外研版高中英语选择性必修第二册 Unit 3 Times change! 写作指导

注意: 1.词数80左右; 2.请在相应位置作答。 参考词汇:体育设施sports facilities
Dear Joy, I was pleased to hear from you and I’m writing to tell you the changes in
my school.
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2.将来可能发生的变化 (1)明确给出对变化趋势的预测或用事例引出自己的观点。 (2)给出预测的理由,如果是多个理由,要分层次进行说明。 (3)回归或深化自己的观点,与前文形成呼应。
牢记写作素材
(一)增色词汇 1.result in/lead to/contribute to导致,引起 2.change a lot变化很大 pared to/with和……比起来 4.develop v.发展 5.expectation n.期望 6.popularity n.流行
Hello,everyone! I’m pleased to speak here about what might not be around in the future.I
believe that our traditional keys will disappear in our life and facial recognition technology will take the place of them.
three years ago.
One of them is a new teaching building.
④在这座新教学楼中,有音乐教室、美术教室和计算机教室。
There are rooms for music,art and computer teaching in the new teaching building.
what it used to be three years ago,when there was only one teaching building and a playground.Now two new buildings have been built and are in use.One of them is a new teaching building,in which there are rooms for music,art and computer teaching. The other is the library,where there are all kinds of books,newspapers and magazines. Besides,my school is well equipped with sports facilities and musical instruments. The number of students has also grown from 1,000 to 2,000.What’s more,we have planted a lot of trees and flowers in and around the school.
感知文体常识
关于对比变化的文章 关于发展变化的文章,其体裁可以是记叙文、议论文或说明文。如果是记 叙文,要交代清楚时间、地点、人物、过程和结局;如果是议论文,观点要 明确,要分层次给出有力的论据;如果是说明文,要把现象的特征以及因果 关系等描述清楚。具体写作步骤归纳如下: 1.已发生的变化 (1)描述已发生的变化。 (2)简要分析产生变化的原因,并通过今昔对比描述这些变化带来的好处等。 (3)写出对这些变化的评价与感受等。
2.句式 (1)要点翻译 ①众所周知,我们学校已经发生了巨大变化。
We all know that great changes have taken place ②它现在不再是三年前的样子了。
in our school.
It is no longer what it used to be ③其中之一是一座新教学楼。
So,I believe the traditional keys will be replaced by facial recognition technology.
That’s all.Thanks for listening!
4.There are many factors that have resulted in the progress of our society. 已经有好多因素促使我们的社会进步了。 5.Firstly...Besides/What’s more... 首先……另外/此外…… 6.We are all enjoying the convenience of modern science and technology,which makes us proud of the prosperous age. 我们都在享受现代科学技术的便利,这使我们为繁荣的时代感到自豪。
Yours, Li Hua
【审题谋篇】 体裁 说明文 人称 第一、三人称 时态 一般现在时与一般过去时 话题 学校的变化
第一段 开头提出学校发生了变化 框架 第二段 详细描述今昔对比
第三段 表达自己的祝愿
【遣词造句】 1.词汇 (1)变化 change (2)发生 take place (3)不再 no longer (4)在使用 in use (5)各种各样的 all kinds of (6)装备有…… be equipped with
around in the future?”,你将以“传统的钥匙”为例子发表演讲。内容包括:
什么将会消失
传统的钥匙将被人脸识别技术取代
传统的钥匙的弊端
①一大串钥匙携带不方便 ②人们易丢失钥匙或把钥匙忘在某个地方
①避免了带钥匙的麻烦 人脸识别技术的优势
②简单、便捷、快速、安全
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.请在相应位置作答。
I believe my school will become better and better,and I hope you will visit my school again.
Yours, Li Hua
针对训练
假定你是李华,你们班准备举行一次主题班会,主题为“What might not be
示例写作步骤
【写作要求】 假设你是某中学的学生李华,最近收到美国朋友Joy的电子邮件。他在三 年前参观过你校,听说你校现在变化很大,希望了解发生了哪些具体的变化。 请你根据下表提示,给他回一封电子邮件。 三年前 一座教学楼,一个操场,学生1 000人
1.校园扩建:新建了一座教学楼和一座图书馆,教学楼内有音乐室、 美术室、微机房等; 现在 2.学生人数增加到了2 000人; 3.体育设施与音乐器材配备齐全; 4.绿化了校园。
(二)精彩句型 1.With the development of science and technology,smart homes are coming to us. 随着科学技术的发展,智能家居正在向我们走来。 2.Nowadays,more and more people prefer to communicate online rather than in reality. 如今,越来越多的人喜欢在网上交流而不是在现实中。 3.There is no doubt that facial recognition technology will take the place of them. 毫无疑问,人脸识别技术会代替它们。
As we all know,our traditional keys have brought us lots of inconvenience. Firstly,none of us would like to carry a big string of keys with ourselves, especially in summer.Besides,we may sometimes lose them or leave them somewhere.On the other hand,facial recognition technology saves us the trouble of carrying traditional st but not least,it’s easy,quick and safe to use facial recognition technology.
(2)句式升级 ⑤用定语从句改写①
As we all know
,great changes have taken place in our school.
⑥用定语从句合并③④
One of them is a new teaare rooms for music,art and computer teaching.
【妙笔成篇】
Dear Joy, I was pleased to hear from you and I’m writing to tell you the changes in my
school. As we all know that great changes have taken place in our school.It is no longer