英语句子需具备的特点concise complete coh

英语句子需具备的特点concise complete coh
1、完整性(Unity)
完整性是英语句子写作的第一要素，它既指结构上的完整，又指意义上的完整。

首先从结构上来看，无论是简单句、并列句还是复合句，都必须有完整的句子成分。

例句：
Original: Born in a small town in North China in the early 1960s, he grew up to be a veryfamous novelist.(分析:信息缺失造成句子之间缺少逻辑联系。

)Revised: He was born in a small town in North China in the early 1960s, His father read hima lot of novels when he was a little boy. Under his father's influence, he grew up to be a veryfamous novelist in 1980s.
Original: Nowadays, Bicycles are so popular.(分析:信息缺失造成句子表达不准确。

)Revised: Nowadays, Bicycles are so popular in China that almost every family has atleast one.
2、连贯性(Coherence)
连贯性是指句子中的词语和组成部分应恰当地衔接，它们之间的关系应十分清楚，句子的表述应该是通畅合理的。

例句：
Original: Students should learn to analyze and solve the problem independently. Don'talways rely on your teachers' help.(分析:人称上混乱。

)Revised: Students should learn to analyze and solve the problem independently. They shouldnot always rely on their teachers' help.
Original: Between the two windows hang a picture.(分析:单复数上混乱。

)Revised: Between the two windows hangs a picture.
3、简洁性(Conciseness)
只要意思充分地表达了，用词越少越好。

佛山韦博英语学校提醒写作者在写完一篇文章之后，比较好仔细检查一两遍，看看有没有一些词句可以删去而又不影响意思的表达。

例句：
Original: My father is very particular about the wine and he only drinks the wine that isproduced in France.
Revised: My father is very particular about the wine and he only drinks French wine.
Original: Helena, who is a freshman in Peking University,
goes to the lake every morningwhere she will read aloud
4、强调性(Emphasis)
凡是重要的意思都应在表达时予以突出。

说话时人们可以通过提高声音、放慢语速、加上手势等方法来表示强调;而在写文章时，佛山韦博英语学校提醒大家也可通过使用各种强调手段让思想表达得更加透彻有力。

例句：(1)助动词do (does, did)用于加强陈述句和祈使句的语气。

例句A: The letter I was expecting塑arrive yesterday.我期待的那封信昨天终于到了。

例句B:Do come to visit us, if you are free.有空的时候一定要来啊。

(2)用形容词very, every, only, single, such等修饰名词来加强语气。

例句A: That's the very textbook we used last term.这正是我们上学期用过的教材。

例句B: You are the only person here who can speak French.你是这里罕有的会讲法语的人。