云南省楚雄2016中考英语作文复习

书面表达（15分）题目+提示语的小短文。

研究（2004—2015年云南省中考作文）

（一）主体；围绕一个中心，来叙述一件事，表达出相应的真情实感，写一篇夹叙夹议的小短文。

（二）审题目：确定中心，选取体裁。

（三）构思：111：第一段点题（1—2句话）；第二段（叙事）；第三段（总结性话语）；131：（介绍性的说明文）第一段点题；第二段；从三个方面描述（6个句子）；第三段（总结性话语）

（四）先打草稿、修改好，再誊写。

（五）临考前，打造10篇小作文：多用熟悉短语、句型。（不用汉语式英语）

（六）关注热点：①十八大：全民小康。②环保：污染治理③禽流感：H7N9

（七）作文范例

一、梦想话题（5篇）

二、节约低碳话题（8篇）

三、学校生活业余生活课外（社团）活动（11篇）

四、如何使用压岁钱（2篇）

五、安全话题（3篇）（共29篇）

梦想话题（5篇）

1.

最近，你们学校开展了以“中国梦，我的梦”为主题的活动，作为一名中学生应该有自己的梦想，你的梦想是什么呢？请你以“My Dream”为题写一篇英语短文。

My Dream

Everyone has his dream. My dream is to be a doctor. When

I was in Grade Seven, I was sick and often went to see doctors.

The doctors were very friendly to me and they often cheered me up. With the help of them, I was getting better. Now I’m very healthy. Since then I have hoped to become a doctor. In order to achieve my dream, I will study hard. I’ll give my love to the patients as much as possible and help them out of danger.

To be a doctor is really great. I think my dream will come true one day.

2.

请以“My dream”为题写一篇英语作文，供英语课上交流。

（3条）

2、表中右栏信息仅供参考，也可自由发挥；词数80个左右

My Dream

I want to be a writer when I grow up. Writing has been part

of my life. Through writing I will be able to share my ideas and make friends with others.

I can achieve my dream by reading widely and by working

hard at school to learn as much as possible. It's also important to find out how successful people did it so that I could learn from them. I’m determined to hold on to my dream till one day it come true.

3.

最近，广安市掀起“实现伟大中国梦，建立美丽繁荣和谐广安”为主题的教育活动。某中学的English Club正在举办围绕这一主题的征文活动。假如你是该中学的一名学生，请你根据以下内容提示及要求，并结合自身实际写一篇应征稿。

内容提示：◆尊敬师长，礼貌诚实

◆友善待人，乐于助人

◆节约食物，不要浪费

◆遵守交规，不闯红灯

◆保护环境，美化城市

参考词汇：respect(v.尊敬)、 obey、traffic lights

要求1．字数80字左右，不包含已给出的句子字数。

2．要点完整，适当发挥，意思连贯。语句通顺．书写规范。

3．文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息。

Making Guang’an b etter and better

These days, people in Guang'an are doing“Achieving China Dream, make Guang'an better and better．”As middle school students, we should do some things for it. First of all，we should respect our teachers, parents and the old. Also, we ought t o be polite and honest. Second, it‘s always good to be kind, friendly and helpful to others. Third, we must obey traffic rules and mustn’t cross the streets when the traffic lights are red. Last but not least, it’s important and necessary to help protect the environment. For example, we shouldn’t spit here and there or throw litter about. We‘d better not pick flowers or step on the grass.