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开头:(1)It seems that, at first sight, the author’s reasoning is logical to leadto the proposal/recommendation/prediction/assertion that…(2)However, careful scrutiny of the argument reveals that some assumptionsthis argument depends on are problematic (the evidence this argument contains is inadequate) (additional questions need to be asked in order to fullyevaluate this argument) (some alternative explanations also need to beconsidered).(3)Unless the author could provide more accurate information or criticalevidence, this argument will not be convincing enough to reach its conclusion.替换词:作者author/writer/speaker/arguer/“title”文章argument/editorial/article建议suggest/advise/advocate/recommend/propose预测predict/project/forecast/foresee/expect/anticipate承接Therefore/thus/hence/so/consequently/clearly/moreover/furthermore/besides表明show/imply/indicate/illustrate/demonstrate/point out声称assert/allege/state/claim/contend/maintain声明 assertion/statement/claim/implication/indication/illustration/demonstration证实prove/substantiate/corroborate支持 support/bolster可信度validity/credibility/reliability/feasibility推断 infer/deduce/suggest草率的,鲁莽的 hasty/rash/reckless值得怀疑的,没有说服力的unsubstantiated/unconvincing/unpersuasive/unfounded/unwarranted/suspicious/unreliable /groundless/suspectable/doubtable/questionable/problematic/specious1. 类比 (5, 7, 13)(1) Indicating that … (措施在某地或某公司取得了成功), the author implies that … (该措施在另一地也会成功)(2) This comparison between the two areas/companies/towns (analogy), however, might not be very reasonable on the grounds that the circumstances facing the two areas might be very different.(3) …(列举两者之间可能不同的状况) all might influence the effectiveness of …(措施) at the two places.(4) Therefore, the deduction that the success of …(措施) can be definitely achieved at (另一地) is groundless and unreliable.2. 绝对与相对数量(1) The author mentions … (绝对数量) to illustrate that …, but the author does not address… (总数)(2) If … (总数很大/很小), … (绝对数量) would not seem to be surprisingly high/low.(3)The arguer needs to provide more specific statistics regarding the ratio of… (相对数量)(4) Such data would be of much more value in comparing the relative amounts of…3. 没发现不代表没有(1) The argument treats a lack of proof that … (某事物) had ever been found as sufficient evidence that… (某事物) never existed.(2) One possibility is that… which makes it extremely hard to find trace of the existence of… (某事物) It is also likely that current research methods and technologies are not yet advanced enough to identify(detect) potential evidenceinvol ving the possible existence of …(某事物)(3) Also, if researchers could find … (其他事物), these objects might be used as secondhand evidence to infer that …(某事物) once existed.4. 质疑权威性The author’s citation of … could no t lend strong support to this argument, since the authority (accuracy) of … is questionable. … … Apparently, the author should address more background information about… in order to prove that … are just and objective. Otherwise the claim of … would be dubious.段首句:1.One of the underlying assum ptions that needs evaluation is that…2.The author also hastily assumes that…3.Building upon the implication(assumption) that…通用句型:1.… could not lend strong support to the arguer’s claim/propos al2.The argument treats a lack of proof that…was found as sufficient evidencethat… (没发现不代表没有)3.The arguer fails to convince us that…4.All of these different factors need to be taken into consideration beforemaking an assertion that…5.Without evidence that…, the author’s claim that … is dubious at best.6.The claim that… lacks credibility if the author fails to prove…7.To (further) bolster the editorial’s claims, the author must provide clearevidence that reason A was in fact responsible for (a increase/decline in …)8.…cannot be representative enough to reflect the true/univer sal situationregarding调查/数据:1.The author unfairly/fallaciously/falsely assumes that the result of the citedsurvey/statistics is fully genuine and credible.2.The author cites a survey/study of … to report/explain that…3.Failing to indicate the source of the survey, the author could not convince usabout the credibility of the survey.4.The scope/validity/representativeness/reliability of the survey is doubtable.5.T he sample is too limited/not representative, including only those people who…6.The result of the nationwide survey may not be representative enough to reflectthe true situation in… area.7.Does the survey include respondents from different age groups8.The survey does not provide specific statistics (complete information)concerning the effect of…9.Although the total number of … is high, the per … (capita) number might berelatively low.类比:1.Are the two towns/companies fully comparable at every aspect2.The comparison between A and B might not be very reasonable on the groundsthat…the circumstances facing A and B might be very different.3.Without showing that all other conditions in the two areas/universities havebeen essentially the same, the author cannot convince us that…因果关系:1.Although A and B happens at the same time, no evidence was given tosubstantiate the claim that A contribute to B2.Other possible factors should be considered in order to evaluate the realcauses of…列举他因:1.The author overlooks the possibility that (only a small portion of )…2.The arguer ignores other possible factors that may also leads/contribute to…3.Some other possible solutions to the problem of…, such as…, should not beexcluded from consideration.4.段落结尾:1.In short2.In a word结尾:(1)While … might be beneficial to…, this argument is not stronglypersuasive in the absence of additional supporting details.(2)More research should be conducted in order to determine whether the… isa reasonable recommendation/prediction/choice (the appropriateness andeffectiveness of the recommendation provided).难题:1,2,6,74,79,83,85,91论据论点:1.Problems about surveys(1)quantity of the sample(2)the actual meaning or influence of the survey(3)what questions were asked in the survey(4)are the respondents representative2.Problems about statistics or information(1)vague data(2)completeness3.Flaws in the reasoning line(1)false analogy(2)confusing comparison and variation(3)incomplete comparison/selective comparison(4)hasty generalizationA.unrelated conceptsB.changing scopesC.inferring a future condition from a past condition(5)failing to weigh the advantages and disadvantages thoroughly(6)false dilemma(7)cause-effect fallaciesA.confusing the cause and the effectB.non-causal relationshipC.confusing concurrence with causalityD.confusing with the time relationship4.flaws in the conclusion(1)sufficiency and necessity of the solutionfailing to consider the feasibility of the conclusion(3)。

GRE作文Argument万能模板

GRE作文Argument万能模板

Inthis argument ,the author concludes/recommends that ….To support this conclusion/recommendation,the author points out/cites … .In addition/On the basis of this,the author also cites that … .This argument suffers from several critical/logical flaws,which render it unconvincing as it stands. /PE(paragraph ending):…,the author cannotexpect us to take seriously the claim/convince me that …contribute to … /ruling out such/other possibilities/explanations/accounting for …,the author cannot justifiably conclude that …/ justify the claim/convince me that …/make any sound recommendation to …… before I can accept theauthor’s final conclusion that …(接Perhaps …)If so,this fact/Either scenario/Any of these scenarios,if ture, would significantly/seriously undermine/weaken (the arguer’s contention /conclusion that) …(1)A threshold problem with the argument invloves the statistical reliability ofthe survey because the size of the sample is too small to be sufficient.Also,the sample might be unrepresentative of … as a whole.Without a sufficiently representative sample,the author cannot draw any conclusion whatsoever on the basis of the study. (小样本、代表性)(2) …are rarely sufficient to establisha general conclusion. From the survey quotedinthis argument,we findnosignof suchprocedures for randomsamplingsand have good reasons to doubt if the sample is representative enough to reflect the general situation as a whole.Besides,…provides no information about what percentage of … responded to the surveys.The lower the percentage,the less reliable the results of the surveys/study ’s conclusion. (随机性、代表性)结尾总结用author’s conclusion depends,I would need more information about the size/randomness of the study ’s sample.The author provides no information concerning/omits to inform us about A,B,C and D.It is impossible to conclude without comparing the two groups subjects.For example, ….Without evidence of the study ’s methodological (and statistical) reliability, the author cannot rely on the study to draw any firm conclusion.(1)A is not necessarily due to B.Perhaps ….Since the argument fails to account for this alternative explanation for …,the author cannot …(2)The author unfairly attributes A to B/assumes that A were attributable tocking evidence to confirm this assumption,it is entirely possible that ….Or,perhaps ….After all,the autho r provides no evidence that ….PE.(1)A does not necessarily indicate that B.Perhaps …., ….PE.(2)The argument relies/depends on the (unsubstantiated) assumption that …/ Based on the fact that A the author infers that B.However,/Yet this is not necessarily the case.Perhaps ….If so,this fact would significantly undermine …(3)The fact that … lends no/little credible/scant support to …(4)A probleminvolves the definitionof ….The author fails todefine this critical term.If … is defined as … ,then … .In short, without a clear definition of … it is impossible to assess the strength of the argument.The arguer uses previous experience to illustrate that now …,ignoring t he factor of time which perhaps can change everything including … .Eg:The economic situation becomes worse;The worsening economic situationOne problemwhy I disagree with the argument is that it is unwarranted toinfer from the success of B that A will also succeed by following the same format. Perhaps … .In short,lacking evidence that conditions on the … are relevantly similar,the author cannot convince me on the basis of A’s experience that the action would be effective in B. Eg:economic situation,regionThe argument suffers from “either-or ” reasoning.Based on t he fact that … ,the author unfairly concludes that … .However,the author overlooks the possibility …Another problemwiththe argument is that it overlooks other factors that /the possibility that A is not the only factor affectingB.For instance,perhaps entirely possible that …does in fact serve to ….PE.……/ItisThe author appreciates sb’s strong commitment to sth to some extent. However,we know the fact that to make a commitment is one thing,to achieve it is far more difficult.There is no indication that they might fulfill their promise.结尾: In sum,the argument is unconvincing as it stands/not well supported.To bolster it,the author must provide clear evidence that …The author must also show that ….To better assess/evaluate the argument we would need figures …/more information about ….We should also need to know …。

GRE考试作文部分及经典句型

GRE考试作文部分及经典句型

GRE考试作文部分及经典句型GRE考试作文部分精华模板及经典句型导语:以下是小编整理的'GRE作文的一些经典模板,考生备考时可以借鉴,希望考生能加强记忆这些模板,在GRE作文部分定会有质的飞跃。

正文:For instance … since … what’s more … etc。

and how well it represented the public opinions。

The sample of the survey is not representative。

样本太小the sample is too small to.。

光数字没比例the ratio of four to sixthere is only figures but no proportion of the survey 还是ratio?Insufficient SampleIf the [respondents] only stand for a tiny proportion of the whole [group], we should not be so sure about the conclusion that [the whole group…]The arguer commits a fallacy of hasty generalization。

It was only carried out in Sun City, but the arguer applies its result to all the company’s markets while doesn’t show us whether Sun City is a representative market of the whole markets。

有的病人会对抗生素过敏the arguer commits a fallacy of hasty generalization. Even if the maintenance of the airline has been improved as a result of sending its mechanics to the Seminar, which is, of course, an unwarranted assumption, it does not follow that就算怎样,也不怎样The survey is based on two isolated examples. The arguer should survey more hospitals of both types。

GRE写作句套和模板

GRE写作句套和模板

➢开头段结尾句笼统说1、Close scrutiny of each of these facts, however, reveals that none of them lendcredible support to the recommendation.2、However, close scrutiny of the evidence reveals that it accomplished littletoward supporting the director's claim, as discussed below.3、Careful examination of this supporting evidence, however, reveals that itlends little credible support to the applicant's claim.4、A careful analysis of the study reveals several problems with the editorial'sargument.5、In several respects, this evidence provides little support for the president'srecommendation.6、I find this argument is logically flawed in several critical respects.7、I find this recommendation specious on several grounds.8、As discussed below, the argument suffers from several critical flaws and istherefore unpersuasive as it stands.9、For three reasons, this evidence lends little crediblity to the speaker'sargument.假设不成立1、However, the recommendation relies on a series of unsubstantiatedassumptions, which render it unconvincing as it stands.2、However, the editorial relies on a number of doubtful assumptions and istherefore unconvincing.数据有问题1、The study suffers from certain statistical and other problem, which render theargument based upon it unpersuasive.➢结尾段●开头In sum/In conclusion/●完善To strengthen itTo justify this claimTo bolster the editorial's claimsthe author must rule out the possibility/other factors thatthe author must demonstrate thatthe author must provide supporting evidence.the author must also show thatthe author must convince me thatthe author must provide clear/better evidence, perhaps by way of a reliable survey, thatTo better assess/evaluate/ the author's final two claimsI would need to knowI would also need more information about➢中间段落◆数据调查类1.The statistical evidence/the result of the survey upon which the argument relies istoo vague to be informative2.The argument relies on figures that are too imprecise to support the conclusiondrawn.3.The result of the study is incomplete to be conclusive.4.This single sample is insufficient to draw any general conclusion about...5.In order to establish a strong correlation between ..., the study's sample must besufficient in size and representative of ...6.Yet we are told nothing about the way the poll was conducted and how well itrepresented the public opinions.7.It is entirely possible that people inclined to ... were more willing to respond tothe survey than other people were.8.The example cited,..., is insufficient to warrant ... because there is no reason tobelieve that the data drawn from ... is representative of ...9.Since the arguer makes a claim about ... in general, the sample for the surveyshould be able to represent all...10.The argument fails to indicate what portion of the people surveyed actuallyresponeded; the smaller this portion, the less reliable the results.cking evidence of a sufficiently representative sample, the author cannotjustifiably rely on the study to draw any conclusion whatsoever(=whatever)12.When samples are used to make general claims about a particular group, thesamples should be close enough in time to the generalization they are used to support, so that historical changes will not invalidate the generalization.13.From the survey quoted in the argument, however, we find no sign of suchprocedures for random sampling, and have good reason to doubt if the sample is representative enough to reflect the general attitudes of all workers as a whole. 14.If the subjects for the study were randomly chosen and represent a diverse crosssection of the population of ... ,the results will be reliable regardless of ...◆因果关系prehensive(广泛的) analysis is necessary to identify the actual cause of ...2.The arguer fails to establish a causal relationship between... and ...3.The argument assumes a causal relationship where only a correlation has beenindicated.4.There is no information available to justify any causal relationship between A andB5.We do not have any evidence suggesting that A will cause B.6.To find the exact cause of ... , examination should be applied to all the factors thathave significant impact on ...7.It does not naturally warrant the conclusion that A has significantly contributed,and thus is causal to B.8.This observed phenomenon, actually, says little more than that these two eventsare synchronic(同时发生的) to each other and that is all.9. A direct correlation between ... does not necessarily prove that the former causesthe latter.10.While a high correlation is strong evidence of a causal relationship, in itself it isnot sufficient.11.Any further linkage of these two phenomena requires more evidence and is notjustified by the data so far available.◆个体与整体1.The arguer assumes that what is true of a group as a whole is necessarily true ofeach menber of that group.2.The argument assumes that what is true of group of people taken collectively isalso true of any individual within that group.3.The argument attributes a characteristic of an individual member of a group to thegroup as a whole.4.The arguer support the conclusion by over-generalizing from a specific piece ofevidence.5.The arguer generalizes on the basis of a sample consisting of atypical cases.6.The arguer use a few exceptional cases as the basis for a claim about what is truein general.7.The arguer infers from what has been observed to be the case under exceptionalconditions to what is principle true.8.The arguer draws a conclusion that is broader in scope than is warranted by theevidence advanced.9.The author generalizes from what is true in one region of space to what must betrue in all regions of space.10.The arguer attempts to extract a general principle from a specific case.◆基于假设1.The author assumes that ... However, the author provides no evidence that this isthe case.2.Even if ... in claiming that ... the author assumes that...3.Based on the fact that ... the author infers that . However, this is not necessarilythe case.◆忽略可能性1.The argument fails to rule out the possibility that ...2.The editorial fails to take into account possible differences between ...3.The author fails to consider and rules out other factors that might account for ...4.The author ignores/fails to take into account/consider/explain other likely benefitsof...5.On the one hand, the author ignores the possibility that ...; on the other hand,perhaps...6.While this may be true in some cases,but it is equally possible that ...7.While it is true that ... ,this is not true of everyone.8.The argument ignores factors such as ... that may be more important than A indetermining B.9.But, since the editorial provides no evidence to substantiate this assumption it isequally possible that ...10.The argument fails to account for the possiblity that◆其他逻辑错误1.This assumption presents a false dilemma,since ...are not necessarily mutuallyexclusive alternatives.2.The author is presenting a false dilemma by imposing an either-or choice betweentwo courese of action that need not be mutually exclusive.3.The evidence it cites is consistent with the alternative(二选一的)hypothesisthat ...4.The problem is that the two situations are not similar enough to justify theanalogical deduction.In short, lacking evidence that conditions on the two islands are relevantly similar, the author cannot convince me on the basis of ... that ...◆结尾句cking more specific information about ... ,it is impossible to assess...2.Unless the author can demonstrate that ... ,the author's concern about these issuesis unfounded.3.In short, lacking evidence that conditions on the two islands are relevantly similar,the author cannot convince me on the basis of ... that ...4.Therefore, any decision aimed at addressing the problem of ... must be based onmore thorough investigation to gather sufficient data in order to narrow down and locate the actual causes of the problem5..Since the editorial fails to rule out these and other possible explainations for ... , Icannot accept any conclusions about ...6.Since the applicant has not adequately responded to this concern,his claim that ...is untenable.7.Thus, without better evidence that ..., the editorial remains unconvincing.8.Without eliminating this possibility,the owner cannot rely on the national surveyto conclude that ...9.The author must consider and eliminate this and other possible reasons why...otherwise, I cannot accept the author's implicit claim that...10.The article fails to account for the alternative explanation for ... , thus the article'sauthor cannot make any sound recommendations to ...11.Without additional samples from diverse geographic locations,I cannot accept theauthor's sweeping generalization(不加区分的概括) about...➢常用词汇●有问题1.doubtful/ dubious/ flawed/ gratuitous/ groundless/ misleading/ problematic/questionable/ specious/ vague/ vulnerable/2.indefensible/ insufficient/ invalid/3.unconvincing/ unfairly/ unfounded/ unjustified/ unpersuasive/ unreliable/unreasonable/ unsubstantiated/ untenable/ unwarranted4.ill conceived/ poorly supported/ lack credibility/ lends no strong support to●支持类convince/ demonstrate/ justify/ prove/ solidate/ strengthen/ substantiate/ support/ validate/➢七种逻辑错误典型句式●经不起推敲的类推The argument relies on what might be a false analogy between...●因果关系错误The argument concludes based on a known correlation between... and ...that the latter is attribute, at least partly, to the former. Yet the correlationalone amounts to scant evidence of the claimed cause-and-effect relationship.●群体特征适用于所有成员The argument assumes that the demographic trend in the specific region where...reflects the general trend upon which the argument relies.●认为某条件是某结果的必要或充分条件The recommendation depends on the assumption that no alternative means of improving the students' reading skills are available. Yet no evidenceis offered to substantiate this assumption.●统计数据问题One problem with the argument involves the cited statistics about ...●调查或民意测验问题The survey methodology might be problematic in two respects: First, we are not informed whether the survey required the respondents choose ... between alternatives. Secondly, we are not informed whether survey responses were anonymous, or even confidential.●认为事情是永恒不变的The ad's claim unfairly infers from ... in the past that ...this year must also be comparatively safe.◆普通论证1.The mere fact that ... is insufficient evidence to conclude that....2.The fact that ... does not prove that/does not support the claim that/does notensure that/lends no strong support to the conclusion that...3.The fact that ... does not necessarily imply that ...4.The author provides no evidence that ....mon sense tells us that ....6.Unless ... ,there is a good chance ...7.The arguer fails to provide any information concerning ...8.The reasoning/assumption that ... is open to doubt/ doubtful/ suspicious/unreliable/ problematic/ questionable/ unconvincing/ unfounded/ unwarranted/ groundless.9.The arguer oversimplifies the factors that ...10.The arguer overemphasizes the importance of ...11.The conclusion reached in this argument is invalid and probably misleading.12.The argument simply equates ... with...,which is ...13.The argument rests on the gratuitous/unreasonable assumption that ....14.The arguer's conclusion depends on the questionable assumption that ...15.Another assumption in short of legitimacy is ....16.The evidence provided in this argument is not sufficent to validate the assumptionthat....17.The arguer draws a hasty conclusion which is based on inadequate evidenceabout...18.The arguer's reasoning linking A with B seems reasonable on the surface,but...19.Contigencies(不可预测事件或紧急事件) such as ... can all lead to ...20.The fact that ...accomplishes nothing toward bolstering the recommendationthat ...21.Nor does the mere fact that ... lend significant support to ...22.Even if the dean can substantiate all of the foregoing assumptions, the dean'sassertion that ... is still unwarranted.23.Given these possible scenarios,the fact that .. proves nothing about ...24.By relying on the national survey to support its conclusion the argument dependson the assumption that ...25.This scenarios is quite possible,especially considering that ...26.Any of these scenarios, if true, would cast considerable doubt on the argument'sconclusion that ...27.The nationwide study showing ... does not necessarily apply to ...28.Without weighing revenue against expenses the argument's conslusion ispremature at best(充其量,至多).29.Even assuming ..., it is nevertheless(仍然) impossible to assess the author'sbroader contention(论点) that ...30.Absent either a clear definition of the term or dear evidence that ..., the author'scontention that ... is simply unjustified.31.Absent additional information about the cited studies, these studies lend nocredible support to the conclusion that ...32.Although this is entirely possible, the argument provides no evidence to supportthis assumption.mon sense and experience tells us this is not the case, and that a variety ofother factors, such as ..., also play major roles.34.Without such evidence the argument can be rejected out of hand(立刻).35.If this is the case, it provides an alternative explannation for the fact that ...。

GRE的argument写作万能模板

GRE的argument写作万能模板

GRE的argument写作万能模板为了帮助大家备考gre。

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GRE 的argument写作万能模板一. 背景介绍-----万能123的诞生它的优势在于:让你用最快的时间找出攻击点,不仅解决攻击语言还解决攻击顺序,还能节省你考试时列提纲的时间我刚开始复习时也是很苦恼,但是当我对着北美范文写了十几篇并日日思索之后,发现了一个万能找茬法。

它的精髓就在于教你写一套属于自己的万能123模板,这个模板不仅解决你语言,攻击顺序,更你提高你的效率,即给你一个找茬的火眼金睛,又给你一个呼之欲出的思路。

我考前一天把我自己的模板背了又背了一遍,考的那篇文章我虽没写过,但是我在issue和argument 中场休息的1分钟之内把我的万能123找茬写在草稿纸上,题目出来后仅仅花了1分钟在万能123找茬勾出题目中题目中的错误点,这样连提纲都省了,还非常有条理。

我考之前把这个提纲发给我一同学让她好好背。

现在拿出来和大家分享,还准备发一份给那个作文老师,以提高他的教学质量。

二. 精华部分---万能123找茬1. 从整体来说:开头结尾不是最重点,中间部分才是重中之重2. 就中间部分来说:具体的语言不是最重点,攻击思路才是重中之重结论就是,攻击思路是重中之重,所以万能123找茬才是重中之重,比万能123模板(语言文字)及开头结尾给重要。

三.精华部分的注释这里是注释:(对照序号看)① 一因为此调查或研究没有提到样本sample,所以可以攻击其样本可能不具代表性,例如1。

样本太小不具代表性2。

样本特殊不具代表性二有了样本仍然可攻击样本没有代表性,例如1。

样本太小不具代表性2。

样本的倾向性问题,即某类人群比其他多数人更愿意参加调查或研究三没有论据的声称其实是很万能的,多用于攻击一些不是调查也不是研究的论据(具体可参照我的例文)② 一这个嘛虽然被某些新东方老师分为3大类,其实本质还是一样的,就是一个群体的特征推到另一个群体身上。

GRE考试写作

GRE考试写作

GRE考试写作GRE考试写作模板大全导语:下面小编为您收集整理了GRE考试写作模板,希望对您有帮助!一. 开头In the argument, the …(主题对象) recommends that …(对结论做论述,基本上可以抄原文,用另外一种方式表达即可). To support this recommendation the argument point out that …(说明文章用了什么论据去证明观点了,同上抄袭即可) however …This argument is logically flawed in several critical respects (说明这篇文章逻辑上是有缺陷的).二. 攻击论据1. 调查结果没有证据申明To begin with, the argument depends on the assumption that… (阐述说出了一个没有根据的申明,并说出文中的原因) —rather than for some other reasons. Yet it is entirely possible that… (说明这种猜测可能的原因) or some other factor. Without ruling out all other reasons why… (重述这个申明)…(说出反方向的结论).2. 提到了样本,但是数据不具有代表性(数据不够)Firstly, the author provides no evidence that the survey is statistically reliabl e. Perhaps the survey’s sample is not sufficient in size or representative of the quality of …(说明对象的数量和质量不够) For that matter, this survey is not strong enough to establish causation between… (在这里列出原因和结果,做比较) However, the other reasons of the survey which (叙述其他原因下的情况). As a result, without the evidence that the survey is statistically reliable the author cannot justifiably draw any conclusion by relying on this survey.3. 猜测,但是没有证据Thirdly, the argument assumes that… (阐述文中的猜测) However, the letter provides no evidence to substantiate this assumption. In fact, the letter suggests that this might be the case. By admitting that …, the letter implies that …说明影响他们happy的因素还有其他的方面,不光是研究中所列举三. 攻击论证过程1. 时间上的错误类比To begin with,…(陈述某个数据) may not a reliable date of that rate would be now(和现在相比较是不可信的). Perhaps the… (反例), For that matter, perhaps …(说出反例的情况下会导致何种结果). In short, without ruling out other possible reasons for …(假设说出针对反例应该怎么做)the memo’s author cannot convince me on the basis of …(说出应该有的结论)2.错误的因果关系3. 两个事实错误的类比Even if…(让步,即使某个条件成立) the argument unfairly assumes that…(说明错误的`类比的情况). It is entirely possible that the …(比较对象) own different situations. Perhaps …(具体说出反例) Without accounting for such differences between the two places is unreliable.4. 错误的推论Even if …(让步,即使某个条件成立)the argument relied on the future assumption that …(说出要让步的是事实). Yet the only evidence the argument offer to substantiate this assumption (说出文中的根据). Perhaps …(说出有可能出现的其他情况导致这个事实)if so, (说出不一样的结果,与上面事实相矛盾). Or…(其他的情况) In short, without more infor mation about…(对上面的可能情况总结) were established it is impossible to assess …(回到上面的结论). 四. 结论的攻击说明结论不完美,可以有其他的方法Finally, the argument fails to consider …(有更好的办法实现目标). Perhaps by…(办法一), or by (办法二), (对目标进行展望) In short, without weighing the suggestion against alternatives, it is unconvincing that (说明提供的方案不好).赢利Finally, even if the families support to build the new seafood restaurant, the restaurant would not necessarily be profitable as a result. Profitability is a function of both revenue and expense. Thus, it is quite possible that the restaurant’s costs of obtaining high-quality and healthy seafood or of new promoting restaurant might render it unprofitable despite its popularity. Without weighing revenue against expenses the argument’s conclusion is premature at best.同时叙述两个错误的论据The memo also makes two hasty assumptions about …(说明两个猜想相关的内容). One such assumption is that …(第一个猜想的情况说明). It is entirely possible that …(反例). Another assumption is that(另外一个错误的猜想) Common sense informs me that (反例) Furthermore, the d ifference in the two firms’ overall placement time last year does not necessarily indicate that Delany would be the better choice to serve XYZ’s laid-off employees. These employees might have particular skills or needs that are not representative of the tw o firm’s clients in general. Besides, one year’s placement statistics hardly sufficient to draw any firm conclusions.五. 结尾段In sum, the argument seems logical, but is based on nothing more than pure speculation and perhaps wishful thinking, yet lack of some warranted investigation. To strength it, the authorneeds to evaluate all possible alternatives and provide detail and comprehensive evidence before jumping to the conclusion that...。

gre写作模板【范本模板】

gre写作模板【范本模板】

一。

新GRE作文文章整体结构大负小正:诚然A,但是B,而且C.承认+转折+递进大正小负:诚然A,有时甚至B,但是C。

承认+递进+转折二. 新GRE作文常用句式开头:a) In this statement, the speaker asserts that…(作者的结论是什么) b)I agree with the speaker insofar as.。

.(某种程度上同意作者的观点)c) Whereas,in my perspective,…is unilateral(作者的观点片面在什么地方)第二段:a)Admittedly,第三段:a) However,第四段:a)Furthermore,结尾:a) In summary, from what has been discussed above, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that…(重述观点)以上就是新GRE作文模板及GRE作文常用句型的介绍,以后考生们进行新GRE作文issue写作就再也不用担心文章的结构了,顺利的剖析题目,与新GRE写作模板再加上独特的观点,即可将高分顺利那些。

1Argument1.1)In this argument the speaker concludes that2) To justify this contusion the speaker cites a recent survey of 3) The speaker also points out that4)This argument is unpersuasive for several reasons。

2。

1)First, the survey must be shown to be reliable before I can accept any contusions based upon it。

gre的作文模版及常用句型

gre的作文模版及常用句型

GRE作文准备一、A RGUMENT大纲1、文章开头In this analysis the arguer attempts to convince us that_________.To substantiate the claim , the arguer provides the evidence that ____________(and that _____________).Another piece of evidence presented to support the argument is that______________ This argument is also based on the assumption that__________________As it stands ,this analysis is unconvincing for several critical flaws.2、文章主体错误类比问题:First of all, the argument is based on a false analogy.The arguer simply assumes that_________ but he does not provide any evidence that is indeed comparable.As we know, the two situations are not similar enough to justify the analogical deduction.In fact , there exist fundamental differences between them.(such as___) Therefore, even though_____proved effective in doing_______there is no guarantee that it will work just as well for__________As a result, we cannot safely assume that____________.无法建立因果关系问题:In the second place ,the author groundlessly assumes that______bears some relation to ______However, the author provides no evidence to support that this is the case, nor does theauthor establish a causal relationship between _________and ___________.It is highly possible that other factors might contribute to the(_/change/progress).For example,______ it is also likely b just resulted from _________.Lacking evidence that links a to b, it is presumptuous to suggest that a was responsible for b.部分不能说明整体的问题:The evidence the author provides is insufficient to support the conclusion drawn from it.Merely one example is insufficient to establish a general conclusion.Based on a specific example of_________, it is logically unsounded to make suggestion for all_________.In fact, in face of such limited evidence, it is fallacious to draw any conclusion at all. Unless it can be shown that_______is representative of all______, any conclusion we drawn is completely unwarranted.还有其它原因的问题:By concluding that sb must do a or must do b, the author commits a fallacy of “false dilemma”.The author assumes that a and b are the only available solutions to the problem. However, A and b are not necessarily mutually-exclusive alternatives.It is more likely that other factors might also contribute to the problem.For example,_______________.If so, just doing a and b would not solve the problem.急于概括,得出结论过早,考虑不周到的问题:In addition, the arguer commits a fallacy of hasty generalization.Even if_________, it does not follow that________.It is highly possible that other factors may have contributed to b______For instance,___________Besides, the arguer does not provide any solid information concerning______ Unless________, which is unknown from this argument, there is no guarantee that___ Without ruling out these and other possible factors that give rise to b, the authorcannot confidently conclude that________________.前后关系混同于因果关系问题:The arguer assumes that just because b happens follows a, then b has been caused by aHowever, no evidence is provided to support that this is the case.The mere fact that a occurs before b does not necessarily establish a causal relationship between a and b.It is highly possible that other factors might also bring about these same results.For instance,________in addition,______________Without ruling out these and other possible factors that give rise to b, the author cannot confidently conclude that________解决方法的唯一性问题:The arguer’s recommendation is based on the assumption that no alternative means of doing sth are available.However, the arguer fails to offer any evidence to substantiate this crucial assumption. It is highly possible that means other than this would more effective to solve the problem. Without considering and ruling out these and other alternative means of doing sth, the author cannot confidently conclude that__________整体规律不一定适用于个人问题:The arguer assumes the characteristics of a group apply to every member of that group.The conclusion that____________ is based on the assumption that________ However, there is no guarantee that this is the case, nor does the author provide any evidence to substantiate this assumption.A great deal of empirical evidence shows that________Lacking such evidence the author cannot draw any firm conclusion.从过去不能推知现在和将来问题:It is assumed without justification that background conditions have remained the same at different times(conditions).The arguer unfairly infer from_______in the past that__________However, he/she fails to offer any evidence to substantiate this inference.It is very likely that___________, or that_________.Any of these scenarios, if true, would serve to undermine the claim that_______.调查数据的有效性问题:Finally, the arguer provides no assurances that the survey on which the argument depends is statistically reliable.Lacking information about the number of______surveyed and the number of respondents, it is impossible to assess the validity of the results.For example, if_________ were surveyed but only________ responded, the conclusion that_________would be highly suspected.Another problem is the representativeness of the respondents.Were they representative of all the__________?Were___chosen for the survey chosen randomly or did they volunteer for the survey? Lacking such evidence the author cannot draw any firm conclusion based on the study.3、文章结尾In summary, this argument is not persuasive as it stands.To strengthen the argument , the arguer would have to provide evidence that_________.二、I SSUE大纲1、文章开头There is a growing public concern over the issue of__________. The speaker in the title statement advocates that________. At the first glance, this opinion seems to be somewhat appealing, but further reflection tells me that I cannot agree with it for the following reasons. (in my point of view, I agree with the speaker on the grounds that_____)2、文章正文先攻击后让步:The first reason why I support / disagree with above statement is that______Secondly,___________.Further more,__________.However, it should be admitted that __________先让步后攻击:First of all, I must admitted that______Although I agree that ______,I insist that _________ .In the first place ,____________In the second place ,__________Further more,_________.3、文章结尾From what has been discussed above (Taking into account all these factors / Judging from all evidence offered), we may safely draw (reach / come to / arrive at) the conclusion that_____________4、关于论据事实与例证:for example; for instance; to illustrate; as an illustration数据:statistics权威或名言:as sb put it,“_____”; according to sb , “_____”(最好对权威加以定义,如Pr.——,a well-known scholar of (sociology ,education, psychology-------at Peking university ). 轶闻趣事,案例,故事:a case in point is______; __________ serves as a typical example 个人经历:personal experience,可作为个案,不能多用设想:scenario, imagine that ______类比:analogy; similarly , ___________。

gre范文

gre范文

gre范文GRE范文一:Technology vs. NatureTechnology has revolutionized our lives in many ways, providing us with numerous conveniences and opportunities for efficiency. However, this rapid advancement of technology has also brought about certain negative consequences, particularly when it comes to our relationship with nature. In this essay, I will argue that while technology has undoubtedly improved our lives in many aspects, it has also created a disconnect between humans and the natural world.One of the main ways in which technology has impacted our relationship with nature is through its role in consumerism and overconsumption. The development of new technologies has fueled the creation of a consumerist culture, where people are constantly encouraged to buy the latest gadgets and devices. This culture of consumerism encourages the constant consumption of resources, leading to environmental degradation and the depletion of natural resources. As people become more reliant on technology, they may be less inclined to appreciate the value of the natural world and the need for its preservation.Furthermore, the use of technology has allowed us to control and modify our environment to a greater extent than ever before. While this has led to advancements in agriculture and the creation of artificial environments, it has also resulted in the loss of natural habitats and biodiversity. For example, the construction of urban areas and the clearing of land for agriculture often leads to the destruction of ecosystems and the displacement of wildlife. Astechnology allows us to manipulate the natural world to suit our needs, we may be losing sight of the importance of preserving nature in its natural state.Lastly, the constant use of technology can lead to a decrease in physical activity and outdoor pursuits. With the convenience of technology, people are increasingly opting for sedentary lifestyles, spending more time indoors than ever before. This lack of outdoor activity not only has negative consequences for our physical health, but also limits our direct engagement with nature. When we are constantly surrounded by screens and virtual realities, we may become disconnected from the natural world and lose the sense of wonder and appreciation that comes from direct interaction with nature.In conclusion, while technology has undoubtedly improved our lives in many ways, it has also created a disconnect between humans and the natural world. The culture of consumerism, the manipulation of the environment, and the decrease in outdoor activity are just a few examples of how our reliance on technology has impacted our relationship with nature. It is important for us to find a balance, where technology can be used responsibly and in a way that respects and preserves the natural world. Only then can we truly harness the benefits of technology while also ensuring the long-term sustainability of our planet.。

新GRE作文argument万能模板

新GRE作文argument万能模板

Argument1.1) In this argument the speaker concludes that2) To justify this contusion the speaker cites a recent survey of3) The speaker also points out that4) This argument is unpersuasive for several reasons.2.1) First, the survey must be shown to be reliable before I can accept any contusions based upon it.2) Specifically, the responses must be accurate, and the respondents must be statistically significant in number and representative of the overall3) Without evidence of the survey's reliability, it is impossible to draw any firm conclusions about the current dietary habits of3.1) Second, the argument relies on the dubious assumption that following the government's nutrition recommendations2) It is entirely possible that3) Thus without evidence to substantiate this assumption the speaker cannot reasonably conclude that4) Third, the speaker assumes too hastily that…Without ruling out this possibility the speaker cannot reasonably conclude with any confidence that5) Lacking firm evidence that …, the speaker cannot justify any conclusions about the4.1) Finally, even if the …, the speaker overlooks the possibility that2) Unless all other habits affecting health have remained unchanged, the speaker cannot justifiably conclude that the overall5.1) In sum, the argument is unconvincing as it stands. To strengthen it the speaker must show that the survey accurately reflects2) The speaker must also show that3) Finally, to better assess the argument I would need more information about the manner and extent to which。

gre作文模板

gre作文模板

gre作文模板GRE作文是申请硕士或博士学位的重要组成部分,涉及到学生的写作能力和逻辑思维能力。

本文将介绍GRE作文的模板和写作技巧,帮助考生高效备考。

一、GRE作文题型GRE作文共有两种题型,分别是Argument和Issue。

Argument 题目要求考生针对给定的一个观点写一篇文章,表明自己对该观点的支持或反对;Issue题目要求考生阐述自己的观点,写一篇文章来支持或反对一个广泛的话题。

二、以下是一些通用的GRE作文模板,供考生参考:1. Issue论文模板第一段:引言:(1)阐述问题:明确问题并表明自己的立场;(2)主张观点:阐述并说明自己的观点。

第二段:展开论证:(1)论据1:举例子或引用分析证据,支持自己的观点;(2)论据2:注重分析、引用可靠数据证据;(3)反驳异议:对于反对自己观点的人的反驳。

第三段:总结:(1)重申自己的观点;(2)指出自己的观点的优势;(3)提出建议,呼吁或预测未来的趋势。

2. Argument论文模板第一段:介绍论据(1)阐述论据的背景和环境(2)对论据进行分析评估(3)表态自己对论据而言的看法第二段:具体阐述论据的缺陷(1)列举论据的明显缺点或假设偏差;(2)指出假设偏差造成的问题。

第三段:提出其他解释或替代性解释(1)提出其他可能的原因或原因;(2)说明其他可能的结论对原论据的适用性。

第四段:总结(1)重申自己的立场;(2)简明扼要地说明论据的问题;(3)提出建议。

三、GRE作文写作技巧1、做好提纲,避免跑题。

在考试期间,要充分把握时间,做好提纲,确保写出的答案是紧密相连的,并清新易懂。

2、使用具体的实例。

在GRE作文中,使用具体的实例能帮助考生证明自己的立场是正确的,能够更好地帮助读者或考官理解文章的理论框架。

3、写出清晰有条理、简洁明了的文章。

考生的作文既要清晰,又要跑题。

选择一些简单和明了的例子作为文章的支撑,能够更好地表现出自己的写作技巧。

4、避免因人而异的文化和价值观。

gre英语考试作文范文汇总

gre英语考试作文范文汇总

gre英语考试作文范文汇总GRE写作想要在短时间内得到提升,大家可以多看一些满分范文,这有助于大家更好地了解写作高分的秘诀,店铺为大家整理了相关的范文,供大家参考学习。

希望对大家接下里的写作备考有更好的帮助。

GRE写作满分范文1The following appeared as a letter to the editor of a local newspaper."Five years ago, we residents of Morganton voted to keep the publicly owned piece of land known as Scott Woods in a natural, undeveloped state. Our thinking was that, if no shopping centers or houses were built there, Scott Woods would continue to benefit our community as a natural parkland. But now that our town planning committee wants to purchase the land and build a school there, we should reconsider this issue. If the land becomes a school site, no shopping centers or houses can be built there, and substantial acreage英亩数,面积would probably be devoted to athletic fields. There would be no better use of land in our community than this, since a large majority of our children participate in sports, and Scott Woods would continue to benefit our community as natural parkland."This letter to the editor begins by stating the reasons the residents of Morganton voted to keep Scott Woods in an undeveloped state. The letter states that the entire community could benefit from an undeveloped parkland. The residents of the town wanted to ensure that no shopping centers or houses would be built there. This, in turn, would provide everyone in the community with a valuable resource, a natural park.The letter then continues by addressing the issue of building a school on the land. The author reasons that this would alsobenefit the entire community as a natural parkland since much of the land would be devoted to athletic fields. The author of the letter comes to the conclusion that building a school on the land would be the best thing for everyone in the community.This letter is a one-sided argument about the best use of the land known as Scott Woods. The author may be a parent whose child would benefit from a new school, a teacher who thinks a school would boost the community, or just a resident of Morganton. Regardless of who the author is, there are many aspects of this plan that he or she has overlooked or chosen to ignore.Using a piece of land to build a school is not the same thing as using it for a natural parkland. While all the members of the community could potentially benefit from a parkland, only a percentage of the population would realistically benefit from a new school. The author fails to recognize people like the senior citizens of the community. What interest do they have in a new school? It only means higher taxes for them to pay. They will likely never to and utilize the school for anything. On the other hand, anyone can go to a park and enjoy the natural beauty and peacefulness. The use of the land for a school would destroy the benefit of a park for everyone. In turn, it would supply a school only to groups of people in exactly the right age range, not too young or too old, to reap the benefits.Another point the author stresses is that the use of the land for things like athletic fields somehow rationalizes the destruction of the park. What about children who don't play sports? Without the school, they could enjoy the land for anything. A playing field is a playing field. Children are not going to go out there unless they are into sports. There are manychildren in schools who are not interested in or are not able to play sports. This is yet another group who will be left out of the grand benefits of a school that the author talks about.The author's conclusion that "there would be no better use of land in our community than this...""is easily arguable. The destruction of Scott Woods for the purpose of building a school would not only affect the ambience of Morganton, it would affect who would and would not be able to utilize the space. If the residents as a whole voted to keep Scott Woods in an undeveloped state, this argument will not sway their decision. The use of the land for a school will probably benefit even less people than a shopping center would. The whole purpose of the vote was to keep the land as an asset for everyone. The only way to do this is to keep it in an undeveloped state. Using the land for a school does not accomplish this.Comments:This outstanding response begins somewhat hesitantly; the opening paragraphs summarize but do not immediately engage the argument. However, the subsequent paragraphs target the central flaws in the argument and analyze them in almost microscopic detail.The writer's main rebuttal points out that "using a piece of land to build a school is not the same thing as using it for natural parkland." Several subpoints develop this critique, offering perceptive reasons to counter the argument's unsubstantiated assumptions. This is linked to a related discussion that pointedly exposes another piece of faulty reasoning: that using land for athletic fields "rationalizes the destruction of the park."The extensively developed and organically organized analysis continues into a final paragraph that takes issue with theargument's conclusion that "there would be no better use of land in our community than this."Diction and syntax are varied and sophisticated, and the writer is fully in control of the standard conventions. While there may be stronger papers that merit a score of 6, this response demonstrates insightful analysis, cogent development, and mastery of writing. It clearly earns a 6.GRE写作满分范文2The following appeared as a letter to the editor of a local newspaper."Five years ago, we residents of Morganton voted to keep the publicly owned piece of land known as Scott Woods in a natural, undeveloped state. Our thinking was that, if no shopping centers or houses were built there, Scott Woods would continue to benefit our community as a natural parkland. But now that our town planning committee wants to purchase the land and build a school there, we should reconsider this issue. If the land becomes a school site, no shopping centers or houses can be built there, and substantial acreage would probably be devoted to athletic fields. There would be no better use of land in our community than this, since a large majority of our children participate in sports, and Scott Woods would continue to benefit our community as natural parkland."The author's argument is weak. Though he believes Scott Woods benefits the community as an undeveloped park, he also thinks a school should be built on it. Obviously the author is not aware of the development that comes with building a school besides the facilities devoted to learning or sports. He does not realize that parking lots will take up a substantial area of property, especially if the school proposed is a high school. We are notgiven this information, nor the size of the student body that will be attending, nor the population of the city itself, so it is unclear whether the damage will be great or marginal. For a better argument, the author should consider questions like what sort of natural resources are present on the land that will not remain once the school is built? Are there endangered species whose homes will be lost? And what about digging up the land for water lines? It is doubtful whether the integrity of Scott Woods as natural parkland can be maintained once the land has been developed. It is true that a school would probably not cause as much damage as a shopping center or housing development, but the author must consider whether the costs incurred in losing the park-like aspects of the property are worth developing it, when there could be another, more suitable site. He should also consider how the city will pay for the property, whether taxes will be raised to compensate for the expense or whether a shopping center will be built somewhere else to raise funds. He has not given any strong reasons for the idea of building a school, including what kind of land the property is, whether it is swampland that will have to be drained or an arid, scrubby lot that will need extensive maintenance to keep u p t h e a t h l e t i c g r e e n s . T h e a u t h o r s h o u l d a l s o c o n s i d e r t h e o p p o s i t i o n , s u c h a s t h e p e o p l e w i t h o u t c h i l d r e n w h o h a v e n o i n t e r e s t i n m o r e a t h l e t i c f i e l d s . 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T h e e s s a y i d e n t i f i e s s e v e r a l r e a s o n s t o s u p p o r t t h i s c r i t i q u e . T h e w r i t e r t h e n p o i n t s t o t h e i m p o r t a n t q u e s t i o n s t h a t m u s t b e a n s w e r e d b e f o r e a c c e p t i n g t h e p r o p o s a l . T h e s e a d d r e s s / p > p s t y l e = " t e x t - i n d e n t : 2 e m ; t e x t - a l i g n : l e f t ; " b d s f i d = " 9 8 " > - - t h e c o s t s v e r s u s t h e b e n e f i t s o f d e v e l o p i n g S c o t t W o o d s / p > p s t y l e = " t e x t - i n d e n t : 2 e m ; t e x t - a l i g n : l e f t ; " b d s f i d = " 9 9 " > - - t h e i m p a c t o f d e v e l o p m e n t o n S c o t t W o o d s / p > p s t y l e = " t e x t - i n d e n t : 2 e m ; t e x t - a l i g n : l e f t ; " b d s f i d = " 1 0 0 " > - - t h e p o s s i b i l i t y o f " a n o t h e r , m o r e s u i t a b l e s i t e " / p > p s t y l e = " t e x t - i n d e n t : 2 e m ; t e x t - a l i g n : l e f t ; " b d s f i d = " 1 0 1 " > T h e ge n e r a l l y t h o u g h tf u l a n a l y s i s n o t e s s t i l l m o r ef l a w s i n t h e a rg u m e n t : / p > p s t y l e = " t e x t - i n d e n t : 2 e m ; t e x t - a l i g n : l e f t ; " b d s f i d = " 1 0 2 " > - - wh e t h e r t h e s c h o o li s n e c e s s a r y / p > p s t y l e = " t e x t - i n d e n t : 2 e m ; t e x t - a l i g n : l e f t ; " b d s f i d = "1 0 3 " > - - w h e t h e r t h e s e l e c t e d s i t e i s a p p r o p ri a t e / p > p s t y l e = " t e x t - i n d e n t : 2 e m ; t e x t - a l i g n : l e f t ; " b d s f i d = " 1 0 4 " > - - w h e t h e r s o m e g r o u p s m i g h t o p p o s e t h e p l a n / p > p s t y l e = " t e x t - i n d e n t : 2 e m ; t e x t - a l i g n : l e f t ; " b d s f i d = " 1 0 5 " >A l t h o u g h d e t a i l e d a n d c o m p r e h e n s i v e , t h e w r i t e r ' s c r i t i q u e i s n e i t h e r a s f u l l y d e v e l o p e d n o r a s t i g h t l y o r g a n i z e d a s r e q u i r e d f o r a 6 e s s a y . T h e r e s p o n s e e x h i b i t s g o o d c o n t r o l o f l a n g u a g e , a l t h o u g h t h e r e i s s o m e a w k w a r d p h r a s i n g ( e . g . , " . ? ? r a i n i n g a l l i e s t o c h a n g e a p a r k t o a s c h o o l " ) . O v e r a l l , t h i s e s s a y w a r r a n t s a s c o r e o f 5 b e c a u s e i t i s w e l l d e v e l o p e d , c l e a r l y o r g a n i z e d , a n d s h o w s f a c i l i t y w i t h l a n g u a g e . / p > p s t y l e = " t e x t - i n d e n t : 2 e m ; t e x t - a l i g n : l e f t ; "b d s f i d = " 1 0 6 " >。

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1.保证:assurance/guarantee一.作文重点题目➢社会与自然:Society should make efforts to save endangered species only if the potential extinction of those species is the result of human activities.社会应该努力拯救濒危物种,只要这些物种的灭绝是人类活动的结果。

The speaker claims that society should make efforts to save endangered species only caused by human activities. I agree with the speaker insofar as saving endangered species is the responsibility of human beings. After all, human beings are the ruler of nature. But, in my perspective, merely focusing on saving those endangered species only caused by human activities is unilateral.1.The variety of plant and animal is important to practical utilization.1)Discovering the order of evolution;2)Valuable gene pool and raw material drug: traditional Chinese medicine.3)Technological imitation from the specious: sonar as a result of imitating dolphin.2.Human should do so even from a moral position.1)Plant and animal is the most important components of nature. When all ...die out, the daywill come soon.2)Human beings as the ruler of nature should take the responsibility to help other species.Let alone those endangered species because of human activities.3)Men have the responsibility to rescue: pollution, environments destroy, catching andkilling excessively causing the plant and animal to die out much faster. For example: tiger and whale;3.However, some kinds of1)"Survival of fittest": some animals do have their lethal shortages and would decline evenwithout humans, saving those species which are biological elimination is against the nature and of no help.2)When we save a kind of animal, we may do harm to another kind. Thus the proper way isthat human should try their best to keep the balance of nature as it is rather than change the nature as humans' purpose. Human and Nature should perform their own functions respectively.3)Instead of saving, the restrictions on human ourselves are more important: pollution,environmental destroy, catching and killing excessively.4)The extinction of species is the warning of the deterioration of the environment whichwould early or late threaten human beings.Conclusion:No matter from the position of practical utilization or morality, human both should ... However, it should be noticed that... Therefore, we should find out the real reason of dying out. Furthermore, we should pay more a...to➢教育目的:Educational institutions should actively encourage their students to choose fields of study that will prepare them for lucrative careers.教育机构应该积极鼓励学生选择那些为将来高收入工作铺路的研究领域。

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GRE写作正文部分的模板?One may wonder/doubt the generalization / objectivity of…?While….appears to…,…is perhaps unwarranted in light of the thin and misleading information provided.?This evaluation of the University of Claria is too brief, and too general. Nothing is mentioned about...?The assumption that…. Unfortunately ,it is often not the case.?Another area of investigation necessary before conclusions can be reached is...?The argument above is weakened by the fact that it does not takesintosaount the inherent differences between skaters who wear gear and those who do not.?A major flaw in the argument is that no other factors are pointed out that might be causing2.对这点进行猜测,列出种种可能--极端的情况---驳论;1)用猜测的语气:It is possible that,Perhaps...,It also might be the case that , It could be that, ...are likely to..., Itis at least likely that , It also fails to correlate , If....then..., It is entirely possible that further research would indicate that2)陈述的语气:the argument fails to consider the possibility that , Author fails to rule out , For a better argument, the author should consider questions3)疑问的语气---一般疑问句,特殊疑问句3.对作者为提及这点的原因的猜测--极端的原因--肯能是因为不利于作者论点的原因。

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GRE满分作文开头模板模板一In summary, the conclusion reached in this argument is in valid and misleading. To make the argument more convincing, the arguer would have to prove that college-bound students are most concerned about the promise of jobs after graduation and the F College can keep its promise in the end. Moreover, I would suspend my judgment about the credibility of the recommendation until the arguer can provide concrete evidence that promising students jobs can actually encourage them to work harder in their study. Otherwise, the arguer is simply begging the question throughout the argument.模板二To conclude, the argument is not persuasive as it stands. Before we accept the conclusion, the arguer must present more facts that GT has indeed to meet the requirements of C Corporation. To solidify the argument, the arguer would have to produce more evidence concerning the foods and service of D and how they can better meet the needs of C’s employees.模板三As it stands, the argument is not well reasoned. To make it logically acceptable, the arguer would have to demonstrate that an offer of employment to the spouse is the only condition that new professors consider on accepting P’s offer. Additionally, the————来源网络搜集整理,仅供个人学习查参考arguer must provide evidence to rule out other possible causes of the low staff morale at the university.模板四To sum up, the conclusion lacks credibility because the evidence cited in the analysis does not lend strong support to what the arguer maintains. To strengthen the argument the arguer would have to provide more evidence concerning the percentage of the affected families and their geographical distribution. To better evaluate the argument, we would need more information regarding the electric expense relevant to the actual amount of time for cooling among, respectively, the three groups of households and the amount of electricity used for other purposes in all three groups of families under survey.模板五In conclusion, the arguer fails to establish a causal relationship between sending Get-Away’s mechanics to the Quality-Care Seminar and improved maintenance, greater customer satisfaction and greater profits for the airline. To strengthen the argument, the argument, the arguer would have to provide evidence that automobile maintenance and airplane maintenance are similar in every aspect. To better evaluate the argument, we would need more information about the relationship between improved maintenance and greater customer satisfaction along with greater profits.。

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1 调查The survey that the argument cites is potentially problematic in three respects.Firstly,the author does not provide complete information concerning……in illustrating that …The author only informs us that …,but we care more about is that…..which is no t provided by the author.However,some other substantial information are needed for us to access the soundness of the argument.There exists the possibility that the conclusion would vary greatly when other conditions varied.For lack of detailed information about……we can hardly evaluate……Secondly,the sample of the survey cited in the argument is too small because the author provides only N samples of the general population.The limited sample is insufficient to draw any general conclusion about……Without addi tional samples from diverse geographic locations,I cannot accept the author’s generalization about……Thirdly,we should also notice that the respondents studied in the survey may not represent the general group of ……It is entir ely possible that people incl ined to ……were more likely to respond to the survey and more willing to express their own opinions than other people.Other people who did not respond may hold a totally different position toward the issue studied,and the author should include those people in the study to present a more convincing result.Without knowing whether the sample studied was representative of the overall population ,it is impossible to confidently apply the results to that population.2 错误因果①没有因果关系,是其他因素所导致The author unfairly ass umes that it is ……that resulted in ……But we can find no concrete evidence to substantiate the inevitable relationship betwe en…and ….The author overlooks other factors that might have contributed to ……..Perhaps,……..Pe r haps,……..Since the author has failed to consider and rule out these possibilities,the assertion that …cannot be taken seriously.②同时发生不为因果The author unfairly assumes that it is ….that resulted in …….. The assumption is based on the mere fact that the two events occurred during the same period.However,we all know that merely a coincidence of two events could not sufficiently demonstrate a causal relationship between them. The author overlooks other factors that might have contributed to ……..Perhaps,……..Pe r haps,……..Since the author has failed to consider and rule out these possibilities,the assertion that …cannot be taken seriously.③前后发生不为因果The author unfairly assumes that it is ….that resulted in ……..The assumption is based on the mere fact that ….occurred after…. The author overlooks other f actors that might have contributed to ……..Perhaps,……..Pe r haps,……..Since the author has failed to consider and rule out these possibilities,the assertion that …cannot be taken seriously.3 错误类比①认为适合A也适合BIn the argument the author recommends A to carry out same(policies,actions,solutions)on…as B,but the analogy between them might be unsubstantiated.The author fails to illustrate that A and B are similar enough at every aspect and are indeed comparable.While it is true that A and B share some common ground on ……,there are still some obvious differences between them.Many differences may exist between A and B,thus there may be the possibility that the(policies,actions,solutions)proved to be effective for A might not have the same effectiveness for B.In short ,without accounting for possible differences between…and…,the director cannot convince me that this recommendation for…is sound.②错误对比AB,A不一定比B好The author hastily implies that A is superior to B in …….,but the comparison between A and B is incomplete.Th e author only compares……However,there may be other factors which would bring about totally different result for the comparison.Without any further consideration about these factors,the author could not convince us that A is better than B in certain aspect merely based on an incomplete comparison.③过去不能推未来In the argument the author suggests that we can solve current problems or achieve current goals through methods which have successfully solved the same kind of problems in the past.There is a hidden assumption assumed by the author that all conditions and factors upon which the effectiveness of the method depend have remained unchanged during the past N years.However,many conditions and factors could have varied greatly.Thus,the method proved to be effective in the past might not have the same effectiveness in current days /in the future.Without taking into account all these constantly changing factors,the author could not convince us that the proposed solution could be used to solve current problems successfully.④没考虑其他变量The author unfairly assumes that it is ….that resulted in ….The causal relationship is convincing only if the author could demonstrate that all other factors that mightaffect ….remained unchanged during the same period.(The speaker must also assure me that the study was performed in a controlled environment where all factors possibly affecting ….remained unchanged. )The author overlooks other factors that might have contributed to ……..Perhaps,……..Pe r haps,……..Since the author has failed t o consider and rule out these possibilities,the assertion that …cannot be taken seriously.⑤偷换概念错误地用A来证明BIn illustrating the assumption that….the author commits a fallacy of hasty generalization:The author cites A to prove B,however,A is not a good indication ofB.Obviously,there are basic differences between A and B,thus A could not be properly used to illustrate B.The author ought to make careful and clear differentiation between A and B before we could evaluate it.4 解决办法①解决办法不够有力The author assumes that the proposed actions are both sufficient and necessary for achieving certain goal.However,to solve the problem successfully,many other fundamental requirements must be fulfilled.Furthermore ,many other available methods besides the author’s proposa l could also be used to achieve the same purpose.Before the author make a careful and thorough comparison between the effectiveness of his own proposal and other possible methods,the author’s proposal shou ld not be hastily carried out.②没有考虑解决方法所带来的坏处In claiming that … the author needs to do more comprehensive research on both positive and negative effects of the proposal.Although the proposal could be adopted to solve the problem to a certain degree,carrying out the proposal may actually bring about more harmful effects ignored by the author..Perhaps,…Perhaps…..Before the author make a careful and thorough research on the effects of the proposal,the author’s proposal shou ld not be hastily carried out.③二者选一,没有考虑其他解决办法The author simply assumes that the situation would be either A or B,while the two…are not necessarily mutually exclusive.Many other solutions could be more justifiable.For instance ,….Before ruling out all the possibilities above,the author could not convince us that there are only those two possible solutions/choices for us to accept.5开头In this argument,the speaker concludes that …To justify this conclusion the speaker cites a recent survey of …citizens/students suggesting that …The author also concludesthat …..This argument depends on several unsubstantiated assumptions and is therefore unpersuasive as it stands.6结尾In conclusion, the argument unfairly assumes that ......To streng then the argument ,the author must provide clear evidence that.......The author must also provide clear evidence that...In order to evaluate the argument,we should need more information about (I)would also need to know……对样本调查的要求To better evaluate the realiza bility of the study upon which the author’s conclusion depends,I would need more information about the size and makeup of the study’s sample. 7引证段落The major problem with this argument is that…Another point worth considering is that…Before I come to my conclusion,it is necessary to point out another flaw appeared in the argument.8 利润问题Even if the author’s prop osal could be carried out effectively,we still could not hastily assume that …will necessarily earn a substantial profit,as the author predicted.To evaluate the profitability of …we should consider the function of both revenue andexpense.However,the author does not provide any single piece of information about the possible cost of carrying out the author’s proposal.If the cost of carrying out the proposal exceeds projected revenue,it would be profitless.So,without more information about the costs,it is imp ossible to assess whether carrying out the author’s proposal will be profitable.开头:①……②When it comes to …,there are always a host of different opinions held by different individuals from different areas.③Dose/Have….?④Admittedly,most people would cons ider that……⑤However,…中间段:①It’s true that the speaker’s assertion that…②Beyond this concession,however,I still cannot totally agree on this statement because it seems to recommend that…③Finally,and perhaps the most importantly…结尾:①In some,ev en though…,yet…②Actually…③延伸To sum up,I concede the speaker’s claim that…Nonetheless,it overrates the weightiness of…举例子:Examples are all around us.History are filled with the examples of…产生影响:It will exert remarkable influence on…常用句:Explosive development of science and technology has been made during the past one hundred years or so.。

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ArgumentSample 1In this argument the author employs a variety of evidence about Paleans, including their geographical isolation and the discovery of a basket, to argue that Palean baskets could have been made by non-Palean cultures. We may accept part of the author’s claim regarding the Paleans, but in the absence of some critical evidence, we cannot accept the conclusion that the Paleans have no means of transporting one of their baskets to other region.In the first place, the author assumes that the Paleans could not have reached Lithos because no Palean boat has been found. However, the author is treating a lack of proof that the Paleans could have possessed some kind of boat as sufficient proof that they did not possess any such vehicles at all. From the passage we are only informed that Palean boats “were not found〞, but the mere fact that no boat found currently could not fully illustrate that the Paleans did not have boats. We need concrete evidence to show that the Paleans did not master the skill of shipbuilding.Granted that the Paleans did possess no boats, we still need evidence to prove that the basket could not have arrived in Lithos by other means. Although the Brim River is deep and broad at present, it might be shallower and narrower at Palean time, or at least some sections of the river were less deep and broad at that time. If so, the Paleans could have crossed the river without boat. Some archaeological and geological records or documents about the condition of the Brim River at ancient time might be useful for evaluating the argument.Assuming that the river was also deep and broad in ancient time and can be crossed only by boat, there is a possibility that some vehicles were in the possession of a second culture with whom the Palean people kept in contact. The second culture might have brought the discovered basket to Lithos during trading or other activities. Also possibly, the basket may have been brought to Lithos by some other people latterly after the disappearance of the Paleans, or may have drifted to the site due to geological accidents such as a flood. The author should provide evidence to show that Paleans had no significant contact with other cultures who possessed boats, and that the basket could not be carried to the site through other methods such as trading or some accidents. We still cannot rule out the possibility that the baskets were unique to Palean culture without such information.In sum, the conclusion is hastily reached. Before the claim that other cultures could have produced so-called Palean baskets is accepted, the author should provide concrete evidence to show that Paleans were never capable of building boats. The author also needs to rule out other possible ways by which the basket could travel to other places.In the argument the arguer points out that Crust Copper Company (CCC) has purchased a vast of land in West Fredonia and that mining here will inevitably lead to tremendous pollution. To avoid such environmental problems, the arguer suggests that boycott towards products produced by CCC will be an effective measure. Well-intentioned the arguer may be, several unwarranted assumptions may render the boycott unnecessary or ineffective.First, the underlying assumption that the deterioration of environment and disturbance to endangered animals will inevitably occur is open to doubt. Ten thousand square miles are, without any doubt, so large an area that almost make up the total territory of New York City, there is likelihood that only a very small proportion of the land is used for mining. Furthermore, with the advanced technology of waste disposal and environmental-friendly recycling, the pollution, if any, can be so insignificant that almost has no negative effect to the environment. Even if the exploration is heavy, the arguer does not inform us to what extent the mining areas and the habitat of endangered species overlap. If they locate far away from each other, the mining would have little effect to local animals. Without taking these factors into consideration, the arguer could not successfully convince us that CCC’s mining process will bring about horrible results, and the boycott would be totally unnecessary in this case.Second, the feasibility of the arguer’s pro posal can also be cast doubt on. The proposal could be smoothly carried out only if the consumers can reliably distinguish products that are made with CCC’s copper. We all know that only the brand of the final producer will be engraved to a product. For instance, if a copper lock is manufactured, consumers can only identify the brand of the lock company. It is unlikely that a nonprofessional consumer can tell the material supplier of a certain product. Even assuming that consumers can effectively recognize copper products made with CCC’s copper, and that the vast majority of such consumers can be gathered by certain means, whether all of them are willing to cooperate in the boycott is still not guaranteed. It is highly possible that most consumers care more about the quality and cost of a product while little about environmental problems. If the consumers cannot distinguish products using CCC’s copper, or they have no interest in the boycott, the proposal would be meaningless at all, let alone prevent environmental problems.In conclusion, the argument is unpersuasive and the arguer should provide additional information to demonstrate that CCC will cause a disastrous effect on the environment of West Fredonia once its mining plan is carried out. The arguer also needs to prove that the proposed boycott is not only practically feasible, but also sufficient and necessary for the arguer’s purpose.In this argument the manager suggests that Rialto must offer same features as Apex, a newly opened theater, to attract moviegoers. The manager describes many fancy functions featured by Apex and the dissatisfaction of moviegoers about the high price of new movies. However, merely these facts could not prove that the proposed action will guarantee Rialto’s share of the market.A foremost question is: whether Apex was really a great success? We are not informed about the actual profit and the number of moviegoers of Apex. It is possible that the costs of these fashionable features are so high that the ticket prices of Apex are higher than other theaters, which will further prevent moviegoers on a tight budget from going to it, or that the ticket income of Apex remains low although it had featured those functions.Granted that Apex has gained great profits, we may still ask that whether the success resulted from those new features. Many other factors would also influence people’s choice on a theater. For example, people would be concerned more about the distance of the theater from their houses. Meanwhile, whether the lack of these features has caused a decreased share of moviegoers for Rialto is open to doubt. Perhaps the total number of residents in down town area was decreasing recently, and therefore Rialto could not attract as many people as before.Another question that should be addressed is the comparability of the two theaters. As we know, many factors would make them quite different from each other: their locations, the types of movie they mainly feature, the ticket price, etc. Any one of these factors would make the measures less effective in Rialto as in Apex. The manager cannot convince us that Rialto could gain profits by simply copying the features of Apex.Furthermore, we may question the reliability of the survey. We could not be sure if the respondents of the survey are representative of the overall population of the city and constitute a large number of people. Besides, granted that the respondents’ opinion could represent that of our general residents, Rialto could take other actions as response, such as featuring some formerly-released movies with lower price.It is understandable that a theater should struggle for its survival. But before the manager could provide complete information about the actual profits of Apex, and show clear evidence that Apex has attracted many moviegoers because of its new features, we could not hastily conclude that providing these features at Rialto would secure its future prosper.Basing on the assumption that farmers are receiving excessive profits on increased supply of milk, the author recommends Batavia government to regulate retail milk prices. Admittedly, it is the responsibility of the government to ensure the stability of the market, however, several questions must be addressed before we could determine whether the regulation will be necessary and effective for lowering milk price.A critical assumption of the argument is that the farmers are receiving unreasonable profits, which is unwarranted before several factors have been considered. A foremost question is that whether the number of dairy farms could accurately reflect the supply of milk, for there is no necessary relationship between them. It is possible that the average milk supply of each single farm has dropped and therefore the total supply would not increase. It is also possible that a great proportion of milk produced has been processed to other dairy products or has been exported. The milk supply on market will decrease in these cases.Granted that the supply of milk did increase during the past decade, we may well ask that whether the prices of milk are increasing all over the country. The author provides only one sample----the Excello market to illustrate the variation of milk price, but many factors may render the situation at the market unrepresentative of the national trends. Perhaps the supply of milk in the region where the market locates was relatively lower than national average, or the milk production is much more costly here due to some geographic factors. Any one of these possibilities would make the higher milk price in Excllo totally a normal phenomenon.Even if the prices of milk were also doubled throughout the country, just as happened in Excello, the author overlooks a myriad of economic factors that would result in the increase. Consider, for example, the cost of milk production and transportation might have increased as well during the same period, or perhaps the supply of milk could not meet the demand in spite of an increased supply. The author also needs to inform us how much did the price of milk actually increase after adjustment for inflation. Without accounting for these factors, the author could not convince us that farmers have received excessive profits and that the regulation is indeed necessary.Finally, even if the author can successfully address all the questions foregoing, it is unjustifiable to conclude that the regulation of retail milk prices could ensure an adequate supply of milk and therefore, a fair price. It is likely that the regulation would reduce the profits of farmers; they might be less interested in producing milk, or will produce less milk as a response. If so, adopting the author’s recommend ation will actually lead to inadequate supply of milk rather than the optimistic result expected by the author.Undoubtedly, the author’s intention of keeping the market stable and ensuring fair price of milk is justified. But to convince us that the regulation is necessary to ensure a reasonable milk price and adequate supply, the author must substantiate the assumption that the profits received by farmers are undeserved and that the regulation is sufficient for ensuring lower price. Hastily carrying out such regulation would actually pose negative effects on the supply of milk.The fewer sick days and lower diagnosis of stress-related illness in Leeville may, to some extent, indicate better health status of residents. But the situation could also be explained by many other factors. It is too hasty for the Chamber of Commerce to conclude that it is the relaxed pace of life that brings those health benefits.First of all, the Chamber implies that Leeville residents are in satisfying health condition, which serves as a foremost premise of the argument. However, the number of sick days and the diagnosis of stress-related illness do not necessarily indicate the health condition of residents. The fewer sick days may result from strict restrictions on sick leaves at Leeville factories; or perhaps the workers will receive harsher punishment once they take too many sick leaves, thus they will be unable to take more sick leaves as a result. Another explanation is that the workers might be unwilling to be absent from work for certain reasons. Similarly, the fewer diagnosis of stress-related illness could also be explained by other reasons. It is possible that people in Leeville are not willing to visit doctors for these diseases, or maybe there are some differences in the diagnostic criteria of the disease in the two cities. If the criterion or definition of the disease is more rigorous in Leeville than in Masonton, then it is conceivable that the incidence of such disease in Masonton will be higher. In this case, the diagnosis of this illness could not accurately reflect the actual level of stress of residents, let alone their actual level health.Granted that Leeville residents are living healthier lives, physically and mentally, there are still many other factors, rather than the relaxed pace of life suggested by the Chamber, that could contribute to the situation. The myriad factors might include better environment and weather, healthier life style in Leeville, which will lead to good health condition and less illness. It is also possible that the working condition and work ethic in Leeville factories are better than those in Masonton, or Leeville has harmonious neighborhoods, which could explain the lower level of mental stress.As commonly known, a relaxed pa ce of life often promotes people’s health status, but we cannot conclude that the better health of Leeville residents is also the result of their pace of life. The Chamber should consider and rule out all other possibilities before we could be convinced that the relaxed lifestyle is the actual and only explanation for the health condition of Leeville residents.。

GRE 作文满分模板Arguement

GRE 作文满分模板Arguement

GRE ARGUMENT 1On the other hand, Ii n the follow-up study the版权声明: 文书的刊登已经过顾客的授权许可, 详情请参见我们的隐私条款, 如果您的文书在经过我们的修改润色后成功帮助您申请到心仪的学校, 您也可以选择将您的申请文书授权给我们, 我们将把您的文书加入到此栏目中, 和更多的同学一起分享. 同时我们对愿意提供给我们做范文的客户会有一定的回馈活动, 具体活动请联系客服详询, 更多修改范文, 欢迎随时来电来函咨询!say. To fix this problem, use clearer words and write more directly with as few words as possible to get your meaning across.I think you can add more to your last 2 paragraphs. The second to last paragraph is only2 sentences, and your argument isn’t really developed (see my comment on the side). If you cannot think of anything else to add, maybe you could delete this paragraph. Your last paragraph, the conclusion, could be improved by going over the rest of yourarguments and summarizing them. Keep the last 2 sentences, though, because they are good for ending.版权声明这篇范文的刊登已经过顾客的授权许可,Best Writing 拥有此篇范文的版权。

GRE写作开头结尾各段落实用模板句式

GRE写作开头结尾各段落实用模板句式

GRE写作开头结尾各段落实用模板句式开头段落模板句式:1. 引出话题:- In recent years, 【话题】 has become an increasingly controversial issue. - Nowadays, 【话题】 is a matter of great concern for many people.2. 提出观点:- It is widely believed that 【观点】.- There is a growing consensus that 【观点】.3. 引用相关数据或事实:- According to a recent survey, 【数据】.- It is estimated that 【数据】.4. 反驳或对比不同观点:- However, there are those who argue that 【反方观点】.- Despite the widespread belief that 【观点】, there are some who disagree.结尾段落模板句式:1. 总结观点:- In conclusion, 【观点】.- To sum up, 【观点】.2. 强调重要性:- It is crucial that we 【行动】 in order to 【结果】.- Therefore, it is essential that we 【行动】 in order to 【结果】.3. 呼吁行动:- It is high time that we 【行动】.- It is imperative that we 【行动】.4. 展望未来:- With 【观点】 in mind, we can look forward to a brighter future.- By 【行动】, we can make a positive impact and create a better future.。

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承认+递进+转折二. 新GRE作文常用句式开头:a) In this statement, the speaker asserts that…(作者的结论是什么)b) I agree with the speaker insofar as...(某种程度上同意作者的观点)c) Whereas, in my perspective, …is unilateral(作者的观点片面在什么地方)第二段:a) Admittedly,第三段:a) However,第四段:a) Furthermore,结尾:a) In summary, from what has been discussed above, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that…(重述观点)以上就是新GRE作文模板及GRE作文常用句型的介绍,以后考生们进行新GRE作文issue写作就再也不用担心文章的结构了,顺利的剖析题目,与新GRE写作模板再加上独特的观点,即可将高分顺利那些。

页脚内容11Argument1.1) In this argument the speaker concludes that2) To justify this contusion the speaker cites a recent survey of 3) The speaker also points out that4) This argument is unpersuasive for several reasons. 2.1) First, the survey must be shown to be reliable before I can accept any contusions based upon it. 2) Specifically, the responses must be accurate, and the respondents must be statistically significant in number and representative of the overall3) Without evidence of the survey's reliability, it is impossible to draw any firm conclusions about the current dietary habits of 3.1) Second, the argument relies on the dubious assumption that following the government's nutrition recommendations2) It is entirely possible that3) Thus without evidence to substantiate this assumption the speaker cannot reasonably conclude that4) Third, the speaker assumes too hastily that… Without ruling out this possibility the speaker cannot reasonably conclude with any confidence that5) Lacking firm evidence that …, the speaker cannot justify any conclusions about the 4.页脚内容21) Finally, even if the …, the speaker overlooks the possibility that2) Unless all other habits affecting health have remained unchanged, the speaker cannot justifiably conclude that the overall 5.1) In sum, the argument is unconvincing as it stands. To strengthen it the speaker must show that the survey accurately reflects 2) The speaker must also show that3) Finally, to better assess the argument I would need more information about the manner and extent to which页脚内容3新GRE Argument作文句型开头In this analysis, the arguer claims that …should …To substantiate the conclusion, the arguer cites the example of …where …In addition, the arguer assumes that …This argument is unconvincing for several critical flaws.正文:For instance …since …what’s more …etc.and how well it represented the public opinions..The sample of the survey is not representative.(样本太小)the sample is too small to...(光数字没比例)the ratio of four to sixthere is only figures but no proportion of the survey 还是ratio?Insufficient SampleIf the [respondents] only stand for a tiny proportion of the whole [group], we should not be so sure about the conclusion that [the whole group…]The arguer commits a fallacy of hasty generalization.页脚内容4It was only carried out in Sun City, but the arguer applies its result to all the company’s markets while doesn’t show us whether Sun City is a representative market of the whole markets.有的病人会对抗生素过敏the arguer commits a fallacy of hasty generalization. Even if the maintenance of the airline has been improved as a result of sending its mechanics to the Seminar, which is, of course, an unwarranted assumption, it does not follow that就算怎样,也不怎样The survey is based on two isolated examples. The arguer should survey more hospitals of both types.循环假设The arguer commits a fallacy of begging the question in assuming that …结尾:other possible causes of the …To conclude, this argument is not persuasive as it stands.页脚内容5GRE作文准备一、ARGUMENT大纲1、文章开头In this analysis the arguer attempts to convince us that_________.To substantiate the claim , the arguer provides the evidence that ____________(and that _____________).Another piece of evidence presented to support the argument is that______________This argument is also based on the assumption that__________________As it stands ,this analysis is unconvincing for several critical flaws.2、文章主体错误类比问题:First of all, the argument is based on a false analogy.The arguer simply assumes that_________ but he does not provide any evidence that is indeed comparable.As we know, the two situations are not similar enough to justify the analogical deduction.In fact , there exist fundamental differences between them.(such as___)Therefore, even though_____proved effective in doing_______there is no guarantee that it will work just as well for__________ As a result, we cannot safely assume that____________.页脚内容6无法建立因果关系问题:In the second place ,the author groundlessly assumes that______bears some relation to ______However, the author provides no evidence to support that this is the case, nor does the author establish a causal relationship betwe _________and ___________.It is highly possible that other factors might contribute to the(_/change/progress).For example,______ it is also likely b just resulted from _________.Lacking evidence that links a to b, it is presumptuous to suggest that a was responsible for b.部分不能说明整体的问题:The evidence the author provides is insufficient to support the conclusion drawn from it.Merely one example is insufficient to establish a general conclusion.Based on a specific example of_________, it is logically unsounded to make suggestion for all_________.In fact, in face of such limited evidence, it is fallacious to draw any conclusion at all. Unless it can be shown that_______ representative of all______, any conclusion we drawn is completely unwarranted.还有其它原因的问题:By concluding that sb must do a or must do b, the author commits a fallacy of “false dilemma”.The author assumes that a and b are the only available solutions to the problem.However, A and b are not necessarily mutually-exclusive alternatives.It is more likely that other factors might also contribute to the problem.页脚内容7For example,_______________.If so, just doing a and b would not solve the problem.急于概括,得出结论过早,考虑不周到的问题:In addition, the arguer commits a fallacy of hasty generalization.Even if_________, it does not follow that________.It is highly possible that other factors may have contributed to b______For instance,___________Besides, the arguer does not provide any solid information concerning______Unless________, which is unknown from this argument, there is no guarantee that___ Without ruling out these and other possib factors that give rise to b, the author cannot confidently conclude that________________.前后关系混同于因果关系问题:The arguer assumes that just because b happens follows a, then b has been caused by aHowever, no evidence is provided to support that this is the case.The mere fact that a occurs before b does not necessarily establish a causal relationship between a and b.It is highly possible that other factors might also bring about these same results.For instance,________in addition,______________Without ruling out these and other possible factors that give rise to b, the author cannot confidently conclude that________页脚内容8解决方法的唯一性问题:The arguer’s recommendation is based on the assumption that no alternative means of doing sth are available.However, the arguer fails to offer any evidence to substantiate this crucial assumption. It is highly possible that means other than th would more effective to solve the problem. Without considering and ruling out these and other alternative means of doing sth, th author cannot confidently conclude that__________整体规律不一定适用于个人问题:The arguer assumes the characteristics of a group apply to every member of that group.The conclusion that____________ is based on the assumption that________However, there is no guarantee that this is the case, nor does the author provide any evidence to substantiate this assumption.A great deal of empirical evidence shows that________Lacking such evidence the author cannot draw any firm conclusion.从过去不能推知现在和将来问题:It is assumed without justification that background conditions have remained the same at different times(conditions).The arguer unfairly infer from_______in the past that__________However, he/she fails to offer any evidence to substantiate this inference.It is very likely that___________, or that_________.Any of these scenarios, if true, would serve to undermine the claim that_______.调查数据的有效性问题:页脚内容9Finally, the arguer provides no assurances that the survey on which the argument depends is statistically reliable.Lacking information about the number of______surveyed and the number of respondents, it is impossible to assess the validity of th results.For example, if_________ were surveyed but only________ responded, the conclusion that_________would be highly suspected Another problem is the representativeness of the respondents.Were they representative of all the__________?Were___chosen for the survey chosen randomly or did they volunteer for the survey?Lacking such evidence the author cannot draw any firm conclusion based on the study.3、文章结尾In summary, this argument is not persuasive as it stands.To strengthen the argument , the arguer would have to provide evidence that_________.二、ISSUE大纲1、文章开头There is a growing public concern over the issue of__________. The speaker in the title statement advocates that________. At th first glance, this opinion seems to be somewhat appealing, but further reflection tells me that I cannot agree with it for the followin reasons. (in my point of view, I agree with the speaker on the grounds that_____)2、文章正文先攻击后让步:页脚内容10The first reason why I support / disagree with above statement is that______Secondly,___________.Further more,__________.However, it should be admitted that __________先让步后攻击:First of all, I must admitted that______Although I agree that ______,I insist that _________ .In the first place ,____________In the second place ,__________Further more,_________.3、文章结尾From what has been discussed above (Taking into account all these factors / Judging from all evidence offered), we may safely dra (reach / come to / arrive at) the conclusion that_____________4、关于论据事实与例证:for example; for instance; to illustrate; as an illustration数据:statistics权威或名言:as sb put it,“_____”; according to sb , “_____”(最好对权威加以定义,如Pr.——,a well-known scholar (sociology ,education, psychology-------at Peking university ).轶闻趣事,案例,故事:a case in point is______; __________ serves as a typical example页脚内容11个人经历:personal experience,可作为个案,不能多用设想:scenario, imagine that ______类比:analogy; similarly , ___________页脚内容12。

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