上海高考英语作文指导 作文课件
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假设你是李华，交换生Tracy刚刚结束在你们学校的 学习生活，已经返回英国。作为班长，请你根据以下 内容用英语写一分感谢信，感谢她一学期以来带给大 家的美好回忆： • 1. 怀念与她相处的快乐时光； • 2. 感谢她对大家英语学习的帮助； • 3. 感谢她为班级捐赠的英文书籍； • 4. 欢迎她有机会再来中国。 注意：1.书信应包括以上所有要点,可适当增加细节，
以使行文连贯；2.词数:100左右
卷面篇
养眼的…
当批到下午两点看 到了它们…
老师最恨的作文…
老师最喜欢的作文…
作文五档：（ 从教师阅卷印象角度划分 ）
• 漂漂亮亮 （21—25分） • 有模有样 （16—20分） • 马马虎虎 （11—15分） • 稀里糊涂 （6—10分） • 一塌糊涂 （0—5分）
4. They found
5. What makes
6. We saw
7. He asked
8. I
saw
the table clean.
the door green.
supper dinner.
the house dirty.
him
sad?
him
out.
me
to come back soon.
them getting on the bus.
Ｓ +Ｖ +IO +Ｏ（主＋谓＋间宾＋直宾）
此句型的句子有一个共同特点：谓语
动词必须跟有两个宾语才能表达完整的意 思。这两个宾语一个是动作的直接承受者， 另一个是动作的间接承受者。
通常这一间接承受者用一个介词来连 接，当动作的间接承受者在动作的直接承 受者之前时，这一介词往往被省略。
上海英语新高考概要写作精讲PPT课件(共9页)
解题思路
Dirt
Getting rid of dirt, in the opinion of most people, is a good thing. However, there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.
In the early 16th century, people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease, as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with hot water could open up the skin and let ills in. A particular danger was thought to lie in public baths. By 1538, the French king had closed the bath houses in his kingdom. So did the king of England in 1546. Thus began a long time when the rich and the poor in Europe lived with dirt in a friendly way. Henry IV, King of France, was famously dirty. Upon learning that a nobleman had taken a bath, the king ordered that, to avoid the attack of disease, the nobleman should not go out.
高考英语作文写作公开课PPT课件
2023-12-23
PowerPoint courseware for the open class of English position and writing in the college entrance examination
Student exercises and mentsSuggestions for preparing English positions for the college entrance examination
THANKS
Summary
Accumulating vocabulary is the key to improving English writing ability.
Candidates should focus on accumulating monly used vocabulary and phrases, and continuously expand their vocabulary through reading, writing, and practice. Vocabulary cards, word software, and other tools can be used to assist memory.
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To enhance students' ability to express their ideas clearly and effectively in English
To familiarize students with different types of writing tasks and formats monly accounted for in the college entrance examination
PowerPoint courseware for the open class of English position and writing in the college entrance examination
Student exercises and mentsSuggestions for preparing English positions for the college entrance examination
THANKS
Summary
Accumulating vocabulary is the key to improving English writing ability.
Candidates should focus on accumulating monly used vocabulary and phrases, and continuously expand their vocabulary through reading, writing, and practice. Vocabulary cards, word software, and other tools can be used to assist memory.
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01
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To enhance students' ability to express their ideas clearly and effectively in English
To familiarize students with different types of writing tasks and formats monly accounted for in the college entrance examination
高考英语写作指导课课件
A good composition
content structurelanguage
be attractive, beautiful,completed in a limited time!
2020/3/7
DISCUSSION: What is a good writing？ Content:
Everything which is related to your view needs to includ.(内容要完整) （内容要点一个也不能丢，如果人家给的是文字 提示，可以用笔在试题处标出1,2,3,4，如果人 家给的是图，那要先看懂图的意思，六个图都 要看看再动笔，不要看了一个马上就写。）
2020/3/7
总结：什么样的作文是一篇好作文
• 无遗漏信息点，即要点全面 • 篇章条理清晰：分段和过渡词 • 句式复杂多样 • 地道的高级词汇和恰当的词组
接下来，我们具体感知一下优秀作文的要素。
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二、感知典型范例
——词汇层面1 • adj. 聪明的、脑筋好的
• clever •→ wise •→ smart •→ bright •→ intelligent
Not long ago I won the first prize in the English contest_h_e_l_d___in our school.(12 山东)
2020/3/7
3. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things. (使用名词性从句) _W__h_a_t_s_u_r_p_r_i_s_es__h_im___is__th_a_t____ the little girl knows so many things.
content structurelanguage
be attractive, beautiful,completed in a limited time!
2020/3/7
DISCUSSION: What is a good writing？ Content:
Everything which is related to your view needs to includ.(内容要完整) （内容要点一个也不能丢，如果人家给的是文字 提示，可以用笔在试题处标出1,2,3,4，如果人 家给的是图，那要先看懂图的意思，六个图都 要看看再动笔，不要看了一个马上就写。）
2020/3/7
总结：什么样的作文是一篇好作文
• 无遗漏信息点，即要点全面 • 篇章条理清晰：分段和过渡词 • 句式复杂多样 • 地道的高级词汇和恰当的词组
接下来，我们具体感知一下优秀作文的要素。
2020/3/7
二、感知典型范例
——词汇层面1 • adj. 聪明的、脑筋好的
• clever •→ wise •→ smart •→ bright •→ intelligent
Not long ago I won the first prize in the English contest_h_e_l_d___in our school.(12 山东)
2020/3/7
3. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things. (使用名词性从句) _W__h_a_t_s_u_r_p_r_i_s_es__h_im___is__th_a_t____ the little girl knows so many things.
上海英语新高考写作课件
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历年真题分析
年份
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2015
2016
近年上海英语高考作文题型分析
Guided Writing作文题
针对小学新生课堂一角的图片，进行描述、比较 和谈感受。
作文体裁
图片描述（说明+议论）
题目类型
客观描述+主观感受 类题目
申请扶贫项目，帮助困难地区儿童。
应用文之申请信（应用+说明） 客观说明描述类题目
对观察到的两堂绘画课进行具体描写，并谈 感受和启发。
应用文之日记体，图片描述 （应用+说明+议论）
客观描述+主观感受 类题目
对举办名画展的场所二选一，说明写作目的、 表达选择及陈述选择理由。
应用文之书信体，表达主观态度/观 点并进行论证（应用+议论）
主观理由型题目
（3）评分时，会先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定所属档次，然后 对照相应的组织结构档次给予加分。其中，内容和语言两部分相加， 得15分或以上者，可考虑加4—5分，15分以下者只能考虑加0、1、2、 3分。
（4）词数少于70，总分最多不超过10分。
英语高考指导性写作的分值及评分标准
档次
A B C D E
对从英文旅游杂志上看到的某景区门票价格不统 一的情况，给杂志编辑写信，介绍看到的内容，
表达自己对此事的态度并陈述理由。
应用文之书信体，介绍内容、表达主观 态度/观点并进行论证（应用+说明+议
论）
客观描述+主观理由 型题目
2020.1.
对某超市关于如何处理临近保质期的食物的征求 应用文之书信体，表达主观态度/观点并
高考英语作文写作公开课PPT课件
What is the ideal length for an English composition in the college entrance examination? The ideal length for an English composition depends on the specific requirements of the exam, but generally, it should be between 150-250 words
Motivation and funding: Encourage students to continue in their writing practice and provide positive feedback to boost their confidence
Critique of language use: Assess the language proficiency of students and provide guidance on improving their vocabulary, grammar, and presence structure
Writing format guidance
Instrument students on the appropriate format for different types of writing, such as essays, letters, and narrativscriptive Composition
This type of composition is focused on describing a person, place, thing, or event in detail It requires the student to use rich and vivid language to create a sense of presence and importance
上海新世纪高考英语作文分类讲评范文课件(共27张PPT)
• As long as we …., we will resolve the problem eventually.
作文范文：Junk message
• 目前垃圾短信泛滥，给人们生活带来困扰，分析原 因谈谈如何解决这个问题。
•
Junk messages are in the air. People are caught up
• 分为4段 • 第一段：陈述现状
• 第二段：优点罗列；缺点罗列
• 第三段: 表明自己的态度 • 第四段: 总结
二图表类别：最近学校在高中生中做一次 :有烦恼向谁说？的调查活动，谈谈想法和理由。
Recently, a survey on the topic ‘ whom do you turn to when in trouble’ has been carried out in our school which has aroused a heated discussion among students.
• Anti-junk-message war can be demanding , but it will be worth the efforts to free people form the constant assault presented by these unwelcomed visitor.
• There is no doubt that mobile phones have their advantages. As a communication tool, mobile phones connect people conveniently. We can use mobile phones to call or send text messages to each other, keeping in touch with the outside world. On the other hand, mobile phones also have disadvantages.
作文范文：Junk message
• 目前垃圾短信泛滥，给人们生活带来困扰，分析原 因谈谈如何解决这个问题。
•
Junk messages are in the air. People are caught up
• 分为4段 • 第一段：陈述现状
• 第二段：优点罗列；缺点罗列
• 第三段: 表明自己的态度 • 第四段: 总结
二图表类别：最近学校在高中生中做一次 :有烦恼向谁说？的调查活动，谈谈想法和理由。
Recently, a survey on the topic ‘ whom do you turn to when in trouble’ has been carried out in our school which has aroused a heated discussion among students.
• Anti-junk-message war can be demanding , but it will be worth the efforts to free people form the constant assault presented by these unwelcomed visitor.
• There is no doubt that mobile phones have their advantages. As a communication tool, mobile phones connect people conveniently. We can use mobile phones to call or send text messages to each other, keeping in touch with the outside world. On the other hand, mobile phones also have disadvantages.
高考英语作文指导ppt
高考英语作文指导(共42张PPT)作文课 件作文 指导优 秀作文 专题课 件中考 作文高 考作文 ppt
Ｓ
Ｖ（及物）Ｏ（宾语）
Ｃ（宾补）
1. We keep
2. They painted
3. They call
4. They found
5. What makes
6. We saw
7. He asked
基本句型三： Ｓ +Ｖ +Ｏ （主＋谓＋宾）
基本句型四： Ｓ +Ｖ +IO +Ｏ（主＋谓＋间宾＋直宾）
基本句型五： Ｓ +Ｖ +Ｏ +Ｃ（主＋谓＋宾＋宾补）
基本句型 一
Ｓ +Ｖ（主＋谓）
此句型的句子有一个共同特 点，即句子的谓语动词都能表达 完整的意思。
这类动词叫做不及物动词， 后面可以跟副词、介词短语、状 语从句等。
高考英语作文指导(共42张PPT)作文课 件作文 指导优 秀作文 专题课 件中考 作文高 考作文 ppt
基本句型 五
Ｓ +Ｖ +Ｐ（主＋系＋表）
此句型的句子有一个共同的特点：句子谓语 动词都不能表达一个完整的意思，必须加上一个 表明主语身份或状态的表语构成复合谓语，才能 表达完整的意思。这类动词叫做连系动词。系动 词分两类：be, look, feel,smell,taste,sound 等属一类，表示情况；get, grow, become, turn,go等属另一类，表示变化。be 本身没有什 么意义,只起连系主语和表的作用。其它系动词 仍保持其部分词义另:stay,prove,remain,stand
Ｖ （不及物动词）
flies. rose. cooked. eat, and drink. laughed? woke. talked for half an hour. walked yesterday is playing have gone
高考英语作文写作公开课PPT课件
What is the ideal length for a college entrance English composition?
The ideal length is typically 200-300 words, depending on the specific requirements of the exam
Conclusion Writing
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Sample text analysis
An in-depth analysis of narrative writing samples
Through in-depth analysis of narrative writing samples, students will understand how to construct story plots, shape character images, and use language skills to express emotions and themes.
What are the common mistakes students make in English composition?
Common misses include poor grammar, weak vocabulary, unclear organization, and lake of origin or depth in analysis
Grammar Control
Correctly use tensions, sense structures, and punctation
Fluent Expression
Write in a smooth and coherent man with proper transitions
高考英语写作指导课件PPT
高考英语写作指导课件PPT【PPT实用 课件】
1.
2. 3.
（非限制性）定语从句 It was quite an experience for us both, which I’ll never forget for the rest of my life.
There is no doubt + that 从句 There is no doubt that we will win.
P3 S10 conclusion
高考英语写作指导课件PPT【PPT实用 课件】
转折关系： however, while, on the contrary, on the other hand, nevertheless, otherwise 让步关系： despite, in spite of
高考英语写作指导课件PPT【PPT实用 课件】
We should pay attention to coping with serious problem.
Attention should be paid to coping with the serious problem.
有意识地将学过的好词好 句恰当地运用，少用过难、 甚至超纲的词汇；注重行文 的逻辑结构，平时养成片段 式的思维方法。
importan t significant/vital/ crucial/ indispensible
高考英语写作指导课件PPT【PPT实用 课件】
高考英语写作指导课件PPT【PPT实用 课件】
problem issue/crisis/ dilemma
very
fairly/considera bly
打破全篇人做主语窘状
Because people fail to realize the importance of our environment, water and air are seriously contaminated.
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? Thirdly, the job of a tour guide is quite demanding and needs continuous efforts. Being both physically and mentally well, I'm fully prepared to embrace all kinds of challenges in the work.
上海高考英语Biblioteka 文指导作文课件——One with both description and illustration
上海高考英语作文指导
作文课件
The basic structure
? Part One: Introduction
Background information
Personal point of view
? Secondly, I believe that a certain extent of knowledge in history, culture and customs is what a tour guide can't afford to lack. Therefore, an interest in culture since early of my age serves to make me a qualified tour guide.
? 自己的看法（议论）要观点明确，适当加入一些自己 的分析或说明可以使文章内容更饱满。
Concluding Paragraph
? So I strongly appeal that teachers provide us with more of such activities to enhance our ability to express ourselves, cooperate with each other and bring about more sound effects in the shaping of us young students.
作文题目：
? 请简要介绍一次给你留下深刻印象的课堂小组活动， 并谈谈你对这种组织形式的看法。
An outline
? Para. 1：引入话题 ? Para. 2：活动的过程 ? Para. 3：“我”的看法 ? Para. 4：结论
Brainstorming
Group activities
What's the theme?
? （简要）描述段落不要流水账，对事件的描述要有 重点、有目的性，为下文的议论做好铺垫。
Developing Paragraph (II)
? Since then I have changed my view on the group activity in class. It is not a boring discussion that most of us think it might be, or a chat that has nothing to do with our study, but a process of sharing different ideas and cultivating a creative mind.
What does the teacher assign?
What do students do?
What do you get?
What's your attitude?
A more specific outline
? Para. 1 ：引入话题 ? Para. 2：活动的过程 ? Para. 3 ：“我”的看法 ? Para. 4 ：结论
Opening Paragraph
? Open the book of memory, and I can easily recall many wonderful group activities in class. A shining experience lies in my heart-- one in a Chinese lesson.
? 开门见山，导入话题的语句要有，但最多不超过 2句。
? 第一段要亮出全文中心观点或主题。
Developing Paragraph (I)
? That day, our Chinese teacher asked us to tell a historical story to others which was not known to many people and make a discussion about it. What surprised me much was not the heated discussion, but the stories we ourselves told. I had never expected that almost everyone had a fertile knowledge and broad horizons . There were so many interesting stories as I had never heard. In the end, we all began to realize that it was the real purpose of the teacher of this lesson.
? Part Two: Body
Topic SenDteesncrcieptsio&n aSnudpiplluosrttriantigonsentences
? Part Three: Conclusion
?
Conclusion, proposal, determination, expectation
? Firstly, a good command of English adds to my confidence in accomplishing all the tasks well. Since English is a universal language, being equipped with a large vocabulary and fluent in spoken English will play a big role.
上海高考英语Biblioteka 文指导作文课件——One with both description and illustration
上海高考英语作文指导
作文课件
The basic structure
? Part One: Introduction
Background information
Personal point of view
? Secondly, I believe that a certain extent of knowledge in history, culture and customs is what a tour guide can't afford to lack. Therefore, an interest in culture since early of my age serves to make me a qualified tour guide.
? 自己的看法（议论）要观点明确，适当加入一些自己 的分析或说明可以使文章内容更饱满。
Concluding Paragraph
? So I strongly appeal that teachers provide us with more of such activities to enhance our ability to express ourselves, cooperate with each other and bring about more sound effects in the shaping of us young students.
作文题目：
? 请简要介绍一次给你留下深刻印象的课堂小组活动， 并谈谈你对这种组织形式的看法。
An outline
? Para. 1：引入话题 ? Para. 2：活动的过程 ? Para. 3：“我”的看法 ? Para. 4：结论
Brainstorming
Group activities
What's the theme?
? （简要）描述段落不要流水账，对事件的描述要有 重点、有目的性，为下文的议论做好铺垫。
Developing Paragraph (II)
? Since then I have changed my view on the group activity in class. It is not a boring discussion that most of us think it might be, or a chat that has nothing to do with our study, but a process of sharing different ideas and cultivating a creative mind.
What does the teacher assign?
What do students do?
What do you get?
What's your attitude?
A more specific outline
? Para. 1 ：引入话题 ? Para. 2：活动的过程 ? Para. 3 ：“我”的看法 ? Para. 4 ：结论
Opening Paragraph
? Open the book of memory, and I can easily recall many wonderful group activities in class. A shining experience lies in my heart-- one in a Chinese lesson.
? 开门见山，导入话题的语句要有，但最多不超过 2句。
? 第一段要亮出全文中心观点或主题。
Developing Paragraph (I)
? That day, our Chinese teacher asked us to tell a historical story to others which was not known to many people and make a discussion about it. What surprised me much was not the heated discussion, but the stories we ourselves told. I had never expected that almost everyone had a fertile knowledge and broad horizons . There were so many interesting stories as I had never heard. In the end, we all began to realize that it was the real purpose of the teacher of this lesson.
? Part Two: Body
Topic SenDteesncrcieptsio&n aSnudpiplluosrttriantigonsentences
? Part Three: Conclusion
?
Conclusion, proposal, determination, expectation
? Firstly, a good command of English adds to my confidence in accomplishing all the tasks well. Since English is a universal language, being equipped with a large vocabulary and fluent in spoken English will play a big role.