四级历年作文题目类型及要求

四级历年作文题目类型及要求常见的基本错误：大错：跑题：（给定的题目一定要用），所写内容一定要符合给定的题目，不但内容如此，给定的题目还需要多次出现，如给定的题目“recreational activities”,则文章中一定要反复出现，不能都用“video games”替换,偶尔个别处可以用“recreation ”或“entertainment”等同义词替换，但recreational activities一定要多多出现，避免文不对题之嫌。

结构失衡（中间段应为重点），多数情形下，三段之中的文字比例为1：3：1。

不按照提纲写：一定要按照给定的提纲思路写作。

比如说：Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Recreational Activities, You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:1．娱乐活动多种多样2．娱乐活动可以使人们收益，也可能带来危害3．作为大学生，我认为….那么，第二段应对娱乐活动的正面和反面效果都论及（正面给出2原因，反面给出2 原因）如果看到的提纲是：1．娱乐活动多种多样2．娱乐活动可以使人们收益3．作为大学生，我认为…则第二段只应提及娱乐活动有益的一面（这种只论述一方面的情形要给出3个原因比较合适），当然在第三段（作为大学生，我认为…）可以简单提及其无益的一面，表明其危害性，倡导合理处理学习和娱乐活动。

但无论如何，第二段应为main body,要用较多笔墨。

差字数：文章虽然规定不少于120字，但最好写到150字左右。

应用文格式不对：大家一定要看清题目要求，“essay”为一般议论文或记叙文,多为“三段式”；如果是应用文的话则有标志性的词语，如“announcement”(口头通知) ”speech”,” letter”“notice”（书面通知），都有其各自固定格式。

详细说明见后面。

连续错误：大小写（句号后，第一个单词的首字母应为大写）The opinions on recreational activities always vary from person to person. s ome are in favor of the idea of participating in recreational activities. t hey hold their view for the reason that recreational activities, singing songs or dancing in particular, can help to relax us both mentally and physically.一句结束后应为句号，而非逗号The opinions on recreational activities always vary from person to person, Some are in favor of the idea of participating in recreational activities,They hold their view for the reason that recreational activities, singing songs or dancing in particular, can help to relax us both mentally and physically.举例错误，In today’s so ciety, we have many recreational activates. Such as singing, dancing, play football, play basketball.此句中，such as 不能独立成句，而要和前面的句子搭配才对，修改如下：In today’s society, we can choose to take part in a variety of recreational activates, such as singing,dancing, playing football, playing basketball, etc.注意：etc=and so on ,举例时，可以用下面的结构：Nowadays, there is a heated discussion about the issue of recreational activities in the society. It is not uncommon that different persons entertain themselves in different ways. Some like singing and dancing, others are fond of watching movies or TV series.Some students choose electives simply because they have too much free time in their hands. Some students just want to acquire more knowledge and broaden their horizon, since the information and knowledge learned in regular classes is still far from enough. There are still some students who pick up electives out of their interest and on an impulse. On the contrary, other students select electives with a clear purpose in their mind, that is, to learn some practical skills. By doing so, they can make themselves more competitive in future job-hunting when they are to graduate.怎样才能有亮点，请看下面我们用“原因分析＋解决办法”模版写出的文章；（模版见后面）Nowadays, there is a heated discussion about the issue of the pollution of environment. It is not uncommon that （亮点：It形式主语用法，it is adj that，it is adj for sb to do sth）air and rivers have been heavily polluted.What’s worse, even our health is being threatened.A number of factors are responsible for this phenomenon. For one thing, with the improvement of our living quality,（亮点：with+名词结构）more and more people can afford to use modern facilities, like cars and air conditioners, which makes the environment worse（亮点：which定于从句用法）．For another, factories of increasing numbers have been established, pumping their wasters into rivers and lakes.（ing表结果，加分）To put an end（亮点：高级搭配）to such a serious problem is not easy at all, but is worth trying. As college students we should try our best to avoid polluting the environment in our daily life so as to improve the present situation.（亮点：高级搭配）On the part of （亮点：高级搭配）the government, it is urgent for it to set some laws and regulations to severely punish those who do harm to the environment.（亮点：It形式主语用法，it is adj that，it is adj for sb to do sth）Only in this way,（亮点：倒装句）can we be successful in dealing with pollution of environment. With all the efforts,（亮点：with+名词结构）I am convinced that everything will be much better in the future.打分标准：2 points （基本没有一句正确的话，字数不足，且拼写错误多）Recreational activities have very much kinds, it inclouad PE, art activit, musick, play games and so on. So much kinds recreational acitivities in our morden world so that our think unclear.Recreation activities have two face. Fine face make people pleasing. For example, sport make people is full of living. When you hard work, you listet musick. But another face is bad. It make some young man cannt to work. Student cannt standby.As a unitered student we should see our clean true world and find himself valuou.5 points （错误多，字数比较危险，且逻辑混乱）Nowadays, people’s press is growing larger. They need more to take it easy. Recreational activities are the best way to choose. There are many kinds of different recreational activities such as from out to in door, from body to mental. Every body can choose the most proper for himself.However, the recreational actitivites may also do harm to the people when they could help one. They will take more time from you. You will have no heart to work. It can also make you lost large money.Above all, I think we need recreational ativitities, but hard work is more important for us.8 points （有一定语言能力，最大的问题就是结构乱，没有逻辑，缺少连接过渡，这也是很多同学存在的问题，对于这一点，我们所给的模版正好应对）In recent years, with the developing of economics and social, there are more and more recreational activities. If you have enough time, you can participate in these activities everyday.However, is it good for our life to have more recreational activities? It’s my mind that recreational activities must adapt to our life styles. We must make a good choice on how much time we can used to work and how much to recreational activities. If we put sometimes on recreational activities, but not much more time, we can have a healthy life. But if we put all time on it and don’t work, it’s very harmful to our life.As a college student, the major duty is study hard. We can have recreational activities, but we can’t forge that our duty is still study. I hope we can manage well our time.11 points （语言不错，但稍显平淡，且仍有错误）Today people have all kinds of recreational activities. (have过于平淡，改：nowadays, we are accessed to all kinds of recreational activities)With the help of the computer and the internet, we may choose to play computer games or enjoy ourselves on the Internet(with+名词结构，加分). Taking exercise is also a good choice. It may relax us and be good to our health（这种v+and be 结构要避免，改：it can relax us, good to our health 或者it can relax us and benefit our health）. And reading books is also a good kind of recreational activities (activity).But we should remember that recreational activities have both good and bad effects. With a little (a few) recreational activity (activities) after working, you can relax yourself, and improve your work efficiency. Recreational activities can also make you more friends. (结构不对，改：you can also make friends through recreational activities或者recreational activities may also offer you a good opportunity to make friends with others )But too much recreational activity (too many recreational activities)is (are )bad for us. If you are addicted to such games, you cannot do your work or study(意思不到位,改：you will be unable to concentrate on your work or study). It is also do harm to your health.(大错，改：it is also harmful to your health 或it also does harm to your health)As a university student, we should balance our work and play. Work hard when studying and play hard when playing. (口语化太强，play hard说话不够地道，改为：it is suggested that we should focus on work when working and enjoy ourselves when taking part in recreational activities )By doing so recreational activities make our life more beautiful. (结构不对，改：bydoing so, we can benefit a lot from recreational activities 或者only by so doing can we benefit a lot from recreational activities)14 points （基本无明显错误，且有亮点：with,ing,ed, 定语从句，it形式主语，倒装，the more…the more等）Nowadays, there are a variety of recreational activities for people to take part in.（a variety of用得好）Some like singing and dancing, while the others are fond of watching movies or TV series. (应为：Some like singing and dancing, others are fond of watching movies or TV series.值得表扬的是：like , be fond of的交替使用避免了重复，加分) People are free to choose whatever recreational activities they like.It is obvious that recreational activities are relaxing and people can benefit from them. （it形式主语，加分点：it is adj that，it is adj for sb to do sth）Furthermore, people can develop interest and make friends through those activities, which make their life colorful. （which,定语从句加分点）However, recreational activities can also do harm to them. It is commonly seen that a youngster gets addicted to a certain recreational activity and wastes a lot of time and money in, resulting in his falling behind in his study or work.（it形式主语，加分点：it is seen that; resulting in, ing表结果，加分）As a college student, I think we must try not to break the balance between study and leisure. (比较别扭：As a college student, I think we should spare no efforts to strike/keep the balance between study and recreational activities). Recreational activities are a necessary part of our life but we shouldn’t spend too much time on them. We should concentrate on our study instead of indulging ourselves with recreational activities. (instead of , indulge 用得好，但最好用indulging ourselves in recreational activities)一．常考题材四级考试作文一般不会考查涉及知识面过广或专业性太强的题材，从历年真题来看，四级作文具有很强的现实性，主要涉及两类内容：一类是关于大学生的学习、校园生活及对将来的工作、人生等方面的态度和看法，如200７年12月的作文题是关于大学选课。