初三英语英语书面表达汇编解题技巧和训练方法及练习题(含答案)及解析

初三英语英语书面表达汇编解题技巧和训练方法及练习题(含答案)
及解析
一、中考英语书面表达汇编
1．（·天津中考模拟）最近一份学生体质健康调查结果显示，学生近视率仍维持在高位水平，且越来越低龄化。

请根据下表所提示的内容，用英语写一篇短文，并发表自己的观点。

参考词汇：近视的 shortsighted
要求：
（1）词数：80～100个。

（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。

（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present, _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________
【答案】The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present, about 70% of the students are shortsighted. Here are some main causes.
Some students may not have enough sleep. Some students spend too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest. Some students even like to watch TV or use computers for a long time.
In order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exercises every day. We can also try to do more sports in our spare time. We should have the good habit of using our eyes.
I think all of us should understand the importance of protecting eyes and try our best to protect them.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇图表作文。

根据题干要求可知，本篇文章主要使用一般现在时写作，人称用第三人称复数和第一人称。

内容包括：学生近视原因：1.睡眠不足（not enough）2.长时间看
书、做作业、用电脑等（for a long time）防止近视的方法：1.做眼睛保健操，多进行体育
活动（eye exercises）2.养成正确的用眼习惯（have the good habit of）个人观点：如：我认为，我们应该了解保护眼睛的重要性，尽最大努力保护我们的眼睛。

（I think ⋅⋅⋅；try
one's best to do sth.）。

常用的重点句型和短语有：sb. spend some time doing sth.，in order to do sth.，try to do sth.，the importance of…等。

2．（·浙江中考模拟）假如你是李华，是某英文电台“ Say it”栏目的兼职编辑。

最近你收到一名叫王平的中学生发来的电子邮件，向你们栏目组求助。

请你根据电子邮件内容给她回复一封电子邮件，帮助她解答困惑。

Dear Li Hua,
I' m a middle school student. Recently I argued with my parents over using Wechat. You know Wechat has become a part of our everyday life, but my parents don’t allow me to use it. What 's worse, they have changed my password（密码）so that I can’t use it. There has been a "cold war" between us for over a week. What should I do?
Yours,
Wang Ping
要求：1．语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯；
2．词数80-100左右，电子邮件的格式、开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。

参考词汇：欺骗tick；许可permission
Dear Wang Ping,
I'm sorry to hear that you are having problems with your parents because of using
Wechat.________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________
I believe things will get better,
Yours
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Wang Ping
I‘m sorry to hear that you are having problems with your parents because of using Wechat. In fact,
your problem is very common . Cheer up and let’s find a good way to solve it.
You may be tricked or get into trouble when you use Wechat. Also, using it for a long time is bad for your health, especially for your eyes. Maybe your parents worry about these things. In my opinion, communication is very important. Why not have a good talk with your parents about how to use Wechat properly? Try t elling them you won’t use it for too long and won’t use it when you are studying. What more. tell them you’ll never add strangers without their permission.
I believe things will get better.
Yours
Li Hu 【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇应用文写作，写一封回信。

本题给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，确定写作内容，并适当发挥。

根据内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态和将来时态，写作中注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。

注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

【点睛】
这是一篇比较不错的作文。

作者根据题目要求,层次非常的清晰。

短文中需要作者自己补充的内容完成得也不错这些内容都比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。

文章中还用了一些比较好的句型Maybe your parents worry about these things. In my opinion, communication is very important.；Why not have a good talk with your parents about how to use Wechat properly?
3．（·湖南中考模拟）假如你是李华，请你根据以下提示用英语写一封保护大象的倡议
书。

提示：陆地上最大的哺乳动物，可以活到80岁。

目前数量在减少，因为：
1）人们砍伐森林，大象渐渐失去家园；
2）人们捕杀大象，获取象牙。

3）应如何保护它们（不少于三条）。

要求：1）恰当运用比较级和最高级；2）80词左右。

倡议书的结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：哺乳动物mammal; 象牙ivory
Dear classmates
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________
________
I believe everyone's contribution （贡献） can make a big difference.
Yours,
Lihua 【答案】Dear classmates,
Elephants are the largest mammals on the land and they can live up to be eighty years. But now the number of the elephants is decreasing because of the following reasons. Firstly, people cut down trees in the forest, so elephants are losing their homes. Secondly, people also kill elephants for their ivory.
As a result, we need to do something to help them. First, we should plant more trees to build the homes for elephants. Second, we can put up post on the street to tell people that it is against the law to kill elephants. Or we can also hold some activities in some public places to spread the idea of protecting the elephants.
I believe everyone's contribution （贡献） can make a big difference.
Yours,
Lihua 【解析】
【详解】
本文是一封倡议书,倡议大家保护大象。

文章共分为三个方面的内容，首先描述大象想在所处的现状，然后说明出现这种状况的原因，最后为了保护的大象我们应该如何去做。

时态主要为一般现在时。

提出倡议时可以使用We can/ We should/ Let’s/We’d better的表示建议的句子。

写作时注意不要使用太复杂的句型，以免出现语法错误，为使句子具有连贯性，可以适当使用连词。

本篇文章内容完整，符合材料要求，Elephants are the largest mammals …,及First, we should plant more trees 也使用到了比较级和最高级；Firstly,…. Secondly,…等词的使用使文章具有层次性，条理清晰。

并且一些连词的使用，比如so, or, but等也使文章具有连贯性，是一篇不错的文章。

4．（·江苏中考模拟）目前，许多中学生利用周末和节假日上课外补习班，对此人们有不同的看法。

请根据下面内容写一篇短文。

注意：1. 表达清楚，语法通顺，上下文连贯；
2. 必须包括提示的所有信息，并适当发挥，至少两点；
3. 词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。

Nowadays, many middle school students are taking all kinds of after-school classes at weekends or on holidays. There are two different opinions about it.
Some people think that
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________
【答案】Nowadays, many middle school students are taking all kinds of after-school classes at weekends or on holidays. There are two different opinions about it.
Some people think that students can get better exam results and go to better senior high schools by taking extra classes. They also believe that students can avoid watching too much TV or playing computer games in this way.
But others have a different opinion. They think that students need more time to rest. If they take too many classes, they mi ght feel too stressed. That’s not good for their health.
As for me, I don’t think taking extra classes is necessary. Learning hard in class is enough. We just need to go over our lessons after class. We can also teach ourselves as it is very important for us to have a lifelong learning ability.
【解析】
【分析】
整体分析：这是一篇提纲话题作文。

是一篇议论文，第一段要写目前，许多中学生利用周末和节假日上课外补习班，对此人们有不同的看法。

第二段要写中学生利用周末和节假日上课外补习班赞同者的观点。

第三段要写中学生利用周末和节假日上课外补习班反对者的观点。

第四段要表述作者自己的观点。

【详解】
写作之前要1.审清题目，看看有哪些要求？哪些时态？人称？2.确定文章类型，记叙文？说明文？议论文？看图？还是应用文？3.确定时态，单一还是混合。

4.写下关键词、短语、句型。

5.列出提纲和段落，并运用适当的句型和过渡词衔接。

6.根据提纲和段落结构句型及关键词句完成文章。

写完后反复阅读修改推敲润色，人称、时态、单复数一致等。

运用自然过渡法和自然衔接法来是文章更为地道、通顺、纯正。

用短语、句型：all kinds of ，Some ···others，As for me ，Some people think that ···。

They also believe that···。

If they take too many classes。

It is very important for us to have a lifelong learning ability.来增加了文章的亮点。

【点睛】
这类作文的写作方法要注意认真审题，可以分四段写：总体简单描述话题；赞成；反对；你的看法。

注意过渡性语言的使用。

做到：要点要全，表达要清晰明确，使用短语，句型要准确，注意避免拼写和语法错误。

5．（·江阴初级中学中考模拟）你是一位九年级的学生李明，你用英语写一封邮件给你的笔友Amy，感谢她对你关心，并告诉她目前你在全力以赴为中考而学习，并与她交流一下目前的学习和生活情况。

要点如下：
（1）. 虽然你大部分功课你都学得比较好，但是你对自己不满意。

你认为自己学习上还要多花工夫。

（2）. 你的父母对你严格要求，但是也很关心你。

（举例说明，适当发挥2—3句）……（3）. 老师很乐意帮助你们。

他们希望你们实现自己的理想。

他们说（适当发挥2—3句）……
注意：
（1）. 要求语句通顺，意思连贯。

（2）. 第2要点和第3要点要用2—3句话作适当发挥。

（3）. 词数90个左右，邮件开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

Hello!
Dear Amy, thank you for caring.
Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination.
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________
How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours
Li Ming
【答案】例文Hello!
Dear Amy, thank you for caring.
Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. I have got good results in most of my subjects, but I am not happy with myself. I think I must spend more time on my studies.
My parents are really strict with me. However, they care for me as well. Once upon a time, I failed in my physics exam and felt stressed and sad. They had a close communication with me and helped me solve my problems and cheer up again.
My teachers are also ready to help us. They hope that we can realize our dreams. They tell us to try our best and not to give up. Life is always full of ups and downs. It's important not to be afraid of any kind of difficulty.
How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours
Li Ming
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于材料作文，告诉艾米目前你在全力以赴为中考而学习，并与她交流一下目前的学习和生活情况。

根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可
适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如get good results, spend+时间+on sth, be strict with, however, care for, as well, once upon a time, help sb do, cheer up, be ready to, tell sb to do, try one’s best to do, be full of以及it is adj to do sth等，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。

审好题是写好书面表达的关键。

审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

构思提纲。

有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。

通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

初写短文。

一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。

使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。

同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

修改润色。

修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。

这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

6．（·北京中考模拟）年2月20日，中央宣传部授予北京榜样优秀群体“时代楷模”称号。

时代楷模充分体现“爱国、敬业、诚信、友善”的价值准则。

某网站正在开展以“向时代楷模学习”为主题的英语征文活动。

假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈生活中你该怎么做，以及这样做的意义。

提示词语：pick up, rubbish, study, honest, important
提示问题：● What should you do in your daily life? ● Why do you do so?
As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models.
【答案】例文
As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models. First, we can protect the environment. For example, we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on. Second, we shall respect people around us. Respect others to start from small things. Third, behave well. We should be kind to others, warm-hearted to everyone, and generous to our friends. By doing so, our world will become more and more beautiful.
【解析】
【详解】
题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按照应用文格式写，写作时承接短文开头，具体写出怎样做以及这样做的意义。

例文点评：例文采用的是一段式，人称用的是第一人称复数形式，时态主要用的是一般现在时，描述具体怎么做时，描写细致，条理清晰。

高分亮点：
短语：protect the environment；pick up the rubbish；behave well；be kind to sb；more and more beautiful。

句型：By doing so, our world will become more and more beautiful；we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on。

7．（·北京中考模拟）假如你是李华，你们学校准备组织学生本周五去北京世园会参观。

你打算邀请外教 Peter参加。

请用英语写一封电子邮件，告诉他集合的时间和地点，在那
里可以做什么，以及参观时需要准备什么。

提示词语： school gate, nature, culture, food and drink
提示问题：●When and where are you going to meet?
●What ar e you going to do there?
●What do you advise Peter to prepare for the visit?
Dear Pete,
How is it going?
I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition in
Yanqing.________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________
I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Peter，
How is it going?
I am writing to invite you to visit Beijing International Horticulture Exposition. We will meet at the
school gate at 7:00 a.m. this Friday. Then we will go to Beijing International Horticulture Exposition together. We can do a lot of things there. We can not only enjoy the special and beautiful plants but also learn different cultures in various indoor or outdoor shows. We plan to stay there for a whole day. You'd better wear a pair of comfortable sports shoes and take some food and drinks with you.
I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours, Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
1. 题干解读：这是一篇给材料作文，属于应用文写作。

本文已经给出了主要写作要点，
动笔前要先认真阅读要点，写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；提示的问题就是写作的基本方向，然后围绕要点适当发挥即可。

2. 例文点评：文章采取邮件格式，时态以一般将来时态为主。

语言的表述应该符合语法
的结构，语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，具有逻辑性。

3. 高分亮点：
短语：school gate；invite sb. to do；a lot of；plan to do。

句型：not only…but also；You'd better …；I'm looking forward to…。

8．（·辽宁中考模拟）现在手机是人们生活的必需品，在给我们提供便利的同时，也有很
多负面作用。

很多人成了“手机控”。

请你根据要求谈谈对自己的看法：
1. 手机的正面作用；
2. 手机给人们带来的烦恼；
3. 如何防止成为“手机控”。

【答案】 Phones can help us communicate more easily and know about what's happening around the world. Today many people, especially young people, are phone freaks. Depending on mobile phones too much is bad for health. Looking at mobile phones too often is bad for our eyes. Playing with mobile phones is a waste of time and harmful to study. I think young people should spend more time doing sports or being with their family and friends. They should also pay more attention to their studies. If they fill their time this way, they won't have too much spare time to think about phone entertainment.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇开放性话题作文，针对很多人成了“手机控”这一现象，结合自己的亲身经历，谈
一谈自己的观点。

考生首先要阅读前面的提示去认真审题，确定出文章的中心，用一般现在时态来表达。

要求从三个方面去完成写作：1. 手机的正面作用；2. 手机给人们带来的烦恼；3. 如何防止成为“手机控”。

需要自由发挥的地方较多，比如手机的正面作用可以写有
利于我们的沟通与交流，通过上网了解世界上所发生的事情，手机的负面作用可以写手机对健康的危害，对学生学习的影响等等。

最后总结并发出呼吁。

另外，写作时，还需注意语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

9．（·北京中考模拟）“友善”是一种美德，它犹如阳光和雨露照耀并滋润着美德的形成。

同学们，请奉献你的友善，为创建和谐社会做出贡献。

某英文网站正在开展以“友善待人、快乐生活”为主题的征文活动。

假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈生活中你对他人提供善意帮助的经历。

主要内容包括:你对友善行为的认识和理解，你平时做哪些友善的事情，以及你这样做的美好愿望。

提示词语:kind，politely, trouble, offer, proud，society
提示问题:What do you think of showing kindness to others?
How do you help them kindly in your daily life?
What do you dream about being kind to them?
It's our duty to show kindness to others around us.
_________________________________________________
【答案】It’s our du ty to show kindness to others around us. I think everyone should be kind to each other. When someone is in trouble, we’ll give a hand politely. In our community, I try my best to help the neighbors and take care of the old people at weekends as a volunteer. At school, I get on well with my classmates and help them with their lessons. I also send my books and clothes to the children who live in poor areas. I’m very proud I have made many friends by helping others in need.
I believe our society will become better and better if everyone shows kindness to each other.【解析】
【详解】
本文属于话题作文，谈谈生活中你对他人提供善意帮助的经历。

根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如be kind to, each other, be in trouble, give a hand, try one’s best to do, take care of, get on well with, help sb with等。

增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

10．（·四川成都外国语学校中考模拟） Writing.
Thirty-year- old Sophie has been bullied（欺凌）at school for over two years. She had her bag, keys and mobile phones stolen. Have you ever got in campus bully? Please write a passage with 80-120 words about your own opinions. Your passage should include the following points:
1. Some common forms of bullying you’ve seen or experienced. （At least two examples）
2. Some effects（影响） on the students who have been bullied at school. （At least two effects）
3. Some solutions you consider to solve the problem. （At least three solutions）
【答案】Bullying, as far as I know, is prevalent in secondary schools. Most of us have seen or even experienced that more or less. I saw John had his money stolen .Sometimes he was made to do the cleaning for others. John often feels afraid and can’t concentrate on his study. Some bullying leads to tragedy consequences, which draw public attention nationwide.
First, because students spend most of their time in school and it's the school's responsibility to protect them and stop any forms of bullying. Schools should make rules for it.Second, as we all know, parents are the best teachers for children in this world. So they are responsible for their children.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇给材料作文，介绍学校的欺凌事件。

【详解】
结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I saw……，Sometimes he was made to……，John often feels……，because students spend……，Schools should……等句式的应用。

写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。

写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

【点睛】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。

开头介绍了我经历过的欺凌事件的形式，接下来介绍学校欺凌事件对学生的影响，最后介绍解决欺凌事件的方法。

此处as far as I know, more or less, concentrate on, draw public attention, be responsible for 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

11．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达
无锡被评为内地最宜居城市。

假设你班对此进行了一次班级讨论，请你根据讨论主题并结合所给信息，以“Be a Beautiful City”为题写一份发言稿，号召广大学生为建设美好城市作贡献。

内容提示如下：
1．政府修建了很多新路、大桥，甚至还有地铁；
2．新添了很多露天开放公园，每到周末和节假日，人们常常去那里野餐，游玩；
3．私家车越来越多，停车已成了大问题；
4．城市变化有利有弊；
5．你的希望：……
注意事项：
1．发言稿须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2．第5个要点须用2至3句话展开合理想象。

作适当发挥；
3．词数90左右，发言稿的开头已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；
4．发言稿内容必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。

Be a Beautiful City
There have been great changes in Wuxi in the past few years．
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_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Be a Beautiful City
There have been great changes in Wuxi in the past few years．The government has built lots of new roads, bridges and even undergrounds．There have been a number of open parks．People often go there to have a picnic and have fun on weekends and holidays．More and more people have their own cars and it's becoming difficult to park cars．The changes have brought both advantages and disadvantages．I hope the government can deal with the problem．Our hometown can be more and more beautiful in the future．
【解析】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

文中使用了大量短语，例如in the past few years，lots of，a number of，open parks，have a picnic，have fun，on weekends and holidays，more and more，both …and，deal with the problem，in the future等。

而More and more people have their own cars and it's becoming difficult to park cars./ Our hometown can be more and more beautiful in the future.等多种more and more句式结构的运用，使本文内容丰富，表达流畅，是短文的亮点。

点睛：这是一篇材料作文，根据提示内容可知用现在完成时和一般现在时，可把提示内容结合实际展开合理的想象，把它们拓展成一个个英文句子。

还要注意在行文中使用一些常见的短语，会给习作增色。

12．（·西安市铁一中学中考模拟）假如你是李华，上周末你和几个同学一起去了青龙寺（Qing Long Temple）游玩，请根据以下提示内容，写一篇游记，介绍一下你愉快的周末。

内容： 1 天气：晴朗；2 交通：公交车； 3时间：早上9点到达，下午4点离开；4，活动：赏花，放风筝，野餐.......5 感想。

要求：1 参考提示内容，可适当发挥2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息4. 字数：不少于70字
【答案】Last weekend I went to Qing Long Temple with some classmates. It was sunny on Sunday. We went there by bus at 7:00 a.m. On the bus we talked and laughed, we were so happy. At 9 a.m. we arrived there. We enjoyed flowers, took many pictures and flew kites in the morning. At noon we had picnic at the foot of the hill. In the afternoon we climbed the mountain. At 4:00 p.m. we left Qing Long Temple and at 6:00 p.m. got home. We were so happy, though we were tired.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇话题作文，话题是假如你是李华，上周末你和几个同学一起去了青龙寺（Qing Long Temple）游玩，请根据以下提示内容，写一篇游记，介绍一下你愉快的周末。

时态主要是一般过去时，注意表达的顺序。

认为阅读材料，认真审题，确定主题，认真阅读所给提示，所给提示就是本文的提纲要点，根据要点适当发挥，列出提纲。

短文必须包含提示内容，条理清楚，注意使用表达顺序词。

要运用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有连贯性。

写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无单词拼写、标点、语法错误（时态、主谓一致
等）。

本文提纲：
上周末我和几个同学去了青龙寺。

星期天天气晴朗。

我们早上7点乘公共汽车去了那里。

在公共汽车上我们谈笑风生，我们很高兴。

上午9点我们到了那里。

上午我们赏花，拍照，放风筝。

中午我们在山脚下野餐。

下午我们去爬山。

下午4点，我们离开青龙寺，下午6点回到家。

虽然我们很累，但我们还是很高兴。

【点睛】
书面表达要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

要学以致用。

像We were so happy, though we were tired.（1）学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

（2）列好提纲和要点及需要的重要短语或句型。

（3）切忌堆砌词语、句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅、连贯。

注意表达的顺序。

（4）注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。

（5）注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。

13．（·上海中考模拟）In 60 to 120 words, write about the topic“ ..and I”.（以“我和……” 为题，写一篇60-120 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。

）每一个生命个体都和这个世界发生着联系，你也不例外。

请分享一个你和他人、社会或自然之间的故事，并谈谈自己的体验或感受。

（注意：短文中不得出现考生真实的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。

）
【答案】My friends and I
Before I went to school, I felt so excited, because I was so curious about the campus life. Now I have been in middle school, after seven years’ study, I feel the bitter and happiness. The bitter is that there are always exams, and sometimes I can’t do well. Every time I get the low mark, I will be afraid of disappointing my parents. The happy thing is that I make many friends here. We play and study together. They are just like the brothers and sisters to me. This is the process of growing up, which mix pain and happiness. I am so lucky to have these friends in my life, they mean so much to me.
【解析】
这是一篇要求介绍自己和他人、社会或自然之间的故事，并谈谈自己的体验或感受。

动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。

根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一人称，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。

注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。

英语作文要注意人称和时态，注意提供的观点、材料，要注意句子的完整性，谓语动词的正确形式，句子之间的衔接和过渡。

英语作文，要忠实于材料，不必扩展，注意用好连词，多用非谓语，慎用较难的句型，一定不能写错句。

14．（·全国中考模拟）假如你是Ivy，你们学校正在开展“爱心传递，从我做起”主题教育活动。

请你根据所列提示问题谈谈你对这个活动的认识，用英语写一篇短文给某英文网站投。