定语从句在写作中的运用(教师版)教学内容

定语从句在写作中的运用1.contradiction n. Saying sth that conflicts with sth said or written by sb;disagreement反驳；矛盾2.obstacle n. Thing which stands in the way and prevents progress 障碍；阻碍3.approval n. Showing or saying that one thinks sth is good or acceptable or satisfactory赞成；承认4.revelation n. Making known sth that was secret or hidden;revealing 启示；揭示5.critic n. Person who evaluates and describes the quality of sth,esp works ofart,literature,music,etc 批评家；评论家6.sponsor n. Person who agrees to be responsible for sth; person who puts forward apreposal;sports eent, etc,usually in return for advertising 担保人；发起人；赞助者7.merchant n. Person who buys and sells goods in large quantities 商人8.Burglar n. Person who breaks into houses,shops,etc in order to steal 窃贼9.Sequence n. Order in which things or events follow one another 顺序；序列10.Squirrel n. Small tree-climbing animal with long furry tail that eats nuts and also storesthem for the winter 松鼠一、写作中常用的几种定语从句1．关系代词引导的定语从句关系代词who，whom，whose，that，which，as引导的定语从句是写作的一大重点，尤其是which和as引导的非限制性定语从句在高考范文中更是屡见不鲜。

Actually, we can't succeed in everything that we try. (2014·福建高考满分作文)A sailor who has experienced no storm will never become an excellent sailor.(2013·福建高考满分作文)没经历过暴风雨的水手永远不会成为一名优秀的水手。

I am deeply impressed by the great changes that have taken place in the school over the past three years (2011·福建高考满分作文).Everyone of you is expected to be part of the event which encourages creative minds and gives full play to your DIY skills. (2014·辽宁高考满分作文)I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car, which drove off quickly. (2014·湖北高考满分作文)People can enjoy the moon while eating mooncakes, which are the special food for this festival.(2013·辽宁高考满分作文)人们可以一边吃月饼一边赏月，月饼是这个节日的特殊食品。

2．关系副词引导的定语从句关系副词引导的定语从句是指when，where，why引导的定语从句。

The reason why people celebrate the festival is that they believe it is the time when the moon is at its fullest and brightest in the whole year, and people will gather together eating mooncakes and appreciating the full moon.(2013·辽宁高考满分作文)人们庆祝这个节日的原因是，他们相信这时候是一年中月亮最满、最亮的时候，人们聚在一起吃月饼、赏满月。

3．“介词＋which/whom”引导的定语从句Years of school life have taught me a lot of things, of which what strikes me most is that we should take care not to hurt others with our words, deliberately or by accident.(2013·湖北高考满分作文)多年的校园生活教会了我很多东西，其中使我印象最深的是我们应该尽量不要用言语伤害别人，无论是故意还是无意。

[即时演练]用适当的关系词填空1．Those who do simple and ordinary jobs are also promoting the development of the society.(2013·广东高考满分作文)2．As we all know, cleaning streets is one of the hardest work.(2013·广东高考满分作文) 3．Everyone of you is expected to be part of the event which encourages creative minds and gives full play to your DIY skills. (2014·辽宁高考满分作文)4．The truth is ereryone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don’t have to worry so much. (2014·安徽高考满分作文)5．She was educated at Beijing University, after which she went to have her advanced study abroad.二、定语从句的写法定语从句是比较难掌握而又是学生在写作中喜欢尝试的复杂句，因此在写作时可采用“三步法”：第一步：写出两个简单句。

第二步：在一个简单句中找出一个要修饰的词汇，这个词在两个简单句中都有。

第三步：把另一个简单句改成定语从句，要特别注意引导词的选择。

[示例]第一步：写出两个简单句。

①The foreigner is from Canada.②He visited our class yesterday.第二步：在句①中找出一个要修饰的词汇：the foreigner。

第三步：用句②充当定语从句，the foreigner为先行词指人，句②中的代词he指代the foreigner且在句子中作主语，故用who或that作引导词。

The foreigner who/that visited our class yesterday is from Canada.[即时演练]把下列每组题中的两个简单句合并为一个含有定语从句的复合句1．I've always longed for the days. I will be able to be independent then.I've_always_longed_for_the_days_when_I_will_be_able_to_be_independent.2．I have a friend. Her father is an engineer.I_have_a_friend_whose_father_is_an_engineer.3．They planted the trees. The trees didn't need much water.They_planted_the_trees_that/which_didn't_need_much_water.4．This is the best method. It can be used against pollution.This_is_the_best_method_that_can_be_used_against_pollution.5．They sent the elderly some fruits, cleaned the rooms and had a good chat with them. The elderly always feel lonely.They_sent_some_fruits_to_the_elderly_who_always_feel_lonely,_cleaned_the_rooms_and_ had_a_good_chat_with_them.三、定语从句写作的几点注意事项1．误用关系词误：I live in Beijing, where is the capital of China.正：I live in Beijing, which is the capital of China.误：I have a friend, who's name is Liu Mei.正：I have a friend, whose name is Liu Mei.2．句子残缺误：There were many students took part in the English competition.正：There were many students who took part in the English competition.误：Those who in favor of the proposal, please raise your hands.正：Those who are in favor of the proposal, please raise your hands.3．有多余词误：The film I saw it last night was really very good.正：The film I saw last night was really very good.误：Last week, I returned to the village where I grew up there in my childhood.正：Last week, I returned to the village where I grew up in my childhood.4．定语从句与并列句的混淆误：In fact, smoking is a bad habit, it does great harm to people's health.正：In fact, smoking is a bad habit, which/and it does great harm to people's health.误：His parents told him many times not to play beside the river, it didn't help.正：His parents told him many times not to play beside the river, which/but it didn't help.[即时演练]单句改错1．Those have work experience can find a job easily.________________答案：Those后加who2．Some songs remind us of the people which we love.________________答案：which→ who(m)3．This is the factory we visited it last year.________________答案：去掉it4．She has been a teacher for 30 years in the place where used to be a poor area.________________答案：where→ which/that5．As a child, Jack studied in a village school, it is named after his grandfather.________________答案：it→ which或在it前加and[综合演练提升]I.用定语从句翻译短语1.一个叫做Tom的男孩_____________________2.教我们英语的老师_____________________3.昨天我妈妈给我的钱_________________________4.矗立在河边的楼房______________________________5.一位皮包被偷了的女士_________________________________6.我们在农场工作的开心日子__________________________________7.她工作的地方______________________8.她没有交作业的原因____________________________总结：定语从句可以修饰主句的不同成分—主语，宾语，表语非限制性定语从句，有时可以修饰整个主句。