2011书面表达三(研究性学习)

要点4 : 建议与感想与体会 这部分是半开放型作文的重要部分，切忌不可遗漏。 “建议”重点放在提出解决问题的方法。 “感想与体会”重点放在通过这次活动，自己的收 获方面。例如：建议：
call on people to be aware of how serious the situation is raise people’s awareness of the environmental protection take measures/take action to stop this phenomenon
Step 1 List the key points 要点1：研究主题丰富多彩，选择性强
various subjects a wide range of subjects a variety of subjects The subjects of the research are colorful for us to choose from. The subjects of the research range from…to…
第三段：
Through our research，not only did we gain practical experience。 but also we developed various abilities．We find such research very valuable and helpful．
With the development of the economy, our mother river is at risk. So our group carried out a research on this problem. What we found out is that not only the dirty water produced from the factories as well as our daily lives but also the agricultural chemicals lead to a even more severe pollution, which may in turn do harm to our health. So it is high time that we took measures to deal with the pollution. The key to protecting our mother river lies in many details of our daily life. Only when we pay attention to this that can our mother river take on a clear and beautiful look.
• The research shows that not only the dirty water produced from the factories as well as our daily lives but also the agricultural chemicals lead to even more severe pollution. • We find that there are three major sources that have caused the water pollution, namely the waste water from factory, the dirty polluted water from our life and the agricultural chemical leftover.
The processes don’t always work out as planned. As long as we’re determined to finish the work perfectly, we’ll finally accomplish the goal.
One possible version 第一段：
要点2: 当地风俗习惯、人民生活变化、环境 保护 local customs changes of people’s life /changes of people’s living conditions environmental protection /the protection of the environment
第二段：
Last term our group made a study of the pollution in a river in my hometown．The river used to be clean, but now it is dirty and the water gives off a terrible smell．Our research shows that the river is mainly polluted by the waste water from the factories．Waste water from people’s daily life and agricultural chemicals also lead to the pollution of the river．To deal with the problem, we call on people to be aware of how serious the situation is and do something about it．
We find that the waste water from the factories, waste water from people’s daily life and agris are the three major causes which lead to / contribute to the water pollution.
Nowadays we are required to do research work apart from the lessons we learn in school. We are very interested in this kind of activity.We have a variety of subjects to choose from，such as local customs,changes of people's living conditions，and protection of the environment．
书面表达三（限时训练五）
某英语报向中学生征集关于开展研究性学习的文章，请 你根据提示，用英语写一篇介绍你校研究性学习活动的 短文。 研究主题 丰富多彩，选择性强，如 当地风俗习惯、人民生活 变化、环境保护等。 你们小组的研究课题 1.你家乡河流的污染问题； 2.三大污染源：工厂废水, 生活污水、农民使用的农 药； 3.建议
要点 2：我们小组的研究主题是家乡河流的 污染问题。
The research of my group was the pollution of the water in our hometown.
Our group made a study of the water pollution in our hometown.
感想与体会
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存在问题： 1. 书写较差，卷面不整洁，涂改较多。 2. 部分同学遗漏要点(主要是感想与体 会部分）。 3. 拼写错误严重。 local costome choice the subject 4. 中式英语、牵强拼凑的表达较多，不会套用句型，逐 词翻译。 life wasted water > waste water from daily life water was pulled into river…> water was poured into river water emission > water discharged from… Farmer use agricultural chemicals is the 3rd reason caused pollution. > The 3rd reason is pollution caused by frequent use of agricultural chemicals
要点 3 你家乡的河流的污染问题
the water pollution in our hometown the polluted river in our hometown
要点 4 工厂废水、生活污水、农民使用的农药
waste water from the factories waste water from people’s daily life agricultural chemicals
reduce the use of agricultural chemicals and try to limit the pollution of drinking water …
感想与体会: gain/ build up practical experience improve/ develop our ability to cooperate with others
Step2 Make sentences 要点1 我们的研究主题丰富多彩，选择性强，如当 地风俗习惯、人民生活变化、环境保护等。 We have a variety of subjects to choose from, such as local customs , changes of people’s life, protection of the environment and so on.(注意from不可被省略；such as 与 前半句用逗号隔开,不能用for example ） There are many kinds of research for us to choose from , such as… So colorful are the research subjects that your choice can range from local customs , changes of people’s life to the protection of the environment.
Version 2 Nowadays we are required to do research work apart from the lessons we learn in school．We are very interested in this kind of activity．So colorful is the research subjects that your choice can range from local customs, changes of people’s lives or environmental protection.
Our group carried out a research on the water pollution in our hometown.
要点3 三大污染源是河流污染的主要来源。它们 是工厂废水、生活污水、农民使用的农药。 Our research shows that the river is mainly polluted by the waste water from the factories, waste water from people’s daily life and the use of agricultural chemicals without limitation from farmers.