高三英语新题型读后续写不同主题分析--结交新朋友学案含答案

高三新题型读后续写不同主题分析--结交新朋友

板块一--例文

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Just after New Year's,before school vacation ended.I went out for a walk.It was a walk I’d been meaning to take ever since we moved to the house.

I took my camera-the first time I'd taken my camera out since we came to the country-and went, dressed in my down jacket and wearing heavy boots.I walked toward the seemingly abandoned house that I could see across the fields from the upstairs window.

A truck was parked at the end of the road,beside a tiny.weather-beaten house.There was smoke coming out of the chimney,and curtains in the two little windows on either side of the door.A dog was in the yard,who barked when he saw me coming.And beside the truck-no,actually in the truck,or at least with his head inside it,was a man.

“Hi,"I called.It would have been silly to turn around and start walking home without saying anything,even though I've promised my parents all my life that I would never talk to strange men.

He lifted out his head,a gray head,smiled-a nice smile-and said,"Miss Chalmers.I'm glad

you've come to visit."

“Meg,"I said.I was puzzled.How did he know who I was?

＂For Margaret?"he asked,coming over and shaking my hand."Forgive me.My hands are very dirty.My battery dies in this cold weather."

＂How did you know my name was Chalmers?"

He wiped his hands on a towel that was hanging from the door handle of the truck."My dear,I apologize.I have not even introduced myself.My name is Will Banks.And it's much too cold to stand out here.Your feet must be frozen,even in those e inside,and I'll make us each a cup of tea. And I'll tell you how I know your name.”

I stood unmoved.He saw me hesitate,and smiled."Meg,"he said,“I'm seventy years old. Completely harmless,even to a beautiful young girl like e on in and keep me company for a bit,and get warm."

I laughed,because he knew what I was thinking,and very few people ever know what I'm thinking. Then I went in his house.

注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

He took my jacket and hung it up with his,and poured tea into two thick pottery mugs.

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It's nice to have a new friend,like Will..

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【答案】One possible version:

He took my jacket and hung it up with his.and poured tea into two thick pottery mugs.After we sat at the table,Will told me the whole story.The house my family was living in was actually built by his grandfather.He was born,raised and married in that house.Alter his Margaret died,he moved to this small house.When he heard my parents were looking for a place,he offered the house to them.He thought it was a perfect place for a writer like my father-the peace there stimulated imagination.He said again that he was glad I'd come to visit.

It's nice to have a new friend,like Will. I suggested taking pictures of him."My dear,"he said, straightening his shoulders and buttoning the top button of his shirt."I would be honored."The soft light was coming in through the kitchen window onto his face.He sat right there,smiling and talking.I just shot quickly.Years later,those pictures still brought back the warm memories of that day.

【解析】

【分析】

本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，作者搬家后第一次出去散步，在一个小木屋遇见了70多岁的Will Banks，Will Banks在打招呼时喊出了作者的名字，但是作者却不认识他，Will Banks邀请作者进屋喝杯茶，顺便讲述他为什么知道作者的名字。

【详解】续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：他拿着我的夹克衫和他的挂在一起，向两个厚陶杯里倒茶……，所以应该写进屋后的情况，即Will Banks向作者讲述是如何得知作者的名