近3年上海市徐汇区2021-2023年英语中考一模试题分类汇编：话题作文

上海市徐汇区2021-2023年中考英语一模试题分类汇编
话题作文
2023年上海市徐汇区中考一模英语试题
X. Writing
Write at least 60 words according to the given situation（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）。

假设你是Joe，你校校报正在通过邮件评选最受欢迎的一个栏目（section）。

备选栏目如下：
·School sports
·Word games and crossword puzzles
·School clubs
·Book or Film reviews
·Poems by students
请给校报写封邮件，谈谈你的选择，并简要说明理由。

注意：
1. 信中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。

2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。

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2022年上海市徐汇区中考一模英语试题
X. Writing
84.Write at least 60 words to complete the story that you read in Reading C. Think about what good idea Anna had and how she made her storytelling a success.请补全阅读C 篇的故事，字数不少于60个词。

想一想Anna有了什么好主意？她是怎样成功完成讲故事
任务的呢？
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。

标点符号不占格）
Anna thought carefully about what she had learnt in Miss Jones' class and came up with a good idea...
2021年上海市徐汇区中考一模英语试题
十四、话题作文
64．Write at least 60 words to talk about “How technology affects me”. Does the development of technology affect you in a positive way or in a negative way? What do you think of the influence? How do you deal with it?
请以“How technology affects me”为题，写一篇不少于60 个词的短文，谈论科技发展对你带来了正面的影响还是负面的影响。

你怎样看待科技对你的影响吗? 你怎样面对这些影响呢?
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。

标点符号不占格）
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答案：
2023年上海市徐汇区中考一模英语试题
【答案】例文
Dear Editor,
I’m glad to hear that you are selecting the most popular secti on. From the point of my view, my favorite one is the School sports. There are several reasons which can account for my opinion as below. First of all, every teenager has his own sports idol. In this column, we can get the latest sports information in time. Secondly, in this column, we can often get some sports suggestions, which will help students to arrange sports reasonably during school. Yours,
Joe 【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求根据题目要求谈谈你喜欢的栏目及原因。

不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。

[写作步骤]
第一步，首先介绍校报正在通过邮件评选最受欢迎的一个栏目的消息；
第二步，谈谈你最喜欢哪个栏目；
第三步，谈谈你选择这个栏目的理由。

[亮点词汇]
①From the point of my view在我看来
②First of all首先
③help sb to do sth帮助某人做某事
[高分句型]
①I’m glad to hear that you are selecting the most popular section.（宾语从句）
②There are several reasons which can account for my opinion as below.（定语从句）
2022年上海市徐汇区中考一模英语试题
84．例文：
Anna thought carefully about what she had learnt in Miss Jones’ class and came up with a good idea. She decided to tell the story all by herself. She found some props that could represent different characters and changed the characters by switching the props. It was a difficult task for her to perform every character well. But she practiced a lot to make it. When she was telling stories in the class, she changed the way of roles, and her control of words and expressions shocked her classmates. It was surely an imaginative way to tell stories. Miss Jones was also happy that she solved the problem in her own way.
题干解读：题目要求续写阅读C中的故事，要写清楚Anna有了什么好主意及她是如何成功讲故事的。

写作指导：写作时要以第三人称为主，时态采用一般过去时。

这是一道开放性试题，结合阅读C上文的内容发挥自己的想象，给出一个讲故事的好方法并讲述Anna把故事讲好的经历即可。

要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。

2021年上海市徐汇区中考一模英语试题
64．例文：
How technology affects me
We live in an information time. Almost every person has one mobile phone. It's very convenient for me to learn the world using our telephones. I can send my greetings to my friends by phones. I can also communicate with my friends. I can get too much information by my phones.
I can't imagine what our life will be like without telephones. Telephones are our good friends, but some children are addicted to mobile games, which affects their study. So we should use mobile phones properly.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，在写作时根据汉语提示，谈论科技发展带来了正面的影响还是负面的影响；怎样看待科技的影响；如何面对这些影响等。

2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，行文连贯，保证条理清晰。