【英语】九年级上册英语英语书面表达汇编试题经典含解析

【英语】九年级上册英语英语书面表达汇编试题经典含解析
一、中考英语书面表达汇编
1．（·四川中考模拟）书面表达
本周你们班召开了一次主题班会“毕业前，我能为学校做些什么？”大家踊跃发言，作为第三小组成员，请你根据各小组的情况汇报以及你们小组的讨论情况，写一个总结交给老师。

提示词：赠送 present 用过的 used
注意：
1. 字数不少于80词；
2. 补充好本小组讨论情况；
3. 要点完整，层次清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
4. 文中不得出现真实人名、地名、校名等。

What can you do for your school?
As we all know we will leave school in June. So this week our class hold a class meeting. We discussed about what we can do for our school. All of us gave our own ideas.
【答案】What can you do for your school?
As we all know we will leave school in June. So this week our class hold a class meeting. We discussed about what we can do for our school. All of us gave our own ideas. Students in Group 1 thought that we could present our used books and school things to the students in Grade 7 and Grade 8. Especially, we can give them to the poor students. They need our help. Students in Group 2 thought that we could raise our pocket money. The books in library are old and little. So we can use the money to buy some new books for the school library so that more students can get more and latest information from books. Students in Group 3 thought we can plant some plants and flowers in the school. That may make our school more beautiful. Anyway, we have studied here for three years, we love our school. We hope our school will be better and better and we should study hard and one day our school will be proud of us.
【解析】
【分析】
本片书面表达要求学生写出一个班会会后的总结。

【详解】
这是一篇材料作文。

表格中一个两个组的讨论结果，第三组是需要考生围绕着主题自己补充的，尽量避免与前面两组重复。

我们可以按照总-分-总的结构来写。

首先引出此次班会的主题；其次分别写出三个小组的讨论结果；最后可以对三个小组进行总结，表达情感。

在语言上要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，这样才可以更好的驾驭。

同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体。

2．（·云南中考模拟）假如你叫李华, 三年的初中生活即将结束, 你将迎来漫长的暑假, 你的笔友Peter写信来询问你的暑假计划。

请根据表格中所给的基本信息给你的笔友回信, 告诉他你的暑假计划。

要求：
1. 回信必须包含表格中的所有信息, 并可适当发挥, 字数在80字左右, 开头和结尾不计入总字数。

2. 回信中不得出现真实的人名和校名, 否则将以零分计。

3. 书面表达必须写在答题卡上, 如在本卷上作答, 一律不得分。

Dear peter,
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Yours
Li Hua
【答案】例文Dear peter ,
Thank you for your letter, in the letter, you asked me how I planned my summer vacation, now, let me tell you all about it.
Firstly I will visit my grandparents as soon as I leave school, I haven’t see them for a long time, I miss them so much. Then , I am going to take trip to Beijing and Shanghai to open up my eyes, as we all know, both cities are so beautiful and important, I believe I can learn a lot by travelling. After coming back, I will learn senior subjects by myself to get ready for the coming senior school, because I dream to go to a famous university.
That’s all about my plans, please write me soon and tell me about yours.
Yours
Lihua
【解析】
【详解】
本文分三个自然段。

第一段点出文章主题you asked me how I planned my summer vacation, now, let me tell you all about it。

第二自然段用Firstly，Then ，After coming back有序列出三个计划。

文章结尾用That’s all about my plans, please write me soon and tell me about yours总结。

另外，文中为第一人称，时态主要为一般将来时will visit my grandparents，I am going to take trip，I will learn senior subjects等。

3．（·广东中考模拟）书面表达
根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。

生活中常常会发生一些意外的事，但每个人处理事情的方式不同。

有些人冷静温和地处理，有些人简单粗暴地对待。

当你与人发生冲突时，你会如何处理呢？请你写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的经历与看法。

内容包括：
1. 请你简单叙述一次与别人发生冲突的经历；
2. 你认为该如何正确处理日常生活中发生的冲突（至少两点建议）；
3. 呼吁大家友好相处。

作文要求：
1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。

2. 语句连贯，词数80左右。

作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

Life is full of the unexpected, ___________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Life is full of the unexpected. During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, a schoolmate and I hit into each other, trying to catch the ball. Then we started shouting, and it turned into a terrible quarrel. To be honest, it was neither my fault nor the schoolmate’s, only because we both cared too much about winning and losing. That made me feel shameful.
In our daily lives, we should deal with these quarrels properly. Firstly, try to be friendly to each other. Secondly, we should communicate more an d put ourselves in other’s place. Don’t be a selfish person and try to deal with everything calmly and wisely.
It’s very important to get on well with each other. Let’s build a friendly, peaceful and safe society together and make our life better and better.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如full of，during the basketball game，each other，try to do，turn into，to be honest，neither…nor，care about，too much，deal with等。

而固定句型It’s very important to get on well with each other.和Don’t be a selfish person and try to deal with everything calmly and wisely.的运用，丰富了短文内容，使
表达多样化，是本文的亮点。

在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

4．（·河北中考模拟）书面表达
初中毕业在即, 回顾三年的学习生活, 你一定有成功的体验, 如一次考试, 一次比赛, 一次表演......
请你以Believe Myself, and I Will Win为题写一篇演讲稿。

提示：（1）What was the event?
（2）How did you make it?
（3）What’s your feeling?
要求：（1）发言稿中须包括所有提示内容, 可适当发挥。

（2）发言稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。

（3）词数80个左右（开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数）。

Believe Myself, and I Will Win
Hello,
everyone!_______________________________________________________________________ ____
Thank you for your listening.
【答案】Believe Myself, and I will win
Hello, everyone! As an old saying goes, where there is a will, there is a way. There always are difficulties in our life and we have to face them.
When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English. I just couldn’t understand it. I even wanted to give it up. Then my parents told me that where there is a will, there is a way. They also told me that I should be confident. My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it. I had the confidence again. I found when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ se em that difficult. I made great progress. My parents and teachers were happy for me. I felt pleased and proud for myself, too.
To be confident means I should believe myself. Believe myself, there are hopes in my life. In the future, I won't be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I'm sure that nothing can beat me and I will win! Believe myself, a beautiful future is waiting for me.
Thank you for your listening.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以Believe Myself and I will win为题，写一篇演讲稿。

题目中用问题的形式给出了提示，审题可知，文章应包括以下内容：首先叙述你生活中遇到的一件困难的
事；然后介绍你是如何克服了这个困难，最后取得成功的；最后说一下你自己的感受。

写作时学生们应根据这几个内容提要，发挥自己的想象力，将这些内容补充完整，用正确的英语表达出来。

短文应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，注意谓语动词的正确形式。

写作时应注意：首先要保证发言稿中包括了所有提示的内容，不能遗漏要点，可以根据表达需要适当发挥，但要与上下文意衔接起来。

其次要注意英语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能按照汉语思维，逐词翻译。

应从句子的整体结构出发，选择适当句型、短语、词汇进行表达。

句式结构可以简单句为主，穿插并列句或复合句。

为提升文章档次，应注意衔接词以及高级句式或复杂结构的使用。

【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，写了一篇演讲稿。

文章有以下几个优点：首先短文内容完整，包括了题目中要求的所有内容，没有遗漏要点。

各部分内容安排合理，层次清晰。

短文主要分成三段，每一段主题都很明确，叙述详细、清楚。

其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称，短文主要使用了一般现在时和一般过去时，动词形式变化准确，尤其注意了不规则动词的过去式形式，语法规范，用词准确。

文章中句式变化丰富，有简单句、并列句、复合句，长短句结合，增强了文章的表现力。

短文中使用了较丰富的句型，如When I was in the seventh grade, I always had difficulty in learning English.、My English teacher encouraged me to continue to study and told me some good ways to study it.、I found when I put my heart into it, English didn’t’ seem that difficult、In the future, I won't be afraid of the difficulties in my life and I'm sure that nothing can beat me and I will win!等等。

5．（·福建中考模拟）回首三年，相信你有满满的回忆。

在你将踏上新的旅程之际，请给
新入学的学弟学妹们两则初中生活的建议，并说说原因，让他们的初中生活更加精彩。

请参考下面的思维导图用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。

School life Teachers and friends Schoolwork and activities
My Advice for Junior High
【答案】例文Junior high is an important stage in your life. As a student who is about to enter junior high, your heart must be filled with expectation. To help you get used to the junior high life, I will share you two pieces of advice. First, establish your routines. By doing this, you can quickly
fall into a pattern that feels familiar and comfortable. Second, be sure to try new things. You can join new clubs or take up a new hobby. This will not only get you out of the stressful schoolwork, but also help you make more friends. I hope my advice can be helpful to you and make you enjoy your life in the junior high school.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如as a student，must be，filled with，get used to，relax ourselves，two pieces of advice，fall into，join new clubs，take up，not only…but also，make more friends，be helpful to等。

而非谓语动词结构To help you get used to the junior high life, I will share you two pieces of advice.和As a student who is about to enter junior high, your heart must be filled with expectation./ By doing this, you can quickly fall into a pattern that feels familiar and comfortable./ I hope my advice can be helpful to you and make you enjoy your life in the junior high school.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。

在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

6．（·浙江中考模拟）
如今，很多父母很关心孩子的学习，想随时监控孩子的学习状况如下图中 Tony 的母亲。

请简要描述图片内容，分析图中现象，谈谈你的看法和建议，并写一篇 110 词左右的短文向Parents 杂志投稿，让父母们通过阅读你的文章有所启发。

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Tony's mother wanted to keep watch on Tony's study. She was wrong to do so. First of
all, he violated the right to privacy. It also disturbs Tony's study and makes him respond strongly. From a child's point of view, children may yearn for independence. What they want is affirmation of their own abilities. But excessive supervision itself denies and distrusts their own abilities. Although we never mean to look down on their own children, maybe they don't think so. When children find themselves under surveillance, how can they confide in us in the future? It will also affect the future self-confidence building, which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parent-child relationship. In any case, family environment is the root of children, but first of all, it must be stable and reliable. In this way, monitoring children's learning is of little significance. We should always do our part well. Let children learn and grow in a relatively independent environment.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇图画作文，根据图片中的相关信息介绍一下父母为了关心孩子的学习，想随时监控孩子的学习状况，就这样对吗？仔细分析所提供的图片内容，主要从你的看法和建议这个方面去介绍。

时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。

注意作文中必须包含图片中的所有信息，并适当发挥。

写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。

语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。

写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】
When children find themselves under surveillance, how can they confide in us in the future? 当孩子们发现自己受到监视时，他们将来怎么能向我们吐露心声呢？
句子When children find themselves under surveillance是由when引导的时间状语从句。

【高分句型二】
It will also affect the future self-confidence building, which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parent-child relationship. 这也会影响未来的自信心建设，也会导致更多的担忧儿童，形成影响亲子关系的恶性循环。

which also leads to more worrying children, which forms a vicious circle affecting parent-child relationship.是由which引导的定语从句。

7．（·山东中考模拟）书面表达
下面的图片描述了昨天下午发生在四年级三班教室里的情景。

小林和小刚之间的对话，让你想到了什么？请根据你对图片的理解，用英语写一篇 100 词左右的短文。

内容包括：1. 完整描述图片内容； 2. 简要阐述你的观点和看法。

写作要求：1. 可以根据图片信息，进行适当的发挥；
2. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

提示词：手提电脑 laptop
【答案】Yesterday afternoon, Xiao Lin and Xiao Gang from Class 3 Grade 4 had a talk. They showed off the Children’s Day gift. Xiao Lin’s mom bought him a telephone and Xiao Gang’s dad bought a laptop for him. They were very proud. Other students envied them very much. But I think it is not proper to compare with each other. The main task of students is studying. So their attention should be focused on study. Of course their parents can buy some gifts for the holiday, but I think the gift must be suitable for their children, such as books, school things, dictionaries and so on., which are good for them. Things like cell phones and laptops are of little use to primary school students, just distracting them.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文要求我们观察图片，将图片中发生的场景用英语表达出来，是一篇看图作文。

首先学生们应仔细观察图片，了解图片中发生的场景，弄清楚它主要想传达的意思，然后用英语将这些内容表达出来。

审题可知，这篇短文的内容应主要包括两个部分：首先要描述图片中发生的事情；其次对该事情阐述自己的观点和看法。

短文应主要使用一般现在时和一般过去时，第三人称来叙述，注意谓语动词的正确形式。

写作时应注意：首先短文内容应符合图片表达的意思，不能会错意，写偏、写错；可以根据图片信息适当发挥，使文章更加充实、完整。

其次要注意英语句式表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。

用从句子的整体结构出发，写完整的句子。

句式结构可以简单句为基础，穿插并列句或复合句结构。

为提升作文水平，应注意应用高级词汇和复杂结构。

同时语句之间使用恰当的衔接成分，使文意连贯、自然。

【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求以及图片信息，介绍了图片中发生的事情，并对这件事发表了自己的看法。

短文有以下几个优点：首先短文内容符合题目要求，作者通过观察图片，正确了解了图片传达的信息，确定了文章的中心。

文章内容完整、充实，叙述清晰、有层次。

作者观点明确，理由充分。

其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般过去时和一般现在时、第三人称来叙述，正确使用了谓语动词的形式，注意了过去式，尤其是不规则动词过去式的变化，语法规范，用词准确。

最后短文中句式结构文章，符合英语的表达习惯，简单句、并列句、复合句交替应用，文章富有节奏的变化。

短文中还使用了丰富的句型，如Xiao Lin’s mom bought him a telephone and Xiao Gang’s dad bought a laptop for him.、
But I think it is not proper to compare with each other.、Of course their parents can buy some
gifts for the holiday, but I think the gift must be suitable for their children, such as books, school things, dictionaries and so on., which are good for them.、Things like cell phones and laptops are of little use to primary school students, just distracting them.等。

8．（·云南中考模拟）书面表达
提示：转眼间三年的初中生活即将结束，在这三年的学习与生活中一定有些让你难忘的人或事物。

请以“ An Unforgettable …”为题，写一篇英语作文，记叙你难忘的人或事物以及你的感受。

要求：1. 请先将题目补充完整后再作答；
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
4. 将短文写在答题卡上。

写在本试题卷上无效。

【答案】Everyone has an unforgettable thing in his life. So do I.
when I was a middle student, I celebrated my mother’s birthday for her. I cleaned the room, mopped the floor and also bought a present for her. I waited for mum at home after doing all these things. When mum came back, I jumped to her and gave her the present and said happy birthday to her. Mum was so happy and surprised that she hugged me for a long time. This is an unforgettable thing in my life because this was the first time I did the housework and felt how tired to do the job and this was also the first time I noticed mum was so happy that she even cried. Though I was tired, I felt happy.
【解析】
【详解】
本文是一篇话题作文。

根据以“ An Unforgettable …”为题，写一篇英语作文，记叙你难忘的人或事物以及你的感受。

文章时态用一般过去式时，人称主要为第一人称。

本文所给材料比较详细，考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。

动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。

在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。

同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。

最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

【点睛】
点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求。

9．（·天津中考模拟）书面表达
86. 如今，中学生的学习时间长，压力大。

上周我班学生对如何减压、放松进行了讨论。

大家提出了许多种减压、放松的方法。

请根据提示，以How Can We get relaxed为题，写一篇短文。

词汇：压力pressure
要求：
（1）词数：80~100个。

（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。

（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥
How Can We Get Relaxed
These days, many students study too long every day and suffer from great pressure. Last week, my class had a discussion on how to get relaxed and reduce the pressure.
【答案】These days, many students study too long every day and suffer from great pressure. Last week, my class had a discussion on how to get relaxed and reduce the pressure。

The students offered different good suggestions. As well as going to the movie, listening to music, even going sightseeing at the weekends, some students think it a good way to take exercise between lessons. After all, too long study without exercise is harmful to our health. Other students feel it important to communicate with our parents. We can get help from them when we are in trouble.
In my opinion, we should spend a little time developing our hobbies like reading or doing sports while working hard. In this way, we can get relaxed and reduce the pressure.
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于话题作文，主要讲述如何减压放松。

根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如as well as，a good way to，take exercise，after all，be harmful to，communicate with，get help from，be in trouble，in my opinion，spend+时间+（in）doing以及in this way，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。

审好题是写好书面表达的关键。

审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符
合要求。

构思提纲。

有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。

通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。

一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。

使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。

同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。

修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。

这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

10．（·武汉外国语学校中考模拟）书面表达
长跑是人们热衷的体育活动之一。

武汉马拉松（Wuhan Marathon）因独具特色的赛道及赛事组织已成为一年一度的全程盛事。

假如你是李华，你的笔友Tom想知道关于武汉马拉松的一些事情。

请用英文给他回一封电子邮件，介绍这项赛事。

内容包括以下要点：
1.马拉松是非常流行的国际体育项目；
2.通过马拉松，人们可以强身健体，还可以结识新朋友；
3.首届马拉松于年举行，吸引了很多人的关注；
4.赛通途径多个武汉著名景点,如：中山大道、东湖绿道、黄鹤楼，被视为最美的马拉松赛道；
5.补充一至亮点个人想法。

注意：1.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
2.次数60-80，邮件的开头已给出，不计入总次数；
3.内容连贯，不要逐条翻译
参考词汇： event n.项目 track n.赛道 Greenway n.绿道
Hi Tom，
I hope you're doing well. In your email, you asked me someting about Wuhan Marathon. Here is the information.
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________
Li Hua
【答案】Hi Tom，
I hope you're doing well. In your email, you asked me something about Wuhan Marathon. Here is the information. Marathon is a very popular international sport. Through the marathon, people can keep fit and make new friends. The first Wuhan marathon was held in and attracted a lot of attention. The players will pass by many famous scenic spots in Wuhan, such as Zhongshan Avenue, Donghu green road and Yellow Crane Tower, which are regarded as the most beautiful
marathon course.
I think the people in Wuhan likes the event.Most of them want to take part in it.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份给自己的笔友Tom写一封电子邮件，给他介绍关于武汉马拉松的一些事情。

题目中给我们列出了具体的写作内容，我们可以按照这些提示来组织语言，并增加一些内容，使文章更加充实。

其中第五条需要学生们自己发挥想象力，补充一到两点的个人想法，这一部分是不受限制的，学生们可以自由发挥，但需要注意内容需要与全文大意连贯起来。

通过审题可知，这篇短文应以一般现在时态为主，根据表达需要灵活运用，并使用适当的人称，注意谓语动词的正确形式。

写作时需注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译题目中的内容，应从句式的整体结构出发，使用恰当的词汇、短语和句型。

在文章中还应使用一、两个高级句型或复杂句式，提升文章档次。

语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯、表达流畅。

【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求给Tom写电子邮件，介绍了关于武汉马拉松的事情。

首先短文内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有信息，并对信息进行加工、处理和补充，使文意更加清楚、连贯。

其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般现在时态为主，个别句子使用了过去时态，谓语动词形式准确，语法规范。

文章句式以简单句为主，表达简洁、明了，穿插使用了复杂句式，如宾语从句、定语从句等。

调整文章节奏，提升了文章档次。

文章中使用了一些较好的短语和句型，如Through the marathon, people can keep fit and make new friends. 、The first Wuhan marathon was held in and attracted a lot of attention. 、The players will pass by many famous scenic spots in Wuhan, such as Zhongshan Avenue, Donghu green road and Yellow Crane Tower, which are regarded as the most beautiful marathon course.、I think the people in Wuhan likes the event.等。

11．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达
时间过得飞快，似乎几个月前才进入初三，现在中考却近在眼前。

请以“Are We Ready for the Challenge?”为题，用英语写一篇短文，内容要点如下：
1．你发现老师现在上课语速很快。

由于有太多的作业和考试，学生没有足够的时间来进行课外活动；
2．有的同学以前学习不太努力，但现在他们已经意识到这次考试的重要性，并且全身心投入到学习中去；
3．你在这最后一个月里的打算和安排……
注意：
1．短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2．第3要点的内容须用2至3句话作适当发挥；
3．词数90左右，短文的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Are We Ready for the Challenge?
How time flies! It seemed that we began our Grade Three only a few months ago, but the Senior。