基础写作之----人物介绍
申论作文人物讲解
申论作文人物讲解
中国历史上有许多杰出的人物,他们的成就和贡献深深地影响着我们的社会和国家发展。
以下是其中几位具有代表性的人物的简要介绍。
第一位是孔子,他是我国古代最杰出的思想家、教育家和政治家之一。
他提出了“仁者爱人”、“君子修身齐家治国平天下”的理念,并开创了儒家学派。
孔子的思想深受后世影响,成为中国几千年来的思想基石和道德规范。
第二位是屈原,他是古代中国的伟大诗人和政治家。
他是《楚辞》的主要作者,他的作品富有悲壮和浪漫的情调,深受后世诗人的推崇。
屈原对楚国政治和文化的发展也有重要的影响,他主张“民贵君轻”,对统治者的政治理念产生了积极的启示作用。
第三位是郑成功,他是明末清初的抗清名将。
郑成功力主抗清复明,率领部队在台湾岛上建立了抵抗清军的根据地,并以精湛的军事才能和卓越的领导能力,多次打败清军的进攻。
他的抗清精神和民族意识激励着后来的中国人,成为了中国历史上的英雄人物之一。
第四位是邓小平,他是中国改革开放的总设计师。
邓小平提出了“一切从实际出发”的理念,带领中国进行了一系列经济和政治的改革,使中国迈向了现代化的道路。
他的开拓性思维和决策勇气为中国的发展打下了坚实基础,被誉为中国改革的伟大领袖。
以上简单介绍了几位具有代表性的中国历史人物,他们各自在不同的领域做出了巨大贡献,对中国社会和国家的发展产生了深远影响。
他们的事迹和精神将永远激励着我们,鼓舞着我们为实现国家伟大复兴而不懈努力。
基础写作—人物简介
Practice makes perfect.
写作内容: 写作内容: 题目: Swimmer---Michael 题目:Great Swimmer--Michael Phelps 米高. 菲尔普斯是美国一位非凡的游泳运动员。 1. 米高.菲尔普斯是美国一位非凡的游泳运动员。 1985年 30日出生于美国马利兰州巴尔的摩市 日出生于美国马利兰州巴尔的摩市。 1985年6月30日出生于美国马利兰州巴尔的摩市。 岁开始游泳,经历了许多艰苦的训练。15岁的 2. 他7岁开始游泳,经历了许多艰苦的训练。15岁的 时候,他参加了2000年奥运会,并在200 2000年奥运会 200米蝶泳比赛中排 时候,他参加了2000年奥运会,并在200米蝶泳比赛中排 名第五。据报道,他是这次次奥运会中自1932 1932年以来竞争 名第五。据报道,他是这次次奥运会中自1932年以来竞争 的最年轻的男性选手。 的最年轻的男性选手。 在北京奥林匹克运动会,菲尔普斯实现了他的8 3.在北京奥林匹克运动会,菲尔普斯实现了他的8枚 金牌梦,打破了7个世界纪录,创造了历史。 金牌梦,打破了7个世界纪录,创造了历史。 你的启示。 可以用谚语) 4. 你的启示。(可以用谚语) 写作要求:只能用5个句子表达全部的内容。 写作要求:只能用5个句子表达全部的内容。 参考词汇:迈克尔.菲尔普斯Michael Phelps; 参考词汇:迈克尔.菲尔普斯Michael Phelps; 马利兰州巴尔的摩市 Baltimore, Maryland ; 非凡的extraordinary..蝶泳butterfly extraordinary..蝶泳butterfly。 非凡的extraordinary..蝶泳butterfly。
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On November 4,2008, Barack Obama defeated John McCain in the general election ,making him the first African ,making American President of the United States.
人物介绍
Hobbies
*love / like / enjoy / be fond of (doing)
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钟南山1941年出生在广州,他是中国最 伟大的医生之一.
Born in Guangzhou in 1941, Zhong Nanshan is one of the greatest doctors in China. Zhong Nanshan, one of the greatest doctors in China, was born in Guangzhou in 1941. 概况: 尽量用分词短语、同位语结构,使文 章简洁,通顺
我很善长口语,计算机是我的强项。
I’m good at spoken English and even better at using computers. 在他的业余时间里她大都听音乐读小说.
In her spare time she spends much time listening to music and reading novels.
二、常用词汇和句型: 1概况age, sex, birth-place, background *…was born on… / in… *…is 15 (years old) & a boy of 15 & a 15-
基础写作之-人物介绍
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文学作品中的人物介绍
01 分析文学作品的主题和情节,确定人物在作品中 的地位和作用,如主角、配角、反派等。
选取具有代表性和感人至深的 事件和经历,展现人物的品质 和精神风貌,激发读者的共鸣 和关注。
虚构人物介绍
根据创作需求和故事情节,构思 虚构人物的基本信息和背景,包 括姓名、年龄、性别、职业等。
设定虚构人物的性格特点和行为 习惯,以及其与其他人物的关系
和互动方式。
通过虚构人物的语言、行为、心 理等方面的描写,刻画出独特、 鲜明的人物形象,为故事情节的
实事求是
在介绍人物时,要遵循实 事求是的原则,不夸大其 词也不歪曲事实。
客观评价
对人物的评价要保持客观 公正的态度,避免主观臆 断和情感色彩过浓。
全面展现
在介绍人物时,要尽量全 面展现其各个方面的特点 和经历,使读者对人物有 一个全面的了解。
不同类型人物介绍的写作要
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历史人物介绍
确定历史人物的时代背景和身份地位,包括其政 01 治、经济、文化等方面的成就和贡献。
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文学创作中的人物塑造
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塑造个性鲜明的人物
通过人物介绍,展现人物的独特性格、行为习惯、 价值观念等,使人物形象更加立体、生动。
推动情节发展
人物介绍在文学作品中常作为情节发展的铺垫, 通过介绍人物之间的关系、矛盾冲突等,为故事 展开打下基础。
人物地点介绍(基础写作)
Possible version: The first African-American president Barack Hussein Obama, whose father is from Kenya and mother is a white American, was born on August 4, 1961. In 1983, he graduated from Columbia University, after which he obtained the doctor’s degree of law department in Harvard University in 1991. From 1991 to 1996, he served as a civil rights lawyer and then was elected to be a senator of Illinois in 1997. In 2005, he became the senator of the U.S. and on November 5, 2008 he eventually won the presidential election. Married in 1992, he is now a kind father of two daughters.
Dear Tom, In your last e-mail, you showed a great interest in our national Stadium---the Bird’s nest. Now I’d like to introduce it to you. The Bird’s nest, which looks just like a bird’s nest made of tree branches and can hold about 90,000 spectators, is located in the north of Beijing and covers an area of 58,000 square meters. It was built from December, 2003 and was completed in December, 2007. During the Olympic Games, we will host the track and field events as well as soccer matches there and after the Games it well be used for large entertainment performances and sports events. The Bird’s Nest is thought highly of by many people. Kofi Annan gave the thumbs-up to its design and said that it would be a wonder in architecture in the history of the global games. I hope that my introduction will satisfy you. Yours faithfully, Li Ming
人物介绍英语作文专题
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高三复习英语基础写作--人物写作
⾼三复习英语基础写作--⼈物写作⾼三复习写作专题⼀-------⼈物描写(1)⼈物简介: 注意掌握并背诵⼀些有⽤的表达和句型,并能够灵活运⽤.A. 【介绍出⽣:】1.出⽣于某地某时间: be born in swh in/on sometime2.钱学森于1911年12⽉11⽇出⽣于浙江杭州⼀个富裕之家.Quan Xuesen was born in a wealthy family in Hangzhou, Zhejiang on December 11, 1911.3. 钱学森于1911年12⽉11⽇出⽣于浙江杭州⼀个富裕之家, 他是我国航天事业的先驱.Quan Xuesen was born in a wealthy family in Huangzhou, Zhejiang on December 11, 1911 and he was the pioneer of a pioneer of China’s Astronomy industry. (并列句)Quan Xuesen , the pioneer of China’s Astronomy industry,was born in a wealthy family in Huangzhou, Zhejiang on December 11, 1911. (同位语)Quan Xuesen, who was born in a wealthy family in Huangzhou, Zhejiang on December 11, 1911, was the pioneer of a pioneer of China’s Astronomy industry.(定语从句)Quan Xuesen , born in a wealthy family in Huangzhou, Zhejiang on December 11, 1911, was the pioneer of a pioneer of China’s Astronomy industry.(⾮谓语作定语)B. 【介绍年龄:】1. 17岁的⼥孩: a 17-year-old girl, a girl of seventeen,2. 在17岁时: at the age of 17, aged 173. ⽩云, 年龄27岁, 在24岁时毕业于哈佛⼤学.BaiYun, who is at the age of 27, graduated from Havard University at the age of 24. (定语从句)BaiYun, aged 27, graduated from Havard University at the age of 24. (⾮谓语作定语)BaiYun, a woman of 27, graduated from Havard University at the age of 24.(同位语)C. 【介绍⼈物性格爱好】ambitious 有雄⼼壮志的competent 能胜任的confident 有信⼼的considerate 体贴的cooperative 有合作精神的devoted 有献⾝精神的efficient 有效率的energetic 精⼒充沛的enthusiastic 充满热情的hard-working/diligent 勤劳的intelligent 理解⼒强的modest 谦虚的qualified 合格的independent 有主见的/独⽴的selfless ⽆私的strong-willed/ determined 意志坚强的well-educated 受过良好教育的patient 耐⼼的with endurance有耐⼒的, with perseverance有毅⼒对….有兴趣: be interested in …./ show interest in …..在…⽅⾯有天赋: have a gift/ talent for…..1.他有很强的合作精神. 他很圆满地组织了这次活动.He is so cooperative that he organized the activity perfectly.So cooperative is he that he organized the activity perfectly. (So放句⾸的倒装句) Such a cooperative man is he that he organized the activity perfectly. (Such放句⾸的倒装句)2.他受过良好的教育,⽽且理解⼒强. 他很快地就完成了这项任务.He is so well-educated and intelligent that he accomplished the task quickly.(so…that …句型)Well-educated and intelligent, he accomplished the task quickly. (adj表伴随动作).3.他不但对科学极有兴趣,⽽且在⾳乐⽅⾯有天赋.He not only shows interest in science, but also he has a gift for musicNot only does he show interest in science, but also he has a gift for music. (Not only 放句⾸的倒装句)D. 【介绍教育】1.考上…⼤学… be admitted into …University2.毕业于哈佛⼤学graduated from Harvard University.3.毕业于…学校的…系graduated from….department of …university4.主修…. major in geology5.去….深造…./去…继续接受教育go to swh for further education6.获得硕⼠/博⼠学位: get/gain a master’s / doctor’s degree.7. Linder, 主修政治学, 毕业于华南师范⼤学.Linda, whose major is politics, graduated from South China Normal University.(定语从句)Linda, majoring in politics, graduated from South China Normal University.(⾮谓语作定语)8. 李平从…⼤学毕业之后, 就投⾝于科研事业当中了.After graduating from…University, LinPin devoted himself to the scientific research. (介词+Ving)Having graduated from…University, LinPin devoted himself to the scientific research. (⾮谓语作状语表时间,有先后顺序) 9. 毕业后,他去了美国深造,并在那⾥获得了博⼠学位.Having graduated from…University, he went to America for further education and gained a doctor’s degree.Having graduated from…University, he went to study in America, where he gained a doctor’s degree. (定语从句)E. 【介绍⽣事迹】选择..作为职业:choose sth as his/her career被…公司聘⽤:b e employed by …company获得⾼⼯资: get paid by …with a high salary/ be offered a high salary当⼀名..:w ork as a ….决定做….determine to do sth/ be determined to do sth/ determine that…..为社区服务/ 为残疾⼈服务:serve the community/the disabled与…某⼈结婚: get married with sb死了: sb died/ passed away/ were killed ( in the accident)获得⼀等奖/第⼀名: won the fist prize赢得⾦牌: won the (a) gold medal=be awarded the (a) gold medal获得诺贝尔(和平)奖: won the Nobel (Peace) Prize= be awarded a Nobel (Peace) Prize成为世界冠军/获得第⼀名: become a world champion获得….的称号: be awarded the title of …..奉献给…..devote oneself .to doing….为了报效祖国: in order to devote oneself to one’s motherland1. 他们很快相爱了,然后在1926年结婚了.They soon fell in love and got married in 1926.2. 经过努⼒, 成为了世界冠军.He became the world champion with his great effort.It’s due to (because of) his great effort that he became the world champion.(强调句型)D. 【介绍评估】被认为: ….…b e recognized as a …..受..尊重: …be respected by….受到(不)好评)…..b e highly(ill) thought of给我们树六了良好的榜样: …..s et a good example to us1.由于他⾮凡的事迹,他受到了很多⼈的尊重.It’s because of his extraordinary achievement/deeds that he was respected by a large number of people. (强调句型)2.他给我们树⽴了良好的榜样, 被认为是我们班的活雷锋,He set a good example to us and was recognized / was awarded the title of a Lei Feng in our class.实战训练:【写作1:】假如你叫李明,你的美国朋友布鲁斯开始学习中国⽂学,来信询问鲁迅其⼈及作品。
基础写作之人物写作讲义-高三英语二轮复习
英语尖子生培优作文四基础写作之人物写作Basic Writing—Character Introduction课型:基础写作课教学目标:通过本节课的讲授,让学生掌握如何用英语介绍描写人物.重点:讲授描写人物的步骤和常用句型.难点:灵活运用所学词组及句型写一篇短文.教学方法: 顺序法,对比法,归纳演绎法背景材料:有一种爱叫无私奉献,有一种付出为无怨无悔,老师就像我们的父母一样,永远是我们心目中最敬爱的人。
忘不了他们的谆谆教诲,忘不了他们的善意责备,忘不了他们的辛苦劳累......请你以"My respected English teacher"为题,根据以下要点提示,写一篇120字左右的短文,简要介绍你的现任英语老师。
要点如下:1.概述他或她的出身背景,包括性别、年龄、出身。
2.他或她的外貌、性格、爱好。
3.他或她所受的教育,对工作的要求,对你的影响,以及你对他或她的评价第一步明确要求该写作属于人物描写是记叙文的一种。
是对人物外貌、个性以及注意文章的主体段落是记叙文。
要介绍人物的外貌、性格、爱好、所受教育情况及事业成就。
要分三步既三层去写作。
当然,难点还是主体段落介绍人物这三步既三层需要使用哪些句型去写作。
Para.1 开头(beginning)——开门见山(personal basic informa tion)和概述。
Para.2 主体(body), 共三步(supporting detailss)。
主题段落时态,一般现在时态,具体事例使用过去时。
第一步:.(外貌)appearance ,character第二步:(教育)education第三步:生平)big events in one’s life ( in order of time )给出你的详细评价 1) what you think of him/her?2) how people view him or her?Step IIIT:Let's sum up some sentence patterns introducing a person.A. Basic Information 概况钱学森,1911年12月11日出生于杭州一个富裕之家,是一位伟大的科学家。
英语基础写作人物描写
基础写作----人物描写(一)必备词句1.年龄(1)a five-year-old boy一个五岁的男孩(2)a boy aged five 一个五岁的男孩(3)in my tens /twenties在我十/二十多岁时(4)at the age of five在五岁时(5)As a child, I liked to... 我小时候喜欢……2.出生(1)was born in ... 出生在……(2)be/come from a wealthy family出生于富裕人家(3)was born into a peasant family出生于一个农民家庭3.外表(1)a 1.80-meter-tall boy 一个高1.8米的男孩(2)overweight胖的;thin瘦的;slim苗条的;strong 强壮的(3)look young for one’s age 显得比实际年龄年轻(4)good-looking 长得好看;plain-looking 长得一般(5)well dressed 穿得漂亮;能力(1)efficient办事高效率的(2)intelligent有智力的;creative 富创造力的(3)a boy with great ability 能干的男孩(4)a qualified teacher 一名合格的教师(5)speak fluent English 讲流利的英语(6)have a gift for 有……的天赋(7)be skilled in 在……方面熟练(8)be experienced in 在……方面有经验4.健康(1)be in good health/shape/condition 身体健康(2)energetic精力充沛的;well-built身材健美的(3)suffer from... 患上……5.经历(1)graduate from... 从……毕业(2)major in 以……为专业(3)gain scholarship 获得奖学金(4)get good grades获得好成绩(5)get a master’s/doctor’s/ bachelor's degree 获得硕士/博士/学士学位(6)be given the title of... 获得……称号(7)win a gold/silver/copper medal 获得金/银/铜牌(8)gain/win the first prize/place 获得一等奖/第一名(二) 相关短语1.be born in a poor family出生贫穷家庭2. attend school 上学3.at the age of 在……岁时4.during his childhood在他童年时5.sense of humour幽默感6. be always ready to总是乐于7. modest and honest谦虚诚实8. be regarded as被认为是9. have a gift for在……方面有天赋10. work hard at致力于11. devote one’s life to致力于12. graduate from 从……毕业13. take an active part in积极参加14. open-minded and optimistic乐观开朗15. be admitted to被……录取; 考入16. go abroad for further studies出国深造17. be honored for因……而受到尊敬18. dream of being a writer梦想成为作家19.make contributions to对……做出贡献20.have a strong interest in对……有浓厚兴趣(三)相关句式1. When he was a boy, he showed a great interest in maths.他小时候就对数学非常感兴趣。
基础写作-人物介绍
【基础写作实例剖析:】
你是李华,申请到一家外资企业工作。对方要求你用英 语写一篇短文(只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容),介绍 自己的基本情况。短文应包括下表所列全部内容。
姓名
李华
出生年月
1977年2月
出生地
辽宁大连
学历
1984——1990 光明小学 1990语、物理、化学、电脑
特长
英语、电脑(去年在全校电脑竞赛中获第一 名)
业余爱好
游泳、滑冰、集邮、流行音乐
【实例剖析:】
【写作分析】通过认真审题,根据记叙 文对写人的要求可以确定如下写作要点: 文体:记叙文 人称: 根据内容可确定 本文人称为第一人称
要点:李华的出生年月 及地点;学历;所学主 要课程;特长;获奖情 况;业余爱好。
5.Evaluation
make great contributions to… Consistency/Perseverance is the key to success. be famous/known as be regarded as become a world champion at …Championships (锦标赛) remember sb forever A new chapter of history has been turned Lei Feng has been praised for his communist spirit. an inspiring leader
competition. ⑤ When I am free, I enjoy listening to
popular music and collecting stamps, and my favorite sports are swimming in summer and skating in winter.
基础写作:人物介绍
二 列要点
1. 概况age, sex, birth-place, background
姓名: 姓名:刘翔 性别; 性别;男 教练: 教练:孙海平 出生年月:1983年 13日 出生年月:1983年7月13日 出生地: 身高: 89米 出生地:上海 身高:1.89米 专项:110栏 偶像: 专项:110栏 偶像:Jordon
3. 教育/ 专长 事业:education, speciality 专长/ 事业:
专项:110栏 专项:110栏 教练: 教练:孙海平
他擅长110米栏, 110米栏 4) 他擅长110米栏, 他的教练是孙海平
4. in order of time )
1) 为人诚恳 随和 自信乐观的男孩刘翔 出生在 为人诚恳, 随和, 自信乐观的男孩刘翔, 出生在1983年 年 7月13日上海 日上海. 月 日上海 2) 他的偶像是 他的偶像是Jordon, 爱好是听音乐 看打游戏及看书 爱好是听音乐, 看打游戏及看书. 3) 拥有身高 拥有身高1.89米的他擅长 米的他擅长 米栏, 米的他擅长110米栏 在他的教练孙海平 米栏 的帮助下他取得了傲人的成绩. 的帮助下他取得了傲人的成绩 4) 他在2002年瑞士洛桑以13秒12破亚洲记录 两 他在2002年瑞士洛桑以13 12破亚洲记录 2002年瑞士洛桑以13秒 破亚洲记录, 年后他又在2004年雅典以12 91夺冠 2004年雅典以12秒 夺冠, 年后他又在2004年雅典以12秒91夺冠,平了世界 记录, 记录 5) 他2006年7月12日他在瑞士洛桑以12秒88 2006年 12日他在瑞士洛桑以12秒 日他在瑞士洛桑以12 破世界记录. 破世界记录.
5. 评估evaluation
依要点, 拟草纲, 组织成句. 三 依要点, 拟草纲, 组织成句.
基础写作人物简介
常用表达方式
• 1.出生于…地方… 时间__b_o_r_n_i_n_…__in_/_o_n_…_ • 2. 死于… 地方…时间__d_ie__in_…__i_n_/o_n_…___ • 3.毕业于_g_r_a_d_u_a_t_e_/ _g_r_a_d_u_ating from • 4. 喜欢_b__e_f_o_n_d_o__f _____ • 5. 对…感兴趣_b__e_i_n_te_r_e_sted in • 兴趣、爱好__h_o_b_b__y_ • 6.擅长于__b_e_g_o_o_d__a_t_/_d_o__w_e_ll in • 在….方面有天赋__h_a_v_e_a__g_if_t_f_o_r__ • 7.过…样的生活_l_e_a_d_a__…__li_fe______ • 8.以…出名_b_e__f_a_m_o_u_s__fo__r
2. 介绍出生: 介绍出生的时间、地点和家 境用分词结构, 使文章更简洁。如:
Eg:Born in a poor clerk ’s family(出生在一个 贫困的小职员家庭中), Charles Dickens had little schooling.
姚明,1980年出生于上海,是一个世界 有名的篮球运动员。
As one of the stars in the NBA, Yao Ming
is working hard to live/achieve his dream
.
Yao Ming, a world famous basketball player, was born in September, 1980 in Shanghai. He is the son of two basketball players. And /So he learnt how to play basketball when he was very young. With great skill and speed, the excellent man/player from China is helping the Houston Rockets in the NBA now. As one of the stars in the NBA, Yao Ming is working hard to live/achieve his dream.
基础写作-人物介绍
On November 4th, 2008, he defeated John McCain in the general election and was elected the 44th President of the United States, making him the first African American President of the country. The success of Obama greatly inspired people from all over the world, especially black people, to work hard to achieve their goals.
1. 介绍概况:同位语结构、分词结构,使文 介绍概况:同位语结构、分词结构, 章简洁。 章简洁。如: (1)Abraham Lincoln, the son of a poor family (一个贫苦家庭的儿子 was born in Kentucky 一个贫苦家庭的儿子), 一个贫苦家庭的儿子 on February 12, 1809. [同位语 同位语] 同位语 (2)Sun Showier, a world champion in diving (一位跳水的世界冠军 is a boy of 14 from 一位跳水的世界冠军), 一位跳水的世界冠军 Guangdong. [同位语 同位语] 同位语 (3)Born in Maryland, USA in 1985(他1985年 他 年 出生于美国马里兰州), 出生于美国马里兰州 Michael Phelps is a famous swimmer.[分语短语 分语短语] 分语短语
50.介绍美国新担选总统的巴拉克 奥 介绍美国新担选总统的巴拉克·奥 介绍美国新担选总统的巴拉克 巴马 请根据下面表格, 请根据下面表格,用英语介绍美国当 选总统巴拉克·奥巴马 选总统巴拉克 奥巴马
基础写作:人物介绍--菲尔普斯
在2004年雅典奥运会上,一人拿下游泳项目6 枚金牌2枚银牌。在2008年北京奥运会上,一 举夺得8枚金牌。 1.He has won 16 Olympic medals, six gold medals and two silver in Athens in 2004,as well as eight gold at Beijing Olympic Games in 2008. 2.At Athens Olympic Games held in 2004,he won 6 gold medals and 2 silver and ended his excellent performance with 8 gold medals at 2008 Beijing Olympic Games.
他保持着在单一奥运会上获得金牌最多的记 录,成为当今奥运史上的奇迹。 1. He still holds the record for the most gold medals won at a single Olympics,which makes him a miracle in the history of Olympic Games .
基础写作:人物介绍 1.菲尔普斯(Michael Fred Phelps)1985年6月 30日出生于美国。绰号“飞鱼”,是美国一位 非常伟大的游泳运动员。 2.他从小就酷爱游泳,是罕见的游泳天才。他 训练非常刻苦。 3.在2004年雅典奥运会上,一人拿下游泳项目6 枚金牌2枚银牌。在2008年北京奥运会上,一 举夺得8枚金牌。 4.他保持着在单一奥运会上获得金牌最多的记 录,成为当今奥运史上的奇迹。 参考词汇:绰号nickname 奇迹 miracle
他从小就酷爱游泳,是罕见的游泳天才。他训练 非常刻苦。 1.As a child,he was very interested in swimming.Not only is he a rare talent for swimming,but also he trains very hard. 2.He has a strong passion for swimming since he was a child. ( was fascinated by swimming) 3. He has been devoted to swimming since he was a child and showed his great talent in it soon.
人物介绍英语作文 图文
• 注意:1)要有标题。
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2)介绍须包括所有内容要点,但不要逐条译成英语。
• 写作要求: 只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容
• 评分标准: 句子结构的准确性,信息内容的完整性和连贯性
Luo Xuejuan—Our Pride
• Born in Zhejiang province, Luo Xuejuan, with the nickname, Luoluo, is a 23-year-old China’s female Olympic swimming champion. She began to learn to swim at an early age and she began to show her great talent in 2000. She got three gold medals in Barcelona world championships. At Athens 2004 Olympics, she broke the world record and got women’s 100m swimming champion. Due to health problems, Luo Xuejuan has announced retirement and she will study in Beijing University.
非谓语 including
• 句子主干:小说被制成电影 • 被制成:be made into • 被译成:be translated into
时态:现在完成时
• (4)一些作品还被选入了中学和大学 课本。
• 简单句即可 • 选入=收录入 • 收录入:be collected in • 时态:现在完成时
话题写作01 人物介绍
【相关短语】
be born in 出生于……; come from=be from 来自; be good at=do well in 擅长; be of medium build 中等身材; be of medium height 中等身高; get on well with 与……和睦相处; at
(3)文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称。
Me in the Mirror
___________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking at myself in the mirror, I know I am an outgoing girl. I like to make friends _and I’m always ready to help them. So I’m very popular in my school. But I have a big ___________________________________________________________________________________________________ problem. I’m less interested in my lessons and I can’t concentrate in class. In my _spare time I spend too much time on computer games, so I can’t get good grades, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________ which makes my parents disappointed. _ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________ _ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________ _
高三英语如何写人物介绍
译:我的历史老师是个漂亮女人,她长着两只大眼睛,留着长发
My history teacher is a beautiful woman with two big eyes and long hair.
C. 教育经历:注意尽量用非谓语动词, 使文章精炼 1)Majored in Science, he graduated from a famous University in the north and after 4 years, he went abroad for further studies. 2)Graduated from the department of English of Zhongshan University, she went on further education and received a doctor's degree.
• Who will be volunteer to show your composition to the class?
Find out the good sentences in the possible version and remember them with your partner
注意“三写”,在规定的时间内完 成
;配资服务 网上配资 配资中国 网上配资 / 线上配资 股指配资 成都配资 济南配资 ;
Dear Sir, How do you do? Through the ad .I know your company needs an engineer. I would like to have this job. Now let me introduce myself to you.
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人物介绍
写作提示 1. age, sex, birth-place, background (概况) 2.ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้appearance, character (外表、性格) 3. education (教育背景) 4. big events in his or her life (in order of time) (经历、生平) 5. evaluation (评价)
Guess the person described in the following sentences
Born on the 18th of January, 1979 in Taiwan, which is a beautiful island of our country, he was raised by his mother and was shy and quiet during his childhood. Showing interest in music, he began learning to play the piano at the age of 3. When his first album (专辑)was released(发行) in 2000, he got the attention of the world. His popularity sky-rocketed(急速上升), and he has received many awards for his songs. His own unique Chinese R&B style (蓝调音乐) is unparalleled by others and he continues to make breakthroughs as he takes risks in attempting new things. Jay Chou
变成分词了作状语,用pass away换掉句中谓语。
2.他上大学时,先从事于医学学习,但后来却改变主 意。 (从事…… be engaged in… choose to work on…) When he went to college, he first chose to work on medicine but then changed his mind.
评价
小试一把:翻译下列句子
1.他1910年11月2日生于一个富裕家庭, 2005年4 月24日因病于北京逝世。(die of) ①He was born into a rich family on November 2,1910 and died of an illness in Beijing on April 24,2005. ②Born into a rich family on November 2,1910, he passed away because of disease in Beijing on April 24, 2005.
定语从句
④ His popularity sky-rocketed, which allowed him to received many awards for his songs. 经历
用复合句,倒装,非限定定语从句等,润色文章。
注意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组。
⑤
His own unique Chinese R&B style is unparalleled by others and he continues to make breakthroughs as he takes risks in attempting new things.
②
③
④
评价
⑤
参考词汇:社会学家 sociologist; 社会活动家 social activist 【写作要求】使用5个句子表达全部所给的内容,并组织成连贯的短文。
Born into a rich family on November 2, 1910, Fei Xiaotong, a famous Chinese sociologist and social activist, passed away due to disease in Beijing on April 24, 2005. When going to college, he first chose to study medicine but then changed his mind. Between 1930 and 1935, he studied in Tsinghua University and then went to England for further education , where he received his doctor’s degree. After 1938, he once taught in Tsinghua University and Peking University. Fei, who studied hard all his whole life, devoted himself to the research on sociology and advanced the development of China’s rural economy.
5.他一生致力于社会科学(sociology)研究,促 使(advance)中国农村经济发展。 He devoted himself to the research on sociology and advanced the development of China’s rural economy.
牢记:1+2+3+456=correct sentence
The suggested steps: 1. 审题: 确定文体、人称和时态 2. 整合信息 :把所有内容整合成5句 3. 翻译句子:考虑语法结构 4.连句成篇 5. 检查
How do you do the Basic Writing
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检查(How to correct?)
1、是否恰好五句话? 2、是否每句都含必要信息? 3、可否自由发挥? 4、pants纠错原则: 1) pattern 2) agreement 3) number 4) tense 5) spelling ...
分词结构
分析句子
• ① Born on the 18th of January, 1979 in Taiwan, Jay Chou, a famous singer, was raised by his mother and was shy and quiet during his childhood.
致力于… 中国农村经济 devote oneself to … China’s rural economy
费孝通是我国著名的社会学家和社会活动家。请根 据下文提示,用英文写一篇短文介绍一下费孝通先 生。
生平 经历 1910年11月2日生于一个富裕家庭。2005年4月24日因病 于北京逝世。 ① 1、大学时先从事于医学学习,但后来却改变主意。 2、1930-1935年于清华大学学习,之后到英国继续深 造,并获得博士学位。 3、1938年后,曾任教于清华大学和北京大学。 1、致力于社会科学研究,促使中国农村经济发展。 2、费孝通是一个活到老,学到老的人。
3. 1930-1935年间,他在清华大学学习,之后 到英国继续深造.(further education) Between 1930 and 1935, he studied in Tsinghua University and then went to England for further education. 4.他获得博士学位。 He received his doctor’s degree.
同位语
身份与生 平
多用分词短语、同位语结构,使文章简洁,通顺。
注意:用非谓语动词, 使文章精炼。
现在分作状语
②Showing interest in music, he began learning to play the piano at the age of 3.
状语从句
③ When Jay's first album was released in 2000, he got the world's attention.