2020版高考英语二轮复习35分写作规范练(一)

35分写作规范练(一)
写作(共两节，满分35分)
第一节 短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

[2019·青岛质检]Yesterday, I was walked my dog in the evening when I saw the poor child who was selling some key chains. He had five key chains and asked for me to buy one. I asked myself, “Is he selling this build a house？” My heart answered, “No, this is for satisfying his hungry tonight.” I bought all the key chain and offered him milk and biscuits. I gave her a smiley key chain back as a gift, but his smile was awesome. I feel great satisfaction in my heart at that moment. I believe that life will be successfully if you win a smile from someone.
答案与解析：
Yesterday, I was walked ①walking my dog in the evening when I saw the ②a
poor child who was selling some key chains. He had five key chains and asked for ③
me to buy one. I asked myself, “Is he selling this ∧④to
build a house ？” My heart answered, “No, this is for satisfying his hungry ⑤hunger tonight.” I bought all the key chain ⑥chains
and offered him milk and biscuits. I gave her ⑦him a smiley key chain back as a gift, but ⑧and his smile was awesome. I feel ⑨felt
great satisfaction in my heart at that moment. I believe that life will be successfully ⑩successful
if you win a smile from someone. ①walked 改为walking 此处表示当作者昨天晚上正在遛狗的时候。

表示过去正在进行的动作，应用过去进行时，故将walked 改为walking 。

②the 改为a 此处表示作者看见一个卖钥匙链的可怜的孩子。

这里是第一次提到这个小孩，故非特指，不需要用the ，且poor 的发音以辅音音素开头，故将the 改为a 。

③删除for ask sb. to do sth.为固定搭配，意为“要求某人做某事”，故删除for。

④在build前加to 此处表示“小男孩卖钥匙链是为了建房子吗？”这里应用不定式表示目的，故在build前加to。

⑤hungry改为hunger 形容词性物主代词后面应接名词，故将hungry改为hunger。

⑥chain改为chains 根据上文中的key chains和前面的all可知，此处应用chain 的复数形式，故将chain改为chains。

⑦her改为him 根据上文中的he可知，这个可怜的孩子是男生，故将her改为him。

⑧but改为and 根据语境可知，前后部分是并列关系，而不是转折关系，故将but改为and。

⑨feel改为felt 根据时间状语at that moment可知，此处应用一般过去时，故将feel 改为felt。

⑩successfully改为successful be动词后面接形容词作表语，故将successfully 改为successful。

第二节书面表达(满分25分)
[2019·洛阳、许昌市检测]假定你是李华，外国交换生Tony想参加你校的社团以学习中国文化。

请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1．校社团情况介绍；
2．活动的时间、地点；
3．报名方法。

注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考范文：
Dear Tony，
I'm glad to learn that you're interested in our school clubs. Here are the brief introductions. There are four clubs with the themes of Chinese culture for lovers of kung fu, cooking, paintings and handwriting in our school. Each club provides regular training courses. The clubs can not only enrich your knowledge of Chinese traditional culture, but also make your school life colorful and interesting. The activities start at 3：00 p．m. and last 1.5 hours every Friday in Teaching Building 1. If you are interested in any club above, just sign up on our school website before 18th, October. Welcome to join us.
Yours，
Li Hua。