天津高考英语写作分类训练:开放性作文
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开放性作文
1.假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津,下周你校将与英国姊妹校线上“云”交流校园生活。
高中三年即将结束,回顾丰富多彩的校园生活,哪一次校园活动给你留下了美好而深刻的印象呢请你以“The Most Impressive School Activity”为题写一篇发言稿。
内容包括:
1.介绍活动过程;
2.分享个人感受。
注意:短文不少于100词。
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2.假设你是某国际学校的学生会主席李津,你校刚刚开展了走进社区的一系列文明实践活动。
请你为校园广播站写一篇英文活动报道,内容包括:
(1)介绍你们参加的活动(如照顾老人;宣传交通法规等)及其原因;
(2)说明此项活动的意义;
(3)简单介绍此项活动引起的反响。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
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请你以“Let’s
Promote Ecotourism”为题写一篇发言稿参赛,内容包括:
1.当前趋势;
2.你的观点(良好旅游体验、生态友好可持续发展、促进经济发展等等);
3.你的倡议。
注意:
1.词数100以上;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头已给出,不计入总数。
Let’s Promote Eeotourism
Good morning, dear friends. My name is Li Jin. I’d like to take this opportunity to talk about ecotourism.
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4.你校正在为即将举行的国际交流生研学活动布置校园文化宣传栏,请你为其中的“书香校园(scholarly school)”版块写一篇英文介绍词,内容包括:
1.内涵意义:
2.具体实践。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Scholarly School
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5.假定你是李华。
你的学校新来一批美国交流生,学校要组织迎新晚会。
请你用英语给他们写一封电子邮件,邀请他们参加,内容如下:
1.时间:本周五晚上7—9点;
2.地点:学校礼堂;
3.活动内容:文艺节目;中美学生互动。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear friends,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua 6.假定你是李华,你校上周六上午邀请了著名京剧大师M,M做了一场精彩的讲座。
请你写一篇新闻报通,发表在学校的英文报上。
内容包括:
1讲座的目的;
2.讲座的过程;
3.讲座的反响。
注意:1. 词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Lecture on Beijing Opera
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_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ 7.假定你是李华,你所在高中正在举办题为“My Unforgettable Mother’s Day Experience”的征文比赛,请你写一篇短文参赛,要点包括:
1.节日简介;
2.庆祝活动;
3.你的感受。
注意:1.词数100词左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
My Unforgettable Mother’s Day Experience
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8.假设你是学校英语俱乐部成员,该俱乐部将举办主题为“How did you spend this Spring Festival?”的交流活动,请你用英语写一篇发言稿,届时与大家分享。
内容包括:
1.你是怎样过这个春节的;
2.你的感受或收获是什么。
注意:1.词数100左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Hello, everyone! I’m honored to share with you how I spent this Spring Festival.
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Thanks for listening!
9.假定你是某校的英文报记者李华。
你们学校最近举办了一次主题为“来华留学生讲中国故事”的英语征文大赛。
请你写一篇英文报道,内容包括:
1. 参赛情况;
2. 获奖情况:10名同学分获一、二、三等奖;
3. 活动反响。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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10.环境问题影响着人们的工作、学习和生活,而我们的工作和生活又使环境问题越来越严重,假如你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津,准备以“What Can We Do for the Environment in Our School” 为题,写一篇保护环境的英语演讲稿,号召同学们从我做起,从身边小事做起,共同保护环境。
1. 简述学校内存在的环境问题;
2. 可以采取的措施;(至少写出两点措施或建议)
3. 提出倡议。
注意:词数100 左右;可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
What Can We Do for the Environment in Our School
Hello, everyone.
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Thank you for your listening.
1.Hello, everyone!
I’m Li Jin, a senior three student from Chenguang high school. I’m more than delighted to communicate with the classmates from the sister school in Britain online about campus life. Looking back, I find the past days have witnessed plenty of memorable activities. And the one that impressed me most is the coming-of-age ceremony.
The meaningful event was held on May 4th to honor the students who had turned 18. We gathered at the stadium, wearing traditional dresses. First, our principal sincerely extended his congratulations on us becoming grown-ups. And we reviewed our high school life together, which was full of happiness. Then followed the Confucian-style coming-of-age ceremonies —Ji Li (for girls) and Guan Li (for boys). Finally, we made a solemn vow to shoulder the responsibilities of an adult.
Personally, this activity not only exposed us to traditional Chinese culture, but also motivated us to embrace the new identity and live up to our promise. We, 18-year-olds, should cherish our youth.
That’s all. Thank you.
【导语】本篇书面表达为一篇应用文。
要求学生以“The Most Impressive School Activity”为题
写一篇发言稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累:
高兴的:delighted→pleased/cheerful
回顾:review→look back/retrospect
激励:motivate→inspire/stimulate
2.句式拓展:
原句:Personally, this activity not only exposed us to traditional Chinese culture, but also motivated us to embrace the new identity and live up to our promise.
拓展句:Personally, not only did this activity expose us to traditional Chinese culture, but also it motivated us to embrace the new identity and live up to our promise.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
Looking back, I find the past days have witnessed plenty of memorable activities.(运用了现在分词作状语。
)
【高分句型2】
And we reviewed our high school life together, which was full of happiness.(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句。
)
2.Our school has just launched a series of civilized practice activities into the community, which include taking care of the elderly and publicizing traffic laws and regulations and so on. The reason why we held these activities is that more elderly people need care and some uncivilized phenomena still exist. The significance is to raise people’s awareness of becoming a caring and civilized man. Through these activities, our activities have been covered by a variety of media outlets and aroused a strong response. More and more people who are willing to care about others and laws and regulations are called on to participate in them.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,假设你是某国际学校的学生会主席李津,你校刚刚开展了走进社区的一系列文明实践活动。
请你为校园广播站写一篇英文活动报道。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
包括:include→ involve
照顾:take care of→ look after
重要性:significance→ importance
参加:participate in→ take part in
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Through these activities, our activities have been covered by a variety of media outlets and aroused a strong response.
拓展句:It is through these activities that our activities have been covered by a variety of media outlets and aroused a strong response.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The reason why we held these activities is that more elderly people need care and some uncivilized phenomena still exist.(why引导的限制性定语从句和that引导的表语从句)
[高分句型2] Our school has just launched a series of civilized practice activities into the community, which include taking care of the elderly and publicizing traffic laws and regulation.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
3.Let’s Promote Eeotourism
Good morning, dear friends. My name is Li Jin. I’d like to take this opportunity to talk about ecotourism. Commonly regarded as low impact travel to undisturbed places, ecotourism has become increasingly popular these year.
As for me, ecotourism is a true eco-friendly trip. With the aim of sustainable development, ecotourism calls on tourists to enjoy the scenery without damaging the natural environment. Therefore, it does little harm to the environment. By being exposed to natural areas, tourists can have a pleasant experience to get close to nature. Meanwhile, ecotourism benefits the economic development of local communities.
Ecotourism means responsible and sustainable travel. We have only one planet. To protect our planet, I do hope we can live in harmony with nature and make sure that ecotourism can provide positive experiences for both visitors and hosts.
Thanks for listening.
【导语】本篇书面表达为一篇应用文。
要求学生就“Let’s Promote Ecotourism”写一篇发言稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累:
目的:aim→purpose/intention
伤害:do harm to→be harmful to/harm
对……有益:benefit→be beneficial to
确保:make sure→ensure/guarantee
2.句式拓展:
合并简单句
原句:As for me, ecotourism is a true eco-friendly trip. With the aim of sustainable development, ecotourism calls on tourists to enjoy the scenery without damaging the natural environment.
拓展句:As for me, ecotourism is a true eco-friendly trip, which calls on tourists to enjoy the scenery without damaging the natural environment with the aim of sustainable development.
【点睛】【高分句型1】
Commonly regarded as low impact travel to undisturbed places, ecotourism has become increasingly popular these year.(运用了过去分词作状语)
【高分句型2】
To protect our planet, I do hope we can live in harmony with nature and make sure that ecotourism can provide positive experiences for both visitors and hosts.(运用了动词不定式作目的状语和that引导宾语从句)
4.Possible version:
Scholarly school is where students are motivated to read extensively, explore new ideas and develop critical thinking. It creates an atmosphere fostering interest in reading and promoting academic excellence.
Our school offers various resources, including libraries, lecture halls and specialized workshops. Students benefit from a series of interactive activities, like reading salons, book clubs, and quiz competitions. Additionally, it is worth mentioning that distinguished experts are invited to offer guidance on effective reading and satisfy students’ learning needs. All these practices equip students with rich knowledge and prepare them for a bright future.
【导语】本书面表达属于应用文写作。
要求为校园文化宣传栏的“书香校园”版块写一篇介绍词。
【详解】1.词汇积累
激励:motivate→inspire
多种多样的:various→diverse
此外:additionally→ what’s more
有前途的:bright→promising
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:It creates an atmosphere fostering interest in reading and promoting academic excellence.拓展句:It creates an atmosphere which can foster interest in reading and promote academic excellence.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Scholarly school is where students are motivated to read extensively, explore new ideas and develop critical thinking.(运用了where引导的表语从句)
【高分句型2】Additionally, it is worth mentioning that distinguished experts are invited to offer guidance on effective reading and satisfy students’ learning needs.(运用了it作形式主语,that 引导主语从句)
5.Dear friends,
My name is Li Hua. Warmly welcome to our school. We are going to have a party on this Friday evening in our school hall and it will last from 7 pm to 9 pm.
In the party, we will put on performances, such as singing and dancing. At the same time, you are welcome to introduce yourselves to us. And we can ask each other questions so that we will have a better understanding. It is our wish that you will have a good time.
We are looking forward to seeing you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua 【导语】这是一篇邀请信。
要求考生以李华的身份给你的学校新来一批美国交流生介绍学校要组织的迎新晚会,并邀请他们参加。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举办晚会:have a party→ hold a party
同时:at the same time → in the meantime
介绍:introduce→ present
过得愉快:have a good time→ enjoy yourself
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:We are going to have a party on this Friday evening in our school hall and it will last from 7 pm to 9 pm.
拓展句:We are going to have a party on this Friday evening in our school hall, which lasts from 7 pm to 9 pm.
【点睛】【高分句型1】At the same time, you are welcome to introduce yourselves to us.(动词不定式)
【高分句型2】It is our wish that you will have a good time.(形式主语)
6.A Lecture on Beijing Opera
A wonderful lecture was given by a well-known master of Beijing Opera, Mr. Ma, in the school lecture hall last Saturday morning, which aimed to help students have a better understanding of Beijing Opera.
The moment Mr. Ma started speaking, we were impressed by his clear voice. The lecture was filled with moving stories and live performances. All of us appreciated the priceless cultural tradition so much that two hours passed quickly.
The lecture was very meaningful and inspired us to learn more about Beijing Opera.
【导语】这是一篇开放作文。
假定你是李华,你校上周六上午邀请了著名京剧大师Ma,Ma 做了一场精彩的讲座。
请你写一篇新闻报通,发表在学校的英文报上。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
帮助:help→ assist
充满:be filled with→ be full of
无价的:priceless→ valuable
激励:inspire→ motivate
2. 句式拓展
同义句转化
原句:The lecture was very meaningful and inspired us to learn more about Beijing Opera.
拓展句:The lecture was very meaningful, inspiring us to learn more about Beijing Opera.
【点睛】[高分句型1] . A wonderful lecture was given by a well-known master of Beijing Opera, Mr. Ma, in the school lecture hall last Saturday morning, which aimed to help students have a better understanding of Beijing Opera.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] All of us appreciated the priceless cultural tradition so much that two hours passed quickly.(so…that引导的结果状语从句)
7.My Unforgettable Mother’s Day Experience
Mother’s Day is regarded as a special occasion to thank mothers for their love and care. This year I experienced the most unforgettable Mother’s Day, which falls on the second Sunday in May.
Before Mother’s Day, I had made full preparations to amaze my mother. Thus, I had booked carnations and planned a rich dinner in her favorite restaurant. With all that ready, I couldn’t wait for it to come. On the afternoon of Mother’s Day, we set off to watch the movie featuring mutual understanding and love between mom and kids, which we both enjoyed. At dinner, I surprised my mother with a bunch of red carnations delivered to the spot. She held it tightly as if it was the best gift ever!
Personally, offering my love and warmth to my mother, this memorable day will be deeply rooted in my heart!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。
要求写一篇短文参加题为“My Unforgettable Mothe’s Day Experience”的征文比赛,介绍母亲节的信息,自己和妈妈如何度过的以及自己的感受。
【详解】1.词汇积累
被认为/被看作为:be regarded as→be considered as
给某人惊喜:amaze sb.→surprise sb./ give a surprise to sb./give sb a surprise
预订:book→order
出发:set off→start off
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Thus, I had booked carnations and planned a rich dinner in her favorite restaurant.
拓展句:Thus, not only had I booked carnations, but also I had planned a rich dinner in her favorite restaurant.
【点睛】【高分句型1】On the afternoon of Mother’s Day, we set off to watch the movie featuring mutual understanding and love between mom and kids, which we both enjoyed.(“featuring mutual understanding and love between mom and kids”为现在分词作后置定语,修饰名词“the movie”,且运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】She held it tightly as if it was the best gift ever!(运用了as if引导方式状语从句)8.Hello, everyone! I’m honored to share with you how I spent this Spring Festival.
On New Year’s Eve, my family gathered together and had a reunion dinner while watching
the Spring Festival Gala. When the clock struck 12, my brother and I rushed out to set off fireworks to welcome the New Year. What impressed me most was that I decorated our house with red lanterns, put up couplets and made dumplings with my parents happily. Additionally, I played sports and games with my friends besides learning.
I really enjoyed helping my parents with housework, and meanwhile I learned lots of life skills. After all, the Spring Festival is important because it’s a new beginning which brings hope to us and it’s also a time to show our gratitude and take our responsibility.
Thanks for listening!
【导语】本文是开放性作文。
要求考生以“How did you spend this Spring Festival?”为主题写一篇发言稿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
敲击:struck→hit
燃放:set off→let off
翻修:decorated→renovate
张贴:put up→post
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I really enjoyed helping my parents with housework, and meanwhile I learned lots of life skills.
拓展句:I really enjoyed helping my parents with housework, during which I learned lots of life skills.
【点睛】【高分句型1】When the clock struck 12, my brother and I rushed out to set off fireworks to welcome the New Year.(由When引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】What impressed me most was that I decorated our house with red lanterns, put up couplets and made dumplings with my parents happily.(由What引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句)
9.Lately an English writing contest with the theme of “Foreign students in China tell stories about China” was held in our school. A lot of foreign students joined in it enthusiastically and 10 students won first, second and third prizes respectively.
This contest was greatly welcomed by all students and teachers, because it made everyone
understand China and Chinese culture more deeply. This event also inspired us to use what we’ve learnt to create a much more brilliant Chinese modern culture.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。
要求考生写一篇英文报道,报道你们学校最近举办的主题为“来华留学生讲中国故事”的英语征文大赛的相关情况。
【详解】1.词汇积累
最近:lately→recently
比赛:contest→competition
参加:join in→participate in/take part in
鼓励:inspire→encourage
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:A lot of foreign students joined in it enthusiastically and 10 students won first, second and third prizes respectively.
拓展句:A lot of foreign students joined in it enthusiastically, 10 of whom won first, second and third prizes respectively.
【点睛】【高分句型1】This contest was greatly welcomed by all students and teachers, because it made everyone understand China and Chinese culture more deeply. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】This event also inspired us to use what we’ve learnt to create a much more brilliant Chinese modern culture. (运用了what引导宾语从句)
10.What Can We Do for the Environment in Our School
Hello, everyone.
Recently, I find that there are some problems in our school. For example, more and more students don't care about the environment so they throw plastic bags everywhere. It is convenient for them to put rubbish in the garbage bin. But they don't do as they should do. What's worse, they always trample on the lawn loosely and carelessly. We should create a healthy, harmonious, stimulating environment, so that the students in the good environment are influenced by the environment. On the other hand, we should help establish correct world outlook, outlook on life and values, so that everyone can volunteer to protect the environment.
I call on students to jointly protect the environment.
Thank you for your listening.
【导语】本文是一篇应用文。
环境问题影响着人们的工作、学习和生活,而我们的工作和生活又使环境问题越来越严重,假如你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津,准备以“What Can We Do for the Environment in Our School” 为题,写一篇保护环境的英语演讲稿,号召同学们从我做起,从身边小事做起,共同保护环境。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
影响:influence→ impact
建立:establish→ found
帮助:help→ assist
正确的:correct→ right
2. 句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:What's worse, they always trample on the lawn loosely and carelessly.
拓展句:What's worse, they always trample on the lawn loosely and carelessly,which makes the grass wither.
【点睛】[高分句型1] We should create a healthy, harmonious, stimulating environment, so that the students in the good environment are influenced by the environment.(so that引导的结果状语从句)
[高分句型2] But they don't do as they should do.(as引导的方式状语从句)。