读后续写+父亲的老房子+讲义 高三上学期开学联考英语试题

练习(父亲的老房子):
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

From my memory, my father was a man of few words and we were never close to each other. Before he joined the army, he built a house with his own hands. When he was tragically killed in one battle, the house became mine. As the house aged, it became a relic of the past, and we moved away, carrying with me the echoes of his silent presence.
One day, someone called, saying that he wanted to buy that house. I said yes.
Before we reached a deal, I thought it a must to check out the old shack(小屋)first, just in case something of value had been left behind. My two young sons followed along, and we waded through the tall grass in the meadow where the old house sat. Time had taken its toll. The front porch had collapsed in on itself, most of the windows were gone, and the siding was falling off. We entered through an open window.
I felt as though I had chanced upon a time capsule(胶囊).Here lay the things of my dad’ s lives. A broken chair. Some old clothes. But the thing that drew my eye was a cardboard box stuffed with papers. I dug through its contents and was instantly transported back in time. There was a tax return from 1975. Greeting cards from old relatives and friends.
I spent most of a pleasant hour going through that box. All the while, I had to answer a stream of questions from my sons about the old house. They were amazed that nine people once occupied the tiny structure. And they shivered when I told them that in those days the cookstove was the only source of heat.
There’ s nothing of value had been left, I confirmed. So we came back. The house once again enjoyed the lonely solitude of our meadow.
Then the paying day came. For no reason, maybe some reason, I came to that old house to say goodbye to something.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Paragraph: As I stood in the house, my eye was drawn to a big yellowed envelope with two words "FROM ARMY” on it.
Paragraph 2: I pulled out my telephone and made a call to that buyer.
课堂讲解(教师版):
【原文词汇】
solitude n.独处，独居
wade v.跋涉
porch. n.门廊
stuff v. 填充，充满.
chance on/upon sb/sth 偶遇，偶然发现
take its toll 造成损失
Time had taken its toll 时光留下了“残忍”的痕迹
过去的遗迹: a relic of the past
一系列问题: a stream of questions
【段一】
1.段首句协同a big yellowed envelope
Yellowed with age, it seemed to blend in with the old house, which might explain why I didn't notice it last time. (它似乎和老房子融为一体，这也许可以解释为什么我上次没有注意到它)
2. 我的情绪 + 动作描写
subtle. adj. 微妙的
tremor. n.震颤；(由于寒冷或恐惧等引起的)颤抖，战栗同义词: quiver
string. n. 绳子，弦乐器
scrutinize. v.仔细检查；仔细查看to look at or examine sb/sth carefully
eg: She leaned forward to scrutinize their faces.
我的心弦上的一阵微妙的颤动让我上前拿起信封，仔细端详。

A subtle tremor through my heartstrings sent me forward to pick up the envelope and scrutinize it.
其它:
我犹豫但好奇，慢慢向前走去，捡起它，轻轻地拂去表面的灰尘，将信封撕开。

Hesitant but curious, I inched forward, picked it up, softly brushed the ash off its surface, and ripped it open.
3.信件内容描写
trance. n. 恍惚，出神
overlap. v. 部分重叠，交叠
eg: The language of science overlaps with that of everyday life.
It was a letter from my dad, written during his military service. The familiar handwriting revealed an image of my dad that was unfamiliar to me(揭示了一个我不熟悉的爸爸的形象): chattering endlessly(原文协同: a man of few words), missing his hometown, and caring about everything about his family(原文协同:never close to each other). In a trance(恍惚，出神), the handwriting in front of me overlapped with the image of my dad in the past(与过去父亲的形象重叠).
其它:
无数用老旧而廉价的墨水写的字进入我的视线，空气中弥漫着过去的好时光的气息。

句式: 完全倒装
Into my sight came countless words written with old, cheap ink, making the air brimful of the smell of the good old days.
原文协同: a man of few words / silent presence
我父亲的模糊形象，曾经是遥远的记忆，慢慢地变成了一幅清晰生动的肖像。

他确实是个沉默寡言的人，但正是他无声的爱，以深沉而持久的存在填补了我内心的空缺。

句式: 强调句
The vague image of my father, once a distant memory, was slowly sharpening into a distinct and vivid portrait. He was indeed a man of few words, yet it was also his silent love that filled the emptiness in my heart with a profound and enduring presence.
4.情绪+反思
resent .v. 怨恨；愤恨
eg. She resented him making all the decisions.
contemplation. n.深思；沉思
eg. He sat there deep in contemplation.
I had once resented his absence(曾经怨恨他的缺席), unaware that during the time when I missed him, he was also missing me. I fell into deep contemplation(陷入深思).
5.段二段首衔接
我的动作 + 感受
原文协同:There’s nothing of value had been left
When I lifted the gaze from the letter and scanned around again (把目光从信上移开，再次环顾四周时), I felt that this little house carried a whole new significance and value(承载着全新的意义和价值). Silently, I made a resolution(做出决定).
其它:
环顾四周，那些日子的记忆涌上心头，挥之不去。

Looking around, a surge of memories from those days swallowed me, and I couldn't shake them off.
【段二】
1.段首句协同：情绪 +语言
With guilt(情绪), I expressed my sorry(情绪) for deciding not to sell the house anymore(决定的具体内容) and made explanations(做出解释).
With guilt也可以替换为Guilty yet determined
2. 人物互动描写: 买家态度+语言
gracious. adj. 和蔼的，有礼貌的，宽厚的
eg. She closed with a gracious speech of thanks.
relive. v.再次体验，重温
Fortunately, the buyer graciously showed his understanding (礼貌地表示理解), saying that he was originally drawn to the house’s historical charm and hoped we could relive the past in this house.
3. 人物互动描写: 我的动作 +语言
After showering my gratitude(表达感激), I hung up the phone and returned the yellow letter that seemed to have changed everything.
4. 环境描写 +回忆
房子被阳光照亮，露出了时间流逝的痕迹和过去的记忆。

The house was illuminated by the sunlight, revealing the remains of time’s passage and past memories.
爸爸的声音和笑容似乎又出现在温暖中，慢慢填补了我心中的空缺。

My dad's voice and smiling face seemed to reappear in the warmth, slowly filling up the emptiness in my heart.
5.结尾描写
原文协同:the echoes of his silent presence
I’d often bring my sons back here, I guess. In addition to sharing the family's past stories, I would also tell them that their grandpa is never truly gone. And the echoes of his silent presence would continue to resonate.
其它:
buzz with 充满
这片高耸的草地曾经充满了宁静的孤寂，现在却充满了活力，我和儿子跋涉过它，选择保留这座房子，使它复活。

The towering meadow, once filled with its peaceful solitude, now buzzed with energy as my son and I waded through it, choosing to keep the house and revived it with fresh life.
我从未感到与父亲如此亲密，他无声的爱回荡在每一段记忆中，告诉我爱是无与伦比的。

句式: 部分倒装
Never had I felt so close to my father, with his silent love echoing in every piece of memory, telling-love was second to none.
课堂讲解(学生版):
【原文词汇】
solitude ____________________
chance on/upon sb/sth ____________________
wade ____________________
porch ____________________
take its toll ____________________
carrying with me the echoes of his silent presence ____________________
过去的遗迹: ____________________
【段一】
1.段首句协同
Yellowed with age, ______________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ . (它似乎和老房子融为一体，这也许可以解释为什么我上次没有注意到它)
2. 情绪 + 动作描写
subtle. adj. __________________
tremor. n. __________________ 同义词: __________________
string. n. __________________
scrutinize. v. __________________
我的心弦一阵微妙的颤动，让我上前拿起信封，仔细端详。

_______________________________________________________________________________
其它:
我犹豫但好奇，慢慢向前走去，捡起它，轻轻地拂去表面的灰尘，将信封撕开。

_______________________________________________________________________________
3.信件内容描写
trance. n. __________________
overlap. v. __________________
eg: The language of science overlaps with that of everyday life.
It was a letter from my dad, written during his military service. The familiar handwriting _______________________________________________________________________________ (揭示了一个我不熟悉的爸爸的形象): ______________________(原文协同: a man of few words), ______________________, and ______________________ (原文协同:never close to each other). ______________________ (恍惚间), the handwriting in front of me _____________________________________________________. (与过去父亲的形象重叠).
其它:
无数用老旧而廉价的墨水写的字进入我的视线，空气中弥漫着过去的好时光的气息。

句式: 完全倒装
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________
原文协同: a man of few words / silent presence
我父亲的模糊形象，曾经是遥远的记忆，慢慢地变成了一幅清晰生动的肖像。

他确实是个沉默寡言的人，但正是他无声的爱，以深沉而持久的存在填补了我心中的空虚。

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________
4.情绪+反思
resent .v. ______________________
eg. She resented him making all the decisions.
contemplation. n.______________________
eg. He sat there deep in contemplation.
I had once _________________________ (曾经怨恨他的缺席), unaware that during the time when I missed him, ____________________________________. I
________________________(陷入深思).
5.段二段首衔接
我的动作 + 感受
原文协同:There’s nothing of value had been left
When I ____________________________________ (把目光从信上移开，抬起头来) again, I felt that this little house was ____________________________________ (承载着全新的意义和价值). Silently, I ____________________________ (做出决定).
其它:
环顾四周，那些日子的记忆涌上心头，挥之不去。

_______________________________________________________________________________
【段二】
1.段首句协同：情绪 +语言
With ______________(情绪), I expressed my ____________ (情绪) for ____________________________ (决定的具体内容) and ____________________(做出解释).
2. 互动描写
gracious. adj. _________________________
relive. v. _________________________
Fortunately, the buyer ____________________________ (礼貌地表示理解), saying that he was originally drawn to the house’s _________________ and hoped we could ________________________ in this house.
3. 我的动作 +语言描写
After _________________________ (表达感激), I _________________________ and returned the yellow letter that seemed to have changed everything.
4. 环境描写 +回忆
房子被阳光照亮，露出了时间流逝的痕迹和过去的记忆。

_______________________________________________________________________________
爸爸的声音和笑容似乎又出现在温暖中，慢慢填补了我心中的空缺。

_______________________________________________________________________________
5.结尾描写
原文协同:the echoes of his silent presence
I’d often bring my sons back here, I guess. In addition to sharing the family's past stories, I would also tell them that their grandpa is never truly gone. And ________________________________. _____________________.
其它:
buzz with _____________________
这片高耸的草地曾经充满了宁静的孤寂，现在却充满了活力，我和儿子跋涉过它，选择保留这座房子，使它复活。

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ .
我从未感到与父亲如此亲密，他无声的爱回荡在每一段记忆中，告诉我爱是无与伦比的。

句式: 部分倒装
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ .。