作文之6级作文和翻译70分

作文之6级作文和翻译70分
6 级作文和翻译 70 分
【篇一：英语四六级作文及翻译】
家庭暴力 (domestic violence)指的是在亲近关系(intimate
relationship) 中一方对另一方的凌虐。

往常来说，受害者是小孩和妇
女。

在中国古代，人们以为男人有权益处罚他的孩子和老婆。

广义上
讲，家庭暴力不限制于显然的身体暴力，它也有很多其余的形式。

对
于家庭暴力产生的原由，出现了很多不一样的理论，比方犯法者的性
格和心理特点。

外面要素也有影响，比方犯法者所处的环境。

但是，
没有一种理论能涵盖所有状况。

参照译文：
characteristics.external factors also play a part,such as the
perpetrators surroundings.however, no theory seems to
cover all cases.
criminal
mental characteristic
青年奥林匹克运动会是专为全世界青年人建立的综合体育赛事。

第
二届夏天青年奥林匹克运动会于 2014 年 8 月 16 日至 28 日在南京举行。

本届青奥会的口号是“分享青春共筑将来”;寓意全世界青年人在奥林
匹克精神感化下，欢聚一堂，互相商讨，互相鼓舞，增进友情，共同成
长。

祥瑞物创意来自雨花石，意为倡导自然、运动、健康、
快乐的生活方式 ; 会徽将南京明城墙城门和江南民居轮廓组合在一同，
勾画出“nanjing ”字样，寓意青春之门。

参照译文：
youth olympic games, a comprehensive sports event, is
designed for young people all over the world. the second
summer youth olympic games was held from august 16, 2014
to 28 in nanjing. its slogan is share the youth, build the future ” which means the young people around the world in the
olympic spirit, get together and play
each other, encourage each other, enhance friendship and
grow up together. its mascot comes from rain flower stones,
advocating a lifestyle of natural, sports, healthy and happy;
its emblem will outline nanjing ming city wall gate and folk
houses together, with the idea of the gate of youth. specially
中国水资源地域散布不平均。

整体来讲，南方水资源丰富，北方则
水资源贫乏。

跟着人口的增加和经济的迅速发展，北方缺水的问题
日趋严重，解决方法之一就是跨流域(drainage area)调水，也就是南水北调工程 (south-to-north water diversion project)。

南水北调工程包含东、中、西三条线路。

东线从长江下游引水，沿京杭大运
河(beijing-hangzhou grand canal)北送，穿过黄河下的管道，向下流入天津邻近的水库 (reservoir) 。

中线从长江的支流汉江的丹江口水库引水到北京。

西线也被称作“大西线”，目的在于从长江上游引水到黄河上游。

参照译文：
in china water resources are unevenly distributed.in general,
water resources are abundant in the south but deficient in the
north.with the increase of population and rapid economic development, the problem of water shortage in the north is
getting more and more serious.one solution is to divert water
from one drainage area to another,also known as the south-to-
north water diversion project.there are three routes.the eastern
route will transfer water from the lower reaches of the yangtze
river to north along the beijing-hangzhou grand canal and
through a tunnel under the yellow river, from where it can flow downhill to reservoirs near tianjin.the central route is from danjiangkou reservoir on the han river, a branch of the
yangtze river, to beijing.the western route, also called the big
western line, aims at diverting water from the headwaters of
the yangtze river into the headwaters of the yellow river.
中国，地球上最吸引人的国家之一，有5000 多年的历史，是当前全球第二大经济体 (the second largest economy)。

跟着宽泛的经济改革，中国正经历着明显、迅速的变化。

1949 年从前的中国极端贫穷、收入不均衡 (income inequalities) 、国家不安全。

因为经济改革，
从 1980 年开始，人民的生活水平开始提高至基本水平之上。

全国人
口有了足够的食品、衣服和住宅，一般家庭能够吃得起各种各种的食品，穿得上时髦的衣服。

参照译文：
insecurity.since 1980 ， thanks to the economic reforms,
peoples standard of living started to climb beyond the basic
level.the general population had adequate food, clothing, and housing, and ordinary families could afford to eat a variety of
foods and wear stylish clothing.
stylish
时髦的
fashionable
中国的社会关系是典型的由共同的交际网络 (social network) 构成的社会关系。

交际网络中的个体经过“关系”相连，关系中的感情被称为“感情”。

中国的社会关系中一个特别重要的看法是“面子”看法，就像其余很多亚洲文化中的同样。

正如中国学术大家费孝通的社会学著作中所写的那样，中国人一跟其余社会的人对比一偏向于从社
会网络角度看社会关系。

所以，人们的关系以“近”或许“远”界定，而不是“有”或许“无”。

参照译文：
chinese social relationships are social relationships typified
by a mutual social network. the individuals within the social
network are connected by
guanxi(links) and the feeling within the links is known by the
term “ ganqing ” .an important concept within chinese social relationships is the concept of face,as in many other asian
cultures. as articulated in the sociological works of chinese
leading academic fei xiaotong, the chinese ，in contrast to
people of other
societies,tend to see social relationships in terms of social
networks. hence, the
years.the government provides primary education for six
years,starting at age six or seven, followed by six years of
secondary education for ages 12 to 18.some provinces may
have five-year primary school,but six years for secondary
school, including three years for middle school and three
years for high school.the ministry of education reported a 99
percent eollment rate for primary school and an 80 percent for
both middle and high schools.
自从商业航班出现后，对全世界旅行业冲击最大的莫过于中国旅行。

到 2015 年，将有 1 亿中国人打包行囊，出境旅行。

2012 年，中国超越美国和德国成为全世界最大的国际旅行花费国，创建了8300 万人在国际旅行中花费1020 亿美元的纪录。

韩国有报导说在2013 年 2 月份，中国到访旅客数目有史以来第一次超出了日本。

为应付这类
繁华，全世界旅行营运商向来竭尽全力地改变他们供给的服务-特别是在酒店方面。

参照译文： exceed outnumber surpass超出
2015,100 million chinese will pack their bags to travel abroad.
in 2012, chinese overtook americans and germans as the
worlds top international tourism spenders, with 83 million
people spending a record of 102 billion on international
tourism. south korea reported that in february, 2013, for the
first time ever, chinese tourists overtook japanese tourists in
terms of arrival number.in response to the boom,global travel operators have been relentlessly adapting their offerings-
hotels in particular.
spare no effort竭尽全力的
do ones utmost
从秦代到晚清，朝廷将人民分为四个阶级 :地主、农民、工匠和商人。

地主和农民构成了两个主要的阶级，而商人和工匠们则归到两个较
小的阶级。

从理论上讲，除了帝位，其余身份都不可以世袭(hereditary)。

当拥有大批土地和半农奴(semi-serfs)的显赫家族出现时，封建主义 (feudalism) 就会局部复辟。

他们控制着朝廷重要的民
事和军事职位，并将任职这些职位的时机对本宗族的成员敞开。

自唐朝开始，朝廷改革了科举制度 (imperial examination system),
试图消除这类现象。

参照译文：
from the qin dynasty to the late qing dynasty,the chinese government divided chinese people into four classes:landlord, peasant, craftsman and
【篇二：英语六级作文翻译必背】
一、常用句型
一)原由
1.a number of factors might contribute to (lead
to )(account for ) the phenomenon(problem).
2.the change in rgely results from the fact that...
3.we may blame ... ，but the real causes are...
4.another contributing factor (cause ) is ...
二)比较
1.the advantages of a are much greater than those of b.
2.for all the disadvantages ， it has its compensating
advantages.
3.a and b has several points in common.
4. people used to think ...，but things are different now.
三)批判
1 ．there is a grain of truth in these statements ， but they ignore a more important fact.
2 ．some people say ... ， but it does not hold water.
3 ．it makes no sense to argue for ...
4 ．too much stress placed on ... may lead to ...
四)结果
1.it may give rise to a host of problems.
2.the immediate result it produces is ...
3.it will exercise a profound influence upon...
4.its consequence can be so great that...
五)举例
1．a good case in point is ...
2．such examples might be given easily.
六)证明
1．no one can deny the fact that ...
2．recent studies indicate that ...
3．there is sufficient evidence to show that ...
七)开篇
1 ．many nations have been faced with the problem of ...
2 ．never in our history has the idea that ... been so popular.
3 ．faced with ... ， quite a few people argue that ...
4 ．according to a recent survey ， ...
5 ．with the rapid development of ......
八)结尾
1. from what has been discussed above，we can draw the conclusion that ...
2. it is high time that strict measures were taken to stop ...
3. with the efforts of all parts concerned，the problem will be solved thoroughly.
九)解说原由的
1.to begin with，then，furthermore，finally(激烈介绍)
，，，激烈介绍
)
3.first and foremost，besides，last but not least(激烈介绍
4.most important of all，moreover，finally
5.on the one hand，on the other hand(合用于两点的状况)
6.for one thing ，for another thing( 合用于两点的状况)
十)前后连结词
then ， therefore，consequently
result ， for this reason，
，accordingly ，hence ，as a so that
二、词汇替代
，characters ，folks 替代 (people ，persons)
perfect ，
， favorable
pleasurable
，
，
rosy ( 美好的 )promising (
excellent，outstanding
有希望的 )，
， superior替
换good
，unfavorable，poor，adverse，ill (有害的)替代
bad 。

假如 bad 做表语，能够有be less impressive替代。

army of college students indulge themselves in playing games
enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in
their dorms. when it approaches to graduation，as a result，they find their academic records are less impressive
4.(an army of，an ocean of，a sea of，a multitude of，a
host of ， many ， if not most)替代many.注：用many，if not
most必定要当心，many后必定要有词。

eg. many individuals，
if not most，har bor the idea that同.理用most，if not all，
替代 most.
5. a slice of，quiet a few，several替代some
6.harbor the idea that，take the attitude that，hold the view
that ， it is widely shared that，it is universally acknowledged
that) 替代 think ( 因为是书面语，所以要加that)
，business，matter替代thing
，
8. shared 替代common
9.reap huge fruits替代get many benefits )
10.for my part，from my own perspective替代in my opinion
11.increasing(ly)，growing替代more and more(注意没有growingly 这类形式。

所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing. 修
饰形容词，副词用 increasingly.)eg.sth has gained growing
popularity. sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of
sth.
12.little if anything ，或little or nothing 替代hardly
，rewarding 替代helpful
，client，consumer，purchaser，替代customer
，extremely，intensely替代very
16.hardly necessary，hardly inevitable替代unnecessary
，avoidable
17.sth appeals to sb，sth exerts a tremendous fascination on
sb 替代 sb take interest in / sb. be interested in
18.capture one’s attention替代attract one’s attention.
19.facet ，demension，sphere替代aspect
20.be indiicative of，be suggestive of，be fearful of替代indicate ， suggest，fear
21.give rise to，lead to，result in，trigger替代cause.
22. there are several reasons behind sth替代..reasons for sth
替代want.
24.pour attention into替代pay attention to
25.bear in mind that替代remember
26.enjoy ， possess 替代 have( 注意 process 是过程的意思 )
27.interaction 替代 communication
28.frown on sth替代be against，disagree with sth
29.to name only a few，as an example替代for example，for instance
30. next to / virtually impossible替代nearly / almost
impossible
31. believe ， claim ， maintain，argue，insist，hold the
opinion/ belief that替代think
三、常用短语
1.经济的迅速发展 the rapid development of economy
2.人民生活水平的明显提高 /稳步增加 the remarkable
improvement/ steady growth of peoples living standard
3.先进的科学技术 advanced science and technology
4.面对新的机会和挑战 be faced with new opportunities and
challenges
5. 人们广泛以为it is commonly believed/ recognized that
6.社会发展的必定结果 the inevitable result of social
development
7.惹起了宽泛的民众关注 arouse wide public concern/ draw
public attention
8. 不可以否定 it is un deniable that/ there is no denying that
9.热情的议论 /争辩 a heated discussion/ debate
10.有争议性的问题 a controversial issue
11.完整不一样的看法 a totally different argument
12. 一些人而此外一些人 some people while others
13. 就我而言 /就个人而言 as far as i am concerned ， / personally ，
14. 就达到绝对的一致 reach an absolute consensus on
15.有充足的原由支持 be supported by sound reasons
16.双方的论点 arguments on both sides
17.发挥着日趋重要的作用 play an increasingly important role
in
18. 对必不行少 be indispensable to
19. 正如谚语所说 as the proverb goes ：
20.也不例外be n o exception
21.对产生有利 /不利的影响 exert positive/ negative effects
on
22.利远远大于弊 the advantages far outweigh the
disadvantages.
23.致使，惹起 lead to/ give rise to/ contribute to/ result in
24.复杂的社会现象 a complicated social phenomenon
25.责任感 /成就感 sense of responsibility/ sense of achievement
26.竞争与合作精神 sense of competition and cooperation
27.宽阔眼界 widen ones horizon/ broaden ones vision
28.学习知识和技术 acquire knowledge and skills
29.经济 /心理负担 financial burden / psychological burden
30.考虑到诸多要素 take many factors into account/
consideration
31.从另一个角度 from another perspective
32.做出共同努力 make joint efforts
33. 对有利 be beneficial / conducive to
34. 为社会做贡献 make contributions to the society
35. 打下坚固的基础 lay a solid foundation for
36.综合素质 comprehensive quality
37.无可厚非 blameless / beyond reproach
39. 致力于 /投身于 be committed / devoted to
40. 应该认可 admittedly ，
41. 不行推辞的义务 unshakable duty
42. 知足需求 satisfy/ meet the needs of
43.靠谱的信息源 a reliable source of information
44.可贵的自然资源 valuable natural resources
46.方便快捷 convenient and efficient
47.在人类生活的方方面面 in all aspects of human life
48.环保 (的) environmental protection / environmentally friendly
49.社会进步的表现 a symbol of society progress
50.科技的飞快更新 the ever-accelerated updating of science
and technology
51. 对这一问题拥有不一样态度 hold different attitudes towards this issue
52. 支持前 /后种看法的人 people / those in fovor of the former/ latter opinion
53. 有 /供给以下原由 /凭证 have/ provide the following reasons/ evidence
54.在必定程度上 to some extent/ degree / in some way
55.理论和实践相联合 integrate theory with practice
56. 必定趋向 an irresistible trend of
57.日趋激烈的社会竞争 the increasingly fierce social competition
58.眼前利益 immediate interest/ short-term interest
59.长久利益 interest in the long run
60.有其自己的优弊端 has its merits and demerits/
advantages and disadvantages
61.扬长避短 exploit to the full ones favorable conditions and avoid unfavorable ones
62.取其精华，去其糟粕 take the essence and discard the dregs.
63.对有害 do harm to / be harmful to
64.沟通思想 /感情 /信息 exchange ideas/ emotions/ information
65.跟上的最新发展 keep pace with / keep abreast with the latest development of
66. 采纳有效举措来take effective measures to do sth.
67. 的健康发展the healthy development of
68.有利有弊 every coin has its two sides. no garden without weeds.
69. 对看法因人而异 views on vary from person to person.
70. 重视 attach great importance to
71. 社会地位 social status
72. 把时间和精力放在上focus time and energy on
73.扩大知识面 expand ones scope of knowledge
74.身心双方面 both physically and mentally
75. 和直接 /间接有关be directly / indirectly related to
76.提出折中建议 set forth a compromise proposal
78.缓解压力 /减少负担 relieve stress/ burden
79.优先考虑give (top) priority to sth.
80.与对比 compared with/ in comparison with
81.相反 on the contrary.
82.取代 replace/ substitute / take the place of
83.经不起斟酌 cannot bear closer analysis / cannot hold water
84.供给就业时机 offer job opportunities
85.社会进步的反应 mirror of social progress
86. 毫无疑问undoubtedly，/ there is no doubt that
87.增进互相认识 enhance/ promote mutual understanding
88.充足利用 make full use of / take advantage of
89.蒙受更大的工作压力 suffer from heavier work pressure
90.保障社会的稳固和繁华 guarantee the stability and
prosperity of our society
91. 更多地重申put more emphasis on
92.适应社会发展 adapt oneself to the development of society
93.实现梦想 realize ones dream/ make ones dream come true
94. 主要原由列举以下 the main reasons are listed as follows ：
95. 第一 first ， firstly ， in the first place ， to begin with
96. 其次 second ，secondly ，in the second place ， besides ，in addition ， additionally ， moreover ， furthermore
97. 最后 finally ， last but not the least ， lastly ，
98. 总而言之 all in all ， to sum up ， in summary ， in a word ，
99.我们还有很长的路要走 we still have a long way to go.
100.加大了的可能性 increase the chances of
四、谚语
1.practice makes perfect.勤能补拙。

2.god helps those who help themselves.天助自助者。

3.easier said than done.提及来简单做起来难。

4.where there is a will，there is a way.有志者事竟成。

5.one false step will make a great difference.失之毫厘，谬之千里。

6.slow and steady wins the race.步步为营无往而不胜。

7.a fall into the pit，a gain in your wit.吃一堑，长一智。

8.experience is the mother of wisdom.实践出真知。

9.all work and no play makes jack a dull boy.只工作不歇息，聪明孩子也变傻。

10.beauty without virtue is a rose without fragrance. 无德之美如同没有香味的玫瑰，徒有其表。

11.more hasty，less speed.欲速则不达。

12.its never too old to learn.活到老，学到老。

13.all that glitters is not gold.闪光的未必都是金子。

14.a journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step. 千里之行始于足下。

15.look before you leap.三思尔后行。

16.rome was not built in a day.伟业非一日之功。

17.great minds think alike.英豪所见略同。

18.well begun，half done.好的开始等于成功的一半。

19.it is hard to please all.众口难调。

20.out of sight，out of mind.眼不见，心不念。

事实胜于雄辩。

22.call back white and white back.混淆是非。

23.first things first.凡事有轻重缓急。

24.ill news travels fast.坏事传千里。

25.a friend in need is a friend indeed.患难见真情。

26.live not to eat，but eat to live.活着不是为了吃饭，吃饭为了
活着。

27.action speaks louder than words.行动赛过语言。

28.east or west，home is the best.金窝银窝不如自家草窝。

29.its not the gay coat that makes the gentleman.君子在德不在衣。

30.beauty will buy no beef. 美丽不可以当饭吃。

31.like and like make good friends.兴趣相投。

32.the older，the wiser.姜是老的辣。

33.do as romans do in rome.入乡随俗。

34.an idle youth，a needy age.少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲。

35.as the tree，so the fruit.种瓜得瓜，种豆得豆。

36.to live is to learn，to learn is to better live.活着为了学习，学习为了更好的活着。

【篇三：六级翻译写作评分标准】
六级翻译评分标准
（一）翻译题型描绘
翻译部分测试学生把汉语所承载的信息用英语表达出来的能力，所
占分值比率为 15% ，考试时间 30 分钟。

翻译题型为段落汉译英。

翻译内容波及中国的历史、文化、经济、社会发展等。

四级长度为140-160 个汉字，六级长度为 180-200 个汉字。

（二）翻译评分标准
此题满分为 15 分，成绩分为六个品位： 13-15 分、 10-12 分、 7-9 分、 4-6 分、 1-3 分和 0 分。

各品位的评分标准见下表：
品位评分标准
13-15 分译文正确表达了原文的意思。

用词贴切，行文流利，基本
上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。

10-12 分译文基本上表达了原文的意思。

文字通畅、连结，无重要
语言错误。

7-9 分译文牵强表达了原文的意思。

用词欠正确，语言错误相当多，此中有些是严重语言错误。

4-6 分译文仅表达了一小部分原文的意思。

用词不正确，有相当多的严重语言错误。

1-3 分译文支离破裂。

除个别词语或句子，绝大多半文字没有表达原文意思。

0 分未作答，或只有几个孤立的词，或译文与原文绝不有关。

六级写作评分标准
(一 ) 作文评分原则
1. cet 作文题采纳整体评分(global scoring) 方法。

阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖赏分 (reward scores),而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。

2.从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。

内容和语言是一个一
致体，作文应表达题目所规定的内容，而内容要经过语言来表达。

要
考虑作文能否贴题，能否充足表达思想，也要考虑能否用英语清
楚而切实地表达思想，也就是要考虑语言上的错误能否造成理解上
的阻碍。

3.防止趋中偏向。

该给高分的给高分，包含满分 ;该给低分的给低分，包含 0 分，一名阅卷人员在所阅的所有作文卷中不该只给中间的几
种分数。

(二 ) 作文评分标准
1.此题满分为 15 分。

2.阅卷标准共分五等 : 2 分、 5 分、 8 分、 11 分及 14 分。

各有标准
样卷一至二份。

3. 阅卷人员依据阅卷标准，比较样卷评分，若以为与某一分数(如 8 分)相像，即定为该分数 (即 8 分)，若以为稍优或稍劣于该分数，即可
加一分 (即 9 分)或减一分 (即 7 分)，但不得加或减半分。

4.评分标准：
2分条理不清，思路杂乱，语言支离破裂或大多半句子均有错
误，且多半为严重错误。

5分基本贴题。

表达思想不清楚，连结性差。

有许多的严重语言
错误。

8 分基本贴题。

有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字牵强连结 ;语言错误相当多，此中有一些是严重错误。

11分贴题。

表达思想清楚，文字连结，但有少许语言错误。

14分贴题。

表达思想清楚，文字通畅，连结性好。

基本上无语
言错误，仅有个别小错。