2020人教版九年级英语书面表达 Unit 11 如何写以“事件对人类的影响”为话题的文章

如何写以“事物对人类的影响”为话题的文章
【例文1】
我们在生活中会经历各种各样的事情，如：赢得比赛或比赛失利；考试成功或失败；表演成功或失败；和朋友吵架或和好；第一次旅行等等，请你根据下面的提示写一件让你难忘的过去事件。

提示：1.2019年6月7号星期五参加演讲比赛；
2.紧张得脸红甚至忘词；同学们嘲笑我；感觉无地自容
3.老师与我交谈：参与就是勇敢的表现，是勇于跨出的一大步
4.我意识到我所需要的是自信和充足的准备。

一．审题
开头:引出话题 I still remember the bad day I have experienced was a Friday.
正文：事件详情 It happened...I gave a speech in front of the whole
class;nervous;laughed at ;had a talk with me; brave
结尾：吸取教训 From then on, I will be full ready for every (speech)
performance and perform it confidently.
三．遣词造句 ①词汇库
记得remember;经历experience ；发生happen ；紧张nervous ；不舒服uncomfortable ；意识realize ；勇气courage ；勇敢brave ；表演performance ；准备preparation ；自信confidence ；执行perform
②短语箱
演讲give a speech；嘲笑laugh at；感觉feel like；在...前面in front of；尽管even though/if；如此...以至于so...that；从那以后from then on；做准备be ready for
③链接句型
1.Sad movies make me cry.
2.The movie was so sad that it made Tina and Amy want to cry.
3.I still remember the bad day I have experienced was...
4.It happened on June 7th, 2019.
5.He felt like there was a heavy weight on his shoulders as he walked home alone.
6.His mind wouldn’t stop thinking about what happened only just one hour ago.
7.Peter’s feelings were written all over his face.
8.Winning or losing is the only half of the game. The other half is learning how to communicate with your teammates and learning from your mistakes.
四．作文模板
I still remember __________ I have experienced was a Friday.It happened on _______________.
I _________________in front of the whole class. I was so _______________that _______________. What’s more, I even ______________________. My classmates all laughed at me. I felt like I was ___________________.
____________________________________________________________________________________________.
I realized ____________________________________________________________________________________.
From then on, I will be full ready for__________________________________________________________. 五．参考范文
I still remember the bad day I have experienced was a Friday.It happened on June 7th, 2019.
I gave a speech in front of the whole class. I was so nervous that my face turned red all the time. What’s more, I even forgot the words during the speech. My classmates all laughed at me. I felt like I was the most stupid fool in the world. At that time, I really wanted to find a deep hole to get in. After the speech, my teacher had a long talk with me. He told me even if my performance was not good, it was brave for me to stand in front of the whole class, which was an important step forward. I realized what I needed was confidence and full preparation.
From then on, I will be full ready for every (speech) performance and perform it confidently.
【例文2】
网络正逐渐走进我们的生活，其利弊也显现出来了。

请以Advantages(优点) and disadvantages（缺点）of the Internet 为题，写一篇文章。

要求：要有表明自己的观点的句子 要体现网络的优点和缺点 字数100字左右 一．审题
二．文章布局
开头：引出话题 “Internet comes into our life. It not only brings a lot of convenience but also troubles ”引出话题
正文：分析利弊 look up;read news;send email; relax oneself
play games;see pictures or films unhealthy or dangerous
结尾：个人观点 In my opinion, we should make good use of it and
stay away from unhealthy websites.
三．遣词造句 ①词汇库
网络Internet ；方便convenience ；快乐happiness ；问题trouble ；工具tool ；不健康的unhealthy ；有用的helpful ；信息information ；缺点disadvantage ；优点advantage ；危险的dangerous ；影响effect ；网站website ； ②短语箱
不但，而且not only,but also ；带来bring on ；一方面，另一方面on the one hand,on the other hand ；查询look up ；聊天chat with ；玩游戏play games ；充分利用make good use of ；远离stay away from ；对...没兴趣be less interested in ；对...有用be helpful to ；对...产生影响have an...effect/influence on ③链接句型
1.It brings us not only convenience and happiness but also troubles.
2. It is now coming into our life./ It plays an important role in our life.
3. Its ’ advantages and disadvantages are shown clearly to us.
4. On the one hand, some students use the Internet as a tool to study.On the other hand, it sometimes gets in the way of students' study.
5. I think we should make good use of it and stay away from some unhealthy things.
四．作文模板
_____________ is now coming into our life. It brings us not only convenience and happiness but also troubles.
On the one hand, some students use the Internet as a tool to study. They look up_____________________. On the other hand, it sometimes gets in the way of students' study.__________________________________________________________________________.
The Internet's advantages and disadvantages are shown clearly to us. I think we should make good use of it and stay away from some unhealthy things.
五．优秀范文
The Internet is now coming into our life. It brings us not only convenience and happiness but also troubles.
On the one hand, some students use the Internet as a tool to study. They look up the meanings of the new words and the information of a story through it. It is also a quick way to get the latest news from it. Besides, they often listen to music and watch movies to relax themselves.On the other hand, it sometimes gets in the way of students' study.Some students bury themselves in playing computer games the whole day, which makes them less interested in study. Some even watch unhealthy pictures and videos.
The Internet's advantages and disadvantages are shown clearly to us. I think we should make good use of it and stay away from some unhealthy things.
课后练习1
每个人都有幸运和不幸运的时候，在你的记忆中，你所经历的最开心或最糟糕的一天是什么样子？写出你的经历和感受。

【参考范文】
I still remember the bad day I have experienced was a Tuesday. I woke up late because my clock didn't go off. I was nervous. I would be late for class. When I got to school, my English teacher was having class. As a result, my teacher punished me and I felt sad. At the beginning of the second class, my math teacher asked us to hand in math homework. I found I had left it at home, so I had to explain to him,which made me very afraid. After the lunch, I had a fight with my best friend. My headteacher was so angry that he kicked me off the classroom and sent me home. I realized I let my parents down. That night I thought about these things carefully and decided to make a change and I believed I could be a better boy soon.
课后练习2
当代，名人广告随处可见，但其中很多广告对公众有误导作用，尤其是食品广告，更是引发了很多食品安全问题。

请结合此类现象及你身边发生的有关事件，以“Notable Advertisements”为题谈谈你对名人广告的看法。

参考词汇：误导mislead;名人notable;食品安全food safety
【参考范文】
These days many kinds of notable advertisements are coming into our life. They not only bring us convenience but also troubles.
Many notables enjoy making advertisements in order to get money. On the one hand, some of them are helpful to us, because people can know different kinds of products and find some useful things through advertisements. On the other hand, many notable advertisements mislead us into buying bad things or the things that we don't need. Food safety is one of the most serious problems. A lot of children may get sick after they eat the bad food like junk food.
I think notables should care for people's health rather than money. It's their duty to make sure that the advertisements are good for people.。