秋九年级英语上册外研版课件：Module 8 话题写作实境运用(共14张PPT)
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话题写作实境运用
本模块的话题是“体育生活”，是书面表达的常见话题， 命题形式简单，写起来比较容易。写作中以“体育生活”为 话题的书面表达，其命题的主要形式有：①谈谈体育锻炼对 健康生活的重要性；②谈谈自己及他人最喜欢的体育锻炼方 式；③介绍著名体育运动员的职业生涯，让人们了解他们的 体育生活。
【典型例题】 假设你最喜欢的体育明星是中国著名女射击运动员 (woman sport shooter)郭文珺(Guo Wenjun)。请根据以下要 点，写一篇英文发言稿。
开篇点题， 引出下文
―→
... Today I'd like to introduce a shooter named Guo Wenjun to
famous you ...
Chinese
【↓高分模板】
•Guo Wenjun was born ... •At the age of fourteen， she ... 介绍经历与战况 ―→ •In 2006， she ... •After that， she ... •On 20th September 2014， she ...
My Favorite Sport Sport is very important to us. It can help us keep healthy. I like sports and I do sports in my free time. My favorite sport is playing basketball. I often play basketball with my friends after school. I don't play well, but I feel relaxed and interesting. I also like watching basketball games on TV, I am very excited at exciting games. Sports not only make me stronger but also make me study easier and better now. I love sports very much.
13、He who seize the right moment, is the right man.谁把握机遇，谁就心想事成。2021/9/112021/9/112021/9/112021/9/119/11/2021 •14、谁要是自己还没有发展培养和教育好，他就不能发展培养和教育别人。2021年9月11日星期六2021/9/112021/9/112021/9/11 •15、一年之计，莫如树谷；十年之计，莫如树木；终身之计，莫如树人。2021年9月2021/9/112021/9/112021/9/119/11/2021 •16、教学的目的是培养学生自己学习，自己研究，用自己的头脑来想，用自己的眼睛看，用自己的手来做这种精神。2021/9/112021/9/11September 11, 2021 •17、儿童是中心，教育的措施便围绕他们而组织起来。2021/9/112021/9/112021/9/112021/9/11
出生时间
1984年6月22日
出生地点
陕西西安
经历与 1998年：在一家体校(a sports school)开始训练射击 战况 (shooting)
2006年：进பைடு நூலகம்中国队参加第15届亚运会(Asian Games)，获得一枚金牌和一枚银牌
经历与 2008年：夏季奥运会上夺得一枚金牌 战况 2012年：夏季奥运会上夺得一枚金牌
【训练一】 在 现 代 社 会 ， 人 们 日 益 重 视 体 育 运 动 ， 请 以 “ My Favorite Sport”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍一下你最喜欢 的体育运动。 要求：1.文中不能出现真实的人名，地名和校名；2.80词 左右。
My Favorite Sport _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________
2014年9月20日：和她的队友为中国赢得了17届亚 运会的第一枚金牌
评价
请给出1—2点评价
要求：1.80词左右；2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和 人名；3.要求条理清楚，语意连贯，可适当发挥。
【写作思路】 本篇习作要求同学们根据要点提示描述自己最喜欢的运 动员郭文珺。在写作时首先要进行充分地思考，选择适当的 单词、短语和句型。多运用本模块所学到的句子进行表达。
After I do some sports, I often feel a little tired. However, I can listen to the teachers more carefully and pay more attention to the lessons in class. In my opinion, doing sports can improve students' both health and study.
School sports have changed us a lot. Doing sports makes our school life more colorful and helps us make more friends. I'll keep on doing it.
↓
评价
―→
... I and
think she's a good example I'm proud of her ...
to
me
【范文展示】 Hello, everyone! Today I'd like to introduce a famous Chinese shooter named Guo Wenjun to you. Guo Wenjun was born in Xi'an, Shaanxi on June 22, 1984. At the age of fourteen, she started training shooting in a sports school. In 2006, she was chosen for the Chinese team at the 15th Asian Games and won a gold medal and a silver medal.
Sports in Our School It's very important for students to keep healthy. Everyone should do some sports every day because it's good for our health as well as our study. In our school, we often do many kinds of sports during the break, such as playing basketball, playing table tennis, running and so on.
【训练二】 每个学校都会给学生安排一些体育运动，从而让学生保 持身体健康。你们学校有哪些体育运动，请你谈谈你们学校 的体育生活，写一篇英语短文。 要求：1.词数80—100；2.内容完整，语言流畅，可适当 发挥；3.短文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。
Sports in Our School _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________
•9、要学生做的事，教职员躬亲共做；要学生学的知识，教职员躬亲共学；要学生守的规则，教职员躬亲共守。2021/9/112021/9/11Saturday, September 11, 2021 •10、阅读一切好书如同和过去最杰出的人谈话。2021/9/112021/9/112021/9/119/11/2021 1:27:12 AM •11、只有让学生不把全部时间都用在学习上，而留下许多自由支配的时间，他才能顺利地学习……（这）是教育过程的逻辑。2021/9/112021/9/112021/9/11Sep-2111-Sep-21 •12、要记住，你不仅是教课的教师，也是学生的教育者，生活的导师和道德的引路人。2021/9/112021/9/112021/9/11Saturday, September 11, 2021
• You have to believe in yourself. That's the secret of success. 人必须相信自己，这是成功的秘诀。
•
After that, she won first place at both 2008 Summer Olympic Games and the 2012 Summer Olympics Games. On 20th September, 2014, she won the first gold medal at the 17th Asian Games with her teammates. I think she's a good example to me and I'm proud of her. I hope that she can win more gold medals for China in the future.
本模块的话题是“体育生活”，是书面表达的常见话题， 命题形式简单，写起来比较容易。写作中以“体育生活”为 话题的书面表达，其命题的主要形式有：①谈谈体育锻炼对 健康生活的重要性；②谈谈自己及他人最喜欢的体育锻炼方 式；③介绍著名体育运动员的职业生涯，让人们了解他们的 体育生活。
【典型例题】 假设你最喜欢的体育明星是中国著名女射击运动员 (woman sport shooter)郭文珺(Guo Wenjun)。请根据以下要 点，写一篇英文发言稿。
开篇点题， 引出下文
―→
... Today I'd like to introduce a shooter named Guo Wenjun to
famous you ...
Chinese
【↓高分模板】
•Guo Wenjun was born ... •At the age of fourteen， she ... 介绍经历与战况 ―→ •In 2006， she ... •After that， she ... •On 20th September 2014， she ...
My Favorite Sport Sport is very important to us. It can help us keep healthy. I like sports and I do sports in my free time. My favorite sport is playing basketball. I often play basketball with my friends after school. I don't play well, but I feel relaxed and interesting. I also like watching basketball games on TV, I am very excited at exciting games. Sports not only make me stronger but also make me study easier and better now. I love sports very much.
13、He who seize the right moment, is the right man.谁把握机遇，谁就心想事成。2021/9/112021/9/112021/9/112021/9/119/11/2021 •14、谁要是自己还没有发展培养和教育好，他就不能发展培养和教育别人。2021年9月11日星期六2021/9/112021/9/112021/9/11 •15、一年之计，莫如树谷；十年之计，莫如树木；终身之计，莫如树人。2021年9月2021/9/112021/9/112021/9/119/11/2021 •16、教学的目的是培养学生自己学习，自己研究，用自己的头脑来想，用自己的眼睛看，用自己的手来做这种精神。2021/9/112021/9/11September 11, 2021 •17、儿童是中心，教育的措施便围绕他们而组织起来。2021/9/112021/9/112021/9/112021/9/11
出生时间
1984年6月22日
出生地点
陕西西安
经历与 1998年：在一家体校(a sports school)开始训练射击 战况 (shooting)
2006年：进பைடு நூலகம்中国队参加第15届亚运会(Asian Games)，获得一枚金牌和一枚银牌
经历与 2008年：夏季奥运会上夺得一枚金牌 战况 2012年：夏季奥运会上夺得一枚金牌
【训练一】 在 现 代 社 会 ， 人 们 日 益 重 视 体 育 运 动 ， 请 以 “ My Favorite Sport”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍一下你最喜欢 的体育运动。 要求：1.文中不能出现真实的人名，地名和校名；2.80词 左右。
My Favorite Sport _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________
2014年9月20日：和她的队友为中国赢得了17届亚 运会的第一枚金牌
评价
请给出1—2点评价
要求：1.80词左右；2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和 人名；3.要求条理清楚，语意连贯，可适当发挥。
【写作思路】 本篇习作要求同学们根据要点提示描述自己最喜欢的运 动员郭文珺。在写作时首先要进行充分地思考，选择适当的 单词、短语和句型。多运用本模块所学到的句子进行表达。
After I do some sports, I often feel a little tired. However, I can listen to the teachers more carefully and pay more attention to the lessons in class. In my opinion, doing sports can improve students' both health and study.
School sports have changed us a lot. Doing sports makes our school life more colorful and helps us make more friends. I'll keep on doing it.
↓
评价
―→
... I and
think she's a good example I'm proud of her ...
to
me
【范文展示】 Hello, everyone! Today I'd like to introduce a famous Chinese shooter named Guo Wenjun to you. Guo Wenjun was born in Xi'an, Shaanxi on June 22, 1984. At the age of fourteen, she started training shooting in a sports school. In 2006, she was chosen for the Chinese team at the 15th Asian Games and won a gold medal and a silver medal.
Sports in Our School It's very important for students to keep healthy. Everyone should do some sports every day because it's good for our health as well as our study. In our school, we often do many kinds of sports during the break, such as playing basketball, playing table tennis, running and so on.
【训练二】 每个学校都会给学生安排一些体育运动，从而让学生保 持身体健康。你们学校有哪些体育运动，请你谈谈你们学校 的体育生活，写一篇英语短文。 要求：1.词数80—100；2.内容完整，语言流畅，可适当 发挥；3.短文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。
Sports in Our School _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________
•9、要学生做的事，教职员躬亲共做；要学生学的知识，教职员躬亲共学；要学生守的规则，教职员躬亲共守。2021/9/112021/9/11Saturday, September 11, 2021 •10、阅读一切好书如同和过去最杰出的人谈话。2021/9/112021/9/112021/9/119/11/2021 1:27:12 AM •11、只有让学生不把全部时间都用在学习上，而留下许多自由支配的时间，他才能顺利地学习……（这）是教育过程的逻辑。2021/9/112021/9/112021/9/11Sep-2111-Sep-21 •12、要记住，你不仅是教课的教师，也是学生的教育者，生活的导师和道德的引路人。2021/9/112021/9/112021/9/11Saturday, September 11, 2021
• You have to believe in yourself. That's the secret of success. 人必须相信自己，这是成功的秘诀。
•
After that, she won first place at both 2008 Summer Olympic Games and the 2012 Summer Olympics Games. On 20th September, 2014, she won the first gold medal at the 17th Asian Games with her teammates. I think she's a good example to me and I'm proud of her. I hope that she can win more gold medals for China in the future.