英语：英语书面表达知识点归纳 及答案

英语：英语书面表达知识点归纳及答案
一、英语书面表达
1．书面表达
“小手拉大手,同做文明人。

”自创建文明城市文明乡村以来,淄博人民万众一心,众志成城,让人点赞的行为随处可见。

作为中学生,我们也做出了自己的努力。

请根据以下所给要点,写一篇 100 词左右的英语短文。

1.种植花草树木；
2.遵守交通规则；
3.公共场合不大声喧哗；
4.公交车上主动给有需要的人让座；（自主发挥,至少两点）
参考词汇: civilized 文明的 make joint efforts 共同努力 obey 遵守
2．根据要求完成大作文，词数：80-100词．
丰富的校本课程可以让你的生活更精彩．请根据下列图示中所提供的特色课程，按内容及要求，用英文完成写作．
内容包括：
1．Which course（s）do you like？
2．Why do you like it/them？
3．What can you learn from it/them？
写作要求：
1．依据你的兴趣选择课程（数量不限）；
2．短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3．文中不得出现真实的校名及姓名．
Of all the courses，I like __________
________________．
3．请根据表格内Zhang Ying的一些表现的提示用英语写一篇短文，把她介绍给你的外国朋友Mary。

要求：1、语言要通顺，表达要正确。

2、文章要求包含表格中的所有提示。

3、词数不少于60个英语单词。

4、文章开头结尾已给出，不计入词数。

4．书面表达。

76.某英语教育网站正在开展主题为“How can a teenager have a successful life?”的讨论，为此你采访了一些同学（结果见下表）。

请据上经用英语写一篇短文参与讨论，并阐述你的观点。

注意：（1）短文必须包括表中所有内容，可适当增加细节；
（2）你的观点至少两条；
（3）词数：80—100；
（4）短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：尊重respect
短文首句：I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life. 5．现在智能手机（smartphone）越来越普及，很多中学生都有智能手机。

请你根据下面的提示，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文，谈一谈你对智能手机的看法，可适当发挥。

提示：1、在生活中你用智能手机做什么？
2、智能手机对你的生活产生了怎样的影响？
3、你对中学生使用智能手机有什么看法？
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________
6．写作
81. 春天，许多人都喜欢参加各种户外活动。

为了倡导中学生接近大自然，某中学生英文报举办了一次征文活动，请你根据以下问题，用英语写一篇短文参加征文。

提示：1）What’s the benefit （好处） of outdoor activities? （1-2 opinions）
2）Which is your favourite outdoor activity? How and why? （1-2 examples）
3）What do we need to pay attention to when we do outdoor activities? （At least 1 suggestion）
要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；
3）词数：100词左右，开头已给出，不计入词数；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。

It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s great to get close to nature.
7．书面表达
假如你是李华，你们学校正在进行课堂教学改革，经过一段时间的适应，同学们发现现在的课堂跟以前比较发生了一些变化，请你根据所给提示以“The Changes in Class”为题目，用英语写一篇100词左右的文章，谈谈你的感受和想法，开头和结尾已给出（不计入总词数）。

要求：1.短文应行文连贯、条理清晰、段落分明、书写工整；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名等信息；
3.文章必须包括所提供的全部主要信息，并作适当发挥。

The Changes in Class
Thanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study in
class.___________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________
8．人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。

请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文，介绍人们不同的观点，并表达自己的看法。

赞成的理由反对的理由你的看法
1. 广交朋友
2. 可自由表达思想
3. 有利于外语学习1. 浪费时间
2. 影响学习
3. 可能上当受骗（be cheated）
1. ...
2. ...
注意：1. 所写内容必须包括表中各方观点并进行合理拓展。

2. 词数80词左右，短文的开头已给出（不计入总词数）。

Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some people
think___________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________
9．写作
某英文网站的“ Student Life”栏目正在向中学生征文，标题为“ A time when I made someone happy”，请你写一篇英文稿件，内容需包括以下要点:
1. Who was the person you made happy?
2. When was it?
3. What did you say or do?
4. Why did it make him/her happy?
5. How did you feel at that moment?
注意：1．词数：100左右（题目不计入总词数）。

2.文中不得出现可能透考生真实身份的任何信息。

10．诚信是中华民族的传统美德，也是社会主义核心价值观内容之一。

而你的朋友Daming最近却被诚信危机所困扰。

上周末，他本来和Lingling相约一起去电影院看电影，但是他却因为在家复习考试，把这件事忘了，直到第二天才想起来。

因此，Lingling很生气，并且不愿接受Daming的道歉。

请你就此事给校报投稿，以“The Importance of Promise”为题，内容要点如下：
1、简述事件；
2、谈谈自己的看法，并给Daming一些建议。

注意：
1、词数80—100；
2、行文连贯，逻辑合理；
3、文中不能出现真实的校名和人名；
4、文章的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

The Importance of Promise
Dear editor,
People always emphasize（强调） the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.
Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it.
Yours,
Tony 11．如今，很多城市出现了一种绿色出行方式――共享单车（bike-sharing），它因环保、便捷而备受青睐，但同时也引发了一些问题。

请你根据提示以＂Bike-sharing＂为题写一篇英语短文，表达自己的看法和建议。

要点提示：
注意：
1. 短文应包括以上要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地名；
3. 词数：80-100（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。

Bike-sharing
Today, as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities.
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ 12．书面表达
随着电子时代的到来，西方文化如潮水般涌来，中国传统文化的传承面临着巨大的挑战。

有人认为学校应当开设传统文化课（set up traditional culture classes），但也有人认为没有必要。

假如你是Mike,请你用英语写一封邮件，给你校英文报投稿写一篇短文，词数80左右，谈谈你对开设传统文化课的看法。

Dear editor,
As we all know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development if international technology nowadays. _____________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _____________
Yours,
Mike
13．书面表达
初三的学习生活繁忙中有困惑、泪水，也有进步、喜悦。

请根据表格提示，写一篇题为“Our school life in Grade Nine”的短文，介绍九年级的学校生活，并提出希望和建议。

要求：
1．所写内容必须包括以上表格提供的所有信息，并适当发挥：
2．文章不少于90词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3．语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
4．文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。

Our school life in Grade Nine
It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.
14．书面表达
社会需要爱，时代呼唤爱。

对善行、对爱心的感动，存在于每个人的心中。

但很多人缺乏的不是感动，而是一种显示感动的勇气。

请为你身边的人或事点赞，让“点赞”成为传递正能量的一种行动吧！是什么行为让你点赞？讲述一件你点赞的事情。

你从他/她身上可以学到什么？让我们一起分享吧！请根据以下提示要点，写一篇文章。

注意：1．词数：80左右；2．不要出现真实的人名及校名。

Make a list of the persons that you should give a “like” button
Tell u s one of the experiences that you clicked a “like” button
What could you learn from him/her?
15．最近一份学生体质健康调查结果显示，学生近视率仍维持在高位水平，且越来越低龄化。

请根据下表所提示的内容，用英语写一篇短文，并发表自己的观点。

参考词汇：近视的 shortsighted
要求：
（1）词数：80～100个。

（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。

（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present, _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________
16．书面表达
假定你是李华，最近你们班就低碳生活方式进行了讨论，你的英国朋友Peppa向你来信
询问讨论情况。

请你用英语写封回信，简单介绍以下讨论结果：
1．节水节电． 2．垃圾分类 3．少用纸巾，重拾手帕
4．步行、骑自行车或公交出行、
参考词汇：low carbon低碳；tissue纸巾
词数：100词左右。

开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Peppa,
Thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on low-carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it．
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua
17．书面表达
假设你是某英文报纸“Teenagers”栏目的编辑Betty，日前收到了Lucy的来信。

她在信中诉说了她的烦恼，请你根据Lucy的来信，用英语写一封90词左右的回信。

要求内容合理,信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Lucy,
I’m sorry to know that you aren’t allowed to read eBooks.
_______________________________________
All the best!
Betty
18．书面表达
地球是我们的家园，我们作为地球的主人，就应该好好保护地球。

现在正在倡导“低碳”生活，只要我们不污染地球的环境，不浪费地球的能源，就能够让我们的周围变得更绿，生活变得更美好。

作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢？谈谈你的想法。

内容应该包括以下几点：
1. 节约用水、用电；
2. 节约纸张，循环使用旧课本，保护森林；
3. 节约粮食，在更多的土地上种树；
4. 不乱丢杂物，保护环境；
要求：短文中不得出现真实的校名和人名；80词左右
提示词：the greenhouse gases lifestyle 低碳生活方式
How does our earth turn better?
The earth is our home. _______________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________ If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we are living will be better and better. 19．亲爱的同学们，初中生活即将结束，你们一定有很多的感触.假如你是Tony,名城中学九（1）班的学生。

请以 My junior high school life为题,写一篇80词左右的短文。

提示：
1.个人基本情况介绍
2.校园（校园干净而美丽，活动非富多彩）；老师（传授知识，教会做人,经常鼓励）；同学（和睦相处，互相学习，共同进步）。

3.对学校、老师、同学表达感谢和祝福。

要求：
1. 文章包含以上提示内容，适当发挥。

2.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名。

20．临近毕业，学校在学习小组内开展了初中阶段自评和组评活动，假设你是 Moonlight 小组的组长，请根据下面表格中的信息和提示，为你的组员 Tommy 进行综合素质的评价，写一份素质报告．
要求：1、表达清楚、语法正确、上下文连贯；2、要点必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；3、词数：100 词左右；4、不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等
Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight.
【参考答案】***试卷处理标记，请不要删除
一、英语书面表达
1．A
解析：Since creating the civilized city and countryside, all the people in Zibo have made joint efforts（共同努力）. Their good behavior can be seen everywhere.
As junior students, we have also made some contributions to the civilized Zibo. For
example, to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees. Also, for our own and others’ safety, we obey the traffic rules and never run red light. In addition（此外）, we no longer talk or laugh loudly in public.What's more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need.
Besides, we have formed a good habit of throwing rubbish into a dustbin, never littering anywhere. Furthermore（而且）, we are accustomed to （习惯于）queuing up （排队） for a ticket or something else. All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more civilized
【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

文中使用了非常好的短语，例如make joint efforts，as junior students，for example，obey the traffic rules，run red light，in addition，no longer，in public，and so on，what's more，on a bus，in need，be accustomed to，queue up，all in all等。

而to protect our environment, we plant flowers and
trees./ What's more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need./ All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more civilized.等插入语的运用，丰富了短文内容，使语言表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。

点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

2．A
解析：例文
Of all the courses, I like sports best because I am interested in playing basketball. I can make a lot of friends when I play basketball. And I will learn the spirit of teamwork. So I want to choose sports.
I also like paper cutting because it is very interesting and I can learn more about traditional Chinese culture. That’s why I want to choose paper cutting.
I often help my parents with housework when I am free. So I want to learn how to cook delicious food. I think it is very useful course because I’d like to cook something dif ferent for my parents.
I believe these courses will make my life more colorful.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读。

本题属于材料作文，主要讲述你喜欢的学科、原因以及你从你选择的学科中学到了什么。

注意时态的运用，灵活运用所学单词、短语和句型。

切记不要遗漏要点。

2.例文点评：这是一篇优秀的文章，很好地完成了试题中所规定的内容。

条理清晰。

前三段分别讲述他所喜欢的学科（体育、剪纸和厨艺），并解释愿意以及收获，最后一段讲述这些学科对他的生活的意义。

3.高分亮点：
单词短语：like...best, be interested in, make friends, the spirit of teamwork, want to do, help sb do, be free, would like to do, make sth adj以及形容词修饰复合不定代词时，形容词放后面。

高分句型：That’s why I want to choose paper cutting中why引导的表语从句。

【点睛】
首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如like...best, be interested in, make friends, the spirit of teamwork, want to do, help sb do, be free, would like to do, make sth adj以及形容词修饰复合不定代词时，形容词放后面等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

3．D
解析：One possible version
Dear Mary,
I’m very glad to introduce（介绍） my classmate Zhang Ying to you. She is a 14-year-old girl. She has a lot of good habits. She gets up early every morning. In class she likes to ask her teachers some questions. After school she always exercises （for a long time）. After supper she helps her parents with housework. （She is really a good girl. ）But she has some bad habits, too. She often eats junk food for breakfast. Sometimes she quarrels with her classmates in class. She doesn’t go home on time and she always watches TV or plays computer games for more than an hour in the evening. （This makes her parents unhappy. ）I think Zhang Ying is a very good girl. Do you think so?
Yours
Huang Deshun
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，题目中给出的材料较为齐全。

写作中注意将张颖的情况介绍清楚。

根据材料可知，本文主要用一般现在时态，第三人称进行叙述，写作中主语时态及主谓一致等问题。

注意不要遗漏要点，做到语句通顺。

为了使意思更加连贯可适当使用连接词。

【亮点说明】本文在写作中使用了很多固定句式，如：be glad to do sth高兴做某事；a lot of许多；get up起床等。

本文中时间词如After supper，Sometimes，in the evening等的巧
妙使用，使得本文看起来逻辑清楚，条理分明。

在学习中，我们应注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.
考点：考查提纲类作文
4．A
解析：I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life.
Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. Aft er all, study plays a key role in their life. They also agree they should respect their parents, who look after them every day. Besides, they’re ready to serve the society and in their opinion it’s really meaningful. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for future.
From my point of view, we need to make some good friends so that we can learn from each other. Also, we must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful life.
【解析】
试题分析：英语教育网站开展主题为“How can a teenager have a successful life?”的讨论，采访了一些同学参与讨论，写出他们的观点及自己的观点。

因为是叙述同学的现在的观点，所以句子应该用一般现在时，叙述同学的观点用第三人称，叙述自己的观点用第一人称。

注意不要遗漏要点，所写的句子应该符合英语语法，不能是汉语式的句子，要使用一些高级词汇及句式。

写作亮点：短文用了一些短语和句式，如：do a survey about sth关于某事做调查；respect their parents,尊敬他们的父母；look after照顾；make a good plan for sth为某事做一个好的计划；make some good friends交一些好朋友；keep healthy保持健康。

用了宾语从句，
如：Most students believe it’s necessary to study hard. What’s more, they think each teenager is supposed to make a good plan for future.用了because引导的原因状语从句，如：Also, we
must be active and exercise more to keep healthy because it’s important to a successful life.增加了文章的亮点，也是提分的经典句子。

考点：材料作文。

5．E
解析：例文：The smartphone is becoming more and more popular nowadays .I also have a smartphone .I usually use it to send text messages, play games,watch videos, listen to music and learn English .It is very useful and convenient. In fact,the smartphone makes my life colorful. However ,every coin has two sides.Sometimes I spend too much time playing games on the smartphone and get bad results in exams.
So I think we students should use our smartphones properly and don’t use them too much .We should pay more attention to our studies.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇给材料作文，要求根据内容提示，写一篇英语短文，谈一谈你对智能手机的看法。

文章时态主要用一般现在时，人称主要用第一、第三人称。

首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。

在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。

同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。

最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。

6．C
解析：It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s a good way to get close to nature.
When we are outdoors and in the natural world, we can not only breathe fresh air and enjoy the beautiful scene, but also relax ourselves for the coming study or work.
There are many different ways we can get out into the natural world, such as hiking, cycling, camping and climbing. Cycling is my favourite. I join a cycling club, and often go out with other members. While cycling, we can forget our worries and have fun together. Also, we can learn to be a part of a team and help each other.
Whatever you do, remember to stay safe. When you’re outside, it’s better to be with your parents or friends.
【解析】
试题分析：本篇书面表达以“outdoor activities”为话题，结合所给的写作材料，写一篇报刊征文稿。

根据内容提示可知本文会使用到一般现在时态，注意一些常见句式的应用。

写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后最好要表达出人物的感想和看法。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练、要点齐全。

文中in the natural world, not only…but also, get out, such as, also等词（组）的恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；本文还采用了丰富的句型，比如：It is +形容词+（for sb.） to do sth.；There be句型；时间状语从句等复合
句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，这是一篇不错的范文。

7．C
解析： The Changes in Class
Thanks for giving us students a chance to express ourselves about how we study in class. I like the class like this.I think it is very interesting and lively. We can tell stories, play games and listen to music.
I think it is open and free. We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this class. The changes in Class are good for us.【解析】
【详解】
假如你是李华，你们学校正在进行课堂教学改革，经过一段时间的适应，同学们发现现在的课堂跟以前比较发生了一些变化，请你根据所给提示以“The Changes in Class”为题目，用英语写一篇100词左右的文章，谈谈你的感受和想法，开头和结尾已给出（不计入总词数）。

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为单数第一人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。

写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

【点睛】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练文中运用了一些好的句型：We can study and think by ourselves .We can discuss in groups and show ourselves. We can get more knowledge in this class.等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

8．C
解析：Nowadays many teenagers show great interest in making friends online. Some people think students should make friends on line? Some people say yes. The internet helps make many friends. Chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies. But others think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line.
It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.
【解析】
【分析】
整体分析：这是一篇提纲话题作文。

是一篇议论文，第一段要写赞同学生网上交友的人的观点，第二段要写反对学生网上交友的观点，第三段要表述作者自己的观点。

【详解】
本篇作文要求作者就上网交友发表意见，写作之前要认真阅读所给提示，确定文章中心。

注意文体、人称和时态。

文章要有层次、流畅。

可以适当发挥，写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文的紧密联系，要符合逻辑关系。

【点睛】
这类作文的写作方法要注意认真审题，可以分三段写：赞成；反对；你的看法。

注意过渡
性语言的使用。

做到：要点要全，表达要清晰明确，使用短语，句型要准确，注意避免拼写和语法错误。

9．E
解析：Last summer,though it was hot,I volunteered to teach children English in rural area.When I arrived there,I couldn't adjust to the weather and life style.However,as time went by,I found myself quite happy when I saw the students I was teaching made great progress.In order to teach them,I had to keep on learning as well.As a result,my English improved a lot.Also,I made friends with some of my students.We are still keeping in touch by letter now.
In a word,not only did I help those in need,but also I myself learn a lot that summer.If I have another chance to do volunteer work,I am ready to go.
【解析】写作分析：这是一篇给定标题的材料作文，需要逐条完成要点问题的回答，描述一次自己让别人开心快乐的经历，是一篇记叙文，首先要读懂5个问题，其次要用恰当的语言和衔接手段把这五个问题的回答联系在一起，变成一篇短文，同时也要注意在描述过去的故事的时候要正确运用过去时态。

写作亮点：既然这是一篇记叙文，就应该完整地呈现故事，需要加上必要的背景，指明时间（Last summer），地点（in rural area），简要概括事件（teach children English），这是文章首句的点睛之笔，信息量丰富。

短语和固定搭配的正确使用也为这篇文章增色不少，例如“adjust to…”（调整以适应…），“as time went by”（随着时间的流逝），“made great progress”（取得巨大进步），“keep on learning”（继续学习），“In a word”（总而言之）等等短语使用正确。

在收尾部分表达了作者积极的人生态度，表示如果还有机会自己还乐于参与，这样使得这篇文章结构完整，表意更加清晰。

10．D
解析：The Importance of Promise
Dear editor,
People always emphasize（强调）the importance of the promise, and they hate people who break their promise.
Recently, a thing happened to my friend, and I think it was really his fault. Last weekend, my friend Daming had a date with his friend Lingling to watch a movie. But he totally forgot it that day because of his review for his exam. So Lingling got too angry to forgive him. In my opinion, it was really his fault. Forgetting the date not only led to Lingling’s anger, but also made her lose trust in him. Keeping promises is always the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. What Daming should do now is to ask for forgiveness and promise that he will never do that again. Promise is very important. Everyone should keep it.
Yours,
Tony 【解析】
【分析】
本文为一篇稿件，需要学生通过大明和玲玲之间，大明没有信守承诺的事情，谈自己的看法。

信守承诺是中华民族的传统美德，在写作过程中，注意文章结构，先写出大明和玲玲之间的事情，然后再说自己对此的看法。

【详解】
首先，第一句话直接点明作者的观点，大明是犯错了的。

然后仔细阐述了事情发生的经过。

接下来说出自己对此事件的看法，不信守承诺会导致失去别人的信任，对大明的建议是除了认错之外，还需要再次保证永不再犯。

【点睛】
文章结构清晰，符合逻辑，先表明自己观点，然后阐述事情，提出自己的观点和建议。

整篇文章在谋篇布局上，比较严密。

除此之外，中间也使用了一些连接词，例如but，so，because of等，使文章更加通顺。

11．F
解析：Today,as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities. It's known that it has many advantages. So it's enjoyed by lots of people. First of all, it's very convenient for people to go somewhere.【高分句型一】Also, it helps to reduce the traffic pressure. There will be less pollution because of bike-sharing. Besides, bike-sharing helps people take more exercise.In this way, it's helpful to people's health.（优势）However, it also brings some problems. For example, some people throw them away after using bikes. Even some people damage them, and some bikes are stolen.（难题）
In my opinion, everyone should try to be civilized and follow the rules of using bikes. As long as we take good care of bikes, it will make our life better and better,and our environment will be more beautiful.【高分句型二】（建议）
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文内容丰富，表达了所有要点，语言表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。

在短文中使用了大量的复合句、固定句式、连词及固定短语，为文章增色不少，.如: It's known that it has many advantages.，First of all, it's very convenient for people to go somewhere.，Also, Besides, In this way, However, it also brings some problems. For example, In my opinion,等。

【点睛】
本文要求以“Bike-sharing”为题，根据表格的内容提示，写一篇短文，表达自己对共享单车的看法和建议。

写作时，考生要紧密贴合表格中的三个要点：首先，阐述共享单车的优点；其次，列举共享单车带来的问题；最后，根据问题给出个人建议。

12．D
解析：Dear editor,
As we know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development of international technology nowadays. In my opinion, it’s necessary for schools to set up traditional culture classes.
First, traditional culture is the root of Chinese. As Chi nese, we shouldn’t give up our traditional culture and run after Western culture. Second, traditional culture classes can give students chances to know more about our nation. They can raise their sense of national pride. Last but not least, setting up traditional culture classes can spread and develop our Chinese culture.
All in all, it is of great importance to set up traditional culture classes in schools. Let’s call on more schools to set up traditional culture classes!。