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雅思写作Task1-地图完美版

雅思写作Task1-地图完美版

雅思写作-地图第一段:改写题目主要句式:图表名称+动词+描述主题+时间图表名称:The diagram/map/picture动词:show/illustrate/give information about/indicate描述主题:1. The development/change of 某地方。

2. How +某个地方+changed/developed. 3. The development/the change that has taken place +某个地方。

举例子:1.The maps show the development of Stokeford village over an 80 years period from 1930 to 2010.2.The diagrams illustrate some changes to a small island which has been developed for tourism.3.The two pictures compare the layout of a school as it was in the year 2004 with a proposed/planned/projected/expected site design for the year 2024.4.The diagrams show West Park Secondary School at three different stages in its development: 1950, 1980 and 2010.第二段:总结主要特征。

一般来说选取一两个最重大的变化特征。

或者从全局来看,描述最显著的变化。

同时还可以从地图功能的变化阐述其主要变化,比如说可以容纳更多学生,转变成居民区了,或者是旅游/娱乐设施完善了。

主要句式:1. It is clear that +某地方+has changed considerably with the construction of some new facilities.It is clear that the island has changed considerably with the introduction of tourism.2.数量+new features can be seen in the second diagram.Six new features can be seen in the second diagram.3. The main developments are that + 句子(描述一个或两个重大变化)The main developments are that the island is accessible and visitors have somewhere to stay.4. It is clear that the main change for+ 时间It is clear that the main change for 2024 involves the addition of a new school building.It is apparent from the pictures that the village has become increasingly populated over this time frame第三,四段细节描述(动词enlarge, widen, divide, replace, move, convert, relocate, demolish, renovate, extend , develop, modify)主要句式(下列句式中A,B 为建筑物)1. 位于be located/situated/sitedChorleywood Park and Golf Course is now located next to this original village area.A 位于B (城镇)的东方/西方/南方/北方A is/ lies/ is located/ is sited to/in the east/west/south/north part of B方位的表达和介词的搭配A be built/located to the east/north/south/west(southeast, southwest, northeast, northwest) of BA be built/located in the west/north/south/west part of BA be built/located to the left/right (hand side) of BA be built/located beside/next to/adjacent to/behind/in front of/ in the front of/ opposite to B2. 被建造be constructed/builtA motorway was built to the east of the villageA second car park will be built on the site of the original sports field3. 被改建成be turned to/converted toA large area behind the school was turned into a playgroundThe farmland has been converted to residential building.类似句式:The area+ 方位描述+be +建筑物The area behind the houses was farmland.4. 被拆除be demolished / dismantled / removedThe house had been demolished in order to make way for(腾出空间,让路)a small car park and an additional school building,5. 连接connect/linkThere is also a short road linking the pier with the reception and restaurant.类似表达Footpaths connect the huts6. 被分离be separated/divided1.The two school buildings were separated by a path running from the main entrance to the sports field.2.The original playground was divided into two.7. 保持不变No changes be made=remain unchanged1.No changes will be made to the main entrance and original car park.2. The school building remained unchanged8. 被扩大be extended/enlarged=increase in size1.The primary school opposite(opposite 做介词而非动词)the post office has been extended to include two new buildings2.The school has increased in size9. 被缩小be reduced in size/shrink(shrank, shrunk)9. 分叉split off/branch off1.Two new roads split off from the main road2. A new road to the south-west of the school braches off from the main road and extends out to the river.10. 道路两边的建筑描述1. Both new roads are accompanied by a small number of new houses on either side.2. A number of new properties were attached to the road heading south.11.道路的描述A railway line was built crossing this area from west to east.12.表现有建筑和规划建筑的改变(Proposed, current, future, existing, planned, it is expected that, at present, it is anticipated that, prospective)1.The current entrance to the gallery is on the right hand side of the building and visitors pass through a large lobby before entering the gallery itself. One of the proposed changes is to allow entrance on to the main exhibition area, where an existing entrance will be widened.2.At present, the exhibition rooms are divided into three separate areas. According to the plans, the dividing walls will be removed and one large exhibition space will be created.3. In addition, the gallery will gain an education center. This area will replace the existing lobby, which will also be enlarged to create a more functional space with large table and seating.4. To replace the current straight staircase, a new set of winding stairs will be installed in the corner of the living room.5. By 2024, it is expected that there will be 1000 pupils, and a third building will have been constructed.12. with 的用法(适用于高分学员)1.Two footpaths split off from the main road, with the eastern-facing road replacing old farmland. (先描述一个变化,用with接名词+现在分词(主动)或过去分词(被动)描述这一变化的详细内容)2. The farmland was converted to residential purpose, with a number of new houses attached to the road heading south.上课案例讲述和练习OG test3 Task1第一段:改写题目第二段:总结学校扩大了,停车场被建造和扩大了。

雅思写作task1(b)

雅思写作task1(b)

The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999.对于男性,持有skilled-vocational diploma的人数比例是最高的,而女性,在持有undergraduate diploma 的人比例为最大。

最大比例的男性,大约90%,持有skilled-vocational diploma,而对于女性,仅仅为男性比例的1/9。

有70%的女性持有undergraduate diploma, 相比较于40%的男性。

对于持有postgraduate以及master的人群而言,男性多于女性。

最大的比例的差距体现在持有postgraduate人群,男性为70%,女性为30%。

有60%的男性持有master degree而女性的比例仅仅为40%。

相反的是,持有bachelor degree的人女性要高于男性,但是差值却最小,仅仅为10%。

处理方式二:总体而言,对于高学历人群而言,持有postgraduate以及master男性的比例要高于女性。

30%的女性获得postgraduate diploma,比持有同种学历的男性低了40%。

对于获得master的女性,与postgraduate的女性比例相比,出现了一个小幅度的增长,增长了10%。

而相反的是,男性的比例减少了10%。

对于持有skilled-vocational的人而言,与持有高学历的人相同的,男性的比例高于女性,但是,差距却是最明显的。

有90%的男性获得这个学历,是女性的9倍。

而对于获得undergraduate 以及bachelor学历的人而言,情况相反。

在所有女性,持有undergraduate的人的比例是最高的,为70%,相反的是男性的比例为最低的,仅仅为大约40%。

雅思写作科技类话题素材1

雅思写作科技类话题素材1

雅思写作科技类话题素材1科技类话题是雅思写作中常见的一个主题,因此准备一些相关素材是很有必要的。

下面我将为你提供一些关于科技类话题的素材,供你参考:1. 人工智能(Artificial Intelligence,简称AI),AI是近年来发展迅速的一项技术,它在医疗、交通、教育等领域都有广泛的应用。

例如,AI可以帮助医生进行疾病诊断,提高准确性和效率;AI可以改善交通系统,减少交通拥堵和事故发生率;AI还可以个性化教育,根据学生的特点和需求进行教学。

2. 无人驾驶汽车,无人驾驶技术是未来交通领域的一个重要发展方向。

无人驾驶汽车可以提高交通安全性,减少交通事故;它还可以提高交通效率,减少拥堵;同时,无人驾驶汽车也能为老年人、残疾人等特殊群体提供便利。

3. 互联网,互联网的普及和发展改变了人们的生活方式。

人们可以通过互联网购物、学习、工作等。

互联网还促进了信息的传播和交流,加强了国际间的联系和合作。

4. 社交媒体,社交媒体如Facebook、Twitter等已经成为人们日常生活中不可或缺的一部分。

社交媒体可以帮助人们与朋友、家人保持联系,分享生活点滴;同时,它也成为新闻传播的重要渠道,人们可以及时了解到全球各地的新闻动态。

5. 3D打印技术,3D打印技术可以将数字模型转化为实体物体,为制造业带来了革命性的变化。

它可以加快产品开发和生产的速度,降低成本,实现个性化定制。

6. 虚拟现实(Virtual Reality,简称VR),虚拟现实技术可以创造出一种仿真的虚拟环境,使用户身临其境。

VR技术在游戏、旅游、教育等领域有广泛应用,为用户带来全新的体验和享受。

以上是一些关于科技类话题的素材,你可以根据具体的题目和要求来灵活运用这些素材,展开论述。

记得在写作过程中要注意逻辑性和连贯性,合理组织素材,以达到全面、完整的回答。

祝你取得好成绩!。

雅思写作task1范文

雅思写作task1范文

雅思写作task1范文The bar chart illustrates the amount of money spent on five consumer goods in a European country in 2018. Overall, it can be seen that the highest expenditure was on food and drink, followed by clothing and footwear. On the other hand, the least amount of money was spent on electronic goods.Food and drink had the highest expenditure, with a total of 250 billion euros. This was followed by clothing and footwear, which had an expenditure of 200 billion euros. In contrast, the least amount of money was spent on electronic goods, with only 50 billion euros.Looking at the individual items, it is evident that the highest expenditure was on groceries, with 150 billion euros spent. This was followed by dining out, with an expenditure of 100 billion euros. The least amount of money was spent on alcoholic drinks, with only 50 billion euros.In terms of clothing and footwear, it can be seen that the highest expenditure was on shoes, with 120 billion euros spent. This was followed by clothing, with an expenditure of 80 billion euros. The least amount of money was spent on accessories, with only 20 billion euros.In conclusion, the bar chart illustrates the expenditure on five consumer goods in a European country in 2018. Food and drink had the highest expenditure, while electronic goods had the least. Groceries and shoes were the items with the highest expenditure in their respective categories.。

剑桥雅思真题15-写作(Test 1 附高分范文)

剑桥雅思真题15-写作(Test 1 附高分范文)

剑桥雅思真题14—写作(Test 3 附高分范文)Writing Task 1You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.Write at least 150 words.参考范文1:The bar chart gives information about people’s habits of purchasing and drinking coffee and tea in different cities in Australia, according to the results of a survey.To sum up, it can be immediately seen that people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits are similar in all five cities except in Adelaide.Buying coffee or tea in a cafe is the most popular among the people in Sydney as well as Melbourne, Brisbane and Hobart, especially in Sydney where almost 63% of drinkers have such a habit. The proportions of cafe visitors are marginally lower in the other three cities, ranging from 56% to 62%. However, the percentage of fresh coffee buyers is the smallest in all four cities, with that of the buyers in Brisbane the lowest, at merely 34%. Meanwhile, the popularity of drinking instant coffee is between that of visiting a cafe and that of buying fresh coffee.The pattern, however, is different in Adelaide, where instant coffee is people’s preference, with half of them involved in the purchase. The percentage of cafe visitors is quite similar, at justbelow 50%, while fresh coffee is the least popular.参考范文2:The chart illustrates preference of citizens’ purchasing and consuming tea and coffee in five cities, i.e., Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart. Five cities shared overall consistency, but there were still some trivial divergences.According to the analytical result from people’s buying behavior in the last four weeks, with more than 45 percent of people going to cafe for coffee or tea, people in five cities consistently had preference on cafe, and three cities, Sydney, Melbourne and Hobart embraced this preference more obviously than the other two. Adelaide showed tiny divergence at this point. With approximately half of residents preferring instant coffee, there were slightly less people in Adelaide choosing cafe. Similarly, instant coffee ranked the second place in five cities, except for Adelaide. Buying fresh coffee won least preference from all five cities. Though citizens in Sydney and Melbourne conveyed a relatively higher preference on this option, with less than 45 percent of residents choosing it, fresh coffee was still the least favorable option in these two cities. In Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart, fresh coffee saw a larger gap with other two options, with a percentage of less than 40 percent, or even 30 percent.Writing Task 2You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.Write about the following topic:Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.Write at least 250 words.参考范文:With increased population mobility attributable to accelerated urbanization and globalization, it is common for people to change their living places more than once by renting houses. However, owning a home is still valued in some countries, especially in my country, China. This can be explained from social and personal angles.China is a country where hukou (household registration) system invariably plays a crucial part in one’s life. Its importance reaches a peak when people consider sending their children to a reputable school, which admits students largely on the basis of their registered permanent residence, i.e. where their own house is located. Therefore, many people rush to buy houses located near famous schools.In addition, house ownership provides a sense of security and ease, which is inherent in Chinese people’s nature. Having a house to call their own can surely relieve their pressure especially after a day’s tiring work, and they can decorate the home in whatever way they like. By contrast, living in a rented house, people may have to put up with what the house is like, or worse, deal with old furniture or house appliances which frequently break down.Despite the above mentioned reasons for owning a home, I think it is a negative trend if all people live for house ownership. My strong argument is that housing prices in cities, particularlyfirst-tier cities, are really exorbitant. A common couple may have to work for decades to afford a livable flat in Shanghai in the suburbs. With money being the major goal in career, people may have to sacrifice their health, their time with family or even their passion for dreams, which, I believe, are more important for one’s wellbeing. Secondly, with globalization, people are no longer restricted in one place in terms of education and work. Thus, renting a house may be a feasible choice. In this way, they can save the complex procedures of buying and selling a house.In summary, it is true that owning a house matters for some and brings many advantages, but it is far from beneficial for everyone to struggle to have a one.。

雅思写作task1

雅思写作task1

3. 写作 写好引言段(introduction) 引言段开头必须是主题句。包括图表的类型, 内容指的是什么等。命题中已有主题句的情况, 转写题目。 描写图表(body) 注意使用衔接词和转承短语,使文章紧凑,逻 辑性强。 结尾段(ending) 不需要加一段“单独”的结论,不需要发表个 人观点。

波动 Fluctuate There were strong/slight fluctuations… 峰值 …reached its peak/ plateau/ bottom/ lowest point …peaked at 1000 比例 A constitute/ accounts for/ makes up/ takes up nearly 10% of B B is composed of 50%..,40%.., and 10%..
雅思图表作文
考察学生观察图表,解释,说明信息的能 力。 无需阐述自己的意见,做出假设或对所给 的信息做出结论性评价。 字数不少于150字,最好在180字左右。

写作内容
既有宏观overview又有微观details 语言简练明确,逻辑性强 相关处进行关系描述和对比

写作时态
一般用过去时描述已经发生的客观信息。 没有时间信息的客观描述用一般现在时。 预测数据使用表将来的结构。 Be projected/ expected/ predicted/ forecasted to
如何写overview (线、柱、饼、表) As an overall trend,… (流程) This process diagram covers/includes … stages/phrases.

如何表方向 1. 上升 Increase/rise/grow/boom/top/climb/go up/an upward trend …in 2003 were 23% up of those of 2001 Roughly doubled/ tripled/ quadrupled 2. 下降 decrease/ descend/ dive/ plunge/ decline/ drop/ reduction …experienced/saw/witnessed a 7% drop…

雅思写作Task1必备词汇

雅思写作Task1必备词汇

Task1必备词汇图表chart = graph = diagram直线line 曲线curve 柱bar /column 饼pie 表table = figures = statisticsthe thin(细线) / thick(粗线) / broken(虚线) / dotted(点线) line表明,表示,阐明show , give information about,reveal,indicate,demonstrate直线图类词汇(上升类动词)Increase------------ decrease (下降类动词)go up-------------- go downrise up-------------- fall downclimb-----------------slideascend --------------declinekeep an upward tendency ----keep a downward tendency波动动词类:fluctuatefluctuate upward / downward(波动向上/向下)保持平稳类动词:keep / remain / maintain / stayunchanged / constant / stable(形容词,不变的)修饰动词的副词:slightly 轻微地,slowly 缓慢地,gradually 逐渐地,steadily 稳定地,rapidly 迅速地,significantly 明显地,sharply 明显地,dramatically急剧地,修饰名词的形容词:slight, slow, gradual, steady, rapid, moderate, significant, sharp, dramatic大约,大概,左右类词汇:almost / approximately / around / roughly / more or less / nearly 时间from … to …/during the period/ between … and … / starting from ….曲线图类词汇峰值:peak (v. & n.) summit (v. & n.) highest point(n.)谷值:touch the bottom (v.) nadir (n.) lowest point(n.)稳定时期:constant(adj.)stable(adj.)stationary phase (n.)饼形图类词汇表“占有”的动词:share, occupy ,account for ,be in charge of ,be responsible for 主动be shared by,be occupied by,be in the charge of 被动“百分比”percentage , proportiona small percentage of … (20%)a quarter of …(25%)the minority of … (40%)half of …(50%)the majority of … (60%)three quarters of …(75%)most of … (80%)one-fifth / one-third基本句型:1occupies / accounts for the majority of A (x%).y% of A is shared by / is in the charge of 2.3 and4 are responsible for / in charge of the rest, with z% and w% respectively.倍数的表达方式Double 是两倍/大一倍Increase/decrease three times 增长/减少了三倍five times as much/many/big as…流程图/示意图/地图介绍段:The flow chart / diagram / map illustrates … The whole procedure can be divided into … stages.主体段(一般过渡:时间、顺序、目的)时间:to begin with, next, then, later, finally; at the same time顺序:the first stage involves … / in the second stage / in the third stage / in the last stage 目的:in order to / in order that; so as to / so thatArgumentationReport大作文如何开头S1 (背景)现如今,在当代in the present age today at present nowadaysin current society in contemporary society众所周知It is generally believed that….widely acceptedcommonly acknowledgedIt is popular/common belief that……越来越重要….plays an increasingly key/crucial/essential/important/significant role in……以惊人的速度向前发展…is advancing/developing at an amazing/rapid/accelerated speed in preaent-day society.…越来越流行…is increasing popular in the contemporary world.…彻底改变了我们的生活… has completely changed our lives.(负面背景)…的问题越来越严重The problems of … are becoming increasing severe/serious/worrying.S2 引出话题备用句型But in the meanwhile,… has become a highly debatable issue.But meanwhile, wheather …. is an issue open to debate.S3 转述观点可能会用到some people some some individualsthink believe say argue claimS4 自己的观点可能会用到As far as I am concerned, I am in favor of the former/latter view.Speaking for myself, I think…Personally,….In my view,….第二段/第三段同义词替换:S1 There is no denying that…It is true that…It is obvious that…It is clear that…There is no doubt that…S2 –S5 First , Firstly , To begin withSecond , Secondly , Moreover , Furthermore , BesidesLastly , Finally , More importantlyTherefore ,thus , hence , consequently , as a result , as a consequenceS6,S7 In other word , By the I mean, In fact , As a matter of fact结尾段同义词S1 In summary to sum up In sum From the above analysis In conclusion S2 I am convinved that…I believe….单一主体Most high level jobs in the government are done by men. Some people believe that the government should encourage a certain percentage of these jobs to be reserved for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?①Today, while more and more women are playing increasingly essential roles in modern society, it has to be noted that most high-level governmental jobs are still within men’s grasp. ②For this reason, some people propose that a certain percentage of such positions should be assigned to women.①From some people’s point of view, the practice may sound reasonable based on the following reasons.②First of all, it is beneficial for the women to bring their talents in certain fields into full play. ③It is widely accepted that women are generally more careful, patient and gifted in certain field like arts compared with their male counterparts and preserving some governmental positions related to such fields for them seems to be a decent idea. ④ Moreover, the move could be regarded as a sign of equality between men and women, which indicates the women’s value has been realized.①While the above reasons seem sounding, the negative side of the practice should never be overlooked. ② Firstly, the packed-schedule of a governmental top position is likely to make women become so busy with their job that their family lives are always neglected. ③ The fact that the majority of female top employees in the US government are either single or divorced serves as a convincing example. ④More importantly, the practice also harms certain capable male candidates’ interests and it is likely to make women to be more dependent on such preferential policies.①To sum up, it does bring benefits to the government if more women participate in certain fields of governmental positions. ②Such benefits, nevertheless, are based on the sacrifice of the women’s family lives and the interests of their male counterparts. ③So I think it is acceptable for the government to encourage women to commit themselves to some high level jobs, but on no account should we reserve them for women purposely. (306 words)双重观点:二选一结构Some people believe that developing countries should concentrate on improving industrial skills. Some people argue that developing countries should promote education first. Discuss the both viewpoints and give your own opinion.*At present, quite a number of developing countries always find themselves caught in a dilemma that whether they should regard the development of industrial skills or the promotion of education as their priority. ③ While it seems that both options have their reasons, I am in favor of the latter one personally.① Apparently, those who advocate the development of industrial skills do have their reasons to a certain extent.② They believe that compared with promoting education, laying stress on industry brings immediate economic return for developing countries more directly. ③The improvement of industrial skills, nevertheless,is simply of short-term interests. ④ Without sufficient talents, how long such economic prosperity could last is quite questionable.①While we have to admit that there is some element of truth in the above argument, the latter opinion, nevertheless, is more convincing to me.②Indeed, education costs a lot instead of bringing immediate economic return. ③The point should not be overlooked is that only by the promotion of education can we ensure the progress of the national strength in the long run. ④ A country that fully concentrates on the improvement of industrial skills, due to the lack of effective education, is likely to suffer from a huge lack of talents who have the ability to propel the society further forward.① From the above analyses, we can see that only by the progress of education can we lay a solid foundation for the long-term development for a developing country. ② For this reason, I believe that it is wiser to develop education first instead of industrial skills. (258 words)双重观点:改良模式Some people think that it is the responsibility of government to ensure that people have healthy lifestyle by taking compulsory measures. Others think people should be given the full freedom to make their lifestyle decisions. Discuss the both viewpoints and give your own opinion. (2008.3.29)② Some people hold that government should hold the full responsibility to make sure that people lead their lives in a healthy way. ③Others, however, argue that it is only the people themselves that can decide which lifestyle they pursue.① On one hand, the proposal sounds reasonable to a certain extent.② If government does take certain compulsory measures, for instance, banning all pubs and internet cafes in cities, it is possible that a number of people, especially teenagers who stay up late for parties or PC games, will have to discard their obsession and revert to a normal lifestyle. ③Nevertheless, it has to be pointed out that although the practice seems to be sounding, it is unlikely to solve the problem thoroughly. ④ For example, even if all the pubs and internet cafes are officially banned, chances are that those young people will still indulge themselves in unhealthy lifestyles playing PC games or throwing parties till midnight at home.①On the other hand, those who call for the freedom to choose their own lifestyles also have a point. ②Indeed, it would be a sign indicating that people’s freedom are fully recognized and respected if a government leaves the decision to people themselves. ③However, it should not be ignored that some young people who do lack self-control are possibly to be fully obsessed with self-indulgent lifestyles if the government virtually does nothing about it. ④ Such excessive freedom would turn out to be nothing but a curse.①From the above analysis, it could be noted that either viewpoint has obvious problems. ②In my opinion, the government needs to play a role in guiding people to live in a healthy way but it is never possible for the government to literally “ensure” that by taking compulsory measures. (292 words)论点可用论证方法1.举例说明For example For instance T ake (Consider)…as an example2.解释说明It means That is to say In other words3.因果论证因:as a result of due to owing to果:as a result as a consequence thus hence therefore4.比较与对比on the contrary in contrast by contrast on the other hand 5.让步与反驳Although while admittedly however nevertheless。

雅思13test1writing task 1范文

雅思13test1writing task 1范文

雅思13test1writing task 1范文摘要:1.概述图表内容2.分析图表特点和亮点3.对比各项数据变化4.总结图表传达的信息正文:相信很多准备雅思考试的同学都对写作任务1中的图表作文有一定了解。

今天我们就以雅思13test1的写作任务1范文为例,详细分析一下如何应对这类题目。

首先,我们来概述一下图表内容。

图表通常会展示一段时间内某一事物的变化趋势,例如本题中的图表描绘了某城市居民每天花费在户外活动、看电视和上网的时间。

通过对图表的观察,我们可以发现三个时间段(早上、中午、晚上)的数据变化。

其次,分析图表的特点和亮点。

本题的图表采用柱状图形式,清晰地展示了各个时间段内居民活动类型的变化。

从图表中我们可以直观地看到,户外活动在早上和中午时段逐渐增加,而看电视和上网的时间则在减少。

这种变化趋势有助于我们更好地理解居民生活习惯的转变。

接下来,我们对比各项数据变化。

从图表中可以看出,户外活动在早上6点到8点间增长了约15%,而在中午12点到14点间增长了约20%。

相比之下,看电视的时间在这两个时间段内分别减少了约10%和15%,上网时间则减少了约15%和20%。

这些数据变化反映出人们在一天中的生活习惯规律。

最后,总结图表传达的信息。

通过观察这幅图表,我们可以得出以下结论:随着时间推移,某城市居民越来越注重户外活动,而看电视和上网的时间则在逐渐减少。

这可能与人们越来越关注健康生活、减少室内娱乐活动的趋势有关。

当然,这种变化也可能受到其他因素的影响,如政策倡导、环境改善等。

总之,在应对雅思写作任务1的图表作文时,我们要注意观察图表内容、分析数据变化、提炼信息要点,并运用恰当的表达方式使文章更具可读性和实用性。

雅思写作第一部分满分攻略

雅思写作第一部分满分攻略

雅思写作第一部分满分攻略雅思写作第一部分满分攻略TASK 1写作三大步骤(1)审题:找出主要信息点,具体为两个任务:A: 辨别所要写图表的类型,是线状(line ),柱状(bar ),还是饼状(pie)等B: 找图表的主要内容,是人口变化,交通工具,受教育水平,或者是一项工艺的制作流程。

(2)构思:审题是对文章主要内容的一个大概认识,而构思就是对自己认识的进一步深化。

构思的主要任务为:分析图表的主要特征,弄清写作重点并选用适当的分析方法。

图表的主要特征是指其所描述现象或者问题的规律,并找出描述重点,不是图表上所出现的所有信息都要写出来,之后就是分析方法的选择,主要的分析方法有:数据分类,数据比较,平铺直叙法等,具体选哪种,需要根据图表的内容来确定。

(3)写作:写作是对前两个步骤的确认。

考生把自己的想法准确而详细的落实下来。

一般来说,这个部分的写作可以采用三或四段式:1)引言段(用简短的语言来描述图表的主要内容)。

一把来说,写作命题会给出的主要信息,如,The line chart below shows thegrowth of households with personal computers in the U.S.通过这句话,我们可以了解图表的主要信息,“美国每个家庭所拥有计算机量的增长变化。

”在这种情况下,考生可以重现组织一下这个具体,在中间加入一些具体的数字和变化年限等,使得阅卷老师一下就明白图表的主要内容。

引言段通用句式如下:This is a table / chart / (line线状 bar柱状pie饼状)graph whichdemonstrate / illustrate / reveal /depict/privide informationabout.............2)图表具体信息描述段:这个段落主要描写体现图表主要特征或总体变化规律的数据或信息,并用恰当的连接词语,如,on contrast , on theotherhand, however, like wise 等,把文章内容紧密的衔接起来。

雅思写作小作文精选范文1

雅思写作小作文精选范文1

雅思写作小作文精选范文1The following curved chart show the situation concerning the costs ofvideos sales and rentals trade in EU and US from 1992 to 2000. The abscissa ofthe chart represents the value of each element, and the ordinate figures thetime during 8 years.In rental trade, there are dramatically differentbetween the situation ofUS and EU. in 1992, there are almost$6000 profits in US. However, the trade inEU only generalized $2500 at the same time. Then the trendkept climbing infollowing year though there were still some little drops in US, while EU got thedecrease from $ 2500 to $1500.Regarding the situation of sales trade, there were very close figures in1992 respectively $2000 in US and $1800 in EU. Then the datain US had ascendedwithout any fall in the period. Simultaneously, after aseries fluctuations, thedata in EU dropped to $1000 in 2000.From the chart, the value about videos sales and rental in US is much thanEU. Rentals are popular in US during this stage, while sales were developingvery fast. Both rental and sales in EU kept drop from 1992 to 2000.109 TASK 1Life-span is known as a matter of great concern for the generalpublic in our society from ancient time to now. According to the above table wecan obtain some information about the life-span from 1911 to 2001 in the UK.In 1911, only 73 men and 100 women were 100 or more 100 years old. However,in 1941, the number of people who can reach to 100 years old increased to 449that includes 132 males and 317 females. Then, the number reached to 2332 in1971 which contains 287 males and 2035 females. In 2001, the number of males isabout 536 while approximately 4085 are females Another important phenomenon isthat in 2001 the number of females increased 40 times than the males’ number in1911 while males only went up about 7 times .Judging by the figures, we are fully justified in declaring that with thedevelopment of the science and technology, the people’s life-span is increasingslowly and most of them are women.。

雅思task1写作模板

雅思task1写作模板

雅思task1写作模板全文共四篇示例,供读者参考第一篇示例:雅思写作任务1是雅思考试中的第一部分,要求考生根据图表、图形或表格等形式的信息,对相关数据进行描述和比较。

这部分考试主要是考察考生的数据分析和描述能力。

为了帮助考生更好地应对雅思写作任务1,下面提供一份雅思task1写作模板供考生参考。

雅思task1写作模板第一段:引言在第一段,我们需要简要介绍图表的背景信息,如图表内容、数据来源、时间范围等。

同时简要概括图表呈现的数据趋势。

例如:This bar chart illustrates the amount of consumption of three different types of beverages in 2015 and 2020.以上就是一份简单的雅思task1写作模板,希望考生能够根据此模板进行练习和准备,提高自己的写作水平,取得理想的雅思考试成绩。

祝考生们考试顺利!第二篇示例:雅思考试是全球最著名的英语语言考试之一,被广泛认可和应用于全球范围内的教育和职业领域。

雅思写作任务1是两种写作任务之一,要求考生根据给定的图表、数据或图像来描述和解释相关信息。

为了帮助考生更好地应对雅思写作任务1,以下是一个常用的模板供考生参考:第三段:比较要点1. highlight any comparisons or contrasts shown in the graph/picture2. discuss similarities and differences between different categories or groups3. analyze the reasons behind the differences以上是一个典型的雅思写作任务1模板,考生可以根据具体情况在这个模板的基础上进行增减和调整。

在应对雅思写作任务1时,考生应该注意遵循规定的字数要求、清晰明了地描述数据和信息、合理分析数据并提出相关见解。

雅思写作1

雅思写作1

雅思写作(第一站)Task 1The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005.In 1990, it is strikingly obvious that the resort was a much greener residential place with a large number of trees and separate houses, but in the following next 15 years, great changes took place and the resort became more industrialized and modernized. The most noticeable is that all of the trees and houses beside the east of railway line were demolished and replaced by a factory. Moreover, in the south-west of the resort those individual houses and tress made way for a supermarket and some skyscrapers. Besides, there used to have no airport, yet in 2005, an airport was built north-east of the resort. Last but not the least, in the north-west of it, although a few houses and trees were left, some skyscrapers were constructed.All in all, the place experienced many changes over the fifteen years, which turns it into an urban city. (总计:166)Task 2Living on the earth, we have been benefiting from the generous giving of nature, fresh air, clean water, breathtaking landscapes, and abundant resources and so on. On the other hand, we have brought problems such as environment pollution, poverty, animal killing and other kind ofdamages. When it comes to these issues, a popular belief is that young people are much more aware of and concerned about them. However, I think it is unnecessarily true.In our daily life, there are old people who are deeply concerned about the well-being of both humans and animals. They often talk about the social and environmental problems with great affections because they have been living long on the earth and they feel it a great responsibility to keep the earth a habitable and harmonious place for not only themselves but also the following generations. What’s more, old people, who cherish more the present belongings in their inert and traditional thoughts, have witnessed bad conditions and are far more aware of the price those bad conducts will pay. So they think it a must to keep alert to what is happening home and abroad and then inform or warn them to young people.Young generation, however, pay more attention to their own things. They are just in the right age of finding selves and getting to know the surroundings. It cannot be denied that some young people have made great contributions in dealing with issues mentioned at the very beginning. Yet the cases are much fewer compared with the contributions made by old people. What’s more, it is worth picking up that young people usually depend on their old generations and are reluctant to care about the uninteresting and serious topics. They putgreat priorities on their study, working and entertaining.All in all, that young people are much more aware of and concerned about the big issues doesn’t hold water. Nevertheless, regardless of age, gender and race, it should be every individual’s duty to show more concern to nature and human well-being. After all, our tomorrow is within our own hands. (总计348)。

雅思写作Task1 7分范文

雅思写作Task1 7分范文

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in2002.Percentage of national consumer expenditure by category -2002The table shows percentages of consumer expenditure for three categories of products andservices in five countries in 2002.It is clear that the largest proportion of consumer spending in each country went on food, drinks and tobacco.On the other hand,the leisure/education category has the lowest percentages in the table.Out of the five countries,consumer spending on food,drinks and tobacco was noticeably higher in Turkey,at 32.14%,and Ireland,at nearly 29%.The proportion of spending on leisure and educationwas also highest inTurkey, at 4. 35%, while expenditure onclothingand footwear wassignificantly higher in Italy,at 9%,than in any of the other countries.It can be seen that Sweden had the lowest percentages of national consumer expenditure forfood/drinks/tobacco and for clothing/footwear,at nearly 16%and just over 5%respectively.Spain had slightly higher figures for these categories,but the lowest figure for leisure/education,at only 1.98%.The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.The charts compare the amount of water used for agriculture,industry and homes around the world,and water use in Brazil and the Democratic Republic of Congo.It is clear that global water needs rose significantly between 1900and 2000, and that agriculture accounted for the largest proportion of water used.We can also see that water consumption was considerably higher in Brazil than in the Congo.In 1900,around 500km³of water was use d by the agriculture sector worldwide.The figures for industrial and domestic water consumption stood at around one fifth of that amount.By 2000,global water use for agriculture had increased to around 3000km³, industrial water use had risento just under half that amount,and domestic consumption had reached approximately 500km³.In the year 2000,the populations of Brazil and the Congo were 176million and 5.2million respectively.Water consumption per person in Brazil,at 359m³,was much higher than that inthe Congo,at only 8m³,and this could be explained by the fact that Brazil had 265times more irrigated land.(184words,band 9)The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between1990and2002compared with the average house prices in1989.The bar chart compares the cost of anaverage house infive major cities over a period of 13years from 1989.We cansee that house prices fell overall between1990 and 1995, but most of the cities sawrisingprices between1996 and 2002. Londonexperienced by far the greatest changes inhouseprices over the 13-year period.Over the 5years after 1989,the cost of average homes in Tokyo and London dropped by around 7%,while New York house prices went down by 5%.By contrast,prices rose by approximately 2%in both Madrid and Frankfurt.Between 1996and 2002,London house prices jumped to around 12%above the 1989average. Homebuyers in New York also had to pay significantly more,with prices risingto 5%above the1989average,but homes in Tokyo remained cheaper than they were in 1989.The cost of an average home in Madrid rose by a further 2%,while prices in Frankfurt remained stable.(165words)The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in1999.The table gives informationabout poverty rates amongsix types of household inAustralia inthe year 1999.It is noticeable that levels of poverty were higher for single people than for couples,and people with children were more likely to be poor than those without. Poverty rates were considerably lower among elderly people.Overall, 11% of Australians, or 1,837,000 people, were livinginpoverty in1999. Aged peoplewere the least likely to be poor,with poverty levels of 6%and 4%for single aged people and aged couples respectively.Just over one fifth of single parents were living in poverty,whereas only 12%of parents living with a partner were classed as poor. The same pattern can be seen for people with no children:while 19%of single people in this group were living below the poverty line,the figure for couples was muchlower, at only 7%.(150words,band 9)The map below is of the town of Garlsdon.A new supermarket(S)is planned for the town.The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.The map shows two potential locations (S1 and S2) for a new supermarket in a town calledGarlsdon.The maindifference betweenthe two sites is that S1 is outside the town, whereas S2 is inthetown centre.The sites can also be compared in terms of access by road or rail,and their positions relative to three smaller towns.Looking at the information in more detail,S1is in the countryside to the north west of Garlsdon, but it is close to the residential area of the town. S2 is also close to the housingarea,which surrounds the town centre.There are main roads from Hindon,Bransdon and Cransdon to Garlsdon town centre,but this is a no traffic zone,so there would be no access to S2by car.By contrast,S1lies on the main road to Hindon,but it would be more difficult to reach from Bransdon and Cransdon.Both supermarket/sites are close to the railway that runs through Garlsdon from Hindon to Cransdon.can use "compared to", "compared with" and "in comparison with" in the same way. For example:• Prices in the UK are high compared to / with / in comparisonwith (prices in) Canada andAustralia.• Compared to / with/ incomparisonwith(prices in) Canada and Australia, prices inthe UKare high.When writing about numbers or changes, I find it easier to use "while" or "whereas":•There are 5 million smokers in the UK, while / whereas only 2 million Canadians and 1 millionAustralians smoke.• Between 1990 and 2000, the number of smokers in the UK decreased dramatically, while whereas the figures for Canada and Australia remained the same.The following bar chart has a total of 24 bars. It's impossible to describe 24 pieces of information in only 20 minutes, so you need to select .The bar chart compares consumer spending on six different items in Germany,Italy,France and Britain.It is clear that British people spent significantly more money than people in the other threecountries on all six goods. Of the six items, consumers spentthe most money onphotographicfilm.People in Britain spentjust over £170,000 on photographic film, which is the highest figure shown on the chart.By contrast,Germans were the lowest overall spenders,with roughly the samefigures (just under £150,000)for each o f the six products.The figures for spendingontoys were the same inbothFrance and Italy, at nearly £160,000.However,while French people spent more than Italians on photographic film and CDs,Italians paid out more for personal stereos, tennis racquets and perfumes. The amount spent by Frenchpeople on tennis racquets,around £145,000,is the lowest figure shown on the chart.The diagrams below show some principles of house design for cool and for warm climates.The diagrams show how house designs differ according to climate.The most noticeable difference between houses designed for cool and warm climates is in the shape of the roof.The designs also differ with regard to the windows and the use of insulation.We can see that the cool climate house has a high-angled roof,which allows sunlight to enterthrough the window. By contrast, the roof of the warm climate house has a peak in the middle and roof overhangs to shade the windows. Insulationand thermal buildingmaterials are used incoolclimates to reduce heat loss, whereas insulation and reflective materials are used to keep the heat out in warm climates.Finally, the cool climate house has one window which faces the direction of the sun, while the warmclimate house has windows on two sides which are shaded from the sun. By openingthe two windows at night, the house designed for warm climates can be ventilated.The picture illustrates the way in which water passes from ocean to airnatural process known as the water cycle.Three main stages are shown on the diagram. Ocean water evaporates,eventually runs back into the oceans again.to land during thefalls as rain, andBeginning at the evaporation stage,we can see that 80% of water vapour in the air comes from the oceans. Heat from the sun causes water to evaporate, and water vapour condenses to formclouds. At the second stage, labelled p‘recipitation’onthe diagra m, water falls as rainor snow.At the third stage in the cycle, rainwater may take various paths. Some of it may fall into lakesor return to the oceans via ‘surface runoff’ . Otherwise, rainwater may filter through the ground, reachingthe impervious layer of the earth. Salt water intrusionis shownto take placejust beforegroundwater passes into the oceans to complete the cycle.(156 words, band 9)The first picture shows the layout of an art gallery, and the second shows some proposed changes to the gallery space.It is clear that significant changes will be made in terms of the use of floor space in the gallery. There will be a completely new entrance and more space for exhibitions.At present, visitors enter the gallery through doors which lead into a lobby. However, the planis to move the entrance to the ParkinsonCourt side of the building, and visitors will walk straightinto the exhibition area. In place of the lobby and office areas, which are shown on the existingplan, the new gallery plan shows an education area and a small storage area.The permanent exhibition space in the redeveloped gallery will be about twice as large as it is now because it will occupy the area that is now used for temporary exhibitions.There will also be a new room for special exhibitions. This room is shown in red on the existing plan and is not currently part of the gallery.(178 words, band 9)The table shows data about the underground rail networks in six major cities.The table compares the six networks in terms of their age, size and the number of people who use them each year.It is clear that the three oldest underground systems are larger and serve significantly more passengers than the newer systems.The London underground is the oldest system, havingopened in 1863. It is also the largestsystem, with 394 kilometres of route. The second largest system, in Paris, is only about half the size of the London underground, with 199 kilometres of route. However, it serves more people per year. While only third in terms of size, the Tokyo system is easily the most used, with 1927 million passengers per year.Of the three newer networks, the Washington DC underground is the most extensive, with 126 kilometres of route, compared to only 11 kilometres and 28 kilometres for the Kyoto and Los Angeles systems. The Los Angeles network is the newest, having opened in 2001, while the Kyoto network is the smallest and serves only 45 million passengers per year.(185 words)The pie charts compare the amount of electricity produced using five different sources of fuel in two countries over two separate years.Total electricity production increased dramatically from 1980 to 2000 in both Australia andFrance. While the totals for both countries were similar, there were big differences in the fuel sources used.Coal was used to produce 50 of the total 100 units of electricity inAustralia in1980, risingto130 out of 170 units in 2000. By contrast, nuclear power became the most important fuel source in France in 2000, producing almost 75% of the c ountry’selectricity.Australia depended on hydro power for just under 25% of its electricity in both years, but the amount of electricity produced usingthis type of power fell from5 to only 2 units inFrance. Oil,onthe other hand, remained a relatively important fuel source inFrance, but its use declined inAustralia. Both countries relied on natural gas for electricity production significantly more in 1980 than in 2000.(170 words)Read my full essay for the chart below. How have I organised the information? What languageThe chart gives information about UK immigration, emigration and net migration between 1999 and 2008.Both immigration and emigration rates rose over the period shown, but the figures for immigration were significantly higher. Net migration peaked in 2004 and 2007.In 1999, over 450,000 people came to live in the UK, while the number of people who emigrated stood atjust under 300,000. The figure for net migration was around 160,000, and itremained at a similar level until 2003. From 1999 to 2004, the immigration rate rose by nearly 150,000 people, but there was a much smaller rise in emigration. Net migration peaked at almost 250,000 people in 2004.After 2004, the rate of immigration remained high, but the number of people emigrating fluctuated. Emigration fell suddenly in 2007, before peaking at about 420,000 people in 2008. As a result, the net migration figure rose to around 240,000 in 2007, but fell back to around 160,000 in 2008.The three bar charts show average years of schooling, numbers of scientists and technicians,and research and development spending in developing and developed countries.Figures are given for 1980and 1990.It is clear from the charts that the figures for developed countries are much higher than those for developing nations.Also,the charts show an overall increase in participation in education and science from 1980to 1990.People indevelopingnations attended school for anaverage of around 3years,withonly aslight increase in years of schooling from 1980to 1990. On the other hand, the figure forindustrialised countries rose from nearly 9years of schooling in 1980to nearly 11years in 1990.From 1980to 1990,the number of scientists and technicians in industrialised countries almost doubled to about 70per 1000people.Spending on research and development also saw rapid growth in these countries,reaching $350billion in 1990.By contrast,the number of science workers indevelopingcountries remained below 20 per 1000 people, and researchspendingfellfrom about $50billion to only $25billion.(187words)The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts.The figure illustrates the process used by the Australian Bureau of Meteorology to forecast the weather.There are four stages inthe process,beginningwiththe collectionof informationabout theweather.This information is then analysed,prepared for presentation,and finally broadcast to the public.Looking at the first and second stages of the process,there are three ways of collecting weather data and three ways of analysing it.Firstly,incoming information can be received by satellite and presented for analysis as a satellite photo.The same data can also be passed to a radar stationand presented ona radar screenor synoptic chart.Secondly,incominginformationmay be collected directly by radar and analysed on a radar screen or synoptic chart.Finally, drifting buoys also receive data which can be shown on a synoptic chart.At the third stage of the process,the weather broadcast is prepared on computers.Finally,it is delivered to the public on television,on the radio,or as a recorded telephone announcement.The line graphcompares the percentage of people inthree countries who used the Internetbetween 1999and 2009.It is clear that the proportion of the population who used the Internet increased in each country over the period shown.Overall, a much larger percentage of Canadians and Americans had access to the Internet in comparison with Mexicans,and Canada experienced the fastest growth in Internet usage.In1999, the proportionof people usingthe Internet inthe USA was about 20%. The figuresfor Canada and Mexico were lower, at about 10% and 5% respectively. In2005, Internet usage inboth the USA and Canada rose to around 70%of the population,while the figure for Mexico reached just over 25%.By 2009, the percentage of Internet users was highest inCanada. Almost 100% of Canadiansused the Internet,compared to about 80%of Americans and only 40%of Mexicans.The graphshows changes inthe number of cars per household inGreat Britainover a periodof 36years.Overall, car ownership inBritainincreased between1971 and 2007. Inparticular, the numberof households with two cars rose,while the number of households without a car fell.In 1971,almost half of all British households did not have regular use of a car.Around 44%of households hadone car, but only about 7% had twocars. It was uncommonfor families toown three or more cars,with around 2%of households falling into this category.Theone-car household was the most common type from the late 1970’s onwards,although there was little change in the figures for this category.The biggest change was seen in the proportion of households without a car,which fell steadily over the 36-year period to around 25% in 2007.In contrast,the proportion of two-car families rose steadily,reaching about 26%in 2007, and the proportion of households with more than two cars rose by around 5%.(180words)。

雅思task1写作模板

雅思task1写作模板

雅思task1写作模板雅思写作Task 1是许多考生感到挑战的部分,因为它要求考生在规定的时间内,对图表、表格或流程图进行分析,并以清晰、连贯的方式呈现出来。

以下是一个雅思Task 1写作模板,旨在帮助考生更好地组织文章结构,提高写作效率。

雅思Task 1写作模板:一、开头段落1.概括介绍:简要描述图表、表格或流程图的主题,说明要分析的内容。

Example: The table below presents data on the population of three countries from 2000 to 2010.2.主题句:明确指出文章要分析的主题。

Example: This report will focus on analyzing the changes in population of these countries over the given period.二、主体段落1.第一段:描述图表/表格/流程图中的第一个数据点或阶段。

a.主题句:指出要分析的数据点或阶段。

Example: The first stage of the process involves ...b.详细描述:对数据点或阶段进行详细描述,包括数据变化、比较等。

Example: In 2000, the population of Country A was 10 million, which accounted for 20% of the total population of the three countries.2.第二段:描述图表/表格/流程图中的第二个数据点或阶段。

a.主题句:指出要分析的数据点或阶段。

b.详细描述:对数据点或阶段进行详细描述,与第一段类似。

3.依次类推,描述其他数据点或阶段。

三、结尾段落1.总结句:总结文章分析的主要结果。

Example: In conclusion, the population of these three countries experienced significant changes from 2000 to 2010.2.指出可能的趋势或关联:如有必要,指出数据之间的趋势或关联。

雅思第一环节作文示范模板

雅思第一环节作文示范模板

雅思第一环节作文示范模板英文回答:Task 1: Bar Chart。

The bar chart illustrates the number of people who visited different museums in London in 2021. The data is presented in millions of visitors, and the museums are listed in descending order of popularity.The British Museum was the most popular museum, attracting over 6 million visitors in 2021. The National Gallery and the Victoria and Albert Museum were the next most popular museums, with over 5 million and 4 million visitors respectively. The Science Museum, the Natural History Museum, and the Tate Modern were also popular, each attracting over 3 million visitors.The least popular museums were the Imperial War Museum, the Museum of London, and the National Maritime Museum,with under 2 million visitors each.Task 2: Opinion Essay。

In the modern world, it is often said that technology has made it easier than ever to stay connected with friends and family. However, some people argue that technology has actually made it more difficult to maintain meaningful relationships.There are a number of benefits to using technology to stay connected. For example, social media platforms like Facebook and Twitter allow us to keep in touch with people who we might not otherwise see very often. We can also use video calling apps like Skype and Zoom to communicate with people who live far away.However, there are also some drawbacks to using technology to stay connected. One potential problem is that it can be difficult to separate our online relationships from our offline relationships. This can lead to us feeling overwhelmed or even addicted to our devices. Additionally,technology can be a distraction, and it can make itdifficult to spend quality time with the people who are physically present in our lives.Ultimately, whether or not technology makes it easier or more difficult to maintain meaningful relationships is a complex question. There are both benefits and drawbacks to using technology to stay connected, and the best way to use technology is to find a balance that works for you.中文回答:任务 1,条形图。

雅思写作格式

雅思写作格式

雅思写作格式雅思写作是雅思考试的重要组成部分,其中包括了雅思写作任务一和雅思写作任务二。

雅思写作任务一是图表作文,要求考生根据给定的图表(图表包括:图表、柱状图、饼图、流程图、地图、表格等)进行分析和描述,最终得出结论。

雅思写作任务二是议论文,要求考生就给定的话题进行阐述、分析和探讨,并给出自己的观点和建议。

雅思写作格式是考生在写作过程中需要遵守的一些规范和标准,包括了写作的结构、段落、语言、逻辑等方面。

下面将会详细介绍雅思写作格式的具体内容。

一、雅思写作任务一格式1.1 概述雅思写作任务一主要是图表作文,要求考生根据给定的图表进行分析和描述,最终得出结论。

图表可以是图表、柱状图、饼图、流程图、地图、表格等。

写作的长度要求在150字左右。

1.2 结构雅思写作任务一的结构主要包括了三个部分:引言、主体和结论。

引言:在引言中,考生需要简单描述图表的类型、主题和一些数据等信息,为写作的主体部分做铺垫。

主体:主体部分是写作的核心,考生需要根据图表的数据进行分析和描述,可以使用一些数据、数字、图表等来支持自己的观点。

结论:结论是最后一个部分,考生需要根据自己的分析和描述得出结论,并对结论进行总结和概括。

雅思写作任务一的段落包括了三个部分:引言、主体和结论。

引言:引言部分需要写作一个段落,主要是为了引入话题和图表,让读者了解到写作的主题和背景等信息。

主体:主体部分是写作的核心,一般需要写作两到三个段落。

在主体部分,考生需要根据图表的数据进行分析和描述,可以使用一些数据、数字、图表等来支持自己的观点。

结论:结论部分需要写作一个段落,主要是为了总结和概括自己的分析和描述,并得出结论。

1.4 语言雅思写作任务一的语言需要简洁明了,避免使用复杂的句子和词语。

同时,需要使用一些专业的词汇和术语,以表达自己对图表的分析和描述。

1.5 逻辑雅思写作任务一的逻辑需要清晰,考生需要根据图表的数据进行分析和描述,并得出结论。

在分析和描述的过程中,需要保证逻辑的连贯性和合理性。

雅思写作评分标准1-9

雅思写作评分标准1-9

雅思写作评分标准1-9
雅思口语考试是国际上流行的英语水平考试之一,口语考试是其中必不可少的一项。

在口语考试中,评分标准可以帮助考生了解评分方式,从而更好地准备考试并取得理想的成绩。

以下是雅思口语考试评分标准1-9。

1分:无法进行基本的交流,连最简单的问题都无法回答。

2分:只能在非常熟悉的话题下进行短暂的谈话,常常需要考官的提示和引导。

3分:可以在一些熟悉的话题上进行沟通,但在新领域中的表现较差。

4分:在一些简单的话题上可以进行连贯的表达,但在复杂的话题下表现较差。

5分:可以在大多数话题上进行流畅的表达,在一些复杂的话题上也能表现出一定的水平。

6分:可以在各种话题上进行流畅、具有连贯性和准确性的表达。

7分:能够清晰、准确地用英语表达自己的想法,也能在一些复杂的话题上表现出一定的水平。

8分:在各种高难度话题上,能够以流畅、自然和精准的语言表达自己的观点,使用比较高级和复杂的语言。

9分:能够用非常流利、自然和精准的英语表达复杂的思想,并能够在不同的语境下使用灵活多变的语言。

了解雅思口语考试评分标准1-9可以帮助考生更好地准备
考试并获得理想的分数。

为了取得好成绩,考生需要充分练习口语技能,积极开展听、说、读、写综合训练。

雅思18 test2 writing 1 范文

雅思18 test2 writing 1 范文

雅思18 test2 writing 1 范文摘要:1.问题背景和现状2.两种观点的对比3.分析各自的优缺点4.提出自己的观点及理由5.结论正文:随着全球化的发展,英语作为国际交流的通用语言,其在各类考试中的重要性不言而喻。

其中,雅思考试作为衡量非英语母语者英语水平的标准之一,备受广泛关注。

本文将围绕雅思考试中的写作部分,具体讨论两种不同的写作观点,并分析各自的优缺点,最后提出自己的观点。

第一种观点认为,雅思写作应当侧重于测试考生的实际沟通能力,而不是纯粹的语言能力。

这一观点的主要支持者认为,考试的目的在于评估考生在实际生活场景中的英语应用能力,而不是仅仅评估他们的语言水平。

这种观点下的雅思写作试题,往往会设定具体的生活场景,如书信、通知、报告等,旨在考察考生在实际交际中的语言组织能力和表达能力。

第二种观点则主张,雅思写作应更注重测试考生的语言能力,尤其是词汇和语法水平。

这一观点的倡导者认为,语言是国际交流的基础,如果考生在词汇和语法方面存在明显不足,那么他们在实际交流中很可能会遇到困难。

因此,这种观点下的雅思写作试题,会更注重考察考生的语言准确性。

从我国考生的实际情况来看,大多数人在实际生活和工作中都需要用到英语,但他们的英语水平参差不齐。

在这种情况下,侧重于实际沟通能力的雅思写作试题似乎更符合我国考生的需求。

然而,我们也应认识到,语言能力是实际沟通的基础,如果考生在词汇和语法方面存在明显短板,那么他们在实际交流中很可能会遇到障碍。

综合以上分析,我认为,雅思写作在考察考生实际沟通能力的同时,也应关注他们的语言能力。

具体而言,雅思写作试题可以设定不同类型的场景,如生活、工作、学术等,以测试考生的实际应用能力。

同时,试题还应注重考察考生的词汇和语法水平,以确保他们在实际交流中能够准确地表达自己的想法。

总之,雅思写作考试既需要测试考生的实际沟通能力,也应关注他们的语言能力。

剑雅11test1大作文

剑雅11test1大作文

剑雅11test1大作文前阵子准备雅思考试,剑雅 11test1 的大作文可真是让我好好地“折腾”了一番。

这道作文题目一拿到手,我就感觉像是被扔进了一个语言的迷宫。

题目大概是讨论关于年轻人选择职业是应该听从父母建议还是自己做决定。

这看似简单,可真要动笔写,那真是愁煞我也!我坐在书桌前,面前摊着那张印着题目的纸,眼睛盯着题目,脑袋却像生锈的机器一样,半天转不起来。

我一会儿咬咬笔头,一会儿抓抓头发,心里那个着急啊!“哎呀,这可咋写呀?”我嘴里嘟囔着。

我决定先理理思路,从年轻人的角度想想。

年轻人嘛,充满朝气和梦想,总想着自己能闯出一片天,哪能愿意啥都听父母的。

就拿我邻居家的小哥哥来说,他一直梦想着成为一名摄影师,背着相机走遍世界,拍尽人间美景。

可他爸妈觉得这工作不稳定,非让他去考公务员,找个“铁饭碗”。

小哥哥那叫一个纠结啊,一方面不想违背父母的意愿,让他们伤心;另一方面又实在放不下自己的摄影梦。

再从父母的角度看,他们毕竟经历得多,吃过的盐比我们吃过的饭都多,他们的建议往往出于对我们的关心和爱护,怕我们走弯路、吃苦头。

就像我爸妈,老是唠叨说找工作要找稳定的,能按时上下班,有五险一金的。

他们觉得这样的生活才有保障,以后成家立业也能轻松些。

我想来想去,觉得这事儿吧,没有绝对的对错。

年轻人有冲劲,有梦想,应该勇敢去追求自己想要的。

但父母的经验和建议也不能完全不当回事儿。

毕竟他们是真心为我们好,不想我们受到伤害。

想到这,我觉得有思路了,赶紧拿起笔开始写。

可刚写了几句,又觉得不满意,涂涂改改的,那张纸都快被我画成“地图”了。

“哎呀,烦死啦!”我把笔一扔,瘫在了椅子上。

这时候,我妈进来了,看到我这副模样,笑着说:“咋啦?被作文难住啦?”我苦着脸点点头。

我妈说:“别着急,慢慢来,先把你想到的都写下来,再整理整理。

”听了妈妈的话,我好像又有了点信心。

我重新拿起笔,深吸一口气,继续写。

这次我写得顺畅了些,把年轻人追求梦想的热情,父母关心的苦心,还有自己的观点都写了进去。

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Object clauses 1) Who can guarantee that she’ll keep her word? 2) A straw shows which way the wind blows. 3) I was surprised at what she said.
Predicative clauses 1) That’s not what I meant. 2) That’s why I was late for the meeting. 3) That's how he got there. 4) That's when I met her.
Adverbial clauses of condition Subordinating conjunctions if, unless, as (so) long as, in case, provided that, providing that, suppose, supposing etc. Examples 1) If I were you, I’d go shopping with them. 2) He will go there unless it rains.
Coordinating Conjunctions
Logical Relationship Coordinating Conjunction
Addition Contrast Choice Cause Result
And But, yet Or, nor For So
Complext sentence
Adverbial clauses of purpose Subordinating conjuctions that, so that, in order that, lest, for fear that, etc. Examples 1) He looked over the engine carefully lest it should go wrong on the way. 2) He spoke in simple English so that everyone present could understand him.
Answers to exercise, so he went 1. Tom wanted
2. 3. 4. 5. 6.
Nominal clauses Subject clauses Object clauses Predicative clauses Appositive clauses
Subject clauses
1) Who knows himself knows others. 2) What you did is beyond reproach(无可指 责). 3) That her father is a hero is known to all. 4) It is a fact that he works in a small company.
组建文章 (话题,思路)
排列 组合

强化阶段 句法 词法
连词成句 连句成篇
基础阶段
基础阶段:
第二讲
Contents:
雅思写作必备语法总汇
2.1 构建≥9个单词的简单句 2.2 掌握8个字母的单词 2.3 轻松驾驭≥18个单词的复杂句
2.1简单句的写作思路
2.1.1五种基本句子结构
•主语 + 不及物动词 ( S + Vi ) •主语 + 及物动词 +宾语 ( S + Vt + O) •主语+双宾动词+间宾+直宾(S +Vt +O.indir+O. dir) • 主语 + 动词 +宾语 +宾语补语 (S + Vt. + O + O. compl)
Adverbial clauses of reason Subordinating conjunctions as, because, since, now (that), in that, considering (that), seeing (that), etc. Examples 1) He failed the exam because he was not well prepared. 2) As he was not well, she had to go without him.
•主语 + 系动词 + 表 (S + LV + predicative)
Simple sentences
1) English will be helpful to your work and to your career. 2) He and his younger brother work and live in the same city. 3) Snowflakes are dancing in the air. 4) We wish the problem settled. 5) It’s impossible for a man to show both loyalty and filial piety at the same time. 6) We accomplish this task. 7) He handed me the bag.
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雅思写作:
试题结构
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Part 1 Part 2
雅思写作 : 试题内容
Task 1: 20分钟 根据图表进行数据描述和分析,如流程图、 剖面图、曲线图; (A) Task1 Task2 社会功能信函. (G) Charts: Arguments A. Flow ; Discussion Task 2:B. line;table; 40分钟 column/ bar. 针对某一有争议说法&社会现象,写一篇议论性 文章. (A&G)
Adverbial clauses of place Subordinating conjuctions where, wherever, anywhere, everywhere, etc. Examples 1) You can go anywhere you want. 2) Where there is a will, there is a way.
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Adverbial clauses of concession Subordinating conjunctions as, though, although, even though, whatever, whoever, however, even if, no matter what [ when / how], etc. Examples 1) Even if we win tremendous successes in our work, we should not be conceited. 2) No matter what happens, we will go on doing like that.
Adverbial clauses of time Subordinating conjuctions after, before, when, whenever, while, once, since, till, until, as, as soon as, etc. Examples 1) I’ll do it now before I forget it. 2) When the tree falls, the monkeys scatter.
Main clause + Subordinate clause Subordinate clauses Adverbial clauses Nominal clauses (Noun clauses) Attributive clauses
Adverbial clauses
Adverbial Adverbial Adverbial Adverbial Adverbial Adverbial Adverbial Adverbial clauses clauses clauses clauses clauses clauses clauses clauses of of of of of of of of time place condition purpose manner comparison reason concession
Adverbial clauses of comparison Subordinating conjunctions as, than, as...as, not so (as)...as, the (-er / more)... the (-er / more)..., etc. Examples 1) It is much better than I expected. 2) She is as beautiful as a model (is).
Compound sentences 1) Air is not visible, but it is matter. 2) His birthday is next Sunday, so we must buy him a present. 3) The dish must be kept in a refrigerator, or else it will go sour. 4) Modesty helps one to go forward, and conceit makes one lag behind. 5) He controlled himself, for he did not want to betray his surprise, and his whole future depended on success at this interview.
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