高中英语The appreciaton of Basic Writing -2013广东高考优秀微课课件

Underline
the linking parts which
make the whole passage Coherent(连贯).(at least 4) ① ② By 2015，around thirty people from all over the world will be chosen to go to the Mars. To meet _________ the requirements,④ ③⑤ the volunteers should be ___________ 18 years old at least, ready to get along well with others and never return to the _________________ earth. When it comes to the views of some experts, __________________ ⑦ ⑥ they think that the life on the Mars is very tough because the ________ volunteers have to face the severely cold weather, loneliness and fear.⑧ However, getting tired of ⑨ ________ living on the earth, the volunteers have been looking forward to experiencing the life on the _ Mars. ⑩ If they fortunately succeed in surviving on the Mars, they will undoubtedly be regarded as the heroes of human beings.
Language(语言)
Coherence(连贯)
2013年高考： 基础写作（共1小题；满分15分） 你接受了一项写作任务，要为英语校报写一篇时事快讯。 [写作内容] 请根据以下信息，写一篇关于移民火星的快讯 ① 志愿者的选拔 ②到2015年，在全球选出约30名去火星的志愿者。 志愿者的条件 至少18岁； ④做好不回地球的准备； ⑤愿与他人保 ③ 持良好的关系。 专家观点 ⑦ ⑥ 火星生活条件太艰苦； 面临严寒气候、孤独和恐惧。 志愿者观点 厌倦地球生活， 体验火星生活； 如果成功，就成 ⑩ ⑧ 为人类英雄。 ⑨ 火星： the Mars
Analyze and match
△participle
1. will be chosen\selected
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2. should be…and never return… 3. think that… because…
4.（getting） tired of…
5. If…
used as adverbial(分词作状语) △ passive voice （被动语态） △ Simple sentence （简单句） △ object Clause （宾语从句） △adverbial Clause （状语从句）
succeed in doing sth
do sth successfully be successful
成功
manage to do become
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The Appreciation of Basic Writing-2013广东高考
深圳市光明新区高级中学 牟速超
Criteria
基础写作的评分标准
Criteria
Content(内容)
Marks （15） 5 4 3 2 1
(是否包括所有提示要点，是否用5 句话表达全文) 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0 (词汇和句子结构是否正确、得当 ) 2 1 0 (语篇是否连贯，是否用恰当的连 词，副词，短语等来衔接)
polish
志愿者观点 厌倦地球生活，想体验火星生活；
5.have a thirst to
6.long to 1.look forward to 4. be eager to
want
3.have a passion for
2. be enthusiastic\passionate about
如果(志愿者)成功(住在火星上)，就成为人类英雄。
Read and think
① ② By 2015，around thirty people from all over the world will be chosen to go to the Mars. To meet the requirements,④ ③⑤ the volunteers should be 18 years old at least, ready to get along well with others and never return to the earth. When it comes to the views of some experts, ⑦ ⑥ they think that the life on the Mars is very tough because the volunteers have to face the severely cold weather, loneliness and fear.⑧ However, getting tired of ⑨ living on the earth, the volunteers have been looking forward to experiencing the life on the Mars. ⑩ If they fortunately succeed in surviving on the Mars, they will undoubtedly be regarded as the heroes of human beings.