中考英语书面表达：碳达峰碳中和

中考英语书面表达：碳达峰碳中和
碳达峰（peak carbon dioxide emissions）就是指在某一个时点，二氧化碳的排放不再增长达到峰值，之后逐步回落。

碳达峰是二氧化碳排放量由增转降的历史拐点，标志着碳排放与经济发展实现脱钩，达峰目标包括达峰年份和峰值。

碳达峰与碳中和一起，简称“双碳”。

中国承诺在2030年前，二氧化碳的排放不再增长，达到峰值之后再慢慢减下去。

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【典型范文】
为了向全世界展示绿色中国，学生会倡议每位同学围绕“How to go green”写一篇英语文章，介绍自己如何从身边小事做起，尝试进行低碳、环保生活。

要求：1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2. 短文必须包括表格中提示的所有要点，并作适当发挥；
3. 词数：100左右；
4. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

How to go green
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How to go green
As we all know, having a low-carbon life will be very important to us. We can save energy. It’s also good for reducing pollution and improving our environment. What can we do for the environment? There are many ways.
We should close the door and windows before we go out. And we had better walk to school or ride our bikes. We should use cloth bags when shopping instead of using plastic bags all the time. And planting more trees can make our environment become
better. We should turn off the lights, the TV and the computer when we leave the classroom. When we go out, we had better walk instead of taking a bus or car. What’s more, it’s a good idea to reuse the books as possible as we can.
In fact, if everyone does something for the environment, I believe the earth will be a better place. And our world will be more beautiful.
1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。

文中围绕绿色生活的意义和措施一一展开描述。

2.例文点评：本文采用的是第一人称，时态采用的是一般现在时。

准确运用时态，并保持主谓一致。

逻辑性强，语句通顺。

3.高分亮点：
短语：had better do sth最好做某事；be good for doing sth……有助于做某事；instead of 代替；turn off 关掉。

句子：if everyone does something for the environment, I believe the earth will be a better place句中if引导的是条件状语从句；There are many ways句中用的是there be 句型。

【拓展训练】
A
为了向全世界展示绿色中国，学生会倡议每位同学围绕“How to go green”写一篇英语文章，介绍自己如何从身边小事做起，尝试进行低碳、环保生活。

要求：
1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2. 短文必须包括表格中提示的所有要点，并作适当发挥；
3. 词数：100左右；
4. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

How to go green
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How to go green
As we all know, having a low-carbon life will be very important to us. We can save energy. It’s also good for reducing pollution and improving our environment. What can we do for the environment? There are many ways.
We should close the door and windows before we go out. And we had better walk to school or ride our bikes. We should use cloth bags when shopping instead of using plastic bags all the time. And planting more trees can make our environment become better. We should turn off the lights, the TV and the computer when we leave the classroom. When we go out, we had better walk instead of taking a bus or car. What’s more, it’s a good idea to reuse the books as possible as we can.
In fact, if everyone does something for the environment, I believe the earth will be a better place. And our world will be more beautiful.
1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。

文中围绕绿色生活的意义和措施一一展开描述。

2.例文点评：本文采用的是第一人称，时态采用的是一般现在时。

准确运用时态，并保持主谓一致。

逻辑性强，语句通顺。

3.高分亮点：
短语：had better do sth最好做某事；be good for doing sth……有助于做某事；instead of 代替；turn off 关掉。

句子：if everyone does something for the environment, I believe the earth will be a better place句中if引导的是条件状语从句；There are many ways句中用的是there be 句型。

B
地球是我们的家园，我们作为地球的主人，就应该好好保护地球。

现在正在倡导“低碳”生活，只要我们不污染地球的环境，不浪费地球的能源，就能够让我们的周围变得更绿，生活变得更美好。

作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢？谈谈你的想法。

内容应该包括以下几点：1. 节约用水、用电；2. 节约纸张，循环使用旧课本，保护森林；3. 节约粮食，在更多的土地上种树；4. 不乱丢杂物，保护环境；
要求：短文中不得出现真实的校名和人名；80词左右
提示词：the greenhouse gases lifestyle 低碳生活方式
How does our earth turn better?
The earth is our home.
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How does our earth turn better?
The earth is our home. We should protect our earth as the owner. But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle?
I think as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. When you wash, can you close down the water? Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? I think saving paper is necessary. All the used text books should be recycled. Thus, less trees won't be cut down again. If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm. Don't throw litter everywhere, it will pollute our environment.
If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we living will be better and better.
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如how to do，live in，around us， such as，as a middle school student，and so on，close down the water，turn off the lights，cut down，make a contribution to our earth，pollute our environment，better and better等。

而固定结构But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle?和I think as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. /Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? / If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。

在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。

它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。

所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

C
为了向全世界展示绿色中国，你校学生会倡议每位同学围绕“如何进行低碳生活”的话题写一篇短文，介绍自己是如何从身边小事做起，进行低碳生活的。

请根据表格内容，写一篇80—100词的英语短文。

How to live a low carbon life
As we all know, having a low-carbon life is very important to us.
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【答案】
How to Live a Low-Carbon Life
As we all know, having a low-carbon life is very important to us. First, I think having a low-carbon life can help us save a lot of energy. What’s more, it can help us reduce pollution and improve our environment.
To live a low-carbon life, we students should save resource, let’s start with the things around us, first we should pay attention to our daily life, we can turn off the computers and other electrical equipment in time when leaving a room.And it is also important for us to turn off the tap after it is used.Another thing is saving paper and we can do it by writing on both sides of paper
We should stop white and air pollution.When we go shopping, we had better bring our own bags or use paper bags instead of plastic bags. At the same time ,we shouldn’t spend money buying some unnecessary goods. When we go outside, we can choose to walk there or ride our bikes,
In my opinion, having a low-carbon life is very necessary for us students, its our duty to do something for the earth. If everyone can do a little, the future will be brighter and more beautiful.
考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章内容（１）为什么要低碳生活；（２）怎样低碳生活；（３）个人观点。

认真审题，确定重点和次重点。

短文第二部分――怎样低碳生活应该是重点，需要详细写。

人称应该以第一人称为主，时态就具体情况而定。

亮点：（１）过度语使用合理，如：As we all know；What’s more；In my opinion等。

(２)使用多种句型，使文章锦上添花，如：having a low-carbon life can help us动名词短语作主语；To live a low-carbon life动词不定式短语作目的状语；And it is also important for us to turn off the tap after it is used动词不定式短语作主语等。

D
为了保护环境、节约能源，越来越多的人选择低碳生活。

作为中学生，我们能为环保做些什么呢？请你根据以下要点提示用英语写一份倡议书，呼吁你们班同学爱护环境、保护环境。

要点提示：
1. 少使用塑料袋；
2. 循环使用旧课本；
3. 少乘电梯，节约用水、用电；
4. 多植树；
5. 最好步行或骑自行车上学。

注意：1. 词数80左右(格式、开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

My fellow students,
Our environment is becoming worse and worse. As students, what can we do to protect the environment?
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In fact, even the simplest everyday activities can make a difference to the environment. I believe that by working together we can make the world a better place to live in.
【答案】
My fellow students,
Our environment is becoming worse and worse. As students, what can we do to protect the environment?
To reduce white pollution we should use fewer plastic bags when going shopping. Use cloth bags instead. We should try to reuse old textbooks, so people needn’t cut down more trees to make paper. In order to save energy we should use the lift less and take the stairs instead. We should also save water and electricity. And we should plant more trees so that the air will be fresher. Besides, it would be better if we walked or rode a bike to school.
In fact, even the simplest everyday activities can make a difference to the environment. I believe that by working together we can make the world a better place to live in.
本文虽然内容简单，但作者使用了一些好的短语，为文章增色不少，如white pollution，go shopping，try to do，reuse old textbooks，cut down，make paper，in order to，so that，ride a bike to school等。

而非谓语动词结构To reduce white pollution we should use fewer plastic bags when going shopping./ In order to save energy we should use the lift less and take the stairs instead.和And we should plant more trees so that the air will be fresher./Besides, it would be better if we walked or rode a bike to school.等多种从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。

在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑
性，也更富有条理。

书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文，动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要
点，并适当发挥。

根据材料内容可知本文是一般现在时态，主语是第一人称和第三人称，注
意时态与主谓一致问题。

写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

E
环境问题已经成为人们最关注的问题之一，低碳生活亦已成为人类共同关注的话题。

你
校学生会打算以保护环境为主题搞一次社会实践活动，假如你是学生会主席，请根据以下提
示写一份倡议书，号召全体师生都来关注环境问题，在保护环境、减少污染、节约能源等方
面做出努力：
要求：
1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；
3）100词左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名。

Dear teachers and classmates:
Pollution is going more and more serious.
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Students’ Union 【答案】
Dear teachers and classmates:
Pollution is going more and more serious. The factories dump wastes everywhere，people throw rubbish everywhere，and people cut down the trees and destory the forest．（"现象"部分的描述）As a result，the rivers are polluted，so is the air．（高分句型）．Recently，someone infected with bird flu virus．（"后果"部分的描述）As we all known，we have only one earth，low-carbon lifestyle can not only more comfortable to humanlity but also safer to the environment．（高分句型）I hope we can do something to focus on environmental issues．When we go shopping we can use shopping basket instead of plastic bags，and we must save water and electricity in the daily life．We can reuse our textbook，and we also can write letters to TV station and the newspaper office．（"行动"部分的描述）
Students’ Union
这是一篇给材料作文，写一份倡议书，号召全体师生都来关注环境问题，在保护环境、减少污染、节约能源等方面做出努力。

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Pollution is……；we have……；I hope……；We can reuse……等句式的应用。

写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。

写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。

开头介绍了环境污染的现象越来越严重，接下来介绍环境污染导致的后果，最后号召大家采取行动来保护环境。

此处 cut down, as a result, focus on, instead of, write letters to等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。