河南省信阳市第四高级中学高考英语 专题训练 短文改错、书面表达(5)

河南省信阳市第四高级中学高考英语专题训练：短文改错、书面表达（5）短文改错
(201*·保定调研)
Last Sunday I went to the Bird's Nest Stadium. At gate1.________
I happened to meet some young America tourists.I greeted2.________
to them in English and then we began to chat. From the chat3.________
I learned that they were college students traveling in Beijing4.________
but most of them were fond of Chinese culture. They were5.________
busy taking pictures and they seem to be much impressed by6.________
the changes which had been taken place in the past few years.7.________
After come out of the Stadium, we went to the Water Cubic(水立方)8.________
and had a good time there. We exchanged our email address so that9.________
we could write to each other later. They thanked us again and again.10.________
I was very glad to have the chance to practise my oral English.
答案与解析：
1．gate前加the 此处表示特指，指的是鸟巢体育馆的大门。

2．America→American应该用形容词来修饰名词。

3．去掉第一个to greet是及物动词，可直接加宾语，不必加to。

4．√
5．but→and来北京和喜欢中国文化为并列关系而非转折，应用and表示并列。

6．seem→seemed根据事情发生的时间last Sunday和全文的时态可知，此处也应用一般过去时。

7．去掉been take place无被动语态。

8．come→coming介词after后要用动名词形式。

9．address→addresses交换的是双方的邮箱地址，故此处应用复数形式。

10．us→me是“我”帮助了他们，因此用me。

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高考英语书面表达讲义：表格作文
(4)(25 min.)
注意：
1. 对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

2. 词数不少于120。

3. 演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。

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【参考范文】One possible version：
Good afternoon, everyone，
The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”．
Good listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship.
Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap; teachers should listen more to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselves in a good relationship with their students; students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.
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经典名句与句式汇总：核心句型（开头、正文、结尾）
1. 开头
The arguer may be right about …, but he seems to neglect (fail) to mention (take into account) that fact that…
As opposed to (Contrary to) widely (commonly/generally) held (accepted) belief (ideas/views), I believe (argue that…
Although many people believe that …, I doubt (wo nder) whether the argument bears much analysis (close examination).
The advantages of B outweigh any benefit we gained from (carry more weight than those of / are much greater than) A.
Although it is commonly (widely / generally) held (felt / accepted / agreed) that …, it is unlikely to be true that…
There is an element of truth in this argument (statement), but it ignores a deeper and more basic (important / essential) fact (reason) that…
It is true that (True, / To be sure, / Admittedly,)…, but th is is not to say (it is unlikely / it doesn't follow / it doesn't mean / it won't be the case) that…
The main (obvious / great) problem (flaw / drawback) with (in) this argument (view / remark) is that it is ignorant of (blind to) the basic (bare) fact t hat …
It would be possible (natural / reasonable) to think (believe / take the view) that…, but it would be absurd (wrong) to claim (argue) that …
In all the discussion and debate over…, one important (basic) fact is generally overlooked (neglected).
There is absolutely (in fact) no (every) reason for us to believe (accept / resist / reject) that…
Logical (Valid / Sound) as this argument and I wholeheartedly agree with it, it appears insignificant (absurd) when … is taken into consideration (account ).
On the surface (At first thought), it (this) may seem a sound (an attractive) suggestion (solution / idea), but careful weighing on the mind (on closer analysis / on second thought), we find that…
Too much emphasis placed on (attention paid to / im portance attached to) … may obscure (overlook / neglect) other facts…
The danger (problem / fact / truth / point) is that…
What the arguer fails to understand (consider /mention) is that…
We don't have to look very far to see (find out) the truth (validity) of this argument (proposition).
However just (logical / sound / valid) this argument may be, it only skims the surface of the problem.
【专题训练与高考预测】
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误对标有题号的每一行做出判断，如无错误，在刻行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正；该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在该行在边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

该行缺一词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

该行错一个词：在错的词下面划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词 注意：原行没能错的不要改 Passage 1 Miss China
Guan Qi, a 21-years-old college student from Jilin 1.______ Province, had won the Miss China beauty pageant 2.______
in Sanya, Hainan Province, on September 21. 3.______
Besides judged on their looks, the 32 competitors 4.______
were tested on their write ability, English skills, 5._______ team-work and generally knowledge. Miss Guan Qi 6._______ impressed the judges who present with her excellent 7._______ replies during the question or answer section. She will 8._______
represent(代表) Chinese in the final of Miss World 9._______ to be holding in Sanya on December 6. 10._______
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高考英语：写作综合训练集 写作话题议论篇
诚信是处世之本。

但是在中学生当中，考试作弊、抄袭作业、欺骗家长和老师等现象屡见不鲜。

请你对以上种种现象作简要描述，并以How to guarantee honesty 为题，从三个方面，谈谈如何保证学生做到诚信。

注意：
1．词数：120左右；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

How to guarantee honesty
As we all know, honesty is a lways an essential principle of living. Much to our regret, however, …
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Honesty is the best policy, which is what we should keep in mind all the time.
【参考范文】------One possible version: As we all know, honesty is always an essential principle of living. Much to our regret, however, it is nothing new that some middle school students cheat in exams, copy others’ homework and fool their teachers and parents. Therefore, how to guarantee honesty should come to our attention.
Personal ly, I think honesty education is necessary. For instance, courses on honesty can be
offered to students; activities like story-te lling and lectures are also worthy trying. With the concept o f “being honest” rooted in their minds, honesty can be reflected in their daily life and study. Besides, related rules an d regulations should be laid down. Detailed criteria should be applied to evaluate students in aspects such as homework, tests, relationship with teachers and parents.Then, strict measures should be carried out to puni sh those who cheat, and consequently, they must assume responsibility for their bad behavior, thus considerably reducing chances of cheating next time.
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I'll never forget the trip to Europe last year. After I left 76. a small village in the south of France, I drove on to the next 77. town. In the way a young man who was very tall stopped me and 78. asked me for the lift. As soon as he got into the car, I said 79. "Good morning" to him in French and he answered with the same 80. language. Except for a few words, I do not know any French 81. at all. None of us spoke during the journey. I had nearly
82. reached the town, while the young man suddenly said very slowly. 83. "Do... you.., speak... English?" I looked at him in surprising.
84.
Here was no people speak English. Just then I understood that
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he, too, was an Englishman. (二)
76．∧left → had 77. √
78. In → On 79. 第一个the → a 80. with → in 81. do → did 82. None → Neither 83. while → when
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下面五幅图画叙述了胡先生"热爱"动物的一段经历。

请根据图画内容,写一篇100词左右的短文,描述他的经历并发表一点你的个人看法。

参考范文
Mr. Hu is one of the men who like animals in such a way that all he does only causes harm to animals, because he likes animals only for the purpose of satisfying his own needs.
He kept some birds in cages for fun and wore clothes made of wild animals'fur and skin. Worse
still, he even ate wild ani- mals in restaurants and
fixed some heads of rare animals on the wall of his living room to show off. In the end, he caught SAPS and had to stay in hospital.
In my opinion, we should treat wild animals as our friends instead of catching or killing them, or we'll be punished.
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To everyone in the world, money was a sensitive topic. 76. Not one can live without money in modern society. People
77. has different opinions on it. Some people think one should
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live to make money, when others make money to live. 79. In my opinion, the latter should reasonable.
80.
We should not be the slave of money. Although money
81.
means a lot in our life, but it doesnot mean everything. 82.
We can't exchange it for friendship or love. Money indeed can 83. made a person enjoy his life for a while but not all his life. 84. On a word, money is something but not everything. 85.
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