热点时文24 学会感恩 从我做起-备战2023年中考英语热点时文书面表达专项训练(解析版)

热点时文24 学会感恩从我做起
备战2023年中考英语热点时文书面表达专项训练【热点材料】
在人生的成长中，我们或许要懂得内心强大的一个心法，那就是感恩的力量。

感恩实际上是生命中最大的正能量。

一个懂得感恩的人，一定内心会变得越来越强大，因为感恩会带给我们生命充足的发现，也会重塑我们的资源，让我们拥抱生活的美好。

感恩能够给予我们生命最大的滋养。

一个善于感恩的人，会看到内在生命的富足。

一个喜乐的人会感谢生命中所有经历的一切。

感恩会让我们从生命的更高系统来看待自我的人生，当我们明白生命就是一场伟大的奇迹，你会发现活着每天都是最美好的，无论我们经历什么，我们都需要体会到生命的美好。

感恩能够打破语言的狭隘，放下对自我的批判，而是全然看到道在我们生命中的运行，体会到生老病死这一切的发生，觉悟到生命的高贵，更深刻体会到人类生生不息的创造力。

【典型范文】
假如你是李华，你们学校就“感恩父母，从我做起”这一话题展开讨论。

请你用英语写一篇短文，谈谈为什么要感恩父母，你和父母之间发生的最难忘的事以及你的感受。

提示词语：think，bring up,prepare for，encourage，confident，happy,proud
提示问题：
·Why do you want to thank your parents?
·What was the most unforgettable experience between you and your parents?
·How do you feel?
____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
I think it’s important for us to thank our parents. Since I was born, my parents have given me all their love and care, but never expect anything in return. They have brought me up and taken good care of me carefully and patiently.
Last year, I was chosen to take part in a speech competition. I felt very nervous. My parents tried hard to help me prepare for it. They encouraged me to be confident and told me not to care much about the result. They said the process of learning was more meaningful. With their help, I did very well that time. I felt happy and proud.
I’d like to say “Thanks a lot! You’re great! I will love you forever!” to mum and dad.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文主要围绕“感恩父母，从我做起”展开，并根据题干中给出的三个问题进行写作，可适当增加细节。

2.写作指导：本文以第一人称为主，时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。

第一段讲述为什么要感恩父母；第二段讲述自己和父母之间发生的最难忘的事情；第三段讲述自己的感受。

写作时运用不同的句式和短语
使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，无单词拼写和语法错误。

【拓展训练】
A
由贾玲导演及主演的电影《你好，李焕英》是一部充满温情的电影，激发了观影者对身边人感情的共鸣。

你观影之后感触颇多，发现许多感恩的人和事，要就此写一份日志。

要求：
1.上面的提示供参考，可适当发挥，要使语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚；
2.段落开头已给出，不计入总词数；要求写100个词左右。

Today I watched a film called Hi, Mom. It tells a story of Jia and her mother showing her longing and regret at failing to see her mother before she died. I was touched by its raw emotion.
I have become a 15-year-old middle school student. During the past few years,I have gained a lot and I don’t want to be a person full of regret like Jia in the film.
So first, I should say thanks to my dear parents. _________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
Today I watched a film called Hi, Mom. It tells a story of Jia and her mother showing her longing and regret at failing to see her mother before she died. I was touched by its raw emotion.
I have become a 15-year-old middle school student. During the past few years,I have gained a lot and I don’t want to be a person full of regret like Jia in the film.
So first, I should say thanks to my dear parents. They take care of me without any complaint. They work hard to support the whole family. They are always trying their best to make me live a better life.
Second, I’m thankful to all my teachers for their great help and support. They are patient enough to spend lots of time explaining problems to me. Besides, they always encourage me when I am in trouble. It’s selfless of them to devote their time to education.
Finally, I also feel very grateful to my classmates. We work together and share things with each other. We often help each other and learn from each other. As a result, we have made great progress.
I think I am lucky to have so much love and care. I will never forget these happy days together. I am going to do well in the future so that they can be proud of me.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇日志，属于材料作文写作；
①时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
①提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。

[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头，引出话题；
第二步，首先表达要感谢父母，接着按照要点阐述父母如何照顾和关爱我们；其次表达感谢师长，结合具体事例阐述老师们的耐心教导和鼓励；接着再表达对同学的感谢，可结合具体事例阐述同学间的互帮互助、共同成长；
第三步，抒发自己的感情及打算并书写结语。

[亮点词汇]
①take care of me without any complaint毫无怨言地照顾我
①be thankful to sb for sth因某事感激某人
①be in trouble遇到困难
①devote one’s time to sth把某人的时间奉献在某事上
[高分句型]
①Besides, they always encourage me when I am in trouble.（when引导时间状语从句）
①It’s selfless of them to devote their time to education.（it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语）
①I am going to do well in the future so that they can be proud of me.（so that引导目的状语从句）
B
同学们，回想这三年的初中生活，你一定感慨万千。

在初中毕业典礼上，学校将举行“感恩教育仪式”，请你根据以下提示，用英语为该活动写一篇短文，简述这三年来要感恩的人和事，以及你的感想和未来打算。

注意事项：
1. 词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3. 文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。

Saying thanks to you
How time flies! Three years has passed since I came to the secondary school. During the past three years, I have gained a lot and grown a lot. I must say thanks to many people who have helped me.____________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
Saying thanks to you
How time flies! Three years has passed since I came to the secondary school. During the past three years, I have gained a lot and grown a lot. I must say thanks to many people who have helped me.
First, I should say thanks to my dear parents. They provide everything I need for me. They take good care of me without any complaint. They work hard to support the whole family. They are always trying their best to make me live a better life.
Second, I’m thankful to all my teachers for their great help and support. They are patient enough to spends lots of time explaining problems to me. Besides, they always encourage me when I am in trouble. It’s unselfish of them to devote their time to education.
Finally, I also feel grateful to my friends and classmates. We work together and share happiness and worries with each other. We often help each other and learn from each other. As a result, we have made great progress.
I think I’m lucky to have so much love and care. I will never forget these happy days. I am going to do better in the future so that they can be proud of me.
【详解】1. 题干解读：本题是一篇材料作文，根据题干提示，感恩父母、老师、朋友和同学，并谈谈自己未来的打算。

2. 写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主，人称用第一人称和第三人称。

写作时可按照“总分总”的结构，首先点明要感谢那些曾帮助过自己的人，然后分段表达自己对父母、老师、朋友和同学的感激之情，最后进行总结和阐述未来的打算。

注意行文连贯、条理清晰、无拼写和语法错误。

C
假如你是李华，在过去的三年，英语老师教会了你很多英语知识和技能，开拓了你的视野。

你感激英语老师的付出，决定将来继续学好并用好英语。

请你结合以下提示和要求，用英语写一篇短文。

提示：
要求：
1. 文章必须包括所给提示内容，可展开思路，适当发挥；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息；
3. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

I’m Li Hua. My English teacher is ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
I’m Li Hua. My English teacher is Ms. Zhang. She is a tall and outgoing lady who is very patient with all of us.
Ms. Zhang has taught me English for 3 years. I like her interesting classes. Learning English helps me become more open-minded. Now I can talk with others in English fluently and read some English books. I can also tell some stories in English. Besides, enjoying English songs and movies has become one of my hobbies.
Ms. Zhang is an excellent teacher, to whom I want to say thanks. I decide to learn more English in the future, and try my best to tell the story of China in English to the world.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。

根据要点提示，介绍下你的英语老师，描述你所学会的东西，以及感激英语老师的付出，决定将来继续学好并用好英语。

2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主。

人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。

叙述时可适当运用短语句型或从句，使文章出彩有亮点。

写作时确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。

D
在你的成长历程中，有许多值得感恩的人，如父母，老师，同学……他们或帮助过你，或影响到你，你最想感恩谁？请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文。

要点提示：
1. 他/她有什么特点（外貌，性格……）？
2. 他/她对你影响最深的一件事是什么？
3. 你想怎样感谢他/她？
写作要求：
1. 词数90左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 根据要点提示，可以适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。

参考词汇：be grateful to对……心存感激；have an influence on对……有影响；
care about关心；unforgettable难以忘怀的
The Person I Want to Express My Thanks
In my life, many people helped and influenced me a lot. The person I want to express my thanks most is____ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
The Person I Want to Express My Thanks
In my life, many people helped and influenced me a lot. The person I want to express my thanks most is my English teacher Mr. Lee. He is tall and thin. He has short black hair and wears glasses. He is always friendly and patient with us.
When I was in Grade 8, my English was very poor. One day, he asked me to take part in an English speech contest. He said, “Your pronunciation is really good. Try your best. I believe in you”. With the help of Mr. Lee, I got the first prize. My English improved a lot.
Mr. Lee has a great influence on me, I am grateful to him. I will work hard to become better. I think that’s the best gift for my dear teacher.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文主要以“The Person I Want to Express My Thanks”为题并结合题干中的问题进行写作，介绍你最想感谢的人，可适当增加细节。

2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，人称以第二人称和第三人称为主。

第一段介绍自己想感谢的人的特点；第二段讲述他对你影响最深的一件事；第三段讲述你会如何感谢他。

写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。

E
生命中总有一些值得我们感恩的人。

最近，无锡教育电视台将举办题为“The Person I Want to Thank”的英语演讲比赛。

假如你想感谢身边某位对你有影响的人(父/母亲、老师、朋友……)，请根据以下流程图写一篇英文演讲稿参加比赛。

注意事项：
1. 演讲稿须根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 流程图中括号部分为非限定性内容，仅供参考；
3. 词数在100个左右，演讲稿的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；
4. 演讲稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息；
5. 演讲稿必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。

____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】
The Person I Want to Thank
In my junior school life, many people have helped me. I thank them very much. But the person I want to thank most is my English teacher Miss Lee.
Miss Lee is beautiful with long hair. And she is kind. She helps me a lot. She often helps me with my English. When I am in trouble, she always encourages me to face my difficulties and gives me good advice. I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was upset. She cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I made great progress in English and became interested in it. I’m very thankful
for all that she has done for me. She has a great influence on me, and her help is very useful for my future development.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿。

写作时要根据汉语提示的内容，写出最想感谢的人是谁；他/她的外表、性格；举例说明为何感谢他/她；以及对你的影响。

2.写作指导：本文应该以第一人称和第三人称为主来叙述内容；叙述想感谢的人的外表和性格时应用一般现在时，叙述具体的故事时应用一般过去时。

同时写作时注意语句的连贯性，保证词汇和语法的正确使用。