2010高考英语《语法》专题复习系列课件17:《作文常用关联词》

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高三英语写作课件巧用连接词

高三英语写作课件巧用连接词
英语书面表达中
连词的巧用
6.表递进关系: what’s more\worse\better, besides, in addition, worse still, to make things worse, moreover, furthermore, above all, not only… but also等 7.表示总结关系: in short, all in all,in brief, in a word, in general/generally speaking, as you know, as far as I know ,on the whole, to sum up 等
从属连词
从属连词连接两个或两个以上的分句,形成复杂句 中的从属分句(又可分为三类:定语从句、名词性 从句和状语从句)。 例如: (4) He said that he did not want to go . (5) Many things have happened since I last saw him. (6) Do as I told you.
亮点一共有四种: 1.高级词汇和语法; 2.修辞手法; 3.名人名言或谚语; 4.有效的连接词。
连接词的复习:
连接词是连接单词、短语或从句的词或词群, 不能独立充当句子成分。 在英语词类中,连接词可说是最容易掌握的一种。
英语连接词分两大类:并列连接词和从属连接词。
并列连词
并列连词连接两个或两个以上地位平等的词、 词组或分句。 例如: (1) Air and water are indispensable to me. (2) She likes going out with friends or playing outdoor games. (3) Most workers have a good income, so they look very happy.

高分作文常用连接词

高分作文常用连接词

高分作文常用连接词1.表层次First, firstly, to begin with, in the first place, second, secondly, to start with, still, furthermore, third, thirdly, what’s more, last but not least, also, and then, next besides, and equally important too, moreover, besides, in addition, finally2.表转折Although, though, yet, at the same time, but, despite the fact that, even so, in contrast nevertheless even though on the other hand otherwise instead still regardless3.表因果Therefore consequently because of, for this reason, thus, hence, due to, owing to, so, accordingly, thanks to, on this account, since, as, on that account, in this way, for4.表递进Furthermore, moreover, likewise, what is more, besides, also, not only…but also…5.表举例For example, for instance, for one thing that is to illustrate6.表解释As a matter of fact, frankly speaking, in this case, namely, in other word7.表总结In summary, in a word, thus, as has been said, in brief, in conclusion, in other words, to conclude, finally, in simpler terms, in short, on the whole, to put it simply, in all, therefore, to summarize.8.表强调Of course, indeed, surely, as a matter of fact, above all, most important, in particular, that is to say, certainly, in fact, anyway, in this case, naturally, obviously, no doubt, actually, clearly9.表比较In comparison, likewise, however, similarly, equally, in the same way, unlike10.表时间After a while, afterward, and then, presently, at last, simultaneously, at length, at that time ,since, so far, eventually, finally, subsequently, then, further, thereafter, in the first place, in the past, until now, meanwhile lately.图表作文1.图表类型表格TABLE (每个后面都是配有原图的这个可以在WORD文档中做出这些图表来的,请注意每一个都要添置图样这样利于你的PPT教学)柱状图BAR CHART饼状图PIE CHART坐标曲线图GRAPH2.图表作文的写作步骤:根据图表的要求一般可以分三段来写第一段大体描述出图表反映的总的情况第二段是对数据进行比较和分析,并做出归纳,找出变化的原因和结果最后一段是写出自己的结论和建议3.例文Average number of hours of a student spends on the computer per weeka.图所示为1990年1995年2000年某校大学生使用计算机的情况,请描述变化b.请说明发生这些变化的原因(可以从计算机的用途、价格、或社会发展等方面加以说明)c.你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有什么困难或问题。

高考英语语法专项之连词课件

高考英语语法专项之连词课件

因果连词
因果连词
as和for都可以表示因果关系,但是as表示两个事 件同时发生,而for表示第一个事件是第二个事件 的原因。例如:I cannot go to the party as I have to work.(我不能去参加派对,因为我还要 工作。)I cannot go to the party, for I have to work.(我不能去参加派对,因为我还要工作。)
转折连词
转折连词
"Instead" is a conjunction that is used to introduce a contrasting idea or a shift in the topic. For example, "I don't want to go to the concert. Instead, I want to stay home and watch a movie." In this sentence, "instead" is used to show a contrast between the desire to go to the concert and the desire to stay home.
转折连词
转折连词
"Despite this" is a conjunction that is used to introduce a contrast or a shift in the topic. For example, "I really want to go to the concert despite this, I don't have enough money." In this sentence, "despite this" is used to show a contrast between the desire to go to the concert and the lack of funds to do so.

高考英语语法考点复习课件-介词和连词

高考英语语法考点复习课件-介词和连词





6. The road conditions there turned out to be very good,________ was more than we could which expect. 7. I thought we’d be late for the concert, _____________ we ended up getting there but ahead of time. 8. Everything was perfect for the picnic ___________ the weather. except for 9. There were some chairs left over __________everyone had sat down. after
主从句 的词,主要有定语 从属连词是连接 _____________ 从句中的___________, 关系词 名词性从句中的__________ 连接词 及状 语从句中的 ____________. 引导词 所以首先要判断出主句和从 句,从属连词便位于从句前,再根据从句的性质及它和 主句的关系确定该用哪一个从属连词。
5. 尽管他很累了,他还是继续工作 Although he was tired, he still went on working. Although/though引导的从句用正常语序. As 引导的从句用倒装语序, 即把as从句中的表语,状语或 动词原形提至主语前. 尽管天气冷,可他仍继续工作.
Though it was cold, he went on working.
他是一个科学家, 但也是一个诗人.
He is a scientist, but he is a poet as well.

高考英语作文常用连接词ppt课件

高考英语作文常用连接词ppt课件
I’m very pleased to tell you the changes in my life since our homework has reduced. Before that, learning during the day was very simple. Having class and doing homework was the only thing we should do. In the evening, we also had a lot of homework to do. We could not go to bed until 11:30. Nevertheless, since reducing the learning load, my life has become much more interesting. I often visit museums and computer rooms and draw pictures in my spare time. In the evening, I also have time to watch TV and read newspapers. I no longer stay up late; on the contrary, I go to bed at about 10 pm.
给澳大利亚的朋友写一封信,谈谈减负给学生的学习 和生活带来的变化。
【Sample 1】 第_______ 档次
I will tell you the changes of my life. Before, we had many classes every day. I had to do a lot of homework after school. I went to bed at 11:30 in the evening. I had no time to play. I was very tired.

(完整版)高中英语作文常用关联词及高级词汇

(完整版)高中英语作文常用关联词及高级词汇

高中英语作文常用关联词及高级词汇A、常用关联词一、表示递进关系的关键词语additionally 加之;又besides 此外;除……之外equally important 同样重要的是furthermore 此外;而且in addition 另外in other words 换句话说last but not least 最后但同样重要的是moreover 而且;此外that is to say 即;就是;换句话说what’s more 而且;此外二、表示转折关系的关键词语although 虽然;尽管at the same time 同时;但是despite 不管;尽管;不论even if 即使even though 即使however 然而;可是in spite of 不管instead 代替;而不是nevertheless 然而;不过on the contrary 正相反otherwise 另外;不同地regardless of 不管;不顾still 依然;仍然though 虽然;可是while 而yet 然而;但是;仍三、表示选择关系的关键词语either…or………或……instead of………,而不是……neither…nor………和……都不……not…but…不是……而是……rather than…宁可;胜过whether…or not 是否四、表示比较关系的关键词语compare with/to 与……比较equally 相等地;平等地in comparison with 与……比较in contrast 相反;大不相同in contrast to 和……对比in the same way 同样地instead 代替;改为on the contrary 正相反while 而五、表示因果关系的关键词语accordingly 因此;从而as a result of 作为结果because (of)因为consequently 从而;因此due to 由于;应归于hence 因此;从此in that 由于;因为;既然now that 因为;既然on account of 由于owing to 由于;因……的缘故so 所以so that 所以thanks to 由于therefore 因此;所以thus 因此六、用于表示总结的关键词语above all 最重要的是accordingly 于是as a consequence 因此as has been noted 如前所述at last 最后briefly 简要扼要地by doing so 如此certainly 当然地;无疑地consequently 因此eventually 最后hence 因此in a word 总之in brief 简言之in conclusion 总之;最后in short 简而言之in summary 简要地说in sum 总之;简而言之obviously 显然on the whole 总体说来;整个看来to conclude 总而言之to speak frankly 坦白地说to sum up 总而言之to summarize 总而言之B、高级词汇a handful of 少数的the majority of多数的a variety of 各种各样的accelerate the pace of 加快步伐……according to 根据acquire knowledge 获得知识anyhow 不管怎样appoint sb. as 任命apply sth. in our daily life 运用到生活之中arise from = result from 根源于as a general rule 一般情况下assume 假设;设想be associated with = be linked with = be related to 与……有关的be disconnected from 与……脱离be eager to 渴望be superior to 比……优越;超过beyond sth. 表示超出能力范围beyond repair 无法修理choke off 阻塞Conclusively,same valid evidence,总结性地,一些有理的令人信服发证据consult sb. 向某人咨询、求助current situation 现在的情形distinction = difference 不同点explicit = definite = specific 明确的;清晰的gain experience 获得经验guide sth. to do 指导……handle = deal with 处理;解决in advance 提前;预先in large quantities 大量的a large quantity of + 可数n.in that case 在那种情况下judging from/by 由……评判meet our demands 满足我们的需要obtain = acquire = gain 得到on that basis 在此基础上permit sb. to do = allow doing sth.potential = probable 可能的purify our heart 净化我们的心灵reliable 可靠的relieve sth. 缓解情感sacrifice = devote oneself to(to为介词)= contribute tosplit up 分开如:Our opinions are split up / divided into two halves.spring up 突然涌现sth. remain + adj. or to be done 仍然……sth. work effectively 奏效地undertake 承担;担任up to you 取决于你worn out = give out = be exhausted 筋疲力尽的★高分词与保分词的对换accurate代替rightall sorts of代替all kinds ofapplaud for sb.为……鼓掌代替support sb. / in favour ofbe capable of能够代替canchief代替main 主要的dull代替boringdynamic代替lively 有生气的for the time being代替at present目前;暂时It is a pleasure that…代替表述……是快乐的事(pleasure n.快乐的事)merely代替only 仅仅;只不过thus代替so 因此;因而turn to代替ask for helpwe all have faith in相信;信任代替believe widespread代替common。

精品高三高考英语作文常用连接词PPT课件

精品高三高考英语作文常用连接词PPT课件
第四档. 16~20分
第二档. 6~10分
第一档. 1~5分 0分
第三档. 11~15分
覆盖所有内容要 点
应用了较多的语 法结构和词汇
2、主要内容: 内容要点; 词汇和语法的数量和准确性; 上下文的连贯; 有效地使用 语言的得体性 语言地道, 了语句间的
连接成分 规范
3、拼写和标点是语言准确性
的一个方面,评分时,应视 其对交际的影响程度予以考 虑。
注意:
5、检查修改,规范抄写
给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象
1. Heading
点题;一两个句子;概括性;暗示性
整 体 三 部 分
2. Body
中心记述部分;层次分明
3. Ending
小结;呼应主题
增强书面表达效果的技巧
1. 使用较高级的词汇
词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少,也 是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。 运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增 色不少,从而使整篇文章因此而生 辉。 使用恰当连接词,对写一篇有“英 语味”的文章很重要,能使文章上 下衔接自然、紧凑。
书面表达系列讲练
之 赢取高分策略 高考英语作文常用连接词
NMET对书面表达的要求
要求考生根据所给情景,用英语写一篇 100个单词左右的短文 情景包括目的、对 象、时间、地点、内容等;提供情景的形式 有图画、图表、提纲等。 本部分满分25/30分,所需时间约为30分 钟。
NMET书面表达评分原则 1、先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定档次。 第五档. 21~25分
The plan turned out to be a failure.
6. When she heard he had died, she went pale with At the news of his death, she went pale with sorrow. 7. She went to Austria in order to studmy opinion, cyber cafes should be a place where we can find much useful information. Let’s come to the main teaching building, at the back of which stands the school library. 7、 各种名词性从句 e.g. That’s what I should do. We should do a favour to whoever needs help at present.

高考英语作文关联词

高考英语作文关联词
《作文常用关联词》
表示时间关系:first, second, then, finally/at last/ in the end , soon immediately, suddenly, at the same time, meanwhile, recently
表示对称顺序关系:for one thing….. for the other thing, on one hand,…..on the other hand,above all, first of all, firstly, secondly, next, finally,the former….the latter,
3) try to make the classes lively and interesting
2、审题不全面,忽 略了对青年教师这部 分信息的处理。这一 点是比较大的失误。
teachers are also good.
学生作品2:
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55%of the students think they should take all kinds of exercises every day ,such as doing morning exercises, playing table tennis and playing basketball, but not spend too much time on them . As a proverb says ,” all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. "Exercise builds up their body and reduce lots of diseases. Sports let them have a good rest so that their study will be more effective.

中考英语写作中必须掌握的常用连词的使用PPT课件

中考英语写作中必须掌握的常用连词的使用PPT课件

9.therefore/ thus因此;所以 10.now that+句子 既然 翻译:既然你知道你错了,那你就因该及时去纠正你的错误。 _N_o_w_ __t_h_a_t_ you know you are wrong, you shouclodrr_e_c_t____ yomuirst_a_k_e_s__i_n__ ____ti_m_e___.
We should _v_a_l_u_e_/_c_h_e_r_i_s_h time in_s_t_e_a_d__ o_f__ _w_a_s_t_i_ng time.
7.on the contrary 正相反 翻译:他看起来很穷,正相反,他很富裕。 He seems very poor,on___ t_h_e__ _c_o_n_t_r_a_r_y, he is very rich.
构成语篇连接成分的过渡词语被称为篇章纽带说明其在语篇衔接作用是不言而喻所以要学会正确恰当地使用这些表示逻辑关系的关Байду номын сангаас词使文章前后连贯结构紧凑过渡自然
兰溪市梅江初中 欧克刚
The importance of link words
中考书面表达的评分标准把衔接和连贯作为核 心标准之一要求的。之所以如此强调文章的衔 接与连贯,是因为这是构成语篇的最基本条件。 而语句间的连接成分(即连词)是衡量衔接与 连贯的重要体现。构成语篇连接成分的过渡词 语,被称为“篇章纽带”,说明其在语篇衔接 作用是不言而喻,所以要学会正确恰当地使用 这些表示逻辑关系的关联词,使文章前后连贯、 结构紧凑、过渡自然。
三.表示选择关系的关键词
1.either…or… 或者……或者--造--句--:E_i_t_h_e_r__y_o_u__o_r__h_e__c_a_n__g_o__o_u_t__w_i_t_h__y_o_u_r_

高中英语作文常用连词(共12张PPT)【完美版】

高中英语作文常用连词(共12张PPT)【完美版】

表示举例常用词语
for instance 例如 for example 例如 A case in point is... 一个典型的例子就是…… An interesting example is that... 一个有趣的例子
是…… As is shown by the case of... 正如同……的例子说
高中英语作文常用连词(共12张PPT)【 完美版 】
高中英语作文常用连词(共12张PPT)【 完美版 】
表因果
Because (of)因为
Consequently,... 所以,……结果,……
பைடு நூலகம்
accordingly 按照……
Therefore,... 所以
For this reason,... 正因为如此
高中英语作文常用连词(共12张PPT)【 完美版 】
高中英语作文常用连词(共12张PPT)【 完美版 】
表结论
In short,... 总之 In brief,... 总之 To sum up,... 总之 In conclusion 总之 In summary 总之 To summarize 总之 All in all 总之 In a word 总之 To make (cut) a long story short,... 简而言之 Everything considered,... 总而言之 I will conclude by saying/citing 最后我要…… Therefore,we have every reason to believe that... 所以
高中英语作文常用连词(共12张PPT)【 完美版 】
高中英语作文常用连词(共12张PPT)【 完美版 】

高考英语一轮复习语法专题课件 17:作文常用关联词(人教版)18页PPT

高考英语一轮复习语法专题课件 17:作文常用关联词(人教版)18页PPT
高考英语一轮复习语法专头脑有特别的 亲和力 。 27、自信是人格的核心。
28、目标的坚定是性格中最必要的力 量泉源 之一, 也是成 功的利 器之一 。没有 它,天 才也会 在矛盾 无定的 迷径中 ,徒劳 无功。- -查士 德斐尔 爵士。 29、困难就是机遇。--温斯顿.丘吉 尔。 30、我奋斗,所以我快乐。--格林斯 潘。
45、自己的饭量自己知道。——苏联
41、学问是异常珍贵的东西,从任何源泉吸 收都不可耻。——阿卜·日·法拉兹
42、只有在人群中间,才能认识自 己。——德国
43、重复别人所说的话,只需要教育; 而要挑战别人所说的话,则需要头脑。—— 玛丽·佩蒂博恩·普尔
44、卓越的人一大优点是:在不利与艰 难的遭遇里百折不饶。——贝多芬

高考英语 专题解析写作基础 活用关联词语课件

高考英语 专题解析写作基础 活用关联词语课件
表举例: for example/instance, take... for example, such as, as follows, and so on等 表总结: in short,in a word,in conclusion, in brief,generally speaking, to sum up,all in all等
For another thing
For one thing
7. One can keep fit in the following ways. ______, one should keep a balanced diet. _______, one is to exercise regularly. ______, one is to get rid of bad habits, such as drinking and smoking. _________________, make sure to be always in a good mood.
As far as I know
Besides /What’s more/
In addition
3. There are many advantages of smiling. It can _______make us happy, ______ please others. 4. Li Ming used to be a healthy boy, ___ over a year ago, he got into the habit of eating a lot of junk food and snacks. _______, he spent a lot of time lying on the sofa, watching TV, and did little exercise. ___________, he put on so much weight that he found it difficult to climb the stairs.

高考英语作文常用的关联词

高考英语作文常用的关联词
furthermore, moreover, besides, also, too, in addition, what's more, what' not only…but also only…
5.表示列举: 5.表示列举: 表示列举
namely, for example, for instance, that is
组织结构5 组织结构5分.
评分时应注意内容要点,应用词汇和语法 评分时应注意内容要点,
结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性. 结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性.
评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确 评分时,
定所属档次, 定所属档次,然后对照相应的组织结构档 次给予加分.其中, 次给予加分.其中,内容和语言两部分相 15分以上者 可考虑加4~5分 分以上者, 加,得15分以上者,可考虑加4~5分, 15分以下者只能考虑加0,1, 2,3分. 15分以下者只能考虑加 分以下者只能考虑加0
8. 表示总结: 表示总结:
as I have said, as the above examples show, in brief,in short, in a word, to conclude, to summarize, to sum up
总分为25分,其中内容10分, 语言10分, 总分为25分 其中内容10分 语言10分
6. 因果关系: 因果关系:
because, since, as, for, therefore, so, thus, as a result, because of, due to, owing to, thanks to, for this reason
7. 强调关系: 强调关系:
certainly, of course, in fact, as a matter of fact, above all, that is to say

高考英语一轮复习语法专题课件 17:作文常用关联词(人教版)共18页

高考英语一轮复习语法专题课件 17:作文常用关联词(人教版)共18页
复习语法专题课件 17: 作文常用关联词(人教版)
1、战鼓一响,法律无声。——英国 2、任何法律的根本;不,不成文法本 身就是 讲道理 ……法 律,也 ----即 明示道 理。— —爱·科 克
3、法律是最保险的头盔。——爱·科 克 4、一个国家如果纲纪不正,其国风一 定颓败 。—— 塞内加 5、法律不能使人人平等,但是在法律 面前人 人是平 等的。 ——波 洛克
6、最大的骄傲于最大的自卑都表示心灵的最软弱无力。——斯宾诺莎 7、自知之明是最难得的知识。——西班牙 8、勇气通往天堂,怯懦通往地狱。——塞内加 9、有时候读书是一种巧妙地避开思考的方法。——赫尔普斯 10、阅读一切好书如同和过去最杰出的人谈话。——笛卡儿
Thank you

高考英语复习连接词的分类和运用PPT课件

高考英语复习连接词的分类和运用PPT课件
Everybody was touched/beyond words/after/they heard her moving story.
• • 7. 我一到家就发现夹克衫落在操场了。(the moment+句
子Th,e一m…om…en就t/I…go…t )home/, I founபைடு நூலகம்/I have left my jacket/on the playground.
• 6. 国产洗衣机已经受到世界的关注,海尔已经 成W为as知hin名g m品a牌ch。ine(sw/minadweoirnldCwhiindae/haattveenwtioonn)
worldwide attention/and / Haier / has become a popular brand.
2. 尽管多次被人误会,但是对于那些跟他打招呼 的人,他还是很友好的。(in spite of repeated Inwsrpoitnegosf)repeated wrongs/done to him/, he looks friendly
/to the people/greeting him.
3. 昨天晚上,Mr. Crook没有像往常一样按时回 来。相反地,他去见了几个朋友,一直待到半 L夜ast才nig回ht来/M。r. C(arosouksduidanl/’tact oumseuabal ctki/matet,heinusstueaaldti)me.

Since then/, he has developed/another bad habit.
• 2. 自那以后,他养成了另一个坏习惯。(since thSheorntly) after/he came in, he cried/on his desk.
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关键句子:60%of us consider it necessary to go to college
10% of students think it no use going to college 30% believe “All roads lead to Rome.”
范例2: 某 中 学 生 英 语 报 社 正 开 展 一 场 题 为 “ Young teachers or elderly teachers,which do you prefer?” 请你依据下面表格所提供的要点写一篇短文,向该报社投稿。
老年教师 · 教学耐心.讲解细致.经验丰富 青年教师
· 精力充沛.教学活泼.勇于创新
你的观点?
注意:1.词数100左右,开头语已为你写好,不计入总数;2.短 文必须包含表格的全部内容。要求观点明确,结构合理,紧凑连贯
学生作品1: 点评: 1) Compare with young teachers, I prefer 亮点:1、观点鲜明, elderly teachers. There are some reasons 词汇句型的运用 比较灵活 below. 2、过渡词及连词的 For one thing, most of elderly teachers 使用使文章结构紧 2) are patient in teaching. They not only 凑连贯、条理清楚。 ∧ spare no effort to teach the students, but 不足之处: 3)
练习1:“你们班会的讨论主题是“上大学是高中生唯一的 出路吗?”请根据下面提供的信息.写一偏短文,客观的介 绍下讨论的情况,并发表自己的观点. 比例 观点 理由 60% 上大学 30% 无所谓 10% 不上大学 学费高, 就业难
增长知识, 成功的路 提高素养, 不只一条 利于择业
我的看法
关键词语:widen knowledge, improve qualities, high tuition, senior students
休息
学习有效果 浪费时间 投入学习 受伤
have a rest
study more effectively a waste of time pay attention to study be hurt
1.….have had a discussion about whether students of Senior 3 should take physical exercises. As we know, every coin has two coins./Different students have different ideas . 2.55%of the students think………….such as(举 例)……..(原因)….. 2.作文结构
One possible version:
Opinions are divided on this question. Some students may like elderly teachers' teaching because they think elderly teachers have more teaching experience and that they tend to be patient and careful with explanations. However, I prefer to be taught by young teachers. Firstly, we students have much in common with them. So they are our friends as well as our teachers. Secondly, they are more .energetic and enthusiastic. Usually they can make their classes lively and interesting. Besides, they are more ready to accept or create new ideas, including teaching. Thirdly, most young teachers devote themselves to their work, making them teach creatively and effectively. In a word, I prefer young teachers to elderly teachers.
lot of experience. 3) However, \ others have a different the 需要改进的地方: 4) opinion. They think the teachers who are 1) prefer the elderly young are full of energy. Besides, their teachers to the teaching is lively and they dare to bring in young ones 2) with explanations the new ideas. Well, in my opinion, I like both the elderly 3) the 去掉 4) The young teachers and the young ones because from teachers them we both can learn a lot.
范例1:假如你事实李华,你班同 学最近开长了一场讨论,主题是: 高三学生要不要参加体育锻炼, 请根据下面所提供的信息,写一 篇短文,介绍讨论的情况,并发 表自己的观点.
比例
55%
45%
你的观 点
观点
支持
1.应该明天进行 体育锻炼2.做早 操,打乒乓球,打 篮球,但时间不要 过3.锻炼能增强 质减少疾病4.锻 炼能使大脑休息, 使学习效果更好.
1、个别地方的表达需 要改进。 1) Compared 2) more 3) try to make the classes lively and interesting 2、审题不全面,忽 略了对青年教师这部 分信息的处理。这一 点是比较大的失误。
学生作品2:
点评: Opinions are divided on this question. 亮点: 1) Some students who like the elderly 1、段落清楚,要点齐 teachers more than the young ones think that 全,句式表达比较灵 the elderly ones are more patient in teaching, 活,能适当运用复句。 2) more careful in explaining and also have a 2、过渡词运用也比较 熟练。
2010高考英语《语法》 专题复习系列课件
17《作文常用关联词》
审校:王伟
表示时间关系:first, second, then, finally/at last/ in the end , soon immediately, suddenly, at the same time, meanwhile, recently 表示对称顺序关系:for one thing….. for the other thing, on one hand,…..on the other hand,above all, first of all, firstly, secondly, next, finally,the former….the latter,
also give classes carefully .They will do all they can to make the students understand the teaching content.What good teachers! For another thing, elderly teachers are full of teaching experience. This is also the most important, especially for us senior students. This is only my opinion. I think young teachers are also good.
• On the other hand,45% of the students believe taking exercise is a waste of time and tiring. After taking exercise, they are too excited for a long time to pay attention to their lessons. And it’s possible to be hurt in sports. • In my opinion, I prefer to take proper exercises in my spare time.
3.On the other hand,45% of the students believe…….(原因)……..
4.In my opinion, I prefer to
3.范文:
Recently , we have had a discussion about whether have had a discussion about whether students of Senior 3 should take physical exercises. As we know, every coin has two coins. 55%of the students think they should take all kinds of exercises every day ,such as doing morning exercises, playing table tennis and playing basketball, but not spend too much time on them . As a proverb says ,” all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. "Exercise builds up their body and reduce lots of diseases. Sports let them have a good rest so that their study will be more effective.
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