us to succeed. Just as the saying implies, no pains, no gains. So we should remember that “as a man sows, so shall he reap”.(213 words) Composition BAs a man sows, so shall he reap is regarded as a idiom and almost everyone of us know it. I think it is ture and I have experienced it, through my english study. I was very poor at english. I always failed in english examinations. I think it is not due to my study talent. It should be due to my attitude to english study. I was determined to change my attitude on english study. I began to 5listen english every night. In order to improve my listening skill; I take my english homework seriously. In order to improve my writing skill; Besides, I began to read english newspaper. Aftera long time, I found I began to love english and my english’s talent has been imp roved, I was sohappy. From then on, I have paid more attention on english study.I have a good mark in english last term. I was so proud of myself, and I think it is a receive10for my hard working.I will always to try my best to do everything because I t hink “As a man sows, so shall hereap”.(190 words) Composition CIt is say: “As a man sows, so shall he reap”. I think it is very ture. Because of I can look about same thing is the seem for this word in the life.The first time I had saw two children plant different vegetables. The one plant the cucumber.The other plant the tomato. In the end, the plant cucumber out of the cucumber the plant tomato 5out of the tomato. so I can say “As a man sows, so shall he reap”.Second. I am listen to my friend say. There are two people have played basketball. It is one by one’s compare. The one is strong. The other is weak. the strong one is very good for play the basketball, so the result the winner is the strong one.The end I can understand the word “As a man sows, so shall he reap” is truth.(149 words) Composition DWhen it comes to the traditional saying that “as a man sows, so shall he reap”. I always think of my hardworking friend and my poorest subject.One year ago, both of us had a tough enemy — maths. We hated it and it also gave us a poor grade as a reward. It was not until we had done the worst in our class that he suggested us sparing 5no effort to defeat it.Since then, we did more maths homework and practised it everyday. We had lots of difficulties completing the exercise. But after one month, we made some progress. I felt satisfied with myself and stopped working hard. There was every reason for me to relax while he did not give up studying. By the end of that term, he had done much better than me on maths.10I was so regretful, we sowed at the same time but only he took care of the plant andcultivated it carefully. Finally, I realized the ture meaning of this saying, even though it was after my failure.(179 words) Composition EEvery time I read the sa ying that “As a man sows, so shall he reap”, I can’t help recalling the story happened between my classmate John and Peter.John was a more gifted student than Peter. Talented as John might be, he took it for granted that he could do a good job in exams, and therefore, he neglected his studies and played more. 5Peter, on the contrary, focused his attention on learning, neglecting sleep and meals. Undoubtedly, John’s mark turned out to be really poor, while Peter made great progress.I draw a lesson from the opposite examples of John and Peter. It is what they have done thatcauses their ends. Only by sowing and watering can one reap. Without efforts, one has no opportunity to be successful easily.10It is a clear warning to us all. We should bear it in mind and apply it to practice.(150 words)Composition FAs an old saying goes: As a man sows, so shall he reap. It’s pretty true and I learn this motto from the celeb Well Lee.The first time Lee enrolled in the Superboy competition, he was eliminated. The judge told him that only have a good look can’t make it through the competition. But he didn’t lose heart. He 5continued his journey of music. During the journey, he learned to be independent by doing part-time jobs; he learned to improve his singing skills by listening to the sample disk thousands of times. Three years later, he returned to the stage of Superboy. This time, the story was a lot different. He not only proved himself to be the right person, but also made it to the finale of the competition. The judge, who scolded Lee for his not-that-good singing, looked at him with totally 10new eyes.Actually, there is nothing that is totally beyond reach. As long as you try, you will get the result you deserve.(168 words)Teaching steps™©P.F. Productions 版权所有保留一切合法权利本内容附教师版，详见正或供稿！。

上海历年中考英语范文及点评一(2010~2023)

2010上海中考作文题目：Write at least 60 words about the topic “I’m proud of myself”.（以“我为自己感到自豪”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。

）（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。

）Use the following points as reference.（以下内容仅供参考）What kind of person are you?What makes you proud of yourself ? (Give an example/examples)Why are you proud of yourself?范文一I am a hard-working and determined person. I am proud of myself for my accomplishments in English. I used to find English difficult. However, I studied hard, practiced every day, and gradually improved. Last year, I won an English speech competition in my school. My hard work had finally paid off. I am proud because I didn’t give up, despite the difficulties. Th is experience taught me that with hard work, I can overcome challenges and achieve my goals. This is why I am proud of myself.点评：上文很好地表达了题目“我为自己感到自豪”的主题。

上海英语历年一二模考试作文样例分析连载4 - 2013上海高三徐汇一模

上海英语历年一二模考试作文样例分析连载4 样例4 2013届上海英语一模徐汇区Composition AAs for Xiao Ming’s behavior, I think it is really silly for him to ask for a mobile phone like iPhone 5. It is even sillier to be upset for his parents’ turning down.As far as I’m concerned, students’top priority should always be studying. He/she should always focus the attention on the study rather than thinking about playing or following the trend.What’s more, it is mentioned that Xiao Ming wanted to change his mobile phone simply because 5he thinks that his mobile phone is out-of-date, which, in my humble opinion, thinks his behavior nothing but ridiculous. Even if we are rich now, never can we forget to be economical in reality.Since it’s not broken or out of order, there is no need to change.(128 words) Composition BDear Xiao Ming,I’ve heard that you are suffering from your parents’ not allowing you to buy the iPhone 5. As your classmate, I felt a pity that you’re struggling to get your dream realized. But, at the same time,I really don’t think buying iPhone 5 is such a good option, especially for you.5You know, youngsters of your age are all using iPhone 5 now. It has already become the mainstream. Do you think using iPhone 5 is really innovative? Definitely not! As the new generation, we need to develop our own ideas instead of following others’steps. What’s more, since your parents disapprove of your buying iPhone 5, why not trying other brands? In my opinion, other brands are far better than simply iPhone 5.10If you have more questions about choosing mobile phone, feel free to contact me via email.I’ll be more than willing to pull you out of your misery.Yours sincerely,Zhang Lin-lin(160 words)Composition CDear Xiao Ming,It is said that your parents don’t allow you to buy the iPhone 5 in place of your old cell phone.And you are upset simply because it. As for me, I think that is quite understandable.Young kids like us are always trend-followers. Thus, we should definitely feel free to buy 5anything we want. I think your parents may be quite old-fashioned, or even too conservative for not allowing you to buy a new cell phone. We’re in the age of doing so. They should give us more freedom instead of more restriction.Thus, in my opinion, you need to stick to your goal in order to survive the battle with your parents. Be courageous to follow your dreams no matter what obstacles you meet with along the 10way, as long as these dreams are not off limit. I will be your great back-up and I’m willing to be a persuader. Be free to contact if your parents are still stubborn.Yours sincerely,Li Hua(169 words) Composition DDear Xiao Ming:I’ve heard you’re not happy as your parents disapprove of your behavior of buying a new cell phone. Although I can understand how you feel right now, I must point out that you need to listen to your parents’ words.5You know, your parents are senior to us not only in age but also in experience. They do have every reason to prevent you from buying iPhone 5. What’s more, we children are still not employed. In other words, we did not contribute anything to the family. But we are asking this and that and become annoyed if our wish is not fulfilled by the parents. We need to think in our parents’ shoes.10As your classmate, I’m not against your dream. But what I’m trying to express is that you can work hard and make big progress in your study so that your parents are more than willing to buy you a iPhone 5 simply as a reward in which both you and your parents are satisfied, which, I think, turns out to be a far happier ending than the present one.Yours,15Li Hua(186 words) Composition EMing:I know you’re having some quarrel with your parents and I understand that you really wantthe brand-new iPhone 5. However, while I do respect your own feelings, I can’t 100% agree with what you’re doing.5After all, we are nothing but kids. Thus, first thing we should do is not purchasing but studying. Before we demand parents to buy anything for us, we need to first succeed in doing our own job in a serious and good way.Thus, before you demand anything from your parents, we need to produce products that satisfy them. So, I recommend first make progress in study then ask for things. Don’t make that 10too much expensive. Otherwise, your parents won’t have enough money to buy it.Good luck!Lee(127 words)Teaching steps™©P.F. Productions 版权所有保留一切合法权利本内容附教师版，有需要者请通过zhucanqi@163.。

徐汇二模英语2022作文范文

徐汇二模英语2022作文范文深度解析与仿写**英文部分：**In the era of rapid technological advancements, the integration of technology into our daily lives has become an inevitable trend. The 2022 Xuhui District Second Model Test English writing prompts us to reflect on the impact of technology on interpersonal communication and its consequences for individuals and society. In this essay, I will delve into the complexities of this issue, examining both the positive and negative aspects of technology's influence on communication.Firstly, let us consider the benefits of technology in enhancing communication. The advent of social media platforms such as WeChat, Twitter, and Facebook has revolutionized the way people stay connected. These platforms allow us to communicate instantly with friends and family, regardless of their geographical location. Furthermore, they provide a venue for expressing opinions, sharing ideas, and building communities around shared interests. The ease of access to information through theinternet has also facilitated knowledge sharing and collaboration among individuals.However, the rise of technology has not been withoutits downsides. One significant consequence is the declinein face-to-face communication. With the prevalence ofdigital communication, people often prefer to text or tweet their thoughts and feelings instead of engaging in meaningful conversations. This trend can lead to a decrease in empathy and understanding among individuals, as they become accustomed to communicating through screens rather than face-to-face.Moreover, the constant stream of information and notifications from social media and other digital platforms can be overwhelming. This constant bombardment of stimuli can make it difficult for individuals to focus and concentrate, affecting their productivity and mental well-being. Furthermore, the rise of cyberbullying and online harassment has led to a rise in psychological issues such as anxiety and depression, particularly among the younger generation.The impact of technology on interpersonal communication is further exacerbated by the rise of echo chambers. These are online spaces where people only encounter opinions and viewpoints that align with their own, leading to a lack of exposure to diverse perspectives. This can foster a culture of intolerance and divisiveness, hindering social cohesion and progress.In conclusion, while technology has brought remarkable benefits to our communication capabilities, it has also presented significant challenges. The key lies in finding a balance between leveraging technology's advantages and mitigating its negative impacts. We need to cultivate the habit of engaging in face-to-face communication, practice digital detox, and seek to expand our horizons by exposing ourselves to diverse viewpoints. Only then can we harness the full potential of technology to enhance our interpersonal communication and foster a more connected and understanding society.**中文部分：**在科技飞速发展的时代，科技融入我们的日常生活已成为不可逆转的趋势。

2024浦东中考二模英语作文分析

2024浦东中考二模英语作文分析Analysis of 2024 Pudong District Second Mock Exam English CompositionIntroductionThe 2024 Pudong District Second Mock Exam English Composition aimed to test students' ability to express their ideas in written form. The topics covered a range of issues that are relevant to students' lives, such as education, technology, and the environment. In this analysis, we will discuss the common themes and structures found in the compositions, as well as provide some tips for improving writing skills.Common themesOne of the common themes found in the compositions was the importance of education. Many students wrote about their experiences in school, the challenges they face, and their hopes for the future. Some students also discussed the role of teachers and parents in supporting their education. By focusing on this theme, students were able to demonstrate their understanding of the importance of education in shaping their lives.Another common theme was technology. Students wrote about how technology has changed their lives, both positivelyand negatively. Some students discussed the benefits of technology, such as increased communication and access to information. Others highlighted the dangers of technology, such as addiction and privacy concerns. By exploring this theme, students were able to show their critical thinking skills and their ability to analyze complex issues.StructuresIn terms of structure, many students followed a similar format in their compositions. Most essays began with an introduction that presented the topic and stated the writer's opinion. This was followed by several body paragraphs that supported the writer's opinion with examples and evidence. Finally, the essays ended with a conclusion that summarized the main points and restated the writer's opinion.While this structure is effective for organizing ideas, some students struggled with coherence and clarity. To improve, students should focus on connecting their ideas with transitions and providing clear explanations for their examples. Additionally, students should pay attention to grammar and punctuation to ensure that their writing is clear and easy to read.Tips for improvementTo improve their writing skills, students should practice writing regularly and seek feedback from teachers or peers. By writing in different styles and on a variety of topics, students can learn to adapt their writing to different situations and audiences. Additionally, students should read widely to expand their vocabulary and improve their understanding of sentence structure and grammar.In conclusion, the 2024 Pudong District Second Mock Exam English Composition provided students with an opportunity to demonstrate their writing skills and express their ideas on a range of topics. By focusing on common themes, following a clear structure, and seeking feedback for improvement, students can continue to develop their writing skills and become more effective communicators.。

2023浦东英语初中二模作文解析

2023浦东英语初中二模作文解析全文共3篇示例，供读者参考篇1Analysis of the 2023 Pudong English Junior High School Second Model EssayContext:The 2023 Pudong English Junior High School Second Model Essay was designed to test students' proficiency in English writing skills. The essay prompt was "The Importance of Environmental Protection" and students were asked to write a 300-word composition expressing their thoughts and ideas on the topic.Analysis:Overall, the essays submitted by students demonstrated a good understanding of the importance of environmental protection and the need for individuals to take action to preserve the environment. Many students discussed the impact of human activities on the environment, such as air and water pollution, deforestation, and habitat destruction, and emphasized the urgency of addressing these issues.However, there were some common weaknesses in the essays that could be improved upon. For example, some students had difficulty organizing their ideas coherently and structuring their essays effectively. It was important for students to have a clear introduction, body, and conclusion in their composition to ensure that their ideas were presented logically and persuasively.Another common weakness in the essays was the lack of specific examples and evidence to support the students' arguments. While many students made general statements about the importance of environmental protection, they often failed to provide concrete examples or statistics to back up their points. Incorporating specific examples and evidence can make an essay more convincing and help to strengthen the students' arguments.Additionally, some students struggled with grammar and vocabulary issues in their essays. It was important for students to pay attention to their use of tenses, word choice, and sentence structure to ensure that their writing was clear and accurate. Checking for errors and revising their essays carefully could help students improve the overall quality of their writing.Recommendations:To improve their writing skills, students should focus on developing their ability to organize their ideas effectively, provide specific examples and evidence to support their arguments, and pay attention to grammar and vocabulary usage. Teachers could provide students with writing prompts and exercises to practice these skills, as well as feedback and guidance on how to improve their writing.In addition, students could benefit from reading sample essays and discussing them with their classmates to learn from each other's strengths and weaknesses. By engaging in peer review and collaboration, students could gain insights into how to improve their own writing and become more confident and proficient writers.Overall, the 2023 Pudong English Junior High School Second Model Essay provided students with an opportunity to practice and develop their English writing skills. By addressing the common weaknesses identified in their essays and implementing the recommendations provided, students could enhance their writing abilities and become more effective communicators in English.篇2Title: Analysis of 2023 Pudong English Junior High School Second Model CompositionThe 2023 Pudong English Junior High School Second Model Composition test was conducted recently, and students have since been eagerly awaiting their results. In this analysis, we will take a closer look at the composition topics, writing styles, and common errors made by students in this year's exam.First and foremost, the topics for the composition test this year were diverse and thought-provoking. The themes ranged from personal experiences, opinions on current events, to creative writing prompts. This allowed students to showcase their creativity and critical thinking skills in various ways. Some students excelled in expressing their unique perspectives on the given topics, while others struggled to convey their ideas clearly and coherently.In terms of writing styles, students demonstrated a wide range of abilities in structuring their compositions. While some students effectively used introduction, body, and conclusion paragraphs to organize their thoughts, others failed to maintain a logical flow and coherence in their writing. Additionally, some students showed a lack of vocabulary variety and sentencestructures, resulting in repetitive and monotonous phrasing throughout their compositions.Common errors found in students' compositions included grammatical mistakes, spelling errors, and lack of punctuation. These errors often hindered the clarity and readability of the students' writing, making it challenging for readers to understand their intended messages. Furthermore, some students struggled with proper word choice and sentence construction, leading to awkward and confusing passages in their compositions.Overall, the 2023 Pudong English Junior High School Second Model Composition test provided students with an opportunity to showcase their writing skills and creativity. While some students excelled in expressing their ideas effectively and coherently, others struggled with organizing their thoughts and conveying their messages clearly. By analyzing the composition topics, writing styles, and common errors made by students in this year's exam, educators can identify areas for improvement and provide targeted feedback to help students enhance their writing skills in the future.篇3Title: Analysis of the 2023 Pudong English Junior High School Second Mock ExamIntroduction:The 2023 Pudong English Junior High School Second Mock Exam is an important assessment for students in preparing for their final exams. This exam covers a range of topics and skills that students have been learning throughout the school year. In this analysis, we will break down the exam and discuss some key points to help students better understand their performance.Reading Comprehension:One of the key components of the second mock exam is the reading comprehension section. This section tests students' ability to understand and analyze written texts. Students are presented with a variety of passages, including fiction,non-fiction, and informational texts. Questions may ask about main ideas, details, vocabulary, and inference.To succeed in this section, students should focus on reading the questions carefully before reading the passage. This will help them identify key points to look for while reading. Additionally, students should pay attention to vocabulary words and context clues to help them understand the meaning of unfamiliar words.Writing Section:The writing section of the exam is another important component that tests students' ability to communicate effectively in written form. Students may be asked to write a narrative, descriptive, or argumentative essay. In this section, students should focus on organization, grammar, vocabulary, and clarity of ideas.To excel in the writing section, students should carefully plan their essay before writing. They should create an outline with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion. Additionally, students should use a variety of sentence structures and transitions to connect ideas.Listening Comprehension:The listening comprehension section of the exam tests students' ability to understand spoken English. Students may listen to dialogues, monologues, or lectures and answer questions based on what they heard. To succeed in this section, students should practice active listening by focusing on key details and taking notes.Speaking Section:The speaking section of the exam assesses students' ability to communicate orally in English. Students may be asked to participate in a conversation, give a presentation, or respond to questions. To excel in this section, students should speak clearly, confidently, and fluently. They should also show their understanding of the topic and use appropriate vocabulary and grammar.Conclusion:In conclusion, the 2023 Pudong English Junior High School Second Mock Exam covers a range of skills and topics that are essential for students' success in English. By understanding the key components of the exam and focusing on key strategies, students can improve their performance and achieve their academic goals. Good luck to all students preparing for the exam!。

2023年杨浦区初三英语二模作文范文

杨浦区初三英语二模作文范文深度解析与仿写English VersionThe Path to Success: The Role of Perseverance and PassionIn the journey of life, success is not merely a destination, but a continuous process of growth and learning. This journey often requires perseverance and passion, two essential ingredients that are crucial for achieving our goals. The story of Thomas Edison, the inventor of the light bulb, provides a profound example of this truth.Thomas Edison was not born with any special talents or privileges. He was a regular boy who had a passion for inventing and a determination to succeed. His journey to inventing the light bulb was fraught with challenges and failures. He faced criticism and doubt, but he never gave up. Instead, he chose to persevere, learning from his mistakes and improving upon his designs.Edison's story teaches us that success does not come easily. It requires hard work, dedication, and the courageto face failures. Perseverance is what keeps us going when the road becomes tough. It is the driving force thatpropels us forward, even when we encounter obstacles and setbacks.However, perseverance alone is not sufficient. Passionis equally important. Passion is what fuels our desire to achieve our goals. It is the fire that burns within us, driving us to pursue our dreams with dedication and enthusiasm. Without passion, we may lose motivation andgive up easily when faced with difficulties.To achieve success, we must cultivate both perseverance and passion. We should set clear goals and work tirelessly towards them. We should also maintain a positive attitude, learning from our failures and celebrating our achievements. Most importantly, we should never lose sight of our passion. It is what will keep us going, even when the road ahead seems daunting.In conclusion, success is not a matter of chance or fate. It is the result of perseverance and passion combined.By staying focused, working hard, and never giving up, we can achieve our goals and reach the pinnacle of success. Let us draw inspiration from Thomas Edison's story and embark on our own journey of success, fueled by perseverance and passion.Chinese Version成功之路：毅力与热情的作用在人生之旅中，成功不仅仅是一个目的地，更是一个不断成长和学习的过程。

杨浦区二模英语作文范文

杨浦区二模英语作文范文解析与仿写In the realm of English writing, the essay exemplars from Yangpu District's second mock examination serve as beacons of excellence, guiding students towards mastering the art of coherent and profound compositions. These essays, often downloaded and referenced by numerous learners, embody the hallmarks of a well-structured and insightful piece of writing.Firstly, the essays excel in their ability to capture the reader's attention from the outset. An engaging opening sentence, whether it be a thought-provoking question, avivid description, or a poignant anecdote, sets the tonefor the entire essay and piques the curiosity of the reader. This initial hook is crucial in drawing the audience into the writer's world and ensuring that they remain engaged throughout the piece.Furthermore, the essays demonstrate a mastery of language and vocabulary. The writers employ a range of sophisticated words and phrases, using them accurately and appropriately to convey their ideas. This not only enhancesthe overall readability of the essay but also showcases the writer's proficiency in the English language.In terms of structure, the essays adhere to a clear and logical framework. They typically begin with anintroduction that outlines the main points to be discussed, followed by a series of body paragraphs that delve into the details of each point. Each paragraph is well-organized,with clear topic sentences and supporting evidence. Finally, the essay concludes with a summing up of the main arguments and a thought-provoking conclusion that leaves the reader with a lasting impression.Moreover, the essays exhibit a depth of analysis and understanding of the topic. The writers do not simply regurgitate facts or opinions but rather offer their own insights and perspectives on the subject matter. They critically evaluate the information presented and draw connections between different ideas, demonstrating a high level of critical thinking.Lastly, the essays are polished and free of grammatical errors. The writers take care to use correct punctuation,spacing, and capitalization, ensuring that their essays are visually appealing as well as intellectually stimulating. Drawing inspiration from these exemplars, I have attempted to craft my own essay that incorporates the key elements of excellence outlined above.---**杨浦区二模英语作文范文解析与仿写**在英语写作的领域里，杨浦区二模考试的英语作文范文是卓越的典范，它们指引着学生们走向掌握连贯而深刻文章结构的艺术之路。

2023浦东英语初中二模作文解析

2023浦东英语初中二模作文解析及高分范文**English Version****Title: Unlocking the Depths of the 2023 Pudong English Junior High School Second Mock Exam Essay**In the realm of academic assessments, the Pudong English Junior High School Second Mock Exam holds a significant place. This exam not only serves as a barometer for students' progress but also provides an opportunity to identify areas of strength and weakness. The essay section, particularly, demands a high level of proficiency in both language comprehension and expression.The essay prompt for the 2023 exam was a thought-provoking one, asking students to reflect on the importance of teamwork in achieving success. This topic is relevant and timeless, as the value of collaboration and teamwork is universally recognized across various fields.To approach this essay effectively, students should have first identified the key elements of the prompt. They needed to understand that the essay was asking them todiscuss the significance of teamwork in achieving success, highlighting examples from their own experiences or those of others. This required a careful analysis of the prompt and a clear understanding of the expected outcomes.In writing the essay, students were advised to adopt a logical structure, beginning with an introduction that briefly introduced the topic and stated their opinion. The body of the essay should have consisted of well-developed paragraphs that supported their argument with specific examples and explanations. It was essential to use transition words and phrases to connect ideas smoothly and maintain a logical flow.The conclusion should have summarized the main points and reinforced the argument, leaving the reader with a lasting impression. It was also important to proofread the essay for grammatical errors, typos, and inconsistencies in tense or voice.A high-scoring essay would have demonstrated excellent command of the English language, including vocabulary, grammar, and sentence structure. It would have shown a clear understanding of the prompt, with relevant andinsightful examples that supported the argument. The essay would have been well-organized, with a logical flow that kept the reader engaged.Here's an example of a high-scoring essay that addresses the 2023 Pudong English Junior High School Second Mock Exam prompt:"The essence of success often lies in the collaboration and teamwork among individuals. In my opinion, teamwork is fundamental to achieving success in any endeavor. It is the synergy of diverse talents, perspectives, and efforts that leads to remarkable achievements.I recall my participation in a school project where we were divided into groups to create a presentation on atopic of our choice. Initially, there were diverse opinions and differing approaches to the task. However, through teamwork and collaboration, we were able to merge our ideas and create a unified presentation that was both innovative and engaging. This experience taught me the importance of listening to others, respecting diverse opinions, and working together towards a common goal.Moreover, teamwork fosters a supportive and motivating environment. When working in a team, individuals are encouraged to push their boundaries, take risks, and learn from their mistakes. The support and encouragement fromteam members help build confidence and momentum, which in turn leads to better performance and achievements.In conclusion, teamwork is an indispensable componentof success. It enables individuals to pool their resources, talents, and efforts to achieve remarkable results. It fosters a supportive and motivating environment that leadsto better performance and personal growth. Therefore, I firmly believe that teamwork is the key to unlocking the depths of success."**Chinese Version****标题：解析2023年浦东英语初中二模作文及高分范文** 在学术评估领域，浦东英语初中二模考试具有举足轻重的地位。

上海市宝山区近年届高三英语二模试题(含解析)(最新整理)

Curiosity is part of human nature. Children are famous for wanting answers____1____tons of questions。 People keep reading or watching____2____they want to find out what happens. But curiosity also provides many practical benefits.
Even if you don't plan to be an inventor of researcher， curiosity can still help you in the classroom。 If you develop the joy of learning， classes will become more fun。 And you'll excel because you will be fully engaged in the process of learning. Even if you're no longer a student, curiosity will make you better____6____（inform）and thus a more capable worker.
【4题详解】
考查名词性从句。句意：人们想知道过程是如何起作用的,或者某些任务是如何更有效地完成的.该空引导wonder的宾语从句，且根据句意，该空表示“如何”,故应用how引导该从句，故填how。
【5题详解】
考查非谓语动词.句意：由于他们的好奇心，人们现在对这个世界了解得更多了，并且有了有用的技术来分析他们。____5____（help）them作定语，修饰useful technology. have sth。后面常接动词不定式作定语，故填to help.

2020-2021学年上海高三英语二模汇编--写作优质范文汇编

2020--2021学年高三英语二模写作题目及范文汇编One【虹口区】Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.76. 假定你是明启中学的高中生李华。

某电视台线上学习节目打算增设两个栏目。

初步拟定从“Reading for Fun”、“Textbook Learning”、“Homework Guidance”、“Online Listening”以及”Questions and Answers”五个栏目中选取两个，特此向所有在线学习者征求意见。

请你给电视台写封邮件，推荐两个栏目。

邮件内容须包括：1.你推荐的两个栏目；2.你推荐这两个栏目的理由。

【试题解析】英语作文是高考英语试题的压轴，也是大家关注的话题。

纵观近几年的高考英语作文，不难发现大部分都是在考察学生的主观表达能力，给与了学生较大的自由发挥空间。

此题目，就电视台线上学习节目增设两个栏目提出建议并说明其理由。

首先，从体裁上来看是学生十分熟悉的书信格式，首先提出增设哪两个栏目建议，同时需要在主体部分写出提出建议的理由，属于综合性体裁；所提出的建议要讲的有理有据，充分合理，得到一定的认可。

【参考范文】Dear Tv ProducerHearing that your programmes wants to add two concepts and is asking for every online learners’ advice, from my point of view, online listening and questions and answers will be good choices.For one thing, online listening is very suitable for the online studying programme. Not only can it improve listener’s listening skills, but also can help listeners maintain a long term practice. As we all know, everyone is busy in his or her daily life and long term study is hard for them to keep. If the online listening programme is added, out of question listeners can lay a solid foundation for their English listening.For another thing, question and answers concept can evolve a more lively and interesting study air. In this concept, learners can ask others about their problems and then can be solved. What’s more, this programme can motivate learners to communicate with others and broaden their horizons.In short, as a fan of your programme, I wholeheartedly hope that these two concepts can be added in the coming programme.Yours SincerelyZhang HuaTwo【黄浦区】Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.学校图书馆正在改造，拟添置打印机、扫描仪和咖啡机这三项设备中的一项，并打算购买一些装饰物品来美化环境，目前学生会在广泛征求意见。

上海市杨浦区2020-2022年中考英语二模试题分类汇编：话题作文(含解析)

上海市杨浦区2020-2022年中考英语二模试题分类汇编话题作文2022年上海市杨浦区中考二模英语试题X. Writing（作文）（共20分）64. Write at least 60 words on the given situation（根据以下情境写不少于60个词的论坛帖子及回复等，标点符号不占格。

）阅读D篇的论坛帖子中谈到了生活中发生的一些尴尬事件。

假设你是Sandy，请在论坛中发帖，讲一个发生在自己身上的尴尬事件，并设想你的朋友Jill会如何与你互动，写下你们之间的一问一答。

注意：1．文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。

2．照抄阅读语篇不得分。

Sandy 25 October 9.00 p.m._______________________________________________________________________________ __________________Jill 25 October 9.05 p.m._______________________________________________________________________________ __________________Sandy 25 October 9.08 p.m._______________________________________________________________________________ __________________2021年上海市杨浦区中考二模英语试题X. Writing（作文）（共20分）VII. Writing（作文）（共20分）84. Write at least 60 words on the given topic “________ has changed me”. (以“________ 改变了我”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。