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慎小嶷：十天突破雅思写作范文大赏

慎小嶷:十天突破雅思写作范文大赏精研优秀范文而后反复练习反复修改是雅思写作提升的不二之途。

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【慎小嶷——十天突破雅思写作】政府类真题7分范文政府类真题【Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their ideas. To what extent do you agree?】第四类真题政府类真题来啦~On the contrary, sometimes these artists tend to be unscrupulous. They convert rumors into facts and present them before us. This might impair the reputation of some illustrious people in today's society. On such occasions, certain restrictions are understandable. Nevertheless, we all do know what is right or wrong. Rules and regulations not always are the solution to how artists present their own ideas. Hence it is wrong-headed to be impetuous and the government should enforce alternative ways to control the media. Respect for one's ideas is not only hypothetical, but must be practised. It is through respect that each one of us can be recognised as a unique person in the world. This can be achieved by looking at the bright side of what the media display for us. Not a day can go by when we don't look out for colorful dreams and a beautiful life when we can find either through music, poetry, films, pictures everything that the creative artists offer us.有些情况下这些艺术家会有些违反道德，他们把流言当做事实来呈现到我们面前。

雅思IELTS写作136个必备词汇(十天突破雅思写作_第四版_慎小嶷)

Education1家长给小孩的教育paren ti ng n.2学校对学生的教育schooli ng n.3培养cultivate vt.4意识aware ness = sense = recog niti on n.5有创造力的creative / origi nal adj.6身体的p hysical adj.7心理的p sychological adj.8同龄人p eer n.9动力motivation n. （形容词motivated,有动力的）10适应… 提供…. ada pt to afford sth. v.11纪律disci pli ne n.12记忆memorise（英式拼写）vt.13获得acquire vt.（后面经常加knowledge / skills ）14 有趣的Media stimulati ng adj.（在教育类作文中经常可以替代interesting ）15形容词无处不在的”p revale nt adj.经常可以代替everywhere 16客观的objective adj.17不客观的biased adj.18名人celebrity n.19记者journ alists n.20新闻界the p ress21报道coverage n.（动词是cover）22有误导性的misleadi ng adj.23可靠的depen dable adj.24非常及时的up-to-the-mi nute adj.25媒体影响公众经常用sway后面加宾语的表达sway vt.26信息量大的in formative adj.27 娱乐性强的Technologyen terta ining adj.28改变transform vt.代替change29突破breakthrough n.30发展adva nee v. & n.31惊人的速度 a staggeri ng rate32信息爆炸in formati on overload33提高，增强enhance = boost vt.34创新，发明inno vati ons n.35远程通讯telecom muni cati ons n.36高生产率的（它的名词Productivity 生产率在科技类话题也很常用）p roductive adj.Government37首要任务P riority n.38稳定stability n.39建立establish vt.40解决…solve = combat = tackle = resolve = address vt.41减轻，缓解alleviate = ease vt.42对…投资in vest i n = allocate money to43当局the authorities44禁止ban = forbid = p rohibit vt.45监督scruti nise / mon itor vt.46管理adm ini ster = regulate vt.47税收tax revenue48民主的democratic adj.49需求dema nd vt. & n.50高效率的efficie nt adj.Tourism51开阔人的眼界broaden one ' s horizons / expand one ' s outlook 52冲突con flicts n.53探索explore vt.54促进promote vt. （反义词是restrict，阻碍或限制）55旅游点tourist attracti on56当地居民local reside nts = local in habita nts57互相了解mutual un dersta nding58丰富人的经历enrich one ' s experieneeLanguages59...的大量扩散（比如英语，互联网，环境污染等）the p roliferati on of...60在…占统领地位pl ays a dominant role in...61灭绝go exti net62小语种lesser-k nown Ian guages63…的广泛使用the wides pread use of...Culture64祖先an cestors n.65后代（注意倒数第三个字母是a不是e,很容易拼错）desce ndants n.66文化同化cultural assimilati on67盲目的in discrim in ate adj.68历史悠久的time-h onoured n.69文化遗产cultural heritage70文化多样性cultural diversity71文化特征cultural ide ntity72少数民族eth nic mino ritiesDevel op ment73生活节奏the pace of life = the tempo of life74城乡差距the gap betwee n the urba n area and the rural area 75消除elimi nate vt.76质量差的in ferior adj.77设施facilities n.78（人与人之间）疏远的alie nated adj.79（人）物质化的，现实的materialistic adj.贫穷的impo verished富裕的，有钱的afflue nt80现状the p rese nt situati on = the curre nt situati on = the status quo81建筑的外观exterior n.82功能fun ctio n n.Globalisation83席卷一切的潮流swee ping trends84有机结合东西文化（culture表示种类时可以加复数）syn thesize the Asia n and the Wester n cultures85侵蚀（本土文化）erode vt.双刃剑 a double-edged sword86普遍的uni versal adj.87孤立的isolated adj.88进口import vt. & n.89出口export vt. & n.Women90家庭暴力domestic viole nee91性别平等gen der equality92歧视（后面的介词跟aga inst）discrim in ati on n.93一个开明的社会an en lighte ned society94家务事household chores95被…所拖累be tied dow n byFamily96后代offspring n.97性格冲突person ality clashes98家庭的另一种与法household n.99富裕的afflue nt adj.100贫穷的impo verished adj.101社区com mun ity n.102家庭观念family values103代沟gen eratio n gap104亲情family bonds105和谐harm ony n.Crime106犯罪crimes = offense = crim inal acts n.107犯罪（动词短语）commit a crime n.108严厉的stri ngent adj.109惩罚puni shme nt / pen alty n.110犯罪率the crime rate = the in cide nee of crime 111猖獗的rampant adj.遏制（犯罪，污染等）curb112违法violate the law113限制（自由等）restrict vt.114冲动的imp ulsive adj.115后果consequenee n.116处境，状况circumsta nee n.117改造罪犯reform / rehabilitate crimi nalsAnimals118保护（某种资源，比如naturalresources 或者oldbuildings）,如果保护某人可以用Protect）p reserve vt.119残酷的in huma ne adj.120生物多样性biodiversity n.121伙伴/ 1\土匕zLAt / t f丿4ri-t Z Iz '.I 口穴？companions n.122代替物（比如化妆品头验用动物作替代物而不用人做实验）rep laceme nts = alter natives n.123栖息地habitat n.124濒危动物endan gered sp ecies125兽皮（兽毛是fur）hide n.Environment126可持续发展susta in able deve lopment127开采自然资源生态系统expl oit n atural resources128the ecosystem （许多eco-开头的单词都和生态有关）129一次性的dis posable adj.(比女0 dis po sable cho psticks)Environment130节约，环境类题可以代替savecon serve vt.131恶化vt. deteriorate/aggravate vt. 如果某种现象自身恶化，就可以说deteriorate。

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慎小嶷范文部分总结1、Life was better when technology was simpler. To what extent do you agree of disagree?Modern technology has revolutionized life in three main fields: work, transport and communication. Although modern technology is often blamed for stress and alienation, I doubt that many people would want to turn back the clock to the pre-technological age.Despite the fact that life was simpler in former times, I would prefer not to return to that lifestyle, because that simplicity was due to a lack of choice. Before large jet airliners came in in the 1960s, for example, air travel was beyond the reach of most people. Before electronic cash registers, people had to spend a lot of time on math calculations to carry out transactions. Furthermore, our knowledge of the world around us, especially foreign countries, was sketchy before television brought us the vivid images of documentaries. Modern technology has brought liberation from the exhausting and boring labor and has set us free to enjoy more interesting work and leisure.It is nor even always true that modern technology is more complex to use than it was to perform household chores. Caring for a horse was a far more complicated and time-consuming matter than starting up a car and taking it to the petrol station for its 5,000-mile household chores. Caring for a horse was a far more complicated and time-consuming matter than starting up a car and taking it to the petrol station for its 5,000-mile service. One has to read the novel from past times to realize the anxiety and frustration that result from transport systems limited to the speed of the horses.The example I have given are just a few of that can illustrate the case that modern technology makes life more convenient. Probably what can may the people yearn for the good old past simple ways I forces us to speed up our pace of life. But sometimes this change can be resisted, when we set ourselves simple priorities and stick to them.2、Some people think intelligent students should be educated together with other students. Do you agree or disagree?It is not uncommon for talented students to get admitted to gift programs today.Letting talented students take special courses make sense to some extent. They need a more challenging curriculum as they are fast learners and their learning process requires little repetition of the information that has been taught by the teacher. If they find the too easy form them to handle, these intelligent children will end up learning little or nothing ar all. As a matter of fact, many students who are inattentive in class are intelligent ones. Regular courses simply fail to attract their attention.Then form a purely psychological point of view, intelligent students also feel more comfortable if there are separate classes for them. They would feel isolated and become oversensitive if they spent all their class time with their ordinary peers. This is often true because smart children not only have different learning pattern, their communication patterns tend to be different from those of the ordinary students as well.Still, it should be pointed out that segregating intelligent student from their peers is nor without its own downside. Some educators believe such classes will be drained of student leaders and role models. Segregation on the basis of IQ may even send a message to those who take regular courses that their work is not as valued as the intelligent students’, which will lower the average students’ self-esteem.Overall, I would suggest that gifted students spend their class time with their peers. But in addition to that, they should be encouraged to take electives that challenge them mentally.3、Some people think citizens should be totally responsible for their own health costs. Others think it is better to have a health care system which provides free health services for all. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.A much debated issue these days is whether citizens should take out private health insurance of not. In this essay, I will argue that people who can afford it should be privately insured, but free medical care must be made available for those too poor to do so.The most important reason for encouraging people to take out private health insurance is the cost to thegovernment. Free health coverage for people who are able to pay for it is a waste of public money. Of course, people will only pay health insurance premiums if they know that they are getting good value for their money. If they get sick, they will pay little or nothing at all. In addition, the privately insured are entitled to special benefits such as having the choice of their own doctors, and being able to avoid long waiting lists for hospital beds.On the other hand, those who realty cannot afford to pat private insurance premiums, which are often very high, should still be entitled as citizens to the best medical are available. They cannot be expected to pay their own medical bills. However, if they are working, they should still pay a percentage of their wages (for example 1% to 2%) as a tax which pays towards the cost of providing free medical services.In conclusion, I think most people should privately insure their health. But it is unreasonable to suppose that all citizens can afford it. Therefore, a safety net in the form of a basic free health care system must exist for the very poor and the unemployed.4、Television has had a significant influence on the culture of many societies. To what extent do you think television has positively or negatively affected culture development?It has been around forty years since television was first introduced into British households and people today still have mixed views on whether it has a positive or a negative influence on society.Many people believe that television damages culture. It promotes the stronger culture of countries such as Britain and the us and weakens the cultures of countries such Britain and the US and weakens the cultures of less wealthy countries, This is because the stronger countries are able to assert their own culture by producing more programmes that are shown widely around the world. These programmes then influence people, particularly young people, in the countries where they are shown.Also, because television networks need to attract large audience to secure their financial survival, they must produce progtammes that are interesting to a broad range of people. In Britain this range is very broad because we are a multicultural society and people of all backgrounds like to watch television. To interest all these different people, most television programmes are short, full of action and excitement and pursue themes common to all cultures, such as crime and romance. Television programmes that concentrate on or develop themes related to one particular culture are not so successful because they only interest a smaller audience. Nevertheless we must recognize that television does have some positive effects on cultures within a society. People who do not live within their own culture can access it through multicultural stations on TV.In conclusion, I take the view that television promotes and strengthens those cultures that are wealthy and influential while it weakens cultures that are already in a weak position.5、Many people ignore basic science today. What are the causes and what are your solutions?While technological developments are constantly covered by the mass media, basic science is hardly getting any attention form the public.I tend to believe the public ignorance of basic science research is largely due to its unpredictable value. Compared with applied technology that can produce almost immediate benefits, basic science, scientists have to devote a great deal of time and energy to their research, while being very uncertain if this devotion will lead to the intended outcomes. Many scientists become dissatisfied with their working conditions and earning and in the end, they choose to leave their laboratories for other jobs, which can help to explain why basic science is often ignored by the public.Since basic science is the foundation of most technological developments, some steps must be taken to reverse this trend. On the national level, the government should fulfill its responsibility in raising public awareness of the significance of basic science get the funding and the public support that is urgently needed. Also, companies and institutes should financially support scientists who commit themselves to basic science, not just for the sake of profit, but for the development of science as well. Additionally, the public should be made aware that there would be very few technological advancements if basic science were largely ignored.Basic science deserves more public attention. Certainly none of us want it to become a completely stagnantfield due to our ignorance.6、As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element for individual well-being. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?Nowadays, many adults have full-time jobs and the proportion of their lives spent doing such jobs is very high. So feeling about one’s job must reflect how an individual feels about his or her life as a whole, and because of this, job satisfaction is indeed very important to the well-being of that person.Employees get jobs satisfaction in a number of ways. Firstly, a person needs to feel that they are doing valued and valuable work, so positive feedback form superiors is very important in this respect. A sense of fulfillment is also encouraged if a worker feels the job is worth doing because it contributes to the society or the economy as a whole. Secondly, when some feels they are improving of developing their skills through training opportunities, for examples, then there is a sense of progression and purpose that rewards a worker, the sense of belonging to a team of a working community also contribute to job satisfaction because colleagues help each other to enjoy their working lives. Satisfaction is also increased by a sense of responsibility for and loyalty to a team.Of course not everyone enjoys his work. Hard economic realities mean that many people have little choice in the kind of job they can get. In some cases an employee is working in a job that suits neither their skills nor their personality. Some jobs are repetitive and boring, and labor relations may be poor and lead to resentment and insecurity rather than to job satisfaction.However, even though it is unlikely that all workers do feel happy in their work, I think it is not unrealistic to promote more job satisfaction in any job. If the factors identified above are implemented, then any job can be improved and more workers can feel greater degrees of job satisfaction.。

慎小嶷写作136词汇

慎小嶷写作136词汇(总4页)--本页仅作为文档封面，使用时请直接删除即可----内页可以根据需求调整合适字体及大小--IELTS议论文6分必备136个词汇Education1 家长给小孩的教育parenting n.2 学校对学生的教育schooling n.3 培养cultivate vt.4 意识awareness = sense = recognition n.5 有创造力的creative / original adj.6 身体的physical adj.7 心理的psychological adj.8 同龄人peer n.9 动力motivation n. （形容词motivated, 有动力的）10 适应... adapt to11 纪律discipline n.12 记忆memorise(英式拼写) vt.13 获得acquire vt. （后面经常加knowledge / skills）14 有趣的stimulating adj. （在教育类作文中经常可以替代interesting）Media15 形容词“无处不在的” prevalent adj. 经常可以代替everywhere16 客观的objective adj.17 不客观的biased adj.18 名人celebrity n.19 记者journalists n.20 新闻界the press21 报道coverage n. （动词是cover）22 有误导性的misleading adj.23 可靠的dependable adj.24 非常及时的up-to-the-minute adj.25 媒体影响公众经常用sway后面加宾语的表达sway vt.26 信息量大的informative adj.27 娱乐性强的entertaining adj.Technology28 改变transform vt. 代替change29 突破breakthrough n.30 发展advance v. & n.31 惊人的速度 a staggering rate32 信息爆炸information overload33 提高，增强enhance = boost vt.34 创新，发明innovations n.35 远程通讯telecommunications n.36 高生产率的（它的名词productivity生产率在科技类话题也很常用）productive adj.Government37 首要任务priority n.38 稳定stability n.39 建立establish vt.40 解决... solve = combat = tackle = resolve = address vt.41 减轻，缓解alleviate = ease vt.42 对...投资invest in = allocate money to43 当局the authorities44 禁止ban = forbid = prohibit vt.45 监督scrutinise / monitor vt.46 管理administer = regulate vt.47 税收tax revenue48 民主的democratic adj.49 需求demand vt. & n.50 高效率的efficient adj.Tourism51 开阔人的眼界broaden one’s horizons / expand one’s outlook52 冲突conflicts n.53 探索explore vt.54 促进promote vt. （反义词是restrict，阻碍或限制）55 旅游点tourist attraction56 当地居民local residents = local inhabitants57 互相了解mutual understanding58 丰富人的经历enrich one’s experienceLanguages59 ...的大量扩散（比如英语，互联网，环境污染等）the proliferation of...60 在...占统领地位plays a dominant role in...61 灭绝go extinct62 小语种lesser-known languages63 ...的广泛使用t he widespread use of...Culture64 祖先ancestors n.65 后代（注意倒数第三个字母是a不是e，很容易拼错） descendants n.66 文化同化cultural assimilation67 盲目的indiscriminate adj.68 历史悠久的time-honoured n.69 文化遗产cultural heritage70 文化多样性cultural diversity71 文化特征cultural identity72 少数民族ethnic minoritiesDevelopment73 生活节奏the pace of life = the tempo of life74 城乡差距the gap between the urban area and the rural area75 消除eliminate vt.76 质量差的inferior adj.77 设施facilities n.78 （人与人之间）疏远的alienated adj.79 （人）物质化的，现实的materialistic adj.80 现状the present situation = the current situation = the status quo81 建筑的外观exterior n.82 功能function n.Globalisation83 席卷一切的潮流sweeping trends84 有机结合东西文化（culture表示种类时可以加复数）synthesize the Asian and the Western cultures85 侵蚀（本土文化）erode vt.86 普遍的universal adj.87 孤立的isolated adj.88 进口import vt. & n.89 出口export vt. & n.Women90 家庭暴力domestic violence91 性别平等gender equality92 歧视（后面的介词跟against）discrimination n.93 一个开明的社会an enlightened society94 家务事household chores95 被...所拖累be tied down byFamily96 后代offspring n.97 性格冲突personality clashes98 家庭的另一种写法household n.99 富裕的affluent adj.100 贫穷的impoverished adj.101 社区community n.102 家庭观念family values103 代沟generation gap104 亲情family bonds105 和谐harmony n.Crime106 犯罪crimes = offense = criminal acts n.107 犯罪（动词短语）commit a crime n.108 严厉的stringent adj.109 惩罚punishment / penalty n.110 犯罪率the crime rate = the incidence of crime 111 猖獗的rampant adj.112 违法violate the law113 限制（自由等）restrict vt.114 冲动的impulsive adj.115 后果consequence n.116 处境，状况circumstance n.117 改造罪犯reform / rehabilitate criminalsAnimals118 保护（某种资源，比如natural resources 或者old buildings）,如果保护某人可以用protect) preserve vt.119 残酷的inhumane adj.120 生物多样性biodiversity n.121 伙伴companions n.122 代替物（比如化妆品实验用动物作替代物而不用人做实验）replacements = alternatives n.123 栖息地habitat n.124 濒危动物endangered species125 兽皮（兽毛是fur）hide n.Environment126 可持续发展sustainable development127 开采自然资源exploit natural resources128 生态系统the ecosystem （许多eco-开头的单词都和生态有关）129 一次性的disposable adj. （比如disposable chopsticks）Environment130 节约，环境类题可以代替save conserve vt.131 恶化vt. deteriorate/aggravate vt. 如果某种现象自身恶化，就可以说deteriorate。

【慎小嶷——十天突破雅思写作】真题范文大全

【慎小嶷——十天突破雅思写作】真题范文大全多多研读别人的优秀范文，在进行仿写和改进，也不失为提升雅思写作能力的有个好办法，下面小编给大家带来【慎小嶷——十天突破雅思写作】真题范文大全，希望可以帮助到大家。

【慎小嶷——十天突破雅思写作】文化类真题7分范文文化类真题【In some countries, traditional arts are going extinct. Some people think that we should try to keep them. To what extent you agree?】Today, many types of traditional arts and crafts are struggling on the brink of extinction. People have different attitudes toward this trend. As for me, I believe that traditional arts should still be cherished by us. Traditional arts are national treasures handed down from our ancestors; therefore, it is our responsibility as inheritors to keep them alive. A nation without abundant traditional arts, such as folk music, ethnic drawings or painting would feel rootless. Consequently, should those brilliant traditional arts die out, the nation's sense of belonging would be seriously eroded. Even worse once a form of traditional art disappears in history, it could never be truly revived. Only until then will the people realize that is a great loss, which at best would only result in nostalgia and regrets.如今，许多传统工艺正濒临灭绝。

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♦试图使用不常用词汇，但有时使用不准确 ♦在拼写及 /或构词方面有错误，但不影响交流 ♦综合使用简单句式与复杂句式 ♦在语法及标点符号方面有一些错误，但这些错误很少影响交流 5 分作文： ♦基本上能就写作任务作文，但某些地方写作格式有时存在不当之处 ♦（学术类）机械地描述细节，缺乏清晰的概述；有时未能提供数据支持所描述的内容； ♦（培训类）信函有时能体现特定的写作目的，但有时目的不清晰；行文语气变化不定，且有时不得体； ♦呈现但不能充分地涵盖主要内容 /要点；有时出现着重表述细节的倾向 ♦有一定组织性地呈现信息，但总体来说有时缺乏清晰的总体行文推进 ♦衔接手段不足、不准确或过度使用 ♦由于指代和替换不足显得行文重复 ♦使用词汇范围有限，但能达到进行写作任务的最低限度 ♦在拼写及 /或构词方面可能出现明显的错误，且可能会对读者造成一定的阅读困难 � 雅思 Academic Writing 需要掌握的语法知识：词汇：小作文：数据对比和趋势描述词汇掌握，大作文：动词的多样化/ 名词的准确性/ 形容词副词修饰恰当/ 介词短语精确使用句型：简单句的精准表达。并列句的并列恰当。复合句的使用，以此避免简单句的啰嗦，使主从句思想分明的基础上，结构更加紧凑。分词结构的点缀使用，当然要根据自己写作分数的要求做句型的合理安排。集萃正餐：写作细节描述 WritingTaskOne � GeneralStatement

慎小嶷十天突破雅思写作模板汇总

慎小嶷十天突破雅思写作模板汇总今天我们要跟大家分享的雅思写作模板，是来自慎小嶷的雅思写作参考书系列。

接下来请看内容：慎小嶷十天突破雅思写作模板汇总。

【慎小嶷——十天突破雅思写作】动物类真题7.5分范文动物类真题【Humans should not use animals as sources of food and clothing. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?】需要注意的单词：animal-rightblood-thirstyIn ancient times, there was no opposition to the exploitation of animals. But now many animal-right activists object to consumption of animals as sources of food and clothing. I would not go along with their viewpoint. It may be true that animal consumption poses threats to our lives. For instance, not only is the hunting of endangered species such as whaling blood-thirsty, it can also ruin the ecosystem. Since citizens are increasingly aware of the far-reaching impact of the extinction of endangered species, it is reasonable for the government to regulate the consumption of endangered species as food and clothing.在古代，没有人反对将动物作为一种资源来使用。

雅思强化写作精讲班【慎小寲】第2讲讲义

雅思强化写作精讲班第2讲讲义熟练掌握思考素材的三种方法No specific topic pool. 不断增加的题库对策: 雅思话题不会超出十大类别：文明类TourismEducationGovernmentWomen and FamiliesLanguage and CultureTechnology and the MediaDevelopment and Globalisation野蛮类CrimeAnimalsEnvironmental ProblemsUnfamiliar topics 素材思考困难对策：熟练掌握思考素材的三种方法a 分类法Some people think old buildings should be destroyed and replaced with modern buildings. To what extent do you agree?Some high-school graduates go to travel or work for a period of time before they go to university. To what extent do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?b 替代法Some people think motorized flight was the greatest invention in the twentieth century. Do you agree or disagree?Some people think stricter punishment for driving offenders is the only effective way to improve safety on the roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?Some people think animal experimentation should be banned. To what extent do you agree?c 裸奔法TM STREEC $Technology & Efficiency Environment & HealthMind & Soul Employment & CompetitionSociety & Crime Culture & PopulationTime & Space Money & FunRights & Responsibilities写作中可以引用的16句名人名言IELTS写作中可以引用的16句名人名言Education1 “A child miseducated is a child lost." - -John F. Kennedy2 "Education is not the filling of a pail, but the lighting of a fire."-- W. B. Yeats3 “Technology is just a tool. In terms of getting the kids working together and motivating them, The teacher is the most important." --- Bill Gates.Technology“ The greatest danger in modern technology is not that machines begin to think like people, but that people will begin to think like machines.”――Albert Einstein5“As we go forward, I hope we're going to continue to use technology to make really big differences in how people live and work." ---Sergey BrinMedia6“He who controls the media, controls the mind. “---Rupert MurdockGovernment7“Millions of individuals making their own decisions in the marketplace will always allocate resources better than any centralized government." – Ronald ReaganTourism8“The world is a book, and those who do not travel, read only a page.”Saint AugustineWomen and Families9“The bond that links your true family is not one of blood, but of respect and joy in each other’s life.”Richard BachLanguage10“To possess a second language is to possess a second soul.” –CharlemagneCulture11“Culture means the widening of the mind and of the spirit.” – Ruth BenedictGlobalization12“ Globalization is not something that we can hold off or turn off. It is the economic equivalent of a force of nature—like wind or water.”---Bill ClintonCrime13“He who does not prevent a crime when he can encourages it. “--- Roman philosopher Seneca Animals14The greatness of a nation and its moral progress can be judged by the way its animals are treated. ----GandhiEnvironment15“Many anthropogenic activities foul the air, contaminate the water and devastate the forests.” --- quoted in Newsweek16“Don’t blow it -- good planets are hard to find.” quoted in Time magazine。

雅思强化写作精讲班【慎小寲】第10讲讲义

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(1)判断题目类型 Report Argumentation
We have developed into a “throw-away society”and are filling up our environment 1. with plastic bags and rubbish that we cannot fully dispose of. What are the causes of this phenomenon and recommend some measures to reduce this problem. People today can perform the everyday tasks such as shopping, banking or even 2. business transactions, without meeting others face-to-face. What effects will this phenomenon have on individuals and society as a whole? We can get news from the media. But many people do not trust the journalists who 3. 4. report news. What are the most important qualities a journalist should have? Some people think women should be allowed to join the army, the navy and the air force just like men . Do you agree or disagree? Some people think stricter punishment for driving offenders is the only effective way to 5. 6. 7. improve safety on the road. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Some people think the media should not report details of crimes to the public. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Some people think the advantages of the spread of English all over the world outweigh its disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Some people believe that the use of animals for experimentation purposes is cruel, 8. Others believe that it is necessary for the development of science. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Many people are optimistic about the 21st century and see it as an opportunity to 9. make positive changes to the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with their optimism? What changes would you like to be made in the new century? 10. How can traffic jams in big cities be solved? To develop public transport or to develop private cars? Television is one of the most important technological developments in the 20 th century. 11. It has changed people’s lives. Have all the changes been positive?

慎小嶷的十天突破雅思写作范文解析

慎小嶷的十天突破雅思写作范文解析多多研读别人的优秀范文，再进行仿写和改进，也不失为提升雅思写作能力的有个好办法，下面小编给大家带来慎小嶷的十天突破雅思写作范文解析，希望可以帮助到大家。

【慎小嶷——十天突破雅思写作】地图题真题9分范文地图题真题【The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket ( S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.】注意地名：Garlsdon;Hindon;Cransdon.调皮的括号君：( S1)以及：no-traffic zone;out-of-town.In contrast, the suggested location, S2, is right in the town center, which would be good for local residents. Theoretically, the store could be accessed by road or rail from the surrounding towns, including Bransdon. But in reality, as the central area is a no-traffic zone, cars would be unable to park and access would be difficult. Overall, neither site is appropriate for all the towns, but for customers in Cransdon, Hindon and Garlsdon, the out-of-town site ( S1) would probably offer more advantages.相反，备选地点S2正好位于镇中心，这就方便了当地居民。

慎小嶷《十天突破雅思写作》怎么样

慎小嶷《十天突破雅思写作》怎么样
《十天突破雅思写作》是一本全面陈述雅思写作的书籍，由权威考试培训机构慎小嶷编写。

它运用先进的教学理念，由浅入深地讲解了雅思作文的思路和技巧，并且编写了大量的练习题，把握范文的技巧和方法介绍得清楚明白，让考生在短时间内，能快速掌握雅思写作技巧，从而轻松拿下雅思写作。

《十天突破雅思写作》能够帮助考生掌握雅思写作的技巧，如构思、词汇等，而且有详实的练习，能够满足考生的学习需求。

从内容上来看，它全面讲解了雅思写作的技巧，让考生能够更好地掌握写作技巧，为自身的考试做好准备。

总的来说，《十天突破雅思写作》是一本优秀的作文指导书，它的编撰者慎小嶷不仅仅是一位经验丰富的教师，而且是一位有着超群培训能力的教育家。

这本书改变了考生学习雅思写作的方式，能够让考生真正明白词汇、构思和结构的概念，帮助考生提高写作能力，在短时间内拿到好成绩。

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慎小嶷《十天突破雅思写作》总结

慎小嶷《十天突破雅思写作》总结注意：1、作文要有实质内容。

2、6分：260~270个词左右；6、5分：280个词以上。

3、没有必要一定写长难句，但要提高句子的准确度和多样性。

必须在对英语造句知识准确理解和把握的基础上流畅地写出复杂的长句子，而不是刻意、机械地拉长句子。

（准确、严密、多样、清晰）4、对于零星出现的少量拼写错误，只要不引起歧义，是不会导致严重扣分的，但要努力减少作文里出现拼写错误的可能。

5、考场里没有时间打草稿，但可以在印考题的试题纸上把看到题目后头脑里闪现出的ideas、考前准备的相关加分词汇和句型大致记录一下。

6、当考官要求停笔时即使还没有写完也一定要停下来，否则会被判为违纪行为。

7、考前练习一定要尽可能模拟实战：下载标准格式的答题纸；用铅笔写作，每行10~12个单词；严格控制时间，Task1不应超过25 min，Task2不应超过45 min。

备考初期，可将Task1和Task2分开练习，但在考前一周内，必须演练完整的写作考试全程，严格控制时间，写完后再核对或请有经验的老师批改。

8、Task1 图表题Task2 议论题Task achievement针对题目所给的图形详细介绍信息Coherence and cohensionLexical resourceGrammatical range and accuracyTask response论证要扣题且强有力Coherence and cohensionLexical resourceGrammatical range and accuracy客观、准确、详尽主观性使用的词汇有限，句式要求不高词汇量要求较高，句式灵活多变最高境界：让考官即使不看图表，只看考生作文也能够准确地想象出图表的内容在观点上没有标准答案，重点在于是否可以用英文比较准确地表达并且强有力地支持这种观点；不用纠结怎样的观点才是“正确的”，而应考虑这道题持怎样的论点才能写起来最顺手，最能充分利用自己考前准备的内容。

雅思强化写作精讲班第讲讲义一

雅思强化写作精讲班第 1 讲讲义Timing 时间安排难点：时间长，强度大。

对策：练习时控制时间Academic writing 学术类写作文体的特殊要求1 Some teachers don‘t know how to use computers to help the students effectively. 文体2 Historic buildings attract lots of visitors and can improve the local economy.非正式词汇3 The impact of tourism on these neighbourhoods should be analyzed. 拼写4 Children in wealthy families are more and more dependent on their parents.实词5 Serious crimes harm people’s lives. 实词6 The advantages of stopping animal experiments are more than continuing them.实词7 Today, advertisements are everywhere. There are many ways to do advertisements. 句式8 The environment is becoming worse. We must work together to deal with it.句式9 So,we must take steps to deal with the environmental problems! 色彩10 We must be friendly to others because the Bible said,‖ Treat your neighbors as you would like be treated.”文化背景toDifferent tasks 写作任务复杂Different tasks 写作任务复杂写作任务task 1 图表题和task 2 议论文之间差异大Some people think criminals should get longer terms in prison while others think thereare others ways to reduce the crime rate. Discuss.Many animals and plants are dying out today. What are the causes and what are your solutions?Some people believe that we should not use air transportation to carry fruits andvegetables. To what extent do you agree or disagree?Some people think the high sales of products reflect the power of advertisements insteadof the demand of customers. To what extent do you agree?Today we can do some everyday tasks such as shopping, banking and business transactions without meeting each other face to face. What are the effects of this phenomenon on individuals and society as a whole?Many people use emails and mobile phones today instead of writing letters. Some people think the skill of letter-writing will disappear completely. To what extent do you agree?Individual persons and countries cannot do anything about the environment. Environmentalproblems can only be solved by international effort. Do you agree？Some people think public libraries are useless today because we can use computer technology to get the information that we need. Do you agree?Some people think universities should only teach theories, not employment skills. Towhat extent do you agree or disagree?Health is a basic human need. Some people think medical care should not be provided by private profit-making companies. To what extent do you agree?Some people think the best way to solve environmental problems is to raise the priceof fuel. Do you agree?Some people think we need more female leaders to create world peace and reduce violence. To what extent do you agree?Multi-cultured societies are mixtures of many ethnic groups. To what extent do you think the disadvantages of multi-cultured societies outweigh their advantages?When we learn a language, we should also learn the culture and lifestyle of that country. Do you agree?Some people think the purposes of museums should be to educate people while others think museums should be enjoyable places to attract and entertain people. Discuss.Some people think students should live with their parents instead of living at school.To what extent do you agree or disagree?Some people think the housing shortage in big cities can only be solved by the government. Do you agree or disagree?Today many young people cannot find a job after they graduate from university. What are the individual and social reasons for this phenomenon?There are many security measures in big cities today to reduce the crime rate. To what extent do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?Long-distance flight consumes natural resources and pollutes the air. Some people thinkit should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?Technology and science have great influence on our lives. But some people think we should also value the work of artists such as musicians, painters and writers. To what extentdo you agree or disagree?Some people think we should keep all the money we earn and not pay tax to the state.Do you agree or disagree?Some people think children who are brought up in families without a large amount of money are better prepared to solve the problems in their adult years than children broughtup in wealthy families. To what extent do you agree or disagree?Many people are optimistic about the 21st century and see it as an opportunity to make positive changes to the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with their optimism? What changes would you like to be made in the new century?对策: 考试之前至少全程练习一次task 1 和task 2雅思强化写作精讲班第 2 讲讲义熟练掌握思考素材的三种方法No specific topic pool. 不断增加的题库对策: 雅思话题不会超出十大类别：文明类TourismEducationGovernmentWomen and FamiliesLanguage and CultureTechnology and the MediaDevelopment and Globalisation野蛮类CrimeAnimalsEnvironmental ProblemsUnfamiliar topics 素材思考困难对策：熟练掌握思考素材的三种方法a 分类法Some people think old buildings should be destroyed and replaced with modern buildings. To what extent do you agree?Some high-school graduates go to travel or work for a period of time before they goto university. To what extent do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?b 替代法Some people think motorized flight was the greatest invention in the twentieth century.Do you agree or disagree?Some people think stricter punishment for driving offenders is the only effective wayto improve safety on the roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?Some people think animal experimentation should be banned. To what extent do you agree?c 裸奔法TM STREEC $Technology & Efficiency Environment & HealthMind & Soul Employment & CompetitionSociety & Crime Culture & PopulationTime & Space Money & FunR ights & Responsibilities写作中可以引用的16 句名人名言IELTS 写作中可以引用的16 句名人名言Education1 ―A child miseducated is a child lost." - -John F. Kennedy2 "Education is not the filling of a pail, but the lighting of a fire."-- W. B. Yeats3 ―Technology is j ust a tool. In terms of getting the kids working together andmotivating them, The teacher is the most important." --- Bill Gates.Technology“The greatest danger in modern technology is not that machines begin to think like people, but that people will begin to think like machines.‖ ―― Albert Einstein5―As we go forward, I hope we're going to continue to use technology to make reallybig differences in how people live and work." ---Sergey BrinMedia6―He who controls the media, controls the mind. ―---Rupert MurdockGovernment7―Millions of individuals making their own decisions in the marketplace will always allocate resources better than any centralized government." – Ronald ReaganTourism8―The world is a book, and those who do not travel, read only a page.‖Saint AugustineWomen and Families9―The bond that links your true family is not one of blood, but of respect and joy in each other’s life.‖ Richard BachLanguage10―To possess a second language is to possess a second soul.‖ –CharlemagneCulture11―Culture means the widening of the mind and of the spirit.‖ – Ruth BenedictGlobalization12― Globalization is not something that we can hold off or turn off. It is the economic equivalent of a force of nature—like wind or water.‖---Bill ClintonCrime13―He who does not prevent a crime when he can encourages it. ―--- Roman philosopher SenecaAnimals14The greatness of a nation and its moral progress can be judged by the way its animals are treated. ----GandhiEnvironment15―Many anthropogenic activities foul the air, contaminate the water and devastate the forests.‖ --- quoted in Newsweek1 6―Don’t blow it -- good planets are hard to find.‖ quoted in Time magazine。

【讲义】刘洪波雅思写作真经班(1)

刘洪波雅思写作真经班
Exercise 3: Some people said the government should not spend money on building theaters and sports stadiums. Instead, it should spend more money on medical care and education. Do you agree or disagree?

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Coherence and Cohesion
7 • uses a range of cohesive devices appropriately although there may be some under-/over-use • presents a clear central topic within each paragraph • uses cohesive devices effectively, but cohesion within and/or between sentences may be faulty or mechanical • may not always use referencing clearly or appropriately
原因1.现代人均寿命增长，生育期相应延后； 2.社会竞争压力大，选择事业收入稳定后生孩子。影响1.父母与孩子的年龄差会变大，交流中代沟会明显； 2.会出现劳动力缺口，老龄化社会。

刘洪波雅思写作真经班
Exercise 1: In order to learn a language well, we should learn about the country as well as the cultures and lifestyles of the people who speak it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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扫码获取雅思历年真题内容推荐本书是著名畅销书《十天突破雅思写作》的姐妹篇。

书中收录了在亚太、欧洲和北美三大考区历年来所使用的雅思写作完整真题库，根据不同分数段的范文特点对范文的写作手法和语言特色进行了详尽的比较与鉴别，并且紧密地结合了剑桥官方的最新评分细则。

本书还提供了详尽的雅思地图题(Map)写作指南，而且全书解释例句均取自剑桥官方唯一指定的Cambridge AdvancedLearner's Dictionary。

作者简介我的中文名字叫慎小嶷，英文名字叫Patrick，很多学生也喜欢简单地称呼我Pat。

长期在美国、加拿大两国生活，让我对英语这种世界上越来越多的人之间使用的交流工具有了更直接的体验。

2004年我开始在学校的几个外地分校教授雅思课程，2005年起开始在北京总校教授雅思写作、口语两门课程。

直到2009年底我回到北美，在北京总校历次统计的学生全年反馈总评中，写作、口语这两科的教师总分排名我都名列前茅，“主讲教师”这四个字应该受之无愧目录致读者:榜样的作用英文自序Day 1 学而时习之:教育类真题库与各分数段范文剖析解读 Education类真题库Education 类各分数段范文剖析教育类范文一到底什么是6分?一只6分烤鸭的辛酸血泪史教育类范文二新生下乡应该缓行教育类范文三到底什么是7分?对两篇7分范文的比较研究教育类范文四因材施教还是搞一刀切教育类范文八让学生决定自己学什么是否靠谱教育类范文九请勿曲解男女平等教育类范文十高等教育对城乡学生的公平性教育类范文十一缺乏外语天赋是否还要知难而上教育类范文十二研究生经费何去何从教育类范文十三拒绝做书虫儿以上就是小马过河小编为大家带来的关于慎小嶷:十天突破雅思IELTS写作完整真题库一书的详细介绍，供大家参考和学习，希望在小编的帮助下，考生们能早日通过雅思考试，最后小编祝大家都能取得好成绩。

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生命中，不断地有人离开或进入。

于是，看见的，看不见的；记住的，遗忘了。

生命中，不断地有得到和失落。

于是，看不见的，看见了；遗忘的，记住了。

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Among the tasks that professors undertake every day, researching and teaching activities take up most of their time. Some people would say that professors should focus more on teaching than research. I disagree. I believe that in order to enrich the learning experience of college students, a professor should focus a significant amount of time on his or her research.Although science and technology will continue to improve, themost significant improvement for the quality of people's lives have already taken place.The development of science and technology has always accompanied the progress of human society. The 21st century has seen leaps and bounds advancement of science and technology, making people’s lives more and more efficient and convenient. Some people are wondering whether science and technology will keep on improving. As for me, I believe many significant innovations will continue to occur since human civilization is motivated and propelled by the progress of science and technology.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? An effective leader should try to make others feel that they are part of the decision making process.Leaders play a profound role in the success of a group. Due to this, the strategy of a leader is at the frontline of public debate. So there is a controversy whether effective leaders should let group members feel they participated in the process of decision making or not. From my point of view, good leaders should try to make group members feel they are part of the process of decision making. My reasons and examples listed below will strengthen my point.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Newspapers and magazines are the best ways to learn about a foreign country.With the increasing development of technology, we now have the ability to acquire much information from foreign media sources. Because we can learnmuch about events happening in other countries from the mass media, such as magazines and newspapers, many people may think that reading magazines and newspapers is the best way to learn about a foreign country. However, I believe that only reading magazines and newspapers as a way of learning about a foreign country has several limitations.练习：Young people today are more likely to help others than in the past.Your job will have more effect on your happiness than the social life does.写好主题句：范文：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 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However, I hold a negative attitude toward this opinion due to the fact that art and music cost too much money and are not necessary to help children get to success. Admittedly, learning art and music have some minor advantages. They can make students more creative and this will benefit students in the future. For example, a businessman inspired by art and music may create a way of selling his commodities. However, art and music are not the only way of being creative. In fact, some subjects such as math, chemistry and physics also contribute greatly to our creativeness.First, learning art and music is quite costly. If schools have art and music classes, they need to equip themselves with a great deal of instruments, brushes and pigments, all of which need lots of money and therefore, schools will ask students to pay more money. Only in that way can a school afford the costs. Take my school for example. Before we were required to study art and music, we only need to pay about 150 yuan a month. However, when we were required to studythem, the school fees soar to 400 yuan. This made parents felt upset and angry because they thought the school had no reason to increase school fees. In the end, it made the school unaffordable and few parents wanted to pay the extra tuitions. As a result, our school’s educational quality decreased at an unbelievable rate. Obviously, it is not advisable to require children to study art and music.In addition, learning art and music does not necessarily lead students to success.A mathematician who has no time to study art can finally obtain great achievement and contribute a lot to science; a business people who only desires money can finally become wealthy and famous in his field; an athlete who treat art and music as boring stuffs can finally stand on the top of the podium and be respected by people all over the world. All of the above demonstrate the fact that know ledge from art and music is indeed not so necessary for students’ future careers.From the foregoing discussion, requiring children to study art and music can help children cultivate creativeness to some extent, but the disadvantages are of more importance. Instead, I suggest the art and music courses can be optional courses for young school children. (418 words)09年11月7日Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?To achieve successful development of a country, a government should focus its b udgets more on young children’s education rather than on universities’.Whether a government should focus its budgets more on young children’s education than on universities? The answer is yes. I concede that university education now mostly relies on government’s budget. However, early education needs more money to guarantee good quality of education and school facilitates. 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The chief minister in Treasury announced that they spent 3% fiscal income, as much as 500 million dollars, on primary education, but that is not enough. It is because children desire a complete set of school facilitates, such as playgrounds, canteens, laboratories, libraries and dormitories which are so expensive. For example, a school library equipped with advanced computers costs at least 100 thousand dollars; a dormitory building serving meals and laundries costs at least 150 thousand dollars. Since early education is compulsory for everyone in my country, the government has to pay much more to set up school facilitates.Admittedly, university education does need money. Usually, salaries of university professors are high and the schooling instruments are costly. However, college education should mainly rely on donations from social organizations, large corporations and accomplished alumni, which relieve much financial pressure of governments. 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Take my own experience as an example; my enthusiasm for English brought me to the English corner in our university weekly, where I met a group of students who were equally passionate for English, even though they were not majoring in this area. The casual chat with them opened a new window for me, and I was greatly enlightened and refreshed by those friends, who have now constituted an inseparable and valued part of my life.In addition, the experience in the student organizations and club activities will be particularly instrumental for you if you want to acquire leadership and organizational skills. The real participation in the organization of clubs and associations will oftentimes indicate frequent communication with different people, the coordination of different groups, as well as some minor technical problems like the design of posters and websites. Though seemingly troublesome or even trivial sometimes, all these will benefit you in the long run. I have witnessed many friends who have earned desirable positions in the job hunting due to their rich experience in student organizations and club activities.Finally, taking part in the student organizations and club activities will also help students pursue their interests. Oftentimes, the academic studies are just boring and possibly a far cry from the student's own interest, whereas the participation of club activities can reignite their passion and offer a stage for them to pursue their love. It once happened in my university that a student majoring in Japanese won the top prize for software design, which was really very surprising. 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史禺老师托福强化班写作讲义框架总结

史禺老师托福强化班写作讲义框架总结Chapter1 An introduction to the TOEFL iBT writingIntegrated writing:1. READING: 300words 3mins –--1thesis & 3sub point (each with explanation)2.LISTENING: 2~3mins 反驳阅读thesis，反驳阅读sub point 给出explanation3.阅读重现++++Summary：20mins 150~250words 总结阅读中thesis sub point 和explanation，总结听力中相对应的反驳和解释能力要求：阅读听力无需个人观点只需客观还原信息的写作模板Independent writing给出观点用分论点解释例证时间30mins 350~380wordsChapter 2 独立写作Section 1---- what is a good essay切题address the task and topic展开充分well developed清晰clear 正确correct 简洁concise 有变化varied● 2.1切题address the task and topic审题注意：1.价值判断还是现象证明包含should important necessary better prefer 的题目是价值判断其核心为利弊分析不包含上述词的题目是现象证明，核心是拆分举例，结合解释原因。

2.是否包含抽象或宽泛话题，如果包含，一定要拆分举例3.是否包含抽象或宽泛话题，如果包含，一定要拆分举例4.是否包含绝对词，对于这类题目的反驳（承认合理性，反驳绝对词）较容易。

5.是否包含因果或条件关系包含因果关系：证明：证明原因；证明因果关系。

---增加中间因果链“架桥”反驳：反驳原因；承认原因，反驳因果关系。

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雅思强化写作精讲班第12讲讲义
分析类范文
Report分析类范文
开头段
⑴In present-day society,the human race is advancing at an staggering rate in a host of arenas.
⑵However, attending all the benefits created by high-tech innovations have come some sufferings;
and the lack of fresh water is manifest among them.
⑶ A recent survey conducted by Greenpeace revealed that over two thirds of the nations in the world
were afflicted with severe water shortage.⑷Hence, it is essential that we ascertain the causes
of this phenomenon and identify the effective solutions.
主体段1
As I see it , the causes of the present water crisis are multiple.
⑴First of all, it is generally arguable that the population explosion is the root cause of the crisis.
⑵
growth
rate shows no sign of slowing down; therefore, household and industrial use of water
has been shooting up since the end of World War II.
⑶Further,the widespread deterioration of the Earth‘s ecosystem is a major cause of this situation.
⑷factories dump their waste into rivers and lakes,
seriously undermines the world’s eco system. ⑸Finally,the overexploitation of water resources plays a pivotal role in water shortage.
⑹in very few the citizens have the awareness of the importance of saving
a daily basis.
主体段2
Given the severity of the water shortage, we have no option but to take stringent measures to address this problem.
⑴To begin with, governments in all countries should give priority to the controlling of the staggering increase
of the population.
⑵ other nations learn from China’s success in curbing its population surge
over the past two decades.
⑶Then, the concept of sustainable development should be propagated in the international community.
⑷any form of overexploiting natural resources must be
of the ecosystem should be respected, honored and funded.
⑸Last but not least,man must do his utmost to find alternative sources of fresh water.
⑹transform
modern technology
结尾段
⑴In sum , causes of the shortage of fresh water are manifold.
⑵Therefore, we should take effective steps, including birth control, promotion of sustainable development and research about new water resources, to alleviate this modern-day scourge.
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IELTS议论文支持句20个常用连接词
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