2020-2021年中考英语书面表达综合测试卷

2020-2021年中考英语书面表达综合测试卷
一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）
1.书面表达
Dear Betty f
I like reading eBooks very much. But my parents and teachers are against it. They don 7 alloyv me io read any eBooks. From then on. my iife is not interexling al all. What can I do ? Could you give me some advice ?
lam looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours
Lucy
假设你是某英文报纸“Teenagers〃栏目的编辑Betty,日前收到了Lucy的来信。

她在信中诉
说了她的烦恼，请你根据Lucy的来信，用英语写一封90词左右的回信。

要求内容合理，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Lucy,
I'm sorry to know that you aren/t allowed to read eBooks.
All the best!
Betty
【答案】Dear Lucy,
I’m sorry to know that you aren,t allowed to read eBooks.
In recent years, electronic books, as a product of information technology, have gained more and more popularity. It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits. For one thing, they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. For another, their appearance will make paper-waste less.
However, as every coin has two sides, electronic books also have some disadvantages. For example, long time of reading e-books does harm to our eyes. And there are more radiation which is harmful to people's body.
In my opinion, E-book cannot take the place of traditional book, but it's an useful product. I think that e-books are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading over.
All the best!
Betty
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如in recent years, as a product of, live in, more and more, so...that, for example, do harm to, be harmful to, in my opinion, take the place of, instead of 等。

同时For one thing, / For another,/ However等使短文的叙述很有条理，而It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits./ they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. / And there are more radiation which
is harmful to people's body.
/ I think that e-books are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading ove 等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。

在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

2.书面表达
初三的学习生活繁忙中有困惑、泪水，也有进步、喜悦。

请根据表格提示，写一篇题为“Our school life in Grade Nine〃的短文，介绍九年级的学校生活，并提出希望和建议。

要求：
1.所写内容必须包括以上表格提供的所有信息，并适当发挥：
2.文章不少于90词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3.语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
4.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。

Our school life in Grade Nine
It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.
【答案】Our school life in Grade Nine
It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student. Here is what our school life is like now.
At school, all of our teachers work very hard. Most of them are patient enough to help us with all kinds of problems, whether in our study or in our life. As a result, they won high respect from us. As for students, in class we listen to the teacher carefully and think actively. After class, we are
busy doing our homework. Every student is making efforts to try to achieve our dreams.
At weekends, we usually spend a lot of time doing our homework, too. So we can't afford time for our hobbies any more. I feel a bit stressed actually, so I try to spare some time to play basketball
or turn on my favorite TV program to get relaxed.
No pains, no gains. But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.
【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

文中使用了非常好的短语，例如at school，work hard，most of，patient enough，help sb. with sth.，all kinds of problems，in our life，as a result，as for students，listen to，be busy doing，try to do，spend a lot of time doing，not any more，play basketball 等。

而It is more than half a year since we became a Grade Nine student./ But the more carefully we plan our day, the more colorful our school life will be.等多种特殊比较级句式结构的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。

点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

3.（题文）书面表达
在中学生机器人大赛上，出现了一种专门照顾老人的新型家用智能机器人，它的主要功能有：1.定时做饭、洗衣服；2.陪老人聊天、下棋、做运动；
3.处理紧急情况（如：拨打120）
假如你是该机器人的发明者，请你介绍这个产品，并谈谈你的未来设想。

要求：1.意思连贯，语句通顺；
4.词数80词左右；短文的开头已给出（不计入总词数）
5.参考词汇：at a fixed time 定时
emergency 紧急情况ccompany sb. 陪伴某人Ladies and gentlemen,
Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I,d like to introduce my new invention to all of you. 【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,
Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I,d like to introduce my new invention to all of you. I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. It can cook meals and do some washing at a fixed time. When old people feel alone, it can also accompany them by having a chat, playing chess or doing exercise. What,s more, it can deal with some emergencies. For example, if an old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will call doctors immediately for help.
I,m sure my new invention will be a great help to the elderly. I think in the futue people will live a more comfortable life with the help of new robots.
【解析】
亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

文中使用了非常好的短语，例如thank you for doing，I,d like to do, introduce sb. to，all of you，at home，do some washing，at
a fixed time，have a chat，play chess，do exercise，deal with，a great help，in the future 等。

而Thank you for attending our robot show./ I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. / I think in the future people will live a more comfortable life with the help of new robots.等非谓语动词和复杂从句的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。

点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

4. Life is just like a mirror, you smile at it, and it smiles at you, too.请你以
"Learn to Smile”为题，根据下表所列的要点写一篇100词左右的文章（文
章开头已给出）。

1、参考词汇：对某人微笑smile at sb.误解misunderstand
2、短文必须包括所有内容要点，不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺。

Learn to Smile
I remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is “Just a smile and the rain is gone.” Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile .
【答案】Learn to Smile
I remember a song by Westlife, thefirst sentence of it is “Just a smile and the rain is gone.” Do you
like smiling? I think you should learn to smile .
First, learn to smile at yourself when something unpleasant happens in your life. If you fail an exam or you are misunderstood by your friends, don/t be sad. Just smile at yourself . Smiling at yourself brings back your confidence . Sometimes the one who beats you is not others, but yourself. And smile can also keep you healthy.
Second, learn to smile at others. It will make you communicate better with people. Smiling at others makes yourself happy as well.
In a word, smile is a kind of language belonging to everyone. It passes love and friendship and helps shorten the distance between you and other people. Living with a smile ,every day will be shiny.
【解析】
这是一篇表格式的作文，要点是一表格的形式出现，首先要研究表格，找出需要表达的要点，然后加以整合，也可以适当增加使意思更连贯，但要点一定要全，不能漏掉。

写作时要注意遣词造句，不能受汉语的影响，要用地道的英语表达，注意时态，语态，单词拼写，语法等问题，用好简单句，适当用复杂句。

可以用一些高级词汇。

还要注意句子的关联。

5.书面表达
根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。

每年春节，每个孩子都能收到来自长辈的压岁钱（lucky money）。

随着生活水平的提高，大部分孩子得到越来越多的压岁钱，有些甚至通过微信（WeChat）或支付宝（Alipay）收压岁钱。

同学们该如何管理自己的钱，让自己的钱用得更有意义？请结合自己的实际写一篇文章，词数80词以上，文中不能出现真实校名和人名。

内容包括如下： 1.你的压岁钱的来源和用途；
2.对合理使用压岁钱的建议（至少3点）；
3.呼吁大家节约用钱，把自己的压岁钱用在最需要、最有意义的地方。

【答案】Every Spring Festival I receive a lot of lucky money from my parents and relatives. Now I even get it through WeChat or Alipay. I usually buy some of my favorite books, school things and some fancy clothes. Sometimes I also buy some gifts for my parents.
In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games. Second, it is a good idea to buy something useful for our parents or teachers so that we can show our love to them. What is more, why not donate our lucky money to the poor kids in need? Helping others makes us happy.
All in all, let us manage our lucky money properly. We should use our money in a meaningful way. 【解析】
【详解】
每年春节，每个孩子都能收到来自长辈的压岁钱（luckymoney）。

随着生活水平的提高，大部分孩子得到越来越多的压岁钱，有些甚至通过微信（WeChat）或支付宝（Alipay）收压岁钱。

同学们该如何管理自己的钱，让自己的钱用得更有意义？这是一篇给材料作文，本题所给材料比较详细，写作中注意将所给内容表达出来，不能逐字翻译。

通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称，时态为一般现在时态，注意谓语动词的变化。

动笔前可
以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。

上下 文之间可以适当使用连接词。

【点睛】
文章使用了很好的短语和句子：In order to make good use of the lucky money, I think we can do the following things. First, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games.这些给文章增色不少。

注意:1.词数90左右。

短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
2 .短文须包括所有要点，并补充相关信息，可适当发挥。

语言连贯、通顺
3 .短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.
【答案】How time flies! My colourful middle school life is nearly ending. Here is what I think about myself.
In the past, I learnt a lot of knowledge not only from books but also from the teachers. So, I am very grateful to them. They helped me a lot! I also got on well with my classmates. We shared happiness and sadness together. We were like a big family. However, I still have a lot to improve. I didn,t do well in Maths because I gave up easily when meeting difficult Maths problems. Besides, I didn,t have a good sense of time. I used to go to school late and that made my teachers angry. Therefore, in the future, I will try my best to become better. I will work harder and organize my life and my time better. I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me!
【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达以“My Unforgettable Middle School Life ，为题，结合本题
6.书面表达
难忘的初中三年学习生活已经接近尾声，你一定既有收获又有不足，也有许多对自己未来 的期待。

请以My Unforgettable Middle School Life 为题，根据下面的思维导图，写一篇短文 介绍自己难忘的校园生活并描述对未来的期盼。

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所给的写作信息，阐述自己难忘的中学生活。

根据内容提示可知本文会用一般过去时态和一般将来时态，注意一些常见句式的应用。

写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后最好要表达出自己的感想和看法。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，要点齐全，语言简练。

文中not only ...but also...，help a lot，share happiness and sadness，do well in，give up, besides，so, and, a good sense of time, used to, make sb.+adj.，therefore, be proud of等词（组）恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；文章的最后I hope one day, my school and teachers will be proud of me!表达了自己愿望与想法，使文章增色不少，值得学习。

7.假如你叫李华，最近你班里的美国交换生Lucy想要感受中国的传统文化。

周末你和父母商议后，打算邀请她去老舍茶馆。

你通过微信告知她：要去哪，在那要做什么以及何时何地见面。

提示词语：Laoshe Teahouse, drink tea, Peking Opera, magic shows, gate
提示问题：Where are you going?
What will you do there?
When and where will you meet?
kucy
Hi, Lu-cy!； I knew you 低射Chinee 如• culture.
【答案】Hi, Lucy! I know you like Chinese traditional culture. I want to invite you to Laoshe Teahouse this Saturday morning. We are going to drink tea, watch magic shows, enjoy Peking Opera, and eat Chinese traditional food in Laoshe Teahouse. We can experience Chinese traditional culture there. Let/s meet at the gate of Laoshe Teahouse at 8:30, OK? See you.
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，我通过微信告诉Lucy要去哪，在那里要做什么以及何时何地见面。

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I want to……，We are going to……，We can……，Let’s meet at……等句式的应用。

写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。

写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。

开头介绍了我想要邀请你去老舍茶馆，接下来介绍我们去那里做什么，最后指出我们要在何时何地见面。

此处want to do sth, invite sb to, let sb do sth, at the gate of等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

8. 4月23日是“世界读书日〃，你校英语俱乐部正在开展主题为“多读书，读好书〃的活动。

假如你是李华，请你写一封倡议书，向全体同学发出号召。

内容包括：应该读什么样的书，以及读书的意义。

提示词语：story, novel, knowledge, improve, important
提示问题：• What kind of books should we read? • Why do we read?
Dear students, the World Reading Day is coming.
So I'm here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books.
Li Hua 【答案】例文
Dear students, the World Reading Day is coming. As a middle school student, everyone should
read books. Firstly, reading increases our knowledge and we can learn the world affairs without going out. Secondly, reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills. Finally, reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future. Therefore, start to reading, no matter how old you are and what you are doing.
So I'm here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books.
Li Hua 【解析】
【详解】
题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按照应用文格式写，写作时承接短文开头，写出对学生的倡议。

例文点评：例文采用的是一段式，写的是阅读的好处，时态采用的是一般现在时，描述倡议时，描写细致，条理清晰。

高分亮点：
短语：Firstly；Secondly；Finally； a good way to do sth；broaden our knowledge and horizon。

句型：reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future。

9.目前，许多中学生不重视课外阅读。

请你根据下表内容写一篇短文，对这一现状进行分析并提出建议。

要点：
2.内容必须包括上表中的要点，可适当发挥，但不要逐字翻译;
3.条理清楚、语句连贯；
4.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。

At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons.
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【答案】At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons. First of all, quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework. Still others haven't formed a habit of reading. They would rather spend their spare time on TV or on the Internet. However, reading has many benefits. Through reading we can learn more about the world. Besides, it can help us think better. Last but not least, reading can make our life more colourful. Here are my suggestions. For one thing, teachers are supposed to limit the amount of our homework so that we can have more time to read. For another, it,s a good idea to form reading clubs and learn from each other.
【解析】
略
10.书面表达
为感受母爱情深，弘扬知恩图报，某英语网站正在举办以“My Mother”为
主题的征文活动，请根据下列思维导图所提供的信息，写一篇短文，介
绍你的母亲和你之间的故事。

参考词汇：give much to..., It's my turn to..., try my bestto...
提示：
1）短文内容须包括所给内容，含母亲曾为你所做的事和你将为母亲所做的事各一件，并阐述原因；
2）请注意短文结构层次、时态运用和卷面整洁度；
3）词数80个左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
4）文中不得出现学校和个人的相关信息。

My Mother
We need love. We also need to show love. The person I love most is my mother. .
【答案】My mother
We need love. We also need to show love. The person I love most is my mother. My mother is 41 years old. She is of medium build with long black hair. She is quiet. She is a history teacher in a middle school. She likes dancing. She can cook delicious food.
She did a lot for me when I was a child. She bought whatever I needed for my study even though she didn't have much money. She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend. She cooked delicious and healthy food for me
When I grow up, I will do what I can to make my mother happy. I will find a good job after I graduate from college. I'll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young. I'll take her to wonderful sights around China. Most importantly, I will stay with her when I have free time.That's what she wants most,I think.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇给材料作文。

为感受母爱情深，弘扬知恩图报，要求以"My Mother”为主题写一篇短文介绍你的母亲和你之间的故事，参加某英语网站正在举办的征文活动。

在写作时，注意文章文体、人称和时态；注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。

同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。

【点睛】
首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；同时注意语句要通顺，词汇书写无误，不要出现语法错误。

最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。