北京市燕山地区2018-2020年三年中考一模英语试题汇编-书面表达专题

北京市燕山地区
2018-2020年三年中考一模英语试题汇编-书面表达专题
2020年北京市燕山区中考一模英语试题
书面表达
五、文段表达。

从下面两个题目中任选一题，根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50 词的文段写作。

文中已给出内容不计入总词数。

所给提示词语仅供选用。

请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

39.假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter给你发邮件询问你们学校学生在新型冠状病毒肺炎疫情期间的学习情况。

请用英语回复一封邮件，告诉他你们疫情期间的学习时间、地点；学习内容与方式以及你的学习感悟。

提示词语：the novel coronavirus (新型冠状病毒), online, course, special, hard
提示问题：
● When and where do you study?
● What and how do you study?
● How do you feel about it?
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to receive your
email.______________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ____
Yours,
Li Hua 【答案】范文：
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to receive your email.The novel coronavirus made the spring of 2020 very different. As the virus can easily spread from one to another, the students in primary and junior high schools didn’t have to go to school. At the same time, online education has become popular among them. Students could learn on the Internet instead of sitting in the classroom. I learned by surfing the Internet, watching videos and taking notes during this special period of time. My parents are mainly responsible for cooking. To prevent COVID-19 from spreading, we have to stay at home.
At first, my parents were against online courses that would bring myopia (近视) and some other influences, but after a few days of carefully watching, they believed online education would be good for their children’s study. But many schools only regard online education as a second choice. In fact, schools and teachers should keep a more open mind to accept online education.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。

请你针对这一情况，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你的看法并给他们一些建议。

注意语句通顺，要点齐全。

注意时态的使用，并灵活运用所学单词、短语以及句型，使文章更加生动形象。

2.例文点评：本文时态为一般现在时为主，人称主要为第一人称。

文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。

3.高分亮点：
短语：from one to another；At the same time；on the Internet；surfing the Interne；taking notes；have to stay at home；as a second choice；In fact等
句型：1.As the virus can easily spread from one to another, the students in primary and junior high schools didn’t have to go to school. 2.At the same time, online education has become popular among them.3. Students could learn on the Internet instead of sitting in the classroom.4. I learned by surfing the Internet, watching videos and taking notes during this special period of time.5. In fact, schools and teachers should keep a more open mind to accept online education.
【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如from one to another；At the same time；on the Internet；surfing the Internet；taking notes；have to stay at home；as a second choice；In fact等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

40.4月23日是“世界读书日”，学校正在开展“读书伴我成长”主题读书日活动。

请你用英文写一篇发言稿，介绍一下你喜欢阅读的书籍种类，你的阅读习惯（如阅读时间、地点、阅读方式等）以及你的阅读收获。

提示词语：habit, knowledge, benefit, improve
提示问题：
● What kinds of books do you like reading?
● What are your reading habits?
● What have you benefited from reading?
___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ _
【答案】范文：
Reading is a very good habit．I like reading very much．In my eyes，I think that forming a good reading habit is necessary for us．It can not only open up our eyes but also improve our knowledge．
Besides，we can do some reading every time when we are free．For example，I often read some of my favorite books in my spare time both at home or in the library．What I like most are story books because most of them are quite interesting．Now I often buy my favorite books on line for its big discount．
Finally，I like to share my favorite books with our family or my classmates．Since reading can benefit us a lot，it's time for us to have our good reading habit now!
【解析】
【分析】
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。

请你用英文写一篇发言稿，介绍一下你喜欢阅读的书籍种类，你的阅读习惯（如阅读时间、地点、阅读方式等）以及你的阅读收获。

注意时态的使用,并灵活运用所学单词、短语以及句型，使文章更加生动形象。

2.例文点评：本文时态为一般现在时，人称主要为第一、二人称。

文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。

3.高分亮点：
短语：a very good habit；not only … but also …；some of my favorite；most of them；on line；like to share my favorite books；good reading habit等。

句型：1. In my eyes，I think that forming a good reading habit is necessary for us．2. It can not only open up our eyes but also improve our knowledge．3.What I like most are story books because most of them are quite interesting．4.Now I often buy my favorite books on line for its big discount．
5. Since reading can benefit us a lot，it's time for us to have our good reading habit now!
北京市燕山区2019届九年级4月毕业考试（一模）英语试题
书面表达
文段表达。

从下面两个题目中任选一题，根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50 词的文段写作。

文中已给出内容不计入总词数。

所给提示词语仅供选用。

请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

题目①
39.假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack 给你写邮件表达了想参加你校暑期为外国学生举办的汉语夏令营的愿望，希望你告知活动举办的具体时间地点，活动安排以及你的建议。

提示词语：Chinese classes, learn, attend, culture, prepare
提示问题：● When and where will the Chinese Summer Camp be held?
● What activities will be held at the Chinese Summer Camp?
● What is your advice for Jack?
【答案】Dear Jack,
I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our school this summer holiday.
The Chinese Summer Camp will be held in our school from July 10th to July 30th this summer. The activities of this Chinese Summer Camp are as follows:
First, you will attend Chinese classes, learning the meaning of Chinese characters.
Second, you will take part in different parties, knowing the history of China and Chinese culture, especially Chinese holidays, which will impress you deeply.
What’s more, you will have chances to visit some museums and the Great Wall. What you should prepare is a pair of shoes for the visit.
If you have any questions, please tell me. I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua 【解析】
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇提纲类书面表达，只给了一些要点提示，但都不很明确。

学生除了要把所给要点提示都表达出来外，还要进行适当拓展，使文章内容充实。

2.例文点评：该题要求写作体裁为书信格式，所以例文用第一人称I进行写作，在文章结尾也按照标准书信格式进行了收尾。

文章时态用一般现在时和一般将来时。

文章条理分明，三个要点提示都已表达清楚，并进行了适当拓展，所给单词也都全部用上。

3.高分亮点：
短语：as follows，take part in，What’s more，look forward to。

句型：被动句型，现在分词作状语，主语从句。

题目②
40.中国传统文化源远流长，代代相传。

近期各校都在开展学习中国传统文化活动。

某网站正在开展以“弘扬中国传统文化”为题征文，请你用英文写一篇报道，介绍你校上周举办的“讲中国成语故事”活动并谈谈你的收获与感受。

提示词语：Chinese idioms, story, collect, share, learn from, acient
提示问题：● What did you do during the activity of "Telling Chinese idioms story"?
● What did you learn from the activity?
● What do you think of it?
【答案】The activity of “Telling Chinese idioms story” was held in our school last week.
In order to take part in this activity, I collected lots of Chinese idiom stories in advance. Many students, including me, actively shared the Chinese idiom stories in the activity. After each story, the teacher explained the meaning of idioms and how to use it correctly. We learned a lot from our teacher.
I did lots of reading in the process of preparation. My reading ability has improved greatly. What’s more, I realized the richness of Chinese acient culture. I really had a good time on the
activity.
【解析】
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇提纲类书面表达，只给了一些要点提示，但都不很明确。

学生除了要把所给要点提示都表达出来外，还要进行适当拓展，使文章内容充实。

2.例文点评：例文采用三段式；用第一人称来叙述讲成语故事活动；因为活动已经举办，所以时态采用一般过去时；对参加活动的过程描写完整且条理清晰。

3.高分亮点：
短语：in order to，take part in，lots of，learn from，in the process of，What’s more，have a good time。

句型：被动句型。

2018北京市燕山区初三一模英语试题
五、文段表达。

从下面两个题目中任选一题，根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。

文中已给出内容不计入总词数。

所给提示词语仅供选用。

请不要写出你的校名和姓名。

题目①
39. 假如你是李华，本周六与好友相约去北京植物园。

你的美国网友Fred正好也在北京，你邀他同去。

请你向他发出邀请，告诉他去哪儿，做什么以及你的建议。

提示词语：Beijing Botanical Garden, have a picnic
提示问题：When and where are you going this Saturday?
What will you do there?
·
What do you advise him to do?
【答案】I’m writing to invite you to join us this Saturday. This Saturday, I’m going to Beijing Botanical Garden
with my friends. We’ll meet at our school gate at seven in the morning. Then we are going there by bike. We’ll enjoy the colorful flowers and plants there. We are going to have a picnic in the open air. If you like to join us, prepare some food to take with you. Don’t forget to take a bottle of water. I hope you can come and we’ll come back at five in the afternoon.
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
【解析】试题分析：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

本题根据提示内容应该用一般现在时，邀请对方并给出建议，需使用表达邀请和用于提建议的相关短语和句式，注意长短搭配，并在行文中增加细节和过渡，使文章读起来比较流畅。

动笔前，一定要认真分析提示要点，理解要点要表达的含义。

平时除了加强词汇积累和写作练习以外，还应该适当背诵一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

文中使用了非常好的短语，例如join us，this Saturday，be going to，Beijing Botanical Garden，in the morning，by bike，have a picnic，in the open air，like to do，forget to do，a bottle of water，come back，in the afternoon，look forward to等。

而If you like to join us, prepare some food to take with you. / I hope you can come and we’ll come back at five in the afternoon.等多种从句和be going to结构的运用，使本文内容丰富，表达流畅，是本文的最大亮点。

书面表达
题目②
40. 交流可以化解矛盾,增进友谊。

当今交流方式很多，但人们之间的情感似乎越来越淡。

学校英语专栏征文，主题是“Ways of Communication Today”。

假如你是李华，你对此很感兴趣，准备投稿，谈谈你日常的交流方式及你的感受。

提示词语： face to face， chatting on line， discuss，appear
提示问题：·How many ways do you know to communicate with others?
How do you usually communicate with your friends?
Which is the best way and why?
【答案】There are some ways to communicate with others, such as talking face to face, singing songs, using body and sign language, writing a letter, chatting on line, sending text messages.
My friends and I usually have a talk face to face because we live near each other. We often send text messages, too. We can discuss our homework, talk about our interesting games. Sometimes we make phone calls.
I think the best way to communicate is the mobile phone. It is one of the most welcome and useful inventions. After mobile phones appear, communication becomes easier and rapider. With the help of the phones, people can keep in touch with anyone at any time and in any place. (118)
【解析】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

文中使用了非常好的短语，例如communicate with others，such as，face to face，body and sign language，chatting on line，have a talk，each other，text messages，talk about，the best way，one of the most welcome and useful inventions，easier and rapider，with the help of，keep in touch with，at any time and in any place等。

而My friends and I usually have a talk face to face because we live near each other./ I think the best way to communicate is the mobile phone.等多种复杂从句结构的运用，使本文内容丰富，表达流畅，是本文的最大亮点。

点睛：这是一篇材料作文，根据提示内容可知用一般现在时，可把提示的内容逐词翻译并拓展成不同的句子，最后把这些句子连在一起即可。