高考英语作文—人物写作

启示：用复合句、倒装句等，润色文章
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5、事业及成就
常用表达式： 1. one of the best/most important…最好的/重要的…之一 2. set a …example to为……树立榜样 3. be honoured as…被授予…… 4. win the …prize 获得……荣誉 5. make great contribution to 为……作出巨大贡献
• 性格特征
好心的 热心的 心不在焉的
warm-hearted kind-hearted absent-minded bad-tempered strong-willed naughty smart/bright/clever wise diligent humorous talkative confident independent patient
启示：巧用with做定语
3、教育经历
常用表达式： He was admitted to New York university 考取……大学 graduate from …department of … university从某大学某系毕业 receive/get a doctor’s degree 获取博士学位 major in 主修 go on further education 深造
翻译：因为当时在波兰妇女不能上大学,中学毕业后, 她 决定去巴黎大学深造，并顺利地取得了物理博士学位。
Because at that time women were not admitted to universities in Poland, she decided to go on further education at Paris University after graduating from middle school, where she received a doctor‘s degree in physics .
翻译：她一生致力于科学研究，在1903年和1911年分别获诺贝尔物 理奖和化学奖，成为世界上第一位两次获得诺贝尔奖的科学家。
She devoted all her life to scientific research and received Nobel prizes for physics and chemistry, which made her become the first scientist in the world to win two Nobel prizes.
How to describe a person
What aspects should be included?
1. 概况：age, sex, birth, family background 2. 外貌／性格：appearance, character/ personality 3. 教育：education 4. 理想：ambitions 5. 事业及成就：career and achievements 6. 评价： evaluation (what other people think of her)
坏脾气的 很强的意志力 淘气的 聪明的 睿智的 勤奋的 幽默的 能说会道的 有信心的 独立的 有耐心的
• 爱好
非常喜欢 对„„感兴趣 对„„失去兴趣 对„„极度喜欢 对„„厌倦 憎恨 喜欢 I like … very much He is interested in… He loses interest in… He is crazy about… He is tired of… hate enjoy/love/be fond of
他对科学极有兴趣,也有音乐天赋。 Not only is he interested in science, but also he has a gift for music.
居里夫人常说：“我们必须努力工作，而且最重要的是， 我们必须对自己有信心。”
Madame Curie often said: "We must work hard, and above all we must believe in ourselves."
As a great woman scientist, Madame Curie will be remembered for her determination, courage, her willingness to share her knowledge and her interest in women’s rights. Madame Curie set us a good example, so all the people speak highly of her and all respect her.
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Let’s write a about a famous woman.
假设明天是三八妇女节，你打算用英语向全班同学简 要介绍我国优秀妇女代表林巧稚的相关情况。请你按下面 提供的内容和要求用英语写一篇介绍她的短文。
生平 经历 1901年12月23日生于福建省厦门市一个教员家庭
评价
1.刻苦、执着、善良的性格使她考入医学院并立志 献身医学事业； 2.全心全意为病人服务，为我国妇女儿童的健康事 业做出了重要的贡献； 3.1983年4月22日逝世于北京，享年82岁； 深受人民爱戴和尊敬，是医务工作者学习的楷模
启示：可用连词，从句等, 使文章连贯通顺
4、理想与信念
常用表达式： serve as…做某种工作 devote oneself /one’s effort to/ be devoted to 一生致力于 concentrate /focus on专注于 make up one’s mind to do…/be determined to do决心做 have a gift for / be gifted in 有……的天赋
Best wishes, Yours, Li Hua
• Dear Peter, • I’m Li Hua, one of your students. I’m writing to see whether it is convenient for you to do me a favor. • Aiming to improve my English as well as learning more about western cultures, I expect to have a pen friend, hopefully a girl in her early twenties with interests similar to mine. In my mind, she is someone who not only is interested in traveling and swimming, but also has a pet dog as I do. I believe that it will be a great pleasure to have such a friend, with whom I can share our traveling experiences or how to take care of pets. • I would appreciate it if you could introduce me such a perfect pen friend. Looking forward to your early reply. • Yours • Li Hua
Sentence patterns
1. 概况：age, sex, birth, family background
…was/ were born in/into (a poor family) on… As a child of … years old, he… He spent his childhood in … live a happy/hard life
• 2007年全国卷1(求助信)
• 假定你是李华，希望通过外籍教师Peter找一个英语 笔友，请写一封短信，描述一下你理想中笔友的条件， 并说明为什么选择这样的笔友，具体条件包括： • 1.年龄， • 2.性别， • 3.爱好（旅游，运动，宠物等） 字数，120左右，可以适当增加细节
Dear Peter, I’m Li Hua, one of your students. I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor. _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ ______________________________________________
6、评价
常用表达式： As a great/outstanding…, she is highly thought of . Being the …, she is regarded as …. set a good example to… be remembered for
作为一位伟大的女科学家，居里夫人的决心、勇气、乐意与人分 享知识的精神以及她对女权所表示出来的兴趣都将永远为人们所 怀念。她给我们树立了一个良好的榜样,我们都很敬重她。
林肯，一个贫苦家庭的儿子，于1809年2月12日出生于肯德基州。
Lincoln, the son of a poor family, was born in Kentucky on February 12,1809. 启示：尽量用分词短语、同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺
2、外貌 / 性格
我的历史老师是个漂亮女人，她长着两只 大眼睛，留着长发. My history teacher is a beautiful woman with two big eyes and long hair.
启示：运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组
话题词汇/词组/句型
• 外貌：
相貌英俊的 外表可笑的 丑陋的 外貌平平的 白头发的 近/远视的 时尚的 有魅力的 苗条的
good-looking funning-looking ugly-looking ordinary-looking white-haired near/far-sighted fashionable charming, attractive slim
钟南山１９４１年生于广州，是中国最伟大的医生之一。 ① Zhong Nanshan, born in Guangzhou in 1941, is one of the greatest doctors in China. ② Zhong Nanshan, one of the greatest doctors in China, was born in Guangzhou in 1941.