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新托福写作题目

新托福写作题目新托福考试写作题目通常包括两个部分：独立写作和综合写作。

以下是一些常见的新托福考试写作题目：（一）独立写作题目（30分钟）：1.你认为学生应该在课堂上使用手机吗？2.你认为政府应该在教育上投入更多的资金吗？为什么？3.你认为现代科技对孩子的智力发展有益吗？为什么？4.你认为家庭和学校哪个对孩子的成长影响更大？为什么？5.你认为人们应该选择有高收入的职业还是他们真正热爱的职业？为什么？6.你认为政府应该在环境保护方面投入更多的资金吗？为什么？7.你认为现代科技对孩子的社交技能发展有益吗？为什么？8.你认为家长在孩子的教育过程中扮演着重要角色吗？为什么？9.你认为人们应该为了身体健康而改变自己的饮食习惯吗？为什么？10.你认为政府应该限制广告的数量和内容吗？为什么？11.你认为现代科技对孩子的创造力发展有益吗？为什么？12.你认为学校应该在课程中加入更多的实践性活动吗？为什么？（二）综合写作题目（20分钟）：1.根据以下阅读材料，总结一下关于“学生在课外活动方面花费时间的影响”的主要观点和事实。

2.根据以下阅读材料，讨论一下关于“父母参与孩子学习的重要性”的主要观点和事实。

3.根据以下阅读材料，分析一下关于“网络教育与传统教育优缺点”的主要观点和事实。

4.根据以下阅读材料，总结一下关于“学生参加课外活动对其学术成绩的影响”的主要观点和事实。

5.根据以下阅读材料，讨论一下关于“家庭背景对学生学习成绩的影响”的主要观点和事实。

6.根据以下阅读材料，分析一下关于“男女生在科学和工程领域的差异”的主要观点和事实。

7.根据以下阅读材料，总结一下关于“家庭教育和学校教育对孩子道德观念的影响”的主要观点和事实。

8.根据以下阅读材料，讨论一下关于“学生参与社区服务对其个人成长的影响”的主要观点和事实。

9.根据以下阅读材料，分析一下关于“不同年龄段的孩子对科技产品的接受程度差异”的主要观点和事实。

这些题目旨在测试考生的英语写作能力、逻辑思维能力和对相关话题的熟悉程度。

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无老师满分范例：The last factor that has made our age so uncomfortable is the abusive use of technology. Although it brings much convenience, it essentially changes human – we are no longer the master of tools, but instead the slaves of devices. We rush to metro station in order to catch an early train, sit in front of radioactive computers all day long in order to get our work done, and stay in air-conditioned rooms all summer without experiencing the natural changes outside thick cement walls. Several decades ago, people could still live closer to nature and make rational use of modern technology, which to me is the essence of human living experience.无老师优秀中文翻译：最后一个使我们这个时代如此的不舒服是对科技的滥用。

虽然它带来了很多便利，但是他本质上来说改变了我们的生活。

我们不再是工具的主人，恰恰相反，我们变成了工具的奴隶。

我们匆忙地奔向地铁站，就是为了赶上早班的火车，整天坐在辐射的电脑屏幕前，为了把我们的工作做完，夏天整个呆在空调房里面，而没有享受厚厚的混凝土外墙外的自然的变化。

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无老师新托福作文巨讲堂【篇一：无老师ibt新托福作文巨讲堂(2014)】无老师ibt新托福作文巨讲堂（2014年01月号）来源: 本站浏览: 我要评论(3条) 字号: 大中小无老师优秀范例：the major reason for my propensity for space technology is the potential of scientific research. no matterhow the impact it occurred, from the moment of its very advent, scientific research had become the very dictator of our future.it is by these researches that human beings, the only creature with intelligence on earth, began to soar their wings of aspiration. and more importantly, it had indeed done a great good for the humankind. can you imagine getting access to the world wide web at your desk if there were not for the researchof millions of computer ancestors? similarly, it is highly probable that the great-grandchildren of your great-grandchildren would be enjoying a trip across the ―worm hole‖ while giving thanks secretly to his forefathe r, you, who voted for the expenditure on scientific research. in a word, the space project enjoys great potential, and should therefore be taken into account in top priority to ensure a better future of mankind.无老师优秀翻译：我非常支持空间技术的最大的原因是他的科研上的潜力。

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无老师满分范例：Another reason is that modern people are more effective than those in the past. And great efficiency is one fundamental way to success. We are able to make use of many tools increasing productivity today. For instance, the computer plays an important role in our life in terms of efficiency. As I want to search material concerning the “nuclear energy”, all I have to do is to type this term on Google and a great number of sources will pop out on the screen. Given the past, I had to go to the library and bury me a couple of days looking for the information on nuclear energy without the assistance of computers. The distance is conspicuous, thus modern people with advanced technology would succeed more readily.无老师优秀翻译：另外一个原因是现代的人比之前的人效率会更高。

更好的效率是成功的一个关键因素。

我们今天可以更好地使用工具来提高我们的效率。

比如，电脑就在增加我们效率这方面上起到了很重要的作用。

2016年2月27日托福写作真题解析

2016年2月27日托福写作真题解析二月第一场托福写作考试，刚刚于上周六落下帷幕。

天道小编第一时间与诸位备考生分享了2月27日这一天的托福作文真题及解析，还请正在备考的同学们能够仔细阅读。

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本文，天道小编就给大家整理了刚刚过去的2月27日托福写作机经，赶快收藏吧!综合写作：土拨鼠是否应该受到保护阅读：1. 土拨鼠会和牛抢草吃，影响农业;2. 土拨鼠身上的跳蚤会把鼠疫传播给人类;3. 土拨鼠不是食物链顶级动物，不需要被保护。

听力反驳：1. 土拨鼠和牛抢草吃的观点已经过时了，土拨鼠可以松动土壤，更有利于草地的生长;2. 鼠疫传播的几率很小;3. 土拨鼠挖的洞可以给蛇提供栖息地，同时土拨鼠也会被猎物捕食，因此对生态还是有一定的作用的。

独立写作：The high school students are required to study many different subjects at the same time or they should study only three or four subjects at a time?是否新题：是题材：教育类观点：一次学三、四门比较好写作思路：1. 科目太多容易给学生造成学习压力，降低学习积极性;2. 科目太多，学生学到的只会是浅显的东西，不会过于深入;3. 科目太多也会给老师增添负担。

以上就是天道小编与备战托福写作的考生们，准备的托福作文真题及其解析了，希望可以给大家带来带来一定意义上的帮助!想要了解更多托福写作机经吗?天道教育托福机经频道期待您的到来!感谢您阅读!天道教育托福课程全程托管课程全面升级，马上报名，马上有高分!托福全程托管计划，每天09:00-20:00全程托管，从“教、学、管、理”四方面系统地监督辅导，解决学生的考试问题。

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托福写作辅导：托福考试满分作文欣赏（１）Which one do you prefer, to solve problems on your own experience and knowledge, or to ask others for advice?As knowledge and experience serve as twim towers in problem-solving, one is often presented with two major paths that pave the way for final fulfillment, eitther to wrack his brain, just like what happened to Neuton, siiting for many years under an apple tree and eventually figuring out ond of the greatest universal rules that govern the whole globe, or to seek for others’ widsom through their advice, just as in the case of Benjinin Franklin, gathering great minds under one roof and then establishing a most world-renown libray. Both ways work. When a practical goal is involved, however, Benjimin Franklin may best be regareded as a role model in this respect and asking people for advice often turn out to be the prime alternative.Experience and knowledge borrowed or learned from others’ advice contribute greatly to effectiveness and effeciency for a goal-accomplishment. Not all experience and knowledge related to problem-solving can be obtained by personal effort alone due to limitations of mind and capabilities of each individual. A single thought in someone’s mind is, more often than not, far less shining compared with group’s wisdom. That explains the famous old saying that one sees further when standing upon the shoulders’ of past great giants; that explains why a great leader is always with greater minds; that also explains why teamwork in corperation is highly emphasized in the 21st century. Brainstorm and exchange of ideas between different thoughts never fail to enhance capabilities of each individula involved, a team, a company, an institution, a country, or even the entire global village.Asking others’ advice instead of getting everything done on one’s own promotes democracy and communication too. In terms of democracy, it is necessary to give others rights and chances to speak since the problem may concern them in different ways, and their saying in turn reflects our respect toward freedom of speech as well as their wisdom. In terms of communication, idea exchange sometimes focuses more than solutions, and hereby better mutual understanding about perspectives, principles, praticalities and personalities of each other.Admittely turning to others for help and suggestion by no means refers to absolute and irresponsible dependence. Consideration upon different thoughts and ideas broadens our mind, enlarges our vision, furthers understanding, enhances more effective and efficient brainstorm, and stresses mutual respect in groups and communities, which undoubtedly gives rise to better, if not the best solutions. As is paraphrased from John F Kenedy, brainstormed, there is little we cannot do while divided, there is little we can do.托福写作辅导：托福考试满分作文欣赏(2)Case of Benjinin Franklin, gathering great minds under one roof and then establishing a most world-renown libray. Both ways work. When a practical goal is involved, however, Benjimin Franklin may best be regareded as a role model in this respect and asking people for advice often turn out to be the prime alternative.Experience and knowledge borrowed or learned from others' advice contribute greatly to effectiveness and effeciency for a goal-accomplishment. Not all experience and knowledge related to problem-solving can be obtained by personal effort alone due to limitations of mind and1capabilities of each individual. A single thought in someone's mind is, more often than not, far less shining compared with group's wisdom. That explains the famous old saying that one sees further when standing upon the shoulders' of past great giants; that explains why a great leader is always with greater minds; that also explains why teamwork in corperation is highly emphasized in the 21st century. Brainstorm and exchange of ideas between different thoughts never fail to enhance capabilities of each individula involved, a team, a company, an institution, a country, or even the entire global village.Asking others' advice instead of getting everything done on one's own promotes democracy and communication too. In terms of democracy, it is necessary to give others rights and chances to speak since the problem may concern them in different ways, and their saying in turn reflects our respect toward freedom of speech as well as their wisdom. In terms of communication, idea exchange sometimes focuses more than solutions, and hereby better mutual understanding about perspectives, principles, praticalities and personalities of each other.Admittely turning to others for help and suggestion by no means refers to absolute and irresponsible dependence. Consideration upon different thoughts and ideas broadens our mind, enlarges our vision, furthers understanding, enhances more effective and efficient brainstorm, and stresses mutual respect in groups and communities, which undoubtedly gives rise to better, if not the best solutions. As is paraphrased from John F Kenedy, brainstormed, there is little we cannot do while divided, there is little we can do.托福写作辅导：托福考试满分作文欣赏(3)After they complete their university studies, some students live in their hometowns. Others live in different towns and cities. Which do you think is beterr? Give reasons for your answer.After they complete their univerrsity studies, some students preferr to live in their hometowns while others choose to live in different towns or cities. Everybody has his own reasons for his preference. After my graduation, I will go back and live in my home city. I have made this decision because of the following reasons.Firstly, my home city is a big city that can offer a lot. There are plenty of opportunities for work, many big libraries for studies, several differrent musiums for visit, and numerous cinemas, theaters and centers for entertainment. When I go back there, I will have no difficulty in finding a job suitable for me and I can make use of all the facilities available there.Secondly, if I go back to my home city, I can look after my parents. I take this into consideration because I am their only child and they are now weak and getting on in age. If I live in the same city with them, I can visit them very often and help them whenever it is necessary.Thirdly, if I live in my home city, I will have a lot of friends, schoolmates and relatives to visit and to turn to for help when I need. Of course, I could get acquainted with many people and make many friends if I were to go to live in a strange place, but that takes time. If I go back to my home city, everybody will be waiting for me and I will be able to settle down comfortably without any trouble and waste of time.In short, my choise is based on a careful consideration of my home city and my family. I think it is a better or sensible choice; in a certain sense, it is a must.Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific details and examples in your answer.托福写作辅导：托福考试满分作文欣赏(4)If you have a good neighbor, you are a lucky person. You have someone who cares about your needs and your property, who is helpful in the little day-to-day situations that come up, and who is supportive in times of crisis.A good neighbor is someone who, for instance, understands that your children may occasionally run across his lawn,- even though you tell them not to. He'll realize that children can be careless about things like that, and he won't make a big fuss about it unless it becomes a regular thing. In the same vein, he knows that you'll understand if some of the trash from his trash cans blows across into your yard. In other words, he is sensitive to the unintentional things that can happen. He doesn't make a big deal about them.A good neighbor is also respectful of your property. For example, she asks your permission before doing anything that interferes with what's yours. This means she wouldn't plant a huge tree in between your houses without asking how you felt about it. If she wanted to put up a fence, she would let you know first. She might work with you to decide where it should be placed. Maybe the two of you would even split the cost.A good neighbor would lend you some milk if you ran out. She'd give you a ride to work if your car was broken, and let your children stay at her house in the evening if you got stuck working overtime. You would do the same for her. Both of you would help make the other's life easier.When something really awful happens to you, like a death in the family, a good neighbor will volunteer to help in any way he can. This could mean something small, like making some casseroles to put in your freezer to feed visiting relatives. Or it could mean something big, like helping you get through the sadness of the funeral.I think only someone who has experienced a bad neighbor can really appreciate a good one!A good neighbor can be a good friend. He or she can make all the difference in the world to your life.托福写作辅导：托福考试满分作文欣赏(5)Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and esamples to support your answer.Some people like to eat out at food stands and restaurants, while others like to prepare food at home. Often it depends on the kind of lifestyle people have. Those with very busy jobs outside the house don’t always have time to cook. They like the convenience of eating out. Overall, though, it is cheaper and healthier to eat at home.While eating in restaurants is fast, the money you spend can add up. When I have dinner at a restaurant with a friend, the bill is usually over twenty dollars. I can buy a lot of groceries with that much money. Even lunch at a fast-food stand usually costs five or six dollars for one person. That’s enough to feed the whole family at home.Eating at home is better for you, too. Meals at restaurants are often high in fat and calories, and they serve big plates of food-much more food-than you need to eat at one meal. If you cook food at home, you have more control over the ingredients. You can use margarine instead of butter on your potatoes, or not put so much cheese on top of your pizza. At home, you can control yourportion size. You can serve yourself as little as you want. In a restaurant, you may eat a full plate of food "because you paid for it."It’s true that eating out is convenient. You don’t have to shop, or cook, or clean up. But real home cooking doesn’t have to take up a lot of time. There are lots of simple meals that don’t take long to make. In fact, they’re faster than eating out, especially if you think of the time you spend driving to a restaurant, parking, waiting for a table,, waiting for service, and driving home.Both eating at restaurants and cooking at home can be satisfying. Both can taste good and be enjoyed with family and friends. I prefer cooking at home because of the money and health issues, but people will make the choice that fits their lifestyle best.托福写作辅导：托福考试满分作文欣赏(6)题目：It has recently been announced that a new movie theater may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.A New Movie TheaterEntertainment is an important part of everyone’s life. We all need to take time to relax insgroupsto live healthy lives and do our work efficiently. It is easier to relax when an appropriate form of entertainment is convenient and close by. Therefore, I would support a proposal to build a new movie theater in my neighborhood.Entertainment places can bring some disadvantages to a community such as increased traffic and noise, but I believe the advantages of a new movie theater would outweigh these concerns. For one thing, the people in my neighborhood would save time. When they wanted to see a movie they could simply walk to the new theater rather than spend time traveling by bus or car. In addition, it would be safer for children to visit a nearby movie theater rather than one in some other part of the city. And finally, a new theater might attract other businesses, such as restaurants and coffee shops, where the people of my neighborhood could go to relax.In short, a new movie theater in the neighborhood would increase the number of entertainment options for the residents. They could enjoy themselves more easily without spending a lot of time traveling to another part of the city. For these reasons I would support the building of a movie theater in my neighborhood.译文：一家新电影院娱乐是每个人生活中一个重要的组成部分。

TOEFL写作讲义

TOEFL写作讲义（主讲：戴云）第一章总体介绍一、我的赏与罚封赏与晋升：普通教徒---罗汉---金刚---护法---菩萨---佛---高级佛---教主助理---副教主---常务副教主课堂可以获得最高功名为护法考试95及以上为菩萨，100分以上佛，105分以上高级佛，110分以上教主助理，115 分以上副教主，118分以上常务副教主，121分以上教主。

批评与惩戒：Curse---赠送白绫---开除出教二、托福写作圣经要多记笔记：1、可以保证focus on my lecture，不会absent-minded2、保证将来会有复习的clues写作的第一要务是把观点表达清楚。

1、写作必须有观点2、要给出一个清楚的观点写作考试不基于考生的真实身份。

托福作文中所有的例子和细节可以是真的，也可以是假的。

写作考试只考察语言水平，不考察思想水平。

举例：建工厂不同意的理由有三：1、造成污染；2、交通堵塞；3、物价上涨写作考试不测试考生的真实想法。

作文不是写想写的，而是写好写的、能写的。

举例：父母是最好的老师，你同意吗？同意的理由：1、how to behave myself；2、value system；3、experience上述理由都不能证明该题目“后天的知识是老师教的，而不是父母教的”存在逻辑错误，将老师与父母并列起来，应该在老师前面加上修饰语“学校的”。

写作是基于表达，而不是基于翻译。

举例：婀娜多姿：beautiful；妩媚动人：lovelyY ou are extremely smart. extremely means very托福考试30分钟最低要写300字，一般要求写400到500字写作内容和语言同等重要。

把内容表达清楚可以拿到高分clarity高于variety，variety高于complexityclarity is the priority观点的层次比观点的数目更重要。

逻辑错误比语法错误更严重。

新东方版：1月25日托福写作真题

新东方版：1月25日托福写作真题新东方版：2015年1月25日托福写作真题综合写作：Topic议题公司实行奖励机制incentive program使得员工形成健康生活方式ReadingListeningThesis总论点可以带来很多潜在好处不能带来阅读中所说的好处Sub-point 1分论点1帮助员工戒烟和减肥The first benefit is obvious: the incentives will be a material aid in helping employees quit smoking and lose weight.奖励机制带来的好处不长远。

大多数人戒烟后又会重新开始，减肥后会反弹。

benefits derived from the incentive program are most likely not permanent.Sub-point2分论点2给员工带来更多假期In effect, the amount saved from paying for insurance is a raise in salary. An added benefit could be offering them additional vacation days.这种奖励措施不公平unfair。

一些人天生肥胖超重naturally overweight，如果这些人刻意减肥会损害健康，这是基因决定的genetics ，我们不能强迫每个人减肥。

而且，对不健康生活方式的员工少假期也是不科学的，因为他们和其他人一样有家庭需要照顾。

Sub-point3分论点3对公司好make more profits。

健康生活方式的员工工作更加有效率。

公司可以盈利更多并且会减少健康有关的花费这个好处忽视了现代商业的现实ignore the reality of modern business。

在美国，平均每个人跳槽机率很大，许多人隔几年就会跳槽。

2015年1月25日托福写作真题解析

2015年1月25日托福写作真题解析2015年1月25日托福写作真题解析下载：/20150126/344980.html?seo=wenku12792015年1月25日托福写作真题解析小马过河已经全面发布了，包含作文解析和作文范文供同学们免费下载使用，考生们可以复制链接进入进行下载。

【题目】Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:When classmates or colleagues communicate about a project in person instead of by e-mail, they will produce better work for the project.【解析】1月25日的托福独立作文题目是一道价值判断类题目。

思路是利弊分析，不管选择题目中的哪一方观点，都要从这个观点有什么好处来着手思考，并进行具体的解释和举例。

以下是一篇例文，供参考。

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement：classmates and partner can communicate with each other face to face to finish the project more better than by sending e-mail.The advancement of technology has introduced countless forms of communication. Cell phones，text messaging and programs like Twitter make it easy to talk with anybody，anywhere. Althoughtechnology has made communicating very easy，these forms sometimes are too detached and can lead to many misunderstandings. I still think the best way to have a conversation with someone is face to face.Instant messaging or text messaging are convenient forms of communication，but it is hard to discuss difficult topics over text or instant message. The style of language is so abbreviated that it is hard to tell a person's tone or mood. For example，I was once chatting with my mother and I responded “OK” when she asked me a very serious question. I thought my response was fine，but the next day my mother called me very upset. She thought I was angry with her and had been worrying all day about how to talk to me. If we had been talking on the phone，she would have been able to hear that I was not angry.E-mail is also another form of communication that is useful，but can be troublesome if you are discussing a difficult topic. Sometimes when people are angry，they write a quick and nasty e-mail. This has gotten a lot of people in trouble with their teachers or bosses. One time，my classmate was really upset about a grade she received on a test. She was so upset about it that she sent a very rude e-mail to the teacher. After about an hour，she calmed down and realized she had made a mistake. If she had called or gone to talk to the teacher about the test，she probably would not have used such angry language. Unfortunately，it is too easy to send an e-mail without thinking. The teacher was not pleased with her e-mail，and gave her a week's detention.Talking with somebody on the phone，or face to face，is the best way to solve a problem. When you are speaking with somebody，you can hear the mood in his voice，or see the expression on his face. Using these verbal and physical cues，you can understand his meaning more clearly. Conversations such as politics and relationships are most successful if done over the phone or face to face. This is why people do not propose marriage through e-mail and politicians do not write laws using text messaging. Using the phone also keeps you from getting into trouble by miscommunication or misunderstanding.2015年1月25日托福写作真题解析下载：/20150126/344980.html?seo=wenku1279。

新托福(iBT)写作满分详解及模板

新托福(iBT)写作满分详解及模板新托福(internet based TOEFL 简称iBT TOEFL) 自去年2005年9月在北美开考以来，很多考生谈此色变。

有的考生把新托福戏称为“ 我变态”(iBT 亦是我变态的谐音)。

不少同学纷纷转考其他类型的考试，一试不爽，又转回iBT, 这么几个回合下来时间就被浪费掉了。

纵观新托福考试的4大块，中国考生要在短期内（2 - 4个月）迅速取得新托福高分（100分以上），考生必须有相当的应考策略。

笔者对考生的新托福成绩作了大量统计和分析后发现考生考分相对高的2个部分是听力和写作。

考分相对低的是阅读和口语。

今天，作者着重和大家聊聊如何在极短的时间内（3天的时间）迅速取得作文27分以上，并给出作者参加新托福考试取得满分的作文部分模块，供各位考生参考。

作文考试作为新托福的第4部分，共有2篇作文。

一．Integrated writing ( 结合写作)第一篇作文叫做Integrated writing ( 结合写作)，给考生3分钟读一篇文章（大概200字左右），然后听一段关于对此文章的评论，结束后让考生写出150-225字的作文（只能打字），典型的问法是：Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on point made in the reading. 听力结束后，阅读部分会再次出现并保留在电脑屏幕的左半部分，考生便可以开始写作。

此文的评分标准有2条: 1. 要点分 2. 语言分要写好此篇作文关键有以下几点：1.考生必须从根本上掌握英语八股文的结构。

阅读时，考生必须按照八股文结构，记下这些points和support points 的details.2.听力时，考生要记下说话者是如何反对这些Points的。

注意的是说话者的反对顺序不一定按照阅读文章的演进顺序进行。

作文巨讲堂精简

无老师新托福,SAT作文巨讲堂〔1〕【无老师作文】The evolution was due in great measure to the interaction betweenan enormous作文range of subject numerousart photography has largely taken the place of portrait1.连词In that respect in this case apart from about=concerning2.动词obscured dominant dominated require cultivatecustomers would first be gravitated towards the virtual product that is代替influence effect affect3.形容词副词enormous numerous conspicuous dramatically remarkable drastically critically eventually gradually essentially barely cruc ially ultimate aim of virtually inevitable essentially reasonable4.词组take the second placein order toright placeincluding towardto be healthy, people tendlike= be favorable ofyou should ===requirein the process ofare sure to are certainly made toregard asgain access toapart from +nis by no means绝不是5.句式give us an illusion thatbut in facttechnology has provide the possibility for children toit is reasonablea more ..should inbe supposed to the responsibility开头1we are living in a Prosperous era , [economy blooms/economy is in bloom ]and society/technology/education develops(civilizations evolves.)/ lives are full of colorsth(welfare) are never as handy/convenient/within reach as they are in the past pay attention to take sth. seriously more conscious of sithThere is no doubt that government should give subsidies to support those public activities, but some people argue that it’s more important for the government to spend money to build art museums and music performance center than to build recreational facilities. I disagree with this opinion.无老师新托福,SAT作文巨讲堂〔2〕【无老师作文】无老师优秀范例：Prepare for success. Consider registering a web site in your name. You can then create a professional-sounding email address that will encourage people to visit your web site. Get a professional photograph taken. This is for your web site, your advertising, or anything else that you will be doing to promote your image as a serious professional. Order your own business cards in your name with your web site and business number. If you don’t want your cell phone ringing with business calls at work, consider a Skype In number, which will cost you just $60 a year。

托福基础写作讲义

托福基础写作一、托福写作概述二、英汉两种语言的区别（一）、美国人与中国人思维方式的不同。

linear way of thinking（二）、英汉句子结构的特点。

英语重形和，重结构，汉语重意和, 重语义。

英语中常用复合句；汉语则常用短句，简单句。

10 Linking words cohesion1. conj.:1) and. but, or, so, while2) if, because, although,That, who, which, what, as---as more than, so--- that2. in this reason, in conclusion, for example3. however, unfortunately,Undeniably4. to make things worse5. generally speaking6. 同义词7. repetition8. this, it, that, those9. interesting to see10. what is more（三）英语多变化variety(diversity)，汉语多重复。

（四）英语被动句多。

汉语中主动句多。

三、中国学生写作最易犯的十大错误1. Nowadays, college student should learn competition and cooperation.2. The problem that is created by computers attract (draw, spark, captivate, intrigue, arouse, yield, give rise to) much attention.3. In present-day society, there are a great many young people go abroad.4. In my opinion, I think that smoking should be banned in public places.5. The computer can not instead the pivotal role played by teachers in education.6. Some people welcome raising pets, others hold different opinions.7. In large cities of China has many fast food shops.8. At college, we should learn as much knowledge as possible so that we can be well prepared for our future career.9. Some students are interested in play computer games.10. You really have two down sons.四、托福写作25分必备的100个意群词汇持某观点: claim ( assert, contendreckon deem share the belief that )支持某观点: advocate(maintain, welcome vote for side with be in favor of )反对某观点: contradict (oppose, object to, criticize, refute be against cast doubts on question, challenge)合理的：justified ( sensible feasible convincing hold water bear much analysis)好处：advantage (benefit, merit, positive(bright) side, upside, boon, pros, strength )弊端：disadvantage( harm, demerit, negative(dark) side, downside, bane, cons, weakness defect, flaw, drawback )肯定：undoubtedly (indeed undeniably there is no denying that)不确定：be likely to ( potentially presumably)重要的：essential (significant, vital, crucial, critical, fundamental, indispensable, pivotal)有益的：beneficial （conducive instrumental, rewarding ）有害的：detrimental （harmful virulent）有争议的：controversial (arguable, debatable disputable, contentious) 普遍的：widespread ( prevalent, universal, pervasive, ubiquitous )显著地：considerably (significantly, remarkably,Dramatically ,tremendously, substantially)明显的：evident (apparent, manifest，crystal-clear)16. 增强：enhance (strengthenboost)17. 减少：decline (descend, collapse, relieve)18. 大约：approximately（nearly, around, estimated, roughly）19. 趋势：trend（tendency, inclination）20. 预见：predict （expect, project）21. 带来bring about (result in, lead to)22. 引起create （spark ; yield;; give rise to）23. 建立establish （found, institute）24. 要求call for （request，demand）25. 去除eliminate（remove, eradicate）26. 探讨explore (examine, identify)27. 描绘depict (portray, illustrate)28. 后果consequence( aftermath; outcome)29. 足够adequate （enough; sufficient）30. 解决tackle ( resolve, address)31. 意识awareness(consciousness)32. 控制curb ( regulate, censor)33. 解释：account for （be responsible for）34. 投资finance (invest in, subsidize)35. 缓解relieve ( ease, alleviate)36. 压力stress ( pressure, strain)37. 和谐harmony ( concordance)38. 继承inherit (hand down)39. 培养cultivate （train, foster）40. 促进promote ( contribute to, upgrade)41. 适应adapt to (adjust to, acclimate to)42. 提供provide (render, afford)43. 替代replace (substitute, take the place of)44. 保护preserve (protect)45. 证据evidence (proof)46. 赢得gain (acquire, attain)47. 国外的foreign( alien, exotic)48. 灾难disaster (misfortune, catastrophe)49. 发展advance (progress)50. 倾向于tend to ( be inclined to , be apt to)51. 吸引attract (allure, tempt)52. 专注的be absorbed in(be immersed in, devote oneself to)53. 目的是aim at ( The purpose is )54. 实现achieve (fulfill, implement)55. 危害endanger ( threaten; jeopardize)56. 损害undermine (impair, damage)57. 阻碍hinder (obstruct, impede)58. 禁止forbid (ban, prohibit)59. 责备blame( denounce, criticize)60. 污染pollute (contaminate, stain)61. 腐蚀erode(wear away, corrode)62. 欺骗deceive (cheat, defraud)63. 冲突conflict ( shock, tension)64. 驱使prompt (spur, incite)贪婪的acquisitive(money-oriented，materialistic)自私的self-centered (selfish, inconsiderate)体谅的considerate (understanding, sympathetic) 冷漠的indifferent (apathetic, aloof)奢侈的wasteful (luxurious, extravagant)残忍的inhumane(brutal, barbaric)绝望的hopeless（despairing, desperate）过分的excessive (extravagant, exorbitant)激烈的intense (fierce, vigorous)严厉的stringent (rigorous, rigid)奇怪的eccentric (odd, peculiar)难以置信的unbelievable(incredulous, virtual)惊人的extraordinary (marvelous, spectacular)有抱负的ambitious（aggressive, aspirant）固有的inherent（nature, innate）稳定的steady (stable, constant)恶化worsen (aggravate, deteriorate)夸大exaggerate ( overstate)限制restrain (constrain, confine)拆除tear down（knock down, pull down）加速accelerate (speed up, precipitate)占优势predominate (dominate)分辨distinguish (differentiate, discern)抵消counteract (offset, cancel out)开展launch (conduct, carry out)颁布enact (enforce, promulgate )生活节奏pace of life(rhythm of life, tempo of life)影响influence(impact，pervade)差异difference (distinction, gap)交流communicate(exchange, associate)接触have access to （make contact with, keep in touch with）优先give priority to (put…into first place)节约economize ( conserve, cherish)参与participate in ( take part in, engage in)措施measure (step, action)注意beware ( prevent, guard against)五、“十大句式”在TOEFL写作考试中的应用是否非让它假装强调比较差（插）的原因？即：否：否定句；非：非限制性定语从句；让：让步句；它：it引导的句子；假：假设句；装：倒装句；强调：强调句；比较：比较句；差（插）：插入语；原因：原因句。

无老师新托福作文巨讲堂

无老师新托福作文巨讲堂无老师新托福,SAT作文巨讲堂(1)【无老师作文】当无老师接到的新托福作文越多，就越发现，其实现在中国学生的英语作文问题，不简简单单的是一个思路的问题。

但是很遗憾，现在绝大多数的英语培训机构作文课堂的内容都是思路。

其实看得越多就越发现，现在中国学生的托福作文问题本质上来说，还是遣词造句的问题，每当无老师遇到这样的文章，总是会改几句以作提示，没办法，要是都改的话，那就是重新写了整篇作文。

天呐～每天几十篇作文，那将是什么工作量~~~~~~,～于是无老师决定，之后，多拿一些地道的英文文章，用实例的方式对如何提高各位考友的遣词造句进行讲解以及分享。

在接下来的日子里，文章类型不限，体裁不限，但是唯一的限定就是要能用于考试之中，也就是用于托福、雅思、SAT、GRE等考试之中，要对于每一位考生有实际帮助作用。

这类专题的名字，以后就叫做《无老师新托福,SAT作文巨讲堂》(二丫童鞋表示，这个“巨”字，用的很给力～很傻～很天真～^_^)，无限量更新，以后会作文一个长期的栏目坚持下去。

这类主题之后的写作方式，就是专门针对中国学生的软肋，也就是语法排列，以及遣词造句，进行实例讲解。

首先列出地道的写作例子，然后给出中文翻译，然后给出我们中国考生经常的写法。

让每一位童鞋，在这种比较模仿之中，知道可以把自己现在的用法，也就是后面的不尽如人意的例子，如何变换成更地道的写法，也就是最前面给出的写法。

无老师优秀范例:Ramp up your networking. Join LinkedIn and Plaxo, and ask for recommendations from current and past coworkers. Use Twitter to update the world on your current projects as well as network with other like-minded individuals. Look for local networking groups, and start attending them。

【最新精选】无老师作文巨讲堂2016年全年合集整理版

【最新精选】无老师作文巨讲堂2016年全年合集整理版1 ibt作文巨讲堂2011年1月无老师优秀范例:Get a life outside of work. This is vital to avoid biding your time in a job you hate. When you have an active social life outside of the office, it becomes so much easier to tolerate mundane or stressful work. A balanced life helps to keep things in perspective。

无老师中文释义:争取获得工作以外的生活这是在你痛恨的工作中等待良机的关键。

当你在办公室以外获得了积极的社会生活，忍受平淡或充满压力的工作就变得非常容易了。

和谐的生活有助于保持对事物的洞察力。

无老师平庸示例:Get a job which is out of your work. This is the key to wait the good chance when you are in the work which you do not like. when you get a positive life outside your office, it is much easy to bear boring and stressed work. A harmonious life could help you look throught your life.这个非常第一句(the very first one，体会出中英间不能对译了吧^_^)优秀范例中用的是Get a life outside of work.但是在平庸示例中写的是Get a job which is out ofyour work.很显然平庸范例用了我们中国童鞋们很喜欢用的定语从句，但是实际上，这句话本来就可以用很简短的方式Get a life outside of work.进行表达。

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AnotherreasonwhRthestatementisfalseisthatitneglectsthegrowingpowerofmoderntechnologR,whichreleasespeoplefromth eirlaborandputmachinesandcomputersinplaceswhichemploReesoriginallRoccupR.Itisacommonphenomenonnowthattrem endousfarmlandarebeingwellorganizedunderthecontrolofmerelRitsownertakingadvantageofthemostadvancedmachines.Al so,factoriesthat“hires”computerstomanagethemassproductionisnolongernews.Neitheroftheseseemedevenpossibleonl Rdec adesago,buttheRnowobviouseRamplesofhowabussinesscouldberunwithoutemploRees.无老师优秀翻译：这个说法不成立的另外一个原因是在于，它忽略了不断发展的现代科技，他把我们人类从繁重的体力劳动之中解放出来，让机器和电脑代替了原来雇工做的事情。

要知道，现在很多农场主，仅仅是通过最先进的机器就能很好的管理自己巨大的农场了。

同时，那些雇佣电脑来管理生产线的工厂，已经不是很新鲜了。

但是这些在10年前都是不可能的，但是在今天，他们都成了，公司如何在没有很多员工的情况下，运营的最为明显的例子了。

本段，一共就4句。

第一句，优秀范例：AnotherreasonwhRthestatementisfalseisthatitneglectsthegrowingpowerofmoderntechnologR,whichreleasespeoplefromth eirlaborandputmachinesandcomputersinplaceswhichemploReesoriginallRoccupR.对比平庸范例Thisstatementiswrong,andtheanotherreasonforthisisthatitcannotseethetechnologRisdeveloping,anditliberatesourhumanfro mhardwork,anditmakesmachinesandcomputersdothejobsthatpeopledo.从开头我们就一下能辨别出优秀范例，与平庸范例的差别，在这里平庸范例的Thisstatementiswrong，几乎就是字对字的把单词堆砌起来的，但是优秀范例首先一个another即显示出本段是承接上一段进行进一步论述的，这一点，平庸范例根本显示不出来。

其次，优秀范例对于表示对一个观点的否定的时候，用的也是false，而不是比较口语的wrong。

接下来，优秀范例，在表达忽略的时候用的也是neglect，也是很书面化，加分！不仅如此，接下来，优秀范例用的growingpower写的也是很贴切，而不是像平庸范例写的technologRisdeveloping句型写的这么简单和常见。

而在这个时候，如果我们跳到更高的高度的话，还会发现优秀范例的AnotherreasonwhRthestatementisfalseisthatitneglects这个句型一气呵成，逻辑衔接得非常好，我们可以直接抄下来，当作常用加分句式。

后半句，优秀范例选词其实一般，但是两个固定搭配很好，首先是releases…..from…..用的很好，第二个是put…….inplaces,两个固定搭配看似平庸，但是当我们把真正的平庸范例makesmachinesandcomputersdothejobs，拿过来的时候，我们就会发现，原来优秀范例写的颇有一些文绉绉的感觉！也就是把你提走了不说提走了，而是说找人替代了你的位置，言下之意，也就是这里不需要你了。

而且优秀范例最后用的emploReesoriginallRoccupR，这里的originallRoccupR用的特别好，首先originallR，那就说明，now，这里已经没有你的位置了。

然后occupR，对应前面的place，颇有前后呼应的感觉。

至于平庸范例do来，do去的，过于口语化。

第二句，优秀范例ItisacommonphenomenonnowthattremendousfarmlandarebeingwellorganizedunderthecontrolofmerelRitsownertakingadv antageofthemostadvancedmachines.对比平庸范例WeallknowthatmanRfarmownersaremanagingtheirfarmsbRthemostadvancemachines.优秀范例的Itisacommonphenomenonnowthat显得非常的书面，颇有一种“纵观古今，我们都知道这样一个道理”的大会作报告的感觉扑面而来！赞~\(≧▽≦)/~！至于平庸范例的Weallknowthat，就好像是“大伙想想，是不是这个理”口语化倾向很浓厚。

接下来的tremendousfarmland也就是还好。

但是后面的一连串组合拳很漂亮，首先是arebeingwellorganized强调现在已经是正在实行的情况，其二，underthecontrolofmerelRitsowner，用介宾短语under+名词结构，而不是用很僵化的bRdoing。

而且优秀范例最后还用了伴随状语takingadvantageof，使得句式很多样化，而且其本身还是一个固定搭配takeadvantageof，更是给自己加分！第三句，优秀范例Also,factoriesthat“hires”computerstomanagethemassproductionisnolongernews.对比平庸范例Atthesametime,itisnotnewthatmanRpeopleareusingcomputerstomanagethefactories.这里优秀范例很俏皮的用了hires，而不是buR，第一点与前面的取代了人的位置相呼应，因为hire只能hire人，但是在这里hire的是computers，其实就是在强调computers取代了人的位置。

其次，massproduction没有用常见的factorRproduction，亦或者assemblRline，不见得有多好，但是代表自己掌握的单词量很丰富，这也是给自己加分的。

而且最后的nolongernews也得很漂亮，用否定的方式，来表达肯定的意思，这个东西已经不新鲜了，也就是已经司空见惯了，更证明自己的论述很有道理。

最后一句，优秀范例NeitheroftheseseemedevenpossibleonlRdecadesago,buttheRnowobviouseRamplesofhowabussinesscouldberunwithoutem ploRees.对比平庸范例ButtheRareimposibbleinmanRRearsago,buttodaR,theRarethemostobviouseRamplesofhowacompanRrunwithoutmanRpeo ple.首先，作者将否定词Neither放置于句首，而不是像平庸范例一样用imposibble来表示否定，比较新颖，本身就使得句式与众不同，加分！然后，表示几十年之前，也没有用manRRearsago这样很常见的方式，而是直接秀了一下词汇量，用了decade这个词“10年”，词汇量赞！最后的亮点，就是在于buttheRnowobviouseRamplesof这个链接的很好，首先用theR，呼应前文，然后用obviouseRamplesof引导出自己的例子来支持自己的观点，浑然天成！而且优秀范例最后还用到了emploRee这个词，看似平淡无奇，但是反观平庸范例的用的是manRpeople，顿觉得优秀范例用词准确。

AnotherreasonwhRIadvocateforspacetechnologRisthatitdoesgoodtodwellersonearthnotonlRinthefuture,butalsotodaR,–att hisverRhour,atthisverRminute,atthisverRsecond.Withoutsatellites,anAustraliancouldneverbeableto,saR,takeadaRoff,beac ouchpotato,watchafootballgameontheoppositesideoftheplanet.Withsatellites,neverwillaChineseprofessortravelbRairtoana cademicmeetinginAmerica,andstillstepoutoftheplanewithatremblinghand.无老师优秀翻译：我支持空间技术的另外一个原因是：他不仅未来对于地球的定居者有好处，而且今天也是，在每一小时，每一分，甚至每一秒。

没有卫星，一个澳大利亚人根本就不可能放一天假，看一整天电视，在地球的另一端看足球比赛。

有了卫星的帮助，一个中国教授就不用再飞去美国参加学术会议，带着（因为劳累）而颤抖的双走走出机舱了。

无老师精析：不同的优秀文章，各有各的不同。

本篇的优点就在于句式的丰富多样性，有排比，有倒装，断句的很清爽，让人读起来丝毫没有压力！怎一个爽字了得，而且还有couchpotato这样的地道用语，简直就像是听看一场道地的讲座。

点个赞！首先第一句，优秀范例AnotherreasonwhRIadvocateforspacetechnologRisthatitdoesgoodtodwellersonearthnotonlRinthefuture,butalsotodaR,–att hisverRhour,atthisverRminute,atthisverRsecond.对比平庸范例AnotherreasonwhRIsupportthespacetechnologRisthatitwillnotonlRgoodtothepeopleontheearthinthefuture,butalsotodaR,at eachhour,ateachminute,andateachsecond.优秀范例真的是要星星眼！写的太赞了！首先AnotherreasonwhRIadvocatefor，一气呵成，拿来当模板用！赞~\(≧▽≦)/~！然后第二大亮点是强调句式doesgood！加分！平庸范例就丝毫没有体现出这层意思！第三点用词准确dwellers，特质当地的居民，而不像是平庸范例的people那么泛泛。