中考英语作文训练课件
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中考英语作文课件(19张)
Language expression and polishing
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Use accurate and vivid vocabulary and phrases to express ideas
Pay attention to the diversity of grammar and sentence structures, avoid repetition and monotony
Overview of Middle School Entrance Examination 01 English Composition
The Importance of Middle School Entrance
Examination English Composition
High proportion of
Question review and conception
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Carefully read the question, understand its meaning and requirements
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Determine the theme and intention of the article, ensuring that it matches the requirements of the title
中考英语作文课件 (19张)
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目录
• Overview of Middle School Entrance Examination English Composition
• Writing Steps and Techniques • Common errors and
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中考英语专项复习书面表达英语大作文演示课程PPT课件
写句子
学 好
淡蓝色的海水轻轻地拍打着沙滩，一 浪盖过 一浪， 连绵不 绝，源 源不断 。海水 在人们 的心中 无非是 易怒的 。可是 ，在现 在的我 眼中， 如同母 亲的手 温柔的 抚摸着 这岸上 的一切 生灵。 贝壳与 螃蟹戏 玩着， 玩累了 ，便躺 在柔软 的沙上 睡上一 会儿。
英 语 的 建 议
看英语 电影、 听英语 歌曲
与外教 交谈
把单词 写在纸 条上
（（1 1））看W英atc语hi电ng影En和gl听ish英m语ov歌ies曲an是d学lis习ten英in语g t的o E好ng方lis法h （s2on）g多s a看re 、go多od听w几ays次to，le然arn后E猜ng测lis生h. 词 的 意 思 淡蓝色的海水轻轻地拍打着沙滩，一浪盖过一浪，连绵不绝，源源不断。海水在人们的心中无非是易怒的。可是，在现在的我眼中，如同母亲的手温柔的抚摸着这岸上的一切生灵。贝壳与螃蟹戏玩着，玩累了，便躺在柔软的沙上睡上一会儿。
英 语 的 建 议
看英语 电影、 听英语 歌曲
与外教 交谈
把单词 写在纸 条上
（（1 1））看W英atc语hi电ng影En和gl听ish英m语ov歌ies曲an是d学lis习ten英in语g t的o E好ng方lis法h （s2on）g多s a看re 、go多od听w几ays次to，le然arn后E猜ng测lis生h. 词 的 意 思 淡蓝色的海水轻轻地拍打着沙滩，一浪盖过一浪，连绵不绝，源源不断。海水在人们的心中无非是易怒的。可是，在现在的我眼中，如同母亲的手温柔的抚摸着这岸上的一切生灵。贝壳与螃蟹戏玩着，玩累了，便躺在柔软的沙上睡上一会儿。
学 好 英 语 的 建 议
看英语 电影、 听英语 歌曲
与外教 交谈
中考英语作文专题复习课件 PPT课件(共33张)
Let’s practice! 常见错误改正：
1.We at school from Monday to Friday .We are at school from Monday to Friday. 2.There are some grass or flowers beside the road. There is some grass and flowers beside the road 3.I think go to school by bus is the best way. I think going to school by bus is the best way. 4. They don’t know how to do They don’t know what to do it. They don’t know how to do it. They don’t know what to do . 5.They have become teachers for 30 years. They have been teachers for 30 years. 6.He teaches our English. .He teaches us English.
多记短语和句型
2 注意语法项目
人称一致:
Alice is my best friend,she he likes sports.
时态:
He has gone to Guilin yesterday. 去掉 主谓一致: This pair of shoes is are mine. The shoes are new. 习惯用法: He helps me with in my English.
词汇，句子较通顺，表达较清楚，但有少量错误。 内容包含了多数要点，语言表达过于简单，句子不 只包含了少数要点，语言不规范，句子无条理，行文 够通顺，有部分语言错误，基本上不影响总体理解。 不连贯，语言错误严重，影响理解。 五档1-3分 只写出与要求的内容相关的一些信息词语，语言错误 多。 六档0分 空白
中考英语专项复习书面表达英语大作文演示PPT演示课件
a gooAdlswo,asymile before you speak and do not feel shy.
(2) You should start it with greetings or a question （1）每天在纸上写四到五个单词
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看
英
语
电
影 、 听 英 语 歌 川流不息的人群热闹地挤在小小的骑廊下，或单独一人，或三三两两。有的低头私语，有的莞尔窃笑，没有大声的喧哗和吵闹，似乎谁都不愿破坏平和的气氛。放眼长长的一条街道，逛街的人都好象在做服装秀，尤其是那些披红戴绿穿着入时的少男少女，是中山路上最亮丽的风景。
曲
把单词写在纸条上
写句子
(2) See and listen several times,and guess the meaning （o1f）the与n外ew教w交or谈ds.也 是 一 个 好 方 法 （(12)）To你h应ave该a以co问nv候ers或at问ion题w开ith始foreign teachers is also
川流不息的人群热闹地挤在小小的骑 廊下， 或单独 一人， 或三三 两两。 有的低 头私语 ，有的 莞尔窃 笑，没 有大声 的喧哗 和吵闹 ，似乎 谁都不 愿破坏 平和的 气氛。 放眼长 长的一 条街道 ，逛街 的人都 好象在 做服装 秀，尤 其是那 些披红 戴绿穿 着入时 的少男 少女， 是中山 路上最 亮丽的 风景。
川流不息的人群热闹地挤在小小的骑 廊下， 或单独 一人， 或三三 两两。 有的低 头私语 ，有的 莞尔窃 笑，没 有大声 的喧哗 和吵闹 ，似乎 谁都不 愿破坏 平和的 气氛。 放眼长 长的一 条街道 ，逛街 的人都 好象在 做服装 秀，尤 其是那 些披红 戴绿穿 着入时 的少男 少女， 是中山 路上最 亮丽的 风景。
(2) You should start it with greetings or a question （1）每天在纸上写四到五个单词
a(1n)dWprlaitceefothuermorofnivtehwe owradlsl.Raedaadytohne pwioecrdeswohfepnaypoeur. see them,and try to use them in sentence.
看
英
语
电
影 、 听 英 语 歌 川流不息的人群热闹地挤在小小的骑廊下，或单独一人，或三三两两。有的低头私语，有的莞尔窃笑，没有大声的喧哗和吵闹，似乎谁都不愿破坏平和的气氛。放眼长长的一条街道，逛街的人都好象在做服装秀，尤其是那些披红戴绿穿着入时的少男少女，是中山路上最亮丽的风景。
曲
把单词写在纸条上
写句子
(2) See and listen several times,and guess the meaning （o1f）the与n外ew教w交or谈ds.也 是 一 个 好 方 法 （(12)）To你h应ave该a以co问nv候ers或at问ion题w开ith始foreign teachers is also
川流不息的人群热闹地挤在小小的骑 廊下， 或单独 一人， 或三三 两两。 有的低 头私语 ，有的 莞尔窃 笑，没 有大声 的喧哗 和吵闹 ，似乎 谁都不 愿破坏 平和的 气氛。 放眼长 长的一 条街道 ，逛街 的人都 好象在 做服装 秀，尤 其是那 些披红 戴绿穿 着入时 的少男 少女， 是中山 路上最 亮丽的 风景。
川流不息的人群热闹地挤在小小的骑 廊下， 或单独 一人， 或三三 两两。 有的低 头私语 ，有的 莞尔窃 笑，没 有大声 的喧哗 和吵闹 ，似乎 谁都不 愿破坏 平和的 气氛。 放眼长 长的一 条街道 ，逛街 的人都 好象在 做服装 秀，尤 其是那 些披红 戴绿穿 着入时 的少男 少女， 是中山 路上最 亮丽的 风景。
中考英语作文课件(19张PPT)
看法
我认为……
建议（至少3条） 1. 合理安排时间 2. 参加兴趣小组
3. ……
注意: 100词左右，广播的开头已给出，不计入总词数 参考词汇: make good use of, interest groups
social activities, do sports, net bar
Hello, everybody! It’s time again for our
第五步：集句成段，组段成篇
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2. List some keywords about opinions.
not good for our health and study do harm to focus on Pay more attention to
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中考英语作文专题复习学习课件
the question to identify the most important information
Language expression skills
Vocabulary
Building a good vocabulary is essential for effective language expression Memorize new words, their meanings, and examples to enhance your language skills
3
Conclusion
End your paragraph with a strong conclusion that summarizes your main point Ensure that your conclusion ties back to your opening presence and leaves the reader with a satisfying ending
2
Body
Develop your paragraph by supporting your main idea with relevant details and examples Use transitions to connect different senses and ideas, making the paragraph flow smoothly
Grammar knowledge
Grammar knowledge is also essential for writing, but students may make misses in sense structure, tense, or punctation
中考英语写作指导优秀课件(共38张PPT)
I hope my advice is useful. If we take action now, we mu1.bad→good 要点全，简单句
2.good→better 并列句，连接词 3.better→best 从句，高级词汇
4.书写漂亮
录
3 典例精析
4 备战演练
目录
上一页
下一页
末页
考情分析
分析近几年河南中招真题可知，书面 表达常见的类型分为三类：命题、半命 题、无命题这三种形式。文体以记叙文 为主，话题为写人叙事类、事物介绍类、 发表观点类和咨询建议类。词数均为80 词左右。
思考：如何写作文才能得高分呢？
方法指导
（1）文章结构三段论，表明你懂得文章结构； （2）字数以上限为准，证明你书写能力很强； （3）遣词要精准地道，证明你语言功底很棒； （4）书写要规范美观，表明你书写训练有素。
Certainly, I will feel excited if I get a camera of my own. I can lead a colorful life with my camer37a.
I want to have a mountain bike
There is no doubt that everyone dreams of having something. As for me, I want to have a mountain bike. The reasons can be as follows.
If I have a mountain bike, I will be excited and satisfied.
Hope it will come true one day.
2.good→better 并列句，连接词 3.better→best 从句，高级词汇
4.书写漂亮
录
3 典例精析
4 备战演练
目录
上一页
下一页
末页
考情分析
分析近几年河南中招真题可知，书面 表达常见的类型分为三类：命题、半命 题、无命题这三种形式。文体以记叙文 为主，话题为写人叙事类、事物介绍类、 发表观点类和咨询建议类。词数均为80 词左右。
思考：如何写作文才能得高分呢？
方法指导
（1）文章结构三段论，表明你懂得文章结构； （2）字数以上限为准，证明你书写能力很强； （3）遣词要精准地道，证明你语言功底很棒； （4）书写要规范美观，表明你书写训练有素。
Certainly, I will feel excited if I get a camera of my own. I can lead a colorful life with my camer37a.
I want to have a mountain bike
There is no doubt that everyone dreams of having something. As for me, I want to have a mountain bike. The reasons can be as follows.
If I have a mountain bike, I will be excited and satisfied.
Hope it will come true one day.
中考英语作文指导训练PPT课件
第21页/共30页
1. seem, appear 等表示“似乎”、“好像” 等意思的动词；
2. look, taste, smell, sound, feel等表示 五官感觉的动词；
3. remain, keep等表示“维持，保持”等 意思的动词；
practise my English and make some new friends.
(扩展句) I think this English evening class will be
helpful to me. (扩展句) Could you please tell me a
little more about the class? (扩展句) When does it
第16页/共30页
Good morning, everyone! Now I’ll tell you a piece of good news.(主题句)
We are planning an outing. (主题句) We are
going to the People’s Park by bus on July 10th, Sunday. (扩展句) We’ll leave at 7:00 a.m. at the
We are planning an outing. __________
第8页/共30页
Good morning, everyone! Now I’ll tell you a piece of good news.(主题句)
We are planning an outing. (主题句) We are
practise my English and make some new friends.
1. seem, appear 等表示“似乎”、“好像” 等意思的动词；
2. look, taste, smell, sound, feel等表示 五官感觉的动词；
3. remain, keep等表示“维持，保持”等 意思的动词；
practise my English and make some new friends.
(扩展句) I think this English evening class will be
helpful to me. (扩展句) Could you please tell me a
little more about the class? (扩展句) When does it
第16页/共30页
Good morning, everyone! Now I’ll tell you a piece of good news.(主题句)
We are planning an outing. (主题句) We are
going to the People’s Park by bus on July 10th, Sunday. (扩展句) We’ll leave at 7:00 a.m. at the
We are planning an outing. __________
第8页/共30页
Good morning, everyone! Now I’ll tell you a piece of good news.(主题句)
We are planning an outing. (主题句) We are
practise my English and make some new friends.
中考英语专题复习课件 作文 (共18张PPT)
中考英语作文
一· 写作步骤
1.先审题： 弄清题目要求，确定体裁，拟 写提纲； 2.圈要点： 仔细观察，将情景中给出的要 点逐条列出 3.定基调： 确定时态，人称，开头，结尾 4.写全文： 运用熟悉的句型表达，使用恰 当的过渡词进行加工整理，使文章 连贯而流畅。
二· 词和句子的表达
1· 词和词组的运用：
(1) 尽量使用简单句； （2）学会使用意译法，将语义表达出来即 可，切忌与汉语提示一一对应，否则会写出中 式英语； 例如：我非常喜欢英语。 误 I very like English. 正 I like English very much. （3）语态，时态要准确无误，主谓要一致，主 语的人称和数要和谓语一致； 例如：我们应当尊敬父母，帮助他们做家务。 Eg. We should respect our parents and help them do some housework.
使用课本上学过的，最有把握的词和词组， 不会表达的单词用同义词代替。 例如： “不知所措” --- don’t know what to do “偶像”---- favorite singer or player “风和日丽”---It’s fine./ It’s a nice day.
2.句子的表达
中考英语作文评分标准
1.内容完整（80字左右）语句流畅， 无语法错误，书写规范，给9-10分 2.内容较完整，语句较流畅，基本无 语法错误，书写较规范，给6-8分 3.内容不完整，语句欠流畅，语法错 误较多，书写较规范，给3-5分 4.只写出个别要点，语法错误较多， 书写欠规范，给1-2分
满分作文展示
谋篇
成篇——衔接过渡, 润色成篇
根据信息提示明确写作要求
——就日益严重的学生近视眼问题写一篇 议论文发表自己的观点。 首先, 可就学生近视眼问题的调查结果引 出话题, 并分析造成学生近视问题日益严 重的几条原因; 其次, 提出几条预防形成近 视眼的有效方法。最后, 明确自己对此问 题的观点 ——知道保护眼睛的重要性, 养成正确使 用眼睛的良好习惯。
一· 写作步骤
1.先审题： 弄清题目要求，确定体裁，拟 写提纲； 2.圈要点： 仔细观察，将情景中给出的要 点逐条列出 3.定基调： 确定时态，人称，开头，结尾 4.写全文： 运用熟悉的句型表达，使用恰 当的过渡词进行加工整理，使文章 连贯而流畅。
二· 词和句子的表达
1· 词和词组的运用：
(1) 尽量使用简单句； （2）学会使用意译法，将语义表达出来即 可，切忌与汉语提示一一对应，否则会写出中 式英语； 例如：我非常喜欢英语。 误 I very like English. 正 I like English very much. （3）语态，时态要准确无误，主谓要一致，主 语的人称和数要和谓语一致； 例如：我们应当尊敬父母，帮助他们做家务。 Eg. We should respect our parents and help them do some housework.
使用课本上学过的，最有把握的词和词组， 不会表达的单词用同义词代替。 例如： “不知所措” --- don’t know what to do “偶像”---- favorite singer or player “风和日丽”---It’s fine./ It’s a nice day.
2.句子的表达
中考英语作文评分标准
1.内容完整（80字左右）语句流畅， 无语法错误，书写规范，给9-10分 2.内容较完整，语句较流畅，基本无 语法错误，书写较规范，给6-8分 3.内容不完整，语句欠流畅，语法错 误较多，书写较规范，给3-5分 4.只写出个别要点，语法错误较多， 书写欠规范，给1-2分
满分作文展示
谋篇
成篇——衔接过渡, 润色成篇
根据信息提示明确写作要求
——就日益严重的学生近视眼问题写一篇 议论文发表自己的观点。 首先, 可就学生近视眼问题的调查结果引 出话题, 并分析造成学生近视问题日益严 重的几条原因; 其次, 提出几条预防形成近 视眼的有效方法。最后, 明确自己对此问 题的观点 ——知道保护眼睛的重要性, 养成正确使 用眼睛的良好习惯。
中考英语复习 写作训练全讲解课件
学生的优秀范文 （15分）
Watering the flowers is also my duty. I like them very much and take good care of them. After supper, I always wash dishes . I think it can make my parents feel more enjoyable after work. In a word, the more housework I do, the happier my parents will be.（即总括又阐 明看法）
作文如何添加过度句、连接词
范文2：I’ m pleased to write to ask for some help. I want to tell you some problems we meet in English study. First， some of us aren’t interested in English. They think studying English is such a boring thing to do. And then It’s so difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts. So lots of us
书面表达考题
注意: 1. 词数80~100 个左右. 2.短文的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数. 3.短文须包括所有内容要点,但不要逐句 翻译,可适当加入细节,可适度发挥,使 短文通顺,连贯. 4. 文中不得使用真实姓名,校名.
书面表达考题
参考词汇： the launching ceremony 启动仪式 build up one’s body strength 强身健体
中考英语作文复习PPT课件
中考英语作文复习PPT 课件
English Day!
Let’s practice speaking and writing English!
Writing is as important as speaking!
Writing 书面表达
中考考点要求： 1. 根据中文提示，写一篇60-70字左右的英文表达。 2. 内容完整，用词准确，句子通顺、连贯、单词
B：老师对我说： “下周请准时到校！” The teacher said to me, “Please come to school on time next week.” The teacher told me to come to school on time next week.
本课结束
A： Peter 出生于英国，去年来到中 国的一所中学教英语。
Peter was born Britain. Last year, he came to China. He taught English in a MiddleHe can’t walk as usual because of a traffic accident. He can’t walk as usual after a traffic accident.
One possible version: I’m a middle school student, and I am
interested in the computer. I turn on the computer as soon as I get home every day. Sometimes I play computer games, talk with my friends on the Internet or send e-mails to them. Though I like it very much, my parents stop me from doing that. They think I spend too much time on the computer. So I only play it for a short time after I finish my homework in the evening.
English Day!
Let’s practice speaking and writing English!
Writing is as important as speaking!
Writing 书面表达
中考考点要求： 1. 根据中文提示，写一篇60-70字左右的英文表达。 2. 内容完整，用词准确，句子通顺、连贯、单词
B：老师对我说： “下周请准时到校！” The teacher said to me, “Please come to school on time next week.” The teacher told me to come to school on time next week.
本课结束
A： Peter 出生于英国，去年来到中 国的一所中学教英语。
Peter was born Britain. Last year, he came to China. He taught English in a MiddleHe can’t walk as usual because of a traffic accident. He can’t walk as usual after a traffic accident.
One possible version: I’m a middle school student, and I am
interested in the computer. I turn on the computer as soon as I get home every day. Sometimes I play computer games, talk with my friends on the Internet or send e-mails to them. Though I like it very much, my parents stop me from doing that. They think I spend too much time on the computer. So I only play it for a short time after I finish my homework in the evening.
九年级英语中考写作训练全讲解(课件5)
新标准英语写作归纳 （八年级上）
模块
Module11
Module12
写作
Preparing some advice on the best time to visit China 准备一 份关于参观中国的最好时节的建议
Writing advice for foreign guests to a Chinese family
Making a list of tips for learning English 列出一份英语学习指导的清单
Making plans for your future 为你的未来制定计划
英语新标准写作的特点
写作量大，六册书共计66个模块，66个写作，每学期学 生都有22个大小作文。
交际型的写作占主流，写作不是漫无目的的，重视了读 者的反馈，对读者往往进行了虚构，如“为来中国的游 客写建议”，“给朋友写一份邮件”“准备一份关于参 观中国的最好时节的建议”“为来中国家庭的外国客人 写一些建议”等等。
为来中国家庭的外国客人写一些建议
新标准英语写作归纳 （八年级下）
模块
Module1 Module2
Module3
写作
Writing about my classmate’s hobby 关于同学的爱好
Writing someone or something which changed your life 改变你的生活的某人某 事
Talk about the music you like best
新标准英语写作归 （八年级上）
模块
Module6
Module7 Module8 Module9 Module10
写作
Writing a short story about your past 对过去的经历写一个小故事 Writing a description of someone 描述某个人 Giving directions around your town 在你的小镇周围指路 Writing about animals in danger 处于困境中的动物 Writing and acting out a scene from
2023年人教版中考英语作文复习 课件
…………………………………………………………………JAN （专享）……………………………………………………………………
1.To sum up=All in all=In a word = In conclusion, we find that…… (总之，我们认为……) 2.In brief（简言之） 3.Therefore(因此) 4.In general= Generally speaking=Frankly speaking （总体来说） 5. finally,=at last （最后）
…………………………………………………………………JAN （专享）……………………………………………………………………
五、举例句型 1.Let's take…to illustrate this。 2.let's take the above chart as an example to illustrate this。 3.Here is one more example。 4.Take … for example。 5.The same is true of… 6.This offers a typical instance of… 7.We may quote a common example of…8.Just think of…
to school by bike. Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally..（大
多数学生都支持智能电话的使用\骑自行车去学校。原因如下：
首先……其次……最后……）
17. However, the others are strongly against it. Their reasons are as
1.To sum up=All in all=In a word = In conclusion, we find that…… (总之，我们认为……) 2.In brief（简言之） 3.Therefore(因此) 4.In general= Generally speaking=Frankly speaking （总体来说） 5. finally,=at last （最后）
…………………………………………………………………JAN （专享）……………………………………………………………………
五、举例句型 1.Let's take…to illustrate this。 2.let's take the above chart as an example to illustrate this。 3.Here is one more example。 4.Take … for example。 5.The same is true of… 6.This offers a typical instance of… 7.We may quote a common example of…8.Just think of…
to school by bike. Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally..（大
多数学生都支持智能电话的使用\骑自行车去学校。原因如下：
首先……其次……最后……）
17. However, the others are strongly against it. Their reasons are as
九年级英语中考专题作文复习课件
九年级英语中考专题作文复习课件9th Grade English Final Exam Review PresentationIntroduction:Welcome to the 9th Grade English Final Exam Review Presentation. In this session, we will cover all the important topics and skills that you need to know to excel in your English exam.I. Writing Skills1. Essay Writing:- Structure: Introduction, Body, Conclusion- Thesis Statement- Supporting Arguments- Transition Words2. Narrative Writing:- Setting, characters, plot- Dialogue, description, action- Use of sensory details3. Descriptive Writing:- Use of vivid imagery- Figurative language- Organizing detailsII. Reading Skills1. Text Analysis:- Identifying Main Ideas- Recognizing Supporting Details- Drawing Inferences2. Literary Devices:- Simile, Metaphor, Personification- Symbolism, Imagery- Irony, Foreshadowing3. Reading Comprehension Strategies: - Skimming and Scanning- Context Clues- Making PredictionsIII. Grammar and Vocabulary1. Parts of Speech:- Nouns, Verbs, Adjectives, Adverbs, Pronouns - Prepositions, Conjunctions, Interjections 2. Sentence Structure:- Subject-Verb Agreement- Sentence Fragments and Run-Ons- Punctuation rules3. Vocabulary Development:- Synonyms, Antonyms- Prefixes, Suffixes- Word Roots and OriginsIV. Speaking and Listening Skills1. Oral Presentations:- Eye Contact, Body Language- Clear Pronunciation, Voice Modulation- Organization of Ideas2. Active Listening:- Paraphrasing- Asking Questions- Engaging in DiscussionConclusion:In conclusion, mastering these skills and topics will not only help you prepare for the 9th Grade English Final Exam but also build a strong foundation for your future academic and professional success. Good luck with your studies!。
中考英语作文指导课件(7PPT)
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Student essay ments and revision suggestions
Response to…
Adherence to the given topic or task.
Common Problems in English Composition for Middle School Entrance Examination
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04
Lack of Development
Frequent errors in grammar or spelling detract from the overall quality.
Lack of support or evidence to back up claims or arguments.
05 Weaktransit…
Lack of smooth transitions between ideas or paragraphs.
Body
Develop your main ideas and论证details with clear explanations and examples.
Conclusion
Summarize your main points and leave a lasting impression on the reader.
• Writing Skills and Strategies • Analysis of Common Themes and Model
Writings
目录
CONTENTS
• Student essay ments and revision suggestions
人教版中考英语写作训练课件-生活与学习
In May, (4) __I_l_e_a_r_n_e_d_t_o__d_o_m__u_c_h_h__o_u_se_w__o_r_k__(我学会做很多家 务), such as making the bed, sweeping the floor and folding clothes.
I think(5) __t_h_e__la_b_o_r__a_c_ti_v_it_i_es__a_r_e_n_o_t_o_n_l_y_e_d_u_c_a_t_i_o_n_a_l _b_u_t__ __a_l_so__u_s_e_fu_l__(劳动活动不仅有教育意义而且有用). I’m sure the more life skills I have, the more independent I will be.
2. 中心突出，语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范； 3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
Time
Things I learned
My feelings
March
grow vegetables and plant trees
...
April
repair things like elec互动： Let’s enjoy working!
This term, I took part in a series of labour activities in our school. (1) _I__w_a_s_h__a_p_p_y_t_h_a_t_I_l_e_a_r_n_e_d_a__lo_t__(我很高兴我学到了很多东西).
话题2 健康与安全
1 假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Bill 发来邮件询问你平时体育 锻炼情况。请你根据下面提示，给Bill 回封英文邮件。 ◎要点：1. 谈谈体育锻炼的重要性；
中考英语作文复习ppt
Questions should be based on real life scenarios and contexts to ensure that the students are prepared for the types of challenges they will face in the actual exam
Example 3
Analysis
The simulated test questions cover a range of writing tasks, including descriptive writing, critical thinking, and language regulation They are designed to assess the student's ability to use English effectively in different contexts
Techniques
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Use descriptive language to create vivid images, and show ratio than tell by depicting scenes and characters
An argumentative essay presentations a point of view and defends it through logical reasoning and evidence
Detailed description
Summary: Use advanced sentence structures and vocabulary to improve language proficiency.
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Ⅷ．书面表达(本题20分，02年山东潍坊) 假设你是Li Ping，潍坊十八中的一名学生 。请根据提示写一封约120个词的英文信和一 个英文信封。 信息提示：
收信人姓 名 Jim
收信人地 址
写信人姓 名 写信人地 址 写信内容 写信日期
438King Street Australia
一般过去时： 用于过去时间里发生的事情（日记文体中）， 常见的错误是，写错动词的过去式； 被动式：was / were + done
一般将来时： 用于将要发生的事件中：will + do 或 be going to do ,常见错误是，will 或 to 之后不使用动词原形； 被动式：will be + done ; is / are going to be done
Ⅳ．书面表达(共计15分，02年河北，感谢信) 根据提示和要求完成下面短文。 假如你(Li Lei)在去年夏令营认识的一个朋友Jim 从英国给你寄来一件礼物——一件红色的衬衫，并 附有一封信。在信中他向你问好，他想知道你近来 在忙些什么。请你给他写一封回信(100个词左右) 表示感谢。回信要包括以下内容： 1．向Jim问好并对他表示感谢。 2．礼物是你最喜欢的颜色，疋寸很合适，你非 常喜欢。 3．告诉Jim你近来很好，上周刚过完生日，生日 聚会很热闹。询问Jim的近况，并表示希望他能来 中国。
name, Zhang Bin, fifteen years old, live in Beijing, favorite subject, biology …
Dear friends, I'm very glad to introduce myself to you. That's all. Thank you for listening.
June 20,2002 Dear Mr Smith, I'm sorry to tell you that…
June,20,2002
Dear Mr Smith, I'm sorry to tell you that I'm not feeling well today. I have caught a bad cold because I went swimming in the river yesterday afternoon. The doctor told me to stay in bed for two days. So I can't go to school today and tomorrow. I hope I' 11 get well very soon. Thank you. Your student Han Mei
Li Ping
New
Tom,Sydney
188 East Dongfeng Weifang,Shandong China
Street
简介潍坊，简介潍坊18中，学校生活， 个人 2002年6月23日
VIII英文信封 Li Ping 188 East Dongfeng Street 写信人地址：信封左上角 与汉语相反 Weifang, Shandong, China
No. 9 Minzu Road, Zhongshan City, Guangdong, China 528400 June 22nd,2002 Dear Jack, I am glad to receive your letter and know you want to have some pen friends in China. Now let me tell you something about my friend, Wei Hua, a student of Class 3, Grade 2 in Yucai Middle School. He would like to know something about your school life and your country. I m sure you will be good friends soon. Yours, Li Lei
一、描写 记述 （与一般的课文一样）
二、英文书信 三、英文请假条、便条
四、英文讲稿（发言稿、自我介绍
五、 英文通知 六、英文日记
看图写话：给出画面，或英文提示，按要求 写作。
看图（或材料）填空
材料作文（近年各地市常考的题型）： 给出一定的书面（中文或英文）材料，按题目要求写作
命题作文（多为描写，记事，叙述)
VIII．书面表达（共15分，02年北京海淀区） 根据中文设置的情景、英文提示词语以及表 格所提供的信息，写出语法正确、意思连贯、 符合逻辑的英文文段。 注意：1．字数60一80。 2．所给的英文提示词语及表格所提供的信 息必须都用上。（可适当发挥） 3．发言稿的开头和结尾已给出。（请不要 抄写在答题卡上） 假设你是张斌，今年暑假你将参加学校组织 的赴加拿大“绿色之旅”夏令营活动。请你准 备一篇在开营式上的自我介绍发言稿。
C)书面表达 (共10分，02年湖南益 阳）) 请代为韩梅给英语老师Mr Smith 出写一张病假条，可选用下列单词 或短语(有的要作必要的变动)。请假 条的开头部分已给出。(字数50—70)
catch a bad cold, go swimming, doctor, tell me, go to school, can not, stay in bed for two days, today and tomorrow, hope, get well, because）
Interest Free Time Activities Future Job Hope
drawing
go camping, draw pictures of plants, enjoy the singing of brids in nature.
biologist, grow up
good friends, do one's best, make the earth …
Jim 438
Town
King
Street,
New
Sydney, Australia
收信人地址：信封右下角 与st Dongfeng Street
Weifang, Shandong, China June 23, 2002
Dear Jim,
How are you? I'm very glad to write the letter to you. My name is Li Ping. I'm a Chinese boy. I'm from Weifang, China. Do you know Weifang? It's a beautiful city in Shandong. It's a kite city. I study in No. 18 Middle School. Our school is very beautiful. I'm in Class 1, Grade 3. There are 24 classes in our school. We study Chinese, maths, English and other subjects. I like English very much. I like playing computer games, football and watching TV. I have many good friends. We help each other. There are three people in my family. They are my father, my mother and I. I want to make friends with you. Please write to me soon. Welcome to Weifang. Yours Li Ping
June 21st, 2002 65 Zhonghua street Shijiazhuang 050000 Hebei China Dear Jim, How are you? Many thanks for the shirt! I'm very happy to hear from you again. I love the shirt very much, Jim. And red is my favourite colour! You remembered! It7 s just my size. Every time I wear it, I will think of you. I'm fine here in China Last week I had a birth- party. Many of my classmates came day and my mother made us a lot of good food. We really had a wonderful time together. How, are you doing in England, Jim? I miss you very much. I always miss the days we were together last summer. I hope you can come to China some day. Please write back soon. Your friend, Li Lei
词组、短语、句型搭配与使用错误
句子结构错误：缺主语，缺谓语，“系表”不分 人称代词的主、宾格不分，大 小写，标点，单复数，冠词的 使用
修饰关系错误：不能正确使用人 称代词的各种关系；名词当动词 用或动词（或形容词）当名词用； 副词与形容词的使用